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The Outlaw, The Star and the Big, Big Sky

by TotalOverflow
It feels like the sky itself is falling and Appleloosa is shaken to its core. Earthquakes rock the deserts, outlaws ride free, the buffalo seem terrified of something, a strange pony arrives in town, and Braeburn is caught in the middle of it all.

~~~APOCALYPSE IN APPLEOOSA!~~~
THE END OF THE WORLD!?

Some days, it feels like the sky itself is falling.
After the destruction of Applejack's prized tree Bloomberg, Braeburn find himself caught between allegiances to his friends, and to a helpless pony who appeared as if from nowhere. Not to mention the suspicious actions of the buffalo, and the recent string of earthquakes rocking the desert. Mixing classic wild western adventures with magic and fantasy, The Outlaw, The Star, and the Big, Big Sky tells a story of revenge, redemption, and how the best of intentions can lead to the destruction of the very ground upon which we all stand.

This story was originally started in 2011, shortly after finishing my first story, Macintosh. While Macintosh was a slower paced character study of the Big Mac himself, The Outlaw, The Star, and the Big, Big Sky aims to tell a story full of fairy tale adventure and deadly desperados. 6 Chapters were written, with an extra unfinished chapter recently uploaded, containing a flashback to Braeburn's childhood showing just how dangerous and bloody the untamed deserts can be.

12 years on, I'm hoping for any and all thoughts and feedback on this story. I would love to continue writing from where it was left off, but life is busy and I may not have the time. But if the interest is there, I would at least love to engage and discuss what could have been, and maybe make the time to finish it.
Thank you kindly, and watch out for shooting stars.

For now, this could be considered an alternate universe fic, though until it's finished it's hard to say how well it would fit in with established canon.

Cover art elements made with AI (Bing Copilot) then tweaked and photoshopped together by me.

Teen
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Adventure
Death
 
OOBLB

58816 words: Estimated about 5 hours to read

10 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2012-08-13 19:20:27 UTC
    992
  2. Chapter 1 2012-08-13 20:18:38 UTC
    6733
  3. Chapter 2 2012-08-13 20:46:21 UTC
    6491
  4. Chapter 3 2012-08-15 21:14:08 UTC
    3411
  5. Chapter 4 2012-08-16 01:01:06 UTC
    7602
  6. Chapter 5 2012-08-18 23:58:17 UTC
    5515
  7. Chapter 6 2012-08-19 23:11:57 UTC
    7934
  8. Unfinished Chapters 2024-05-08 01:53:51 UTC
    12130
  9. Notes and the Future of this Story 2024-05-14 18:52:31 UTC
    2263
  10. Unfinished Chapters: The Buffalo's Point Of View 2024-06-15 22:47:57 UTC
    5745