hearts and hooves

by Agile Swift

Rating: teen
Tags: Sad, Romance, Adventure
Length: 554

a pegasus pony has a crush on rainbow dash. oc x rd

Agile Swift is an ordinary pegasus and a blank flank. everyone used to laugh at him when he was a little colt.
but that will all change when a certain mare comes into his life. 3rd person story.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-20 12:18:26 UTC

love at first sight

this is my first love story fic so enjoy

Agile was greeted by rays of sunshine hitting his eyes. He knew he had morning breath so he brushed his teeth and went out side to fly for a little bit. as he flew over the field he practiced some moves. He spotted a rainbow pegasus pony crying. "Hey,are you okay?" he asked with a worried tone. "yeah im fine." she replied. "Why are you crying?" he asked. "why do you want to know!"  she replied in an angered tone. "look i just want to know why because when i was a colt i was teased because my coat,okay?" he asked. her tears were dried up by now. "can i crash at you're place I'm beat!" she exclaimed. "ugh, sure?" he replied. on the way to Agile's house they told each other their names. as they got to the house RainbowDash fell asleep instantly

As Agile woke up he found a note on his bed and it read

meet me at the fields.

as he got to the fields he saw rainbow doing loops in the air."why did you want me in the fields?" he asked.   "well i wanna ask you something." rainbow said with a smile."wanna race!" she yelled. "sure!" he replied. as they got to the starting line they got their rings ready." on you're mark!" "Get Set!" "Go!" they yelled as they zoomed off. Agile looked back not seeing any trace of rainbow dash but a trail of lightning followed him. he flew up higher in the atmosphere still flying up he started to fly down, feeling an outcast forming he felt it getting stronger. he kept pushing against the force and he did it a sonic rainboom. well except for the colors it was mostly black and brown but he still did the impossible.

as Agile got home he went up stairs and thought about something but he passed the thought. he fell into a deep sleep not thinking about anything accept the race. as he woke up he got up and went out side to get some excercise. as he walked into ponyville he saw a cloud following him. he ignored it but was curious about why it was the only cloud above ponyville. as he passed by the town he heard giggles now and then but he pretended they were talking about something else. he looked behind him and saw that the cloud was still following him. he flew to the fields still thinking about the race he flew into the air he flew to the lake.

as he sat down next to the lake he started crying. he didn't know why but he just felt like it. he didn't realise how long he was crying until the moon raised. he lay down looking at the stars wondering why everypony liked going to sleep when the stars were out. he sighed, as he went back home he saw rainbowdash looking at him. he dashed away trying to go home but rainbow grabbed his tail just in time for him to stop. "What do you want!?" he asked with an angered tone. while the night was still young he brought rainbow to his house so she could rest. "now why did you stop me?" he asked.