The Hypnotic Rainbow
Derpy Love
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The next morning, Fluttershy and Scootaloo were the first ponies to wake up.
"Morning Flutters"
"Morning Scoots. Sleep well?"
"Yes, I did"
"Good. Should we wake the Mistress, or let her sleep?"
“Let her sleep of course." Scoots said, carefully escaping her embrace.
"Alright," Fluttershy did the same before sitting up and looking at the other slaves.
Twilight began to awaken.
"Good morning Twi," Fluttershy said.
"Morning Flutters." She said before yawning and stretching.
"I trust you slept well."
"Yep."
"That's good."
As the three started talking, the rest of the slaves woke up.
"Maybe one of you should wake Rainbow up to a blowjob." Twilight suggested as she got a blowjob from Sweetie Belle.
"I'll do it!" Fluttershy and Scoots both said at the same time.
Twilight chuckled at their enthusiasm.
"You're pretty good at this Sweetie. Had any practice?"
Fluttershy and Scootaloo got to work.
"Yup. Rarity uses a strap-on on me every other week."
"Maybe I'll give Rarity a dick too."
"That would be wonderful! Be sure to get Mistress's permission first, though."
"Of course. You are her property now."
Sweetie Belle just smiled at that.
Before the two could talk any further, they heard a moan come from Dash.
"Good morning Rainbow~!" Twilight said as she sprayed her favorite slaves with her cum.
"Morning Twi," Dash yawned as she watched the slaves swallow.
"Rarity wants a dick. I want to ask you before messing with your property."
"Go ahead and give it to her. From now on, if any of my slaves want something, go ahead and give it to them. A happy slave is a productive slave after all."(edited)
"You have a good mentality." Twilight said happily as she gave Rarity a 22-inch dick.
"Yeah, I know," Dash smiled at Rarity's grateful expression
"Sweetie Belle~!" Rarity called.
Sweetie Belle walked over to her, already drooling at the sight of Rarity's cock.
"Now I want you to stick to our usual rules when we play dear, what I say goes."
"Yes sis, I mean ma'am!"
"Good girl." She said before guiding Sweetie Belle along her cock.
Sweetie Belle wiggled herself to assist.
"So, how are you gonna treat Derpy? You've told me she's like a little sister to you."
"That depends on how she wants me to treat her."
"What If she wants to be your lover?" Twilight asked.
"Then I'll treat her like one. Not as much as Fluttershy or Scootaloo, but enough to satisfy her."
"Hm." Twilight said simply, thinking about her talks with the adorable Pegasus.
"What? Do you have a problem with that?" Dash asked.
"She may want be your wife."
“Oh?" Dash raised an eyebrow at this
"She loves you, Rainbow. She has just been really scared you would reject her."
“Well, she has nothing to worry about."
“Promise you will let her be your wife if that's what she wants." Twilight said, she was very protective of the mare in question.
"If she wants me to be her wife, then I will," Dash Pinkie Promised.
"Alright. Thank you. When do you want to go get her?"
"After breakfast."
"Oh, yeah. In case you were wondering, Alicorn Cum has a lot of benefits to a pony when consumed."
"I already know about the fact that after swallowing, ponies no longer feel hungry."
"Did you know that if you consume enough of it, you become immortal?"
"That, I didn't know. How much do I need to consume?"
"You don't. You have an Alicorn organ. You are immortal already, and you will slowly turn into an Alicorn yourself."
"Cool! In that case, how much cum do they need?" Dash asked, gesturing to her slaves.
"Keep them on a cum only diet for a couple months."
"How many times a day should I feed them?"
"As much as you want."
"Alright... Now, I have to ask, did you find all of this out when you did your research?"
"Celestia told me about Alicorn stuff."
"That makes sense."
"By the way, how long will it take me to turn into an Alicorn?" Dash asked.
"Have you looked at somepony and gotten hungry?"
"Not yet. Why?"
"Once you start feeling hungry when you look at ponies, you'll have an Alicorn digestive system. That's usually the first thing to convert from when somepony is gifted an Alicorn cock."
"Alright. Seems pretty weird, but then again, these past few days has been kind of strange, so..." Dash shrugged as she continued listening.
"It's random for every pony that changes into Alicorn."
"The time it takes, or what happens just before?"
"Time."
"Do you at least know the average length of time, or is there no average?"
"There is no average."
"I see. Well, I guess I'll just have to take it as it comes, then."
"So, are we gonna eat breakfast fun or what?"
"Yeah, we are. Come on everyone!" Dash jumped off the bed and landed on the floor.
“yes Mistress!"
A little while later, Dash rubbed her full belly. "That was delicious."
"Thank you, Mommy." Scoots said.
"You're welcome, squirt," Dash ruffled her mane affectionately.
"Are you going to get Derpy by yourself or do you want me to come with you?" Twilight asked.
"I think I'll be fine on my own."
"Okay. I'll have fun with your slaves while you’re gone~." She said before pushing Pinkie onto the floor and raping her harder than she had before.
"Alright. If any of them start to give you trouble, just have Fluttershy punish them," Dash said as she left.
"Of course. Now Squeal Bitch."
Pinkie squealed loud enough for Dash to hear her from outside.
Derpy Hooves sighed as she got out of bed. She looked at her eyes in the mirror with anger, recalling all the bullying and jeers she's gotten in her life. She laid her forehead on the bathroom counter.
"Why did I have to be born like this..." She cried sadly.
As she was moping, she heard a knock at her front door.
She wiped the tears from her eyes.
"Come in." She said, her voice sounding as sad as she felt.
The front door opened and she heard hoofsteps coming to her room.
"Derpy?" she heard a familiar voice call.
Derpy opened her door and tackle hugged rainbow.
"I'm so sorry I'm such a clutz!" She cried into her crush's fur.
"Whoa whoa whoa, what brought this on?" Dash asked as she hugged back, careful not to make eye contact.
"I... -hic-...I don't really know!" She said.
"Well I want you to stop thinking like that. It's not healthy for you," Dash wiped her tears with a hoof.
"...okay." She said, keeping her face buried in Rainbow's fur.
"Good. And if anyone ever makes fun of you again, tell me who it is I'll ensure they won't ever bother you again!"
"Thank you Dashie."
"You're welcome. Are you hungry?"
“A little. I'll make us some food." Derpy said before separating from her hug and went to the kitchen.
"Alright, I'll wait in the living room," Dash said as she sat on her couch.
Ten minutes later, Derpy came out with a hay burger for Rainbow.
"Did you make anything for yourself?"
Before she could answer she tripped and the Hayburger fell apart all over rainbow.
She curled into a ball and began to cry.
Dash got up and, careful not to get any of the hayburger on her, gave Derpy another hug.
"Hey, hey, it was just an accident."
"I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry..."
Dash used a wing to grab a napkin from nearby and cleaned herself off.
“See, all better. No harm, no foul."
"But....but I... I’m such a worthless no good clutz!"
"Derpy, I need you to look at me," Dash gently lifted her head up and looked into her eyes, her concern overriding her power.
Derpy slowly did as she was asked.
"Please, please don't hate me." She cried.
"I don't. I never have, and I never will. Anyone who does hate you is not worth thinking about," Dash said.
"But l..... but...."
"No buts. What I just said is a fact. Nothing you ever do could make me hate you."
".... can.... can I tell you something?"
"Sure," Dash, of course, already knew what it was, but decided to pretend not to know in order to help Derpy.
"I... I love you. I've loved you since we were fillies." She admitted. She bit her bottom lip in anticipation.
"I love you too," Dash hugged her.
Derpy cried again. This time, out of happiness.
"Really?"
Dash simply nodded.
"Can I be your Marefriend?"
"Yes, you can."
Derpy nuzzled her new Marefriend's neck.
"I promise I won't be a useless featherbrain..."
"I know you won't," Dash snuggled with her.
"Derpy, I have a confession of my own to make,” she said after a few seconds of silence.
“Yes?" She motioned for her to go on.
"I... have my own harem," Dash admitted.
"Oh...." Derpy said, a little disappointed.
"I don't feel the same way about any of them that I feel about you, though. Sure, I love them all, but not quite as much as I love you."
"Really?" She said with hope filling her heart.
"Yes, really. Plus, there's a bit more. But I think it's easier to show you."
Derpy did something that surprised them both. She kissed Rainbow.
Dash's eyes widened, but she soon kissed back.
Derpy snuggled into Rainbow's embrace.
"I love you so much, Dashie."
"I love you too, Derpy," Dash snuggled back.
The two laid there for a few minutes in peaceful silence.
"I can't believe you like me, even if I have, slanted eyes..."
"How a pony looks doesn't matter to me. It's what's inside that counts."
"Aww. am I not cute~?" Derpy teased.
“I never said that, now, did I, you silly filly. Of course, you're cute," Dash booped her.
Derpy's wings buzzed happily.
"I'm really sorry about my clumsiness..."
"Don't be... Heck, I actually find it kind of endearing."
"Really?"
"Yes, really."
Little hoofsteps came from the stairs.
“Mommy? What's going on?" A tired filly's voice called.
The two mares broke from their snuggle session to look.
"Hi Dinky," Dash waved.
Dinky walked over to her, her eyes widening at fallen hay burger and broken plate.
“What's going on!?"
"Let's just say I helped your mom out of a really bad place."
"Oh, you must be Rainbow Dash. Mama, loves you more than me!" She said with a smile.
"Really, now?" Dash looked at Derpy for confirmation.
"uhhhhh. I love you both equally but differently."
“That's what I thought," Dash chuckled.
Just then, the mother-daughter pair noticed Dash's cock.
Derpy drooled at the sight of her Lover's cock.
"You like it? Twilight gave it to me a few days ago."
Derpy licked her lips.
"Yes. Dinky?"
Dinky simply nodded, too mesmerized to speak.
Dash chuckled, and waved a hoof. "Help yourselves, then."
Suddenly there was a knock on the door.
All three groaned at the interruption.
"Door's unlocked!" Derpy shouted.
"Derpy? Dash? Dinky? Is everything alright?" Twilight called.
"Twi? Yeah, everything's fine." Dash said as she walked in.
"Oh okay, I was just a little worried."
"Why?"
“I honestly just wanted to see what was going on." Twilight admitted sheepishly.
"I see. Well, to sum it up: I helped Derpy get over some confidence issues, we admitted our love for each other, and she and her daughter were just about to suck my cock. Nothing too unusual for me lately." Dash shrugged.
"So, you two are lovers?" Twilight asked with a huge grin.
"Yup," Dash smiled as she and Derpy hugged.
"By the way, how are my slaves doing? I hope they don't miss me TOO badly."
“I tired them all out. They're asleep again." Twilight said before walking over to Dinky.
"Hi Dinky!" She greeted.
"Hi Miss Twilight," Dinky smiled at the mare, catching sight of Twi's own cock.
"You want to play with me again?"
"Yes please!" Dinky started panting.
"Derpy? How many times have you played with dinky this week?"
"A few times... most of the time I was wallowing in self-pity," Derpy admitted in embarrassment.
Dash gave her a reassuring pat.
"But that's all over now, thanks to her," Derpy smiled.
Twilight smiled.
"So did you hypnotize her?" Twilight asked Rainbow Dash telepathically.
"I didn't need to." Dash admitted.
Derpy snuggled into Dash lovingly.
"So... are your slaves my slaves?"
"I guess so, considering you're now my lover. But it's a bit more complicated than that," Dash told her who she had enslaved, as well as the little hierarchy they created. She didn't mention the hypnosis, though, since she was saving that part as a surprise.
"Twilight? May I have an Alicorn cock?"
"Of course, Derpy. It's a good thing I made more of the potion to give those kinds of cocks. One second." Twi teleported to her castle and then teleported back with the potion.
Derpy guzzle and down and moaned loudly as she grew an Alicorn cock.
"AAAAAAGGGH!" She suddenly screamed as she clutched her head.
Dash rushed over and held her. "You okay?" she asked reflexively.
"My eye! My eye it hurts!"
"Twi, what did you do?!?!" Dash yelled.
"All I did was give her the potion!" Twilight shouted, scared.
“Well, do something! You're the one with all of the magic, here!"
"Wait! Wait! The pain is subsiding."
"Can you open your eyes yet?"
"In a minute I can try." She whimpered.
"Alright. Twi, get her some water just in case she needs it," Dash rubbed Derpy's back in case that helped.
Derpy slowly opened her eyes. Before her whole body tensed.
“My, my eyes. I can see straight!"
"Really? That's great!" Dash hugged her.
"I can see straight! I can see straight! I can see straight! I can see straight!" She chanted happily.
"My eyes are fixed!"
"And you didn't have to pay a single bit. Which is even better!"
Derpy couldn't help but weep in joy.
Dinky leapt over and joined in the hug.
“I think there's only one way to celebrate. A gang bang from my harem." Dash told her lover.
"Can we both double team rape pinkies pussy?"
"Of course."
Twilight came back with some water.
"Did you hear the good news?" Dash asked her.
"Good news?"
"Derpy's eyes are straight now."
"Really? Was that was all the fuss was about!" Twilight exclaimed with a grin.
"Yup. Apparently that potion of yours has more than one effect."
"I think it's because She's now slowly turning into an Alicorn. Do you feel like you have super good sight?" She asked Derpy.
"Kind of. I mean, compared to my previous sight, default sight IS super good. I'll let you know once I'm more used to this."
"You probably have Alicorn eyes now. I apologize for the pain."
"It was worth it in the end."
Derpy cuddled with her lover and daughter.
"I just realized that Rainbow is now your mother, too."
"Yup. And, thanks to your cocks, you're both also my daddies as well," Dinky said with a smile while cuddling.
"Now I don't need a strap on~." Derpy told her daughter.
"Nope. Before you go, could I give your new cock a test run?" Dinky asked hopefully.
"I thought you were coming with us, and of course you can. My pet~"
"I guess I forgot in all the excitement. And yay!" Dinky climbed into position so Derpy could fuck her pussy.
"That's a good girl."
Dinky shuddered in pleasure as she wiggled onto the cock.
"Do you remember the safe word?" Derpy asked her daughter.
"Muffins."
"Good Girl"
Dinky smiled and kissed her mom.
Derpy kissed her back and slowly eased her down her cock.
Dinky moaned as she was penetrated more.
After a little while, Derpy got her entire cock through her pet.
"So good to be filled," Dinky muttered in bliss.
"Mmmm. Now I finally get to feel how tight you are~." Derpy said with a pleasured sigh.
"Am I tight enough, mommy?" Dinky asked hopefully.
"Of course, you are, my sweet little girl." Derpy said while smiling at her daughter.
"Yay! Now, please fill me with your cum. I want to be as full as possible," Dinky smiled back.
Derpy grinned at her eager pet and began fucking her senseless.
"Yes! Yes! Yes!" Dinky kept screaming in joy with each thrust.
After about ten minutes, Derpy inflated her daughter her cum.
She ended up filling her with so much, that Dinky actually started leaking some.
"Oopsy," Dinky chuckled in embarrassment. "Sorry mommy."
"It's okay, I'll overlook it once."
"If you want, I can lick it up for you," Twilight said.
"Dinky will get it later, isn't that right my pet?"
Dinky nodded.
"Should we give her a few minutes, or do you want to head out now?" Dash asked.
"I think we should let her absorb all the cum first." Twilight suggested.
"Good idea. That way there's room for more." Derpy said with a smile.
Author's Note
If you guys can't tell, The person who asked for this story and I have pretty much rp'd the whole story.
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