Fire and Heat
By Alaborn
Standard disclaimer: This is a not for profit fan work. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is copyright Hasbro, Inc. I make no claim to any copyrighted material mentioned herein.
Further disclaimer: Contains clop. For mature audiences only. All characters, although fictional, are intended to portray consenting adults.
Every spring, Autumn Blaze visited her special rock friend.
Autumn Blaze had many rock friends. As an exile from her village, friends were hard to come by, and rocks made good friends. If you squinted hard enough, you could make out a friendly face in their craggy surface.
The kirin often imagined what her rock friends were like, and how they would sound. One was large and potentially frightening, but one listen to its booming voice would make you feel safe. Another had a dry and raspy voice, but there was great wisdom in its words, if only you would listen.
But this rock, her spring rock, her special rock friend, didn’t say anything. It was a good friend, an understanding friend, one that was there to comfort you in your time of need. It was a squat rock, its surface worn smooth with time, with a little stony knob protruding from its top. It was the perfect shape.
For Autumn Blaze had an itch deep inside of her, and her rocky friend was there for her, ready to help her scratch that itch.
She lowered her haunches over the rock, feeling the cool surface of the stony knob touch her burning nethers. She shifted down, and the knob slid into her. She moved her rump in little circles, feeling the cool stone stretch her lower lips, feeling it touch her deep inside. There was one special spot that made her tingle, and once she found it, she changed her movements, rocking back and forth to rub the stony knob over that spot. A feeling started building inside her, like the joy she felt while singing, but somehow physical. Her breath grew short as this feeling threatened to burst.
“Oh, spirits, yes!” she shouted as she climaxed. Autumn Blaze sat down, the stony protrusion still inside her, and tried to catch her breath. She felt wetness drip from her lips and trickle down her rocky friend. Just like always, he smiled, happy to have helped a friend.
Autumn Blaze always hated this time of year. When she was a filly, she remembered seeing the other kirin in discomfort around this time of year. They would shift their hind legs or rub against a tree. She had asked her mother about it, but she only said she’d explain it when she was older. Then two kirin fought, changed to nirik, and burned their village down. They all went into the Stream of Silence, and nopony explained anything after that.
Years later, when she found the foal’s breath that cured the silence, she talked about everything to everypony in her village. But she didn’t ask about the spring itch, and she was soon banished, and now she’d never get that answer.
Autumn Blaze stood up, her hind legs still feeling shaky. She looked to her stony friend. The knob glistened with her wetness, sparkling in the sun like morning dew. “Thank you, Rocky,” she said, tapping the rock with her hoof.
She turned to her shadow. “Oh, Silhouette Gloom of the Sundown Lands, sometimes I wish I were you. You never have to deal with this springtime itch.”
She heard something. At first, she thought her shadow was finally going to answer her. But then she realized it was a rustling in the leaves. Something was out there!
“Um, hello? Anypony there? You know, not that I don’t want visitors, but I’m kind of far from my home, and wouldn’t you want to come in for tea? Oh, wait, I haven’t cleaned up, and I want to be a good host, but can I be a good host if there are dirty dishes everywhere?”
The rustling grew louder. The branches parted, and a kirin with a dark brown coat and sea green mane stepped out. It looked like her fillyhood friend....
“Cinder Glow? Is that you? Did you cure the silence? Did you get exiled too? Please don’t tell me that you got exiled too.”
Cinder Glow shook her head.
“Then why did you come out here?”
Cinder Glow raised a hoof and pointed at her.
“Me? I mean, it’s nice to see you, and there’s so many things I want to talk about, but there’s no more foal’s breath, because I think I ate the last of it, and now I feel really bad, because I’d really like to talk to you.”
Autumn Blaze looked back at Cinder Glow. The mare was standing quietly, of course, but she was fidgeting, her hind legs rubbing against each other.
“Oh! You have the spring itch too! Do you want to meet my rock friend? He just helped me this morning!”
Cinder Glow looked at Autumn Blaze, looked at the rock, and then leaned down to sniff it. She shook her head, and pointed at Autumn Blaze again.
“What are you pointing at me for? I can’t do anything about my itch. Even my rock friend only helps me for a few hours. Then I have to visit him again, and again, and again....”
Cinder Glow responded by taking her hoof and poking Autumn Blaze in the chest.
“What are you trying to say? I want to talk about everything, but I can’t even talk about this one thing, because I don’t know what it is! This is so frustrating! This is so, so....”
Autumn Blaze felt the rage building in her, an inner fire that she knew could manifest in physical fire. Surely she was showing signs of it, but Cinder Glow stood by her, continuing to try to communicate with her using only her eyes and her hoof.
*poke* *poke*
The sharp prod was enough to push Autumn Blaze over the edge. The fire consumed her, and the nirik inside her manifested.
The world looked different as a nirik. Colors seemed darker and less vivid, but she also saw something different, a color redder than red, when she looked at something hot. Her rock friend, sitting out in the sun all day, had this red glow. And so did Cinder Glow.
Cinder Glow! Why hadn’t her friend fled? She was a nirik! She would destroy anything she touched!
Yet Cinder Glow didn’t appear fazed at all. She softly stroked her fiery mane with her hoof, and then slowly turned. She flicked her tail, the soft tuft at its tip brushing Autumn Blaze’s muzzle.
Autumn Blaze now saw she was looking at her friend’s hindquarters. Her friend’s heat glow was even stronger now. And then she noticed the smell—the smell of the spring itch.
Cinder Glow’s was different than her own, but the musky scent was unmistakable. She didn’t want to focus on it, yet she couldn’t turn away. Something about it excited her. It caused a stirring between her legs, something that definitely wasn’t the spring itch. It was a strange feeling, stretching... pulling?
Autumn Blaze ducked her head down and looked beneath her. She saw the source of her new strange feelings, a pillar of flesh that hung between her legs. It wasn’t aflame, like her body, but an intense heat collected there.
She marveled at the sight for only a moment before the breeze carried an odor that focused her attention. She snapped her head up. Cinder Glow was still standing there, her tail lifted. She looked straight at the source of the odor, the source of the heat, and all became clear.
She was a nirik, and her fire was ready to cool Cinder Glow’s heat.
Autumn Blaze slowly stepped forward, eyes focused on her prize. She brought her muzzle to Cinder Glow’s nethers and inhaled. Her nirik flames glowed brighter, and the throbbing between her legs intensified.
Cinder Glow took that moment to look behind her. Autumn Blaze’s eyes locked on her, and she smiled. She had seen her reflection in her nirik form, remembered the terrifying visage, but Cinder Glow was not afraid. She looked... intrigued. And ready.
Autumn Blaze wasted no time, rearing and bringing her hooves down on Cinder Glow’s rump. A push forward brought the tip of her shaft to Cinder Glow’s folds, and that first touch was just like when Rocky rubbed that certain place inside her. Then she pushed further, and the feeling magnified. Every tiny movement was just like that feeling that took minutes of work to manage on her own. Cinder Glow was tight, surrounding her with a heat that somehow managed to match her own fire. She pushed until she could push no further, her hips pressed against Cinder Glow’s.
Underneath her, Cinder Glow quivered in excitement. Autumn Blaze pulled her close, her fiery body pressed against the scales of her back, hooves roaming across her body, seeking purchase.
The feeling of pleasure was fading. Autumn Blaze knew she needed to work to build it again. She pulled back slowly, finding the feeling to be just as good on the way out. And by the way she trembled, Cinder Glow felt the same way.
When Autumn Blaze was almost all the way out, she pushed back in, then out again. She pumped her shaft into her friend, paying attention to Cinder Glow’s reactions as she did. She couldn’t speak, but her mouth opened as if she were screaming in pleasure. She reacted especially strongly on the way in, when her shaft rubbed a spot within her, and when the thicker ring on the middle of her shaft spread Cinder Glow’s lower lips even wider.
After a while, Cinder Glow’s silent screams seemed less intense. Something in Autumn Blaze’s mind whispered “faster”. And she responded. She pumped faster and harder, slamming her hips into Cinder Glow’s every second. Cinder Glow’s tunnel had stretched to accommodate Autumn Blaze’s shaft, and it was now slick with arousal, allowing her to move even faster.
But Cinder Glow was not going to make it that easy. She started to squeeze every time Autumn Blaze thrust into her, recreating the tightness of that first thrust. It heightened the sensations Autumn Blaze felt, and that warm feeling she had experienced earlier returned, but focused on only one part of her body. Something inside her was building, building, threatening to explode. A new feeling of tightness rose behind her shaft.
With a powerful thrust, Autumn Blaze pushed through Cinder Glow’s viselike grip and buried herself deep within her. The feeling within her exploded as she climaxed. Hot fluid pumped through her shaft and into Cinder Glow. One, two, three... she lost count as she focused on the intense feeling within her shaft. Her only regret was that warm feeling didn’t spread through her body, like she experienced when she was alone.
Speaking of warm feelings, the fiery rage within her was rapidly fading, replaced by a warm feeling, like stretching out and enjoying the sun on a warm summer’s day. She took a deep breath, and returned to her kirin form. She realized she was still awkwardly perched on her friend’s back. But Cinder Glow didn’t seem to mind; she turned her head and gave her a loving nuzzle.
She hopped off her friend, and Cinder Glow responded by tackling her and embracing her. Together they rested on the soft earth, enjoying the pleasant spring day.
Autumn Blaze looked down. “Hey, what happened to my new shaft? Where did it go?”
Cinder Glow looked at her, confused.
“You know, I wonder if that was one of those things my mother said she would tell me when I was older, but then we went into the Stream of Silence, and then she couldn’t tell me anything.”
Cinder Glow smacked her forehead with a hoof, squeezed her eyes shut, and shook her head, communicating her point clearly without the need for words at all.
Cinder Glow stood up and scratched in the dirt. Her drawing was crude, but Autumn Blaze recognized it immediately, the image of a kirin and a nirik arranged in a circle that was painted on the rocks near their village. Although now that she thought about it, after the village burned, that painting was covered up. She pictured the image in her mind. She always thought it was a representation of the two spirits within all kirin, but now that she thought about it further, they were arranged like one was chasing the other.
“Now I know why the nirik was chasing the kirin! But to what end?”
Cinder Glow gave her a disbelieving stare.
“I mean, I know what we did, but why?”
Cinder Glow pointed to herself.
Autumn Blaze didn’t see anything different about Cinder Glow. But then she noticed she was no longer rubbing her hind legs together. And her spring itch scent was no longer so strong.
“So me being a nirik cured your spring itch?”
Cinder Glow nodded.
“Oh, I wish you could do the same for me. I would do anything to get rid of this feeling. But you can’t speak, and that means you can’t get angry enough to become a nirik, and that means I have to wait weeks for this to pass!”
Cinder Glow hugged and nuzzled her.
Then Autumn Blaze had an idea. “Cinder Glow, do you want to help me?” she asked.
Cinder Glow responded with a firm nod.
“Because I have an idea on how you could help me, if you promise not to get mad. Well, you will have to get mad, that’s the point, but it’s not a mad at you mad, just a temporary mad. Will you help me? Please?”
Cinder Glow paused to think, but she nodded affirmatively.
“Okay, here it goes.”
Autumn Blaze stood up and circled around Cinder Glow, the other mare watching her curiously. She lifted a hoof.
And then stomped on Cinder Glow’s tail.
Cinder Glow’s mouth opened in a silent scream, but not one of pleasure, like before. She saw the surprise in her eyes, which turned to anger, which led to whitish-red flames starting to form around her. With a hiss, Cinder Glow transformed into a nirik. She hopped to her hooves and stared at Autumn Blaze.
Autumn Blaze felt a twinge of fear, but an even greater felling of excitement. A small part of her wanted to run, but the rest of her was eager. Cinder Glow reared, revealing a glorious sight—her long, thick nirik shaft. It looked so large! But looking at it made the warm feeling within her grow.
Cinder Glow landed, pounding her front hooves into the earth, and snorted. She slowly started pacing around Autumn Blaze. The kirin didn’t know what to do, but her body did. Her tail flicked up, uncovering her nethers. A breeze kissed her exposed lower lips and a drop of moisture dripped from them. She shivered.
She felt Cinder Glow’s hooves grip her flanks, and an instant later, she thrust into her. The other mare knew what she was doing, and didn’t have to wait to process the feelings from her nirik body. She had already thrust into Autumn Blaze a dozen times before she could even assess what she was feeling.
Cinder Glow was atop her, covering her completely. She felt the fire of her body, but the scales on her back protected her, leaving her to feel only a dull heat. That was nothing compared to the heat within her. Even without flame, the shaft that pushed into her folds stoked the fire within her.
Cinder Glow had not taken any time to warm up. She plowed into Autumn Blaze at full speed, and Autumn Blaze enjoyed every moment. She relished the feeling every time Cinder Glow rubbed her favorite spot and enjoyed the stretching every time her medial ring pushed through her lips. Her earlier solo ministrations had left her loose and slick with arousal, so Cinder Glow hadn’t needed to struggle at all to fill her.
She remembered how Cinder Glow had squeezed her, remembered how much it pleased her, and Autumn Blaze was determined to return the favor. It was hard to focus on finding the muscles while Cinder Glow was pounding her, but by remembering her earlier solo experience, she was able to find them. She squeezed hard just as Cinder Glow thrust into her. She felt every bump and vein of Cinder Glow’s shaft as it forced its way into her.
“Yes! Yes! Oh, spirits, yes!” Autumn Blaze shouted.
Her screams of passion were interrupted as Cinder Glow bit down on her mane and tugged her head back. She lost focus on the muscles in her hindquarters, and Cinder Glow glided in, pushing deeper into her than ever before. Cinder Glow’s medial ring stretched her further, rubbing her sensitive spot, and she climaxed. Her muscles rippled around the shaft in her, and warmth spread within her body. This was soon followed by a different kind of warmth as hot, sticky fluid shot out of Cinder Glow’s shaft and filled her.
With a hiss of steam, Cinder Glow returned to her kirin form. She was no longer gripping Autumn Blaze’s sides or mane, and Autumn Blaze stumbled to the ground. She sat, catching her breath. Despite the physical exertion and the hot fluid in her, she felt remarkably cool. And when she focused her mind on it, the itching was gone.
Autumn Blaze pulled Cinder Glow to the ground with her, drawing her into a tight embrace. “Oh, thank you thank you thank you!” she said. “I feel so much better already!”
Cinder Glow nodded.
Autumn Blaze looked around the clearing, seeing blackened hoofprints and other scorch marks in the dirt. “Wow, good thing we were all the way out here, and not in the village!” she said. “The village....”
Cinder Glow looked at her sadly.
“I know, but don’t be sad. Look out there!”
Autumn Blaze waved her foreleg, motioning to the spectacular view of the mountains and forest beyond the Peaks of Peril.
Cinder Glow looked with amazement at the sight. Was this her first time seeing the world beyond their village?
Autumn Blaze pulled Cinder Glow close. “I know you can’t have a rainbow without rain, so I’m sure things will be better some day. But until then?” She gave her a squeeze. “You can share this with me any time.”
Author's Note
I had this idea soon after watching Sounds of Silence. It took Dirty Little Secret's contest to get me to write it.
