Ichor

by Ice Star

Rating: teen
Tags: Narcotics, Drama, Original Character, Deer, Royal Guard, Suicide / Self Harm, Horror, Non-consensual, Griffons, Violence, Princess Celestia, Sex, Profanity, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Death
Length: 39734

[TEEN VERSION] There are two things the elite care about: blood and coin. Young Marigold desires both... and with a strange amulet, maybe she can have such things.

There are two things the Canterlot elite care about: blood and coin. At least, that is what a little filly has heard all her life. Young Marigold desires both... and with a strange amulet maybe she can have such things.

The dark shape beckons her, as does her own bloodlust. Her greed demands to be fed, and darker magics are willing to help her gain her fill of riches and ruin alike in the dour city of Manehattan.

If only the price was not a city.

A version of this story was scrapped and presented in a chapter of 'Missing Pages & Scrapped Footnotes'. The cover was commissioned from PurpleGrim40. Contribute to the TVTropes page! This is the SFW version of "Stay Golden" which I consider it the better, uncensored story. Posting permission granted by Majin Syeekoh. Edited by MissyTheAngle, Hellblazer, and Muggonny.

Published 2020-07-30 00:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2024-02-21 23:20:32 UTC

Chapter 1: Charley Horse

The gathered Royal Guard gaped down at the body of the stallion lying broken before them. The towering structures of Manehattan stretched around them at all sides, reaching up like teeth to hold the corpse so carelessly tossed into this alley. Really, ‘corpse’ was the only label fitting with what was left of the young stallion scattered so carelessly on the cobbles, his corpse little more than the shell of a soul’s home.

“Oh gods,” whispered one of the guards. One of her senior offices cast her a look that read like an exclamation point to what a novice she was. “What a way to go!”

Another one of the gathered guards frowned at the newbie’s obviousness. Nopony should face such obvious vileness and not recognize the wrongness of this torture, but how did this one get through a military academy? Was she somehow conveniently sick every time it was brought up that the Royal Guard runs off honor, ability, justice, integrity, and intelligence — and that the sniveling sorts crying for empathy would find no place in the world as it was?

Bodies were studied in military academies, taken straight from Equestria’s sole prison, where those who were given a life sentence were stripped of burial rights-and-rites when that judge’s gavel came down and spelled out all that they earned. Their bodies were often used in a Royal Guard’s education and had been for centuries. The sight was as normal as the equine-shaped targets to provide realism on the ranges and instruct on a mortal body’s weakness. Did such a filly of a soldier cower before those too, as if they could hurt her?

The thoughts of that armored mare, so sharp and observant of her cowardly co-worker were cut short by one of her comrades in golden armor. He had lit his horn with careful light, letting a variety of crooked shadows dance around them. With the soft light to aid the lantern held by another pony in armor, the guards gathered could see the stallion’s corpse all the more clearly.

He was a unicorn, with a brown mane matted with his own blood. His eyes were too foggy to discern if their color in life had been blue, green, or something similar to both. Where his coat was unmarred, a cheery light peach stood out.

The fine white shirt the stallion had been wearing was torn, and his cutie mark of an equine leg in a cast was almost unrecognizable beyond that. Nearly cleaving the dead stallion in two were crystals, richer than any red any of the guards had seen before and still glistening. Unlike the workings of a geomancer, they weren’t growing from the ground; though this went unsaid, the peculiarity of it weighed upon everypony’s mind. The look of freshness that the crystals and blood had might just be a matter of magic, but it certainly was a sharp contrast to the corpse of the stallion, already rank in scent. Though, there was no analysis yet to tell why they appeared so.

From a shirt pocket spared of the slaughter, the unicorn guard stallion produced a folded faux-leather wallet. The jingle of bits sounded inside with his efforts to avoid stepping in stray intestines as he trotted closer to his squad.

He wordlessly passed the wallet to his second-in-command, as the stallion in charge of the patrol had left to ensure the ponies in charge of recovering the corpse would be able to work their way through the mess of streets that led to this off-street location. Pegasi were few and far between in Manehattan, and those that weren’t caught up in construction businesses were usually just weather ponies. None would be free when a storm was scheduled for the night, and there was only so much good a grounded pony could do to find their way quickly in the dense, concrete labyrinth of this part of the city.

Quick Spell, second-in-command and an unfortunate native of the urban space pulled out a few papers, unfolding a particularly thick piece of cardstock.

“Charley Horse,” he read off, enlarging his werelight to increase readability. “A physician's apprentice. He lived in a good part of town.”

A parcel, tattered and torn spilled out from saddlebags discarded nearby. The brown paper wrapping went dutifully untouched by the guard, but all could see that it had been stomped upon in a careless, savage attempt to get open in a hurry — something characteristic only of earth ponies. Yet, the presence of such advanced magic was a clear sign that suggested no earth pony under Celestia’s sun could do such a thing.

Brown sugar spilled out from its once neat packaging. One of the guard mares peered down at the label stamped there. “Jolly Holly’s? Why her store is only a quick trot away. My grandmother buys their sugar all the time!”

“Then it appears Mister Horse might have been doing some shopping before he was attacked,” piped up one of the younger stallions, Swift Blade. “Who would want to attack him over a grocer’s parcel?”

“I believe,” interjected the particularly astute Stoic Resolve, who spotted the cowardice of their greenhorn mare, “that whoever attacked Mister Horse might have believed he was in possession of something else.”

“Resolve does appear to speak the truth,” Quick Spell said hesitantly, turning the cardstock over to the rest of his patrol. A portrait of the apprentice as he had once appeared in life was clear on the identification sheet. “This stallion had proper clothes for his work, and we find him torn in such a ghastly fashion and left in scraps!”

Scraps indeed. The portrait of Charley had round, gold-rimmed spectacles perched on his muzzle along with evidence that he usually wore a silk top hat. A vest bearing golden buttons was visible under the long coat in the portrait. The stallion was an entirely respectable type as far as they could tell, and his name with any connection to Manehattan crimes had never reached their ears. There was no doubt he had come from his workplace and should have been clad in the full array of clothes pictured on his identification slip. Why else would he have it on his pony?

It was such a simple thing to find on a pony of the good standing Charley Horse was in. A slip of neat, elegant hornwriting listing off his mark, name, address, magic color, and other unchanging features. Multiple seals of legitimacy were stamped upon the cream-colored surface. Nothing would usually lend any special quality to a mere aspect of the protocol, and yet the entire patrol huddled in that cramped little side street felt the significance of the identification looming over them more than the wind carrying the weight of the coming rain of the emergency bells and sirens now blaring throughout the city.

Of the six previous ponies murdered in an equally similar fashion, crimson crystals and all, Charley Horse was the only one that could be identified: thus providing the true start to investigating the serial murders weighing upon Manehattan.

Author's Note

This is the teen version of my story Stay Golden which has been languishing in Fanfic Development Hell since 2016. This version is free of all the gory details (quite literally) hence the teen rating. Because of Stay Golden's nature as a crime story, this means some fairly important details mostly revolving around the bodies were left in the other version.

I've done my best to have this version be an edited and enjoyable version of the other mature story, but it's a bit different from how Halfway Mare's teen version just had a different ending.

Chapter 2: Marigold Blueblood

Marigold Blueblood was a name that nopony wanted to remember, especially the House of Blueblood themselves. On their neat and prim family tree, this little flower was nothing but a weed from the start that had cost the brother of the then-current head his place in the household. Even though Marigold herself was a name that was meant to be forgotten to these nobles for more than just the scandal of her birth, soon Equestria itself would want to curse her name half the time and just beg that she be forgotten the remaining portion.

Marigold, like all foals, wasn't born with any proof of what she would grow up to be. Maybe somewhere in her mind was the latent shallowness that had been known to affect some members of the Blueblood house, or it could have been something all her own, which the staunchly moral Bluebloods wished had been the more popular rumor.

Rumors were how all of Canterlot came to know of Marigold Blueblood before she even entered the world and the first rays of light that she would ever see touched her wicked eyelids.

The two Blueblood Brothers — as they had been popularly known in their time before the younger's disinheriting. They were two of the stuffiest stallions in the century before the return of Princess Luna at the end of Celestia's Millennium. Palladium was the elder and heir to an ornamental house, only in succession because of an archaic tradition that few bothered to follow. He was average and unremarkable except for the wealth he was surrounded by from the first day of his life. Unlike his younger brother and baby sister, Platinum VII, he was groomed to sit on a large sum of money and whatever gossip passed for politics in Princess Celestia's social court that only acted as a foil to the crown jewel, Celestia, no matter how much ponies could forget that.

Platinum had yet to grow up and realize that she had been given a gods-awful repeat of a name that only her house would ever praise, as empty as those words would be and about as original as her parent's naming 'sensibilities'.

The middle brother to both and the younger to the heir Duke Pallas was Rhodium — or Dee for short. If there was anything Dee hated more than anything it was stopping to think about the decisions he made. He was the epitome of recklessness and rash decisions.

How he got through life was a joke among the high ponies of Canterlot and a problem in his family, who only hoped that all their efforts would pay off and he'd be responsible and mature at some point with his siblings' help.

With Pallas' help, Rhodium was able to convince a sensible and wealthy businessmare to marry him. For Pallas, Platinum, and the rest of the Bluebloods this was all they could hope for.

And then Rhodium met Petunia Petals, a young and equally reckless earth pony mare. She was a tourist from the fledgling village of Ponyville.

It wasn't long before all of northeast Equestria spat at their names and Rhodium Blueblood was only Rhodium, disgraced unicorn and there was nopony at his side now as news of the first affair in Equestria in centuries.

One year later, Petunia Petal gave birth to a little filly she named Marigold, the false addition of Blueblood hanging after the little filly who was hidden away in the Manehatten streets so nopony would recognize her and her mother, despite the name of that followed Marigold.

The forest of Equestria was about to meet the blight of the Bluebloods.

But first she had to grow up...

Author's Note

This was the original first chapter of the story that has been languishing for so long. I've had this deleted and brought back a few times while it was unpublished. Only recently have I been able to revive and bring this story back to life, with more content than I ever originally planned for it. The Missing Pages entry it got was so meager, and for years I kept Marigold Blueblood as an echo of lore in other stories.

Now I finally get to tell her story, and what I estimate (fairly better than how I estimated Enemy of Mine's official projected word length to be around 90k) somewhere under 50,000 words. I've decided to broaden the focus of this story a lot to more than just Marigold's life, but to add things from a whole cast of other characters to give the storyline better flow, more to follow, and more impact and angles. It's going to be a horrific, bloody mess, but hopefully it will be a fun one.

Since literal years have passed in the making of this story, I figured that it would be good to note some of the inspirations and other bits of interest. After all, it has been some time since I've worked on a longer story properly that wasn't just Enemy of Mine and I am pretty proud of this one, after much cleaning it up and getting to stand back and see what it's been.

In terms of stories on the site, there is one pony crime piece that comes to mind as a chief inspiration, favorite, and influence on lots of lore and headcanon. Though it's unfinished, and likely will be so, I can't not recommend it enough:

TUnder A Silver Moon

MLP: FiM

Dark

Horror

Mystery

Princess Luna, Discord, and Special Agent Word Smith travel into the dark side of Canterlot to find a killer.

Celestia

Luna

OC

Discord

Danger Beans · 33k words  ·  58  1 · 1.2k views

In terms of real-life crime concepts and situations, a few famous crimes come to mind. I've considered their influence on the story in bits and pieces, since crime stories of any kind generally start to resemble each other in one way or another without intention, but a few things were looked at intentionally in the making of this.

I'm going to note particular inspirations for crime and crime concepts in the author's notes of chapters that feature the more spoiler-y future ones, but the ones throughout the story are: the crimes and situation of the "Jack the Ripper" murders (heavy influence on urban setting; to the point where I referred to Marigold as "lesbian Jack the Ripper" in the making of this), female murders having a greater likelihood of using other weapons, Jane Toppan (general persona), Ed Gein (weird childhood; other elements), Victorian society and its relationship with crime (played straight and inverted, partly because, y'know, Equestria), and all-around freak (though, all these people were freaks; he's just lesser known) Richard Trenton Chase.

There's actual fucking research that went into this story. Like, a lot. Forgot the general knowledge of crime, law enforcement, forensics, and all that sorta stuff I will sometimes try and flex on you, I went overboard with this. I literally was researching murder-related things for horse puns.

It's entirely justifiable for me to be on a watch list for that by now, I think.

But that aside, due to some of the grisly inspirations and information, I'm not sure if every chapter will have an adaptation for the teen version here. I'll try my best!

Chapter 3: Trigger Happy

The bell to Gerel’s shop chimed, and at the sound of it, his breath caught in his beak. Excitement filled his lungs. So rare was that melody during the rainy season when the Manehattan neighborhood of New Shirdal received fewer tourists. The artifacts of the griffon homeland always drew many a window shopper, when Gerel still bothered to tantalize them with the sight of his Shirdalian artifacts in the window that is. That was before he realized window shopping was too generous, too easily done for free, and that Manehattan was a city of good guards, bad thieves, and poor griffons like him who didn’t fully realize what they were getting into by leaving their island homeland.

Maybe one day he would finally pack up his many treasures and see how gullible the griffons in the Griffonstone colony were, and if those who never knew the wind of an aerie under their wings or the sight of island coasts would be gullible and soft enough to hear his sales pitches galore.

Gerel’s feathers ruffled with delight and he placed his large, curved talons atop the glass of his display case. He began to drum them upon the thick pane with practiced ease, waiting for the sound of hoofsteps to reveal their owner.

Eventually, a little pony mare pushed her way past copper-headed spears, feather jewelry, baskets woven with gold patterns, and a variety of other gleaming wares. Across her cheeks and muzzle were painted freckles of gold and her mane and tail of orange-gold held a feathered fascinator while earrings like sundrops hung from her ears, multiple rings and clips crowding each one.

Her eyes watched him, their color as brutal as sunfire. She smiled with a distant glee and curtsied with the elegance of a born paraplegic given motion for but a few seconds. Everything about her, from the yellow skirt that covered her mark to the gold-trimmed ruffles of her scarf, reeked of an imitation of wealth. Yes, she was more dolled-up than most ponies that came to his shop, but she was not the gleam and shine that griffon claws craved. He knew a good customer, as all griffons knew how to hunt something as gorgeous as wealth like they hunted goats.

“Good day, Mister Griffon. I see that you sell artifacts of your homeland here?” Her accent was more nasal and horrid than most ponies of the city, riddled with the holes of quintessential urban ugliness. Her lips were contorted forward in a way a beaked creature like Gerel found even less natural than normal pony ways of speaking.

He was already filled with the flash-forwards of how she might slaughter the ‘r’ from the end of her words. “Good day, miss. You have seen true. Is there any piece I might interest you in?”

She said ‘griffon’ in the same manner the unarmored earth ponies such as herself told him to ‘go back to Griffonstone’. As if he could be from such a place! Still, few had the odd false glitter of a mare like her, with her voice too loud to offer any hope that she might have more than shabbiness under all the crisp gilded highlights pained in her mane and short-cut tail.

“Why, I find this to be an intriguing trinket.” The way she pronounced the ‘t’ of every word made him consider pulling a few feathers out to stuff his ear-slits. Or, at the very least, close up shop and head to the pub early.

Gerel’s only solace came from her accent not bearing the uneducated stench of Tartarus’ Kitchen, where the worst of any animal in this city lived.

She pointed almost forcibly, gesturing to the case his talons rested on. Inside was a shining array of what ponies called Griffish dueling pistols. They were laid out to give full range to show off the enticing color of their metals: silver, bronze, gold, and more. The contraptions were all but useless to ponies except as mantelpieces and paltry equalizers in non-magical duels among unicorns. An earth pony like herself would only find mileage by purchasing such an exotic piece to start conversations.

“I see,” he responded, lathering up his voice with false intrigue. Already, it sounded like he was applauding her for a purchase not yet made.

Her eyes hungered for the gold-accented pistol before Gerel could flaunt his full selection of merchandise. “You would not happen to sell the other accessories for these contraptions, would you?”

There was a whisper of astonishment in her voice, like a mare with eyes that devoured like hers could not believe that he could carry the very ‘accessory’ — goodness, she really was a brain-dead sort — that made this more than a particularly tacky tool to bludgeon with.

“No madam, Gerel’s Grand Griffish Goods does not stock ammunition of any variety. My shop is one meant to showcase many of the authentic crafts of Shirdalian Island to Equestrian ponies. If you want a dealer in weapons, I am not the griffon to seek.”

What was she? Certainly not a prostitute, they were an even lesser lot than she. This mare at least offered the impression that she might be literate, and she was willing to be seen in daylight. No prostitute would do such a thing, and their stench was notorious. This mare could bathe herself and had meat on her bones. Unless she was hiding scars and ribs under those fine clothes — too close to the garb of a proper mare of wealth than a pitiless whore — he could find little to suggest he grab the guards from the nearest street corner and have her infested flank hauled to a station under suspicion of such a nasty crime.

“Ah,” said the mare, tilting her head so her eyes glittered all the more peculiarly, “I have no need for the other accessories. However, I am intrigued by this piece of yours.”

She had approached his case and drew her forehoof upon the surface in relaxed circles, leaving smudges. With much of the distance between them closed, Gerel could see that she might not be a mare at all. Under all her gold trimmings she looked to be nearing marehood — not in it. Only her louder, deeper accent that added to her vulgarity helped create an illusion of age.

“A weapons dealer I am not,” Gerel said, arching a feathered brow, “but do you have any proof of age to make such a purchase?”

She smiled kindly at him, batting her eyelashes so they framed her red-glowing irises just so. The mare tugged her elaborate gold-threaded shawl laden with noisy trinkets closer around her withers, so anything below her high-necked ruffles was hidden. The mare rested a hoof over her throat, where something might have lain under the fabric she bunched up and held with her hoof in the flawed imitation of sophistication.

“I am a mare of bits and well past the age for such a thing, as you can see. Now, Mister Gerel, I do not know how you treat the hens of your island so far away. That concerns me not. What you must know is that in Equestria, a mare is not asked about her age! It is a big, big offense!”

She uttered her last sentence with a girlish gasp that prompted Gerel to rub at his eyes and the ruby tint of his vision. How could such a mature mare hold such effortless expressions of youth?

“The pistol is one hundred and twenty bits. Everything about it is talon-crafted and not one bit less would be proper for a tool like it. Do you think I would sell gold leaf excuses? Madam, I am a griffon, and we resort to no such dishonor. Only real metals are dealt with in this establishment.”

While humming atrociously off-key, the mare withdrew the necessary sum of lovely gold bits from a tough, worn coin-purse so unlike the rest of her clothes with her ruby red magical aura. She laid each one out for Gerel to count gleefully. When all was said and done, the mare flashed him another flutter of her eyelashes, made all the more epileptic than seductive from the concrete layers of golden eyeshadow she caked on them.

The bell to his shop rang again, signifying that his customer had left. Her magic had deposited her new purchase into her overly decorated mare’s saddlebags — something so horrendous that they had to be a custom order, as no respectable pony designer would have crafted something even he knew was a fashion abomination.

Soon, the ruby light in Gerel’s amber eyes had dimmed. His recollection of the day’s transactions faded into the usual humdrum fog of shopkeeping. Why would it not?

All in all, nothing had been out of order.

Author's Note

For anyone wondering what kind of accent and other speech habits our little horse Victorian lady has, the accent I have for her is a Bronx accent. While the neighborhoods don't quite correlate with real-life NYC (Manehattan is one island, among other things) I did torture myself by watching various examples of New York City's accents in order to work out, particularly to work out which one Marigold might have.

The physical mannerisms described with Marigold here are based on what you need to do to pronounce the Bronx accent. However, not only can I not imagine how incorporating what most people know as a Bronx accent would work with the Victorian era horses (seriously, who the fuck knows what Victorian-era New Yorkers sounded like? Or how that would translate to writing?), I do believe that this is enough of a horror story that I don't need to stick the cruel and unusual punishments of NYC accents in here too.

Chapter 4: Gunpowder Gloom

Author's Note

SOME OF THE ORIGINAL VERSION'S CHAPTER WAS AIGHT ENOUGH TO SHOW HERE SO HERE'S THE WARNING THAT HAS BEEN COPIED OVER FOR ALL THE SHITTY IMPLICATIONS FOUND IN THE ORIGINAL/ACTUALLY EXPLICIT VERSION (THOUGH THEY'VE OBVIOUSLY BEEN EDITED AND TONED DOWN HERE)

Pre-chapter content warning (for those who want it): rape/prostitution/a minor buying a prostitute, pedophilia, children being exposed to sexually inappropriate situations, indecent horse exposure(?), allusions to illness, abuse (physical/sexual) of a very young child, abuse of an adult, a teenager who breaks Romeo & Juliet laws, also adults that break those too, cutting, allusions to more abuse, lots of scars, a bad pony who likes to degrade and humiliate others, very bad ponies, death, etc. (violence/gore/non-con/sex/profanity/death/self-harm/narcotics)

I'm fucking trash at anatomy terms, so have this attempt to make the mature/original version's chapter of the same name into something safe for work.

Here's the link to the horse thing on healthy horse weight. Fjordham is a shitty horse pun on the neighborhood of Fordham in NYC, which generally ranks among the worst neighborhoods to live in, even by NYC standards.

Copied from mature version: For anyone wondering about the details of Marigold's pistol, it's based off a Colt. Why? A few reasons: horse puns, the derpibooru image tag lists is as a something way too advanced/out of place so I had to look up stuff regarding that and chose something that worked better, flintlocks did not feel particularly appropriate, the sound of a colt firing is rather loud, I say based off of because I know very little about firearms if I got something wrong in the freaking published version I am so sorry

Chapter 4: Gunpowder Gloom

Marigold Blueblood blinked her ruby-flooded gaze and smiled like a pumpkin damn near split open on Nightmare Night.

“Oh my,” she cooed. “How lovely my new toy is!”

The teenager itched with the urge to slip a frolic into her step, but the skirt she wore today was rather stiff, and she did not want to risk tearing another. Seamstresses were nothing but slavers with the rates they charged, entirely undeserving of what they charged on a service deserved by all. Many were also uppity unicorns or earth ponies managing ludicrously fancy sewing machines that they insisted needed this upkeep and that, daring to treat Marigold Blueblood as if she were not a fellow earth pony, but instead a mere customer. Those were traitors to the earth pony cause if there ever were any. Despite all the power she had received from her dear artifact, the delicacy needed for sewing was still something quite beyond her capabilities.

Marigold pawed at the hard lump under her shawl, letting the horn-less aura from it flare briefly and tugged at her stiff, hock-length skirt. The ruffled edge of the underskirt poking out looked too bright and starched in the coming dusk. Gaudiness attracted Marigold like a fly was drawn to sugar water, but tonight she wanted just a smidge of secrecy.

Marigold’s brow furrowed as if in pain. She squeezed her eyes shut to hide the light and focus on the throbbing ache that drummed in her skull as she demanded magic do its work. A plain black rain cloak rested over her golden attire, half-translucent with the suddenness of the conjuration and never solidifying entirely due to Marigold’s weak newness to the art. By the gods so rotten, she was still such an amateur. No matter how fantastical her precious artifact was, she still was on shaky leaps and bounds. It still covered all of her perfect ensembles and gave her shaky telekinesis a place to conceal her weapon. The paleness she suffered from after her feat was well-hidden by the dark accessory, as was Marigold’s disgust when she felt the heel of her glamorous laced-up boot squelched into something dreadful.

Hissing through gritted teeth, she jammed her pistol into her saddlebags harshly, her magic losing the peculiar sense of the inner mechanics of the strange contraption, fading from the bizarre way where they traced themselves under her skull. Lately, any time she grabbed at something with magic, the unthought-of complexities of the process produced such an effect and buzzed in her skull differently each time she gripped something. This caused some bizarre sixth sense, one adjacent to touch to create the queerest series of pressure, as though something was worming around in her brain. Was this how unicorn filth felt? Did they get the sensation that there was something picking at their brains and working with them to make their magic happen?

Lifting up her hoof, Marigold could see that what was stuck to the sole of her hoof might have excrement mixed in with it, at least judging by the foul order. Equine excrement. There was also the noxious scent of something that smelled suspiciously like what the older fillies who loitered too much in the bathroom liked to sip out of the stupidest looking jug when they thought Marigold had left. She couldn't hide her gag.

What could she really expect in this part of town? There were efforts to keep all of Manehattan clean, from rottenness and rotten ponies alike, but parts of the city were not patrolled by Celestia’s gold-clad army as much as they should have been. Bad routes and other mortal failings gave way to pockets of corruption and isolation so perfect for one Miss Marigold Blueblood.

Thick, dirty windows always had the curtains drawn in this part of town. Those who had such windows would place large furniture in front of them and stuff gaps with rags to block out the sound. Boards were often hammered carelessly to the interior sides as well, and it was always junk wood or some horribly smelly driftwood pulled from the bay harbor surrounding Manehattan Island — though, that was less common since the harbors were not crawling with any criminals except the odd smuggler. Marigold knew that the Royal Guard always patrolled the docks carefully and that the only kind of whores that lurked there were the ones that would be arrested quickly or the kind that their water-logged remains pulled out of the sea.

Trash was piled high and overflowing from the bins it was carelessly stuffed in, each barrel more terrible in its stench than the last. The shadow of the Liberty Mare was far from here, and rightfully so. No liberty dwelt here, only perversions and the ponies who fell to them. To Marigold Blueblood, it was exactly what she needed, and she happily quickened her step to a canter.

These ugly streets with apartment blocks that bleed and lumped into one another instead of merely being a wall-to-wall sprawl held the perfect ponies for her plans. There were no scrubbed bricks, balconies, businesses, or neighbors here. Center Park was distant and unheard of among the small-minded, secluded residents. Those that snagged spaces in these half-abandoned flats were transient and without community. The nearest schools were beyond blocks away, but they had to be because Princess Celestia declared it so. When the sun peeked over this particular web of streets and alleys, they would be empty and the rich rolling hills of the Continent would go unseen; only the shadows of despairing apartment rises would be cast upon this space.

Marigold approached one such building, marveling at the scent of wet plaster that spilled out. The building itself seemed to creak as she rapped her hoof on the door.

No response. Marigold let out a hissing breath through her teeth. Impatience was making her blood run hot.

She knocked again, and the sound of hooves stomping came from inside. Rusted chains rattled and the door was pulled, then slammed again. A wheezing voice cursed from inside. More chains rattled and the sound of fumbling hooves followed. Eventually, Marigold caught sight of a leg through a crack, and the door was pulled open.

The sight of a mare once-healthy greeted her. Purple eyeshadow was applied thicker than paste to blend in with recent bruising around her eyes. She made a face that Marigold learned was called a prostitute's smile: yellowed teeth, thin unnaturally black spots on the gums, a few brown molars peeking through, and the stench of gods-knew-what escaping her mouth like a miasma.

Once, on a trip to a boardwalk with her mother, Marigold had found a dead fish that had been dropped by a gull or some other sea-bird. The heat had ensured the sun-bleached, half-rotted beast smelled as terrible as possible. That fish still wasn't nearly as awful as the odor of this mare.

The sleeves of her dress were ragged and showed rings of rope burn around her legs. The bruises on her throat peeked out from the high collar of her dress. Once, its expensive and fashionable state would have been obvious. Now, it had fallen into a state of skimpy alterations and ruined which made it unwearable in public.

The mare angled herself so she blocked the door horizontally. Weird blackish wounds stretched across her legs, clearly some kind of infection from the excessive chafing of her ridiculous fishnets. Even though her cheeks were thin under the incorrectly colored makeup palette dumped on her scabby face, her hindquarters looked swollen with ugly red marks. They peeked out from beneath the crisscross of her cheap, ugly fishnets.

Marigold felt a fidgety feeling making her forehooves itch.

All in all, she was fairly healthy as far as most mares and stallions in her criminal field. The distinct signs of other illnesses appeared to be absent from her.

Her dull, glassy eyes looked over Marigold, visibly confused.

“'ow old ye?” she hissed, voice thin with what was left of the youth her appearance lacked.

“Fourteen,” Marigold answered honestly, sweetly. “But that rarely matters to a whore like you, does it?”

The nameless mare narrowed her eyes. And really, they were all nameless. If the pony was not a lone participator in self-exploitation, as the law dubbed that branch of crimes, they would be nothing more than the nameless chattel under a pimp or madam running their own multi-pony criminal establishment. That was what all the library's criminal history books said, as well as the word on the street that Marigold had picked up.

It was only those chattel sorts that might carry a name. But for a pony like this? A mare disconnected from any family for years, without a lover, who slaps a vulgar name on herself to make up for being a worthless grown blankflank and sells herself, desperate for any bits as and caught up in a horrible cycle of letting anypony who buys her do anything to her? She was utterly nameless. A cog in a pattern that only Marigold and any who committed the crime of purchasing a pony knew. Nopony had to know what she might have really been called, or the little innuendo she gave herself. They just had to pay her by the hour and take the risk she would not be as sick as another mare or stallion that might be in the same building, or caught up in the identical cycle of self-destruction.

She would not do anything if her buyer beat her too bad, or had their vicious way with her, not as long as she had the bits in the end. Both of them were familiar with the sides of the crime they participated in. It was not like this mare could run to the Royal Guard without being held on charges of her own — that was a shred of leverage Marigold absolutely treasured. Yes, they would lock any buyers up if they were successfully caught and tried for such a thing. None of that changed that this whore-mare would have to pay in time with a side trial of her own, for there was no immunity from certain severe kinds of offense… and her regular, sexual offense aside, statutory rape cost any creature their head. Why did any of that matter? Because it gave Marigold her much-craved power; because the thought of mutual sabotage was just that tantalizing.

“Ye bet'er 'ave bits!” demanded the mare with as much force as a whore like her could have. When what stood over Marigold looked like she was three steps away from being a skeleton, that wasn't much.

“Oh, I do,” Marigold whispered, tugging her shawl under her cloak to ward off the night’s chill. “One might ask how old you are as well. Come on, tell me. Does anypony ever ask?”

“'ourse naw,” scoffed the mare, “they pay and be done. I ‘m nin’een, t'ough.” She was too dumb to lie, really, and the obviousness of that was painfully clear. Most were like that, or so Marigold had learned. Even at her ripe old age — if whores had a ripe old age — gathered a few years of experience.

When Marigold slipped a hoof under her cloak, she flipped it over and showed off the coin purses spilling bits upon bits inside. “I think I have more than enough.”

When the whore caught a peek of the shine of bits in the dark, her expression went into a limp, drooling, sort of dullard's bliss. “Y-Ye d-o.”

Marigold wanted to smirk; this was always what got them. Bits overrode dignity, paving the path to whatever villainy Marigold wished.

“How much for three hours?”

“Ye ken 'ave t'ree days wi' bits 'ike 'at.” Only the most psychotic of buyers would try to spend three days straight with their purchase.

“No. Three hours.” Marigold fixed the whore with a cruel stare until the malnourished mare was quavering. “Nothing more. I am the buyer, am I not?”

“Ye be buyin’, missy,” whimpered the whore. “Bits get ye whae’er ye wan's.”

“Of course it does,” Marigold said breathily, her tone filled with the floaty, unaggressive girlishness nopony would ever think to question. After all, there was no such thing as one of these kinds with standards; they could not make money unless they let buyers do whatever they wanted. Ponies wouldn't risk their dignity to be branded a sex offender by touching such filth as her unless there were an absolute condition to solidify their allure. “Now, I think it is best I actually get what I aim to pay for, yes?”

The prostitute lowered her ears in surrender, taking a hoof and patting her gelled-solid streaks that passed for an imitation of curls. The strands that strayed from that encasement were frizzy from telltale abuse of cheap dyes. Such was a habit rarely done by ponies outside of costumes and parties, but mares and stallions like the mare before Marigold would get cheap stuff for their manes and coats to hide their true identity. It was just another way to ruin themselves. All the packages said that drug store and over the sink dyes were harmful in excess... and to have ponies who were stupid enough to re-apply it weekly were going far, far beyond whatever the dye creators had in mind.

Marigold followed her inside, paying half a mind to how the door was locked for when she alone would need it later. Her pistol was a pleasant weight in the saddlebag opposite of her coins. She watched the whore hobble up the stairs; the distinct quality to her limp only meant one thing: certain mares of her crime were known to acquire that gait when they fell to a certain condition — and were able to survive without dying from the final struggle with the ‘consequence’ alone, eleven months later. That was, of course, provided they had not managed a homemade attempt at termination — one that they also had to survive, of course. That came with its own complications too, and Marigold had saved the newspaper clippings that told of the horror stories: unsuspecting landlords and neighbors following a scent to its ghastly source.

Marigold could only give her sweetest smile, letting her roving eyes devour the sign of obvious weakness. Even if she was too good for these dusty, narrow hallways that tilted down at her with their narrowness, there was a chance that she might be rewarded doubly tonight. If the owners only knew the horrors that went on in the homes they struggled to keep well — the newspaper headlines only made it so much more obvious that the up and coming landlords who got stuck with these places had no idea that they rented to bottom of the barrel ponies. Those that did know would later have to face criminal charges for facilitating sexual offenders.

The sound of ponies in pain all accompanied by the occasional thud reached the filly’s ears. She suspected that a few of the higher sounds might be sobs, and there was a chance they could belong to somepony her age or younger. But Marigold's reading and dealings told her that was no surprise. What did spark her curiosity was that this apartment was probably a brothel-by-night and the first she had come across. Marigold knew what it sounded like to strike a pony as hard as possible through the thin walls of these places by now. She was not the kind of filly to cringe from the degrading language or sounds of violence she heard. In fact, it put a skip in her trot as she bounded up the stairs.

Her imagination swirled with the thought of what this wretched building might pass as during the daytime. Was it just another dour low-rent bloc the Royal Guard had yet to haul evil out of? Or perhaps something more sinister? Was the landlord — or lady, Marigold suspected either worked — somepony who came by often or even endorsed the depravity that happened behind these doors as soon as the sun sank below the horizon?

Eventually, Marigold and the whore came to a weathered wooden door that had known better days, but was otherwise quite sturdy once one saw past the weathered face. Two battered bronze numbers reading ‘75’ could no longer shine, even if all the drifting clouds of dust had let them.

The whore was wheezing from the climb alone. Her thin hooves clumsily fumbled with her key a dozen times before she managed to use her disgusting mouth to twist the cold, heavy iron. Then she drove her wither hard into the wood to budge it open, wincing with pain from the impact. Marigold figured that she probably had at least some splinters stuck in her skin beneath the torn dress she wore.

Marigold made no effort to hide the noise she made or how she sucked in one big breath to prepare for the smell. Her cheeks pushed out, the sparkling freckles she painted on her face moved with her, like gaudy constellations. After making sure her boots would be safe from more damage, she stepped inside, following her whore.

[This edition of the Manehattan Times appeared in 8XX of the Solar Millenium, during the early murders of the Manehattan Blood Mage. It can be found at many locations including the Times archives, Manehattan public libraries, and the Canterlot Archives. The subject matter of sexual offenses and violence meant that this content could not make the front page. Princess Celestia had decreed during the dawn of newspapers that ponies were to be faced with the good news first and that displaying material that was disturbing, sexual, or violent in public was a crime almost as severe as knowingly giving a minor explicit content.]

BORDELLO BANISHED! GHASTLY DOUBLE MURDER UNCOVERED! FOALS RESCUED!

by Front Feature

Two days ago, a series of ghastly discoveries were made in an apartment bloc bordering Tartarus’ Kitchen and Fjordham. An anonymous mail-stallion was delivering packages in the neighborhood when he noticed a most horrendous smell coming from one of the seventh-story windows as he was dropping a package off at a fourth-story balcony. The window was reportedly open and he flew inside. The stallion told Times staff that he wished to ensure that the resident was safe from any noxious chemical spills that may have happened and that he had ‘never smelled anything so sun-forsaken before’ in my interview with him.

I had asked him what made him so eager to do such a thing.

“Back in my hometown of [REDACTED],” he explained, “neighbors check up on each other. The community cares. It is just something you do. Goodness knows that it is something Princess Celestia would want us all to do too. I know that Fjordham has a problem with self-exploitation and it only felt right to make sure nopony had been hurt by some gods-forsaken whores.”

I nodded at the time, asking him to describe his findings as tactfully as possible.

“Sweet Celestia, I have never seen anything so ghastly!” he told me, having wiped his eyes of tears again. “They were like rags and moldy food just left to rot! Birds and other critters had gotten in and done a number on them. Nopony forgets a sight like that! Oh, the blood! All the blood! I was ready to faint, for I saw they had no eyes! The birds took them!”

He explains to me between tears that he felt himself snap after the sight, flying around the neighborhood until he found a Royal Guard. The guard, whose identity shall not be disclosed, said the pegasus approaching them was ‘hysterical and terrified’ and went on to add ‘like all of Tartarus was after him’.

It does appear that Tartarus was closer than they thought. As soon as the Royal Guard arrived at the scene, the answer to why such heinous violence went unreported became obvious. The following apartment complex located at West Sunburst Way and Fifth-On-Sunrise. Royal Guard had to enter by force and determined that the bodies had been there for over forty-eight hours. When the guards knocked upon the doors of neighbors, they discovered a greater horror: the building was being abused as a brothel to facilitate self-exploitation.

The information released so far has at least seventeen confirmed prostitutes that have now been brought under the Royal Guard’s custody for property crimes, health violations, illegal acquisition of rental services, self-exploitation, violating antisocial laws, and more. All of them are mares. According to the Times’ legal consultant, each prostitute is facing up to forty years in prison as a minimum, with all possible pleas and parole revoked due to the severity of self-exploitation. Those that have any potential to ever be released one day will have all their records made public and be forced to register as sex offenders, as well as the mandatory sterilization for such despicable criminals at the Gelding Grotto facilities in accordance with the Equestrian Law on the Regulation and Management with Sapient Monsters and international agreements on how to punish sexual offenders. A further article will be published when that step in the case is reached.

During the bust, at least three foals were rescued. They are safe in Royal Guard custody, but far from healthy. Each is older than the estimated age of the deceased, unidentified foal found slain in the seventh-floor apartment. The oldest is estimated to be around four years old. I was unable to secure an interview directly with her. Instead, I was able to speak with a pediatrician who has been evaluating the filly and gave the following information:

She is an unregistered foal, born to one of the wicked mares captured in the bust.

She has yet to be able to eat solid foods. She is highly malnourished.

Her speech capabilities are minimal and mostly manifest as crying, whimpering, or repeating the vulgarities she was addressed with by her excuse for a mother.

The filly was indeed sold out by the mother.

One of her legs will need to be amputated due to how she was kept.

Her eyesight is poor due to being found restrained in a closet.

Her dental decay is pronounced.

Among the few things she knows how to say is making a curious booming noise that is always followed by a shriek.

She is reported to have had surgery to correct scars around her neck left by a pet collar.

The respiratory issues from said collar could be corrected with further surgery as she gets older.

The hope for her ever being able to read is slim.

The filly currently resides in an unspecified foal’s hospital in the Bucklyn Bay Area. She is not receiving visitors that are not professionals. To find out how you can donate to this young filly and other foals in need of charity because of the horror of self-exploitation, please turn to page 14 in the third panel.

One of the other foals rescued is an infant colt. There is evidence showing that he has severe cranial and brain damage from where the monstrous prostitute keeping him tried to damage his horn. The injury is consistent with if the baby was dropped many times or had his head slammed upon something. The doctors attending to him have pronounced it unlikely he will ever be able to even perform telekinesis due to his chipped, deformed horn. His dental records are consistent with a pony who has had access to dentistry and his physical condition is reportedly suggestive that he may have been foalnapped by the vicious pervert whose clutches he was found in. The Royal Guard will be accepting any and all tips related to missing and abducted foals.

The last foal is another colt whose condition, while atrocious, is less severe than the other two. The wings of the young pegasus were tied together, permanently disfiguring them. This colt has been described as only a few weeks old and bears the same signs of malnutrition on the filly. While there is no evidence he was sold, there is extensive bruising across the body that indicate severe physical abuse and starvation were presented. The doctors responsible for this little one also confirmed that he is also unregistered and the monster who birthed him confessed to plans of future trafficking.

If convicted, she and the others responsible for the torture and violation of these foals will be facing charges for foal abuse, neglect, foal trafficking, attempting to retain a minor as a sex offender, and enough to ensure that on top of self-exploitation they will find themselves in one place. That place is kneeling at the hooves of Her Royal Highness, the Morning Star, Princess Celestia with an execution hood on each of their heads. The Manehattan Times have already been flooded with many letters containing prayers for the death of these monsters and that justice is served for the damage they have done to Manehattan and their young victims.

All the bits seized from the complex will be evaluated to see if any evidence can point the Royal Guard in the direction of the villains who purchased these ponies so that they may be brought into guard custody too. Once they have been sufficiently analyzed, the bits will be used to pay for the destruction of the apartment complex and fund rebuilding it. Please turn to page 15 to find out how you can donate to help rebuild this community into one safe from self-exploitation with homes for all Princess Celestia’s law-abiding subjects. The landlord is currently under investigation and the guard has currently not released word on whether they have played any part in the evil deeds done within the walls of their property.

The only word that the Times has been able to learn about the double-slaying is that the adult murdered was involved in self-exploitation. The murdered colt was her offspring and victim. Royal Guards has currently released the statement that the scene was indicative of a brief struggle. Reddish crystals found at the scene suggest ties to other recent Manehattan slayings, though no confirmation exists yet. All bits exchanged were taken, and so far the Royal Guards are only willing to release that it is likely the slaying was motivated by perverse lusts and robbery.

The Royal Guard has urged all law-abiding ponies of Manehattan to follow these cases as closely as possible. While the reports from the autopsy of the two slain are not yet finished, there is much a pony can do to halt the spread of self-exploitation. Please turn to page 16 to find out ways to identify a possible prostitute, where to donate, your local Mares Against Monsters chapters, and all the ways to turn in sexual offenders and prevent them from thriving within your community. Mayor-Stallion Fair Heart has decreed that the request for higher deployment from the most gracious Princess Celestia has been accepted. New troops will begin patrolling the streets of all neighborhoods that have been having higher rates of self-exploitation shortly.

[Excerpts from the original notes of coroner Ebony Henbane of the Morgue of the City of Manehattan and Fort Barnacle to aid in the investigation of a string of serial murders spanning two and a half years, made to be used by the Royal Guard with the official autopsies of the victims. Taken in the year 8XX of the Solar Millennium. All notes were used in the investigation of the Blood Mage of Manehattan. At the time, only three other murders were known. The following victims have no known identity, even in the present day and are referred to with the format given to all unknown victims following the pattern established after the slaying of another one of the Blood Mage's victims later on...]

Blood Mage Jane Doe #4

The first victim is an adult mare recovered from an apartment complex in Tartarus' Kitchen, along with the second victim's corpse. The adult female is believed to have been anywhere from sixteen to twenty-five years of age. She has no evidence of any sex-altering treatments or surgeries. She was an earth pony with no marks suggesting strong magical capabilities in life.

Severe decay in her tooth and gums meant she was unlikely to be able to speak without a severe speech problem. Her windpipe was damaged long before death from repeated abuse. While recent bruises were evident, her autopsy revealed her windpipe and many veins under jaw were damaged from abuse suffered in life. The mare would not have been able to breathe properly, and any who knew her would likely describe her as having asthma-like problems. Substantial internal damage was untreated, as were the rest of the mare's health problems, and the majority of damage to her throat and neck area were done through repeated attempts at choking with either hooves or foreign objects. The same bruises continued onto much of her back area.

Severe rope burn marred every one of the mare's legs and lower neck. The wounds were left untreated and reopened repeatedly from a period of at least two months prior to the mare's death. Other exterior signs of injury included various bald patches and whole-body skin infections from excessive chafing...

...obvious malnutrition left the mare close to skeletal... when weighed... scored a '1' on the Body Condition Scoring Scale, though all emaciation was noticeable.

...thighs, hips, and hindquarters were almost flayed from abuse in areas. Repeated scar tissue was mutilated in life and left incapable of healing. Numerous splinters were located beneath torn areas and scars made with an illegal item (likely a crop). Everything else was gored postmortem, providing very little details due to the condition of the body...

... the second victim is a positive match as an offspring to this victim using all available methods we have at hoof.

...repeated trauma suffered from a home birth and general carelessness and mistreatment would have left the mare with a strong limp. Unfortunately, 'mother' is too generous a term for what is very evidently a whore. I rule her cause of death is from the same kind of magical crystal lodged in her head. Unlike the first mare with these found in her, this was a relatively easy death compared to the unknown mare in Bali-Shet.

This mare could barely eat and was restrained before death. Whoever killed her was trusted enough (a term used lightly in the case of these wicked criminals) that they were let in and were able to pay. A unicorn buyer is the most likely due to the crystal and involvement of a foreign weapon not able to be determined as wing blades, anything hoof-held, or...

Though damaged by repeated use of poor products, the mare's coat color appeared to be a dark pink.

With all her conditions taken into consideration and the circumstances of her death, I believe that this mare was slain by a buyer who used her frequently. One of the severe illnesses of this mare was likely spread to her buyer, who took out their hateful nature on her when they learned of their condition.

Blood Mage Colt Doe #1

I care little that the murder of these two ponies led to that terrible apartment block being condemned. The arrests of so many terrible ponies in those walls mean little when I have to prepare what is left of a dead colt who never got to see his second birthday.

He barely had a head left, and what was left was still enough to tell me she sold him too. Gods. May his whore of a parent burn in Tartarus for her evils and the one who killed him join her. Elysium, take this little scrap to Paradise; I think I shall be ill if I note anything on this poor babe much longer.

His cause of death was identical to his parent's. The crystal was found. There was not much left to inflict post-mortem damage on.

Chapter 5: She's Spoiled Rotten

Something has gone wrong. We don't seem to have an archived copy of that chapter.

Chapter 6: The First Corpse

[Excerpts from the original notes of coroner Ebony Henbane of the Morgue of the City of Manehattan and Fort Barnacle. These were taken to aid in the investigation of a string of serial murders spanning two and a half years, made to be used by the Royal Guard with the official autopsies of the victims. Taken in the year 8XX of the Solar Millennium. All notes were used in the investigation of the Blood Mage of Manehattan. The following victims have no known identity. Even in the present day, they are referred to with the format given to all unknown victims following the pattern established after the slaying of another one of the Blood Mage's victims later on...]

Blood Mage Jane Doe #1 / Miss Bali-Shet

One pegasus mare's remains. Recovered in fairly poor condition from a brownstone in Balikun-Shetland, off of Derby Avenue. Identity unknown, but she was involved in self-exploitation, so it is to be expected. Had she been among the citizen dead in the morgue instead of criminal, it is likely this would not be the case. A torso and one hind leg are what the mare consists of; the remaining leg has been severely injured with numerous cuts from an array of kitchen knives. This is curious, as most butchering would be done with meat-cutting instruments in one of the carnivore shops in New Shirdal, and these injuries were made by no such knives.

The handling of the knives taken against the prostitute suggests a particularly spastic pony gripped the blade, as there was nothing neat in the process of violence. Because these particular injuries were inflicted while the prostitute was still living, her cause of death is exsanguination.

Any names or clues to what she called herself are unknown. No evidence of sex-altering treatments was discovered upon examination. Whether she had mixed blood or is of interspecies heritage is not known.

Most of her skin is missing, and what remains of her coat is damaged from various dyes and interaction with various insects. The vast majority of other wounds were given postmortem.

Severe malnutrition contributed to numerous broken bones not gained in late foalhood being unable to heal properly. Though I am without the qualifications to assess a corpse as her mind had been in life, I would guess that her lack of any cutie mark, injury patterns, the order of when they were inflicted, and her criminal activity all suggest she possessed a masochistic disorder when alive, and either refused any kind treatment entirely or found a way to bullshit herself out of any attempts to help her, no doubt insisting she was sound of mind. It is recommended that the investigating guard looks into records for any ponies treated for such conditions in Manehattan or the surrounding bay area during the last ten years. Somepony with this severe of an affliction was likely submitted into mental health treatment (either in-patient or out-patient) at some point in their life. Masochistic perversions are also exceedingly uncommon and require long-term attempts to correct.

She is twenty-two years of age, as her teeth and bones have been able to indicate. This is old for a whore, though it is worth noting that the heavy decay and numerous vertical dental fractures made this conclusion difficult to arrive at and she still remains impossible to identify. In life, she suffered heavily from bulimia and lacked enough healthy teeth to possibly match any dental records positively, which eliminates huge steps that could be made in her investigation.

A lack of any wing hygiene and repeated injury to wings sustained during life left them crippled and hideously disgusting in the disfigurements she allowed to be performed on herself. Evidence gleaned from their physical condition indicates the mare suffered from repeated encounters with feather plucking, wing pulling, and binding, among other highly harmful, illegal, and self-destructive practices. Despite her civilian status, she somehow managed to get access to the kind of banned props that would be needed to inflict such abuse. I do believe she would have had to disguise herself as an earth pony if she ever went out in public.

One silver hoop earring was recovered from an ear. Her teeth also are not terrible enough to suggest she had been able to fall beneath social services’ notice and live like that during the life she had before — her real life, if you will. If her family is still out there, anywhere in Equestria, or she had a friend who might recognize her as somepony from forever ago before any rot set in it is crucial to do sketches reconstructing her face for this reason. Her facial sketches could be recognized, if presented at various ages and with any realistic injuries she may have had at the time.

Physical evidence included an indication that the unknown mare's killer was another female that sexually assaulted her. The use of a weapon and the majority of disfigurement occurring in postmortem also is more fitting of a mare's modus operandus, further build the portrait of a killer. It is my personal belief that the offender is a unicorn mare with a sadistic disorder (no doubt with some kind of sexual features) and abnormal magical disorders or features that place them in an area of specialized talent. Any involvement by somepony with a medical background appears unlikely due to the sloppiness of many wounds.

Our nameless offender is not likely to be able to physically overpower anypony for unknown reasons and likely has resorted to trickery that got the whore to feel at ease, despite having likely purchased her for this intended purpose. Please be sure to bring this area of notes to anypony who knows a monster's mind, as I believe it will be of keen interest to them.

The history of breakages indicated the mare was either pulled into the crime since she was a teenager, which would suggest she was either a runaway or her guardians sold her out to the offending stock who had no conscious about purchasing another pony (child or not) and having their way with them. Had she been a runaway who managed to keep herself from falling into the usual period where her lot and their crimes of self-exploitation were swiftly shut down, the history of abuse would have remained unchanged in that theory of mine. The abuse she suffered in the long term would only fall squarely upon the withers of her buyers.

Affording a brownstone would mean she was able to hide much of her physical impairment and was likely very popular — an unfortunate case, as it meant there were now gods-know-how-many ponies walking free for their half of the crime of buying her. If her landlord was not close to the center of the investigation now, they ought to be, as they are the only known pony with a relationship to the victim. Even offering a fake name on papers could be a clue, if she had actually secured her residence upfront instead of trying to seek — or purchase — other loopholes. That should be among the top things to look into about this little fiend of a mare.

The neighborhood she was in did not match one high in sexual offenses; no other forms of self-exploitation had ever been busted there and no sexually motivated murders had occurred within the neighborhood’s borders. Bali-Shet was also a pure neighborhood, and it is illegal for any registered offenders like a non-acting pouláriphilic brute or an ex-participant in the crimes Miss Bali-Shet had lost her life doing. It is safe to say that she has had no previous run-ins with the law that would mark her as a sexual offender, or any kind that would lead to her being registered and barred from any particular areas of residence.

However, I would not put any crimes committed as a juvenile past her, and ask that any records on young pegasus offenders be submitted to me. Any promising ones I will be submitting a seal breach for, as anything contained in them could do a lot of good in putting a name to this mare I can only call Miss Bali-Shet. I pray to Celestia, Elysium, Stolas, and all other divines that there shall be any portraits within those records.

The greatest peculiarity in her murder lies in the crystals embedded throughout her. Their color is a deep ruby and there is uneasy dampness to them that never goes away, even when separated from the body. Along with her hoof clippings, mane clippings, and other samples, there is every need for multiple samples of these crystals to be submitted. If the aura behind the caster is to be identified, be they transient or native Manehattanite, then the Equestrian Arcane Registry Base must be given every sample possible in order for this cruel unicorn to be off the streets of my city! With Celestia as my witness, I will get my hooves on aural map results just to say with certainty that we have one.

Author's Note

Copied from the mature version: Any of the mores realistic errors regarding the stages of decomposition here are all on me. I know very little about how horses would decompose. I'm much more familiar with the stages of human decomposition, and any more dead bodies described in here are going to be using that set of stages because I seriously know so little about how tf a horse would decompose.

Also, Balikun-Shetland is a horse pun on Bedford–Stuyvesant, which is a neighborhood in Brooklyn. It's a combo of the name of the Balikun horse breed and the one for a Shetland pony. Derby Avenue is a reference to Lexington Avenue, a street in that neighborhood, being altered because Lexington > Kentucky > Kentucky Derby > Neighhhhh! Barnacle is a reference to a G1 pony of the same name and follows the same trend of having crown-controlled morgues near forts featured in Halfway Mare and its teen version, With Her Dead Eyed Stare. Bretonlyn Heights is also just Horse Brooklyn Heights using the Breton horse breed. Bucklyn is also an incredibly good horse pun. Even though it also means Brooklyn, I couldn't waste it. So, I decided to make it the name of one of the territories on the bay.

Chapter 7: Ruby Red / She Hangs Brightly

Marigold passed this street every day, and she had never seen this shop before. North Haflinger Street was a central Manehattan neighborhood with few shops, and here was one that had to be new. Yet, the gray cobble building was short, being only two stories tall, with a peaked roof and well-lit windows. A large lantern hung from a wrought-iron piece by the door, to be lit when Princess Celestia raised the moon over the world. Everything about its aesthetic and the building’s own obvious physical state was apparent: this was not a new establishment.

Admittedly, Marigold knew two things immediately. The first was that she would rather be over in the Broncos borough of Manehattan Island visiting Corona Park and spending her day along the shores of Buffalo Pond. Instead, she was made to run errands for her mother who was eager for new perfumes.

This shop had a sign in the window, the neat ink letters with a faint flair to them. Perfumes were buy two, get the third free. The twittermite jars at each end, propping up the window display cast a luminous glow more eye-catching than the ordinary firefly lanterns used by most shops, but below the more varied werelight displays the filthy unicorns would put throughout their establishments as a show of how pretentious they were.

Depending on the costs of the perfumes, Marigold could have enough bits left over to get something for herself. Three new perfumes would be enough to convince her mother that she spent all the bits she was allotted for this shopping trip on the old nag herself. It was not like she ever asked for the receipts when she had such an iron grip on all the bits in the household that Marigold couldn’t even manage to ‘save up’ more than three under her pillow before her mother would smell them out.

Then Marigold would be yelled at and her mother would ‘forget’ to buy some groceries for Marigold when she got off her lazy ass and actually took a carriage to the nearest store for groceries that weekend. Marigold never worked on weekends either, so she was never missing from anywhere when her mother would lock her in the apartment with her hooves hog-tied from country pony skill and placed on her back, kept from calling out.

Never touch mother’s money is what Marigold learned since the consequences were worse than having her mouth washed out with soap as a filly. Mother would make her do more cooking and cleaning out of spite after that, hobbling around the kitchen and looming over her daughter and watching her work the stove and prepare the food she would never get to taste, and her mother would keep Marigold from food knowing that her daughter might as well have been named Pansy Blueblood for how easy she could be starved into submission. So far, Marigold’s unfortunate record was three days.

Most of the time, she tried not to think about the way things were. Instead, she rubbed one hoof at her neck with the itching awkwardness of the thoughts, thankful that in one way she was a coward from years of early foalhood having little to nothing to eat in the first place. Even if it left her somewhat scrawny, she was still nowhere near the emaciated state that would get her mistaken for something worse — why, there was a filly in her grade that apparently starved herself willingly (Marigold would trade places with her in an instant) and was already getting mistaken for a whore, half-starved and prematurely aged.

Marigold didn’t know that filly’s name, but she knew that she feared the school or foal services would notice. With how pale she was, it was only a matter of time. Marigold hated the thought of foal services and whatever the plethora of crown-made organizations was that were meant to pluck foals in situations like Marigold’s from her home; if they got their hooves on her everypony would know she wasn’t really a rich mare’s daughter. The family she would be placed with would not like her or give her what she wanted, especially since Equestria didn’t have orphanages and insisted ‘needy’ foals should be placed with families for their supposed health.

How any family could see Marigold as healthy, or be tasked with maintaining their own well-being having to work to give her what she deserved was beyond her. The princess-goddess was corrupt, through and through, and Marigold knew that she could even be placed with a family of unicorns or pegasus idiots. All that could take her away from her city and the chance of bits one day. The mother of Equestria’s oft whispered of Blueblood Bastard couldn’t last forever.

That was why Marigold did what she did; nopony could bring shame to her by suggesting she was breakable like the cripple that birthed her or that she was anything less than a superior earth pony and golden mare. There was no foal who ever felt what she did in the whole wide world, and nopony would understand why she did what she had to. She sighed tiredly, letting the muggy spring coldness chill her coat and stiffened her smile before approaching the shop. With the easiest of nudges, she pushed the door open.

The shop’s interior was swathed in light and rich shadows as welcoming as the fine art prints of Equestrian hearths and lives hanging in Manehattan’s museums. Iridescent glass perfume bottles scattered throughout the many shelves throughout the store were not the only trinkets the unmarked shop had to offer. Various artifacts of all kinds from an array of lesser cultures cluttered the walls: buffalo dream catchers, enchanted Qilinese teapots, self-lighting Saddle Arabian lamps, the other Saddle Arabian lamps for weird ghosts, spellbooks, scrolls, and birdcages filled with mist that never left them. Entire racks of jingling necklaces and amulets — some of which glowed oh-so enticingly — beckoned Marigold with how they swayed.

The scent of teas, incense, and the faint aroma of zebra alchemy reached Marigold’s muzzle. Behind whole towers of books written in languages and scripts Marigold could not name — she was a monolingual sort, so no blame could fall on her — and clothing racks overstuffed with robes, hats, and other garments of all kinds, there was a painting. Both the garb of civilians and sorcerers cluttered the view, the fashions ranging from something clearly ancient to the timeless wear of stuck-up unicorn wizards, and then the currently in vogue hobble skirts.

Marigold was never a mare for art. Painting, sculpting, writing, and the like wasn’t unicorn-dominated or a trade overflowing with filthy featherbrains, but it was unfortunately diverse. It’s like they let just any creatures call themselves an artist. Art just never resonated with Marigold and she could not imagine wasting her life creating things that didn’t actually exist.

The painting shouldn’t either. Paintings didn’t move. No images moved unless you flipped a comic book very fast. This sent Marigold’s heart skittering with how unnatural and bizarre it was, reeking of magic that even somepony like Marigold knew shouldn’t exist. The image in the lurid oils was shaded and swirled so expertly that the painting was just below being lifelike, and yet the artist’s surreal addition of certain patterns made the status as a painting all too obvious, something only emphasized by the unnatural array of colors that no painter alive could capture.

Three blank-flanked Alicorn foals were playing together, and Marigold only had a name for one of them. Two fillies laughed and smiled silently, and all three trotted dreamily across the canvas in wavering, slow speeds. The first filly was vaguely familiar, appearing to be a composite of general Canterlotian beauty standards and bore a vague resemblance to Princess Celestia from the colors of her eyes and white coat. Her tiny wings buzzed almost three-dimensionally, making Marigold dizzy with apprehension at the thought of stretching her hoof out. A soft pink mane spilled down to about her wither, one curl brushing from behind her ear and grazing her cheek.

The second filly, Marigold had no name for. Only the long, dark lashes really suggested that the foal was a filly. Other than that, there was more than enough androgyny in the other foal to give way to confusion from the looks alone. Turquoise eyes so enchanting and unlike any Marigold had seen before haunted her as she watched; this foal had a smile wider than any of the others. Of the three, she acted like she could see Marigold, or that she knew she was being watched. Her mane — or their mane, Marigold supposed — was cut short in a fashion befitting either sex and swishing past their jawline, just nowhere near as long as the other two foals. Their bangs fell forward in a mischievous curtain, bearing a distinct curl.

They held up a frog for the white filly to laugh at, grasped in dazzling aquamarine magic. That made Marigold squeak slightly. First, because she knew that carrying living creatures in telekinesis and their handling was a careful act that was never something surging uneducated foals could be trusted with, and this foal too young to even look like either a filly or colt was cradling that frog perfectly! Second, the most animated of all the Alicorns in this picture was the strangest one to look at because Marigold knew from every storybook and history lesson in school about the gods that there was no blue Alicorn other than the older colt with both.

Princess Celestia was quick to include everything Aquastrian in Equestria since King Neptune of Aquastria, her once-lost cousin and only family had reconnected, giving Equestria another ally, storybooks more fantastical fodder, and the harbors of Manehattan too many filthy fish ponies on top of all the other immigrants invading Marigold’s city. She had grown up seeing the tales of the sea god and his illustrations — blue-eyed, long blue mane, fish swimming inside as an adult, the whole ugly sea god deal — in her foal’s books before her mother had thrown them out.

The scowling, taller, colt captured in blues huffed at the other two behind a long blue mane. The sourness to his pale blue eyes was understandable.

Marigold could only gape at the sight, close to frightened, with her gangly adolescent legs shaking in the warmth of the shop. This was the closest she would ever be to one of the gods, and she hated every moment of it.

“Ah, that piece always attracts visitors,” said the voice of the stallion standing next to Marigold. “Did you know that it is thousands of years old? The artist’s signature on the back is one Terra Worldheart, and I have never found nor heard of another piece by them. Have you?”

“SWEET CELESTIA!” shrieked Marigold indignantly, jumping to the side as quickly as a cat dodging a bucket of water. “Where did you come from?!”

Marigold’s demanding hiss was met with a head tilt from the stallion, who adjusted the round little glasses that perched on his muzzle, with nothing else to keep them there save balance itself. “I should be the one asking you that, madam. You are the one who entered my store only to shout, shriek, and scowl at my favorite artifact.”

“I… I saw the perfume sale s-sign?” Marigold stammered, dragging a hoof on a Neighponese kirin rug underhoof. “Sir, it was lit up with twittermites and shining all around NoHa. I do not think I could have missed it.”

“North Haflinger Street in Manehattan?” asked the stallion, toying with the starched white sleeves poking out from his Qilinese style robe. It was the style one never saw outside of Qilintown, and his accent was unplaceable, suggesting a once intelligent earth pony had the gall to marry a half-beast. Disgusting.

“Is there another I am unaware of?” Marigold Blueblood sneered, shifting her saddlebags boredly and blowing some of her boring dandelion colored locks out of her face.

The stallion paid her no mind. Instead, he ran a hoof along his queue — a silly fashion that was barely in fashion among the Qilinese immigrants anymore. Goodness, was he aiming to be a caricature straight from history texts?

“Gods, Manehattan?” he muttered to himself. “Twice in one week!”

He turned to her, smiling in a way she could not decipher. His round brown eyes twinkled at her from behind his glasses, as if he were not a crazy old stallion who talked to himself in front of young ponies. “I am Chosen Curio, and young lady, you have taken a step into Uncle Curio’s shop of one-of-a-kind items!”

He kept smiling at her, while Marigold only returned by offering an apathetic teenage stare.

“No refunds!” Curio added cheerfully. "However, there are gift-wrapping services with a large enough purchase!"

“How much are those?” Marigold asked flatly, pointing a hoof to the perfume displays in the window. “My mother would like some.”

Curio blinked. “You do not want to look around?”

“I…” Marigold grimaced, her gaze falling against her wishes. “I rarely shop for myself.”

“Rarely,” echoed Curio, clearly not believing her, his posture pin-straight.

“Never,” Marigold corrected. “I never shop for myself. I am only on a quick errand.”

Curio was quiet, and Marigold watched him trot away from her. He quickly seated himself behind a polished wooden counter with a shelf of jarred poisons from around the world arranged neatly behind him. Perhaps he had been spying on her from there?

“Perfume,” he said, clearing his throat, “is twenty bits a bottle.”

Twenty bits? For good perfume, that was a bargain. Eager, Marigold trotted over to where the window displays and shelves were. Right below a hanging rack of swords was the sparkling row of prettily sculpted bottles. Most were shaped like flowers or fantastic creatures and the glass of each was a different color. Marigold happily selected two bottles, and then slipped the third one into her hoof. They were shaped like a griffon, tulip, and breezie.

Marigold gave the necklace racks a brief look of longing, knowing that anything was more than she could ever afford, and brought her perfume bottles to the counter.

Curio regarded her as strangely as she had when she squinted at Prancian on the bottles. Prance was always fashionable to imitate, and Marigold leafed through all her mother’s old magazines on Prance and fashion when her mother discarded them, trying to pick up a few words and phrases for the sake of pomp. While the alphabet on the bottles was mostly the same as what she could read, many of the words were spelled too differently from what Marigold was used to Prancian words looking like.

“This is not an ugly provincial dialect, is it?” asked Marigold, watching her bottles being wrapped with hoof-tapping impatience. “The spelling for each name was queer if I must say so.”

Curio paused, squinting at her. “You know Prancian?”

“A little. Prance is a nation of fashion and beauty, is it not?”

“These are vintage,” Curio said instead, returning to wrapping her parcel.

“Are you just saying that to mean old?”

“Vintage always suggests age, my dear.” The stallion did not look up at her when he said that.

“So they are so old all their spelling is bad? Is that what you mean?” Marigold demanded, her short-cut tail swishing testily.

“Something like that,” said the stallion, smiling down at his work suddenly. Any hint of non-neutral emotions vanished when he looked at her again. “Is it your mother’s birthday?”

“No,” Marigold muttered, “it is mine. She just wants perfumes.”

“...To give you?” Curio asked, so confused his muzzle crinkled enough that Marigold thought his glasses would fall off.

“No, nothing like that. Mother has never gotten me a birthday present before. She says that my present is being alive and getting to have a mother as wonderful as her. Oh, and then she asks how my rent is coming.”

“What in the gods’ names made your mother choose to do such a thing?”

Why did this stallion care? Or believe her? “I know not, all I know is that I want to still have time to go to Corona Park today and that I have paid her enough rent. Nopony else my age pays the rent.” She gave him a pointed look. “And the park is a long walk.”

She shoved her mother’s bits — because every bit was her mother’s bit — over the counter glumly. “I have one afternoon to be a fourteen-year-old filly, and I would appreciate oh-so-much if you would not squander my time.”

Curio’s lips drew into the thin line of a disappointed adult showing the universal frustration Marigold noticed everypony seemed to have for her. They exchanged bits for the parcel without any further discussion, and the emptiness of half of Marigold’s saddlebags pleased her. Anything would fall into that if the angle was just right.

With a hop and a skip, she giddily began her trot to the door. And just as she knew she would, Marigold had to side-step a shield rack, only to knock it over and crash into the amulet display in a clumsy fall of flailing limbs and a filly’s shriek. Metal clattered over her and the sound of dozens of neckpieces falling on top of her rang out discordantly.

“I apologize! I apologize!” Marigold Blueblood wailed, kicking out repeatedly from under the pile. Everything only scattered more as a result of her thrashing.

With one blind lash, she was able to hook something with the motion of one of her forehooves. Her breathing came in shakily, and Marigold delighted at the metal running against her hooves. As of now, everything was just as she planned. All that she had to do was find…

Aha! A metallic piece, wide and cold, grazed Marigold’s hoof more sharply. Either this was some kind of strap for the necklace or an entirely ornamental feature… and soon it would be all hers.

Over the cacophony of clashing and noise she was making, Marigold caught the sound of hoofsteps. Curio was calling out in shock, and his worried trot managed to be distinct enough for her to pick out. When he reached Marigold, she had already secured her best fearful look, puppy eyes, and jittery shake. For how valuable his artifacts were, Curio’s main concern was pulling Marigold out from enchanted shields, other artifacts, and ensuring she would not slip on any of the countless stray necklaces that were currently impossible to keep track of.

He lent her a hoof up, and she accepted, pocketing her prize with the other.

Tsking, he muttered about the sudden clammy quality of it, and Marigold whimpered out a few more apologies, oozing timidity. Her discretion in motion and nature was well-practiced from swiping snacks on the schoolyard. This was no such thing, and if caught she could see herself shoved in a juvenile program for reforming delinquents and having to work off a fine.

“By the gods, I had not meant to—”

“Please,” Curio said, brow creasing and frowning worriedly, “I have much to tidy up. Just go be a foal for a while. You have only one birthday left after this, yes?”

“Y-Yes, sir. Do you really not want…?” The weight of the jewelry in Marigold’s saddlebag made her want to sing instead of stammer.

“Neptune’s waters and Elysium’s light!” groaned the stallion, bringing a hoof to his face. “I know what I said! Off with you! Get, get!”

Marigold nodded shakily, turning around and cantering right out the door, letting it slam behind her. She leaped into the traffic, her heart pounding and dashed across the road at full gallop before she continued at full speed through the rest of the city, feigning that an angry cabby cart pony had spooked her.

Once she made it to Corona Park and secured an empty boat to ride on the pond, Marigold finally unpacked her treasure. The piece was heavy and certainly an expensive one to have stolen, and unlike anything Marigold Blueblood had ever seen before. There was an unnatural warmth to the necklace as it rested in her hooves, and the darkly colored strap was the same shade of smokey black making up most of the trinket. The cuts were at an angle not carved by any magic Marigold knew of — the working was far too precise, and Marigold had handled some of the few magic-made pieces her mother had. This was nothing like them. The Alicorn figurehead spreading its wings over the center was menacing, minimal, and smooth to the touch. The dark red accents were so morbid paired with it, and Marigold was unable to guess what kind of stone they might be from.

At the heart of the necklace was a single gemstone, cut to show off dazzling facets of juicy, ruby red. Sparkling up at her, it was nearly as big as her eye and undoubtedly, absolutely gorgeous. The warmth became a steady heat when Marigold smiled, hugging her new necklace to her chest as she felt the piece’s temperature rise. She would do anything in the world to hide something as amazing as her own necklace from her mother.

This… well, what she had was hardly a necklace, was it? Perhaps a brooch? Or maybe…

Alicorn Amulet, chimed two words, lithe and sharp as they stabbed through whatever she was going to think. The tone of them was whispery, soundless, and without the inflection or distinctiveness, her own internal voice bore.

...That, Marigold, would have to figure out later. Cautiously, she slipped her Alicorn Amulet (it did have a ring to it) back into her bags and tried to enjoy the rest of her day, knowing that returning home with three bottles of perfume and none of her change would put her in a world of trouble.

…

Two weeks later and many pounds lighter, Marigold Blueblood found herself on that same stretch of North Haflinger Street. Just as before, she was on another one of her mother’s pointless vanity quests. Only instead of attempting to locate a shop in that part of town, she had been returning from one of Manehattan’s other neighborhoods with the pulled-tight buckle of her saddlebags stabbing at her stomach. Twelve pairs of new earrings and a cumbersome amount of mare’s interest catalogs on home decorations weighed down her plodding steps.

Marigold stared around the street, taking in the fresh spring day’s bustle with a hint of sullenness in her exasperated expression. On a nearby poster, a glamorous mare clutched Wonderbolt derby tickets in her hoof and smiled brightly. Spilling out from under her exquisitely elaborate hat were curls bearing lighter highlights in a shining new style that Marigold would have loved to try herself.

Her mother had not found the necklace, which was stuffed deep into the inside of Marigold’s mattress. She had not bothered to give it a more careful examination since the name of the so-called Alicorn Amulet was revealed to her, as she would need time alone to figure out what to do with her not-so-mundane prize. Escaping to one of the local libraries under the excuse of studying for school had turned up no mention of a so-called ‘Alicorn Amulet’ in any of the books Marigold checked, and she was not about to put in a request for any that might exist. She would figure out just how the Alicorn Amulet worked on her own, as a strong earth pony who needed no silly texts by unicorns. After all, it only made sense that a unicorn author would not want their work on such a fantastic piece of jewelry to be found in an earth pony city.

Every night, Marigold had stuffed her hoof into her mattress where the Alicorn Amulet was tucked away. She tapped at the bloody stone on it, rubbing it like it might give her luck and wishes and all the good things she deserved. It was the only thing she managed to keep from her bitch of a mother, and it filled her with a burning lightness unlike any other.

With that, there was also the awe at the shopkeeper not noticing something as blatant as a missing piece known as the Alicorn Amulet! Such absurdity! Anything with so much as the whisper of the divine to it was coveted, and anything good slipped through Marigold’s hooves. For her to not have guards at her mother’s door and a blurb regarding her act of theft in the papers, her name only stripped away because she was a minor, and the rumors fanned throughout the city like flames was a miracle.

Marigold Blueblood did not even believe in miracles. Or that a wish was a thing that came true. She did not look to any stars, though she knew that by their signs she would be an Aries in the hemming and hawing of ponies who cared for such things. Those things had no place in grown-up talk, Manehattan, or everything else with relevance to Marigold’s life and the real world.

Swallowing, Marigold continued her casual trot down the wide boulevard, trying not to look conspicuous. That shopkeeper, Chosen Curio, was the kind who probably had a residence above where he sold his wares and the Royal Guard would know him. Other ponies out and about would no doubt recognize her as whoever Curio was so bitter at, for what shopkeeper did not want to warn other clientele about thieves?

Marigold was within a block of Chosen Curio’s shop before a better idea occurred to her. As much as news could spread in Manehattan, the city took the sink or swim to finding things out. What was not learned and spread was buried in this city, and what transpired had not spread city-wide for the offense it was…

...so perhaps there were ponies who would not know of the theft, even in NoHa. Marigold trotted up to one pony and asked, batting her eyelashes and sweetening her tone with all the innocence to which she had little claim, and asked him if he knew of Chosen Curio’s…

...he told her that he knew of no such shop, and trotted away, calling her creepy as he did so.

Marigold stamped a hoof on the concrete and found another pony…

...who also said no…

...as did the next…

...and the pony after that…

...and the filthy zebra after that pony…

...the couple three ponies after the zebra denied knowing the shop…

...and the other twelve ponies she asked following the eight ponies after the couple…

...all while she was within one block of the store.

Confusion tugging at her incessantly like an unruly autumn wind, Marigold dashed to where she knew the shop was. Her breathing was thin with her mother’s punishment still in effect, and her ribs ached with every dizzying breath.

Crossing the street in a mad blur, Marigold pushed past crowds of ponies shouting belligerently at her. She cared no more for subtlety and turned to where Chosen Curio’s shop should be positioned right across from her…

...Only to see nothing but an empty lot containing naught but overgrown dead grass, with no bench or stepping stones to attempt to refine it. Just a single completely abandoned, gods-forsaken place, all as if nothing had ever been.

Only the Alicorn Amulet was left buried in her mattress when she got home, heart still racing long after she had slowed. The fog of adrenaline only let the dawn of just what a puzzle she had worked her way into fall upon her, all while the bloody gem of the Alicorn Amulet winked up at Marigold Blueblood from where she held it in her forehooves.

Author's Note

Horse puns in here are as follows: North Haflinger Street (North Houston Street/NoHo; Haflinger is a horse breed), Corona Park with Buffalo Pond (Corona Park with Indian Lake), the Broncos (the Bronx; Bronco is a kind of horse and getaway car).

Neptune is from a few other stories (How to Be Brave, Follow Her Lead, and Favorable Alignment, etc.) and got a little cameo here.

My continued liberties in butchering New York City by giving it the weird, one-big-island horse version you see here continues. I'm so sorry to any New Yorkers who have to read this, but at the same time I'm not sure if I should be. Your city is shit for anything but horse puns.

Chapter 8: Taste of Blood (Magic)

There was one thing that was the heart of the Equestrian way, a single and constant truth that overflowed into every aspect of the nation Princess Celestia had built. One could observe its ripples upon every single one of her pony subjects and even see it within themselves, for it was inescapable in the magical land of Equestria. Something beyond ideals of kindness, generosity, obeying destiny, humility, and Harmony was in these ponies, from the highest Canterlotian to the lowest criminal, the latter being caught in their state of reduced citizenship. The greatest, still-beating ur-value of Equestria was thus: when you went against the herd, the herd went against you.

Marigold knew this very well. She lived under the vast light cast by the idea. In some ways, she was more aware of the way it manifested than most ponies. In other areas, she was more blissfully unaware.

Before she had even been born, the herd was against her family. All her parents were no more than two ponies who savagely went against the inseparable good of love and fidelity that Equestria enshrined. When news broke of the abuse that their actions brought to a princess, a wife, and two families, they were only ever going to be cast out. For it, they faced various punishments, chief among them was the turning of the herd.

Setting hoof in kindergarten for the first time taught Marigold about the herd. She was just young enough to be as ingrained in it as any other Equestrian subject. When you were as tangled as a fly in a spiderweb within your society’s herd-mind, there was only further immersion, not escape. Only when Marigold began her first acts of bullying did the herd stir against her for the first time.

Many of the first stories that Marigold heard were a reflection of this duality of being within or against the herd. Petunia Petals had spent three years of her youth under punishment for various crimes she had been found guilty of—all of them being offenses covered by Equestria’s antisocial laws and acts forbidding the distribution, advocation, replication, and quotation of banned media. She thought that they were the ideal bedtime stories for young Marigold and never stopped painting the tales of her time as a young mare as anything but heroic efforts to help the earth ponies and underclasses she believed were being oppressed. For Petunia, an unremarkable foalhood had never prepared her for all the ways in which the herd of Equestria would cast her out.

Marigold was a fresh, relatively unassuming third-grader when she saw how the herd prosecuted somepony else in everyday life. It was only then that she started to have an inkling of what was going on. Despite her status as a bully being cemented among her classmates, she was more innocent in comparison to what she saw.

Rainbow streamers hung from every street corner. Hundreds of Equestrian flags cast shadows upon the cobblestone streets of Manehattan as they waved. Posters crowded the lower windows of shops with simple slogans calling for nationalism and harmony. Everypony who showed up in the street wearing more than a scarf had some kind of pin upon their clothes with calls to vote and the names of various candidates for mayor of the city and shire. The only thing that dwarfed all of these was not the confetti spillage, but the iconography of Princess Celestia. Floats of her were paraded around the streets. Her subjects brought out their beloved portraits of her and crowded them in windows and carried them about. The images of the princess topped every maypole and lurked in the background of every poster bearing somepony else, even if she was only a sun and shadow.

Whole roads were blocked off to make way for parades. The everyday ponies that the princess-goddess gilded with every way she spoke about them flooded the streets. Ponies in hard hats, patched jackets, and showing all the signs that they were the most common among commoners were trotting by in thunderous, uniform waves. Most were following the signs as a herd, hoping to cast ballots for the mayoral election, but many more were already finished and merely seeking their unearned fifteen minutes of fame. Their plainness made them appear as a sickly, industrial sort of river colored in all the shades of gunk. Every face was lost, and the crowd was muted by the will of the herd into a weak sight on par with a mud puddle.

All of the rainbow streamers and goddess-faced pins in the world could not give them back the lies that they were sold. It was among this constant throng of erasure that Marigold could be found. She had been pulled away from mindlessly applauding the constant stream labor-ponies by a mare dressed like a teacher. This made immediate pleasure twist Marigold's young features into the sourest pout she could manage. She would have to write about what she did on Election Day in her Equestrian Moral and her Citizenship classes tomorrow. The last thing she wanted to see right now was a mare in gold-chain glasses and a matronly skirt-and-sweater combo. Though Marigold wasn't yet old enough to be able to understand the meaning behind the Mares Against Monsters pin that was being worn by the mare, she caught sight of the amulet around the mare's neck. It was carved prettily, and smack in the center was the image of an olive branch painted in gold. Marigold did understand that immediately—this mare was a particularly devout follower of the gods, and a follower of Elysium in particular. The Queen of Paradise had been brought up in one of Marigold's history and culture classes, and something about hearing how this Alicorn governed one of the dead worlds stirred a special sort of resentment in Marigold.

She heard the mare tutting gently, and how Marigold knew that she was being admonished—no, humiliated--for trying to scramble onto the backs of strangers. Words asking where her school-buddies or teachers or royal guards were started flooding Marigold's young ears. What was it that drew such bothersome ponies to her? Why was it that nopony would let her have fun? Worse than all that, would this mare drag her back home? Now, that of all thoughts was enough to spur something in Marigold. She felt the hot rush of fear reach up into her chest and pull her heart until it was hammering louder than any second thought. Something in that kick was wound up faster than any doubt in the little blank-flanked filly's mind. Ignited was the sudden desire for one thing: run run run run run run run run.

Rearing and wriggling as much as she could, Marigold Blueblood kicked the kindly mare square in the chest with one buck. Then, she dashed off through the crowds of Manehattan.

...

How rare it was for Marigold to be alone...

Silence hung as thick as a curtain through the apartment. The emptiness was incandescent, and Marigold felt that with even a breath the walls might fall over. One only had to breathe wrong in Petunia Petal's apartment to encounter something. Silkscreens folded out from where they could. Vases cluttered every surface they could. Pictures, framed coins, and beaded curtains found their way to the wall. The last one was because there were already too many beaded curtains being used as actual curtains. Pressed flowers in varying states of decay were frozen across the apartment, displayed like grotesque trinkets. Some of them were guided. Fans hung on the walls when not in use, unfolded like the wings of a pesky pegasus who knew only how to get in the way. Horseshoes were hung where they could be tacked, usually above the plentiful array of mirrors of all sizes in the home.

Still, other sentimental bits of clutter could be found all across the apartment. Baubles littered every surface they could, just as much as horizontal space was taken up by rugs that found their way onto the walls. The bathroom was not spared this gaudy, materialistic fate. The privy stall was draped with beads. Bath towels were stored with ornamental tea trays shoved between them, only because there was no more room in the kitchen for them. Petunia thought they made fashionable dividers. The mirror itself framed everypony who looked in it with Petunia's endless array of creams, cosmetics, and powders in front of it.

It was where Marigold now stood, gazing into the shiny surface. Her eyes were clouded with so much red light. Her head throbbed with a striking migraine focused into so much more, something unspoken in it begging and aching for fuel. It whispered through her bones with more magic than what flooded her eyes, and of all the things so great and devious that it would be able to do.

She had bitten into her lip. Even as the blood trickled into the sink, she wasn't entirely sure why she did it. There was half a whisper of something in her mind about needing blood. Needing to see it, to taste it, to feel it.

Blood meant something to the Alicorn Amulet, that much was clear. Marigold reached deep into her thoughts for the type of feelings that she felt would give the magic a push, to make more well up and dripped in the sink.

An incident of foalhood wrapped in frustration and spite reached out the way she dug her teeth into herself without any care about the pain. It was only a scratch she gave to herself, and scratches were no concern at all.

Blood meant so much more when what fell as a prodigious drop of blood landed in the sink crystallized and shining, with only a swelling of light in the eyes and a pulse under Marigold's skull to do the trick.

Oh, the things she would practice for...

...

She had headed into the shadowy teeth of the city's true jaws. Election Day was one of the few times when ponies were not all over the whole city. Once somepony headed away from the areas restricted to civic activities and dozens of parade streets, the fringes of the crowds could be found. Lurking there were other sorts of ponies—yes, everypony still thought of them as ponies even when this is when one started to find other creatures. It was very rare to see a qilin, minotaur, zebra, or other non-pony in any of the parades. Marigold knew she wasn't the only pony who felt uncomfortable at the sight of them. They were slightly more common in the voting lines that Marigold would see, but rarely were they in the same ones, and she was always glad to hear the whispers. The right kind of whispers, where her fellow earth ponies and even a few pegasi would discuss how even if more non-ponies could be found in those lines, they sure were less welcome. A couple of those earth pony comrades would speak so quietly, like whispering-to-breezies kind of quiet when they didn't realize foals like Marigold and other strangers might be able to eavesdrop just enough. They sounded like Petunia Petals in one of her better moods, discussing how they actually wanted to do something about the problems non-ponies had so long as they could say which pony got to be the mayor.

Either way, there was no place to get lost quite like the quiet parts of town during Election Day. Even though Marigold had no idea what part of town this was now, she was certain that she had turned enough streets that nopony was following her anymore. She spied a hulking qilin stag with his horns light with magic. Their metallic bands glittered and the tines shone with the faint aura that qilin had. Marigold thought that even if his horns were as ugly as his lizard eyes and pin-straight mane, at least they looked like ugly jewelry. No unicorn had a pretty-looking horn, and theirs were still much more fitting for ordinary tasks. This qilin-stag acted like he had no idea he was using the magic in his horns to push a food-cart of all things. How ordinary was that? It was just so ridiculous that Marigold had to hold back her giggles and keep going.

She scanned the rest of the square. The qilin was trying to attract some of the ponies milling about over to his food cart. His Qilinese lunch bags clearly weren't selling as well as his neighbor's fire-breath-roasted carrot dogs. The qilin with that particular food cart had her horns all lit up too, the bronze bands around her horns shining more brightly than the stag's jade ones. More than that, she lacked the usual scaly leonine that all the qilin in Marigold's schoolbooks had. Instead, her face was more doe-like and her tail was a fluffy stump. Other than the obvious freakishness that Marigold knew such extreme levels of mixed blood indicated (all her textbooks were adamant that most qilin were descended from dragon-equine hybrids) Marigold didn't dare to admit she was entranced. The qilin-doe had gold symbols painted on some of her scales that caught the eyes of ponies other than Marigold and got them whispering.

Marigold sure thought that it was a waste of such lovely, shimmering gold to make mere scribbles. But the way that the doe giggled and pranced about looked so pleasing. Even when she smiled, her teeth shining with the obvious light of a spell to hide her fangs, there was still something so fun to how she acted. Something that Marigold wanted for herself.

"Do ya want somethin' to eat?" asked a voice from behind her.

Marigold squeaked and jumped around, and was greeted by the sight of a smiling mare.

"Yer ma or da around?" The pegasus mare gripped a rod for picking up trash in her one greasy wing.

Marigold shook her head and shyly looked up at the mare. Under the patched trash-pony vest she wore, Marigold caught sight of two things—this mare had no cutie mark despite being around Petunia Petal's age, and her coat was filthy and hid her natural blueish color. Why was it that she didn't have the reflective badge and patch worn by most garbage ponies?

"Oh hon," the mare said, her rough voice trying to be sweet, "I lost me badge earlier. Parades are like that, huh? What about ya? Ya lose yer folks? They anywhere nearby?" Suddenly wide-eyed, the mare looked all over the street and even behind her for Marigold's parents.

"No," Marigold said quickly, "I am a big filly an' came out here all by myself. My mother... well, she cannot walk, ma'am. She... My mom, that is, well... Mom had to stay back home."

"Poor, poor little dear. Ya may be the biggest and brightest filly I seen all day, yet yer a long way from home to be without any fillyfriends." This stranger had a way of looking at her, with something obviously piercing about her stare that made Marigold feel so seen. Nopony else had ever really treated Marigold like that before, not in a way that made her feel like she could be a star.

"Didja lose ya lunch bits?"

"Well..." Marigold kicked at the ground and looked at her schoolbags. "I, uh... My mom... She did not have..."

A sympathetic frown spread across the mare's face. Under all the grime streaked across her, Marigold thought she could see what were a few very animated freckles—or maybe they were just tricks of the light. "I'll ask ya 'gain, do ya want anythin' to eat? Don't need to pay me nothin' if ya don't have any bits yerself there, sweetie."

Marigold blinked. "...Are... Are you a lunch breezie?" she said breathlessly.

Nopony had ever wanted to ever just give her bits before, and certainly not a grown-up. The way that everypony else talked, Marigold had thought that all grown-ups ever did was take money from others. Wouldn't her mom be so proud if she came home and had brought back bits? Depending on how many this mare gave her, Marigold might even have enough to slip into her pillowcase.

The mayor laughed, and the sound was scratchy, like she didn't drink enough water. She wobbled on her tired, cracked hooves. "Nah! Nah! I be not any breezie. Just a good pony tryna help 'nother good little filly out, ya hear?"

"Ohmigods! Ohmigods! OHMIGODS!" squealed Marigold, her whole body wobbling with excitement. She tried not to jump around any more than she already was, since she knew that if she ended up falling flat on her face, she wouldn't look like a big filly any longer. "Y-you really have bits you can ju-jut give away?"

"Sure do! Why don' ya come an' follow me, little one? I live in a real nice flat not far from here, tha' I do. Baked some fresh cookies last night too. Bit better to chow down on than this qilin fare. Not enough butter and goodness in their meals, no siree."

There was something about the tone of the mare's tone that sounded rehearsed. Her syllables sounded slipperier than when she spoke for, dripping with a worry little Marigold could not place. She'd never heard an adult speak that way before. They always acted so primly around her, as perfect as freshly starched fabric from a real laundry, not one of the deer-owned places that littered the neighborhood of New Cervidaine. Those dumb deer always boasted of having the best laundries in the city, and all of Equestria, as if anything owned by deer could be worth a damn. (That was one of Petunia Petal's favorite words.)

Marigold could think of no other reason to linger in the square. An adult speaking to her like a playmate at school was more than enough of a reason to follow this mare. Something so unprecedented could only reap goodness. As long as Marigold was back before sunset, her mother didn't care what happened to her. An adult could help her fake the rest of her assignment, and she'd still probably get a good grade with somepony so old helping her.

She pricked her ears forward and smiled. "'Course. Only ponies make good food. That's what my mommy says. She's always right about these things."

Marigold gave a little leap forward and skipped along after the mare, who paused to wait for Marigold every single time. Nopony had ever done that before. What Marigold didn't understand was why the mare kept looking around so much. They weren't waiting for anypony else, and they were almost halfway out of the square. Why was she acting like somepony might follow her?

"Missus, can't you go faster? You said you had cookies..." Marigold whined.

All further thoughts died as a sharp whistle pierced the air. It was louder than the one the gym teacher at Marigold's school had. What was worse was that it reminded Marigold of going to gym too, and she froze. She hated gym class because she was always getting in trouble for doing what she was told; it made all the other foals cry. 'Playing rough' wasn't allowed at recess so Marigold had to get it all out somehow. It wasn't her fault everypony cried so easily, and it wasn't just ponies either. Marigold had a front-row seat at how weak griffons were when she dropped a weight right onto the chick's talons. She even managed to play it off as an accident.

"GUARDS! GUARDS!" came a sudden scream. Marigold felt giddy with the need to run hearing it, somepony calling the guards could mean anything. Even the mare leading Marigold suddenly looked scared—in fact, she looked far more scared than Marigold was like she might have seen a ghost.

"GUARDS!" came the scream again, and Marigold got the strange feeling she might have heard the voice before. "COME QUICKLY! PREDATOR! There is a damn pouláriphile trying to lure a filly in broad daylight!"

The mare Marigold had been following looked genuinely terrified now; her whole body was seized with shakes and her eyes were darting around like a petrified cat. Her gaze finally fell to the edge of the crowd that naturally pooled where Marigold had entered this part of the square. A trampling of gold-clad guards had entered the square, their standard-issue enchantments making the false colors of their coats look as bright and clean as their armor. Somepony else was with them, talking to the qilin merchants who were pointing in Marigold's direction.

"I'VE SEEN HER FACE IN THE IMPURE FILES AT THE LIBRARY!" The battle-ready caterwaul finally had a name. The mare from before, with the Elysium pin, was the one screaming and pointing. The guard standing next to her held a whistle in his magic and nodded to the stallions next to him.

Everything that followed was a blur of energy. Two strong forehooves scooped up Marigold and pressed her against cold armor as if her life depended on it. She didn't bite anypony because her mother told her biting the guards could get you fined. Instead, she wriggled, kicked, and screamed until a forehoof was placed firmly over her mouth. She was still able to breathe just fine, but her noise was muffled into a most futile protest of grumbling. She could only watch as the mare from before stepped closer, her expression contorted with worry and fury directed at the other mare.

The mare that had offered cookies to Marigold was tackled with the grace of a dog jumping for meat scraps. She hit the cobbles with a scream that was quickly silenced with a muzzle conjured by one of the unicorn guards. Hoofcuffs soon joined the device. From there, the guards were quick to stand and haul the mare up. Bruises were quickly blooming on her body, and Marigold found herself as captivated by the sight as she was by glitter-dusted pictures in breezie tale books.

"I saw that mare..." said the would-be schoolmarm with a heaving breath and angry eyes. "She followed that little filly here. At first, I thought my eyes deceived me and that this was her mother. But by the Princess, I knew I had to be sure. I trusted my suspicions that her face was familiar and followed her here. What a sick, sick monster tries to lure a foal on so grand a holiday in this nation. Her head should lie in a basket at the hooves of the goddess!"

Marigold didn't know what the word was that had been hollered like a curse towards the mare who trembled under the weight of her shackles. She had heard it said in her Health & Safety class before, as well as her Citizenship class. Yet, she had forgotten what they meant, and the easier words that the teacher had told her were related instead. Since it was supposed to come up on a unit test, Marigold felt there was no need to go back and study the work related to that lesson.

"If that's true," began one of the guards, "this beast has nothing but a life behind bars to look forward to." The pegasus folded his wings to his armored sides with a flourish, and Marigold couldn't think of anything other than a shiny beetle in need of squashing.

"We'll need you to come to the station with us," chimed another guard. The white-coated, blue-maned earth pony was as much of a staple to the city as a lamp-post. He had spoken to the infuriatingly teacher-like mare that had alerted the armored menace to where Marigold was.

"And I'll take Private Skyline Sight with me to get the little one home. She's had a rough day, and her folks are going to need to know what happened to her." The guard holding Marigold spoke with a deep voice that reverberated against Marigold's back. She could already feel his every breath, now she felt him nod to an armored mare standing nearby. "They'll need to ensure she doesn't get out unaccompanied in such a public area. Monsters aren't normal in Equestria, but godsdammit, the kid was nearly foalnapped where everypony could see. This might end up making the papers..."

Thugs, thugs, the whole lot of them!

That was what Marigold thought, and that wouldn't make the papers. Her mother was right about the guards being untrustworthy, armored thugs. They were the fleas of Princess Celestia, and the goddess saw fit to ensure they invaded and policed the lives of everypony. Marigold knew that they kept foals anonymous in the papers, but she wanted to kick the guard holding her with her bad luck. If she wanted to be in the papers, it would be of her own accord.

Author's Note

Chapter 9: Regarding Disposable Ponies

Marigold had never been served by imagination. That never stopped her when she was on her trips; the tops of tall apartment buildings were as fair game as any in Manehattan. She would pull a rag from her saddlebag, spread it haphazardly and plop herself down. Her mind would dip between frustration and a dull haze. Her Alicorn Amulet would weigh coldly under her clothes and she would squint out at the inky slop of night that Princess Celestia brought forth every dusk.

She would see the thousand-plus lights of the island city below and the bay area so far away, utterly unknown to her. Sitting as tall as she could guess Canterlot would be far inland, Marigold would try and picture her world without light pollution. The numerous puffs of smoke from Manehattan’s numerous fires would mask her vision like a sooty veil and warm her face unpleasantly, causing sweat to bud under her stiff collar. The taste of ash lingered even as the sun went down, as Marigold’s years had taught her.

Whimpering, Marigold coughed into a hoofkerchief, clutching it tightly and wheezing momentarily. Sniffling, she shoved it away again and wrinkled her muzzle, scowling with the small displeasure of a spoiled schoolfilly. The sky was still not dark enough and the sounds from the city below were her clock; they told her that the hour was still improper for her plans.

A fussy sigh left her in a puff, and she passed what time she could by pulling a knife from where the hoofkerchief had disappeared. The kitchen would not miss it; her mother was a parlor-mare, not one who worked in the kitchen. The newspaper it was wrapped in crinkled, and Marigold felt the budding glee from knowing her debut made the front page. Utensils went unnoticed to her unless they were fine pearl-handled silverware or tea sets. No practical item Marigold was made to use in her labors matched such a worthy definition.

There was a distant sneeze tickling somewhere in her throat, but she was not about to let it squeak out of her just yet. She was careful to balance the knife’s thick mouth grip idly on her foreleg first; the limb was carefully covered in shabby cloth booties too worn to leave a print and crusted with the remains of a fun night over in Balikun-Shetland and street-dust. The knife’s balance was becoming more practiced, but still showing the wrong motions could knock it over quite easily.

Marigold nudged it with her other hoof, and the spinning began her wait. She was tired of pretending that one crumby apartment block could let her see the sky any more than slivers of a far bay and dark waters.

…

The night was cloudy and the city’s air was heavier with smoke than usual. Still, Marigold was not so naive. She had no ability with the sky to know that she should get to work before the moon was high in the sky. Her earth pony superiority and the nights she was able to wriggle free from her mother’s attention played a role in that. Something more than milk went into that mare’s before-bed tea in the evenings when Marigold was deemed ‘too aggravating’ to handle. Whatever her mother saw fit to add in there was enough to make the old nag sleep like a stone.

Her ears pricked to make sure that her shuffling had not been too great. Rusty metal offered a few plaintive groans. Wrinkling her muzzle, Marigold gave a small hissing breath and pawed at the old fire escape beneath her. A faint jingling from the overwrought, golden ensemble she had under her plain cloak was the only reply she got.

“Hmph,” Marigold sniffed disdainfully. Under her cloak, her ears flopped down somewhat.

She squeezed her eyes shut briefly, keeping them as tight as possible while alien pressure budded beneath the center of her skull and dazzling ruby light filtered from between her eyelashes. With nothing but twists of dark metal above her and shadowy walls of brick to barricade her, she would be too thoroughly concealed from any prying eyes.

Rustling beneath her cloak was a papery sound. Upon opening her eyes, Marigold’s red-flooded gaze was greeted by the sight of a crumpled bit of newspaper. It had been dipped in vaguely tan paint and was cramped with sloppy mouthwriting.

The shoddiness of it did not suggest the true nature of the card until Marigold squinted more carefully at the atrocious grammar and spelling so clumsily scrawled there. As far as she could tell, that was authentic. Her grades in spelling were poor and she still couldn’t manage the intentional awfulness these all appeared to have. Even the glow of the Alicorn Amulet’s magic made the fat squiggles look that much worse.

Every single one of these slips had only the minimum level of legibility. Each hoof-made card was an illegal advertisement for equally forbidden actions. A false name, an address, general rates, and the vaguest implication of the exact nature of the sex crimes offered were scrawled down — usually by the offenders themselves. They were then distributed to accomplices who bribed with bits to pass the evidence into the hooves of the vile ponies who would share the perverse desire to be the second half of the crime.

Once again, Marigold’s age was of little concern when she finally found an alley-stallion with these under his jacket. He walked so ridiculously, with one hoof shoved under his coat in case he needed to get rid of the cards as quickly as possible, knowing that if caught with them the lightest punishment permissible that he would face would be years in prison and being registered alongside those who had hired him as an offender for the rest of his life. It was all so high-stakes to little Marigold.

She knew that most of the time the kinds of thugs that aided the self-exploitation practices would take a teenager like her and hoof her over to a prostitute eager to make her into an extra source of income — and perhaps somepony to vent onto — for as long they could keep her captive. Library records and newspapers she snuck spelled out the nature of these predators and the innocent Manehattan creatures they tormented from outside of their dreary, disgusting, and violent little worlds.

Other accomplices to these dirty ponies would not be nearly as driven to abduct her. She was too young to be working for the Royal Guard and if Marigold was under the delusion of wanting to be violated — as the law would call her ‘affliction’ — by an older pony, then these forgotten types had no conscious to stop her. Especially if it meant their sunken eyes could see more ill-won bits eventually.

The stallion who gave Marigold this particular card was not the second kind, but a third breed. She had no way of knowing if she had ever encountered the first, just that she might have pacified one such sort by offering bits for what was usually free. For ponies who willingly gave up all hope of financial security in order to fuel cycles of sex and violence, bits spoke a powerful language.

Marigold was given a card to pocket as a result. Now she was slinking around a fire escape in the dark, prodding about the shadowy outline of a newspaper-stuffed window frame with her hooves. The floor listed was the eighth and she was careful to count her descent from the roof. She just needed to make sure she had the right window. Who else but a whore — and yes, she knew it was a whore-mare by the name chosen — would have such an ill-kept window?

Eventually, her hooves patted down a gap in the newspaper and the glass panes rattled their protest. She felt a stale breeze pouring outward, bringing a rancid smell, and watched the reddish glow of her eyes’ reflection grow rounder upon the dirty glass at her success. The bad smell was the perfect sign that the resident was what she needed; it was too much to be explained by just another unfavorable tenet.

With her magic, she dropped a few stray bits through the hole, listening to them clatter down the other side of the glass. Seconds later, the window was rattling like something done by a boogeymare in a magazine horror tale and being clumsily yanked up from the other side.

Greeting Marigold were two bloodshot eyes in a sunken face. The thinness of her prey was so apparent that the mare’s teeth were forever bared, showing off how brown and mossy they were. Poking out from under her ragged shawl were frizzy bits of a thin mane that was mostly pulled away.

Marigold gave a forced smile and tried not to faint from the suddenness of this ugly face or the smell pouring out from her dank cave of an apartment.

“Good evening,” she said thinly, offering a forced wave. Her drawn hood hid her lack of a horn, but her eyes still gleamed with the hidden magic of the Alicorn Amulet.

“Wha’ kinna unicorn be ya?” sputtered the mare, swiping in the air for more bits with one knobbly and twisted foreleg.

Blinking, Marigold decided to resort to semi-practiced mouth breathing. Repulsion wouldn’t make these kinds drive anypony willing to pay away, but she at least had to keep up enough of a front to ease any nerve or second thoughts that could be lurking in this shriveled scrap of a mare.

“One who can make magic glasses,” Marigold lied, using a swirl of telekinesis that produced a pattering sensation under her skull to twirl a lock of her mane and flash a stiff smile.

Her heart ached desperately for her mane to be anything but the dull orangish dark blonde she had been allotted by fate. All the mane-dye bottles during her window shopping escapades proclaimed she had a shade between the ever-popular ‘Blueblood Blonde’ and ‘Antique Carrot’ — though that one was horribly unsold and unwanted. While she was never able to figure out what in Tartarus the latter was supposed to mean her mother would occasionally snidely remind her of the former. Oh, how she loathed that her mother had a fashionable, red bob while Marigold was left with her dreary mane-do.

“Ya gon’ pay or si’ an’ gab?” spat the near-skeletal mare, what was left of any jowls flapping weakly as she fixed Marigold with a dullard’s squinty-eyed stare. Gorgeous, glittering eyeshadow was caked as thick as a layer of plaster over her eyelids, the whole application so grotesque in its unskilled quality.

“Not at all,” giggled Marigold. She grinned and teasingly waggled one of her coin purses about with a pendulum sway of telekinesis. “I was only waiting until the lady of the house invited me in.”

The thin leftover of the mare’s upper lip curled upward even more, and the pained look of the gesture made Marigold shiver happily.

To dispel suspicions further, Marigold produced the cheap card with a flourish. It was already falling apart in the grip of Marigold’s magic and looked so unlike anything that could put a pony in prison for possessing it; the paint chipping around the edges did little to give it an intimidating edge or class. Marigold still pushed it forward like it was a golden Grand Galloping Gala ticket.

Street-whispers she had eavesdropped on in preparation informed her that those who passed the forbidden card on were not always as quick to accept knock-and-enter buyers or those driven to them by word of mouth — and word that was often bought, too, for as mangy as Manehattan’s underbelly was, it was still small. Marigold knew she would not be turned away by the whore, that was for ponies with standards. She was in no mood to be met with any kind of hesitation, especially from somepony that she knew could never afford it.

For Marigold, hesitation meant she would have to force her way inside and start the struggle right on this fire escape. A location like this went against every shred of sense Marigold could claim; she would be facing a death sentence after only one dead mare to her name — that made the Alicorn Amulet under her cloak warm with her worry, as though they shared the emotion.

For this whore, hesitating to accept any kind of coin — and the treatment that followed — would mean no rent, cosmetics, clothes, utilities, or distribution of her cards. If she was paying for groceries and anything else to be delivered to her by her goons, as many of her kind did, then they would have all the more reason to be angered over being money-starved…

...and Marigold had to suppress another delighted shiver at how they might ruin this whore in retaliation. That was what happened in their worlds, as Marigold could not think of any other term for the inner workings of self-exploitation.

She was oh-so-careful to pick only the choicest whispers on the streets of Manehattan as her ‘research’ into finding the best of the worst candidates to serve her.

She, the whore, was all too good at greedily swiping up the bits Marigold levitated over to her. As many purses as needed were floated over, and Marigold watched with wide, sparkling eyes as four hundred of her mother’s bits were surrendered to a mangy whore. Two hours for four hundred bits. That was a few bits too many to burden Marigold’s fine back, and this hag was going to pay for every single one.

Oh, how her mother would be flailing her few good limbs in money-hunger if she knew the manner in which her bits were being wasted!

No matter how generous the sum the Crown sent to Marigold’s mother or the vast amount amassed within her room, Marigold’s mother was always prattling about how they never had enough. Not even the other monthly checks that Rhodium was commanded to send satisfied Petunia’s perverse petty lusts. Yet, she was the very same nag who had not yet noticed a sliver of funds taken here or there. Marigold had done her best to fill what she took from what she got from reselling her thrift hauls, replacing what she borrowed with even more bits, which her mother simply burned through. That was the only significant evidence beyond what she left of the prostitutes themselves when she was not able to snatch back every bit that she used as a prop in these blood games.

“Twos hours,” slurred Marigold’s new whore, “no mores that.”

Marigold smiled, cold and closed-lipped. This one would prove to be especially easy to brutalize. Her jerky leg movements and glazed eyes made everything about the whore clumsy and pathetic. When the whore went to put the coin purses she hugged within her forelegs inside, she simply dumped them all over her floor.

For Marigold, the drum of all those bits was the song of the refund she would claim when her fun was done: teasing, bold, and beautiful. She pretended to pay them any mind and swung herself through the window after the foul mare the way she imagined elite Manehattan mares climbed into the sleekest carriages, their skirts lifted just so.

Soon, all those bits would be hers once again, if only for a night.

...

In her reading classes, Marigold had been forced to sit through a variety of boring stories, one of which had made her very angry. A minotaur king named Midas had gotten the best gift in the world from one of the gods and transformed everything and every-creature in his life to cold, gleaming gold. However, his cowardice made him beg for normal touch and the restoration of his worthless friends and family. Marigold despised that ending, knowing that if she had that power, she would never give it up. Tartarus knew that to transform any in such a way would excite her. Her beloved city would be much better with more gold and less greedy griffons dirtying the streets, for example.

She was struck so often by that story because when she was around such filthy ponies, it was impossible not to be reminded of how a so-called slut had the opposite influence Midas had, and they brought nothing but ruin, even if Marigold enjoyed the rot. It was that contrast that Marigold adored; she cared nothing for any kind of moral nonsense about supporting bounty-catching and community clean-up and chase-out efforts against the scummy prostitutes who shared her city. All she wanted were some disposable ponies whom she could delight in ruining. Was that not a simple dream for a simple young lady?

...

The next night she was able to slip out mirrored the first. The Mare in the Moon hung far above Manehattan Island, a pale-eyed sight that was one of the few magical things Marigold Blueblood had ever seen in her life. None of the dinginess of her mortal life or city had managed to touch the moon so high above, and no painting or print managed to wrangle even a fraction of its essence in the way the sun had been captured and caged by art so long ago. Everything was just a touch red, and she felt that she might burst from the familiar anticipation and magic thrumming against her skull. The usual sensation of her magic aside, her craving for violence was carving her out once again until Marigold could no longer subsist on reminders of what she was capable of that struck her in idle moments. Days would always pass, and Marigold would find that reliving everything in her recollections over household chores was never, ever enough — not when there were so many more ideas to swarm her mind, making her body agree.

Her skirt was less of a burden this time. The silky, shiny affair slunk with her as she crept along Manehattan streets, yet long enough to hide her hooves and flare out, a sheen golden mimicry of a nightgown. Marigold’s saddlebags were slung over the top of a formal blouse, the puffy sleeves stiffer than she had wanted them to be. Instead of the brooch favored by fillies her age trying to look like mares, Marigold had coils of scarves wound around her neck. They were neither too fashionable to keep her from standing out nor were they too shabby as much of Manehattan-style apparel was because she preferred to allow herself some taste.

The pounding of her heart was second to the pressure building at the center of her head. Every time the Alicorn Amulet was slipped on, Marigold noticed that the ache was growing more pronounced. Something about her skin had begun to feel different too, there was a variety of crawling, tingling sensations that never quite went away even when she took off the amulet.

None of these were bad, in fact, they even kept her more focused upon her dark desires. She figured that every unicorn felt these phantom sensations and that it was a part of their weakness she only had to learn to overcome. So, she let them weigh down upon her like the tart card in her front pocket, where it could be safe from the rain.

…

The wooden stairs creaked each time she stepped on them, but Marigold still managed to slink her way up to the fourth floor. Never before had a prostitute been quite as careless as this one, who answered ponies right at her own door. She was no doubt an amateur, then, and how lucky she would be for Marigold to find her instead of the guard. They would have her name, her true name, branded on a sex offender list forever and she would never again be able to set hoof in any place deemed pure, public, or both. Marigold cared little about making sure ponies like her spent their time in prison; she would much rather immortalize them in her own special ways.

Marigold rapped at the door eagerly after shoving the crumpled card under the door and trying not to breathe too heavily. Her vision swam with ruby light that made her have to close her eyes from the intensity.

Not now! She let her thoughts hiss in her head, directed at nopony. Immediately afterward, and much to her surprise, the magic dimmed. Marigold caught only the dim sizzle of something reddish deep in her gaze when she stared at her reflection in the doorknob.

That she could still see such beads of fire in a doorknob felt like a good omen. Today, Marigold wanted to play an earth pony instead of a disguised unicorn. She hated having to claim she was the enemy, even though it explained her new powers so much easier. Most of all, she knew that there would be such a look of betrayal if this mare shared her race. There was a dim paranoia that one always had around those terrible, tricksy unicorns, knowing that their magic gave them the potential for horrid things. Nopony ever felt that subtle brutalization around an earth pony, and anypony who did was a filthy rotten liar whose slander ought to be shamed.

After some shuffling, a mare eventually opened the door. Marigold was immediately struck by the newness of the whore. Her skin was near civilian health, as long as one was willing to ignore the knotted, angry scarring as thick as snakes that wound across her. The way her dress fit unevenly around her back and the red stains that seeped through the fabric made Marigold’s heart beat faster with delight.

This mare was still so new to her abuse that she winced, and her eyes brightened with pain when she moved. There was no dead-eyed glaze that usually set in so quickly, and that had Marigold’s hooves just itching at the thought of all the things she could do to a mare so fresh and broken.

“Mmm,” she hummed dully. “Yer a mare?” There was a pained exhale caught in all her words. “Nawt one of thems stallions that says he is?”

“Oh, I most certainly am a mare, you dull beast,” sniggered Marigold, smiling widely at the whore who hid behind long curls that looked like they were moldering from her lifestyle, though there was little to be called life in what she did. Goodness, the thought that she still had enough of a mane that could be used for real curls instead of resorting to wigs was just the cherry on top.

“I…” The whore paused, swaying a little and dabbing her sleeve at a bit of blood around her mouth. “I’ven’t a mare before.”

Marigold’s muzzle scrunched up, and not from the assorted telltale odors that this mare had. “Well, it’s not like you get much of a choice in the matter.”

The whore’s eyes fell, and she swayed again, her mane bobbing listlessly while her tail dragged lifelessly on the ground.

“I have all the bits you could want,” sing-songed Marigold as her eyes roved the corset pulled too tight and carelessly over the mare’s visible ribs. Nopony in their right mind would wear such a thing in broad daylight, and the expensiveness of it was absolutely garish. “And you can never afford to choose.”

A heavy sigh came from the half-styled mess of curls and dreadlocks. Marigold’s heart soared at the look of utter resignation that came when her hoof fished out a bag of bits.

“Now, how much must you have for three hours?” As Marigold looked at her, she was already calculating how much this one might be. She clearly subjected herself to absolute savagery and had enough rapid popularity to have her goons order expensive clothing from catalogs and run her advertisements through the city.

The mare winced as she limped forward to look down at the coin purse in Marigold’s hoof.

“One hun’red bits,” came the muffled reply. The prostitute managed to pin her ears down even further. The bruise as purple as plum kept one of her eyes swollen shut; the freshness of it was absolutely fetching to Marigold. She only wished that the popular fillies in her classes would one day have the popularity of ponies like this: as infamous slags.

Marigold could only smile wider; this one absolutely warmed her cockles. She wasn’t the epitome of decay that the average was, but she was getting to that point when she would need to trim herself with every jewel and poorly repurposed articles of clothing to make her a scrap basket advertisement for a mare that had long since rotted away and existed only for carnal purchases.

Not all the stars in the sky could contain Marigold’s wish that there would always be more of these ponies for her to go through.

With the proper bits hastily exchanged, the two retreated behind the door.

...

[Further excerpts from the original notes of coroner Ebony Henbane of the Morgue of the City of Manehattan and Fort Barnacle regarding the victims of the Manehattan Blood Mage. All remain unidentified even to this day.]

The remains of one earth pony mare. Identity unknown, as expected in most self-exploitation cases. Her age was below twenty-five years old. Full remains were recovered approximately forty-eight hours after death when some passing zebra noticed a smell coming from an open window many stories up on an apartment building. Neighbors were brought in for questioning and held under suspicion of being compliant. One of them is under arrest for knowing of sexual offenses and failing to report them and compliance in the misuse of property. The mare is not in one piece and was recovered from the bathtub, where she'd been left in a half-filled tub of water, cleaning chemicals, and her own rot. All blood was drained from her dismembered body.

Severing marks suggest the mare was gradually ripped apart by raw telekinetic force one piece at a time. Further marks desecrating the body were made with knives consistent with the case of Miss Bali-Shet. Once again, the knives were of improper use for cutting flesh and the wounds were inflicted in frenzied patterns even in a post-mortem state.

A partially burned 'tart card' was recovered from the interior of the coal-stove at the scene. Only the sections with the prices remain and no further material was able to be located on the mare.

She was highly malnourished and bore the expected blank flank. Examination of her bones shows that she had not endured this level of neglect in her whole life. Magical isotope scans place her as living in the Fillydelphia area for most of her life. Most of her mane was falling out. Too many teeth were missing to make any identification. The remaining teeth are rotten and neglected. Bulimia remains a possibility, however, the head was found submerged and this was too difficult to determine conclusively because of the recovery state. Reconstruction sketches should still be attempted. Eyes were removed and not located at the scene. The sockets bore signs of damage consistent with knife-usage.

Her coat was undyed. Numerous wounds covered her body: scrapes, scabs, dry skin, etc. These predate the attack. Evidence of sexual assault was plentiful and the mare's torso appears to have not been submerged in order to display this fact.

There are no signs of restraints being used. Neighbors are either completely compliant in denying that they heard anything or a gag was utilized.

The residence where this mare was found betrays an unfortunate popularity and her age indicates she had been doing this for some time. Her region of origin means that she may have previously operated in Fillydelphia.

I am told that all bits that may have been present were taken from the scene, showing a familiar motive of robbery alongside probable sadism. Her landlord must be hunted down, to see if they have any information about her or if somepony more normal was pretending to be the tenant in her place. While I do not think that the landlord was the culprit here, it cannot be ruled out. The open window may suggest somepony using the fire escape, yet there were no further signs of a break-in. It is not understood why anypony but a pegasus would use the roof. My belief is that the window may have been open so that the crime was more likely to be found. Magic is obviously employed here.

Several of the damned abnormal crystals were found around the drain when the tub was cleared. Nothing in the Arcane Registry Base matches them.

...

Marigold had never been good at math. She knew enough for shopping and paying bills. Oh, and she could split a mare in half while simultaneously stealing her breath. That had to count for something. None of her classmates got to do that. In fact, they were all squeamish at the very mention of high-level magi-biology where students were expected to be able to dissect a jackalope — or make a proper presentation about the process if they lacked the magic to do so themselves.

Those pests weren’t even endangered. Marigold had heard from one of her schoolmates who heard it from her cousin that if you go just past Bucklyn village’s borders, a pony can find them everywhere, in places with rolling hills of abundant green that Manehattanites stopped seeing once they set away picture books. Marigold was mostly frustrated at the idea of how pitiful a jackalope was in comparison to a pony.

There was just so much more to ponies once you pulled them apart. Nopony lost themselves in what they did with a jackalope in the same way that nopony was ever going to gorge themselves on a single pea. Jackalopes were a teaser, a measly reminder of everything she could do to a pony. Imagining a jackalope with everything spilling out and on display confused her terribly. Wasn’t that the way she was supposed to feel about ponies?

Marigold would sit over her school lunches, shoving apple slices and mashed potatoes around while her mind slipped off into the fog of elsewhere. That elsewhere was imagining last week. If her toy had been a jackalope instead of a whore-pony, she would have had little to distribute and examine. Her eye was not a critical one, but there wasn’t a doubt in Marigold’s mind that she had left quite the scene.

All the blood poured down the drain of a rarely-used bathtub…

...two dull eyes nailed to the wall above her mattress with spikes from her blood magic…

...an array of teeth scattered across the floor like jacks…

...and a garland of her innards strung from wall to wall.

In the end, she always got her bits back and she got to have her fun. Nothing else mattered.

Marigold swallowed, her ears swiveling backward as soon as she heard the whispering. Out of the corner of her eye, she caught sight of Knight Watch tug at the hoof of another filly who had wandered in Marigold’s direction.

“Stay away from her,” Knight hissed, just loud enough for Marigold to hear.

“Why?” whispered the unicorn filly innocently, clutching her tray tighter in her magic. “She sits all alone, every single day. Surely somepony ought to talk to her?”

“Blueblood is a creep,” insisted Knight.

Marigold bit the inside of her cheek. All the other foals in school called her ‘Blueblood’, which not even the teachers said to Marigold’s face. Her mother fought in court to give her the name of a stallion whom Marigold had never met or acknowledged, and all her classmates refused to call her anything else. They refused her everything: sleepovers, mark mitzvahs, cute-ceañeras, and birthdays.

She had told herself constantly that she never wanted to associate with these ponies anyway. Knight Watch was a hall monitor who got anypony trying to skip class in trouble. His father was in the guard, which made him a complacent horseshoe-kisser to the goddess-princess. In ten years, Marigold was sure he would still be oppressing ponies like her, she just knew it. After all, he was a traitorous pegasus to be willing to think that unicorns and the gods weren’t all awful. Everypony even knew he had a crush on the deer exchange student too, and nopony but Marigold seemed to take up their duty to speak out against species-mixing.

“C’mon, Knight. Calling somepony such a thing is just uncouth. She probably just needs a friend.”

“No!” Knight insisted, his voice a little louder. He tugged again at the filly’s fetlock. “Blueblood is not noble or good like her name. She is nothing more than a bad seed who hates anypony who is not an earth pony or just as mean like her.”

“Oh,” murmured the filly, finally giving in to his tugging. “May I sit with you, then?”

“Of course,” Knight said, abandoning his whisper. “I always have room for more friends. What is your name?”

“Sea Salt!” chimed the unicorn filly. “My family just moved here from Ghastly-Upon-Copse so I can join the naval fort one day. Is it true that Coney Bay has the best magic shows?”

“Yep! My family goes there every summer…”

Marigold huffed and stuck her muzzle into her juice carton until it bulged out, letting her mane cascade around her face in order to shut out the cafeteria lights.

She hated ponies with the kind of unacceptable attitude Knight Watch had. Otherwise, she would have gotten to skip the rest of the lunch period and ended up in the headmistress office for ‘bullying’ another student, as if anything there was anything wrong about reminding a horrid horn-head where they belonged.

Marigold had made the last pony who dared sit with her flee the cafeteria in tears, and all because Marigold knew that no earth pony who married a unicorn deserved to be able to carry their foal to term, and that filly shouldn’t have told any school-mates she was ‘feeling down’ over what was no great loss, and certainly not the loss of a sibling. If that filly had realized it, she would reject her unicorn blood and disown the horned beast that sired her. Instead, Marigold got another suspension and none of her schoolmates even acknowledged her, even when she had to read the disciplinary essay ‘Why Miscarriages are Horrible for Everypony Involved’ to her homeroom class.

Marigold bit at the cardboard of her juice carton and tried to imagine if anypony would treat her the same if they knew all the pony she was when Princess Celestia lowered the sun.

...

[The following excerpts fare rom the original correspondence of coroner Ebony Henbane of the Morgue of the City of Manehattan and Fort Barnacle regarding the victims of the Manehattan Blood Mage. The recipient was none other than the Mayor-Stallion of Manehattan at the time, Fair Heart. The letters have found their way into the Archives as a matter of generous donation from the estate of Fair Heart. All victims remain unidentified even to this day.]

Dear Lord Mayor-Stallion,

I was humbled to receive your letter this week. Times are indeed dire, however the gods have blessed me with the endurance I prayed for at my last visit to a temple. I've had so much work to do. The guard are constantly writing to me asking for my thoughts on all of these dead mares. I've just been aboard so many self-exploitation cases, and I'm so terribly sick of it all. The wickedness it brings out in ponies! There is nothing but rot under all the glamor they see themselves inheriting. Last week I finally got a much more normal case for ponies like these. A stud with a drinking problem got so bloody plastered he fell face-forward into a lit coal stove and got his head stuck. I can't tell you how many of these self-exploitation types perish that way. Now everypony thinks that nine outta ten of them are to die in murder cases where that simply is not the case. If I'm to remember correctly, the last time the crown released something, six out of ten will die in some degree of murder or mareslaughter. Ponies that sell themselves reap the results of that, and oh gods are they miserable ones.

You wrote to me about the latest case in the Blood Mage murders. That I can tell you about. From my notes, I can say that it is indeed a strange one. A mare butchered in a flat in an impure neighborhood then tossed in the water somewhere. The guard found her under Bucklyn Bridge, but the point where she was tossed in is hard to say. By then, most of her parts had gotten spotted by a ship heading under the bridge. We're ever so lucky only one of the legs is missing. Tests are being done to see if magic was keeping the parts floating together and on the trash caught with 'em to see what it can tell us. To think that rubbage like that might be the key to knowing the steps of the killer!

What can I say about the mare? Oh, she was a scrawny thing, one no older than nineteen. Big scars all across her body, all of them very recent. Freckled face and these ringlet curls that would have been quite pretty some time ago. Normally the mares that do this get wigs after a while. Sometimes, the stallions do too. Even her tail was a whole bunch a curls that would have been gorgeous. The poor thing had too many damn needles in her stomach. Walking, trotting, and stretching about was probably going to start hurting soon if she'd lived any longer. I can't imagine she was without pain during the day. She had spots of chaffing from bad clothes, poor hygiene, and was too skinny for her own good. The poor thing was probably assaulted too, yet the body was too damaged to tell for sure. She had no teeth. They'd be knocked out and found at the apartment scene.

She'd died due to an utterly violent hemicorporectomy. I knew it as soon as I'd laid eyes on her and examinations confirmed it. One that was savagely done, if I do say so myself.

Now, the little apartment she had was different. Bit too nice for a whore, so that's under investigation. Of all the things to be found at the scene, a sewing kit was one of them. You don't exactly get many whores with trinkets like that around. Gods hope it will be a good clue in getting her name. Somehow. See, the apartment scene was found a few days later. Good neighbors this time. A thorough investigation showed them to be quite clean. They had no idea their neighbor was a whore. The landlord will be under investigation to see how the place was being rented out and who was meeting to pay the bills. They ought to not be so remote about these things. Princess Celestia better have some damn laws to fix all of this coming soon.

They found the mattress where she'd been killed inside. That isn't the worst part though. Her eyes had been nailed to the wall where they'd always be able to see it. Real ugly stuff. I was told some of her organs might be missing because she was in the water for hours. No sir, some of them were still at the apartment, strung up like garlands.

Sincerely,

Ebony Henbane, Head Coroner of Manehattan-Barnacle

Marigold Blueblood thinking of herself as an adult was inevitable. Or, at least her idea of adulthood, which was interwoven with concepts of drudgery, authority, and the oft-whispered-about forbidden. Her classmates may be a few years shy of graduating — and with it, adulthood — but Marigold had much more experience with the things in life she had always been told really mattered: blood and coin.

While fillies her age were still vying for hoof-holding and stolen kisses in courtship, Marigold had to hide just how much she wanted to boast of her deeds. To Tartarus with all the talk about commitment, communication, and romantic fidelity that ruled Equestrian culture. Everything was too tied up in meaningless concepts like consent or compassion that took place in some breezie tale land of ‘intimacy’ — whatever in Tartarus that was supposed to mean — that made Marigold sick to think about. Awkwardness and affection were better replaced with the things she liked, the things that lofty gods, stuffy academics, and know-it-all psycho-somethings would say made Marigold ‘objectively ill’ or whatever their latest tree-killing psycho-babble was about how ‘case studies’ and ‘sample groups’ like her were so ‘perverse’ and all the ways they were therapized or locked away.

Marigold Blueblood was undeniably an adult, after all, she had s-e-x! That’s right, the very thing that all her peers still took to whispering about the way that they used to chatter about cooties! She knew she was the first in her whole year to do so too! Goodness, it filled her with such a sense of accomplishment — one that all the dull adult-reading during her library trips said was a sign of ‘irresponsibility’ and ‘poor impulse control’ that would ‘require consistent counseling in order to instill healthy adolescent concepts of reality and empathy in relation to sexuality without harm’ or some other slop.

Wasn’t that just the dreariest thing? Who cares if whispers started up about somepony being the town carriage? To Marigold, a strumpet was better than a scholar any day, and she couldn’t imagine what in Tartarus’ name could truly be so bad that she could get sick from doing something that was such an indulgence. She was always in control of the little perverts she purchased anyway; nothing could get past that. What did it matter that her first time was with a dead mare?

All that meant was that Marigold got to have her merry way and do everything she wanted, both before and afterward. It was convenient, and how could it be any different than how she was told to shelve groceries at work? Everything was about convenience, and Marigold couldn’t bear to have tonight be any more wrong.

She skipped along, kicking up an arc of water from a puddle. The muddy filth barely gleamed at all during the night; such was the nature of Manehattan water. Marigold’s thick, dark boots were sturdily made by magic and their look was pulled straight from one of her mother’s designer magazines. Shiny buckles were barely dulled by Manehattan grime and the look was perfect imitation leather to mimic what ponies called ‘grotesque abominations’ but was legal in nations like the Shirdal Island, Colthuacan, the Dragonlands, and a slim amount of other nations.

Marigold’s dress was not so extravagant this time, being a simple gold-colored affair suitable for a filly her age. She skipped along, humming in the night and keeping her plain cloak held fast. Her saddlebags were weighed down with bits and instruments of butchery she had /conned/ a griffon out of.

Her song died in her throat when the scent of salt became too overpowering. Manehattan Island was a long and wide one. The shores were spacious enough that plenty of territories existed to build houses, and the particular address Marigold’s card led her to a stretch of row houses not far from some docks. The cramped cobbled streets were dusted with sand, and though they were no pinnacle of poverty like the whore-mares Marigold visited, it was obvious that nopony of great means lived so close to the sea.

Marigold’s lips curled into a smile when she saw the windows; most were beyond dim in the night or had painted newspapers pasted against the inside instead of the luxury of curtains. For anypony familiar with self-exploitation, this was a mansion.

Greasy food wrappers squelched with saltwater as Marigold wove her way past banisters and worn, rusty mailboxes. When she came to the right door, she seized the knocker in her hoof and slammed it down four times. Loudly.

...

[The following excerpts are taken from the official notebooks that Head Coroner Ebony Henbane kept during her time employed at Manehattan-Barnacle. The following selection refers to one of the many unknown victims of of the Manehattan Blood Mage.]

The stallion is under twenty-five years old. Too scrawny.

Absolutely prodigious earnings for somepony in self-exploitation. Row houses are usually owned by dock-workers. Landlord and neighbors were cleared. Neighbors discovered the body the next morning when they noticed mail hadn't been collected.

All his bits were stolen. Consistent with the Blood Mage attacks.

The Blood Mage has sexually assaulted a colt before, yet there were no signs of such activity with the stallion. Why is this?

No cutie mark. No tart card. False name used for renting led only to dead ends thus far.

Good dental health. This clue needs to be followed.

The only thing the landlord is coming under fire for is failing to report a tenant who was considered needy in terms of utility payments. However, such an investigation could have saved the life of this stallion by seeing him in prison for exploiting resources for the needy and for self-exploitation. In fact, every one of the victims could have been saved by applying for poverty relief resources and then arrested upon the discovery of their crimes. Mayor-Stallion Fair Heart himself is writing to Princess Celestia about such reforms, or so my contacts at his office tell me. Yet, these whores are so averse to real life that they'd rather live like this and die for their crimes than get caught... why in the gods' names is this?

The killer only partially skinned the stallion. Why did they stop? Were they interrupted? Neighbors reportedly only noticed something wrong by morning, upon careful investigation of each of them. The murder occurred overnight. Was the killer disturbed by noise?

The cause of death is exsanguination from being gutted.

Like all the other victims, none of them have any sign of transsexuality that could narrow down their medical and psychological histories.

Traces of goldish eyeshadow powder were found in the bathroom. No known matches to any known brands or blends have been found so far. It is entirely possible that the blend is of the Blood Mage's own making. Testing to see if it is magic-made is underway, however, this would eventually prove unhelpful, as there is no match to the Blood Mage's magic yet.

No domestic match to the Blood Mage's magical signature could mean that they are a recent immigrant who has yet to comply with the period of mandatory registration.

Must write to the Mayor-Stallion about this. He should tell Princess Celestia.

How does the Blood Mage keep going undetected?

What undoubtedly makes this a Blood Mage murder is that various crystals were found pouring out of the corpse and trapped within were blood would normally be, the latter of which appeared to be utilized in part of the flaying tactic of the killer.

One new clue of note was the way the dried blood on the floor by the bed loft was disturbed. The offender had to have killed the victim before this blood pooled. They would have no reason to lie down in filth if they could use magic in their attack unless they were tired and attempting to get bits that appear to have been stored under the bed. The patterns in the blood are not entirely consistent with that movement but are not inconsistent with lying still and using levitation. From this, we've been able to see that the Blood Mage was clothed during their attack and has a longer mane for a mare, or an extremely long one for a stallion (transsexual or not).

The blood print makes the exact size of the Blood Mage unclear and does not narrow down whether they wore a layered cloak or a dress (possibly with a cloak).

The age of the eyeshadow is uncertain to all tests at the moment. It may have been from another buyer, who still would be able to find clues. If it is tied to this case, it is too promising to release to the public. There is a chance that this is a signature color the killer wears and we may find it again.

Of the few tools recovered, it is clear they were from a griffin's butcher shop.

[The following pieces were printed in newspapers all across Manehattan and even included in papers across other settlements in Bucklynshire due to the desperation of the case. It represents everything that the EUP. could go public about at the time regarding the Blood Magic murders.]

HAVE YOU HEARD OF ME?

Manehattan Blood Mage

The suspect is a unicorn mare who is shy of, or unable to enact violent confrontation with most targets. She is responsible for over half a dozen murders within the city of Manehattan itself. The royal guard is open to all tips on the matter and Princess Celestia promises to reward those handsomely should their information lead to the capture of the mare in question. This mare is powerful and dangerous! Her magic suggests she utilizes talent-based powers to enact her heinous crimes. She is an amateur with griffin firearms, familiar with knives, and holds enough medical knowledge to be obtained by a hobbyist. She travels by night and is extremely familiar with the city and its waterways. Her career may be in map-making, delivery-making, window-washing, or another career that allows similar ease of travel. She may have a job that allows her to function with little sleep or is able to only work part-time.

We highly suspect that this mare is single and unmarried to cover up her true nature and extensive night-time trips. The Blood Mage is a mare that is heavily biased toward selecting females as victims of sexual abuse and gratification. She is not above violating the young, and young males have fallen victim to her truly sadistic actions in the event that they are minors. Adult males are ignored for this purpose. This mare may have repressed feelings towards mares, live openly as a lesbian, or she may be none of those things and is instead drawn to them solely for purposes of mare-hating abuse. The current lifestyle of the suspect is undoubtedly one that hides her pouláriphilia. It is unclear whether the subject has acted on the latter perversion before, and if so, they are likely to have had a disturbed youth that may manifest in secrecy about the past, delinquency, few foalhood contacts, or an over-idealized and selective presentation about details.

The magic of the Blood Mage does not currently match any data in all magical registries. She is likely foreign-born and living in Equestria as a student or on a working permit. There is something that has prevented the unicorn from being registered in all citizen databases. The suspect encounters little resistance when interacting with their victims involved in self-exploitation, which suggests that they appear highly naturalized, as those in self-exploitation are known to be highly hostile towards immigrants and harbor nativist attitudes not unlike those held by political dissidents. We stress that this mare is somepony who would put a lot of effort into looking normal and be less likely to have rumors about her due to this low resistance and lack of constricted mobility.

The forensic psychologists at Fort Barnacle are adamant that this serial killer is a sexual sadist. There is evidence of premeditation in these attacks with tart cards and more being recovered from the scenes of multiple crimes. This killer is well-aware of her own hatred and shows no remorse towards the targets. Victims are those who can be sexually objectified or participate in sex crimes, save for Jane Doe, the infant colt victim, and the only identified victim, Charley Horse. Ponies with this level of deviance are rarely open about their behavior. They are more likely to frequent both crown-regulated shops selling sexual materials legally and more likely to attempt to find illegal equivalents. The suspect is more likely to have abnormal peer relationships.

Other habits of the suspect that have been noted are of high interest. The suspect wears layers frequently and travels by hoof or by teleportation. They have a fondness for unusual entry but are welcomed when using conventional methods to interact with targets. They possess a familiarity with griffin firearms and meat industries. They do not discriminate with the race of their victims. The suspect is someone who has become familiar with self-exploitation and yet, the unregistered magic means that this could not have come from a previous record. It also would place the offender up in age, as anypony caught for participating in self-exploitation from 16-24 would not be released from prison until they were in their 40s. The offender is believed to be much younger.

One last important note: due to the demonstrated pouláriphilia involved in the death of one of the victims, it is of great urgency that the Blood Mage be arrested right away due to the fact that they are likely not a registered offender, and have since become active. This is one of the most grave violations of Equestrian law and information regarding these conditions can be obtained at your local library or in the relevant chapter of the Equestrian Psychiatric Diagnostic Manuel

Chapter 10: Now Hiring

Molasses Syrup whistled contentedly which filled his store with the sound of a jolly tune. Sparkling glass jars full of a rainbow of candies were stored behind them. The cheeriness of the pieces brought a smile to everypony who entered — even Mo himself — and were as pretty as wildflowers in Center Park on a spring day. A maze of shelves bursting with other goods boasted all the everyday treasures to be found in the aisles. Cooking supplies, All-Equestrian snacks, rolls of cloth, and any and all practical goods were stocked by the merry stallion. Word of mouth was his catalog, and he took great pride in knowing his establishment had more loyal family shopping here than at Jolly Holly’s place right across the street.

The chime of a bell followed by the sound of wood against a familiar frame caused the stallion to perk up his ears. His eyes widened with interest behind his round glasses, and the earth pony stallion set his polish and cloth under the tall, gleaming wooden counter.

He rarely had any customers around one o’clock, since most foals were still in school. Usually, those that did stop by were parents out for afternoon shopping or a lone pony wanting something to brighten a lunch break. Even griffons from New Shirdal and qilin from Qilintown found their way in, as did ponies from Manehattan’s La piccola Istalia. Every kind of creature was welcome in his store — even the weirdest creature of all: tourists.

Mo did not expect to see a little school-filly standing in the shadow of his counter at this time. Her golden eyes were another surprise, brighter than her gap-tooth grin.

“Good afternoon!” she squeaked. Why, that couldn’t be right. All the little ones were always crying ‘hello’ and everything else under the sun that gave away their youth. Here was this little filly, so oddly professional with her greeting. “Are you Grandsire Mo?”

“Absolutely, little miss! I am Molasses Syrup, and this is my general goods shop. Is there something I can do for you? Do you need help finding something?”

“Yes, yes!” she cheered.

The little earth filly’s saddlebags were not unusual; everypony had those. Perhaps their larger size was the intention of a thrifty parent wanting her to grow into them. She probably wanted a bow for her bags or for her mane. Maybe something in school colors? Celestia’s All-Fillies Academy for Astute Learners was just down the street. She probably went there and just slipped out of her uniform.

“Would you like some candy to go with your lunch? A dozen pieces are only a bit!”

The filly tilted her head to the side, letting her unruly spikes of a gold mane fall with the motion. “I wanted the sign! The one outside!”

“...My ‘now hiring’ sign?”

“That one!” the filly cheered, “Yes, that one!”

“Little one, my sign is not for sale.”

“I needa job!”

Mo scratched his chin, his white mustache drooping with his thoughtful frown. “You want a job as a clerk in the store, hm?”

“Yes! Mother comes here all the time. She says it is a good earth pony store. That means it's proper to apply here.”

“Any creature can come to my story, little miss.” Why an ‘earth pony store’? Very few earth ponies in Manehattan’s community would call his store that, and Mo always kept them as reluctant customers until they caused trouble. None of them were pleasant types either. Thinking they could have a foal was such a shame.

“My mother is Miss Petunia Godsdamned Petals!” cried the little filly, bouncing up and down, entirely innocent to the fact that her mother had no middle name! “Everypony calls me Marigold, but I've got 'nother name too!”

“Oh my Celestia!” breathed Mo. “Mind your words, dear. That is not something to go shouting around, and it's certainly not right coming from a little filly like you.”

“I am ten years old!” Marigold insisted, wrinkling her muzzle up in the mirror image of her mother. “That makes me an adult.”

Molasses Syrup paused, thinking about how the ways this situation could go. No daughter of Petunia Petals should be judged for her mother’s sins — why else did she say everypony only called her Marigold? It had to be for the same reason behind the surname that was forced upon her. The court fight to cement the 'Blueblood' as an addition to the little bastard's name had made the papers years ago. Petunia had no family name herself, but 'Marigold Petals' would have been a much more scandal-free name than trying to add in her lover's legacy to her daughter's name.

Petunia Petals also lived in Tartarus’ Kitchen, which meant this little one came far enough, assuming she had not taken a cab. Though it was hard to imagine Petunia was equally stingy with bits when it came to her own foal's welfare. What mother would be?

“Ten years old is enough for a first job. Do you know how to be a clerk? Is this alright with your mother?”

“I can cook and clean!” yipped Marigold, her mane bouncing with her. “I take out the trash! I mailed a postcard once!”

What a good little filly, Mo thought, being so responsible.

“And your mother is okay with you being outside of the house for so long?”

With Petunia Petal’s condition, she barely made trips to Mo’s store without having her legs bundled up and strapped into the typical cart-like wheelchair used by those with her affliction. Manehattan cabs just were not equipped for such a thing, so with that and Petunia’s obvious love of luxurious mare’s fashion, it was not difficult to understand why she rarely came by. Other stores likely had this little messenger sent to them.

“Mother wants me to get a job!”

The poor filly was probably used to shopping closer to home, or at least one could hope she would. Getting the word out about his shop was one thing, but if it made a filly come this far across the island, he knew her safety came into question too. There were discount passes, pay-in-advance passes, and a few others that came to Mo’s mind — but maybe there was something that this filly would be able to get through a help office because of her mother’s status.

“Can you get a cab pass? Have you tried talking to the office downtown that helps ponies like your mother?”

Marigold nodded, shuffling her hooves.

“Taking a boat around the island might be good too.”

“Yes sir.”

“Most creatures just call me ‘Grandsire Mo’.”

Marigold looked at him, her golden eyes blank.

“Your mother is from Ponyville; do they call grandsires different names there? Grandfather? Grandad?”

Marigold’s stare was still as blank of understanding as blind sunshine on the sea. “Sir, I was born in Canterlot.”

Molasses chuckled, only for the filly to keep stonewalling him. A no-nonsense kind like her might be good to have around, and with any luck, she would cheer right up talking to others her age some more. “Consider yourself hired, little miss. Now, let me show you around the store, where you'll find what ya need to stock, and the papers I'll need you to bring home to your mother.”

Chapter 11: Jane Doe

[Excerpts seen here come from the early morning issue of The Manehattan Times during the discovery of the remains of the Original Jane Doe.]

As the city slept, another senseless attack happened. This is the eighth murder in the recent chain of attacks on this city. Small signs of a scuffle were heard shortly after midnight in the southernmost point of the Balikun-Shetland neighborhood, which alerted residents to investigate the source of the noise. Those that reportedly left their buildings to investigate found no sign of violence. When morning came, residents were not so lucky. Their investigations may have been insufficient if any had been done at all. The remains of a young doe were found not far from the area that was impacted by the reported disturbance last night, which residents say sounded much like somepony slipping on ice, so they did not have extreme urgency in locating the source.

Those who discovered the scene were quick to summon the EUP who quickly secured the scene. From the reports of media pegasi, the remains are a mess of butchery intersected with a most peculiar red crystal. The whole body was not observed to be intact, and one anonymous passerby wished to comment that the torso was "in ribbons" to one of the press-ponies flittering around the edges of the scene. The area is popular for transients to cross and the neighborhood not having a pure status means that crimes involving sex offenders are not unheard of. No further identification has been released, and the features and props located at the scene are currently being withheld from the public.

[The following notes are from one of the top coroners working in Fort Barnacle at the time. These were her first impressions of the victim that became the Original Jane Doe.]

From the desk of Ebony Henbane, Head Coroner at Manehattan-Barnacle:

The victim is a doe no older than twenty-five years. One of her knees was dislocated prior to the attack upon her, and there are signs of an old break that meant she would have walked with a limp. Her purse matches an item reported stolen from a Bucklyn-import store a few months ago, though no identification was found within or from that report. A few cosmetics, stray bits, and fragments of tart cards were found within. All of the whores listed in those tart carts have been in contact with the EUP for their arrests or their bodies have been through Fort Barnacle for the usual: accident of drunkenness, starvation, cardiac arrest, suicide, deadly tonic, undetected cancers, falling into a sewer, abortion gone wrong, etc.

Isotope spell-scans show that she was an immigrant and was originally from an area near the Capreolia-Ibexia border. The specifics are being withheld with the hopes that an Equestrian diplomatic team will be able to bring untarnished information to the officials of the area in hopes of making a positive identification. As I had nothing to do with this process, I can only sign my agreement with the foreign-reach-out attempt on the required forms. One must note the horrifying rarity that is an immigrant in the self-exploitation scene. This creature would not have spoken the first language of those in it, and the scene is one overflowing with sadists and species discrimination. There is a reason dead whores are almost always ponies. Dragon attacks might as well be more likely than non-pony sex offenders. Over ninety percent of those found to solicit sex offenders have been shown to have violent levels of hatred for non-pony races. Earth pony separatists are not entirely uncommon among the ranks of those convicted for such an offense.

The creature has since become known as Jane Doe in her death. The public sees fit to apply a pony name to her, and without any other name by which we can refer to the deceased, I see no problem with applying a pony name to her. Perhaps something can come from this, a system of decent placeholders in a city that desperately needs them.

The cause of death from the mare (as I will henceforth be referring to her) is a mix of exsanguination and shock. The latter would have come from the pure force of the crystals tearing up the poor thing from the inside. Most of the garish things that were done to this poor pony were done postmortem, but her death was undoubtedly a nasty one. I can find little in the way of any marks on her remains suggesting she fought back against her attacker. It is almost certain that they were a customer, one who was brutal enough to be able to drag her away. With the stomach and ribcage destroyed, I cannot say what she might have last eaten.

Her species was mixed between fallow deer and reindeer. This is something that would possibly increase the likelihood of her death being a hate crime, something I feel the EUP should waste no time investigating. With the blessings of Princess Celestia, we will likely be able to find her residence before she is 'evicted' in her absence alone by impatient landlords instead of being declared missing. This is no uncommon event, for the deaths of whores to bring illegal landlords to such a level of behavior. The seediest areas of the city might as well be turned inside out to look for where she lived. I did not find enough traces of anything to suggest she was living in sewers, only traveling through them occasionally.

Any clues to be found could be the first thing to link these murders other than these damned blood crystals. There has yet to be any luck at all in providing the identity of such a fiend.

Sincerely,

Ebony Henbane

[The following text is an excerpt from the evening issue of The Manehattan Times in the week following the murder of the Original Jane Doe. What can be noted in the article are the journalistic biases that were a key identifier of pieces written during the Solar Millenium.]

In the aftermath of the recent doe murder near Bali-Shet, Manehattan is awash in outrage! Immigrant communities of deer have been protesting alleged discrimination at the hooves of ponies in squares across the city. These picketers claim that without protests, their fallen sister will not be identified. Many deer carry signs showing that they are not content in Equestrian land, and that they feel this is the mark of an uptick in violence towards their species. Many cite the failure of the peaceful protest for mixed-species accommodations in school at the City Square last month as an example of how they feel ponies have been mistreating them. There, non-violent protestors from an array of oddball species many Manehattenites had only heard of demanded things like usable desks, writing utensils, and species-inclusive health textbooks. All of these are radical departures from the Equestrian way, and the silent majority of Manehattan showed that they weren't the only ones to think so. Earth pony separatists showed up last month wielding bottles, stones, lanterns and similar objects to holler against the school protests.

Now, we see the so-called 'bigotry' has reversed. New Shirdal has completely closed its borders to all members of ponykind. The griffins have armed themselves with their peculiar, hostile brand of weapons that they call firearms. Guard patrols are being refused entry unless they're with anti-self-exploitation protests that have erupted all over the city. For those who pass the whims of the griffin brutes, they learn why New Shirdal is adamant about staying self-operating until further notice. Various griffins interviewed at the border say they'll tolerate no more crime, and that they will fight back against whores and murderers themselves. Until then, they wish to tolerate no outsiders.

Mares Against Monsters, the radical social group, has taken the opportunity to be found within the chaos. They have made firm alliances with the griffins, lending them educational material, schoolbooks for their young, and care packages during this shutdown of the neighborhood. Various chapters of the organization have taken a stand all over the city. When asked why she participated in the protests, one mare replied: “If you would not let your neighbor set themselves on fire in their flat while they and everypony else are in the building, why in Princess Celestia’s name would you let them sell themselves and make the whole community suffer for it?”

This attitude is one that is prominent among all members of the organization, but also among the other communities that feel impacted by this murder. The zebra community in the city has withdrawn to have many meetings among themselves; these are broken only to send somepony out to any who is with the press to deliver art and letters to communicate alienation, grief, and supposed injustice being done to non-ponies. The deer community has voiced that they may start charging extra for ponies at their laundries until the murder is solved. Should this be put in motion, there is cause to believe the courts of the shire would see a non-discrimination case.

[Two days later, The Manehattan Times had one of the decade's most iconic headlines drop.]

BREAKING NEWS: Princess Celestia Doubles Minimum Sentence for Self-Exploitation

by Extra-Extra

This just in, Princess Celestia has offered an unprecedented edit to the laws of the nation. In response to the recent string of murders in Manehattan, she has doubled the minimum sentence for self-exploitation to fifty years. This means that Equestria will now be sentencing its offenders for such a crime in a similar manner to Germaneigh, Trotsia, and most other nations in the United Council of Civilized Kingdoms. The Princess has stated she is taking time to consider whether it will be applied retroactively to those who are already imprisoned or have recently been convicted of the crime. She also is considering rewards in instances of citizen's arrests against those caught doing self-exploitation[...]

Chapter 12: Grumbling Guard

Gold Shield was named for the badge her family wanted her to have tucked in her armor and over her heart. ‘Gold Shield’ was merely the translation of her name from her native Trotsian tongue to Equestrian. Her badge, while still gold, was not the kind to be tucked into the breast pocket of the same uniformed officers who patrolled her mountainous home nation. The small one pressed between many other nations to the south, chiefly Prance and Germaneigh. There, cobbled streets were clean, and the backdrop for the glorious Winter Dancing School in the capital city. Her white coat was traditional for many dancers and natives to her homeland.

Here in Equestria, the spells on her armor washed her coat white anyway. Her mane was left in a standard blue variant, not unlike the one that could be found on Equestria’s flag. Gold was told many things about Equestria during her young life. That they loved and cared for immigrants was what lured her to its borders in the first place. Though she had not realized that the royal guard of Equestria was an armored legion of ponies-only, though the latter was an unspoken rule, as was the rest of the unconscious bias of the nation.

That bias was not something she had expected to see in a nation so large, but it was not inherently malicious. Not in many of the places Gold had seen, and she was a simple mare from a much smaller city surrounded by snow-capped mountains. Other than the occasional goat or cow, Trotsia had no non-pony citizens. Bias was an understatement in Trotsia, Gold had always been aware she lived in what bordered on an unintended ethnostate. She moved away because she could not bear the sameness of it all, and knowing that those who wished to intentionally make it such a state. It was lamented by the king that had been wrongly dethroned in the last war; he wrote and spoke out against it as much as he was allowed. Gold’s family had not been the only one she had known who spoke in hushed whispers, urging her to get away, nor was she the only one in her community to leave. She was just the only one who traded one ailing nation, a republic groaning under the weight of prejudice, for another with the same ailments.

Sometimes, she found herself awake at night and tracing the pattern on her ceiling using only her tired eyes. Then, she would wonder if she should have skipped out on Equestria and stayed surrounded by everypony she knew in Trotsia. Gold would have never come if she had known that the equality of Equestria was but a more quietly humiliating and thicker slice of the sameness that she had endured back home. There was no casualness to it in Equestria. At least, none that she could feel. It all felt as mandatory as rainbows, blinding sunshine, and false smiles.

Mortal-led nations like Trotsia kept their armies in an age of bright button-up coats and bayonets for the most part. There were a few exceptions: exotic Saddle Arabia with its scimitar-wielding horse warriors and Mustainia’s multi-species siege camps. She had heard Prance and Germaneigh all had their own knightly troops on par with the solar goddess-princess and her armored legions. But did they feel the same erasure that came from being just another soldier instead of somepony’s comrade and sibling-in-arms, an esteemed officer of the law?

Gold Shield honed her flare spells to perfection in the only magic academy Trotsia had. It was there that she heard ‘Goldener Schild’ said to her for the last time. She longed for it as much as she wished to see the vast landscapes of Equestria unfolding beneath an airship again. That was how she came to this country, and she did not expect to be in a city where there were no airships or even any real green spaces for her to treasure. Even the grass in the one great park in this city had never tasted fresh.

She thought back to the academy again, and how they had tried to spur her into a future in a nation that wasn’t crippled.

Go to Equestria, they had urged her upon graduation. They have magic like there is air.

Gold Shield did not have the heart to write home and tell her family that she didn’t mind hearing her name in her new country’s tongue. It was the least of her ills. She also did not have the heart to tell them that just because magic was prevalent here did not mean it was applied well. They were unicorns like her living in the mountains generations of Schilds had called home, yet were ruled and outvoted by pegasus ponies in the lowlands that did not care for them. Yes, Gold Shield was a soldier under the command of divinity, but she could not bear writing that the work she did was peacetime police work. That was such a small thing and her parents expected her to be the golden foal, or else they would not have named her so.

There was no disgrace in that; all nations required there to be numerous armed forces within one’s borders. What Gold Shield knew there was a disgrace in was that unicorn soldiers were treated like defective earth ponies, save for the higher unicorn officers. She was not permitted to utilize her special talents and she was outfitted identically to an earth pony’s measurements and expected to fight, act, and work in the exact same way as those who were inherently different in their capability from her. All the advanced techniques she had learned were water down the drain in this land.

The only disgrace lay in those that Gold Shield had to be exposed to. Equestria was a generally progressive, diplomatic nation, especially in the southern continent where old military attitudes flourished like butterflies in spring gardens. They welcomed newcomers like Gold Shield, and major cities had diverse neighborhoods. She had expected to end up in a small town like Cape Clydesdale or a southern frontier outpost like Ponyville. Instead, Gold Shield was stationed in the Big Apple and made to clean up the degenerates that brought so much rottenness.

The city had been good, or so Gold was told. Once, long ago, before all the whores came. They are the bait for far more rotten things.

And it was those whores and perverts that Gold Shield had to clean up. Somepony had to, as the United Council of Civilized Kingdoms was clear in its treaty, and Equestria had made the heinous act of self-exploitation illegal long before any other known nation. There would be no monsters walking the streets, whether they were that common sort or they clung to the gilded lie of ‘courtesan’ and ‘call-pony’ in an attempt to hide their vileness. The degenerates who bought such evil were hunted down in slightly different ways. In the end, all who violated principles of dignity and Harmony found themselves under the golden horseshoes of Equestria’s EUP, which Gold now counted herself among.

(Or, at least most of them did.)

That was why it was so surprising that one day, Gold Shield’s superior officer summoned her to see the leader of all Manehattan’s guards. He was an earth pony; of course the vast majority were all earth ponies, especially the superior officers. Gold Shield remembered reading that less than half a dozen cities in Equestria big enough to have superior officers stationed there had any that weren’t earth ponies — and that was counting Cloudsdale, which had to have a non-earth pony anyway.

What was more of a surprise was that when she arrived at the spacious meeting room, the vast majority of ponies gathered around the commander were unicorns. She had always known that some of her coworkers were unicorns, but certainly not this many. As quickly as she could, Gold Shield slipped into the crowd and tried to blend in. There might be trouble at hoof. On went her helmet, and her mane of delicate pale gold with shining streaks disappeared.

…

City Commander Valiant Heart breathed a sigh of relief as Gold Shield was ushered inside and found her place in the crowd. Once she had stepped into the room, her magic shut the door behind her. He took notice of her blinking and watched as the private slipped her helmet on, quickly blending in with the rest of the camouflaged unicorn guards.

Valiant stood up a little straighter, his armor still cold against his coat. Comrade or not, he always felt that unicorns were best kept at a distance. Most of the time that was easy; they rarely filled the higher ranks of the guard that he spent the majority of his time among when he was on duty. Occasionally, one would find that the latest Captain of all guards was a unicorn, but that was a rarity. One couldn’t help but feel uneasy around them, knowing that with just a few simple flashes of light, your day could be ruined and the unnatural could be made into the norm. Who could be blamed for feeling wary of unicorns, knowing how tricky their magic hoodoo was?

He cleared his throat deeply, letting his thoughts stray to the goddess of Canterlot. Princess Celestia was capable of summoning a booming Royal Canterlot Voice that enthralled all her subjects. If he could open with even half the power of his princess, this would all go smoothly.

“I know that every one of you can see what’s going on in this room. This is not a normal meeting and you all are not normal ponies. All your winged comrades are gone, and your regular ones are too. You have only me, and I expect nothing but the highest respect from all of you during this meeting. Our goddess herself is greatly distraught at the tragic violence that has broken out in our city. Any mere mortal would be at the point of tears, but in her perfection, she presses on. All of you who went to school here had classes in Equestrian morality. I know every single one of you remembers the Celestian Principles of Obedience, Kindness, Generosity, Optimism, Humility, Destiny, and Submission. I expect every one of you to exemplify them not just in how you treat me, or how you keep our goddess in mind, but in how you will conduct yourself as royal guards.”

“SIR! YES, SIR!” a room full of unicorns chanted back to him,

Valiant Heart nodded in approval, then sat himself at the desk waiting for him. He slipped his hooves out of the special armor of City Commanders and brought one forehoof to the other, cracking them. “Now, this is what I’m here to start with.”

There were multiple thick file folders on the desk. He scooped up one of them and flipped it open, grabbed a few papers, then stood up. The blackboard behind him was pristinely cleaned by the staff who kept every room of Fort Barnacle in top shape. It was wide and curved like the bottom of a horseshoe so that all who stood in the room could glimpse it. Valiant reached into a bin stuck to the blackboard where horseshoe magnets were waiting. With his mouth, he carefully affixed the papers to the board, then reached into another bin for a piece of red chalk. Every single guard immediately knew that it was time for connections to be made and watched as he drew circles around some papers and lines between the others before returning it.

“What we have here is a case like no other. In our age of modern marvels, every single one of you unicorns can no longer use your magic to escape identification. No longer are those without magic oppressed and able to only guess if a unicorn is behind the crime. No longer is our citizenry able to be victimized with only dependence on powerful unicorns’ limited insight into reading a crime scene to know if anything was done by magic. Generations of work have made us systems that can read into your kind more than hoofprints and teeth can be read. We have heaps of magical evidence from the scenes of these crimes. A unicorn lady by the name of Ebony Henbane is the Head Coroner at this establishment and she is baffled. Why is that?”

Every single unicorn in the room was silent. A few exchanged helpless looks with each other. More than a few were confused and pawing at the ground. Gold Shield had scrunched up her muzzle.

“Sir, permission to speak?” Gold Shield asked.

Valiant Heart looked at her with vague disdain and ran a hoof over his buzzcut. “Permission granted.”

“Have we got any witness sightings yet?”

“No, ma’am. That we do not have. The closest we have to a sighting is this.” He tapped one of the papers with a forehoof. “Notes from Ebony Henbane about the scene of the sole stallion victim showed disturbed blood. Our killer was lying in it.”

“On their back or on their stomach?” somepony asked.

Valiant glared at the crowd. “On their back,” he clarified. “That was when they were getting the bits under the bed, we think.

Gold Shield stared thoughtfully at the floor. “Permission to speak again, sir?”

“Granted,” grumbled Valiant, standing a little straighter. He rolled his withers and his armor rolled with him, catching the light.

“Lying on the back would make it very difficult to get the bits, especially if there were saddlebags to levitate them into. The bits were likely grabbed at some other point. Lying on the stomach would possibly allow us to get an impression of a limb or something that might possibly hint at the physiology of our killer. The back conceals this. We might have a sign of ritualistic behavior here.”

“You are leaping to many conclusions there, Corporal.” Impatience that was hardly ever given to earth ponies and pegasi had crept into his tone.

“Commander,” Gold Shield said quickly, squeezing into the front of the line, “I do not think our killer would have physically been able to cram bits into upside-down saddlebags. They must have gathered the bit some other way. If there was time to lie down, the killer maybe wasn’t in a hurry to leave, sir. Doesn’t anypony else agree?”

There were hesitant nods and murmurs from the other unicorns.

“Corporal, this isn’t the most important detail in the whole damn—”

“Permission to speak again, sir?” Gold Shield replied, her gaze nervously flicking from the commander to the blackboard, then to her comrades.

“This is the last time I’m letting you derail things,” Valiant said, giving a heavy sigh and tapping his hoof impatiently. He wasn’t even looking at Gold Shield. Instead, his hard gaze was trained and squinting at the files on the board.

“The file with the diagram of the approximate position of the killer lying down shows a way that would have been impossible for an adult unicorn. Just look at—”

“Hay biscuits and homefries! Sweet Celestia, what do you mean? The killer is a unicorn. That is unicorn-level complexities in magic. Ain’t no damn way a unicorn isn’t galloping about, creating all these crystals, and killing all these ponies.”

“—the way that the head is positioned,” Gold Shield finished meekly, dropping her gaze to the floor. Two unicorns on her left took steps away from the shorter mare as if they sensed the shame rolling off her.

The commander’s gaze was shaper than a knife and as trained on Gold Shield as the scope of a griffin’s hunting gun. “What about it?” His voice was low and angry. “I’m here to let you lot know you ought to be better at finding clues in these damn murders. We have a record number of unicorns here in this department compared to previous years. And yet, none of you can solve anything? It’s like I ought to pour the details down all your throats, and yet y’all’re supposed to know magic! Tell me, Gold, what’s so special about the head arrangement? How does that matter more than any of the important details that I have yet to get to due to your insubordination?”

Gold Shield’s expression was a mask of false calm as she stared quietly at the floor.

“Go on,” came the bitter mocking tone of Valiant Heart. “Speak, girl.”

“Sir…” Gold Shield began weakly, “the killer’s head is far too close to the bed. A full-grown unicorn would get stuck. D-Developmental surveys show that unicorns have specially evolved to find comfort in an array of unusual sitting positions as well as almost being universally prone to stillness in sleep. Even unicorns with ADHD are shown to have remarkably low rates of hyperactivity. We are inclined to any movement that would not hurt our horns. To lie on one’s back and use that position to look under the bed — or to tilt back the head at all — would have gotten her horn stuck. The way the illustration is suggesting that the head was held — sort of pushed back against the ground and upside down — would have gotten the horn stuck in the bed or the ground. How is this unicorn behavior?”

“How does that overrule any of the magic?” snapped Valiant Heart. “You can’t blame any other race for things like this.”

“What do we know about the magical signature?” piped somepony else.

“The spell-makeups are completely unlike anything from any creature the analysts have seen, but the signature is a pony and not qilin or any other damn creature,” came the almost rehearsed sound of Valiant Heart’s gruff voice.

“That doesn’t really sound like a pony…” somepony muttered, “...our spell-makeups are essential to identifying magical illnesses, disabilities, and tying in species identification.”

The voice had been decidedly foreign enough that Valiant Heart snapped his attention to the disguised unicorn guards. “Which one of you said that?”

“It was I,” said a voice. “Staff Sergent Ziel Erfasst, sir. Germaneigh was not long to make something like your Equestrian Arcane Registry Base when your country traded with my homeland the workings of such complex systems. We found many secrets to reading spell-structures and what they can tell us about the magical arts.”

“I’m sure that many ponies would simply applaud that as a power of Germane engineering,” Commander Valiant Heart said tiredly, with an irritable hint to his tone. “But I’m not one to dish out praises so easily. When Equestria discovers those things, that’s when they’ll be damn relevant. Germaneigh and their tentative new ideas are wonderful, probably — but they have nothing to do with the crimes that I’ve been assigned. Now, if anypony will let me speak, I’ll get to the important details Princess Celestia herself wanted me to give to you lot of unicorns about solving this crime better—”

“Sir! Sir!” chirped one unicorn mare, who jumped up and down from her place in the back rows. “If the killer is a unicorn skilled in some genuinely prodigious magics, why does their tool-work and other basic acts come across so sloppy?”

Valiant Heart’s face was close to purple with his newfound anger.

“Magical disability?” somepony suggested.

Another unicorn chimed in: “This would be a severe one, and somehow it’s not documented—”

“And disabilities in magic are registered with the ARB and other services,” replied another unicorn guard, nodding sagely.

“ENOUGH FROM ALL OF YOU! EVERY LAST ONE OF YOU NEEDS TO SHUT UP AND SHOW SOME OF THE PRINCIPLES HERE! OBEDIENCE, WHICH YOU ALL ARE SHIRKING! SUBMISSION, WHICH I DO NOT SEE HAPPENING! HUMILITY, WHICH NONE OF YOUR KIND KNOW HOW TO SHOW!” The nostrils of Valiant Sky were flared, and his booming voice sent every unicorn back into perfect dour obedience. It would not be the last time that racism worked its way into their orders or treatment. “Conformity is a virtue. Our goddess has always said so. Now, you lot are going to listen to me review everything about the cases with you and the profile that is currently in place. Then, you are going to apply those to your guard work and labor even half as hard as the pegasi and earth pony troops of this city do in solving the case. I will leave you the contact information of Ebony Henbane if any of you want to flood that poor mare’s mail with your crazy theories. Got it? GOT IT?”

“Sir! Yes, sir!” chanted all of the unicorns, each wholly drained of enthusiasm for the progress they thought they were making.

“Good,” hissed Valiant. “Now, as I was saying, the offender profile is that of a unicorn, but what we really need to review to see that is all the scenes…”

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Dear Ebony Henbane,

May the gods find you well. I left off the title of ‘doctor’ because I admittedly do not know if coroners are doctors. I am writing to you after the City Commander Valiant Heart ordered all unicorns in the Manehattan EUP to listen to a meeting. Apparently, many in the city blame us for not doing enough with the crime-solving. Even civilians who have eagerly kept track of the papers and the evidence found are often blaming us and insisting we are not doing enough work. This city is not my home; I am from a little village in the Trotsian mountains that you would not know, so there is no sense in boring you with the name. I say this so that I might apologize in advance if my Equestrian is not very good.

There were some discoveries I felt were greatly overlooked at the meeting. All of them surrounded the idea that the attacker is a unicorn. I know that you are probably skeptical of any revision of this since you have done so much work in creating the profiles and reports we have to work with. I ask that you please read this letter all the way through, though. We may have discovered something important. It has to do with small discrepancies that I am not sure anypony would have noticed and do not blame you for looking over either.

First and foremost: the diagram of the scene with the murdered stallion is what I wish to draw your attention to. Look at the positioning of the head. See how close it is to the bed? The angle of the head to get that impression would have also involved leaning the head in a way that is sort of pushed back against the ground and upside-down. An adult unicorn would have gotten their horn stuck due to both the proximity and the position. Also, this puts the saddlebags upside-down too. Levitating bits into saddlebags in this position does not work; you end up having to levitate any bits put into the saddlebag in place so they do not spill out. It also does not create a very big space to efficiently levitate those bits into the bag, to begin with. This is all because we have clear evidence that the killer was on their back.

Now, I am a unicorn. I know that if you work as a coroner, you must be a fellow unicorn. How hard we are to find in this city! I would like to point out that even if you are not familiar with it, unicorns are not likely to lie down this way. There is a lot of research, both foreign and domestic, that shows unicorns are innately prone to arrange themselves in ways that preserve their horn. This extends to both sitting and sleeping positions, as well as the drastically diminished rate of conventional (physical) hyperactivity and ability to sleep without moving that unicorns have. We do not have any reason to believe that the killer has shown this in some of the scenes discussed.

Due to this, I propose that something entirely different was going on. I propose that the killer lying down wasn’t to obtain the bits and that they grabbed all of the ones they could at an unknown time after getting up. I believe that the behavior we witnessed was a ritualistic one, and in my best guess, it means that the killer was in no hurry to leave. They did not manage to take all of the bits and they even left some tools. Makeup that possibly belonged to them was found in the bathroom, and generally, if most unicorns know the spell, they cast a quick clean-up spell that makes things like that disappear — but traces of magic would then be visible. Maybe the killer was disturbed and fled sometime after they engaged in this ritual.

However, this is not the only evidence that leads me or my fellow unicorn guards to believe we are dealing with something not added to the data we were all presented with. The inability to identify the species components in any of the individual spell’s makeup but the magical signature including pony components stands out as an unusual problem, especially because they were said to rule out other creatures. The tool-work is remarkably amateurish but we have no proof of a magical disability, which would, of course, lead to a known magical signature.

There have been no witness sightings. Nopony reports anypony covered in blood — yes, I know it is likely being magicked away. No racially-motivated reports about unicorns in non-unicorn areas of the city are being invoked despite what the profile says. The killer operates in areas that are working to middle class and filled with mostly earth ponies, pegasi, or low-income immigrants who do not live in the main neighborhoods their kind are often forced into. The stores in this area receive many foreign goods and have access to many other parts of the city, including waterway travel, quite easily. This pony was able to look like they belonged at wharves, near row houses, by apartments, and even among non-pony immigrants.

We know that they are deeply mentally disturbed as an individual. However, they manage not to operate in the daytime. Their life is probably a secret, either intentionally or because others have not realized what they are doing. There are many reasons that they likely operate at night, and I would like to propose one more: they are hiding something, not just that they are a killer, but something they are wearing. The blood imprints show they wear a cloak, one that is either layered or over layers of something else. Traveling cloaks like that are normally worn by outsiders to the city, after all, Manehattan wear is some of the most distinct in the world. I would expect the normal traveler's cloak to be swapped out at one of the thatched-roof inns of Bucklyn. Yet, we know that our killer is intimately familiar with this city — I suggest that they are even a native of it.

Why would they wear something that could make them look out of place? Quite simply, I think it is because it serves a function for them. Why do they appear to go out of the way to dirty their clothes or possibly not take them off at times when it would suit them? I think it is either utility or fetishistic reasons. How hasn’t anypony reported them as abnormal? I think this is because they are in the early years of the onset of their sickness and manage to pass as normal very well. More than that, I think that despite how evil they must be, they have something that is helping them during the day, or something that prevents them from attacking. You noted in your reports that they act in a way that suggests physical confrontation does not really work for them, especially with the stallion. I noticed that in your final report.

I think what you are dealing with is somepony who isn’t a unicorn and who has an artifact. This is why there is an abnormality in the magical makeup and why their aura is unknown. Their artifact helps them with a wide range of things, yet magic that is more natural for unicorns remains quite difficult for them.

We have no positive evidence that the killer is a unicorn and some negative evidence that makes it fairly unlikely that they are. I think that this investigation has limited itself to racial stereotyping based on assumptions of how things usually are. Yes, most ponies who use magic in this way are unicorns. Yes, we have part of the magical results confirming that the killer is a pony. However, we do not have the elements that would confirm they are a unicorn. We have no single witness sighting or piece of bodily evidence other than the sexual traces that they have left on all of the female victims. I believe that this could explain the magical crystals found in all of the blood too. They might be the discharge or waste products from the artifact.

In Equestrian history, I have found stories about a mare named Hydia Invidia. She was a unicorn in the earlier centuries of Equestria’s rule who found an artifact that looked as though ponies of any race could use it. From there, she was able to have her corruption and depravity made manifest. However, the artifact also helped her hide her corruption so that she appeared normal, until Princess Celestia defeated her.

I do not know what the artifact would do. I technically do not know if the Blood Mage has one, but I would say that it is likely that they do, and that ‘Mage’ is a very inappropriate title indeed if they are not a unicorn. Without anypony having seen who the murderer is, we can have no way of guessing its limits or what specifically it helps the killer with. I do think that bringing more magical investigation into the case would help my superior officers. I know not the origin of any artifact, but I do wonder where it is that the killer gets the things used for their attacks. We assume that they have always been a murderer, when they may have started small, as many criminals do. Perhaps they have been a thief of objects before they were a thief of lives.

Sincerely,

Corporal Goldener Schild of the Manehattan EUP

Chapter 13: Pretty Pattern's Predicament

Pretty Pattern had a fierce stomachache and a freshly sharpened axe leaning beside her night-side table. Only one of those things was good, and she still wasn’t sure if it was good enough. It was not that she was unable to afford a proper weapon, but even a simple sword was expensive. None of her kitchen knives were anything close to menacing, nor would they do her any good in a fight against a living, breathing monster. So, she had bought an ax. One that was weighty in her telekinesis and horribly sharp, like something both a lumberjack and a mercenary could use with ease. She had practiced swinging with it properly.

She had to, of course. Manehatten had become the capital of nightmares, for Patti could not recall the last time she opened the paper and saw something other than the dangers posed by murderers and whores. The years when she had moved here had faded, back when she was daisy fresh for her first year of university and still believed earth pony charm was real. Now the neighbors had plastic smiles and whispered about her being a ‘tricky stickhead’, ‘frou-frou magic fool’, and other far more awful things when they thought she couldn’t hear.

Never in her life would Pretty Pattern have come to believe that ponies could say such things, and certainly not try to hide those kinds of words with smiles. She was taught that earth ponies were the industrious blessings of Equestria, whose character was vital, humble, and kind. To believe that they would hiss about her as ‘bit-hoarding waste’ or insist that she was espousing ‘typical unicorn demands’ and controlling the banks earth ponies claimed were robbing them would have gotten Patti branded as a racist in any other city. In Manehatten, Patti had come to know that this was what the sun-faring earth ponies of the concrete jungles thought about her race.

All because she was a unicorn, too. It broke her heart that the city she was forced to call home had tried to make her feel inferior because of that which could not be altered. Gods knew that she would move if she could, especially with the rise of these bloody murders. The was a mare that she had fallen in love with — an earth pony, no less — that had long since dumped Patti and left her to mind her sewing shop on her own. Now her life’s ambitions weren’t to marry the sweetheart she had since her university days but to scrape together enough bits to leave the city that had brought the two mares together. Pretty Pattern no longer wanted the urban bustle she thought would invigorate her, for Manehatten was devoid of the chicness she had wanted, and it had taken years to realize that. Being a student had hidden so much from her.

In the meantime, she had bought herself the axe. She bought it because while she knew she could always trust the Royal Guard, she could not trust them to be fast enough to save her from a monster. After much hemming and hawing, Pretty had invested in the only self-defense within her budget. Having it nearby had eased the paralyzing fear that had been transforming her weeks into never-ending dives into the fount of constant anxiety. With it, she knew that it was now quite possible she could render any who might wish to harm her naught but dragon-chow upon the floor.

The truth was, Patti hadn’t bought the axe out of fear of being slain by the Blood Mage. Not really. She knew full well to keep her muzzle in the papers, the Royal Guard releases, and in the wealth of research that the libraries had. The killer worked by night and targeted sex offenders in self-exploitation, with the occasional wayward soul. Pretty Pattern was no ghastly whore. She did not resemble one in the slightest, in looks or in manner. She was educated, without a cruel bone in her body, and free of perversions. None of her flaws were so great that they consumed her. She was quiet, gods-fearing, strove for kindness, employed, and was not out past dusk. She lived far enough away from the neighborhoods where these horrors were playing out. Her greatest wish was that there would be a sewing club in Manehatten that accepted unicorns instead of refusing them with those Celestia-mimicking smiles and honeyed words about why unicorns couldn’t join woven in every way that managed to avoid direct racism.

Pretty Pattern knew she had a likely chance of avoiding being butchered though, not because she was cocky but because she fell so far outside of the target victim of the Blood Mage. She was sure to educate herself on that; it was how she had come to know there were more types of monsters than blood-crazed sadists cantering about the night. In doing all her research, her true fear had become all the more realized with every flip of a page. What she should fear most was not the diabolical butcher stalking the streets, but the desperate fiends of self-exploitation.

That knowledge had chilled her to the bone, sitting in the pit of her stomach colder than iron could have been. Every branch of the libraries of Manehatten was stocked with resources informing ponies on all the ruin brought by self-exploitation, with hundreds of headlines, studies, and so much more cramming the shelves and archives. Mares Against Monsters chapters supplied large donations of information and the sapient monster division of S.M.I.L.E that focused on capturing criminals published weighty intelligence papers on the matter.

Patti was a mare close to thirty who was a teacup next to a well when it came to how she felt about her height. She still had all the fragile delicacy of a filly in slenderness and stature. She had never dabbled much with makeup, lending to an unshakeable look of girlishness. Her clothes were always bright, lovely things a mother would secure for a daughter’s birthday. Every bit of her looked like a teen filly. Her whisper of a voice even made her sound like one. She had librarians ask her for identification on every visit when she requested material deemed adult, as though one day she might suddenly be lying.

All of this made her the perfect potential victim for a prostitute.

It was Patti’s research that had damn near slammed this burden into her skull. When a pony was deluded into thinking self-exploitation was desirable, there was so much greed to account for. The number one culprits behind vanishing minors across the nation were not disgruntled family members, but the cruel hooves of streetwalkers snatching up foals to traffic for pocket bits. This was how they expanded their income and ‘selected’ their ‘successors’ for their awful crimes. That young victim would then be forced out when they were deemed too much of a nuisance.

After that, the research spoke where Pretty Pattern never could. Two paths emerged: the victim could go to the Royal Guard and see their abuser hunted down and done away with, or they could do the unthinkable: start up the cycle again.

Suffice it to say, there were enough former victims who engaged in the sadism of their once-captors and kept that cycle alive enough for it to find its way into scholarly studies.

Poor Pretty Pattern was well-aware that despite the national rarity of these vanishings, she was the perfect victim for potential equine trafficking. There was little to stop a whore so desperate for a ‘successor’ once they got it in their head to get one. Somepony so unhinged would do anything they could to snatch her up if they really want to, long past all the moral restraints a civilized pony would have. If a slut wanted to slide into Pretty Pattern’s apartment and sabotage her, the only thing stopping them was windows, shutters, locks, and a door.

All the ponies in the newspaper stories and survivor tales had no means to defend themselves except hooves and feathers. Unicorns with limited or weak magic like Patti had a hard time charging up teleportation and other spells if they were being assaulted, slipped a potion, or robbed of focus.

None of them had ever had an axe.

Now Pretty Pattern did, and she would be ready to take back the night, one swing at a time if any prostitute dares breach her home. She would not show mercy to the merciless, and any invaders would be disposed of properly. Her axe was for her friends, her neighbors, her city, and her nation as much as it was for herself.

Chapter 14: Bloodhail

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Act One: Monsters (May Not Be Found)

[This poem was scrawled anonymously and submitted to the New Manehattan Times. Whether it was written by the Blood Mage of Manehattan is unknown. It is not known whether she was capable of composing poetry, as she never did ever confess to writing any. In the present day, it currently resides in the Canterlot Archives. For its vulgarity against Princess Celestia, it is illegal for any non-royalty to access or acknowledge its existence. Reprinting it and quoting it is strictly forbidden by Equestrian law.]

For heavens
hide all I do
in order to keep away from you
and this city hides all that is true

Sake catch me
if you really can put me away
never let my secrets see the light of day

Before I kill more
I will be out like a monster as you are all sleeping
and the Sun-Nag high upon her throne will be weeping

I cannot control myself
which is just as I desire
let Celestia herself light my funeral pyre

Author's Note

Oh boy. A long Ice Star story? It's been quite a while. You're going to tell me that I can't use copyrighted lyrics on here. I know, none of those red lines are things with a copyright on 'em.

They're derived from these lines that were written at a real murder scene. Everything else is my own. Because that's where this is going. They were so bizarre that I just had to use them for something because they just stuck in my head.

Hoo boy.

Act Two: From Tartarus (Without Love)

[This letter was scrawled anonymously and left on the doorstep of the then-mayor of Manehattan's home overnight. Whether it was written by the Blood Mage of Manehattan is unknown. Nothing indicates the author of the letter beyond the paper's poor quality and that it did indeed come with an equine kidney. The Blood Mage did admit to writing letters to taunt those who worked toward her capture, but it is unknown which ones are the authentic pieces. She was known to tease in her interrogations. In the present day, it currently resides in the Canterlot Archives. For its vulgarity against Princess Celestia, it is illegal for any non-royalty to access or acknowledge its existence. Reprinting it and quoting it is strictly forbidden by Equestrian law.]

From Tartarus.

Mayor-Stallion,

Sir

I send you half kidney I took from one whore. I preserved it for you. I licked the blood and bile from the other piece and threw it into the sea. I might send you the bloody knife and crystals that took it out if you wait a while longer.

Signed,

Have your city catch me when they can, Mayor-Stallion. Spit on the goddess that allows you such power.

[Various speculation at the time of the investigation suggests it is highly likely the letter is authentic. The syntax is equal to what the Blood Mage was capable and many of the later victims were missing even more organs. The murderer also confessed to various illegal cannibalistic crimes against the later ones that would have been slain around the time the letter was deposited.]

Author's Note

A story relevant adaptation of a Jack the Ripper letter. You can read that letter here.