Treading Water
Chapter 2
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Rarity skipped giddily over to the window which sat at the forefront of her store and flipped over the sign, signalling that the shop was closed, and that the work day was over. Her day had been surprisingly easy, with few customers coming in, and none needing custom work, she was then free to catch up on a few back orders. Now that all that was done though, she let out a happy little giggle before trotting into the kitchen.
Her first instinct was to make some tea, or have an after work scone, but not today, today she resisted that urge. Instead she made a beeline for the calendar at the back of the kitchen, right next to the stairs which lead up to the second floor. Running a hoof down the calender she found today’s date only to sigh, her mood instantly falling as she read what was written on it.
“I had forgotten he was busy today.” Rarity muttered, her mood falling now that she had found out Lucky Doo would not be coming over anytime soon.
A weather patrol meeting had been scheduled, meaning that he wouldn't be able to come by for her daily ‘servicing’ for another hour and a half at the earliest. Leaving a pent up Rarity with little recourse but to handle her new urges alone, for the first time in a while.
“How time flies.” Rarity muttered, noting that it had only been a few days and yet she was already quite used to Lucky Doo’s frequent company.
Just thinking about the stallion made Rarity’s cock begin to harden, the mare imagining the male balls deep on the end of her cock, taking every inch down his throat. Biting her lip, Rarity trotted into her work room and sat down on one of the more comfortable, and luxurious couches she had. Her first instinct was to locate one of her toys and deal with her growing issue that way, but that idea was quickly scrapped.
Without her lady parts, Rarity had grown disinterested with her old toys, as she never really liked anal, though now that she thought about it, she did enjoy anal, just not receiving it. With a sly, wolfish grin crossing her face, Rarity thought back to yesterday, when she had finally caved and fucked her lover’s other hole. It had been good, brief but good, and with the addition of a condom, it was almost enough to subdue Rarity’s germaphobia.
Almost.
Shaking her head, Rarity growled, and glared down at her rising cock. “Even when I think of something as unpleasant as… that, and you get hard.” She whined, placing her hooves on her hips. “You are a stubborn thing aren't you?”
“I suppose it couldn't help to get some more practice with my own hooves. I can't very well rely on Lucky all the time, now can I?” Rarity muttered to herself before reclining a little more on the couch.
Confused on where to start, Rarity tried to remember what Lucky had done, and did her best to replicate just that. However her hooves always felt a little clumsy, a little too hard, or a little too sharp, despite just how well manicured her dainty hooves were. She was just about to give up on the entire thing only to stop, and planted a hoof between her eyes.
“Your a unicorn, you ditz.” She muttered, before lighting her horn and using a rather risque spell she learned from a mare’s magazine which she had purchased on a whim and definitely didn't have a subscription to.
After a brief flash of light, her aura coalesced around her cock, gripping it tightly, and beginning to massage her entire length at once. A low moan slipped past the mare’s lips and she felt her body all but sink into the couch, instantly relaxed. Though no replacement for Lucky’s mouth, ass, or even his hooves, it was a unique kind of pleasure and was certainly better than her own hooves. A pleasure that was close enough to the inside of Lucky’s mouth that if Rarity closed her eyes, she could almost imagine that the stallion was there with her, sucking her dick.
All worries about her still imperfect mane, and terrible split ends vanished, as did the general worries and cares from a long, but productive day. There was only her, and the pleasure she felt coursing through her body in this very moment and she loved it. With no one else to impress, and no reason to hold back, Rarity simply indulged in the base pleasure of it all, tuning the spell to go as fast as she dared it to.
With that in mind, she moaned loudly, and lewdly, knowing there was no one around to hear her, and no reason to stay quiet. Her hooves gripped tight the soft, velvety cushions of her couch as the spell continually squeezed and pumped her cock. It even emulated the warmth of her lover’s orifice quite well, in addition to being every bit as tight as the pegasus stallion’s throat.
“Mmm yes, faster Lucky.” She whispered, her mind imagining that the stallion was here now, bobbing up and down on her dick, desperate to receive another hot load of cum straight down his throat.
Just thinking of that hungry, lust filled gaze of his made the mare shudder in pleasure as her cock twitched needfully. It wouldn't be long before she came, as the spell was working well, adding to the surprising amount of pleasure that Rarity’s own imagination was helping to bring about. Within only a few minutes of the spell’s first casting, Rarity could feel her orgasm coming, and without thinking, she simply laid there, too caught up in her own imagination to realize there was no one there to catch said first orgasm.
Cum erupted from the end of her cock, shot nearly three feet in the air, and came down as three large blobs that splattered across her face, startling her from her thoughts. “What in the world is-” Rarity began, only to receive a smattering of cum across her tongue.
So shocked was the mare that she couldn't even stop herself from swallowing, leaving her disgusted and oddly intrigued. She hardly even noticed as her cum continued to splatter all over her mane and a good chunk of the rest of her upper body. Only when her orgasm finally stopped, and her cock no longer twitched could Rarity truly process what just happened.
Shocked, confused, and slightly disgusted, Rarity sniffed the air and found her nostrils filled with the scent of her seed. Summoning her mirror revealed that she had inadvertently covered a good chunk of her head, face and upper body in the creamy white liquid. Though her first thought was revulsion, Rarity quickly remembered why she had gone to the glory hole in the first place, and she quickly suppressed that first instinct.
Pressing a hoof into a particularly thick patch of cum, Rarity massaged it into her fur, coating it in the stuff. Looking down, Rarity realized the spell had sensed her orgasm and was beginning to fade away, only to be zapped back into existence by Rarity, who wasn't done yet. If she was going to do this, she may as well go all the way. Or at least that's what the still surprisingly aroused unicorn decided in that moment.
Licking her lips, Rarity closed her eyes once more, aiming her cock a little straighter as she did so the next orgasm would cover nearly her entire body evenly. If she was lucky, this would cure her fur and mane issues, which was plausible in her mind, as she had coated Lucky in her cum several times already and his fur looked spectacular.
With that in mind, Rarity licked her lips, and closed her eyes, already imagining what she would look like once her fur had regained its usual lustre. “This had better work.” She muttered.
“Rarity, I’m done with work stuff!” Lucky Doo called after he stepped inside the boutique, his gaze lingering over the empty store.
Frowning to himself, the stallion put the extra key he had been given on the small table next to the door before locking said door behind him. Wiping his hooves off on the doormat, Lucky crept slowly through the building, keeping an ear out for the familiar sound of Rarity’s sewing machine. By the time he had reached the kitchen he had begun to grow worried, as he heard neither the sound of her machine, nor shower, nor music box.
Stifling his own building sense of panic, Lucky peeked his head up the stairs, listening closely. Only to hear his name being called from behind him, in the direction of Rarity’s work room. Turning around and walking that way, Lucky heard his name called again, only this time in a very familiar manner.
“Oh Lucky you slut. Take it all.” Rarity cried.
Lucky’s first thought was a changeling, but he knew that such fears were unwarranted and he forced himself to slow as he reached the door. As he reached for the handle he considered the fact that it might be a changeling, as unlikely as that was.
There was only one way to find out he decided, before turning the handle, and pushing his way into the room beyond.
The first thing that hit him was the smell, which was incredibly pungent, and reaked of Rarity’s cum. It made his mouth moisten and his cock twitch as his body began to heat up, but Lucky Doo didn't focus on that, as his paranoia had already spiked. Only for that to be immediately dismissed when he found Rarity laying on one of her couches, hooves on her cock as cum rained down from the sky.
Her orgasm was powerful, drenching the already cum covered mare in even more pungent seed. The mare’s fur was matted from head to hoof, making the stallion wonder how long she had been in here, masterbating over and over again. Either way it made Lucky Doo’s stomach rumble as he looked at all of that delicious mare cum.
“Lucky?” Rarity muttered, blinking in shock. “What are you doing here? I thought you werent supposed to be here for another hour or so?”
“Its seven o'clock Rarity.” Lucky replied. “I’m actually an hour late.”
“Oh…” Rarity looked down at herself and pretended to gasp in shock. “Oh my goodness, I guess I came more than I thought. How um, gross.”
Lucky’s right eyebrow slowly raised until Rarity sighed and threw her hooves in the air. “Augh, fine. I was just testing if cum really did serve as a good way to help one’s fur and mane stay silky and smooth. After all, you have been looking fabulous recently and Ive unloaded on you more than a few times.”
“I’m flattered you think so.” Lucky began, a slight blush crossing his face. “But to be honest I haven't really noticed a difference. I also don't think you really need to bother doing all this, I thought you looked amazing the moment I saw you, and your hair is perfect how it is.”
“You flatterer you.” Rarity replied, batting her eyelashes at the male. “I suppose this was all a bit of a waste then. A rather sticky waste.” She added, lifting a cum covered hoof.
“I wouldn't say that.” Lucky muttered nervously, trotting close to the mare. “I could clean you up if you’d like.”
Rarity blushed a little harder and lifted one of her back hooves. “Alright then darling, you may start here.”
Lucky doo all but sprinted across the remaining distance until he reached the mare’s hoof, which he instantly began to lick and caress gently. One of his hooves held Rarity’s leg delicately in place as he got to work, his sheer dedication making the mare stop and stare.
She had only suggested it out of jest, yet here he was, licking her hooves clean of cum and never spitting. In that moment she felt more like a princess then when she had attended the Grand Galloping Gala. He was the most faithful, and dutiful servant a pony could wish for, yet she didn't truly think of him as such. The stallion was a friend, one who had proved himself a dedicated, and selfless lover, who also just so happened to be perfectly content to spend his time servicing Rarity’s every whim.
She watched as he carefully removed every drop of seed from her hoof, his gentle tongue caressing every inch of her hoof before moving up her leg. His patience and calm countenance made Rarity begin to wonder if he was truly intent on cleaning every inch of her body with only his tongue. He didn't seem to tire either, nor go too fast, leaving every lick slow, and sensual without spending too long on one spot.
It was enough to make Rarity’s cock begin to grow hard once more, the appendage flopping against her chest and getting smeared in even more cum as it did so. And it only got harder as he delicately held her leg aloft, his long, sensual licks cleaning her fur without ruining it in the process. Every time he moved it felt like an act of dedication, of supplication, like she was a god, or princess and he was worshipping at the altar which was her body.
Rarity wasn't certain if she had ever blushed harder in her entire life, yet he hadn't even said a word since he had begun to get to work. When finally he had worked his way up her thighs, and neared her privates, he seemed to hesitate, as if only barely able to resist the urge to bury his muzzle in her sack. Yet despite that clear, and evident desire in the male’s eyes he continued to do his self assigned duty, cleaning her inner thighs of seed before pulling back.
“Am I really so beautiful?” Rarity asked suddenly.
“You are the most beautiful pony I’ve ever seen in my entire life.” Lucky replied quickly. “The sun itself pales in comparison to your radiance.”
Rarity’s cock twitched upon her chest and her smile lit up the room, yet Lucky didn't see it, as he had already returned to his job, cleaning her other back hoof. He didn't seem bothered by the rather debased nature of his newest duty either, and indeed even relished in that particular fact. His movements were a little faster between licks, as if he was eager to taste more of her, to serve her again and worship once more at the altar of her body.
The unicorn couldn't help but watch in stunned admiration, her gaze locked on Lucky as he slowly crawled back up her other leg, licking and caressing her gently all the while. In that moment Rarity began to wonder if her idea of a perfect partner was truly what she desired. She had always thought she wanted a big, dominant male who would sweep her off her hooves, and give her everything she wanted. Yet if she had the choice between that, and the small, submissive, and utterly devoted stallion currently serving as her sex toy, Rarity wasn't sure what she would pick.
Those thoughts vanished the instant she felt Lucky’s snout press against her balls, his tongue lapping at her sack, desperate to lick up every drop of her cum. Unlike Rarity, Lucky seemed to revel in the more male like scent that surrounded her cock and balls, rubbing his face against her new package and inhaling her scent. It made a primal sense of pride and dominance to rise in the mare’s chest, the pony realizing that she had in essence marked the submissive male as her property.
Meanwhile Lucky didn't notice any of the inner struggles Rarity was currently contemplating as he was busy attending to her cum soaked balls, the smell of which had driven him into a frenzy. It was the perfect mix of masculinity, and femininity, promising Lucky a long night spent servicing the most beautiful pony he had ever met before. Even more intriguing than that was just how heavy her balls were, the mare’s sack remaining quite hefty despite the massive amount of seed already ejaculated all over her person.
It made Lucky Doo’s heart flutter in his chest, the male confident that there was still plenty of cum left to shoot inside of him, however Rarity wanted to deliver said seed. Reluctantly, he moved away from her balls, noting idly that he had already cleaned every last inch thereof twice over already. With a sigh, he gently lifted Rarity’s cock up and toward his eager lips, noting that it was also covered in a fair bit of delicious seed.
Rarity’s worries vanished the second she felt Lucky’s lips slide over the head of her cock, which was quickly shoved straight down his throat. The male wasted no time in cleaning her shaft, using his tongue to get every bit of seed off of her dick and into his stomach. Extending his surprisingly long tongue, Lucky managed to also clean around the base of her cock before pulling back and swallowing hard.
“Wow. You are quite dedicated, aren't you?” Rarity remarked in slight disbelief.
Lucky giggled, and nodded. “I admit I have something of a soft spot for girls with big fat cocks but even then your so much more than just that.” He smiled faintly as a hoof gently caressed the mare’s thigh. “Your beautiful, domineering, and every bit the wonderful person I thought you would be.”
“Oh I’m not all that.” Rarity retorted while blushing profusely.
“Oh but you are.” Lucky declared, leaning forward and accidentally aligning his mouth an inch from Rarity’s cock. “Your hooves are always perfectly manicured, your legs the perfect mixture of elegance and attraction. I cannot help but look upon you and want to serve you in anyway you want me to. Just thinking about it makes my body yearn to be filled with your seed, and for every facet of my being to-”
Whatever he had been about to say was cut off when Rarity unexpectedly orgasmed directly into his mouth, blasting the male with an explosion of cum. Lucky himself blinked in shock, but reflexively kept his mouth open, catching more of her seed before his brain caught up with what was happening right in front of him. Then he leaned forward and wrapped his lips around the female’s shaft, sucking down load after load one after another without pause. Though her output was as impressive as ever, Lucky had gotten used to it for the most part and took it all in stride, gulping down every last bit.
Even still, the male found himself waiting patiently for the end so he could keep a bit of cum in his mouth and keep that taste with him for as long as possible. Throughout it all he used his hooves to continue to pump away at her shaft, ensuring she came as much as possible into his awaiting mouth. One hoof strayed to her sack even as her orgasm began to slow, squeezing and kneading the mare’s balls and eeking out a bit more cum from her huge testicles.
Rarity herself had fallen back into the couch, her eyes remaining on the dutiful male as he sucked down every drop of seed she produced. While she watched, she couldn't help but think about what he had said, and the way he had said it all. The passion in his voice was evident, and it was obviously more than just lust, which was ultimately what stuck with the mare the most. As even more than his evident fascination with her shapely form, he was also incredibly dedicated, as well as quite the charmer, though he likely didn't even know that last part.
When finally her orgasm slowed to a gradual stop, Rarity sighed and shook her head, while using her magic to tug a few stray strands of hair from the male’s face. “That was wonderful darling.” She exclaimed breathlessly.
Lucky Doo gulped down the last bit of her cum and pulled back. “Thank you, that was quite a surprise. Do you want me to keep going?” He asked while gesturing to the rest of her still cum covered body.
“You may.” Rarity replied graciously, a smile on her face.
Lucky Doo leaned down and extended his tongue only to stop and pull back. “Oh um, were you going to need me again soon perchance?”
Rarity resisted the urge to chuckle, the male’s nervous excitement so overt that his attempts to hide it only made it that much more obvious. “Of course I will darling. Your going to spend every single evening draining my balls and taking every drop of cum these hefty balls of mine can produce.” She smirked and leaned forward, caressing his cheek. “I’m going to fill your slutty holes to the brim with my seed, and send you to work with a hefty belly full of spunk every single day.”
“Oh. Oh my.” Lucky Doo muttered faintly, eyes going wide.
“So yes, I will require your services again soon. As in every single day you have available from here on out.” Rarity licked her lips and slowly leaned back in her couch. “You will also make sure to get off time for the bake sale, which you will help me with.”
“Do you want me to bake something then?” He asked while scratching his head. “Because I can't bake for beans.”
Rarity chuckled and shook her head. “Oh no. You will be helping me in a far more… intimate manner, but for now you have work to do.”
Lucky Doo gasped. “Oh, right.”
The unicorn watched as her lover hastily leaned back down and continued to clean her fur with nothing but his tongue. Making a grin spread across her face as she contemplated all the debauched things she had planned for him.
“Oh and darling? After your done, bend over. I want to stuff both of your holes nice and full.” Rarity remarked.
Lucky Doo blushed harder and nodded without breaking from his job for even a single second.
Rarity meanwhile slowly exhaled, relaxing into the cushions of her couch. It's good to be queen. She thought humorously to herself.
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