Choco Collette and Something Sweet to Bite

by Somber Concerto

Rating: mature
Tags: Violence, Pinkie Pie, Crossover, Death, Twilight Sparkle, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Rainbow Dash, Suicide / Self Harm, Rarity, Horror, Fluttershy
Length: 1291

Is there a dark side to this cheerful candy maker?

Might there be a darker side to this well known, and loved world-wide chocolatier? Five unfortunate little fillies are about to discover what's really behind that fancy fedora.:pinkiecrazy:

Sorry to anypony who was really interested in this story, maybe if it's popularity goes up i'll continue it but right now it doesn't seem worth my time.

Published 2020-01-13 18:00:02 UTC
Last updated 2020-01-15 03:31:36 UTC

Chapter 2

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Chapter 3

" Now the next stop on our tour is the marshmallow room." Said Mr. Collette. Fluttershy was in love with this room the second she walked in. It was full of animals of all shapes and sizes pigs and sheep, and cows, even bunnies!

"Why would the marshmallow room be filled with animals? Unless.. *Gasp* you don't do animal testing do you?!" Said Fluttershy, concerned for the animals.

"No, no nothing like that," Choco Collette started. "They're the main ingredient!"

"Oh, well that's- WAIT, THIS IS WHAT YOU MAKE MARSHMALLOWS OUT OF?!" Fluttershy said as she thought about all the time she had spent sipping hot cocoa with marshmallows while caring for her beloved animals. The time she had let angel bunny have one, not knowing that she had been feeding him his own potential relatives. These thoughts sickened her beyond all reason.

Without thinking, she began to open all the gates and doors in order to free the animals- or though she thought. She looked behind her and realized that the door she had just opened, was not an exit. It was a slaughter room. Saws began to buzz and whirr, and before she had a chance to do anything about it, she was sprayed with a deep, red, liquid substance. Blood.

That had done it. It was all too much for her. She began climbing up to the rafters, about 20 feet up, and before any pony could stop her, she jumped, saying one thing and one thing only; "I'm sorry Angel!" She fell face-first into a pool, now containing a mixture of animal blood, and her own blood and tears. Her pink mane was hardly visible under all the red.

"Ok, I've seen enough casualties to last a lifetime. What's next?" Said Twilight.

" What, and were not even going to mention what happened back there?! It's like you ponies don't even care! Uhh- no rhymes intended." Said Rarity.

"Please, there's no time for arguing, we still have one more place to get to." Said Choco. He leaned down to one of the purple ponies and whispered, "Bring the other four to 'the' room, oh, and make sure to do it quietly."

Chapter 4

"Now my little fillies is something that might be a little hard to comprehend. So maybe, I shouldn't show you.
Said Mr. Collette, clearly prodding a reaction from the two remaining fillies.

"Are you serious? I'm a 10-year old who can both read and fully understand high-school textbooks. I have the damd IQ of Starswirl the Bearded!"Twilight screamed, obviously giving him what he wanted.

"And the vocabulary of a sailor." Said Rarity, snarky as ever.

"Okay, if you really want to see..." Choco said, happily. He then proceeded to flip a switch, revealing the lifeless bodies of 3 small fillies. One coated in blood, another in chocolate.

"*gasp* What are you doing with them?! You said Rainbow was going to be okay!" Said Rarity, aghast.

"That's it? I think I can comprehend death." Said Twilight, un-amused.

"I wasn't done yet." And with that, Choco pulled a lever on the wall, and the room was filled with white flashes as the bodies where electrocuted. After a few seconds, the flashes receded and the 3 sat up in unison.

"Oh please, I know a hologram when I see one. They're not real." Said Twilight, believing this all to be fake.

"You really think so? Okay, if they're not real, can you prove it?" Choco said, a wild, psychopathic gleam in his eyes.

"Mmm.." Rarity squeaked, she had curled up in the corner, terrified.

"Yes, I can, actually. I will go down there and touch one. I can guarantee my hoof will go straight through." Replied Twilight, confident in herself. Too confident. She jumped over the gate, the only thing separating them from the filly zombies. She galloped at Pinkie, full speed, but she didn't go right through, she crashed into her. Pinkie let out a low growl, alerting the others. She then proceeded to take a large bite out of the unicorn's ear. Twilight screamed out in shock and pain. She continued to cry and scream as the other zombies began to close in on her. They mauled her bite-by-bite until there was nothing left of the pony but a skeleton, and a pool of blood.

Rarity, now the only living filly of the five, had fainted at the first sight of blood. Meanwhile, Twilight and Rarity's parents were freaking out. Night Light began to hyperventilate and fainted beside Rarity. Choco Collete procured a knife seemingly out of nowhere and stapped the stallion in the heart.

"You monster!" Said Polished Silver, Raritys mom. "Don't you dare lay a hoof on my darling Rarity!"

"Oh, I wouldn't be concerned about her if I were you. My factory is a dangerous place after all... ponies disappearing and reappearing all the time." Choco motioned to the zombies, currently licking up the last of the blood. He levitated the knife out of Night Light and pointed it towards Polished.

"Whh..what are you doing with that knife?!" She said, now cowering in fear.

"I thought that was obvious my little pony; making you disappear- forever!" He began to laugh menacingly. And with one swift movement, he decapitated the unicorn. The head went flying over the gate, to the pleasure of the zombie fillies. Choco levitated Rarity off the ground and carried her away.

Protologue/Chapter 1

Author's Note

Now, this story starts the same way that most stories start. An exciting opportunity, a let down, and then somehow the hope comes back, and comes true. But while most stories as these have happy endings, that is what sets this one apart. Remember the classic story of “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”? How about the classic fanfic “Something Sweet to Bite”? Well if you love the first one, I'd be careful, after you read/listen to this fanfic, you will never be able to watch/read it the same way ever again. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
Now I’m just going to assume that you've heard both stories already, so I’m just gonna skip to the fun part. If I’m wrong, you don’t actually need to have heard “Something Sweet to Bite”, but you will want to know the story of “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”, if you’ve never heard that one, first of all, WHERE IS YOUR CHILDHOOD?! But you can just go watch/read that now, it doesn't really matter which version, but this one is based on the 2005 movie. Now that all that junk is out of the way, on with the story!

Protologue/Chapter 1

Stepping into the marvelous factory that she had seen on the outside millions of times before, Rarity was in awe. She turned to her mother and verbalized her ecstasy. “Oh mother, look at how amazing this factory truly is! Mr. Collette has a great taste in interior design, especially for a stallion with such a bland coat, and clashy mane.” She said that last part quietly enough that nopony else heard.

She looked around, surveying her competition. A sky blue pegasus with rainbow hair, a yellow pegasus with pink hair, a lavender unicorn with deep purple hair, and an all pink pony, with a terrible frizzy mane.

“Phh, you call this a competition, and can win this thing in ten seconds flat, and 20% percent cooler than any of these geeks, wanna see?” Rainbow Dash cried out.

“Now just how will you win something that you know nothing about?” Replied Mr. Collette flatly.

“Don’t listen to him Dashie, you go crush that competition!” Interjected Windy Whistles, Rainbow's mother.

“Come along now little ponies, there's much to see.” Said Mr. Collette flatly, once again.