A predator meets ponies
Chapter 1: Home?
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I'm rewriting the story to have a more dramatic effect due to most of the comments
Chapter 1: Home?
The yautja ship, the ship of the creature known as the predators, who loved to hunt the biggest game, but also follow an code of honor to their enemies. On this specific ship, A Predator was seen on a table dead, this was known as Scar, the predator who killed the Alien Queen in the Antarctic with a human survivalist named Lex Woods. He lied down on a table for autopsy yet his body slowly began to move and a creature suddenly emerged from his chest.

The creature slowly began to form into a hybrid of a sort and grow and turn into a monstrous gigantic monstrosity

The creature began to move towards a door and suddenly it opened and a Yautja was seen piloting the spacecraft, unaware of its last second of life was to come
The yautja driving heard something and the moment it turned around, the hybrid decapitated it and ship began to fall and crash all the way down until it's vision was white.
(Unknown Location)
The predator on the autopsy table was surprisingly slowly getting up and sat up in a daze, it looked around and began to see the ship was trashed and trees were everywhere. As it got up, it looked at itself and saw its body was covered in a green blood like substance and gave a click as if he was in shock at what happened or as to how he was still alive. It got up on its feet and searched for its gear. It managed to find a mask,a cloak, a plasma like gun, a spear, a wrist-blade and a sharpened throwing disk. It began to walk around the ship and saw the dead bodies of both the hybrid and the driver predator, with the hybrid impaled on a tree branch and the driver predator's head on the controls. The beaten creature then limped out to investigate the damage and saw he and his ship were in a forest.

As the creature saw the damage and clicked as if it was annoyed, the ship ended up exploding, with the creature's eyes widening in shock. Knowing repairing it would take time, it decided to search for materials to aid in rebuilding the ships presumably irreparable damaged state. It walked off on one road for its search for any useful material.
(5 hours later)
The creature had found nothing of help and continued to keep searching, even crafting a few makeshift weapons such as wooden daggers and a large pointy spear. As it was making more weapons, it suddenly heard an scream and went to investigate. When it found the source it saw 3 small horse like creatures being threatened by a group of large wooden made like canines, reminding him of the hounds on his planet.


The predator saw the wooden wolves and hid in a tree, turning it's cloak on, it fired a plasma cannon that was on its shoulder at one of the wooden canines and succeeded in killing one with a charged blast, but the other two were still up and now more angrier.
"What the hay was that?!" The orange winged equine said in shock
As the two wooden wolves lunged at the three, the invisible creature jumped down and impaled the first one with its spear and threw it's disk at the other, slicing it on half, it then finished off the wooden wolves with the plasma blaster on it's shoulder. After they were dealt with, the 3 small equines gave surprised looks as to what just happened.
"What in tarnation just happened?!" The yellow coated equine wearing a bow on her head said.
"Is anypony there?!" The white horned one asked frightfully
The predator, still in cloak form, began to look at them and see if they were threats and saw no sort of weapon nor opposition and revealed itself slowly at the now surprised kids
"Oh my Celestia!" the white filly said
"What. Is. That?!" The orange one asked
The 3 equines trembled in fright from the tall predator as it simply continued to study them, most notably the marks on their flanks, the yellow one then asked while still trembling, only a bit less
"Um, excuse me sir, but..who are you?"
The predator didn't answer, but said in a garbled tone "..Sc...ar"
The yellow filly responded "Mah names Apple Bloom."
The orange winged said "I'm Scootaloo."
The white horned one said "I'm Sweetie Belle"
All 3 them said "And we are THE CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS!"
The predator, now known as Scar, gave an unreadable expression as it began to walk away, Apple Bloom asked
"Um Mr. Scar, where are you goin?"
"To....Ho....me" Scar said in distortion
"But...what about us?" Sweetie Belle asked in fear
"Hmmm?" Scar said
"We kinda got lost in here" Scootaloo confessed
"And we sorta forgot the way back" Sweetie Belle added
"Can you help us?" Apple Bloom asked
The predator only glared in dismay, only for the three to use cute puppy eyes and pouts and say all together
"Pwease?"
The predator, with a look of pressure, nodded it's head at the three fillies and walked with them searching for a way out, it used it's mask to scan if there was any exit out of the forest and saw a road leading up to be town and signaled the three with a click as they saw the town.

Apple Bloom said with relief " Look there's Ponyville!"
"Come on!" Scootaloo said
The 3 fillies began to run in the town as Scar proceeded to walk back in the forest, which all 3 fillies noticed.
"Where are you going?" Sweetie Belle asked
"To....ho...me" Scar said, pointing at the forest.
"But it's dangerous there!" Scootaloo said
"Plus, don't you wanna meet our friends?"
"No..me..need...fix....home....with...new....tools" Scar said in bad grammar.
"Wait, the town sells some tools to help rebuild stuff, how about you come there?"
Scar was slowly debating tgat on one hand, hevwas a foreigner technically, on the other hand, he needed tools to fix his damaged ship. After some debating, Scar nodded his head and Apple Bloom said
"Ok, follow me!"
Scar, along with Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo followed her, with Scar only hoping that nobody would attack him recklessly or kill him again.
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