The Death Mansion of No Escape

by Kaveh
Six mares enter this mansion said to be haunted. What no pony knows is there are monsters that come out at night. They kill all inside. And once your inside, no matter what time of day it is, there's no escape.

Being rewritten from scratch.


Princess Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack, and Fluttershy are visiting an old mansion, its origins, and age both unknown. Over time, some creatures have made it into the mansion and began to trap all other creatures that enter, with no chance of ever leaving unless the three in charge allow them to leave. But only one pony's been allowed to, and everypony else had died without a trace. Or so it seems.
No matter day or night it is, once you step inside, there's no leaving. And if you can't escape, you die to the hands of the monsters there, killing your friends and turning them against you, leaving them in a grotesque mess until every last pony is dead.
As the six friends explore the mansion, nearly clueless, Rainbow finds a diary of a pony who had stayed for three nights before she died, along with two of her friends. As she reads the first few sentences of her first entree, they all realize this place isn't just any ordinary old mansion. They try to escape, but as the diary said, once you enter, there's no escape.

Three nights. Four left to die. Two of Equestria's first possible survivors in years. Who are they?

Cancelled
Violence
Death
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Horror
Profanity
Adventure
 
PMR

10600 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

8 Chapters:

  1. Chapter One 2020-03-31 17:29:29 UTC
    1214
  2. Chapter Two 2020-04-14 20:05:27 UTC
    887
  3. Chapter Three 2020-04-18 04:43:09 UTC
    1503
  4. Chapter Four 2020-04-21 23:57:13 UTC
    1139
  5. Chapter Five 2020-04-28 19:39:25 UTC
    2040
  6. Chapter Six 2020-05-11 04:05:19 UTC
    1318
  7. Chapter Seven 2020-08-26 22:06:06 UTC
    2499
  8. Chapter Eight 2022-01-08 04:20:43 UTC