Visit To PonyVille
4th Wall Broken? (side 1)
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"DASHIIIEEEE" It Was A Wonderful Morning In PonyVille And The Birds Were Chirping Pinkie Pie And Rainbow Dash Were Making A Cake For Twilights BirthDay. 'Im Coming Pinkie Hold On." Said Dashie "NOoooo We Gota GOOO!" Said Pinkie "Ok,Ok Im Coming" Said Dashie "Come Help Me Carry It Dashie Please Its Getting Heavy!" said Pinkie "Coming!" They Both Walked Down The Street To Twilights House "Whoa Pinkie Whats that?" Said Dashie "NOTHING MOVE ALONG!" said Pinkie. Pinkie Was Afriad to Tell Dashie What The 4th Wall was She Moved Faster So Rainbow Would Have To Keep Up. "Pinkie What's Wrong? What Was That?... PInkie?" Said Dashie "I Can't Tell You Im Sorry Dashie now Can We Go To Twilights House Please?" Said Pinkie. Dashie Said Nothing And They Both Continued To Walk To Twilghts House.
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"OK Were, Here Get Ready" Said Pinkie All Twilights Friends Were At Her Door Pinkie,Dashie,AJ,Rarity, And FlutterShy "3...2...1..." Said Pinkie "SURPRISE!!!" They All Said As Twilight Opened The Door "AH...Oh Thank You Guys Your So Ni..." Twilight Was Intrupted By A Explosion Noise "What Was That?" Said Twilight 'Pinkie You Ok?" Said Rarity "OH NO NO NO NO NO!" Said Pinkie As She Quickly Ran Off Towards The Noise
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As Pinkie Got There There Was A Pony Right Next The The Broken 4th Wall Laying On Its Side "Oh God..." Pinkie Covered Her Mouth As She Seen The Horrific Sight Of A Pony Bleeding And Cut All Over. "SOME PONY ANY PONY HELP!!!" Pinkie Screamed As Here Friend Trotted Up "WHAT HAPPEND?!" They All Said " I Don't Know i Found Him Like This...Get The Nurse! Quickly!" Said Pinkie
To Be Continued...
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