Chaotic Harmony: Do Over (Mature)

by shirotora
A human finds himself in Equestria where other humans - turned into one of the various native races - have been living for hundreds of years.

This is the mature version of this story. I will be posting alternate versions of entire chapters here, so if you want to read the mature stuff, don't read it in the main story, read it here. Chapters that don't contain any mature content will not be posted here. The mature content will be listed beside the chapter title in parenthesis.

So, you think you know Equestria just because you watch My Little Pony? Well, I can tell you, the show barely scratched the surface. The name's Shirotora, and I'm one of many humans that call Equestria home.

Of course, where most humans find themselves in the form of a pony, griffin, minotaur or some other regular race, I happen to have the form of the servants of an ancient tyrant god that were sealed away along with their master thousands of years ago.

Yeah, that didn't go over very well with Celestia.

This is the story of my adventures in this crazy world of not-so-cartoonish ponies, along side a colorful cast of friends, including a crystal pegasus that can control fire, a dragon-pony that was locked in stone for eight hundred years, a demon blacksmith looking to get contracts with mortals, and the worlds luckiest/unluckiest mare... Oh, and the Mane 6 are in there, too.

Together, we'll figure out why the hell predators are getting more violent, and why more and more monsters are suddenly popping up everywhere.

I just hope it doesn't have anything to do with some ancient, long-banished evil coming back...

It does, doesn't it...

Dammit.


This is a complete reimagining of my first successful story, Chaotic Harmony. While it will share some characters and events with the original, this is going to be an entirely different experience.

To those of you who loved the original, I hope you love this just as much. To those who didn't, I hope you find this an improvement.

Also, to those who have been following Children of Chaos, that story will also be reworked a little as a sequel to this, not the original.

Note: While this is not a true AU, there will be some pretty major deviations from canon. There is no AU tag because all major plot points in canon still happened in this fic, though the details of how they played out may have changed, and most changes could be wedged into the show's canon.

Basically, this was made as if the show was the kid friendly version of what happened.

Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Human
Romance
Comedy
Adventure
Violence
Sex
 
OCM

21792 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

8 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 8: The Sisters Awesome (sex) 2019-10-06 14:29:30 UTC
    2432
  2. Chapter 15: Back Home (sex) 2019-12-03 00:18:44 UTC
    2643
  3. Chapter 22: Big Decisions 2020-09-11 15:35:49 UTC
  4. Chapter 25: One Super Pinkie Party, Coming Up 2021-01-06 21:27:25 UTC
    2608
  5. Chapter 28: Documenting an Element 2021-02-24 17:51:21 UTC
    2922
  6. Chapter 32: Fatherhood 2021-12-22 02:21:05 UTC
    2220
  7. Chapter 33: Love is in Bloom 2022-01-20 20:05:18 UTC
    4464
  8. Chapter 49: Sleepover 2023-07-08 20:51:55 UTC
    4503