Swayback Mountain - Clophard

by Foxvolt

Rating: mature
Tags: Applejack, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Rarity, Sex
Length: 3437

A cloppy continuation ( With direct permission ) of Buttersc0tchsundae's story, Swayback Mountain.

Everyone's read it. They didn't want to, because when we see 'Swayback Mountain' we all remember 'Broke-back Mountain,' and even if we haven't seen it, we know what it is.

Well, I thought it was clever, what Butters did here, so I asked her permission to get in the nitty-gritty on this story, as good practice, and to satisfy some requests that were popping up around DeviantArt, so if you by some chance HAVEN'T read the original, which I highly recommend, here is a link to Butter's DA page ^_~

Buttersc0tchsundae.Deviantart.Com

And the story:

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&global=1&q=buttersc0tchsundae#/d38u3ir

Anyways, this was ( I believe ) my 4th Clop-fiction, and I tried to go a bit more in-depth for the cloppy cloppy parts, seeing as I didn't need to create a background or storyline for it, which was definitely nice.

If you have/know of a story you would like me to cloppify, please let me know, as I find it much more enjoyable to continue an existing story, than to create one just for the pr0nz.

Thanks, and as always, clean up when you're done ^_~

Published 2012-08-21 08:24:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-23 10:11:21 UTC

Swayback Mountain [Ext.]

Swayback mountain, a further delve into the events of Applejack and Rarity's activities in the tent.

I recommend HIGHLY that you read the original story first so you know what the f*** is going on; You can find it at:

deviantart.com - Buttersc0tchsundae

^ Her gallery.

From the ¥¥¥ to the €€€ is quoted from her story for accuracy, ease of writing, and plot buildup.

And yes, I HAVE DIRECT PERMISSION TO WRITE THIS.

That being said, let's get on with the Clop- I mean sex- I mean plot- THE DAMN STORY.

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" The Swayback trip... Oh how I remember that trip... It was extremely impromptu that Applejack and I were to go through together, but I insisted I tag along as she travelled for the Rodeo in the next town.

I had a very important piece I had been designing for a particularly important customer, and I needed a perfect shade of Cyan. A shade of cyan that only Carvarry berries can produce. Marvelous little things, the juices are actually a form of ink! This makes them inedible, but perfect for my causes.

Because of their flourishing directly through the Mountains, most ponies don't bother selling it, because it was 'too much work for too little payoff.'

I myself had never been through mountains, save when I aquired my Cutie Mark...

Anyways, I insisted upon applejack that she take me with her, and through that day, our friendship evolved into something... More...

A passion, a lust, a luxurious feeling of belonging! We camped in a cave after I had fallen Ill, and Applejack put off her dream of winning the rodeo to care for me...

I tried to run, so that she may leave me and my clumsiness behind so as to go to that rodeo she had so dearly desired... But I was more important to her. She found me, lasso'd me up, and carried me all the way back to our campsite... "

----- ( The following is exerpted from the original story. ) -----

¥¥¥ Applejack slipped into the tent, and gently eased Rarity off her back. As the unicorn pony slid onto the floor of the tent, she woke up, and she hugged her forefeet around Applejack's shoulders, bringing them face to face.

"Applejack, my darling, I'm sorry about everything that's happened."

Applejack frowned. "Ah told ya before tha' there's no ill will between us," she said. "Jus' forget about it. Ahm jus' glad that yer ok."

Rarity broke the embrace, and looked down at the noose around her legs. "I promise I'm not going to run away again, darling. Do you think you could...?"

Applejack smiled. "Sure I can. I think ya learned yer lesson." She loosened the knot with her teeth and slid if off Rarity's back feet.

But after she'd put the lasso away, she turned to Rarity, a quizzical look on her face. "Y'know, Rarity. Can I... ah, ask ya a question?"

Rarity nodded. "Of course, darling. You can ask me anything."

"Back on the bridge, when we were arguin'," Applejack explained, "You said I didn' understand nothing." She frowned, "Now, ah've thought and thought about what ya said, but I jus' can't work out what ya meant by it."

Rarity's smile fell away. "That? Oh, that was... nothing, darling. I was just angry and I... wasn't thinking when I said it. Please just forget about it." She turned away and curled up in a corner of the tent. "I'm quite simply exhausted and I just want to..."

Applejack shook her head. "I can't jus' forget about it, Rarity. I saw that look ya gave me," She moved closer and, lifting Rarity's chin with a hoof, she looked the unicorn pony right in the eyes. "That wasn't just anger ah saw in those eyes. You looked like ah'd jus' betrayed ya."

"B...betrayed me?" Rarity stuttered. "Why, the thought never...."

Applejack's green eyes were deep and serious as she looked into Rarity's. There was heat in them, and a hidden, silent emotion that scared her. She knew that she couldn't lie to Applejack. She wasn't a silly pony at all. She knew and felt a lot more than she'd ever said. Rarity knew that she was backed into corner, in more way than one.

"It's ... true, darling. I... did feel like I was betrayed. But it was unfair of me to say that." Tears moistened the corners of her azure eyes. "I know you'll never... feel about me the way I feel about you. Because I... I think I'm in love with you, Applejack." She'd said it, and the words hung in the dead silence between them for what felt like an eternity.

A series of emotions flickered across Applejack's face. Confusion, shock – she turned away from Rarity and slowly nodded.

"Ah guess I kinda knew tha' all along, sugarcube," she said at last.

Rarity's heart was breaking. The tears were flowing down her cheeks now, wetting her chin and neck. "I never wanted you to know," she whispered. "I knew this would happen. Now we can't be friends anymore." She lowered her face and the tears dripped steadily down onto the floor of the tent.

But she soon felt Applejack's face close to hers, and she lifted her eyes. The earth pony was smiling at her, a sad and elusive smile. "Now whyever d'ya think that, sugar?" she asked.

Rarity sniffled. "It will just be too uncomfortable for you," she explained. "And if anypony caught me mooning over you, there'd be a TERRIBLE scandal. And I could never live with myself if I dragged you down to my level..."

"Now ah ain't gone and said nothin' 'bout my own feelings yet," replied Applejack. "Maybe ah was surprised ya felt that way. But ah ain't angry," She shook her head. "Ah ain't angry at all. Truth is," she smiled shyly, "Ah'm mighty flattered that you feel tha' way about me."

"You... are?" asked Rarity.

Applejack nodded. Her green eyes sparkled from deep within as she spoke. "Who wouldn't be flattered to have such a so-phisticated and glamorous filly's affection?" she said. "S' dry those tears o' yers, little missy. You've no reason ta cry."

Rarity wiped at her eyes with her hooves. Applejack took the unicorn pony in her arms and laid her head on her chest, and she nuzzled Rarity's neck.

"Ya know – ya ain't such a strong little filly after all," she said softly in her ear. "A lil' bit o' emotion and ya fall all ta' pieces..."

Rarity felt Applejack's touch as an electricity that ran tingling down her spine. She ached for it, she needed that touch, but it was so painful. She knew deep down that she would never feel it given to her with passion – only as consolation. The touch of Applejack's lips prickled and maddened her, and tears sprung up anew in her eyes. But she hid them, smothering her face into Applejack's warm chest, and closed her eyes in bliss as Applejack's gentle breath touched her ear and neck. Oh, please – just this moment! Oh Celestia, let me just have this moment! Let me imagine and believe just for this moment that everything I desire is mine, truly mine, so that in my dreams I can always come back here and be happy for a short while at least!

Applejack held Rarity for a long while. She didn't show any sign of wanting to break their embrace. The truth was that the frail, slim unicorn pony in front of her had awoken strange feelings inside her. Conflicting feelings that drove Applejack in one minute from confusion, to fear, to nervous excitement. Finally, she whispered: "Y'know, sugarcube – here, in this tent, we're about half-way between Ponyville and Colt Springs."

Rarity murmured. Applejack couldn't make out what she had said, but she continued. Something inside her was forcing her onwards. She found the words escaping her lips, and she couldn't have stopped them if she'd wanted to. "An' ya know, if ANYTHIN' happened in this tent, anythin'at all, we're so far away from anywhere that no pony would ever know about it." Applejack's breath was hot. "Especially if it only ever happened once, fer instance, an' if we never spoke about it again..."

Rarity turned her face towards her. New tears had reddened her eyes, and she stared at Applejack. The earth pony stopped talking, and softly licked away the wetness on Rarity's cheeks.

"Applejack...?" she began.

"Hush, now." The licking had turned to little kisses, and Applejack peppered Rarity's cheek and throat with them. "Those tears of yours near broke my heart in two – an' ah can't stand ta see ya cry anymore."

"Oh Applejack!" Rarity sobbed and threw her forefeet around Applejack's neck. The earth pony hugged her back, closing her eyes. She had thought that maybe it would feel strange, that holding Rarity in this way would feel wrong and creepy. But it didn't.

They lay there, not moving, for what seemed like an age. It was Rarity that moved first. She raised her face and kissed Applejack, once, on her mouth, softly, as if testing. And then again, and this second time Applejack found herself kissing back. The earth pony's kiss was hesitant at first, unsure, but Rarity's kiss was hard and insistent, and Applejack found herself wanting more.

The touch of Rarity's lips had done something to her. These feelings weren't knew, she realised. They'd just been asleep for a long time. These were the same feelings that had every time melted the anger she'd often felt towards Rarity, the frustration of dealing with her stubbornness, her irritating obsession with details, the resentment Applejack had felt at all the attention the gorgeous unicorn pony got from the stallions of Ponyville because of her gracefulness and confidence. The soft spot that had always been there, that spot she had always argued away as just being a big-sisterly concern for the younger pony. Could it be that...?

Rarity felt the change in the intensity of Applejack's kissing. She rolled her eyes in pleasure as the earth pony's kisses grew bolder, trailing down her throat and turning into sharp nips of her teeth.

"Oh Applejack," she sighed, "Harder. Harder, darling, so that I can FEEL it!"

Applejack looked up at Rarity. Her features were so delicate and angelic, and she seemed so vulnerable, her azure eyes with their thick lashes fluttering each time Applejack bit her coat, her head thrown back in abandon. The earth pony's heart burned in her chest, and she felt a rush of heat along her body. She felt her insides melting, the subtle fire running along her limbs and dissolving her bones away.

Rarity nibbled lightly on Applejack's ear. The earth pony was flushed and panted with pleasure. "You look like you're ready to learn a few things," Rarity whispered as she turned the earth pony over onto her stomach, and began to lick her way down her back and along her spine. Applejack's coat was salty with perspiration, and the musky scent of her excitement engulfed Rarity's senses as she kissed ever lower... €€€

Applejack put a hoof to Rarity's chest before she could resume any further.

" Naw, sugar, I couldn't fer'give mah'self if ah' took all the attention."

Applejack stopped, slowly raising her eyes to the pristine beauty before her. Her mane still had a light curl about it, and her tail was of the same state. Silently, Applejack stared back up to her newly-found love, awaiting consent.

When Rarity smiled, and nodded lightly, Applejack, in a short, fluid movement, rolled onto Rarity's front, and began lathering her in licks and kisses. She again nipped lightly at Rarity's ears, nudging her horn occasionally. A sudden outburst startled Applejack, as Rarity felt a shiver run through her spine, as Applejack flicked her tongue to her horn.

" Are ya' sure yer okay with this, Rarity? " Applejack asked, expecting the answer she received.

" Yes darling, if you wish to continue... I fully- *Gasp!* " Rarity sharply inhaled, as Applejack delved onward, passionately loving her.

" Then hush now, sugar, an' lemme help ya' out. " Applejack laughed internally at the double-meaning of 'help.'

Rarity put her faith in Applejack, lying back with a content smile. " I trust you Applejack, but please, darling, be gentle. "

And gentle she was, every small movement was made as if she were dealing with the finest crystal. It took much longer, but Rarity was worth every electrifying moment.

Every caressing stroke across that soft, yet tangled coat, every flick of her tongue over her neck, every glance they shared, it was all leading to the inevitable. But that didn't mean they couldn't express their love in smaller, more intimate ways first.

Applejack climbed on top of Rarity's body, seemingly hugging it with her own. In one fell swoop, she connected their lips in a euphoric contact that sent them both spiraling. This wasn't a first-kiss euphoria, or a loving gesture, this was a passionate, lustful, longing kiss.

They wrapped all fours around the other, falling to their sides without breaking the contact. Soon, Applejack dared parting her own lips, tongue pushing lightly against Rarity's.

Rarity gasped as her eyes went wide, what should she do? What happens? Did she mean to do that?

Applejack saw the hesitation, and lifted herself from the mare.

" Everythin' 'Kay, sugar? " she questioned, tilting her head, and running a hoof down her cheek.

Rarity caught her breath, still panting from the rush of adrenaline.

" Yes... Yes, Applejack, my apologies... I've never... I mean, I don't know what I should do, and you seem so... I'm sorry. " She shied away, hiding a face behind her hooves with a deep blush standing against her white coat.

Applejack thought it looked cute.

" Shucks, 's tha' all? Didn't take ya' fer no ver-gin! Relax, I'll take care ah' everythin', now lemme see them purty eyes 'gain. " Applejack held Rarity's hooves with her own, slowly moving them from Rarity's face.

Rarity looked to Applejack as her head was redirected to face her partner. She looked away and giggled shy-fully.

" I... Thank you Applejack, dear, I truly am sorry I'm not much of a true mare in this aspect. " Her blush deepened.

" Yer more 'an mare 'nuff fer me, sugar. " Applejack lunged into another passionate kiss with her now-proclaimed lover, and her lust became her passion, wrapping her fore-hooves tightly around Rarity's body, rubbing back and forth with her own, it was all so much. Then, they both twisted their heads the opposite way, and delved into the others mouth.

Their tongues wrestled for dominance, exchanging saliva as they tussled lightly. Applejack pushed further into Rarity's mouth with her tongue, and rolled on top of her, pinning lightly.

Rarity moaned in sheer delight as she panted lightly into Applejack's mouth. She felt so dirty, doing this with her best friend, out in the middle of nowhere... But oh how good it felt! The entirety of it all excited her! It enthralled her! She wanted more.

Applejack began to move her hooves lower, and dragged them across Rarity's chest, then along her stomach, then...

Rarity's back arched, and broke the kiss as she threw her head back in a long, drawn-out moan as Applejack pressed harshly against her sensitive breasts, playing with them, squeezing, bouncing, flicking, licking.

" I... Thought I said... *Pant* ... Gentle, Applejack! Oh~ " Rarity's voice cut out as Applejack began to suckle on one, relatively softly massaging two of the others, occasionally altering her position to flick her tongue across the bare breast.

After a few minutes of this, Applejack slowly, ever so slowly, moved as low as you can get; between Rarity's thighs, to her glistening marehood.

Applejack paused a moment, letting Rarity catch up on her breathing, didn't want her passing out, especially in her condition.

Once she was less sporadic, she nodded lightly. " Feel free to continue. Do not hesitate to ask anything of me as well. "

Softly, Applejack kissed her crotch. Ever so tenderly did Applejack brush against her, juices beginning to dampen her nose.

" Ah love ya' Rarity, ya' know tha' right? " Applejack suddenly asked, licking tenderly at the joint of Rarity's hind legs.

Rarity moaned and whimpered lightly in response, chest heaving, breathing sporadic, thoughts jumbled.

Applejack was making her feel like the true mare she was! A mare with needs, a mare with passion, a mare with a mate.

" Ah reckon ya do, then. " another lick down Rarity's love was enough to enduce a shutter out of her.

" Oh Applejack, dear, if only you knew how much, how truly much, you have done for me already. Thank you, Applejack. " Rarity lifted her head, and lowered her lips to Applejack's forehead, kissing her softly, then she lie down, awaiting response.

Applejack was moved by the emotion Rarity displayed for her. Did she really mean THAT much?

" Shucks, I ain't nopony special... " Applejack said, blushing heavily despite the situation.

Rarity grabbed Applejack's head with both hooves, staring into her eyes.

" That is NOT true. You are one of the most noble and brave ponies I have EVER met. Darling, you have selflessly helped everypony a thousand times over. And what's more, you ask not a thing in return! " Rarity pulled Applejack from her lower region for one more kiss.

There was no resistance as they both closed their eyes, leaning into the other with a passionate longing.

After a moment, they separated.

" Celestia strike me down if I'm lying when I say I love you and everything about you. " Rarity finished.

Applejack smiled, and she felt she should get back to her duty.

She licked across Rarity's love once more, and pulled it open a bit, flicking her tongue in and out quickly.

Rarity's erotic moans told her to continue, and so she did.

Applejack propped one of Rarity's hind-hooves up, and sat against her thigh. As she licked Rarity, she rubbed her own crotch against Rarity's leg, pleasuring herself as well.

Applejack began to moan as she turned from licking to slurping and finally fully-blown eating Rarity out.

Rarity in turn began to squeal and squirm as she felt herself cringe, nearing the point of ecstasy. She also felt her mane becoming sweaty and disheveled. Oh what an absolute DRAG that will be to brush and re-curl.

" Ah'm... Ah'm not gon' take much more... Reckon yer close, Rarity...? " Applejack grunted between shockwaves of pleasure jolting through her body.

Rarity responded with a loud whimper, and shook her head furiously.

Applejack acted quickly, turning onto her stomach, placing her right hind leg under Rarity's, and slammed back into her. They meshed together at the legs, and they both screamed out in pleasure, grinding furiously as they both rapidly approached the peak of it all.

" Rarity! Reckon imma' be there soon, how you lookin sugar? " Applejack turned her head to rarity.

" Applejack, I... I'm going to... Now! "

They reached their limit, fringing furiously, spasming randomly and vigorously against each other. In the last moment they both shouted the only thought they could muster.

" Applejack! "

" Rarity! "

And in that same moment, their eyes shot wide open, as they pressed tightly together, sharing an explosion of pleasure and love. Their juices mingled together, spilling their way out from between the two mares, and flooded the floor of the tent.

After a few more moments, the two collapsed together, rarity falling forward onto Applejack.

" Cleaning my coat... Will be... An absolute DRAG. " Rarity mumbled into Applejack's chest, snuggling close.

Applejack laughed lightly.

" Les' just worry.... 'bout you gettin' better... Y'hear...? We're leavin' t'morrow afternoon... Gonna need our rest... "

Applejack yawned largely, and the two hugged tightly, nuzzling each other affectionately in their afterglow.

' This is how things should be. Two lovers... Out in the woods... Nopony to bother them... But maybe more to eat... " Rarity thought to herself, remembering her dress she was going to design.

Celestia's sun crept it's first rays of light against the tent through the trees, but the two mares were already fast asleep, smiling in each others hooves.

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End.

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This was fun as hell to write, thank you again to Buttersc0tchsundae for making this absolutely terrific story!

I enjoyed making it cloppable.

:D