The Portal: The Start

by leconnorandghost

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Fluttershy, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Human, Romance
Length: 1643

A man whos life has fallen and crumbled. HE now tries to end his own life but something goes a stray

The story starts off with a man named markus. he's life is bad and he tries to end it. though he enters a portal and meets fluttershy and pinkie pie. but what will happen and flutters house?~

Published 2012-08-16 15:54:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-16 15:54:01 UTC

oh the start of it all

Writers notes: This is my first fan-fic AND online post of a created story. Please Bring me feed back. YES there are mistakes. YES its slightly NSFW and it will continue to be an erotica. Please send feedback, any is fantastic.

I’m Markus, a twenty year that lives in Swindon, England. I have no future; my wife left me with the kids that i once thought were mine. Turned out to be another guys. My parents, well let’s say they are ten feet under. My life is in ruins. One day i got tired of the same shitty routine, same disgusting street. One day i had enough of all this. After work i got into my car, nothing out of the ordinary here, and i drove to the cliffs of Dover and minutes before, i began to increase the speed till it hit one hundred. And then off the cliff. My thoughts had none. So as the car drove off the edge I unbuckled myself and opened the door. Needless to say, i fell at a quick rate. Face first. But something didn’t feel right. And before i knew it a portal opened up to another dimension, i started shouting for help, but that was useless as i have already neared the bottom. I entered this vortex and expected the worst, but what had happened is the opposite. The best thing has happened. I entered into a colorful world filled with nothing but sweet kindness. Though I hit the ground. Hard. I moan as i get up brushing off the dirt from my hands.

“Well at least i can feel pain and still talk” sarcastically saying aloud, i then heard some delightful soft singing, the kind you could only hear once in a life time. I began to panic, and hid. As the singing became louder, I decided to investigate within the bush to see who it was. “Where are you?” i quietly whispered to myself. Then to my surprise a pony walked into view and spoke words of English! Not only that, but she was singing! My eyes widened in shock. I couldn’t believe what i was seeing. “Pinch me i must be dreaming” as soon as i said that, i got pinched. I quickly looked to my right and right there staring at me was a pink pony and before i could speak a word she just surprised me and happily said “HI IM PINKIE..” before the pony could finish the line i jumped into the air screaming and ran for my life into this dark woods area. Meanwhile, the two ponies just looked onward with confusion.

As i walked into the dark abyss of the damp soggy woods, i came across this small hut. So i approached the door, expecting a human welcome, and knocked politely. The door opens and, ANOTHER PONY?! REALLY?! I threw my arms in the air and shouted “ANOTHER ONE!!!” and stormed off in anger. Again the pony just looked confused and closed the door. I came across a cavern and decided to settle there as it was becoming dark. As i sat down i felt something warm, a kind of heavy breathing. I didn’t think much of it till i heard a voice “Can i help you?” I shuffled back into the opposite side of the cavern in shock, and to my surprise a dragon appeared. I was too scared to say anything back. “hey don’t be scared, im not going to hurt you” he openly said. I couldn’t think but to only run. So i did and ran afar form the cavern, about an hour or so later it started to rain, heavy to. “Of all the days, it had to be today.” I said to myself.

I continued until i found an opening leading to, what seemed, a nice town. So i ran towards the town, straight into the center, raised my arms in triumph and shouted “Yes civilization! Finally!” But then i looked around. Ponies, ponies everywhere! No matter where i looked, they were everywhere! I just hang my head low and walked along, every pony moved out of my way. I knew i was the outcast, ever since school i was. This doesn’t make it any different. A tear slowly drips down as i walk in my own shame. I continued walking i could feel them staring at me, judging me, talking bad about. They are no different to humans. Mocking me. I walked out of sight crying my eyes out. I sat down next to a tree, looked up and noticed it was night time. So i fell asleep on the grass, my eyes closing, vision blurring and slowly gave in and slept.

When i woke up, i was inside a home. Cosy, i shall admit but how did i end up here? I took a look round and noticed the walls where of a tree. Well i remember sleeping on grass, that's it. Oh god no, i hope i haven’t been kidnapped. Then a door opened up so i quickly acted asleep. “The animal is all sweepy” the same soft voice spoke. I soon shot up; needless to say the pony was startled. I began asking questions. But these lead me no-where. “Where am i?” i quietly asked. The pony just looked at me and said “Your in ponyville silly”. I then got up to go to the window and peered outside. Everywhere i looked, ponies. Happy, jumping, crazy, fun loving ponies. I started to smile, but then remembered. I have just been kidnapped. Soon i turn around and asked the pony “Why did you, how to put this nicely, take me away from the streets?” The pony looked at me and giggled. Soon she replied “i didn’t want you to get ill” the pony began to blush and then stated “If that’s alright” hiding its face by using the mane. “What is your name?” i asked, she replied “I’m Fluttershy”.

Silence took over the room for ten minutes before either of us spoke.I walked over to fluttershy; thankfully our heads are at the same height. Each step i took closer to her she blushed deeper. I lean in close, centimeters away from her lips. I whisper “Thank you for taking care of me” and leaned out slowly. The look fluttershy had were the sort of look a girl would give to her crush. I turn to walk out of the cottage, seeing as i needed to find my own home and what not. “Wait” fluttershy said, I turn around to see what it was. Next thing i know I’m on the floor with flutters on top of me, hugging me almost, telling me to wait. “Please don’t go, I would hate for you to be alone out in the cold. So please stay here with me. I-if you want to that is” She smiled and blushed deeper than before. I pondered for a while before agreeing. Moments later and flutters still hadn’t moved. I started to think to myself ‘I-is she going to shuffle off or must I ask?’ Soon i heard light snoring. I looked down to see cute little fluttershy sleeping. ‘DAAAAAAAAAAAW!!!!!’ was running through my mind. This made me go crazy. Not for lust but for the sheer cuteness of the situation. Her nose nuzzled into my chest, ears lay flat and her hoofs floating by my side. I couldn’t believe this was happening. I just couldn’t.

Later my tummy rumbled, somehow this woke flutters up “oh are you hungry?” she nuzzled my neck when asking and blushed. “Well I guess I am.” I giggled after saying. Neither of us moved, I guess we were so comfortable we just couldn’t but I sat up and again flutters was sleeping, but her head was sideways on my chest. And out of nowhere she moved up to my neck and kissed me and said “That’s how much I do not want you to leave”. I blushed so much I could feel the heat of the redness.

Flutters soon got up and made me some food. I walked up and asked her “where is the bathroom?” she replied “Oh its upstairs second door right” I politely say “thank you” I move on upstairs to the bathroom and shut the door, locking it. I turn to the mirror. Looking at myself. Thinking ‘Did that just happen?’ I couldn’t come to it.

I finished up in the bathroom and walked back down to the most delightful smell my nostrils have laid its senses on. I walk to the kitchen to find a spread of vegetarian delights, good thing I am one then. As i sat down, flutters walked in wearing an apron. “Here you go hope you enjoy” she pleasantly stated. While eating i kept noticeing from the corner of my eye that fluttershy couldn’t stop staring at me, for whatever reason. I thought to myself ‘Why can’t she stop staring at me? I’m exactly not the best looking person, do I have something on my face?’ So i stopped, looked up and asked “Do I have something on my face?” Fluttershy soon replied “Yes you do” she got down and came close to me. “Where abouts?” “right here” and then fluttershy kissed my lips, i don’t know why, but she just did. I blushed as well as her. We kissed for a while. Soon we both pull away, foreheads still connecting. “W-why did you kiss me?” quietly asked. “Because i like you” fluttershy responded.

My face turned completely red. I couldn’t think of what to do so I said “I like you too but you cant kiss me like that. We barely know each other. Sorry if it sounds like I'm being mean, but I'm not. I'm doing it for your sake.”