Flurry Heart: Equestria's first commando

by Robert Emerald Fountain

Rating: mature
Tags: Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Flurry Heart, Alternate Universe, Queen Chrysalis, Random, Adventure, Violence, Death
Length: 1050

Flurry Heart destroys Queen Chrysalis all by herself

Queen Chrysalis has struck again, and captured everyone who has defeated her. Flurry Heart must go alone and rescue them. She has been provided with weapons with which to carry out this quest, but will it be enough?

Rated Mature for descriptive situations including harsh violence.

**Note: This story is written in First Person.**

Published 2019-11-29 11:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2019-11-29 11:30:01 UTC

Gearing Up and insertion

I get up at 6:00 AM sharp, and start getting ready to set out on this dangerous mission. Pulling on a secret book on my shelf, I open a door to my weapons storage. After putting on my camouflage clothes, I start placing equipment in my backpack. My gear ranges from plasma guns, to flamethrowers, to throwing projectiles. After donning my battle helmet, I lace up my boots and go outside to catch my ride. Brandon picks me up with one of the crew's helicopters and flies me above the drop-zone. Before I rappell, he says that the crew has hidden a shuttle near the cavern where Chrysalis has her hostages held. Clipping onto the rope, I drop carefully from the chopper and touch down on the ground.

"Good luck Flurry Heart. The shuttle has enough Genesis tanks on board to treat everyone. I think Chrysalis is torturing them.", Brandon tells me.

I thank Brandon for the ride, and he flies away. Looking around, I see that I am in the mountains in a remote area. No wonder Chrysalis set up shop here. Nevertheless, I switch on my tracker and start moving. Arriving at the foot of a tall mountain, I fire my grappling hook and climb up to the cavern entrance. Yes, I could use my wings, but I chose not to use them this time.

Chrysalis' defenses

Author's Note

This chapter and at least one after it is why this story is Mature.

Chrysalis' defenses

As I enter the cave, I do not realize that Chrysalis saw me climbing up. Suddenly, twelve changelings come charging at me. I can tell that she had captured and corrupted them because I spot shackles on their front legs. I sigh to myself, since I don't have equipment with which to purify them. Pulling out my weapons, I open fire on the changelings. In minutes, the changelings have been shredded by my weapons. I am now covered head to hoof in blood and entrails. I put on my gas mask in order to cope with the horrid stench. Regardless of that, I am fighting to resist throwing up. Further into the cave, I can hear the panicked voice of Neighsay. It sounds as if he is in a fluid of some sort, because his voice sounds as if he is gurgling. Knowing that I am close, I run with all of my might.

Getting everyone home

As I fill the tanks with Genesis, all of the rescued citizens instantly start feeling much better. The fluid blocks any sounds as I fire the engines and take off. The route for taking them home starts with dropping off Prince Rutherford in Yakyakistan. Then I head to Ponyville. Aunt Twilight, her friends, Cheerilee, and the students get off here. I head south to the Changeling Kingdom to drop off Thorax. Gilda and Gabby get off when I fly over Griffonstone. After Luna and Celestia fly off the shuttle and go back to Canterlot, I lower Neighsay to the ground on a winch, and then fly home to the Crystal Empire. After Brandon picks up the shuttle, I go straight to bed because it is already night. I receive a letter the next day, informing me that I am to be recognized.

The following week, I go to Canterlot for a ceremony. Everyone is watching as I am to be awarded with a Medal of Honor. This is a reward for rescuing everyone from Queen Chrysalis. Everyone is cheering for me as I walk up the middle towards the stage. Celestia hangs the medal around my neck and I turn around to face the audience.

Prologue

My name is Flurry Heart. I am the daughter of Princess Cadence and Guard Captain Shining Armor, and I am the niece of Twilight Sparkle. On the day of my parents' wedding, Aunt Twilight and her friends defeated Queen Chrysalis, former leader of the changelings. All of us were captured at a time when I was a baby, and a reformed changeling helped to defeat her that time. This turned all of the changelings against Chrysalis, which led her to seek revenge someday. Apparently, that time has arrived. I woke up this morning to my parents screaming for help. Chrysalis tried to take me as well, but I escaped and promised my parents that I would rescue them. Thanks to our allies in the Christian Fleet, I have equipment that will help me greatly. Mom and Dad are apparently not the only ones that Chrysalis has captured. Brandon has given me the rundown of everyone he has seen in her captivity. Her prisoners are as follows.

1) Princess Celestia
2) Princess Luna
3) My Mother, Princess Cadence
4) My Father, Shining Armor
5) My Aunt, Twilight Sparkle
6) Rainbow Dash
7) Fluttershy
8) Applejack
9) Rarity
10) Pinkie Pie
11) Spike
12) Changeling Leader Thorax
13) Applebloom
14) Scootaloo
15) Sweetie Belle
16) Yona
17) Sandbar
18) Smolder
19) Silverstream
20) Gallus
21) Ocellus
22) Gilda
23) Dragon Lord Ember
24) Gabby
25) Prince Rutherford
26) Babs Seed
27) Diamond Tiara
28) Silver Spoon
29) Cheerilee
30) Chancellor Neighsay

That is a ton of hostages, if I say so myself. I think this will be an arduous mission, and I will have to use everything I have been taught.

Killing Chrysalis and freeing the hostages

At long last, I arrive in the main part of Chrysalis' cave. She swoops down to attack me, but I slash her leg with a machete, cutting off her left wing at the same time. She and I engage in a bloody fight. In the end, I slash her chest wide open and get splattered with even more bodily fluids. Using my flamethrower, I burn her heart to ash. As her corpse collapses, I work on freeing her prisoners. They are immersed in a massive reservoir of disgusting fluids, blood, and organs. Many of the hostages black out after I get them extracted. Aunt Twilight throws up after being pulled out, having swallowed a mouthful of blood. After getting everyone out, I use my magic to teleport myself and all of them outside to the shuttle that Brandon provided.

"Thank you.", says my Mom.

"You're welcome."