Clunk!
The heavy letterbox lid always did that, it seemed like a good idea at the time to replace the old silent one with a heftier lid to alert her to the mail. All it did now was make Mags jump.
“Gah!”
The mare sighed, looking over from the breakfast table she was currently sat at to see what had been pushed through today. Nothing interesting, no packages anyway. The faint noise of her magic emanated from her horn as she lifted the letters from their resting spot on the floor over to the table. She idly sifted through until a rather brightly coloured one caught her eye.
“Bill...bill...huh, free sample of lemon scented fabric softener. Wait, what’s this?”
The exterior of the letter was certainly eye catching. A deep blue that was littered with other colours in a speckled fashion. Purples, greens, reds and a large amount of other she didn’t care to name. It just had her address and name printed on the front in rather lovely cursive style gold writing that stood out against the myriad of colours. She magically slit it open, a little disappointed to find the interior contained only a plain looking letter with the same fancy writing however adorning a small invitation.
Congratulations!
We hope this letter finds you well. I, Eris would like to congratulate you Magna-Save and your friend Mai for winning our annual factory tour of the Sweet Satisfaction Candy Company. I cordially invite you both to meet me at the entrance this coming Saturday for the most wonderfully eye opening and stomach satisfying tour you’ll ever have! Please find the address below.
Eris.
Sweet Satisfaction Candy Company Owner.
Mags read the address, the factory itself was located just outside Canterlot. For some reason though the actual entering of the competition wasn’t coming to mind very easily. It was clearly at some point in the past she had been with Mai. Perhaps that time they had gone out shopping together a few months ago? There was a hazy memory of a staff haphazardly erected outside Sugarcube Corner where she had gone in for something on a dare from Mai. That must have been it. She didn’t actually think they’d win.
Letting the levitation magic subside and turning the letter over in her hand she thought she had better let Mai know, picking up her phone and finding her number in the address book it got answered in a mere few seconds, unusual for the Griffon to do so.
“We won?!”
“Wait, yes - how did you know?” was all Mags could think to say.
“Because it’s all that’s trending on Whinny right now! All I can see on my timeline is people wondering who won the competition. Do you think I should say it was us?!” came an excited squeal from the other end of the line. Clearly Mai remembered them entering the competition a lot more clearer than Mags did.
“Wait, no! I don’t want to be flooded with friend requests from total strangers. I don’t even remember entering this thing! Well, hardly.”
There was silence for a few moments on the other end of the line. “What the heck do ya mean you don’t remember entering!? It was a dare from me! Remember? Turns out this thing is a lot more exclusive than I had any idea of. Thousands of creatures entered the competition but there were only two winners. Us!” Mai exclaimed. “Anyway fine, it would be a great boost to your follower count but whatever .I guess we can keep it under wraps.” Mai bemoaned, her tone taking a more grumpy turn. “When have we got to go?”
“This Saturday. The letter just says show up at the factory gates. No time either, just an address.” Mags replied, picking it up again and inspecting the writing further to see if there was any further information, sadly there wasn’t.
“Woah they sent a letter. That’s so old school! Still, kinda of expected. I hear the owner is kind of a kook.”
“A kook?”
“Yeah you know, a little eccentric. Still I suppose you’re gonna be if you run a candy factory.”
“Look you still haven’t explained why this is such a big deal to win this contest. I mean we just did it for a stupid dare.”
“I know I know, I didn’t know much about it then. Apparently though if you’re a fan of candy it’s the thing everyone tries to win. They open once a year to two lucky winners to get a tour and the winners always say just how amazing it is. I bet we could see the prize for a fortune if we didn’t want to go!” Mai excitedly exclaimed.
“Well we can’t do that, they know our names. It’s on the letter. Besides, I want to go now. You’ve sold it to me.” Mags said with a grin. “Come to my house Friday night and we’ll make sure we get there bright and early. I know there’s no time on the letter but I want to be prepared.”
“Heck yeah! I’m down for that. I’ll be at yours after work. Could always do a bit of pre-eating. I’ll bring some snacks!”
“See ya then.”
“Bye!”
Mags hung up the call and leafed over the letter one last time. It certainly sounded interesting now Mai had explained it all. She’d do her best to contain her excitement and keep it on a low profile for the next week. If it was as big a deal as Mai had made it out to be, it wouldn’t be smart to go around blurting out they’d won this contest. Anyhow, her breakfast was going cold. The mare settled back into her morning meal, thinking of what they might experience.
-
Brriiiinnngggg!
Friday evening had come around, Mags had managed to keep her mouth shut all week even at work. It was strange, she had never even heard of this annual competition before and suddenly all her coworkers and people she even ran into in town had been discussing it and wondering who had won. Something had leaked clearly, she had heard a Pegasus comment “I heard it’s a Unicorn and some Griffon. Lucky pair!” Thankfully she had avoided anything closer than it being revealed than that.
“Hey hey, I bought snacks as promised!” Mai said, standing at the door grinning holding a bag of chips and some Cola. “I figured we could watch a movie and just relax for the night if that’s cool with you?”
Lettering her in Mags just smiled, it was often the way of Mai to make a suggestion for something she wanted to do but the mare just went along with it. Often her ideas were fun and easy anyway. A movie sounded nice.
“Sure, what movie?”
“How about Candymania? You know that weird old horror movie? Just to get us in the mood.”
“Sure.”
“You think its on Hayflix? I’ll have a look. If not we can do it the old fashioned way.” Mai said, already taking the remote and already flicking onto the streaming service to look for the film. While she did that Mags put the chips in a bowl brought them and the Cola over to the small table between the sofa and the TV, putting them down and taking the spot on the other side of Mai.
“So what do you think it’s gonna be like?” Mags asked her, taking a few chips and starting to crunch on them as the movie began to play.
“Dunno, apparently apart from releasing a statement saying the tour was amazing the previous winners don’t say that much.”
“What do you mean releasing a statement? I figured if you won and got to experience such an amazing prize you’d have at least once creature who’d be blabbing about it to a news crew or something.” Mags mused.
“All I could find was statements. Like I say I dunno, perhaps they have to sign some sort of agreements they won’t blab about it. Although I can’t think of what industry secrets a candy factory is gonna have. Ohhhhh, we use 3% more sugar than the competing brand to make it extra tasty!” Mai teased with a slight hint of sarcasm in her voice in the last part of her sentence.
“Haha, maybe. Anyway I think it’ll be interesting. You think they’ll give us free samples?”
“Well duh. I mean what sort of tour is it gonna be if we don’t get free samples?!” Mai exclaimed, actually turning her attention away from the screen to give her friend a slight glare emanating that she couldn’t really believe Mags had just asked that. “I mean why do you think I bought chips instead of popcorn to eat with the movie? I figured savoury food would be better cos we’re gonna be stuffed full of sweets tomorrow!”
“True. Oh man, do you think I should wear something with a bit of give? The usual jeans might be a bad idea…”
“Only if you wanna see the button of them pop off at some point during the tour.” Mai giggled, turning her attention back to the movie and grabbing a claw full of chips. “Expect to eat a bunch.”
The two spent the remainder of the Friday evening watching the film. Mags knew it wouldn’t be anything as horrific as a horror film based in a candy factory they had their eyes set on right now. Who in their right mind decided they were going to just dive straight into a mountain of chocolate buttons and have them drown you as one character did. The damn things seemed to suck them in like quicksand. What she was expecting was to be led around by Eris and shown a huge amount of machinery, see some workers and then get to try some of their chocolate at the end. She had eaten stuff from the Sweet Satisfaction Candy Company before. Most people just called it Sweet’s for short. Their best selling product was a fairly standard candy bar with milk chocolate in. She had grabbed them on occasion when she was feeling a bit blue, the chocolate always made her feel better. That lovely sweetness was a real lift up for a bad mood.
In any case, they had a movie to watch. Tomorrow bright and early the pair had a trip to make.
-
5:32AM
“Urgh…”
Mags had never really been a morning mare. Despite getting a good night's sleep she still felt rather jaded as she pulled herself out of bed, coming downstairs to get some breakfast and wake herself up. As she went to grab a box of cereal she saw a claw dart in front of her face and slap her hand away.
“Hey!”
“What do you think you’re doing!?”
“Getting breakfast!”
“Are you serious!? We’re going to a candy factory Mags. A CANDY FACTORY. TODAY. Do you really want to spoil your appetite!?”
“Do you want me to a grumpy mess all morning?! Yes I want to spoil my appetite!” Mags replied, turning to see a bright eyed and bushy tailed Mai frowning at her as she tried to get something to eat.
“Fine, well don’t say I didn’t warn you. I’m eating nothing! And hurry up, we’re going in ten minutes.” Mai said, vanishing back into the guest room to pack up the small amount of items she had brought over.
Quickly eating the small portion of Cereal and throwing the bowl in the sink, Mags went back to her room to get dressed and prepare to leave. It was still dark outside, but even with a drive the trip was likely to take an hour or so to get to the factory.
“Hurry up!”
“Alright miss bossy Griffon, jeez who put you in charge!?” Mags yelled back, deciding on her clothing choice and hastily making an exit out of her room.
“Ohhh, good choice of clothes. Very stretchy.” Mai observed, seeing that Mags had elected to wear a rather loose fitting pair of pants and a simple top. Mai herself was wearing similar set of clothes except she had Juicy! written across the middle of the top.
“I see you’ve done the same. Are you expecting to gain like a hundred pounds today or something?” Mags said with a little smile.
“Well no, but something substantial. Come on Mags, it’s a candy factory. As if I haven’t said this enough! Gotta be prepared!”
“I suppose. Anyway let's get going. I can’t believe we’re going to arrive before seven in the morning. This seems a bit too early…”
“Best to be prepared!” was all Mai replied, opening the front door and making her way towards Mag’s car. The two got in and Mags flipped the headlights on. Still dark, it was going to be a quiet drive…
-
You have arrived at your destination!
The GPS flicked off. They had arrived alright. The factory itself was rather astonishing. It was painted that same deep blue and random parts of the walls were speckled in other colours just like the letter had been. Eris clearly had a corporate identity well thought out.
“Well this really is the right place. Lights are on too.” Mags observed. Strangely, not a soul seemed to be about. She had worried a little on the drive over that the factory would have curious creatures who hadn’t won the competition lurking about to find out who had won, or even news crews waiting to do a story on them. But no creature was there, the car park was nearly deserted apart from one other car parked inside. A rather bedazzled and gaudy looking luxury car that must have belonged to Eris. What else could explain the candy style paint job on it? Mags parked a few spots away and her and Mai got out, making their way to the factory gates as instructed.
“Well, we’re here. Now what?”
“We wait of course. You saw that car. The owner is here already! Good thing we decided to get here early!”
“Indeed I am…”
The voice came from the other side of the gates. The figure of a Draconequus emerged from the other side, unlocking the front gates. “Magna-Save and Mai. The two M’s! You know M&M might make a good name for a candy...hmm…” the owner chuckled, letting the two inside. “I do thank you both for getting here so promptly, another half an hour and you’d have been swarmed by jealous onlookers and news crews wanting to know just how you won. I mean what could you say, you filled in a form? Oh speaking of…”
Eris produced two clipboards that the pair started to read. It looked like a rather standard NDA agreement. “I know you two were probably curious but we have some industry secrets you might learn, I can’t risk any other creature learning about them. Sign these and we’ll be on our way!” The Draconequus exclaimed. The two quickly read through and signed the forms. One part did catch Mag’s eye though.
4C. Neither Eris or Sweet Satisfaction Candy Company are responsible or liable for effects on the two contest winners should they try experimental candy. This includes rapid weight gain, rapid weight loss, nausea, blueberryfication, loss of motor control or any other long term effects.
She could only wonder what blueberryfication was. It sounded like an utterly made up word. Once signed, the two documents vanished into thin air with Eris just exclaiming “Excellent, thank you ladies. Now the tour can begin!”
-
“So, I suppose both of you eat our candy. That’s why you signed up to win the tour of a lifetime?” Eris asked, leading the two into the factory. The Griffon and Pony were both being taken down a number of corridors that seemed to branch off in various directions. Eris clearly knew where she was going with little instruction apart from various signs that Mags and Mai were reading. Mixing Room. Packaging Room. They all seemed fairly mundane. Mags was starting to wonder why this was considered such an amazing place to visit. It seemed like a plain old factory to her, except they made candy.
“Oh yeah, all the time! I can’t get enough of your Butterscotch Bars. Those things are divine…” Mai trailed off, a small amount of saliva leaving her lips.
“Ah I do like to hear it when one of our customers enjoys our products. What about you Magna? Do you have a favourite?”
“Well I like your standard uh...is it called the Sweet’s Bar? Sorry I don’t buy it that often, but when I have a bad day it does act as a good pick me up.” she truthfully said. At this point Eris stopped and turned to face her.
“You know, most people I run into say that’s one of their favourites. But never has any creature explained to me it helps them in that way.” Eris said with a smile. “It’s good to know, I hope you keep buying them.”
“Well, next time I have a bad day I’ll certainly be picking one up.”
“Lovely...ah, here!”
Eris stopped outside a set of doors labelled Experimental Candy Room. “You know I always start the tour here, usually a mistake because its our most fantastical part of the factory. I say a mistake because this is where we keep the really good stuff. Each year I’ve done this the visitors hadn’t wanted to or been able to leave!” Eris said with a giggle. “You’ll see, come on in.”
Mai looked at Mags and just shrugged. “Experimental candy? Stuff not out to the public? I mean it sounds good, right?”
“Right…” Mags replied, she could only think back to that little clause in the NDA they had both signed. It probably wasn’t a big deal. She just shrugged herself back at Mai and followed her and Eris inside the room.
It was certainly an interesting room. The walls were decorated that same deep blue with flecks of other colours. The room itself was a large rotunda, round and various machinery littered the edges. There wasn’t a worker in sight. “Saturday, we’re closed. Sorry if you were expecting to see people actually making the candy. Besides the machines do a lot of it these days.” Eris explained, noting that the two seemed a bit confused walking inside. “Besides, you two are here for the candy right? We’ve got some real special ones here.”
There was a table laid out with various little trays on, each one containing different candies. Bars of chocolate, little gobstoppers. All sorts of things. “I’ve just got to check on some things in the factory, even with automation and us being closed I’ve still got some things running. You two try whatever you like! These are all samples. I’ve had them labelled up so you’ve got an idea of what they are. I’ll be back in a jiffy!” Eris said, leaving the room and the two guests to the candy in front of them.
“Well, this is a bit disappointing…” Mags said, raising an eyebrow over the table of candy. “We’ve been here for about ten minutes and already we’ve been dumped in a room with nothing more than some samples. I dunno what all those other winners were saying about the tour being so amazing. I mean really?” she asked Mai, picking up a small gobstopper. “I mean what even is this?”
“I dunno, read the label. And what’s with you? I think being given samples ten minutes into a tour is pretty good going. We’ll be eating all day! Ohhhh…” Mai replied, picking up a candy bar and taking a bite. Her mouth working at top speed to try to cram in as much as she could. “Eris might be back any minute so let's chow down, I say we don’t leave anything from the samples here! Also this is a banana flavoured chocolate bar...yum!” Mai said, grinning happily and taking another bite.
“Alright...hmm...this one is tiny.”
Mags picked up a small chocolate candy, it was shaped like a pony but well...it was fat. It mostly comprised of a rather large round stomach and little features like sunken arms and a bloated head. She looked over it. The label just said New - Compressed Calorie Bar. Not thinking much of it she managed to eat it without even taking a bite it was so small. The chocolate vanished down her throat. It was rather tasty, very rich but not overpoweringly so. She turned her head and watched as Mai picked up a gummy.
“Well maybe it’s small because it packs a punch. Like this!” Mai replied, taking a small gummy for herself. Nothing remarkable about the design, it was pretty standard except it was a deep blue like the building. The label just said New - Blueberry Bear. Mai quickly ate it too. “Mmmm, blueberry flavoured, but to be expected I suppose given the name and colour.”
“Yeah, talk about it being uh...Mai…?”
“What?”
“You’re blue.”
“What do you mean, I’m blu...oh.” The Griffon replied, lifting one of her claws to her face she suddenly realised her whole body had turned the same deep blue as the gummy bear she had just eaten. Mags laughed hard.
“Hahahaha, I mean I know it said about side effects in the NDA but that’s hilarious, I wonder how long it lasts!” she giggled, watching as a fuming Mai stared back at her.
“It’s not funny! What if it’s forever!”
“Oh come on, I doubt it lasts forever, maybe a day.”
Suddenly though, Mags found she was eating her own words as the now blue Griffon started to giggle. “I may be blue, but at least I’m not about to burst out of my pants!” she laughed.
The shocked Mags looked down, without realizing the entire time she was staring at Mai she had started to plump up. She reached down, putting her hands on her thighs that were starting to push upwards and outwards of those stretchy pants she was wearing. It was a rather warm feeling as her hips grew, the mare a little lustily touching her growing sides as she pushed outwards to the side and backwards. Her rear was expanding too, it made her blush. Through the expansion though she managed to bring her attention back to Mai, who asked her a question.
“What was yours again?” The Griffon asked.
“I dunno! It said something about condensed calories...” Mags said back now completely out of sorts. She had thought she might gain a little weight today seeing as she had prepared herself for a candy factory but wasn’t quite prepared for this. It seemed the condensed calorie candy she had eaten had the effect of piling on more pounds quicker the more she chewed on it. She could feel her hips, ass and belly all blimping up and making her clothes tighter and tighter. Every inch of her body screaming in lusty pleasure at the new size and shape she was gaining. Her breasts fattened up, pushing their way into her vision as small plump fleshy mountains that started to occupy the space in front of her face. She gripped around her rear and stomach, trying her best to figure out just how big she was getting but as she did all she could feel was her clothes screaming in protest at the massive mare under them which was blimping up at a visible rate now.
“I-I may be fat but that Juicy on your shirt Mai is looking real appropriate right now!” Mags giggled back at her friend. It seemed the blueberryfication mentioned in the NDA was starting to take place. Mai’s smug attitude vanished as her body started to round out and blimp up. The huge smile she had worn watching as Mags expanded herself was wiped from her face as the two started to feel the effects of the experimental candy on each other.
“O-ohhhh my, t-this is new…” Mai said, feeling her swollen body start to get heavy. She felt like she was filling with something. Whatever it was, it was hefty. Her body started to round out, fat breasts and massive stomach pushing out from under her clothing as the quickly immobile Griffon felt her fat arms encased by an expanding body that seemed to cry out for space. She tried wiggling her legs and arms but no good, the huffing Griffon was quickly imprisoned in a blueberry bloaty body that really did make her ever so juicy. The top she was wearing seemed even more appropriate than ever, now only just about covering a monster pair of juice filled breasts that wobbled a top a very round, very sloshy frame that Mai was struggling to keep upright as she gained more and more weight. The feeling was rather intense. She felt heavy as if she was being filled with a sweet juice that overtook her entire body, fat, sloshy and in heaven.
Both Pony and Griffon were struggling to control their new sizes. Mags, extremely bottom heavy had no choice but to plonk herself down on her fat rear which had by now swallowed up her pants, panties struggling against expanding cheeks that were turning them into a thong that could rip off at any second. A Whump! as her ass hit the floor, she could only position herself on her fat ass as her body became far too heavy for her to stay upright on her legs, huffing gently the mare put her arms around her belly, but finding that she was much too massive to even considering making her hands meet on the other side.
Mai meanwhile was growing rounder and rounder by the second, her face had blimped out into a nice round figure too, blueberry cheeks squishing upwards slightly into her eye line as her fat breasts and even fatter body rounded out to make the Griffon the perfect blueberry. Her stomach sloshed about beneath her, Mai completely unable to even think about making a grab for it as her claws were totally encapsulated by bloated blueberry juicy fat that she couldn’t fight against. She groaned in pleasure, her useless wings only serving to act as an excess point of fat storage as they suddenly became heavy too. She had never considered her wings might slosh like the rest of her. She groaned, a little pleasure behind it as she felt her body continue to inflate.
“D-do something! I dunno h-how big I can get before I pop!” Mai helplessly called out.
“W-What!? Magic!?”
“Yeah! Something!”
With a last ounce of effort Mags tried to cast a spell, one she thought would help. It was a struggle not being able to see the target, but she did her best.
“G-guh, what was that!?” Mai exclaimed. She wobbled about, trying her best to see what the mare had done but was completely unable to. It seemed the spell though had backfired, Mai actually felt herself get heavier. Her fat breasts started to leak blueberry juice as the top was quickly ruined, the remains of it ripping off as her juicy breasts absolutely destroyed her juicy shirt. The release of the blueberry juice was almost orgasmic, but even though she felt her two boobs spilling out uncontrollably she was still getting bigger and bigger. It seemed even with a small tide of juice coming from her, the spell was far outweighing the loss of juice from them. Her breasts suddenly no longer blocked her vision, neck fat instead started to push upwards as her whole body slooosssheeedddd and surged forward, pressing hard into Mag’s body which the spell had affected as well...
Mags was faring no better, although retaining more of an hourglass like figure she herself was quickly being engulfed by her body that pushed upwards and outwards. Like Mai she felt a filling from within except it was more like food. The room was far too small for the pair and quickly Mags felt her belly sink into and push against Mai’s, fat squishy stomachs battled for space as the two felt themselves getting increasingly tighter and tighter as they pushed against each other and the walls of the room. Mags felt her own hands and feet engulfed by Mai’s fat as well as her own, belly jiggling against Mai’s as the lusty mare and Griffon felt their bodies rub together as they felt their struggles lessen, the two far too big to even move anymore.
“Mmfff!”
“T-too big!”
It was the last words either managed before their heads were swallowed up by fattening necks and bloated bodies that just kept expanding. Mai could feel herself almost being compressed by the room and Mags pushing against her as the two fought for space, their jiggling and bloated bodies pressed tightly against one another. There was protesting noises from all around as the walls started to form cracks as mammoth asses pressed into them as the two now monstrously big girls had no more room left to expand into. It just so happened at that moment Eris was on her way back to check in on how they were doing.
“Well now, how are you two…”
As she opened the door Eris was immediately met by a face of blubber that was pushing out and into the corridor in seconds. Blue Griffon and grey pony were practically blorping out into the corridor outside the room. She simply sighed. “I’m going to have to rebuild the factory again aren't I…” The Draconequus moaned, snapping her fingers and teleporting herself away.
The little space in the door meant suddenly the structure of the entire room was compromised. Fat pushed out into the corridors, then with a thundering CRUNCH the walls of the room the two had occupied collapsed. There was nothing to stop the two getting bigger now, it was the strongest room in the factory.
CRUNCH.
SMASH.
CRACK.
Like a domino effect the rest of the factory began to fall to the mountainous pair that just refuses to stop growing. Walls were destroyed like they were paper, whole rooms were wiped out in seconds as a tidal wave of fat expanded outwards from the middle and into factory. The two girls whimpered a little from within their fat prison bodies, wondering when it might stop. But the feeling of being so big was something neither had ever felt before, it felt rather good. Secretly, they both hoped there might just be enough in that candy and the spell so they could burst out the building...
Outside, Eris had gathered in front of the news crews who had turned up shortly after the tour started, the trio having successfully avoided them before. She adjusted a bow-tie and started to speak.
“We have two new rather expansive candies going on sale shortly that I think you’ll agree from our testers, have rather big results!”
As hoped by the pair, a cracking sound revealed the first part of the inevitable factory collapse. It was almost as if Eris had timed it. From within, a giant blue orb and grey sea of blubber surged forward, the room almost exploding off as the pair pushed themselves beyond the confines of the factory walls. The two helplessly jiggled, the only real difference was Mai’s breasts still pushed forward a torrent of blueberry mixture that made her pant in lusty pleasure as the release took place. The two weren’t going anywhere, even the most powerful magic would be too little to move them at their sizes. Thousands and thousands of pounds of blueberry and calories the magic and the candy had done their work. It was satisfying to see that it had worked so well, although Eris thought she may have to tone down the effects, maybe a warning on the packaging for Unicorn users not to use magic in conjunction with the candy. She turned back to the audience, a huge grin on her face.
“Going on sale soon, literally expand out of your house and cover your neighbours!” Eris said with a smile to the news crews. “I’ve got some free samples right here…” She said with a final grin.
