Chapter 15: Taking down a kingdom

3rd POV

Far away from the kingdom of the ponies we are now brought a much different kingdom one where the male superiority is law, and the females are reduced to slaves with collars around their necks while wearing nothing but rags. This was the caribou kingdom where the male caribou live their lives as the superior gender while their females called the doe are treated as nothing but property and to produce more heirs to their kingdom. And the one in charge of this kingdom was none other than King Dain a bastard of a ruler who believes women are nothing sex slaves who serve only their male masters. Something that he has constantly been reinforcing after dealing with many of the doe who simply refuse to know their place in the world. However today he was mostly wondering what was taking so long from his scout division that was sent to the Everfree for he needed to know the best way to take over the land before taking Canterlot. He had also heard word about a newcomer that had been protecting the land which the king simply waved his hand at, after hearing that the one protecting the kingdom of the ponies was a male and in the mind of the arrogant king, Dain believed that he would have no problem trying to convince the hero to join him as he caresses the medallion in his possession.

As the king sits comfortably within his castle, he was unaware of what was going on in the streets which was in utter chaos. As something from out of nowhere landed before the center of the kingdom as a strange bipedal being was seeing rising from the ground his yellow golden eyes glaring at the many males around him. Until the creature spotted an angry male caribou smacking around a female doe with tears running down her eyes as the caribou had her by the collar around the doe’s neck. Just then the caribou is then kicked to the side by the unknown creature sending him flying before slamming onto a nearby wall. The doe is shocked after witnessing the display and begins to tremble once the creature looks at her as she feared that the being would try to harm her as well. But that didn’t happen instead the creature just extends its metal claw towards her and with a kind voice said…

“You need a hand?”

He said to which the Doe nodded and grabbed onto the creature’s claw and was back onto her hooves as the other doe look on with wonder while the males were in raged at the display. It was then that one of the guards approached the creature with his sword drawn as he places a hand over the creature’s shoulder.

“For attacking a citizen, I hereby place you under arres-…” he was cut off as the creature delivered a powerful uppercut sending the guard flying his body spinning in the air as pieces of his armor fall off from his body before landing on the ground in nothing but his underwear.

Both caribou and doe were in disbelief at this as the creature proceeds to remove the collar around the doe’s neck before turning around and facing the others as the creature cracks both of his fist together for what was about to begin.

“Tell me something. Who gives you right to lay your hands on a female like that? Where I come from, we were raised to treat every female with love and respect. And that the ones who hurt females are considered the scum of the world which now that I look at the rest of you so called male caribou are. But if you happen to surrender, I won’t have to punish every single one of you caribou pendejos. So, what do you say?”

Said the creature and in response one the guard came charging at his with a battle axe above his head before bringing it down only for the axe to be stopped by 3 of the creatures’ claws before receiving a kick to the guard’s belly sending him back as he collides with the other guards.

“THE HARD WAY IT IS!!!!”

Said the creature before dashing towards the males with great speed as the males then charge toward the unknown being with their weapons drawn as a fight broke out at the center of it all.

Many of the males and guards were fighting against an unknown being with a metal hand as the creature was punching and kicking many of the male caribou. Though what shocked them the most was when the creature was firing twin beams of energy from its eyes at the guards who were now frozen in place. Some of the heavily armored guards charged at him only to be taken down by the creature who let out a blast of red fire from his mouth as many of them collapsed unable to handle the heat from the flames. Some of the guards used their weapons on the creature only to either miss as the creature would dodge their attacks or end up having their weapons shatter upon making contact on the creature’s body. Along the way the creature is seen freeing many of the female doe’s left and right as some of them began to join him in the fight some wanting to be free from their masters while some of them wanted payback and boy will they receive it. Armed with swords, spears, and any weapon dropped by the guards the doe fought with all their might as they follow behind the creature who was mowing down many of the guards.

Soon more of them start swarming each of them more armored and carrying around axes and hammers as they charged toward the unknown creature. As he raised his metal hand to the sky as he summoned a two-handed war hammer made of stone and yellow crystal as it sparked with yellow energy before delivering a swift swing at one of the guards cracking the entire upper body before sending him flying then slams another down to the head as it flattens him like a pancake. Just as more of them come charging at the creature he begins to charge more power into the hammer before firing beam of electricity as every single guard was electrified before being blasted away before hitting the ground.

Once that was done, he then rounds up everyone of the male caribou citizen and guards to the center as the creature fires twin beams from his eyes at the caribou trapping the males in ice as they struggled to break free while also shivering from the ice. The Doe cheer at their victory only to be silenced as once they saw their savior having his hand raised.

“Its still to soon to be celebrating for there is still the matter of dealing with the king. So until the king is gone this land will truly be free from the caribou filth and their beliefs. NOW WHO’S WITH ME?!!”

The doe cheered loudly while the males seem to growl in place.

“You traitor. Do you realize what you just done? Mark my words you will suffer for going against your fellow males.” Yelled out on the guards to which the creature then slaps across the face before grabbing him by the neck.

“CALLATE TU BOCA HIJO DE PERRA. THE WAY I SEE IT. IT WILL BE YOU AND THE REST OF THE MALES THAT WILL BE SUFFERING FOR ENSLAVING THE FEMALES HERE. AND AFTER DEALING WITH THE KING I WILL LET THEM DECIDE WHAT TO DO WITH YOU.”

Note: he said Shut your mouth you son of a bitch.

Said the creature in a he and the doe’s rush toward the castle with the intent of taking down a tyrant once and for all.

Meanwhile King Dain was enjoying the confines of his throne until the peace was broken by a guard who busted into the throne room unannounced before much to the king’s annoyance.

“You better have a good reason as to why you’re here or so help me I will hang you by the balls for such action.” Threatened the king as the guards shrank from his gaze.

“M-my lord the females their revolting…” said the frightened guard to which the King simply scoffed.

“This again. No matter I will simply have to make them obey if that’s the case.” He said holding onto his medallion.

“Your highness they’re being led by a strange creature that came from the sky. The one with the metal claw…” said the guard who was shivering at the memory but before the King could say anything the sound of fighting can be heard on the other side of the doors before, they’re kicked open by a strange bipedal being with a metal claw as both doors are flown off from their hinges and into the floor.

“Hello Dain…”

Frank POV

As I let the doe deal with the castle guards, I then asked one of the castle guards to where the king was though he refused I then threatened to cut his balls off while also having the tip of my sword close to his groin. He then told me that the king was in the throne room and proceeded to tell me where it was as I put away my sword then punched the guard unconscious before tossing him to the side. Once I arrived, I proceeded to kick the doors down as the force from the kick sent the doors off from their hinges as I then saw the bastard king and one of his guards trembling with fear as I walked towards them in a relaxed pace and was now in front of the two with both arms crossed.

I also got a good look at the king for he was a blacker colored caribou unlike the guards who had a brown colored coat, he had on a pair of skinny looking antlers on his head, wore a royal red robe, lots of gold accessories like rings and earrings, and a strange looking medallion around his neck. The king then cleared his throat before looking to his guard with a neutral gaze.

“You are dismissed.” He said to the guard who immediately bolted out from the doorway as the king then looked back to me with the same neutral gaze.

“So may I ask why you so rudely entered my home unannounced?” asked the king to which I rolled my eyes at him.

“Oh, nothing really, just to knock some sense into a perverted king for sending a scouting group for possible ways to invade Ponyvile.” I said in a neutral tone though my eyes were glaring at the king who snorted at my words.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about I did no such thing.” He said before I pulled out the scroll from my bag and presented it to him with his signature in it.

“This document says otherwise, the group was also transporting captured slaves from the other kingdoms that your men have either made deals with or raided. As for the group that was in the Everfree I have already dealt with them so don’t expect them to be coming back any time soon.” I said my tone changing from neutral to icy. For a second, I saw the Dain’s expression shift to anger before going back to his neutral expression as he then had a calm smile on his face.

“I am sure that we can both discuss a proper way to deal with this issue.” He said as his smile slowly shifted from calm to sinister as I raised an eyebrow at him.

“What’s there to discuss you were planning to invade the ponies and are responsible for raiding and enslaving many females of various races. The way I see it you will have to face punishment as well as life in prison for what you have done.” I said in a matter-of-fact tone.

Just then his medallion started to glow as the sight of an eye appeared from the center as I then noticed the king smiling evilly towards me.

“Because it was all a plan to get you here. You see I had heard of a powerful male had arrived in Canterlot one that would help aid the caribou enforce male dominance to the entire world. With your power that rivals against many of the races all around Equis nothing shall stop me. The medallion that I wear grants me the ability to control any being before me forcing them to obey any command I give them which is what you will be doing RIGHT NOW!!!” said the king as I looked at him with an unamused gaze as I yawned much to the king’s bewilderment.

“What why are you not under my control?” he said in disbelief before receiving a right jab to the face as he was sent back before crashing onto his throne.

“Sorry to burst your bubbles Dain but magic doesn’t work on me and even if it did mind control doesn’t work on me many have tried, but failed thanks to my head being very thick for anyone to pry into it. So, are you going to take your punishment like a good little boy or do I have to discipline you myself?” I said though I wasn’t lying when I mentioned that mind control doesn’t work on me which if found out when one of the generals had the ability when Prof. Chrome tried to use a mind control ray on me.

But as Dain was slowly getting up he raised his head as he scowled at me as his body began to grow bigger and more muscular like Bane and the hulk as he toward over me with anger in his eyes and his teeth bared that were now fangs.

“You damn ape I will make you suffer for laying your filthy hands on me. No one punches the king of the caribou and lives to tell the tale. NO ONE!!!” he said before lunging towards me as he raises both of his large hands over his head before bringing them down hard as a loud slam was made as the entire castle shook from the attack as the area was engulfed in a dust cloud.

Yet when the dust finally settled Dain realized that he didn’t hit anything as he looked around wondering where I was for, I had dashed out of the way and was now behind him.

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I whistled at him as Dain turns around to find me unharmed as I then gave him the finger before leaping towards him and deliver a powerful drop kick towards him as he blocks the attack with his arms, yet the force of the attack still sends him back as he crashes toward the wall and forming a large hole. I land on my feet as Dain looks at me with disbelief in his eyes before it changes into a scowl as he then gets up from the hole and comes charging toward me as he pulls back his right fist and swings at me. To which I weave to the side then deliver a left jab to his face though not too hard, but enough for him to feel it as he then shakes off from the attack then delivers a left swing to which I weave to the side before delivering a right hook. Dain starts to get even madder as his face goes completely red as I laughed a bit at the sight and with rage begins to send a barrage of punches towards me as I dodge each of them with ease much to the king’s annoyance.

“STOP MOVING!!!” he yelled out as he continued throwing punches at me, I then proceeded to deliver a right jab to the king’s gut causing him to freeze while also going wide-eyed from the hit. Once I removed my hand from his gut Dain clutches around his gut before throwing up onto the carpet floor before turning towards me still in disbelief.

“Looks like it will take more than that to discipline someone like you so I might as well get serious then. But keep in mind I did give you a chance to surrender.”

I say to the king as my eyes began to glow with a bright intensity before shooting towards him like a missile as I slam the king through the many walls and floors of the castle. After hitting through 18 floors and 39 walls I then punch Dain upwards the force of it sending him up like a rocket as I flew up onto the sky and as Dain was in front of me I then kicked him forward then flew behind him and kicked him again and proceeded to do this multiple times and from all angles.

UP, DOWN, LEFT, RIGHT, DOWN, RIGHT, LEFT, UP, RIGHT, UP, LEFT, DOWN.

King Dain was being bounced around like a damn ball from a pin ball machine as I continued to kick him from all sides before finally delivering one final kick that sends him flying as he comes crashing down at the town center where all the captured males and guards look at with shock and disbelief.

“GOAL!” Is what I yelled out pretending that I was playing a game of soccer and had just made the winning goal for the team. Once that feeling faded, I then set myself down on the ground as the doe were exiting out of the castle and were now looking at me with wonder as I set myself down to the ground before them.

“I take it you all took care of the guards in the castle, right?” I asked to which they all nodded as I noticed some new faces with the doe such as griffons, zebras, buffalo, and much to my shock Kirin, dragons, and lionesses.

“We have also freed others who were trapped within the dungeons of the castle however we were drawn from the fight that was going on outside of the castle as we saw something being launched to the town center.” Said one doe as I nodded at her.

“Yeah, sorry about that I was dealing with King Dain and was king him around as punishment for his actions and was sent flying towards the town center thanks to me. Though we should probably head over there now.” I said to them but just before I could one of the griffons called out to me.

“Why are you helping us? What is it that you plan to gain for helping up us?” she asked as all of the other females wondered as well.

“Nothing really. I came here because I had caught wind of some caribou planning on attack on the ponies of Equestria not to mention I had saved some other races who were enslaved by the caribou back in the Everfree Forest. Once the king is dealt with, I will leave and let the rest of you to decide on what to do now come on let’s not keep the kings punishment waiting.” I said as this manages have every female nod in agreement as we all head back to the center where I would deliver Dain’s punishment.

3rd POV

King Dain weakling pulled himself off from the crater he was in, his body covered in bruises, various cuts, and with many of his bones broken as he looked up to see his fellow males look at him with horror in their eyes. Just at that moment the doe along with many of the imprisoned slaves of different races arrive and leading them was the creature who had delivered a beating toward their king and had trapped many of the males and guards in ice as he walks toward the king and lifts him up by the neck before pulling the medallion out from his possession as this causes Dain’s body to return back to its skinnier form as the creature held onto the medallion and began to examine it.

“So, this is the source of your power, and I am guessing that you also used it to hypnotize many of the males and females of this land, correct?”

Asked the creature to which the king nodded as this surprised many of the females at least those who weren’t hypnotized while the males scowled at the creature for accusing their king of such an act.

“What you have there is something that will grant you total control over anyone. Think about it you could everything you so desire, a land that you can rule over, all the females serving you, and now one will ever stop-…” Dain was cut off by the sound of the medallion that was shattered into pieces after the creature crushed it in the palm of his hand as everyone around him looked on with disbelief. The energy from within the medallion was then absorbed within the creature as he white aura glowed all over the creatures body. Not only that the eyes of the males and guards fleshed for minute as their bodies began to revert to a skinnier stature as they looked around with confused faces as they wondered what was going on. The Doe were seen glowing as their bodies were now covered in white markings and their rags now turned into white robes while also feeling their memories coming back to them as well as their magic.

“NO!!!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!!!!” asked the horrified king as the creature looked at him unamused.

“I just destroyed something that is a danger to all life on this world and something that no living being should ever posses not even you. But before I do anything I want to know where you got this medallion from and who gave it to you?”

Said the creature in a demanding tone as his eyes bored into those of King Dain who wanted to curse him for taking his power only to feel a sudden straight within the confines of his mind telling to tell the truth. As the king tried to resist he soon found himself succumbing to the effect as he told the truth.

“It was given to me by a cloaked figure who told me it would make me king of this land without any problem. I don’t know who he was or what he was because he disappeared in the blink of an eye.” Said the king as everyone went wide-eyed from his confession.

“Are you really a royal of this Kingdom?”

Dain shook his head as females grew more shocked at this while the creature glared at him with hatred in his eyes.

“I was a noble of this land who believed that he had the right to rule this land. After being given the medallion I soon had my chance to rule the kingdom and had the king executed while also having the queen and her daughters as my personal breeding toys before having their heads on a pike once I have had my fun with them.” he admitted as everyone grey pale at the news some vomiting from the news, while others looked at the king with hatred for what he had done.

The creature was more enraged than ever as he tightens his grip onto Dain’s as he struggled to breath as the area began to change suddenly. The males and females felt the area grow cold while also feeling a dark pit form in their stomachs as the creature began to glow with a sickly green aura as his eyes began to glow green while his skin and hair turned into a pale color.

“To the false king Dain you are hereby condemned for the imprisoning and enslaving females of other races. You are also condemned for the murder of this kingdoms king and for what you have done to the queen and princesses of this land. And for that I sentenced you… to death.!”

Shouted the creature in a loud echoing tone before dropping Dain onto the ground as large scythe then appears around the creature’s metal claw before driving the pummel of the weapon onto the ground and what happened next would be forever remembered to the ones around him.

As ghostly hands shoot out from the ground and before latching onto Dain who screamed in horror at the sight as he tries desperately to get away. But the more he struggled more the ghostly limbs latch onto the false king as they proceeded to pull him down to the ground as the rest of his body began sink within the earth. Some of the ghostly hands would claw into his skin drawing while others would begin to tear chunks off of Dain’s body as he screams with terror and pain for what was happening to him. The females were terrified at this though most of them had a sense of satisfaction for seeing the leader of their tormentors suffer as the males were trembling with fear as many of them had also pissed themselves praying to whatever deity listening to them that they would not be next. As Dain’s body sunk beneath the earth all that was visible was his head and right hand that stood out from the earth before the ghostly hands then latched onto his head and proceeded to pull him down further while also tears pieces of his face. As one hand literally tore off his entire face exposing the inner red muscle underneath the skin as he continued to scream before his head had completely sunk within the earth silencing Dain’s screams as the rest of his right soon joined him leaving no trace of Dain’s body anywhere.

Everyone stood there in absolute shock at what was seen before, but before a word could be said the creature then snapped his fingers as a small hole had formed from the earth as a geyser of blood and gore shot out from the earth painting the area in red as a pair of antlers and gold jewelry hit the ground before it all stops as everyone was even more shocked.

“The false king… is dead. But where he is going is only the beginning. Now… there is still the matter of what to do with the rest of you.”

Said the creature as he stared at the remaining males who trembled at the sight of the creature as he held a green scythe in his metal claw.

“Please… spare us. It wasn’t our faults.” Pleaded one of the males.

“We were all under the control of Dain’s magic. We had no control over ourselves.” Pleaded one of the guards as the creature snorted at them.

“That is true, but the only reason why you were effected by his magic was because you all believed in his words. You believed that you were the superior then the females and believed them to be nothing but possessions to breed and to do your bidding. Each one of you is just as guilty for enslaving and imprisoning many of the females here and from other kingdoms and for that you will be punish for your actions.”

He yelled out as the males trembled at him some of them fainting while others started to form tears under their eyes scared for what the creature will do to them. Yet the creature didn’t do anything as the scythe disappears from his hand as the glow in his eyes had faded to his normal golden slitted eyes as he sighed.

“However, I won’t be taking your lives this day. Because I am sure that many of you have children with the doe’s is that right?”

He asked as both the doe and male caribou nodded their heads as the creature nodded as well.

“The last thing I would want is to take the life of a child’s parent. Which is why I will let them decide your fate.”

Said the creature motioning towards the females who looked back at him with shock and awe for they were not expecting their savior to offer that privilege to them, while some of the males had looks of dread and terror for they were highly against this and proceeded to yell out their disagreement before the creature silence them with his booming voice.

“CALLATA TUS BOCAS!!! BE GREATFUL THAT I DON’T SEND YOU ALL TO THE AFTERLIFE WITH THAT BASTARD DAIN FOR WHAT YOU HAVE DONE. FEMALES ARE NOT SOME OBJECTS THAT YOU CAN OWN AND DO WHATEVER YOU WANT TO IT. THEY ARE LIVING BEINGS THAT THE DESERVE THE SAME AMOUNT OF RESPECT LIKE EVERY LIVING BEING ON THIS WORLD. WHERE I COME FROM, WE TREAT OUR WOMEN WITH LOVE, RESPECT, AND CARE, BUT TO ANYONE WHO ABUSES THEM WE PUNISH THEM AND MAKE THEM PAY FOR THEIR VILE ACTIONS. SO SHUT YOUR DAMN MOUTHS AND TAKE YOUR PUNISHMENT LIKE A MAN AND NOT LIKE SOME WHINNY LITTLE CHILD DO YOU UNDERSTAND?!!!”

Yelled out the creature as the males immediately nodded their heads not wanting to anger the being who had easily thwarted them and their king. Though some of the females were surprised from the creatures’ words for they had never met a male who believed in those kinds of values, not only that but their hearts had skipped a beat by his quick he was to defend them as some of them were red in the face while some had felt a hot sensation build up down below.

“The way I see it they have a right to decide your fate which is another thing you stole from them when you had them enslaved. As for me I will be going now. I only came here to prevent a mad king from taking over a place that had become my home and to do that I figured why not bring down his entire kingdom and free the females he had enslaved. Now then I be going now.”

Said the creature as he floats off from the ground and towards the sky but was stopped when one of the female doe called out to him.

“Wait, don’t go!” she said as the creature stopped and turned to her as the doe looked at him with a thankful gaze.

“Thank you… Thank you for all that you have done. For years we had lost hope of ever being free from the control of our male masters and kings. But then you arrived, a male that didn’t believe in male superiority and freed us from our chains and freed our home from the false king.” Said the doe as she and the other females proceeded to bow before their savior who shook his head at them.

“You all don’t have to bow before me. I am not a celestial being or some king from a distant land. I am just a guy who wanted to stop what should have been stopped a long time ago.”

Said their savior to which the females smile at as one of the lionesses spoke to him.

“Who are you stranger?” she asked as many of the females listened intently wanting to know the name of their savior who at the moment was unsure about saying his name thinking that it will bring some unwanted attention but remembered that he already done that upon arriving to their kingdom.

With a deep sigh he looked over the crowd of females before saying his name.

“My name is Frank… Frank McCloud a human from another world. And from this day forward you are all free.”

He said as the females cheered in victor while also praising his name as Frank bows his head to them, before preparing to take flight

“I have to go now. But before I go, I wish you all the best of luck to rebuilding the kingdom for I believe it is in good hands. See ya.”

Said Frank before blasting off into the sky like a rocket as a loud boom was made as he breaks the sound barrier as he flies of to the distance. As the females watch in both amazement and awe as they waved goodbye to him. This day would forever be remembered as the day they were freed from the chains of there mad king and male masters which was made possible by their savior Frank McCloud the Liberator to all females of the caribou kingdom.

Frank POV

I was glad to finally rid the kingdom of that bastard king, but I knew my work wasn’t done for there were other places that the caribou had taken over and thanks to a scroll I grabbed from the kings chambers I was able to find out just where these places were. So to avoid the possibility of Dain’s followers coming back for revenge I will have to liberate these areas and free everyone they had enslaved. Not sure how long this will take, but I believe it will all be worth it in the end to ensure that the *Fall of Equestria* will never happen not while I am here to stop it.

However, I couldn’t help but let a tired chuckle for I had originally wanted a peaceful life, yet I was quick to settle this matter knowing that it would bring some unwanted attention to me.

“Oh well, it’s not like I could sit back and let this stuff happen. After all no deserves to be chained up and be seen as an object. Lets hope Celestia and Luna won’t freak out about this once word about this ordeal spreads throughout the land.” I said and sighed heavily before blasting off even further than before.

“So much for having a peaceful life..”

Author's Note

Here is the second chapter for today and boy did this take too long.

Also i like to point out that this chapter was based on my hatred toward the stories related to "Fall of Equestria" because i hate the idea of having females be turned into sex slaves for the caribou. which began when someone wrote the doom x fall of Equestria story. this was my way of expressing my displeasure of the theme and to also enforce toward the caribou and their perverted king called Dain.

I would also like to clarify that i don't hate anyone who make stories of the same theme, just don't expect me to read any of them unless it has the caribou suffer brutally that is.

Hope you guys like this chapter and the chapter before it and will see you in the next post see ya.