Visit To PonyVille

by jolteon7654

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Adventure, Slice of Life, Dark
Length: 872

It Was a normal day Or Was It? Find Out In This Fan Fiction

It Was a normal day Or Was It? Find out In Visit To PonyVille

WARNING SEX,AND GORE RATED TEEN NOT FOR CHILDREN!!!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-15 12:04:58 UTC

4th Wall Broken? (side 1)

Chapter 1 4th Wall Broken?

"DASHIIIEEEE" It Was A Wonderful Morning In PonyVille And The Birds Were Chirping Pinkie Pie And Rainbow Dash Were Making A Cake For Twilights BirthDay. 'Im Coming Pinkie Hold On." Said Dashie "NOoooo We Gota GOOO!" Said Pinkie "Ok,Ok Im Coming" Said Dashie "Come Help Me Carry It Dashie Please Its Getting Heavy!" said Pinkie "Coming!" They Both Walked Down The Street To Twilights House "Whoa Pinkie Whats that?" Said Dashie "NOTHING MOVE ALONG!" said Pinkie. Pinkie Was Afriad to Tell Dashie What The 4th Wall was She Moved Faster So Rainbow Would Have To Keep Up. "Pinkie What's Wrong? What Was That?... PInkie?" Said Dashie "I Can't Tell You Im Sorry Dashie now Can We Go To Twilights House Please?" Said Pinkie. Dashie Said Nothing And They Both Continued To Walk To Twilghts House.

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"OK Were, Here Get Ready" Said Pinkie All Twilights Friends Were At Her Door Pinkie,Dashie,AJ,Rarity, And FlutterShy "3...2...1..." Said Pinkie "SURPRISE!!!" They All Said As Twilight Opened The Door "AH...Oh Thank You Guys Your So Ni..." Twilight Was Intrupted By A Explosion Noise "What Was That?" Said Twilight 'Pinkie You Ok?" Said Rarity "OH NO NO NO NO NO!" Said Pinkie As She Quickly Ran Off Towards The Noise

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As Pinkie Got There There Was A Pony Right Next The The Broken 4th Wall Laying On Its Side "Oh God..." Pinkie Covered Her Mouth As She Seen The Horrific Sight Of A Pony Bleeding And Cut All Over. "SOME PONY ANY PONY HELP!!!" Pinkie Screamed As Here Friend Trotted Up "WHAT HAPPEND?!" They All Said " I Don't Know i Found Him Like This...Get The Nurse! Quickly!" Said Pinkie

To Be Continued...

4th Wall Broken? (Side 2)

Chapter 2 4th Wall Broken?

"NO!" It Was A Wonderful Morning in Toronto And Nathan O'brien Was Inside Playing Halo Reach on X-box Live Being Lazy As Always "Nathan Get Off The X-Box And Go Out Side!!" Said Nathans Mother "Fine Mom" Said Nathan. Nathan Was A Brony Not any Brony But A Closet Brony So None of His Friends knew Exept One He Was A Brony Too "Out Side Is So Boring I Wish I Just going To Go For A walk I Guess" Said Nathan. As Nathan Walked Down The Street He Seen A Portal Like Thing On The Side Walk He Stop Walking A Look Through The 4th Wall "Who Put This Here!? This Is Retarded" He Just Walk Right Over it As Soon As He Steped on It A Explosion Was herd And He Was Gone Through The 4th Wall

To Be Continued...

Authors Notes

i Know Short Chapter i Just Wanted To get To The Story i Made This Chapter So you Know What Happed On The Human Side No More Human Though Next Chapter Coming Soon!! :D

The Awakening

Chapter 3 The Awakening

"Will He Be Ok Nurse?" Pinkie Said  "Im Not Sure He Has Both His Wings Broken Ribs Cracked up And THis Skull Cracked in half" Said The Nurse Redheart Pinkie Started To Cry Over The Terrible News She Just Heard "HE'S AWAKE NURSE!!!" Said A Docter "What?!" Pinkie Was Exremly Happy To hear This. "It Appears He Also Has Amnesia...And No Cutie Mark?" Said Nurse Redheart "That's Weird" Said Pinkie He Looked like A Teenager To Me" Pinkie was Exremly Confused "Nurse I Think He Wont Get Better Until Next Week" Said A Doctor "Pinkies Hair Went Straight And She Was Sad Again "Pinkie Don't Be So Sad He Will Be Ok In A Week Remember?" Said Dashie Pinkie Hair Poofed Up And She Quickly Ran Out The Door "I Think I Know Were This Is Going" Said Twilight

One Week Later...

"Ugh my Head Hurts" Said Orien Comet "HI!" Said Pinkie Startling Orien Comet "WHO ARE YOU AND WH DID YOU JUST SCARE THE SOCKS OFF OF ME!!" Said Orien Comet "Im Sorry My Name Is Pinkie Pie And I Saved Your Life Sir What's Your Name?" Said Pinkie "My Name? I..It's Orien Comet But My Friends Call Me OC Thanks For Saving Me Pinkie...Say Do you Have Any Idea Where I Could Live Cause i Don't Have A House..." Said OC "Um... Yeah Actualy We Do! Thats Great Right? How Many Bit Do you Own?" Said Pinkie "What Are Bits?" Said Oc "Oh Thats Right You Have Amnesia Um... Bits Are Money You Know HAt Money It Right?" Said Pinkie "Yes I Do And I Have No Bits" Oc sad In A Sad Voice "Thats Ok You Can Rent It For a Week And You Can Some Bits From Working For Aj!" Pinkie Said Happly "Sweet ok Where Is It?" Said Oc. They Both Walked Down The Street To the Empty House For Rent Or Buy "Here It Is!" Said Pinkie "Great! So How Much Is It?" Said OC "Hmm... Its Says 800 Bits Your Going To Have To work Really Hard OC" Said Pinkie

To Be Continued...

Authors Notes

*I know what your all thinking WHAT THE HELL JOLT ORIEN COMET WAS A PONY FROM RAINBOW FACTORY well Orien Comet Was My Oc Before Rainbow Factory fan fic Was Made So Yeah SHUT IT!*