Kindness and Chaos

by milesprower06

Fluttershy's Self-Guided Tour

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Author's Note

And the chapter you've no doubt been waiting for.

Thanks for reading, and for shoving this into the Featured Box on day 1.

Love you all,
-Miles


Fluttershy's Self-Guided Tour

Discord had swapped out his Thinking Tree for the top branches of Fluttershy's cottage, and since speaking with Celestia, was now wondering how to proceed. In the months since the coronation, the two of them had gotten much closer, but it had never gotten as close as... Intimacy. Dinners, kisses goodnight, snuggling... But did he know how to take that next step? Did Fluttershy? Did she want to? Was she hoping he'd figure something out in a way only he could?

These were mostly questions that would be impossible to answer without talking to her directly. But was that what she wanted? Even with how assertive she had become, he was pretty sure bringing a topic like that up would get her all blushing and stammering and shy. Perhaps she was expecting him to take the next step.

But what was she ready for? The last thing he wanted to do was to push her over a line she wasn't mentally or physically ready to cross. Were there things she only thought she wasn't ready for? Discord hit the brakes on that train of thought relatively quickly; there would be no telling what she was actually not ready for, and what she only believed she wasn't ready for. There was no room for guessing there. She would have to make that decision.

Suddenly, the lightbulb came on in the draconequus' head, a microsecond before his head actually turned into a lightbulb as he saw Fluttershy appear on the crest of the hill path towards Ponyville, coming home from her long day at Sweet Feather Sanctuary. With a snap of his eagle talon, there was a momentary glow of light from inside her cottage as he slithered down from the branches. He landed on the ground in front of the door as she came up the path.

"Ah, there you are. I was wondering when I'd see you again." Fluttershy greeted with a tired smile.

"Fluttershy, I am very sorry for the way I vanished last night. I know it wasn't easy for you to propose, and I shouldn't have internally panicked the way I did. I was initially afraid of having to watch you inevitably grow old, while I stayed the same." Discord confessed, twiddling his talon and paw.

"And?"

"And a friend advised me to not worry about it. Time moves inexorably onward and all that. I would rather spend that time with you than constantly fret over it. Starting tonight. You look like you need to unwind after a long hard day at your sanctuary. After you, my dearest." Discord said, giving a bow and motioning to the door.

Fluttershy smiled and walked passed him, pushing open her door. She had passed through this door so many times, so used to this daily routine, that she hadn't noticed until after the door magically closed behind her.

This wasn't her cottage's den.

She found herself standing in the candlelit, cavernous foyer of a two-story mansion. The single front door that she had passed through was now a set of polished double doors that was three times as tall as she was. Woodland critters ran along the railings of the second floor banisters, and chirping birds of various species were perched in the wall sconces of both floors.

"Welcome to Fluttershy For You, containing everything you could possibly want to know about the reigning Element of Kindness."

She turned to her right, and saw... Herself, at a small reception desk, flipping through a magazine. More specifically, it was her 'hipster' personality from when she was covering for Rarity at her store, complete with purple fedora, matching vest shirt, scarf, hot pants, and of course, the magenta glasses.

"Um, excuse me miss," Fluttershy began, walking up to the desk. "What is this place?"

The Valley-girl persona looked up from her magazine momentarily.

"Fluttershy For You, containing everything you could possibly want to know about the reigning Element of Kindness."

"Right, Discord's work. How big is this place?" She asked.

Having returned her attention to the magazine on her desk, the 'Hipstershy' receptionist passively raised a hoof, pointing to an information kiosk in the center of the foyer, in front of the wide flight of stairs.

"Like, check the directory to find what you want, okay yeah?"

Fluttershy turned from the reception desk, and sauntered towards the kiosk. She was only halfway across the room when she felt a tingling on her flanks. She turned to look, and the butterflies of her cutie mark glowed and floated away from her coat, beginning to fly off towards a set of double doors on the right. Deciding to prioritize them over the directory, she gave chase as they passed through the closed doors. The pegasus pushed them open to reveal a small art gallery. Pictures and paintings of various animals hung on each of the four walls. There was a statue of Discord in the middle of the room, and she noticed it had the engagement ring on the eagle talon.

The butterflies continued floating through the room, and passed through the single door on the other side. Fluttershy walked to the door, turned the knob, and stepped through to a hallway with black-and-white tiles. The tile patterns were warped and uneven, and she made an effort to keep her eyes forward, and not get dizzy from the distortion.

The hall was thirty feet long and was empty, save for a window every 10 feet, and another pony at the other end, next to a closed door, where her butterflies were currently floating in place. Halfway down the hall, she recognized another copy of herself, another one of her personas from Rarity's store. Severe, but not unapproachable. Formal blouse, bell bottoms, and her mane and tail up in buns.

Acceptable business attire. She was currently looking down a clipboard she held with a wing, completely unaware of the butterflies next to her head.

"Um, excuse me, but what's behind this door?" Fluttershy asked as she came up to the door.

'Severeshy' looked up from the clipboard, and rolled her eyes, as if the question was completely ludicrous.

"Why honestly, we do have a directory for a reason. I suggest you return there and get a better sense of direction. Hmph."

With that, she pointed at a mounted plaque on the wall next to the door as she walked down the hall from where Fluttershy came, as the pegasus took a step closer, and read the etched letters on the gold plate.

SEXUAL DESIRES AND FANTASIES

Fluttershy's cheeks heated up as she realized where her cutie mark was leading her. While part of her wanted to believe these floating, glowing butterflies were a trick leading her down this hall, another part of her wasn't so sure that Discord was behind their guidance, because... Well, she had given it some thought every now and then. Now ultimately curious of what was on the other side, she took a deep breath, swallowed, put a hoof up on the door, and turned the knob. The butterflies dissipated and vanished into thin air. She looked back at her flank to see her cutie mark hadn't changed, then pushed the door open, and was greeted with another straight hall.

The tile gave way to a soft red nylon carpet, and there were doors on either side. She counted a dozen in the first twenty feet, and she couldn't tell how far the hallway went. Ceiling lamps gave off warm, inviting light. Shutting the main door behind her, she continued into the quiet hallway. She tiptoed up to the first door on her right, and tried the doorknob, only to find it wouldn't budge. Locked.

She pressed an ear to the wood, and heard... Moaning? A short scream? She couldn't be sure. Whatever was on the other side of this room, it was adequately soundproofed. Why couldn't she open it? She tried the adjacent door, and likewise found it locked. For this one, she heard the muffled noise of... A nursery music box?

She continued down the carpeted hallway and tried a third door. She turned the doorknob, and this one began to turn. Taking another deep breath, she turned it the complete 90 degrees, and pushed. As the door swung open, her eyes were met with a dirt path, grass on either side, and hedges that towered over her. She stepped out onto the dirt, and the moment her fourth hoof touched the ground, the door behind her vanished. Looking around, she was overcome with Déjà vu as she vividly recalled Canterlot Castle's hedge maze.

Pink cotton candy clouds floated overhead, occasionally blocking out the sun. As she turned a corner to try and get her bearings, she came to a small clearing, where seven other corridors intersected. A trio of butterflies floated out of one of the corridors, and as she froze in her tracks, recalling what had happened last time, something coiled around her back right leg and yanked her back, causing her to lose her footing and fell to the dirt. She was able to scream for barely a half second, before a bear paw covered her mouth. As she was rolled onto her back, the butterflies began circling just above her head, as a dragon-scaled snake tail began rubbing against her marehood.

"Oh Fluttershy, look at how weak and helpless you are..." The trio of insects taunted as she attempted to size up the towering draconequus looming over her, pinning her in the dirt. She felt herself slowly become aroused between her legs as she saw a blue-tinted phallic organ begin to appear out of the shadowy creature's brown-furred torso. She trembled as he lowered his head to lap at her neck with his snake tongue, and gently brushed the tip of his one long fang against her barrel. Her muffled cries for help only seemed to arouse her further, and she found herself spreading her hind legs as she felt the tip of his penis begin to part her lips.

"You've been a virgin for far too long, my dear. Time to be taken!"

With that, Discord thrust into the pegasus, and her mind seized up at the overwhelming sensation. Her wings involuntarily spread out across the dirt she currently laid on as he pulled out only to shove himself back in. The lion's paw over her mouth was soft, the hold was firm but not painful, and every time she squealed into it just seemed to invigorate both of them.

"Fluttershy? Fluttershy where are you?"

She heard Twilight's distant voice through the hedges.

"Now now, you wouldn't want your friends to see how much you're enjoying this, would you?" The butterflies taunted. The base of her tail was becoming damp from the fluids she was excreting.

"Fluttershy, darling!" She heard Rarity call out from another part of the maze.

"Fluttershy? Yoooohoooo, Fluttershy!" Pinkie Pie yelled off to the left somewhere.

Her eyes began to roll back in her head. Her friends, so close by, unaware of what was happening to her.

"Here comes a big old storm of chaos!" Discord exclaimed, and hilted inside her. A hot, gooey, sticky substance shot up inside her. She felt it travel up into her intestines, and she bit down on the lion's paw covering her mouth as she also hit her peak. If the draconequus was in any pain, he certainly didn't show it. As the surges subsided, her nether region felt quite full, but she didn't lose a drop; instead of leaking out, it had merely begun to travel up her lower intestines.

As the paw was lifted from her mouth, she felt the draconequus pull out of her, and her entire body started to go cold, as did the air all around her. She opened her eyes, and saw that she was no longer in the hedge maze. Looking around, she quickly found the source of the chill all around her.

The flooded-then-frozen Sweet Apple Acres.

Having lost sight of Discord after he had released her, she rolled over and got to her hooves. The ice was cold to the touch, and the air sent shivers down her wings, but Discord's deposit inside her seemed to retain its heat, and still nothing leaked out as she struggled to keep her footing as she walked across the ice.

"There, much better!" She heard above her. Fluttershy barely had time to look up before the draconequus descended on her again. His ice-skate wearing legs hit the ice directly behind her back hooves, his momentum transferring to her, and they were off down the ice fields.

"I do prefer ice breeding to water skiing!" Discord exclaimed as Fluttershy felt him enter her again. Every stroke of his blades was accompanied by a thrust forward, as he leaned forward, placed his eagle talon and lion paw on either side of her as they picked up speed. The pegasus wasn't sure what to focus on, the exhilarating speed across the ice, or the hot, wet, pulsing pressure under her tail. Feeling a surge of daring, she took deeper breaths and leaned down, and essentially presented herself while the two of them put on a performance of Coitus on Ice.

"He fucks you or he goes back to being stone!" She heard Twilight proclaim from over by the 'shore.' They got faster and faster as they came to a wide open clearing, without the tops of any trees to weave around. The draconequus gave a particularly forceful thrust, and Fluttershy felt him unload into her again as they went into a spin, and again found it hard to choose her focus between the increasing dizzyness, or the increasing load inside her as she felt it began to enter her stomach.

"Round and round and round she goes, how much will she cum? Nopony knows!"

Discord released her and pulled out once again, and Fluttershy closed her eyes as she finally lost her balance, all four hooves slipping outward.

But what she came into contact with, wasn't the cold ice she was expecting. In fact, when her barrel hit the ground, her momentum evaporated. When she opened her eyes, she found that the locale had changed once again. Her eyes widened as she realized she was back in Canterlot, but not the hedge maze. No, it was the considerably more populated Canterlot Castle Ballroom. She felt even more full than she had on the ice, and still, nothing emptied out.

As she got to her hooves, she noticed the tile floor beneath her begin to turn a sickly shade of green. The slime started to pool around her hooves, then started to climb up her legs.

"Smoozy, ready for some fun?"

Discord returned to her view, slowly pushed back inside her, and began to coil his body around hers, running his eagle talon through her mane, tickling her neck with his tongue, all while Smooze continued to inch up her legs. When she was sufficiently covered, slimy, translucent tentacles rose up from the main mass under her, and began prodding her mouth and plothole. Discord used his free lion paw to pull her tail up invitingly, and the back tentacle began to snake in. Fluttershy gasped, and that was all the time it needed to slip into her mouth as well.

It was slippery, juicy, and tasted like a... Lime lollipop?

It snaked down her throat, and allowed her just enough room to breathe. Being penetrated from every angle made her rapidly approach her peak yet again.

"It's not a party until somepony cums uncontrollably all over the ballroom!" She heard Pinkie Pie excitedly shout.

"Young lady, this is not that kind of party!" A snooty Canterlotian replied.

Fluttershy tensed up as Discord began to fill her even more, and after several seconds, her stomach felt like she had just spent the past three hours at a buffet.

She cried out as best as her goop-filled mouth would allow, and the muffled sounds that escaped from her lips caused the Smooze to relax, the solid tentacles inside her suddenly slipping out in liquid form. As soon as her mouth was free from obstruction, she gasped for breath. Her legs became wobbly, and she began to fall to the floor. The small section of her mind that was still functioning with logic instead of lust was honestly expecting it at this point, and sure enough, she found herself not fall as far as she expected, and not come into contact with ceramic tile, but wood.

She opened her eyes, and found herself laying among tipped teacups and half-eaten cucumber sandwiches on a coffee table.

Discord's house.

The lord of chaos lounging on the couch leaned forward, and picked her up, bringing her over, and turning her around to face her. He set her down in a rough standing position, where her marehood rested mere inches from his cock.

"It's so nice having you here. So why don't you show me how much you love being here?"

With that, he let go of her, and she looked down, breathing heavily. She leaned down, supporting herself by placing her front hooves on the brown fur of his chest, and impaled herself on his endowment. Little more than a moaning, lust-driven mess, she pulled up until he was barely inside, only to slam back down. She paid no mind to her sweat-filled mane falling in front of her face. She felt like she was about to burst at the seams, and all she wanted was more. Her flank muscles burned as she went up and down as fast as she could, as more hairs of her tail became matted with her secretions.

Fluttershy felt the draconequus organ in her twitch, and she descended a final time and held it there, and felt another eruption of hot spunk, causing what was in her very full stomach to climb her esophagus. It climbed to the back of her throat, and at the last moment, she tilted her open muzzle to the ceiling as she felt her mouth begin to fill, shaking in orgasmic fury, not really knowing or caring how she was still physically breathing. Small trickles of white began to spill from the sides of her mouth before she closed her mouth and forced herself to swallow.

Suddenly feeling completely and overwhelmingly spent, she let her body fall backwards, sliding off of Discord's finally-shrinking erection. Instead of colliding with the coffee table, she saw the surroundings of his house melt away into a black sea of nothing. The falling lasted around five seconds as she felt herself scooped up and cradled by the distinct arms of the draconequus. She risked opening her eyes, and saw him gently press his lion's paw to her stomach, and as he gently pressed inward, the feeling of fullness subsided, but instead of feeling empty, she felt satisfied. In the moments where her heavy eyelids allowed her sight, she saw her own bedroom fade into view as Discord laid her gently into her bed.

"How do you feel?" He asked her as her breathing slowed as he brought her fleece blanket up and over her.

"I... I feel... Perfect."

Discord smiled at her as he tucked her in for the night, the last rays of sunlight having dipped below the horizon.

"How... How did you know I was ready for something like that?" She asked him, still catching her breath.

"It was all you, my dear. I was simply along for the ride. I thought one of the ways I could show you how much your proposal meant to me, was to let you live out your fantasies... If you were ready for them. Turns out there are quite a lot of locked doors in there. I can't wait for you to experience them all." Discord explained.

"So... So that doesn't mean I'm..." Her words faded off as she rubbed her belly. Discord shook his head.

"No, no foals yet. Only when you're ready, my dearest. Only when you're ready."


The only sounds in the shoreline hills of Silver Shoals were crickets, and the soft crashes of waves on the beach under the starry night sky.

That is, until Princess Luna bolted up in bed with a gasp, her cheeks and nethers burning. Looking over at the clock and seeing 2 AM, she tossed the covers aside, got up, and went to the kitchen for a cold glass of water. Deciding that wasn't going to be enough, she swiftly went out the cabin's back door, down towards the beach.

"By the moon, Fluttershy..." She groaned to herself as she stepped into the tide and sat down, splashing water on her face.

"Luna, is everything alright?" She heard her sister asked from up by the patio.

"Everything's fine, sister..."

Knowing that the scent she left from her room to the kitchen to the walk down here was absolutely undeniable, it came as no surprise when she heard the back door close, and heard uproarious laughter coming from her sister's bedroom window a few moments later.

FIN