Doctor's Displacement

by HeartfireFirebrand

Chapter 1: Rebirth

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Two girls were walking home from school, Whisper Wood was a rough and tumble girl who loved fighting while her friend, Songbird Sapphire was in love with magic and fantasy. Today was going to be simultaneously their best and worst day, the passed by an alleyway only for one massive man to grab Songbird and run carrying her into the alley.

Whisper burst into the alley after the man shouting “Get back here!” As soon as she turned the corner several men carrying guns turned and pumped her full of lead as Songbird watched in horror. Songbird was thrown onto the ground by the man, he then tore off her school uniform and shoved his knife into her gut with a grin as she screamed out in pain. He laughed “I’m going carve you up nice and slow, you;ll be a perfect ornament for our hideout.”

A tall man stepped out of the shadows in a white doctor’s uniform a stethoscope dangling from his neck. He frowned “I was hoping to stop you and give them a choice but you have forced my hand”

The man stood up “Who are you, stranger! If you are here to interrupt my fun I will kill you!”

The man brushed his uniform “I’m simply known as Doctor, and antyime a fool such as you tried to oppose me they meet a grizzly end.” Before he or his lackeys could react he appeared behind them all of them exploding into bloody paste, he then looked over them and clicked his fingers. He vanished alongside the two girls.

Whisper woke up with a groan, she stood up only to see a strange blue girl in a magician’s outfit with vivid pink and silver hair standing in a clearing of a forest. She realised she was wearing a black leather jacket and long pants ending in boots on feet. Her skin was a light orange and one eye was green while the other was red, her hair was a mix of dark blue and bright red, she turned to the Doctor “Where am I and where’s Songbird!”

The Doctor grimaced “I was two late to save you from them so I did the one thing I could do and brought you two here in new bodies. You Whisper Wind are now Painset Shimmercakes, an incredibly power demonic goddess and your friend Songbird is now Magic Mare, a powerful magician.”

He then grimaced as he pulled out a syringe with four doses of s strange liquid “You need to use one of these once a week as your powers will kill you otherwise. I will give you a new one at the end of each month.”

Songbird grinned popping next to Whisper with a laugh “I can do magic, isn’t this amazing!”

Whisper frowned “Maybe but where are we exactly and what about our families. Won’t they miss us!”

The Doctor sighed “You can’t go back or else you will die. Right now you are in the magical land of Equestria, the home of magical bipedal ponies. These types of this land are easier for you to adapt to, you fit in better and are seen as less strange.” He then focused on Whisper “You should take your first dose now.”

Whisper winced as she injected the syringe into her side, she then frowned “Where are we now exactly?”

The Doctor smiled “Well this is the Everfree Forest, there are quite a few hostile monsters but nothing that you can’t handle. Your friend should stand behind you in a fight. Now if you excuse me I have to fill out your paperwork, don’t want my fellow displacers messing with you.”

Whisper strode forward through the forest with Songbird floating behind her, Whisper spun around and caught the muzzle of a wooden wolf. Songbird cowered “What is that?!”

Whisper growled “I don’t know but it will burn!” Her hand glowed with dark red light and the wolf burst into flame before throwing into the bushes. Two other wolves leapt out only for two glowing dark red hands to slam into them igniting them.” Whisper laughed “I’m going to like it here.”

Songbird cowered behind “I hope I don’t have to fight anything like that.”

Whisper grinned “I’ll handle the fighting” she then frowned as she looked at the sky “We should get to town before it gets dark.”

Songbird nodded “I agree, it wouldn’t be safe to be in this forest when it’s dark?”

The two began marching forward trying to find a way out when they felt the ground shake, they saw a greyish green bipedal unicorn stallion wearing a black shirt and dark blue jeans running away from a giant purple bear. Whisper growled “We have to save him, he probably knows the way to town!”

Whisper ran at the massive bear and delivered a massive kick sending the lumbering beat to the ground. Whisper frowned as she looked at the equine “What’s you name and what are you doing here?!”

The stallion rubbed the back of his head “I’m Snips, I wanted to defeat the Ursa Minor that turned up in town years ago but I upset the mother in my attempt.” He then grinned “Your really awesome, you knocked out the Ursa Major in a single kick.”

Songbird flew over nervously “Um could you take us to town before it wakes up again.”

Snips completely oblivious to her nervousness “Sure, just follow me. How did you two end up the Everfree anyway?”

Whisper frowned as she followed him “We were teleported from very far away, it seems the location we ended up in was intentional. It was likely the closest place to this Ponyville town he told us about but we don’t know exactly why he wants us here.”

Snips frowned “Who would teleport you into such a dangerous place, that seems irresponsible?”

Songbird raised an eyebrow “That’s a lot coming form someone who entered the same dangerous forest to fight a giant space bear. How in anyway was that responsible?”

Snips didn’t have anything to say, the rest of the trip was silent as they entered the town that was Ponyville. Most ponies were wearing rustic clothing but a light pink unicorn mare was wearing light blue mage robes, her light vermilion mane that slowly changed to a light amber colour with streak light grey olive was tied back. She turned to him with a scowl “You wandered into the Everfree Forest again looking for an Ursa Minor again didn’t you!”

Snip rubbed he back of his head “Luster, I was just trying prove myself. I also these two wandering through the forest, the tough looking mare saved me.”

Luster frowned “I can only see one of them, where…”

Two eyes floated in the air next to her, Songbird’s voice came form next to her “Oh hey.” Luster screamed as Songbird materialised “That was fun, I can’t wait to do that to another.”

Whisper growled “Songbird tone it down” she then apologised to Luster “I’m sorry about my friend. I’m Whisper Wood and my friend here is Songbird Sapphire, she loves magic as you can see.”

Luster smiled “I’m Luster Dawn, personal student of Princess Twilight. How did you end up in the Everfree?” Whisper and Songbird explained everything as Snips went on to go about his day. Luster frowned “I need to sent a message to my mentor, follow me to the castle. I’ve been staying there since I arrived, you can take one of the spare rooms.”

Songbird bounced excitedly “We get to stay in a castle!” Whisper rolled her eyes with a smile as the three of them headed to the massive crystal tree castle, unaware of several strange cloaked figures watching them.


Author's Note

I hope you enjoy this chapter, I wanted to write a displaced story just to see how it would turn out. It could be totally horrible for all I know but I hope you all have fun on this experiment of mine.

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