The Beginning :Rewrite

by TheDragonSage

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Crossover, Naruto, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Human
Length: 1198

A rewrite of the old one, let’s see how this goes

Naruto and Sasuke are the only ones who survived from kaguya’s last attack, and now are all alone in the void.

In the end, not wanting to spend the rest of their life in that place, agreed to create a new world, a world where bloodshed and war will never be that severe as it was

Published 2020-04-13 08:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2020-06-26 05:43:27 UTC

Chapter One - Creation

Author's Note

Here you go a rewrite, honestly I have been incredibly busy with my RL, but as promised here is my rewritten story about Sasuke and Naruto creation of a new world

Chapter One - Creation

Prologue

Have you ever wondered if there was ever a Before, prior our universe, was there another universe?, or was it the same nothingness before Creation.

While they did not have those answers, they were about to make it happen, One was a blonde, sun-kissed blonde spiky hair, he was tall nearly six feet tall, had sapphire blue eyes, and wore a tattered black, but mostly orange clothes.

The Other had dark black hair, in a oddly shaped hairstyle that pointed towards his right, charcoal black eyes, robes that were held up by strange large, purple rope, and was around the former’s heart but a bit shorter.

They both had a same expression, utter look of Dispair, in front of them...was nothing, nothing but the void, how did this happen?

They fought, they fought the one known as the Rabbit Goddess, a celestial being that came down from a distant space, and ate the the Chakra Fruit from the thing called the God Tree, Shinju.

For the past few days, these two, the names being, Naruto and Sasuke, have fought the Kaguya, who has before been placed in what should’ve been her eternal prison, The Moon, in these days fought her.

In the End, even when three of their comrades that went with them in battle fell, they won, but in the end, Kaguya, knowing she probably would never get her chance at freedom again to steal the life forces of every living being, especially if no one will be capable enough to even GET to this dimension.

So in the end,...she just finished herself, and if she could created a Truth Seeking Orb so large without any sort of consequences that could destroy a dimension,...what do you think would happen if she used her full life force to power it.

Six Path Chakra, it was truly a mysterious and powerful force, those who had it, could very well be called a god, those who had it, no longer followed the laws of nature.

The term God Tree from where the Chakra Fruit came from was not inaccurate, it was quite truly a divine existence, when Kaguya had it, she was called a Demon and a Goddess, when Hogoromo had it he may as well been a god, that all shinobi’s would think of him as a god if he was still more widely remembered in the current age of Shinobi.

Even their reincarnations, who were the Sons of the Sage of Six Paths were in some extends gods, a god isn’t when you can’t die, but when you can exist after death,...if of course you don’t kill yourself with that chakra in the first place.

The Truth Seeking Orbs, were truly a terrifying ability, for even touching one disturbs your chakra, And say should you lose an arm to it, it will no longer exist, this Orbs could most definitely by called Anti-Immortality.

But what truly makes these Orbs incredibly horrifying is that, anyone that doesn’t have Sage Path Chakra flowing through them….they get erased, not even their souls will be able to go to the afterlife for it was erased to utter oblivion along with the body.

Before the Death of Kakashi, he used the remaining amount of chakra along with Sakura fusing her own chakra into him, caused both Sasuke and Naruto to survive by the energy going right through them, intangibly speaking, and only became touchable when Kaguya’s final move move past them.

Everyone,...was dead, thankfully the attack was concentrated, and people who died, they died from the blast that destroyed the material realm, not actually touching them, so they instead died and headed to the afterlife rather than be erased.

They both continued to stare out into the Abyss, after what felt like hours, they finally looked at each other, neither of them speaking out loud, but both knowing what each other wants to do.

They were effectively gods, they both had Six Path Chakra, even if they died they would simply exist after death like hogoromo did, while sasuke’s was only visible in one eye, naruto’s was a lot more distinctive when in use.

Actually that is wrong, while Naruto is using Six Paths Chakra, it isn’t actually all that different from his Sage Mode, the only key difference?, there was no orange coloring around his eye, just the toad/Kurama eyes.

The glowing bodysuit thing was actually mostly from Kurama, Which speaking of which, when Naruto touched her along with sasuke, he was able to pull their conscienceness out of Kaguya, but not a lot of their chakra, so in the end, they will be asleep, recovering from this for a Verrry Loooong time.

….they wanted to create a new world

While theoretically Naruto can do it by himself, he would rather want to use it in conjunction with his brother in all but blood for stability.

They both understood that they shouldn’t recreate the human race, for the their whole existence humanity mostly ever only waged war and death, so in the end they decided a whole new sentient races to their new world.

They spoke with each other, for the past hours, ignoring their basic needs, and had a whole new list of ideas, sasuke himself thought of create things like dragons and Kirin personally he wanted to create.

While Naruto thought of creating Draconeques, and Alicorns, the two not wanting to cause chakra to be used for any wars that may happen, so they separated the two energies that create chakra.

Many are under the impression that chakra is the life force, which while correct is at the same time incorrect, chakra is created in the system similar to the blood veins, and only really connect the Energy of the Mind and the Energy of the Body.

So in order to stop with the misuse of chakra, they stopped its existence without leaving their creations lifeless, the body can still survive without Spiritual Energy while the Mind can still survive without Physical Energy.

Nodding, in their heads, imaging what they want to create in a form of a illusion, and when they corrected all of the mistakes in it, each using one of their hands to create a Snake Seal, they both made a hand sign and in unison said, “Creation of All Things”

And all of the sudden, in the void, something impossible happened, a bright shining light appeared and all around it, a new planet, as well as the sun, the stars, the moon, the mountains, the water, the animals, they have all appeared, life being breathed into this illusion, becoming reality.

For all things considered, those who gain Six Path Chakra, are no longer bound by nature, as Obito has pointed out when he temporarily became a Jinchuuriki, the world, save for the animals, was still empty, and as ironic as it seemed, they understood what they now needed to do.

They have to play gods...

Chapter 2 - Spirits

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