Sunset's Revenge

by sunsetpaw

(Chapter 1) Anger's Storm

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"Sunset!" I hear Princess Celestia call. I ignore her.

"Why should I listen to her?, the only thing she ever taught me was how disappointing and unworthy I am." I think to my self. If it went according to plan, I will be making a bee line from my room to the mirror. But as it turns out I wasn't quite fast enough to get away from the guards blocking my way. Taking a last minuet plan, I change my heading and run straight out of the castle.

I'm running. Why am I running from Celestia? What am I doing? be angry Yes... Yes that was it, Celestia always keeps everything away from me she needs to pay. pay... hurt... pain... kill! Just focus on running. Shoot!" I mumble as I see guard teleport in front of me. I charge up as much of my magic as I can into my teleport to get as far away as possible. Pop! I look around dazed until I see a guard standing next to the edge of Canterlot looking at me mouth open. I look down to see that I have teleported instead of somewhere safe and away, but over the edge of the city. Im falling. I don't know what to do. Closing my eyes I feel my horn heat up, whats happening?. I stop falling, so I open my eyes to look around. But as soon as I do, I realized I messed up, messed up bad as I still seem to be about 30 meters up in the air, my magic give out. I fall.

I groan as I try to stand up, but am unable to for the pain in my back leg is unbearable. I can't take the pain. "I must rest." I think to myself just before I black out.

"grrh" I hear.

"mmn" I respond, slowly opening my eyes to see a manticore staring at me. Filling with adrenalin I stand up. Knowing I don't have the energy to teleport without endangering myself I force myself to try and hurl a massive fireball at the manticore, only to have it fizzle out. Swinging his massive paw the manticore swats me across the clearing and straight into a large tree. crack whispering to no one I say "shoot I hope I didn't break a bone." Now fuming with anger I feel myself fill with more magical energy than I have ever felt before. kill... kill... Bang! The energy shoots off as a massive fire ball, "why couldn't that have come sooner." I mutter.

Well now that its all good and done, I used too much magic. I lay down and I think to myself, "finally, I get some sleep", just moments before I fall over, fast asleep.


I've been walking for what seems to be the last three hours and have seen nothing but trees, well until now. After I had woken up I decided to take a second look at my bag which I had found by looking next to the clearing in which I killed the Manticore.

Looking to take a break I find another cave, though it's oddly hidden behind a layer of vines it's quiet and I get a feeling of protection from it. I settle down and decide to look at the contents of my saddlebag. Inside I find a small bag of bits, my personal book from which I can communicate directly with Princess Celestia, pointless now, a map of Equestria, my personal journal, and a few library books which I won't be returning now.

Looking at my journal I decide that I am going to do something big, be something big and I want my story of how that came to be written, so I started writing of the previous events. Looking back though I found my notes from the last book I read from the forbidden section, one that told about the spell that turns unicorns or pegasi into alicorns. Looking at my notes it looks like I would need something called a Cosmic Orb. It is either that or find a true born alicorn who innately know a spell to turn others to alicorns.

Standing up I bump my head on something hard and cold, stone. I look up to see the statue of a unicorn. Looking closer at this unicorn it looks like she was trying to protect something. I look behind her another pegasus. While walking up to the Unicorn to get a better look, I accidentally poke he with my horn. "crack" shoot I hope I didn't break the statue." I think to myself. Flash. There is a bright flash of white light, I close my eyes and when I open them again, I see a unicorn with a coat so pale a pink that it looks nearly white, her mane is a deep sky blue with little white spots in it, next to her horn is a little cluster of these stars that start in the middle yellow and spiral out changing from yellow to orange, pink, purple, then to blue. Behind her is the pegasus, the pegasus coat was a deep blue, while her mane was pink in color.

The unicorn comes out yelling "-ON'T LET YOU!". Then stumbles over to her right, I go to help her when she shy's away from me in a meek little voice saying" sstay away.". Meanwhile the pegasus comes crashing into the wall of the cave. Seeing this the Unicorns exclaims "Kindle! are you okay?".

"ughh" moans the pegasus whose name I guess is Kindle.

Feeling the urge to help them I go and offer my hoof to help the pegasus up saying "Hello, I don't mean to startle you, it's just that you kind of just came to life from being a statue.".

"Ummm... okay..." is the response the pegasus gives, "My name is Kindle. Nice to meet you...?"

"Sunset Shimmer." I say answering her question. "and you are?" I ask the Unicorn

"um... my name is Galaxy Heart...".

"Well, why are you here?" asks the pegasus.


Author's Note

Dear Readers,

I hope that any of you who have read this enjoy it. As this is my first time writing a story that others will read, be sure to point out any spelling, grammar, or otherwise errors. Also, if you have any ideas of what kind of thing Sunset might do next, or where she might go next, please say so and what that idea might be.

With love,

Sunsetpaw

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