Burnout Equestrian Paradise
Things get worse
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Construction area next to Fort Lawrence Naval Station
South Bay Expressway
Paradise City
Meanwhile, while the Free Ponies were racing down to the White Mountain Yard to claim it, Grogar was waiting in the construction zone by Fort Lawrence. He was out of his car, his helmet was off and he was standing with his magic glass ball, the ball pulsing with magical energy.
Come on, where are they? They should be here by now! He thought. All of a sudden, his thoughts were interrupted by the sounds of approaching vehicles. It was the rest of the Legion. They all parked around him and stepped out, and walked up to the ram, who turned around and looked at them.
"I hope that you have managed to do what you needed to do," Grogar said to Sombra.
"Of course I did. Every other driver in this city is now my loyal slave, though I don't think that your magic would've helped. I could have been able to do it myself," Sombra said back.
"Yes, while that is true, you could only do so one small group at a time. Only with my magic, now you could enslave everypony in this city at once," Sombra just looked away from the ram in annoyance. "Speaking of which, can you sommon all of your slaves here?"
Sombra nodded and ignited his magic, sending a beacon up into the sky. His eyes glowed and he announced, "SLAVES, ATTEND ME!!!!!!!"
Within moments, a huge swarm of cars arrived at the Naval Yard, completely surrounding the Legion. However, nopony was afraid. Then, all of the drivers stepped out of their cars and formed a huge crowd. And every single pony in the crowd had glowing green eyes. Among the crowd were the Wonderbolts, the Young Six, the Washouts and the Elements of Harmony (but only four of them).
"You summoned us, Master," The crowd said as one.
"Slaves, await your instructions!" Sombra ordered, to which the reply was a chorus of 'Yes, master,' from the enslaved ponies.
Sombra turned and looked at Grogar. "There here, so what do you want with them?"
Grogar beckoned the villains to him, and they all gather around the crystal ball. An image was showing in the ball, multiple cars racing down a winding road, which they recognized as South Mountain Drive. Then, Sombra recognized the red-and-lavender Mesquite as Twilight's.
Although Sombra already knew, Grogar said it anyway, "Twilight. Is. Alive,"
"Impossible!!!" Sombra immediately shouted back, "I sent Rarity to kill her! She should have succeeded!"
Grogar then motioned to the Ikusa GT behind the leading Tempesta, and its crumpled up front end. "It appears that her new friend, Akula, has saved her," When Grogar said Akula's name, Chrysalis felt a shiver go up her spine.
Tirek then spoke up. "That's not possible. The Grand Marais is way heavier than the Ikusa GT. Akula should've just wrecked, as there is no possible way his Ikusa could T-Bone Rarity's Marais,"
"It is possible," Chrysalis interjected, causing all the villains to turn and look at her. "Akula once taught me the 3 Laws of Physics when my reign was still in its infancy. One of the Laws states that, 'when an unstoppable force meets an immovable object, they will cancel each other out,' What that means is that while Rarity's Marais was much heavier, it isn't immovable. And Akula must've been approaching at such a high speed that rendered him an unstoppable force. And Akula's momentum was much greater than that of Rarity's, which allowed him to take her out," She explained, slowly trotting towards them. But when she finished her explanation and saw that the others were staring at her in surprise and shock, she lowered her head and apologised.
After shaking his head clear, Grogar addressed the group, while Chrysalis took to the air and flew up onto one of the carrier's decks (when Cozy saw her about to fly away, Grogar just told her to let her go and give her some space). "It's clear that Twilight, Akula and the others with them are not under our spell or dead. So, I've taken the liberty to enhance the spell Sombra cast. The hypnotized ponies now can take orders from the rest of us,"
"OH! Can I try something to see if the enhancement works?" Cozy suddenly asked, her tone filled with excitement. Grogar, not seeing any reason to disagree, gave her a go ahead.
"Okay," Cozy stated, clearing her throat as she jumped up onto the hood of her Revenge, "WHERE ARE THE HYPNOTIZED ELEMENTS????!!!!!" She commanded the crowd of enslaved ponies.
Immediately, the hypnotized Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie stepped forward and bowed before their Empress.
"We are here, mistress," The four Elements said as one.
Cozy smirked deviously and said, "Come here and kiss your Empress's hooves," The four Elements acknowledged their mistress's order, walked over and started to lightly kiss Cozy's hooves, eventually evolving into more passionate and hungry kisses. Cozy loved the way they worshiped her tiny hooves, licking and sucking on them like lollipops and letting out very cute and lewd moans.
"Well, looks like it works to me," Tirek stated, the others nodding in agreement as they watched the Elements suck on Cozy's hooves.
After a while, Cozy thanked the four ponies for the love they showed for her hooves and sent them back to join the crowd. She then jumped off the hood of her car, walked up to the others and gave them a big smile.
After a few moments of silence, Tirek then spoke up, "So you believe that this army will finish Twilight off for good?"
Grogar just turned to look a the centaur and smiled. "Of course. Look. There's only five of them. We have an army. All of us, excluding Sombra, have our Burnout Licences. And I have my Elite Licence. You just need yours, and we will be unstoppable! Equestria will be ours to rule!" The ram suddenly announced, starting to laugh evilly. The others then joined his laughter one-by-one. Soon, the only thing being heard was the sound of their evil laughter.
But suddenly, it was cut short by a magically amplified voice, which said, "Do you really think it'll be that easy?" This voice had caught the villains by surprise, mostly Grogar. What? Is that Twilight? He thought, whirling around to find the source of the voice. The voice sounded a lot like Twilight, but something was off about it. The voice had a little touch of evil in it.
Then, there came the sound of a car slowly approaching. The villians turned to the direction it was coming from, to see that the crowd of enslaved ponies was making way for a Krieger Überschall Clear-View LMP race car to approach them. After moving a few feet forward to get clear of the crowd, it stopped, revved its engine a little and then shut off.
Then, the scissor door opened up and what stepped out sent waves of shock through the villains.
The pony that exited from the Clear-View, looked very similar to Twilight, but when she was a unicorn. However, this 'Twilight' was wearing a dark black full-body leather suit and a black with red highlighted helmet, which had a hole for her horn (obviously). On her breast area, was an imprint of some sort of red star and wrapped around her right foreleg, was a leg band with the letters 'OG' interlocking with each other. She also was wearing black royal horseshoes, but that reached up to her knees. Her mane was black with a red tip, while her tail was also black but was highlighted with red. Her horn was much to tall to be unicorn horn, and it was giving of a faint red glow. Finally, her eyes were the exactly the same as Twilight's, but with cat-like slit pupils. The Twilight doppelganger then started to slowly trot towards the gathered villains, gazing at them as if they were insects.
Walking alongside her, was a baby dragon that was identical to Spike, wearing the exact same helmet and suit as 'Twilight', but designed to fit his body. His eyes were giving off a faint red glow, but that didn't concern the villains. What did concern them was the modified MP5/10 sub-machine gun he was holding in his claws.
Then, the Twilight doppelganger stopped, which gave Grogar time to ask, "Who are you?"
"I... am Oscura Galaxia!" The unicorn suddenly announced, shooting lighting bolts into the sky. "I heard word through the vine that there was a gathering here, so I decided to intervene," She then turned her gaze to the dragon standing beside her and introduced him, "This is my personal assistant and bodyguard, Thorn. I've been with him ever since he hatched from his egg. And his is only loyal to me. I would advise not getting killed by him. His gun traps the souls of its victims," After she said that, Cozy visibly gulped and hid behind Tirek.
After a few moments of staring at Oscura's adopted dragon bodyguard, Grogar then said, "Okay, okay. That clears up a few things. Why are you here?!"
Oscura just turned to face the ram, and trotted up to the glass ball that floated near him. She then pointed an armoured hoof to the red Tempesta that was leading the group. "You see this Tempesta?"
"Yes?"
"The stallion driving that Tempesta..." She began, when, in a sudden swift motion, she punched the glass ball with such force, the ball shattered into a million pieces. "I... HATE HIM," She growled, the venom growing in her voice, "I... HATE HIM!!!!!!!" She suddenly screamed out to heavens, causing all the villains, except for Grogar, to cover their ears.
After Oscura had regain her composure and Grogar had repaired his glass ball, Oscura then turned to the villains and then said, "So. I wish to make you a deal,"
"A... deal?" Grogar asked.
"Yes. I heard that there are some other ponies you need to enslave, and Danger is one of them. I just want you to leave him for me, okay? I have a score to settle with him,"
"Okay, but what's in it for us?" Sombra then asked.
She just turned back to them, smiled seductively and said, "I can gather up the remaining ponies you need to enslave, including this 'Twilight' you thought I was. Also..." She began, approaching Sombra, "...I could give you strong males some... feminine pleasure," She then said, stroking Sombra's chin.
He smiled back and made to kiss her, but soon felt the barrel of a gun where Oscura was stroking, and saw that she was holding a red-and-black Desert Eagle .50AE to his chin. Also, Thorn was aiming his MP5/10 at Sombra's head, a bright red dot exactly between his eyes.
"Ah-ah-ah, Sombra. The deal hasn't been made," She then said, returning her gun to her side. She then turned to Thorn and said, "Thorn, stand down,"
"Yes, Mistress," Thorn replied, lowering his MP5/10.
She then turned away from Sombra and trotted up to Grogar. "So do we have a deal?" She then stuck out her hoof for a shake, and after a few moments, the ram accepted it and the two shook hooves.
"Deal,"
Oscura just smiled and pulled away from Grogar. "Good choice. Just remember, DangerDean is mine. I'll see you around," The unicorn said, turning away and walking back to her Krieger. "Thorn, let's go," She said to the dragon, opening the driver-side door.
Thorn just gave Sombra the 'I'll be watching you' jesture, before returning to his mistress and getting in the Clear-View. After the two had gotten in the car and buckled up, Oscura restarted the Clear-View and raced off.
But before she did, Sombra swore she saw Oscura wink at him seductively.
After Oscura drove off, Sombra then gave his next set of orders to the enslaved crowd. "Find Twilight and bring her to me for enslavement,"
"Yes, Master," Was the reply. Sombra then sent them to complete their task and the crowd returned to their respective vehicles and drove off in random directions.
"Cozy, we're leaving. Go get Chrysalis, will you?" Grogar told Cozy, to which she comically saluted and flew up to the carrier while the other got into their cars.
Meanwhile...
But while Grogar and Oscura made their little deal, Chrysalis was standing on the deck of the aircraft carrier that was in dock at the Fort, staring at the sun setting over the horizon. Also, her tears formed a puddle underneath her as she silenty sobbed.
Why? Why must life be so cruel to us? She thought, letting her tears flow, After all of these years, we've finally found each other. But why must we be on opposite sides of the wire? Friends of two separate enemies, basically at war with each other. Please give your guidance. I know that if the time comes, my friends won't hesitate to kill you. But I don't want it to come to that, my love!
All of a sudden, she was snapped out of her thoughts by the pitter-pattering of wings behind her.
"Chrysalis! We're going now!" Cozy's voice called out from the other end of the carrier.
"You go ahead, i'll catch up!" She called back, doing her best to hide her sad tone.
Cozy said nothing, but when Chrysalis heard the little filly's wing beat getting further away, she knew that the filly heard her. Now that she was alone again, the former changeling queen went back to her thoughts.
I promise that I will find a way to be with you again. I promise you that, Akula.
She then lit up her magic and summoned two necklaces, both with a bullet key-chain on the end. One necklace has a 7.62mm Soviet bullet, the other had a .45 ACP round. Both of the bullet had inscriptions on them. The 7.62mm had 'When darkness falls, I will rise' and the .45 ACP had 'I will return, my love,'
She brought both of the necklaces up to her muzzle and said, "Stay safe, my love," before she lightly kissed the bullets, put on the necklaces and took to the air, flying back to her car...
Author's Note
Finally, I've finished this! Took me a while, and I'm really happy with the outcome! Hope you enjoyed!
A special thanks goes out to DangerDean for letting me use his OC, Oscura Galaxia in this story. He has been one of the biggest supporters of this story, so be sure to head on over to his profile and show him some love! Also, Thorn was my idea, but is in use with Dean's character, so ownership of Thorn belongs to both of us.
Also, the MP5/10 is a real gun. Basically, the MP5/10 is the same MP5 we all know, but modified to use the 10mm Auto round instead of the standard 9x19mm Parabellum round. There's also an MP5 variant that uses the .40 S&W round, called the MP5/40. I'm not calling the MP5/10 the MP-10, because the MP-10 is a licence version of the standard MP5, being built in the Philippines.
Paint Schemes:
Oscura's Clear-View: Metallic red (can't change Finish)
One last thing, I'm not going to be adding any sex scenes between Oscura and Sombra, or any Oscura x Sombra crap. So don't ask for it. I'm not making it.
Hope you enjoyed this chapter and be advised...
...The Nakamura SI-7 has been released into Paradise City... ![]()
