Tails and Rarity

by ponyponies

1. So-Called Party

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After My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic was done being on the air, all the ponies in Ponyville didn't care for their manes or tails anymore. No pony brushed, or even cleaned their own hair. All except for Rarity, who was extremely disgusted.

"Honestly," She muttered as she stroked her hair with a blue brush,"how can they walk around with such VILE manes? I ought to teach them a lesson on that."

She sat in a large, soft chair and pondered, wondering how she could put revenge on those aweful ponies. She thought about killing them, but she shook her head. It came back to her, and she decided she WOULD kill them.

"Serves them right. Aweful dopes." Gilda glided onto Rarity's steps and knocked on the door. Quickly, Rarity almost broke the door trying to open it.

"Hey, Dopehead, whats with the ponies?" Gilda said as Rarity quickly combed her curled tail. "None of your beeswax, Griffonhead, now scat before i.."


Rarity sent invitations about a so-called party to all the residents of ponyville. Pinkie Pie bounded happily to the door, along with Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, AppleJack and FlutterShy, along with the rest of the ponies. Cheerilee dashed ahead and stomped on the floor. The Cutie Mark Crusaders joined, making so much racket that Rarity had to scream to quiet everyone.

Rarity locked the doors. All the ponies gasped at that. "Now, Rarity, why would you lock us in for a PARTY?" AppleJack reasoned, trying to be helpful.

"There is no party. I am going to fix your manes." Groans were heard everywhere. Cheerilee made a run for it, and charged at the door.

"Now, Cheerilee, why would you run from something so magnificent?" Rarity cooed. Cheerilee pounded on the door with her hooves.

"I'VE HAD IT, BRAT!" Rarity screamed. She pressed a button, and gears attached to Cheerilee's sides. All the ponies gasped, and Rarity pressed a small green button.

Cheerilee let out a cry of pain as the gears started turning. There was a ripping sound, and her ribs tore through her side. Her pelvis lurched upward and the gears slowly grinded her as it was rising up to the roof. There was a deafening cry of agony as Cheerilee's spine utterly tore through her back. Her intestines caught on a large gear, and the rotation tore out he rintestines. Cheerilee screamed again, and her arm was twisted in an odd way, and her pelvis folded with a crack. Cheerilee's body turned, and her neck twisted sideways. A chute opened on the roof just as the last of Cheerilee's entrails were being torn out. Cheerilee screamind in pain, and the gears stopped rising.

Knives were at the entrance to the chute. The knives started spinning so fast in a circle that if a pony's hoof touched it, the hoof would be torn to ribbons.

Cheerilee screamed as the gears started rising, and it ripped out her appendix. Her ear touched the circled of knives and shredded the tip to peices. It slowely rised her head until her head was shredded to nothing but ribbons. It then dropped the mangled remains of Cheerilee onto the floor.

"Anyone else try to escape and you'll end up like her." Rarity cacklked.

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