A monster or a lost soul?

by King Gnomed

First published November 22nd, 2019 00:20

Days after his "lifetime" of killings he is finally caught. And is the first pony to be executed in thousands of years. But why does he do it? For fun, revenge, insane or is he just lost in a pathway to a never ending hell set by a thousand's of Year old curse?

Well, listen to his point of view three daysbefore his execution. And think is he to blame for his insanity or somepony else.

{Warning the story deals with serious and disturbing subject's like self harm. Especially from the disturb Maine character. Also blood and gore}

Chapters

A prisoner story
Discovery

A prisoner story
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A monster or a lost soul?

A prisoner story

My story begins in a dark and cold cell, with me wearing a straight jacket, a muzzle, and a metal cap on what looks like a broken horn. While being held up by metal chains a yard of the ground.

I started to moan, "HMMM MMMMM, bu d DDD". A guard yelled, Shut up you freak. which interrupted my humming. You are on the chopping block by three sunrises. And then you will just be a legend that will soon be forgotten.

As the guard shuts the small opening in the wall. my red and white eye slowly begins to Glow as a wide smile formed behind my muzzle as I begin to talk.

So is this how I die? How did I end up here locked up in a cell? Do you want to know how this part of my life starts and ends up here, well this is a long story so stay and listen to my tale? But first, my name is Akuji Cessair Crimson or for short Akuji Crimson.

Anyway, I'm in a cell belonging to some very angry enemies from my past who were pretending to be some Equestrian Royal Guards or E.R.G.

So there was a grassland which homes forest and near it a town But before there I was at some old rundown town.

Anyway, in that town, I was just running from a group of armed farmers. But why farmers? Well, " because I got in a bit of a disagreement with a young drunk earth pony which ended up with his head missing a portion of the top". But how well it went like this.

I walked out of a bar after finishing off a no-good off duty Sheriff, you know the one with the badge. By finishing off I mean to kill or for long-term ripped his vocal cords out with a pair of scissors and a spoon. And killing his colleagues before him in a gorefest in the penthouse on the floor between his office an hour ago.

Sorry, I'm getting off-topic that is a story for a different time. Anyway, I walked into a side alley. That was when a young earth pony stumble into me and said" move the fuck out of my way" right before seeing the blood and gore on me.

Then in horror, he yelled" SHERIFF" as loud as he could in his drunken state.

Thus made me smile and giggle as if I have seen myself killing the old fool in the background of his office.

Then I said" he YE his last HAUL" as I made a personation of him.

After that, the young one ran at me as if I was the evilest thing to live. He then hits me in the face and then my chin.

So In return, I pulled out the same scissors and slowly walked towards him. And sang a favorite song of mine.

The farm-tens Massacre and the birth of the crimson child )

There once was an earth pony. Who fell in love with a maiden. This maiden was an Alicorn. Who was the daughter of the captain of the Alicorn guard. But that love was a death noted. You see there was a law that made those under them as peasants who are unfit to look them in the eyes. And all under was to bow down.

But that did not stop him. So he came up with a plan to win her heart. But that plan didn't come true, as this maiden was a young mare who was looking for Adventure.

So she ran away to the small town which the poor farmer lives. That was when they first met each other. You know what happened next. Thay slowly fell in love.

Three years went by, as they love happy in the house of the farm-tens family. But this love was soon to perish. As the Captain of the Alicorn guard found them and send the Alicorn guards.

So the farmers and those who heard of this crime went to aid. Thay armed themselves with whatever they could find. But they were all slaughtered. Then the town was burned down to the ground. Besides the final one in the center of town. Where the Young farmer and his pregnant wife we're in.

Then two guards and the Captain came in the room. He did all he could as he killed the two guards. But then the Captain cut off his HEAD!

But before he kills the pregnant wife she gave birth to the crimson child.)

As I finished my song and we ex the alley the young stallion trip on a beer bottle and fell on the ground next to a wagon outside of an office building, that was next to a large farmhouse with a small water tank on the right side.

The young stallion screamed for help as a deputy came running and I cut the ropes holding the boxes on the wagon and fell on the top of his head.

So I ran out of the town until I found a forest. Now, this is the coolest ass forest in this land. But why we'll there were creatures that would kill you on every turn, shade and this big Castle that seem familiar. So I went to the forest. There were many creatures that try to eat me, like this big chicken and Timber Wolves but they were the ones that got skin. Anyway, I was so tired of running and killing.

With each step I took, I felt like my skin was falling off and was rubber. So I lay next to a tree that was near a stream that made the land in two.

But then there were these small animals staring at me from inside some bushes that were staring at me as they knew about my injuries all over my body, and thinking about my wellbeing. I hate that, and why are they so out of place. Like why are there little rabbits and normal chickens here? Like is there some kind of farm nearby.

But there was this animal that stands out from the rest which was a small white rabbit. This rabbit was like a small pony that was turned into a rabbit. But why a pony, well they are one of the most caring things out there and stubborn like this rabbit.

Anyway, the rabbit hop slowly to me until it was right next to me. The rabbit looks like it knew my pain. So for the fuck of it, I said to the rabbit with a low and dry voice with some blood running from my mouth as I spoke.

"Little rabbit gets some help I won't last before the hour little rabbit. You don't want my corpse here lying around stinking up the place and rotten do you?

To my surprise, the rabbit hops away as fast as it could.

As I lay there, I thought let's have some fun. As I stabbed and cut myself all over. Then I break my right hoove with a rock and then passed out.

Author's Note

This story will cover some heavy themes. And hopefully act as a prequel story if it does good.

Discovery
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Discovery

(Fluttershy pov)

Angel, where can he be? I hope he didn't go too far into the forest. Well, it's time for feeding time. Wait a second is that Angel I hear? Angel is that you? "Fluttershy looks into the forest seeing her pet rabbit hoping towers her"

Angel what's wrong I ask as I see his face. "Angel responds to what Fluttershy has asked in a series of small clicks".

WHAT there's a very hurt stallion! We need to help him, let's go and find him. "They both run deeper into the forest".

"As I rand I thought who, where and why this has happened to this pony".

I followed Angel into the forest until he stopped at a small clearing in the forest beside a small stream and a lone tree in the Center of it.

"Hurry Angel, where is he!" Angel then runs up to the lone tree and goes to the left side of the tree.

So I followed him and stopped right in my train of thought as I see the badly hurt stallion laying on the tree.

Oh my, can you hear me? No, please answer me.

" Who are you, I can't see very good there's blood in my eyes," The stallion said in a low and dry voice".

Can you walk? No, I can't my hooves feel like burning rubber.

Oh dear, let me help you. "Why should I do that?"

Why, You will die, let me help you. "Let me think..No"

Fine I will just have to do this myself. "I say as I try to pick him up.

"Leave me to die goddamit. No, I will not leave you to die.

"Fine then I will try to stand up," He said as he tries to stand up but stumbles and falls back down.

"Let's try one more time," I ask as he tries again managing to put his left hoove on my right shoulder.

Good, now we need to get you to my Cottage. "You better not try anything on me yellow".

What do you mean by try? "Well like kill me, torture me, in slave me, eat me and or rape me."

"What I ask in disbelief" As I heard those disturbing things that he was saying that I might do to him.

"I have been through some bad shit, Ok."

"10 minutes must have gone by as we first saw the small cottage". Fluttershy thought as they slowly walk to my front door.

"Ok, I need to open the door so I need you to sit down for just a second ok".

"Finally, hurry up I have a knife or something in my gut."

WHAT A KNIFE!

"Do you want to have a corpse on the fount door? So hurry the fuck up."

I Hurry as fast as I could, right as the door was opened up he leans back onto my right shoulder.

I hurry and walk him to my living room table and place him on it.

"My fucking back is killing me."

Please try to stay still. I don't know what to do, this has not ever happened before.

"Just pull the thing out of my gut."

But what about the blood?.

"Fine Just get a Rag, a needle and some string. "And right as he said that she went off to find them."

"Fluttershy went to room to room trying to find a needle and some strong". Ok, I have found a rag in my bathroom, but where can I find a needle?

What a moment I can just use a leftover nail from my new fence." Remembering the day before Applejack helped her make a new fence to help block off any Timberwolves that stray away from the forest"

I then run to my old garden shed to search for a nail to use."Let's see where are the nails I thought as I open up the shed door."

"The inside of the shed was a light yellow with a wall that has a few tools hanging from it that she barely even used as a small mallet and a slightly bigger hoof saw."

Mallet and a Hand saw but no nail. Wait wasn't they in a box with some nails in it."Looking towards a small corner in the shed Seeing a small box"

"I hope I have a nail to use as a needle I thought as I go to open the box." Yes, a nail.

"Good but what about the string a new though peered into my head."

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"A Hagfish like creature with a head of a pony skull with two camera lens like eyes was stalking the outside the little Cottage."

"The creature is walking on fore hand like appendages with claws on the end of them."

"It moves like a snake but acts like a fully grown pony."

"The noise the creature made were like a mix of a screaming fully grown Griffin and a small crying pony foal."

"This creature was looking for something, No but a somepony.

"The creature was stalking its prey's den."

"It moves in the fading sunlight towards the den of its prey and waited for the moon to rise"

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(Fluttershy pov)

Ok, we're ready to start but first I need you to eat this."Hands Akuji Crimson some kind of plant"

"What the hell is that?" "Pointing to it in a surprising manner"

Well, it's a medical herb.

"Fine, I will take it." Grabs the herb from her hoof and eats it".

"So what now, why do I feel like going to pass out. What did you fucking do to me I'M GOOING To Ki..you." Passes out"

I'm sorry but you look like you need some sleep. Now it's time to remove what's ever in his gut.

" begins to take off his ragged suit but leaves his hat on"

Oh my, what has happened to you? well, I will try to fix you up, can't be too different from a cut up bear stomach, can it? I" Remembering the time she helped a bear that was attacked by a pack of timber wolves".

This is going to make me sick."She says as she looks at his wounds".

Where do I start, I will start with the small cuts first.

(starts to clean and bandages the small wounds)

Not to much blood, so far good..Oh, my sweet Celestia." Notices a blade of some sort sticking out oh his chest."

I need help with this" whistles calling a small blue bird"

I need you to get my friends ok."The small bird corresponds with a small tweet and Flys off".

I hope this works.

Author's Note

Had this chapter finished for a while now. Didn't have a editor for this chapter, so sorry for any mistakes.

Also I have two other chapters ready but will wait to post them for now.