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When Dating a Sunset...

by ThePinkedWonder
Local human Eric Reed falls for interdimensional traveler Sunset Shimmer and wants to ask her out.

After being rejected by a mare he formed a crush on two weeks ago, Eric Reed starts to develop feelings for another mare, Sunset Shimmer. But fear of being rejected again, because of his "real-life" appearance, makes Eric hesitant to put himself out there to try to ask Sunset out.

Will he conquer his fear and ask Sunset to go on a date? If he does, how will Sunset, who's oblivious to her friend's changing feelings toward her, react?

And if she indeed says "yes" what's next for the two?




This story (obviously) has continuity from the story "When Dating Advice Doesn't Work..." story. However, enough will be explained to not require reading it to understand this story.

Both stories also take place after the events of my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story. But it is not required to read it either to know what's going on in this story, other than to learn how and why the human character Eric Reed is in Equestria, and how his bonds with the Equestrian characters formed. However, here is the link if you would like to check it out, and it is a 18-chapter story.

A Giant Adventure to Equestria

Lastly, special thanks to TheHardie-Boy for suggestions to the story and proofreading chapters 1-4 and flutterJackdash for helping me edit chapter 6 onwards

Teen
Complete
Romance
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Sex
Human
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
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56602 words: Estimated about 5 hours to read

18 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Denying feelings 2019-10-24 17:21:15 UTC
    3065
  2. Chapter 2: Accepting feelings 2019-10-29 16:01:21 UTC
  3. Chapter 3: Deciding what to do 2019-11-03 15:03:27 UTC
    3078
  4. Chapter 4: The pseudo-date, part 1 2019-11-07 15:55:58 UTC
    4521
  5. Chapter 5: The pseudo-date, part 2 2019-11-10 17:06:01 UTC
  6. Chapter 6: Sunset's question 2019-11-13 15:04:11 UTC
    4492
  7. Chapter 7: Preparations, and two warnings 2019-11-16 20:32:10 UTC
    3495
  8. Chapter 8: The REAL date 2019-11-19 18:04:02 UTC
    5088
  9. Chapter 9: The payback 2019-11-22 19:33:37 UTC
    3664
  10. Chapter 10: Sunset & Eric Vs. Startrix 2019-11-25 18:24:40 UTC
    4391
  11. Chapter 11: Sunset & Eric Vs. the Cragadile 2019-11-28 18:22:18 UTC
    3406
  12. Chapter 12: Recovery, nicknames, and a BIG mistake 2019-12-01 16:44:24 UTC
    3635
  13. Chapter 13: One chance 2019-12-04 20:53:05 UTC
    2743
  14. Chapter 14: Worthy 2019-12-07 17:38:34 UTC
    3136
  15. Chapter 15: Gifts, Pinkie Trollie Pie, and the book 2019-12-10 19:25:49 UTC
    3299
  16. Chapter 16: Meeting Erica 2019-12-13 20:43:05 UTC
    2359
  17. Chapter 17: Sunset's resolve, part 1 2019-12-16 18:01:58 UTC
    2229
  18. Chapter 18: Sunset's resolve, part 2 2019-12-18 20:15:44 UTC
    4001