Chapter 1: Kakarot's Escape! What is this Creature? (Edited)
Chapter 1: Kakarot's Escape! What is This' Creature?
"Bardock... Bardock!". The Saiyan opens his eyes to see a control panel and his partner, leek.
"What is it?" Bardock responds as he gets up.
"We almost arrived at Planet Vegeta, feels good to be home huh?" Leek says.
"Yeah, I guess," Bardock says not giving a care in the world.
"What do you think Frieza needs us for, It must be important if he needs all of us Saiyans back at Planet Vegeta. Maybe the bastard has some big plan for us."
"Watch your mouth, your scouter is on!" Bardock warned.
"Th... That's right!" Leek gasps, quickly taking off his scouter. As he puts the device in a cupboard under the ship controls, he spots a large amount of small and large ships passing theirs.
"Hey look at that! Seems like the party may have started without us," exclaimed Leek, happy to see his fellow teammates.
"Frieza's already here?" Bardock said a little surprised after spotting the lead ship. Leek looks to what his teammate was looking at and gasps as their ship flys under the command ship, avoiding a collision.
"I wonder why he's still up here when he could've landed already." Leek wondered.
"Something about this is strange. If he wanted to talk to his men, he could've just used the radio and saved everyone a whole lot of time." "And if he's got new weapons for us, there's no reason we need to pick them up together." Bardock finishes as the ship enters the planet's atmosphere, creating a flaming fireball around them. "I've got a bad feeling about this, none of it makes any sense." Bardock finished sounding concerned.
"Wha, come on. What do you mean a 'bad feeling'?" Leek questioned, not knowing what Bardock is leading to. The ship then begins to cool down after the flaming fireball around them dissipates, meaning they entered the atmosphere safely.
"Look, we conquer planets and then sell them to whoever will pay us. That's how the Saiyans made our fortunes, how we've always existed." Bardock explained.
"But then... Frieza's father, King Cold, made us serve under him, forcing our people into slavery. Reaping the benefits of our work."
"That was a pretty long time ago, though," Leek said.
"Sure, but all this time we've never been happy working together, have we?" Bardock asked.
"That's true. I can't think of any Saiyan who likes Frieza." Leek joked as he guided and landed the ship into an open area full of working Saiyan soldiers and workers.
"Yeah, and I'm betting he probably feels the same way about us," Bardock said as he stood from his seat and grabbing his bag, full of supplies and spare clothes.
"What?" Leek said confused, not knowing what Bardock meant.
"The Frieza Force has grown extremely large. They can probably get by without us annoying Saiyans around." Bardock finishes as he walks to the hatch and opens it. Leek quickly turns the ship controls off and grabs his bag, racing towards Bardock.
"What do you...?" then it clicked in Leek's head, realizing what Bardock meant. The two then hover out of the ship and land a couple of feet away. "Hold on. You're not suggesting that Frieza's planning to exterminate us." Leek asked worriedly.
Bardock flings his luggage onto his shoulder and looks to his teammate with a smirk. "It's a possibility, am I right?" Bardock playfully asked.
Leek then puts his hand on the back of his head, chuckling nervously. "Uh... Come on, quit playing Bardock."
Bardock then started to walk away with Leek close by, until another Saiyan called him out, "Yo, good to see you. Didn't think you'd make it back alive." Taro jokes.
"Shut up," Bardock growled, but then thought of something. "Any idea why we got the order to return home so fast?" Bardock asked, making Taro go into thought.
"It beats me. Maybe they found a fortified world they need all of our help with. One so protected, it'll take every Saiyan alive to conquer." Taro grinned, thinking of how fun it would be. But Bardock shook the thought and started to walk off.
"That must be it! And here you had me all worried!" Leek exclaimed, liking Taro's idea more than Bardock's.
"And oh, Bardock. Frieza's people have been askin' round about the Super Saiyan and Super Saiyan God lately. Not sure what that's about." Taro said with confusion. This got both Leek and Bardock to stop and stare at him.
"What do you mean the 'Super Saiyan' and 'Super Saiyan God'"? Like the two in the legends?" Bardock asked confused. Then it finally clicked in his head, "That must be it!" Bardock mumbled, getting serious and quickly flying towards his town where he lived with his wife, Gine.
Leek was shocked at this sudden development, "What's gotten into Bardock?" Leek asked himself but then decided to shrug it off and go home.
Bardock flew with haste as he sees his town come to view with a growing smirk. He lands a couple of feet from the entrance to the town and walks in. 'This is bad, Frieza is afraid of the legendary Super Saiyan and Super Saiyan God. He wants to exterminate us so then it can never come.' Bardock thought.
"Welcome home Bardock, it's good to see you!" A Saiyan shouted above him with a container in his arms grasp.
Bardock smirked at this friendly gesture and waved back, "You too." The Saiyan then flew off going to do whatever he was doing. Bardock saw his house come into view and sees his wife and another Saiyan female in there cutting up meat.
Bardock makes it to the large and open doorway and greets Gine, "What's wrong? No warm welcome Gine?" Bardock teases.
Gine jumps a little and turns around to see her husband with his bag in one arm. "Bardock, you're here!" Gine exclaimed as she puts the big butcher knife down and walks towards him.
"Things sure are crazy around town today," Bardock said as he drops his bag and hugs Gine. The other female smiles at this gesture and walks away so then they could have their moment.
"Yeah. It's not that often everyone comes back."
"Where's Raditz?" Bardock asked the whereabouts of his first son.
"Off-world. He's in the military now, teamed up with Prince Vegeta on some planet. I seriously doubt they'll make it back for this." Gine says as they get out of their embrace, pulling off the gloves she had on.
Bardock was a little surprised to hear his first son got teamed up with the Prince. "Wow, Prince Vegeta, huh? I wouldn't want to be stuck on a ship with that one." Bardock jokes, he then remembered what he was going to ask earlier. "How's Kakarot doing? Is he still in a nursing capsule?" Bardock asked.
"He is. It's about time to let him out, though. You should see him." Gine said, turning around to a doorway at the end of the room, "Come on"
"Alright alright," Bardock said while grabbing his bag and walking with Gine. As they both enter the room, Bardock sees his second son in a large glass and metal bubble, filled with a dark yellow liquid. Bardock was a little disappointed to see Kakarot still small, while he's supposed to be a little bigger.
"Still small, huh?"
"I think he may be a late bloomer. He looks just like you, though, don't you think? He certainly has his father's hair, for better or worse." Gine jokes, but then she saw the concerned look on Bardock's face. She was going to ask him what was wrong, but Bardock beat her to it.
"After dark, I'm going to steal a pod for him," Bardock said sternly.
"Huh?" This caught Gine off guard, confused at what he meant.
"We're going to send our son to another world."
"Huh?! You've gotta be kidding!" Gine shouted, getting angrier by the second.
"Gine. I'm serious." Bardock said, looking at the confused and angry Gine.
"Have you gone insane? Why would we abandon our son like that? He hasn't even learned how to talk yet!"
"With his latent abilities, he's destined to be sent away. Probably somewhere horrible. So, we're going to see to it that he at least grows up on a decent planet." Bardock explained while Gine walked to his side, looking at Kakarot.
"No. He's far too young for that." Gine sniffled a little, a tear silently slipping away from her eye.
"I don't think we can afford to wait much longer."
"And what does that mean?!" Gine shouted as tears started to roll down her face.
"Because of Frieza. I think he's afraid of the Legendary Super Saiyan and Super Saiyan God appearing one day." Bardock explained.
"Hold on, the Super Saiyan and Super Saiyan God?" Gine asked, confused at what he meant. "But, those are only... Those are just a children's fairy tale, Bardock!"
"I know. The problem is, I think he's still bothered by the two legends. And I can't imagine he'd want to take any chances." Bardock finishes. He looks to Gine with a saddened look, "I get the feeling that death is on its way for us."
The two managed to steal a pod at night and bring it safely back to their home without being noticed. The two then went to sleep as they knew, they were going to send their son to a planet called Earth during the day.
Bardock slowly opened his eyes, blurry at first but his eyesight returns to normal. He looks around to see Gine wrapping an arm around him. He smiled at this, but then he frowned, knowing what he had to do. "Hey, Gine... it's time."
Gine slowly opened her eyes to see Bardock looking at her with a saddened gaze. She was confused at first, but then remembered what today was. "Hey, Bardock...
Bardock notices the frown and put a hand on Gine's shoulder, giving her a sad smile. "I know Gine, but we have to do it," Bardock explained. He got out of bed then heard a beeping noise, he frowned at it and went and looked for it.
"Where the hell is that blasted thing..." Bardock mumbled. He then found it, he put it on as he noticed something dreadful. "Oh no..."
"What is it Bardock? Bardock?" Gine asked, but then saw the trembling Saiyan, he slowly took the scouter off and dropped it. "Bardock what's wrong..."
"GET KAKAROT NOW! FRIEZA IS GOING TO ATTACK SOON!" Bardock shouted as he raced off to get the Saiyan pod. Gine trembled, knowing the might and power of Frieza. She raced into the other room and got Kakarot out of the nursing capsule. Kakarot cried as the tank emptied of the yellow liquid, he then started to throw his hands around.
"Come on Kakarot, it's time to go!" Gine sobbed as she quickly dried her son off with a towel and quickly put on small Saiyan armor and clothes. It took her a minute to put it on, but she finished in time to see Bardock outside with the Saiyan pod in his arms.
"Hurry, we don't have much time!" Bardock shouted. Gine nodded her head and pulled Kakarot into a hug as she ran outside. She saw a speck in the sky, realizing it was Frieza's command ship. "Gine! We can't find a suitable place to launch him, we have to do it now!"
"Right!" Gine said. Bardock put the pod down and opened the hatch quickly. Gine and Bardock gave one last look at Kakarot before putting him in the Saiyan pod and closing the hatch.
"Listen, son. You do what it takes to survive, got it?" Bardock asked. Kakarot just nodded as tears started to roll down his face.
"We love you!" Gine cried out, sobbing as she leaned her head against Bardock's. A blinding red light appears above them as horror spreads across their faces. Frieza created a giant sphere of energy, making it look like the sun.
"Goodbye, my son!" Bardock shouted as tears started on him as well. He and Kakarot put a hand on the glass, matching them in the same area. The pod then started to rumble as the engines started to kick in. The pod then broke through the atmosphere and shot towards planet Earth. The energy attack destroyed Planet Vegeta, creating a giant explosion and shockwave that hit the pod, sending it off course to another planet.
However, the shockwave of the blast made Kakarot fling from his seat and hit the roof of the pod, making him pass out, with all of his memories.
Equestria
The night was brisk, cold, but that would not affect the pony who is watching over Equestria at night, Princess Luna. A tall and slim Alicorn with a dark coat and mane and light blue eyes, wearing a dark crown, a black scarf with a crescent moon on it, and silver clads. She watched over Equestria and would go into ponies dreams to fight off against nightmares, but this night was calm, making her job tonight easy.
"These are one of my favorite nights. No clouds in the midnight sky, everypony possessing no nightmares, surely my favorite. Now, what to do since everypony is having a restful sleep?" Princess Luna thought. But then, something unexpected happened. Luna was about to grab a snack from the kitchen, but then stopped when she saw a meteor shower appear in the night sky.
“What's the meaning of this, I don’t believe we scheduled for a meteor shower?” Luna asked confused. She then saw a bright one appear in the shower, bouncing off the other asteroids, this went to confuse Luna even further. “Why is this meteor acting strange?” The meteor then broke from the group and seemed to get bigger and brighter by the second, Luna then realized the meteor was heading for the castle gardens! “Oh no, this is bad!” Luna then shouted for the royal guards to get out of the garden as fast as possible.
The meteor then crashed into the garden, creating a large crater and dust cloud that covered most of the garden. Luna opened up her wings and took off toward the crater, ideas towards what happened were playing over and over again in the Princess’s head. She got to the crash site to see a perfect white sphere with a large red window on it. “What is that? I've never seen anything like it…” Luna spoke aloud. Luna then heard a teleportation spell next to her and turned to see Princess Celestia.
“Is everything alright Luna?” Princess Celestia asked with worry.
“Don’t worry sis, I’m alright. But what is this thing?” Luna wondered. They then started to hear crying inside the white sphere. The two Princesses looked at each other in wonder as they trotted closer to the object. Luna looked inside the sphere to see a small monkey-like creature with spiky hair and some sort of armor-like clothing. “Sis! There’s a creature inside this thing!” Luna said with surprise. Celestia gasped and took a look for herself and saw the same thing.
“Look, Luna, it’s…” Celestia gasps as she sees blood trailing down the child’s head. “It has a head injury!” Celestia wasted no time as she lit up her horn with magic and open the hatch on the front of the pod. Luna then used her magic to levitate the small child into her grasps. It continued to sob from the pain and buried its face onto Luna’s chest, surprised at this notion, she used one of her wings to hug the child. Luna then used a sleeping spell on it, having it stop crying and fall into a restful sleep.
“Sis, I’m going to take this creature to the hospital, do you have it from here?” Luna asked.
“Yes Luna, now hurry!” Celestia commanded, Luna nodded her head and took off to the canterlot hospital. Celestia then ordered the Royal Guard to close the area off for investigation, she then went to bed, hoping everything will turn out all right.
Luna galloped towards the hospital, hoping the child will make it. It wasn't seriously injured, she thought, but had a gash on the side of its head. Luna then shortly arrived at the hospital, getting the nurse's attention by showing the child to her.
“Princess Luna, What is that thing?” The nurse asked but was interrupted by Luna.
“I know of your curiosity but that will have to wait. It’s injured and is in need.” Luna explained, showing the gash on the child's head. The nurse gasped and quickly got out a stretcher and call for a doctor to get a room ready. Luna took a glance at the creature to see it hugging onto her neck, Luna smiled at this. The doctor and nurse came back with a stretcher and motioned for Luna to put the creature on it. They then rushed it to the ER room with haste with Luna in tow. As she got to the door, the nurse put a hoof in front of Luna, stopping her.
“I’m sorry Princess Luna, but nopony but the doctors can enter the ER while the patient is being treated, you’ll have to wait.” The nurse explained.
“I see. I’ll wait” Luna sighed and went to the waiting room. ‘Whatever this thing is, I hope it gets through this.’
Chapter 2: Kakarot awakes! He Meets The Main 6!
Chapter 2: Kakarot's awakes! He's Gotten a New Name?!
It's been a couple of hours since the alien crash-landed in Equestria, it's been resting since. Celestia rose the sun and closed off the royal gardens for reconstruction due to the pod's crash, Luna has been waiting.
Luna fidgeted with her hoofs, expecting for the all-clear. Luna bit her bottom lip in worry, 'What if I was to late to save it, what if it's in a coma?' Luna worried, tapping her hoof swiftly. She then her hoofs steps close to her, she looks up to see the nurse from before. Luna gained a hopeful face, "Is it going to make it?" Luna asked with worry.
"He will Princess Luna, we've stopped the bleeding and bandaged up his head," The nurse explained, then the nurse's happy expression went down. "However, due to where the injury is, I'm afraid he lost all of his memories..." The nurse explained with hints of.
This shocked Luna, she was grateful that he was ok, but at the cost of his memories. 'How could I be so careless, I've could've saved his memories!' Luna mentally slapped herself. "Can... can I see him" Luna askes hesitantly.
"Yes, he's in the third room on the right," The nurse explained, "But try not to wake him, It took us a while to get him to stop crying." She pleaded.
Luna nodded her head in understanding, "Thank thou for informing me, I'll try not to wake him." Luna reassured. She walked past the nurse as she enters the long hallway of doors full of. She then looked for the room which held the child she was worried about. She found the room and looked through the window to see the child lying down on the white bed. It had its clothing and armor taken off, replaced with hospital robes. Luna bit her lip and quietly twisted the knob on the door with her magic and walked in, not wanting to wake up the child.
Luna watched the creature with curiosity and worry. 'Will it be able to regain its memories.' Luna thought. She saw the creature wasn't having a pleasant dream due to it having a pained look. Luna felt like entering it but then froze when she saw it started to shiver and wince. Looking over to the table beside the bed, she noticed it had a blanket nicely folded on it. Luna grew a smile when she levitated the blanket, unfolding it and resting it on top of the creature. She saw that it did the trick is it stoped shivering and grew a small smile across its face.
"There thou go little one, may you have a peaceful sleep," Luna said softly. She then leaned towards it and giving it a light kiss on the forehead.
After giving the creature a light kiss, Luna drew her head back and walked to a small cushion by the bed and sat down. Luna waited for almost an hour, almost dosing off to sleep for a minute but the creature wouldn't wake. Luna was about to leave to head to her chambers when she hears movement from the medical bed. She looks up to see the creature looking at her with tired eyes, struggling to keep upright.
The two stared at each other for what seemed like hours. The child tilted its head in confusion, not know what's in front of him. Luna hesitantly got up and cautiously scooted over to the creature, not knowing what would happen if she causes sudden movement. It took her about a minute to get to the bed and sit down. The child backs away a little until it remembered who the pony was.
"uh... hello?" The child said nervously as it looks down at the bed. Luna was surprised, she didn't know if the child could speak the same language as them, but here she is corrected.
"Hello little one, what's your name?" Luna asks in a soothing tone. She scoots a little closer to the child as it still hung its head low.
"I... I don't... remember" The boy says, feeling guilty that it couldn’t help answer the princess’s question. Princess Luna notices this and gave the kid a reassuring smile.
"'tis alright little one," Luna said giving the child a nuzzle. The child then got a light blush, but he didn't know. Luna back away to see the blush and gave him a small and hearty chuckle.
"Could... you... um," The kid was trying to ask Princess Luna a question but is too shy to ask.
"'tis alright, thou can ask me," Luna reassured the child.
"Can... you be my... mama?" The child asked hesitantly, still looking at the bed.
"Thou... want me to be your mother?!" Luna stammered as she pointed a hoof to herself. The child nodded, hoping and waiting for Luna's answer. The princess put a hoof to her muzzle, pondering if this is the right choice. 'I don't know if I have the time to watch over him with my duties as a Princess. I'll only be able to see him at night. Maybe I could get Celly to watch over him during the day'. Luna then gave the child and big smile, "Maybe little one, but we'll have to give thou a name." Luna said, now wondering what to name him. "I've got it, how would thou like to be named Comet?" Luna asked.
Comet looks at Luna with the happiest smile and nodded his head. "Yes, I love that name!" Comet exclaimed, getting off the bed and hugging onto Luna's neck. The night Princess smiled at this gesture and put a hoof around him, returning the gesture.
Luna then heard the door creak open, she turned around to see Princess Celestia standing there with a loving smile and the Main 6 "It seems you've made a friend sister," Celestia says humorously. Luna flushes at this and gently puts Comet back onto the medical bed.
Luna was about to introduce Comet to Princess Celestia and Mane 6 but was interrupted when a well-known pink pony appeared in front of Comet. "Hi there! My name is Pinkie Pie! What's your name, I've never seen you around here before!" Pinkie Pie gasps, "That means I have to set you up a 'Wierd Alien Welcome To Equestria Party!" Pinkie finishes. She turns her head to Comet and realizes that she frightened him, due to him jumping out of the bed and trying to hiding behind Luna.
"Pinkie! You scared the poor colt." A white unicorn says with an annoyed look spread across her face.
"'tis alright, Pinkie Pie is always eager to meet new ponies... eh... beings," Luna reassures Comet with a loving smile. The little Saiyan peeked from behind Luna and looked at the many ponies that pilled into the room.
"Um... hello, my name is... Comet." The small Saiyan spoke in a quiet shy tone while still hiding from them.
"I'm sorry, I didn't catch that." A purple unicorn said with a curious look on her face.
"My name... is Comet," The little Saiyan child said with more courage.
"Well hi Comet, I'm Twilight Sparkle and these are my friends." Twilight greets and holds a hoof up to show her friends to him. "You've already met Pinkie Pie, our party manager." Twilight points to the party pony, who waves wildly towards Comet.
“This is Fluttershy, the best animal caretaker there is.." She compliments as she points to a bright yellow pegasus with a long curly pink man and tail with large light-blue eyes.
"Um... hello Comet," Fluttershy says as she lightly waves towards the small Saiyan who nervously waves back. Luna notices this and giggles at the cute sight.
“This is Applejack, the most honest pony you’ll ever meet,” Twilight says as she holds a hoof towards an orange earth pony with a long blond mane and tail with green eyes and white freckles on her cheeks, also a hat.
“Howdy there, your the darn cutest thing I’ve ever seen!” Applejack compliments tipping her hat while Comet smiles back with a light blush appearing on his cheeks.
“Thank you miss’ Applejack” Comet studders while he fiddles with his hands. The farming pony giggles and lifts her hat back to its normal position.
“This is Rainbow Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria, or so she says she is.” Twilight giggles as a sky-blue colored Pegasus with a rainbow-colored mane and tail with magenta-colored eyes glare at Twilight.
“What’s that suppose to mean?” Rainbow questions in an aggravated tone.
“Oh nothing!” Twilight quickly says, avoiding an argument.
“Well then, I think you're cooler than me, like 20% cooler!” Rainbow Dash compliments flying towards the Saiyan child and giving him a hoof bump.
“Thank you Rainbow, do you really think I’m cooler than you?” Comet exclaimed, getting more comfortable with everypony around him.
“That’s right kiddo.” Rainbow dash says pumping her hoof in the air.
“This is Rarity, ponyvilles fashion designer,” Twilight says as she points to a snow-white colored unicorn with a curly purple mane and tail with diamond-blue eyes.
“It’s nice to meet you Comet.” Rarity says in a mannered tone, Boeing her head a little and looking at the small Saiyan.
“It’s nice to meet you to Rarity.” Comet impersonates Rarity’s tone and bows.
“Aren’t you a little joker”.” Rarity compliments as she ruffles his hair. She then walks back to the group and steps aside to let Princess Celestia through. An Alicorn bigger than Luna with a white coat with a flowing green, blue, and pink mane and tail with a set of magenta eyes.
“Hello little one, I’m Princess Celestia the ruler of this land, alongside my sister. Let me be the first to welcome you to Equestria.”
“Thank you, Princess,” Comet said, but as soon as he said it. “Aaa ugh!” He grunts out as he clutched his head with one hand. A faint memory was coming back.
“Comet!” They all scream out, rushing to his aid.
Flashback
The area was blinding bright, Comet couldn’t see a thing, but could hear two voices. One sounded rough and hard but the other one was soft and loving. But he couldn’t hear much as everything was muffled, but he could hear them better as they came closer to where ever he was.
“So Bardock, how was your mission?” Said the soft one. It sounded feminine to the little Saiyan, it felt soothing to him.
“It was alright Gine, but King Vegeta wants me to go with his son, the Saiyan Prince, Vegeta, onto another mission soon. I don’t know if I could handle that one.” Bardock complained, knowing the Prince was selfish and overconfident all the time.
“Don’t be like that Bardock, this is another one of your special missions!” Gine said trying to give her husband some confidence.
“Last time I did a mission with that brat, he nearly destroyed the planet,” Bardock said with fear, clearly seeing the memory.
“It’ll work out, me and him will be waiting for you when you get back,” Gine said lovingly. Comet could hear shuffling from the two, him guessing it’s a hug.
“Still haven’t given him a name? When will you give him one, might as well name him after my father.” Bardock joked.
“There’s no need for that, I’ll think of one eventually.” Gine replies.
But that was the last thing Comet heard before he felt a tug, telling him the memory was ending. He was then flung towards a door opening in front of him, showing the real world behind it.
Canterlot Hospital
Comet opened his eyes to see the worried look of all the pony’s in the room. He then realized that he was back on the medical bed he was on previously.
“Comet, are you alright?” Princess Celestia asks, wonder what could have happened.
“I... I remembered something...” Comet says, still hearing the voices from his memory. The ponies are shocked, the Princesses thinking they could get information on what he is.
“What did you remember?” Twilight asked with curiosity, pulling a notebook and quilt out of nowhere with her magic.
“My mommy and daddy... and,” Comet clutches his head again as it’s still painful.
“Anything else?” Princess Celestia asks, wondering if he figured out his name and past.
“Um...” Comet nervously says, looking back at the interesting bed sheets. “N-no... nothing else...” Comet lies, hoping the ponies bought it.
But Applejack knew it was a lie, but kept her mouth shut as she saw him scared and alone.
‘Wait... alone!’ Applejack thought.
“Girls, where’s he going to stay?” Applejack asked. Everypony remembered that he didn’t have a place to live, they couldn't let him be all alone with anywhere to go.
“I’ve decided that he would be staying in Canterlot until he’s old enough to go off on his own.” Princess Luna announces to the main 6 and Comet.
"Awwwww... I wanted to throw him a surprise party back in Ponyville" Pinkie Pie wined. The Princesses looked at her and giggled.
"Who didn't say he could go?" Princess Celestia said. The party ponies eyes brightened and she jumped with glee.
"YYYAAAAA!" Pinky screamed.
Author's Note
Right, I hope you all don't mind the weird ending, but I didn't want to keep you all waiting. I hope you all enjoyed it. But I'm going to give you all a choice for what you all want in the next chapter, here are the choices.
1) Luna having a talk with Celestia about adopting Comet.
2) The Surprise Party in Ponyville.
3) Or both...
Well thats all, Catch You Later!
