----Chapter 1----
The break up
Writer 2: Ok so i’m on of the writer of this story.
Writer 1: And i’m the other one.
Writer 2: So we may appear sometime in the story, its a concept i came up with to add some originality to the story. There is also 2 Narrator but they will not appear that much... at least for now... Anyway! Enjoy! =^D
Narrator 1: This story take place in Canterlot in the world of My Little Pony: Friend Ship is Magic and follow the story of two pony, Octavia Inkie Pie and Vinyl Scratch alias DJ-PON3...
Narrator 2: Yeah Inkie Pie so anyone who dont like Octavia being the older Sister of Pinkie can stop reading right now or just dont care about it.
Writer 1: Narrator 2, don't be hard on the reader, they didnt even started to read the story yet.
Narrator 2: Fine...
Octavia took a moment to check herself in the mirror. Adjusting her bowtie slightly and ensuring her mane was perfect for her performance with the Canterlot philharmonic orchestra in a few hours, She couldn’t believe she had been invited to play with such a prestigious ensemble. It was an honour that they thought her competent enough to join them. She allowed herself a small smile as she finished checking herself. A loud shout coming through the door caught her attention.
“Yeah!! Take that you little bucker!!” Octavia heard from the living room where Vinyl was playing some silly video game, she sighed wearily and trotted out of her bedroom. She stopped as she caught sight of a white unicorn sprawled lazily across her couch, yelling at a television screen “Oh come on, how did that happen!” Vinyl just lost against the boss of the level again, it was a hard one.
“Vinyl,stop playing your video games, I’m not going to be late because of you” Octavia gestured to Vinyl pointing the door “And you need to get ready too”. Vinyl whined as she got back to the loading screen on her Marestation. “Oh come on, Tavi i just need to beat this guy,” Vinyl gestured at the screen. Octavia stamped the floor with her hof “Now, Vinyl”.
Vinyl sighed and slid off the couch “Alright, Tavi,” she trotted towards the bedroom. Octavia shook her head and walked over to sit by the window, gazing upon the Canterlot cityscape, the city was beautiful as alway, her thoughts soon turned to worry about the upcoming performance, What if she wasn’t good enough?, what if something went wrong?, what if Vinyl caused a scene? Her reverie was broken by the mare of the same name shuffling uncomfortably into the room in the dress Octavia had bought her for the occasion.
“Do i have to wear this?” Vinyl fidgeted and tugged at the cloth “I feel stupid”. Octavia turned her head and gasped, taken aback by the sight, Vinyl was clad in a sleek midnight blue gown that hung gracefully off her frame, accentuating her figure and drawing out her eye’s.Vinyl shifted uncomfortably under her stare and glanced back at the dress “What? What is it? I knew it wasn’t good! You know i hate dress anyway, i don’t even know why you make me wear one... and it doesn't even match with my shade!” she complained about it and tried to sneak out of it.
“Stop complaining Vinyl. We need to wear dresses and you’re not going to have your glasses anyway” Octavia walked over and pulled the dress over Vinyl “And stop trying to get out of it” Vinyl struggled and said trying to get out of it “And why should i wear a dress, what about my rad looking tuxedo?” she shut her eyes while pulling on her side to get off it.
“Because i spent a lot of bits on having this dress made for especially for you” Octavia said “And you look beautiful in it” Vinyl stopped to struggle and said whining “But you already know i don't like dress why did you buy one in the first place, it's a mare thing its not for me”
“I wanted a change for once and you are a mare, why shouldn’t you wear a dress sometimes” Vinyl took the dress off in one move and throw it on the bed “Nope not a mare” she scrunched her face up as she said it and walked to her wardrobe to take her tuxedo.
Writer 1: Really? Again with this “Not a mare” thing, you already wrote it in like 3 or 4 chapter after this one and now that we are editing to post it, you bring it in the first chapter?
Writer 2: Yeah... i like to think that Vinyl is a Mare that consider herself as a Stallion.
Octavia sighed “Not the tuxedo, i thought we sorted that out Vinyl. You don’t wear that to any of my important performances” Vinyl took her tuxedo off the hanger and started to wear it “I wear what i want and i didn't bought it for nothing, and i look cool in it, i look like a spy” she started to sing the James bond theme.
“Stop singing that, you know i don’t like that and put your dress back on” Octavia walked over to her “I would hate for it to be wasted” Vinyl finished to wear her tuxedo and said walking out of the room “Nope i don't want to waste my tuxedo and spies don't wear dress” she continued to sing her song. “You’re a DJ not a spy” Octavia moved to pull the tuxedo off Vinyl “Just wear the dress for one night. For me” Vinyl thought about it a bit “So you want to trade with me, what do you have that would worth it for me to wear it, you know a spy doesn't let go his mission that easy, what's your price” Vinyl replaced her shade to impress her with a serious tone.
“My price is you continuing to sleep in the same bed as me” Octavia said “If you don’t wear the dress you can sleep on the couch and no sex for a week” Vinyl rubbed her chin with her hoof “Hmmm tough choice but i’m afraid that i must decline your offer, you see in life there is sacrifice that a pony need to made to success in his mission, and as a spy i can't betray my country” she played her role of strong spy to the end. She even changed her DJ shade for some black sunglasses while speaking. “Really Vinyl?” Vinyl said then “My name is Vinylator madame Scratching Vinylator” she answered as serious as she can.
“Really.....Vinylator” Octavia said reluctantly “You can go without me for a week? i thought the famous spy always got the girl” Vinyl was starting to get defeated! Oh no she must get out of this dangerous situation, for the sake of her glorious mission “Sometime a sy must make sacrifices for the sake of the mission, you can't corrupt a spy”
“That’s a pity Vinylator” Octavia took off her sunglass rapidly and Vinyl said whining “My characters glasses give them back!!” she said putting back her DJ’s shade. “You’ll get them back if you stop acting like this and put on the dress” Octavia said putting the glasses away from her. Vinyl pouted “Ok i don't need those sunglasses but there is no way i wear a dress, its for mares and i’m a DJ” she walked out of the bedroom.
“A DJ mare Vinyl” Octavia followed her “Just wear the dress for one night please” Vinyl turned to her and started to fake crying “But i don't wanna huuuu huuu huu” she fell on the floor and stopped moving “I refuse”. “I’m just asking for one thing Vinyl” Octavia said “I’ll reward you for it” Vinyl stay on the floor not moving “But i’m not a mare i can't wear a dress cus i dont wanna die, those thing buuuuuurn” she pouted and suddenly stopped and took a serious tone “And before you said it, it's a manly hole, it have nothing to do with mares”.
“It wasn’t so manly last night Vinyl” Octavia brushed past her “And that won’t happen again if you don’t wear it” Vinyl said then offended “How dare you bringing the manliness of my manly hole in that Tavi and it a no, i will never NEVER wear your girly fluff thing its for ponies like you not me” she looked away still leaning on the floor. “I’ve had enough Vinyl, it’s not a choice anymore” Octavia turned back to her “You are going to wear that dress if i have to tie you to it” Vinyl glared at her “You wouldn't dare”
Octavia pulled a small roll of duct tape out “Do you want to take the risk Vinyl because we both know i’ll do it” Vinyl screamed in horror “AAAAAAH!! Not the duct tape NUUUUUU!!” she crawled away from her. Octavia grabbed the dress in the bedroom and walked back in the living room after Vinyl “Put it on willingly or i use the duct tape” Vinyl turned her head to face Octavia “Never!” she get off the floor and started to run away in the house.
“Vinyl!” Octavia chased after Vinyl dragging the dress behind her “You are going to wear this!” Vinyl said as she run away “Never! I prefer death!” she ran up the stairs to escape her marefriend. Octavia followed her up and slowly walked down the hall “Come out Vinyl, i just want to have some fun” Vinyl was hiding in one of the room panting in distress, horrified by the idea of being seen wearing a dress.
Octavia pushed the door open and walked into the room Vinyl was hiding in “Vinyl? are you in here? come on out, i don’t have the tape” Vinyl said then hiding behind a desk “I’m not here i’m in another room” she tried to change her voice to make it sound like she’s in another room but she fail horribly at this.
Octavia grinned and turned toward the sound “Found you, now come out here and let me put this on you like a good little mare” Vinyl tried to run away and said “I am not a mare” but Octavia instantly jumped on her when she saw her coming out of her hideout “You said you didn't have the duct tape!!! AAAAAAARGH!” Vinyl tried to get out from under Octavia.
“Hold still!” Octavia pulled Vinyl’s tuxedo off and slid the dress over her head after putting a two sided ring of tape inside to glue it to her coat without Vinyl noticing it. Octavia get off Vinyl after she succeeded at making her wearing the dress, Vinyl stand up and grabbed the dress with her teeth and tried to pull it off but it didn't move and just pulled on her fur “AAAAAAAARGH!! THAT FREAKING HURT!! You will regret this! What are you thinking! it will take hours to take it off without ruining my coat!” Vinyl yelled at her angrily.
“I won’t regret this because you won’t do anything to hurt me and i’ll help you get the tape off after the performance” Octavia said. walking out of the room Vinyl picked up the duct tape and put a line of it on Octavia’s back and said laughing “Pay back!” and she make sure that its carefully glued to her coat.
Octavia glanced back at the line of tape “You idiot Vinyl! I spent hours getting my coat ready and you ruined it in five seconds!!!”Vinyl stick her tongue to her “You’re the one who started by taping this dress on my coat first! And why would i have to wear a dress and not you?” she walked down the stairs. “I am wearing a dress!” Octavia stormed after her “It’s waiting for me at the theater you fool!” Vinyl smiled at her and said “Then no one will see the tape if you wear a dress, but its the last time i swear to Celestia its the last time you make me wear a dress” she glared at her angrily at the end.
“It’s the last time you’re going to be doing a lot of things Vinyl” Octavia countered Vinyl walked to the front door “I don't care, i hate dress and it's the last time i do something i hate” she walked toward a puddle of mud outside the house “Don’t you dare walk through that puddle” Octavia grabbed hold of Vinyl’s tail and pulled her back behind her, Vinyl then pushed Octavia forward in the mud direction.
Octavia glared at her and stepped around the puddle “Stop acting foalish Vinyl, i want this night to go well for both of us. That can’t happen if you’re doing this”Vinyl get up and said “It can't happen if you force me to do stuff i don't like”. “I asked you to do something for me just for one night” Octavia said “I don’t think that was too much to expect from you” Vinyl said then complaining “You’re literally trying to change me, i hate dress and you don't even respect that! I respect your choice and what you like, respect mine too”
“I’m not trying to change you, i asked you to wear it for one night, only one and then you can get rid of it” Octavia said “I don’t think it’s too much for you to do that for me Vinyl” Vinyl continued “Yes it is because i hate dress, do i force you to play dubstep? no i have my sound proof room for that so you don't have to listen to my music but you keep imposing your stuff on me and it's not cool” she said walking along with her to the theater.
“This is the only time i’ve done this” Octavia said “I don’t want to impose anything on you, i just want you to look beautiful for tonight” Vinyl rolled her eyes “Yeah and what about that manner class you forced me to go and when you absolutely wanted me to learn to play some dumb instrument or the other day when you forced me to wear my mane in a “fancy” manner, and sorry but my tuxedo was perfect, just for that, you will have to wait another month before you can see my eyes” she looked away from her marefriend.
Octavia frowned “You haven’t shown me your eyes before, i’m sure i can go without for a little longer but i’m sorry for trying to force things on you, after tonight it won’t happen again” Vinyl said annoyed “So you don't want to see your marefriend eyes... ok then you will never saw them”
“That’s not what i said, i would love to see your eyes but i just said i’m not going to force you” Vinyl walked faster to go past her “If you don't even care about seeing my eyes then you are not allowed to see them, pfff” she walked in front of her and then said “Talk to my tail” she wiggled it on her face.
Octavia sighed and pushed her tail away then trotted up next to her “You’re being difficult Vinyl, I just wanted us to have a good time and i still do” Vinyl turned to Octavia and said annoyed “You should have thought about it before gluing this ugly thing around my body, there is no way i will have fun now” she started to trot toward the theater now instead of walking “Lets just get this over with so i can take this thing off”.
“Ok Vinyl” Octavia said, she walked ahead to show Vinyl the way to the theater. They soon arrived there, Vinyl followed her in silence, she started to calm down. Octavia led Vinyl to a VIP box “I need to join my ensemble,” Octavia gave Vinyl a quick kiss and cantered out the door “Yeah... good luck Tavi” Vinyl said after felling down a bit. She turned and sat at the edge of the box, awaiting Octavia’s appearance on stage. Her eyes scanned across the crowd, spotting several familiar ponies in the throng. She was a bit down but Octavia was still her love, she just don't like it when she force her to do stuff but she rapidly got over it and the wait was killing her.
Her attention was drawn to the stage as the orchestra filed out, Vinyl quickly picked out Octavia and her eye’s widened, Octavia was wearing a flowing jet black dress that gave her an air of grace and elegance. Vinyl couldn’t take her eyes off her as she made her way across the stage, Vinyl leaned forward in her seat as the orchestra began to play a slow melancholy piece that soon had much of the audience in tears
Her eyes locked on Octavia as she swept her bow across her Cello, driving the melancholy tone of the piece, Vinyl felt tears form at the corners of her eyes as the piece came to a close, “OH YEAH!!, GO TAVI!! YOU’RE THE BEST!!” She leaned over the balcony, cheered and whistled at her, drawing stares from the crowd. The orchestra took a bow and marched off stage, Vinyl left the box and cantered down to the backstage area.
Vinyl cantered excitedly through the stage door, spotting Octavia packing her Cello in the corner, she broke into a fast trot “Hey Tavi!” Octavia smiled as she caught sight of Vinyl happily trotting towards her “Did you enjoy the performance, Vinyl?”
“Oh Yeah!, you were awesome” Vinyl leaned toward her “And you look cute when you’re concentrating too” she smiled to her marefriend happily, the dress thing completely flew of her mind. Octavia blushed and nuzzled her “Oh be quiet”
Vinyl smiled “Hey do you want to go and celebrate your concert?” she walked to the door and gestured to Octavia telling her to come with her. “What did you have in mind?” Octavia followed her curious about this. “I dunno” Vinyl shrugged “ Some fancy restaurant”. Octavia laughed “Come on, I know a place nearby” Vinyl laughed and followed her happily “Awesome so i don't have to find a place thanks”. Both trot down the street “I thought you said it was close, We’ve been walking for half an hour” it was further away than what Octavia said and it was kinda getting late. Octavia glanced back at her “Stop complaining Vinyl it is close”
Vinyl face hoofed “But you said that 10 minutes ago!” she waved her one of her foreleg in the air. “Stop complaining Vinyl” Octavia trotted ahead and looked down several nearby streets “I’m not complaining’ I’m observing and don't tell me we are lost again because of you!” Vinyl said unhappy but she realised that it meant that they may get in trouble so it mean awesome fight “Maybe is a good thing after all... i hope a hobo just jump on us so i can kick his flank” she said excited because she didn't fight in a while now and it was missing her.
Octavia sighed “No, Vinyl you’re complaining and you’re not getting into another fight, now be quiet while i find my bearings” she stopped and looked around, Vinyl pop up infront of her and said “But i thought you liked it when you see me fighting, remember how we met? You were attacked and like a hero i jumped into a epic brawl and kicked the crap of those ponies and save you!” she threw her chest out heroically and proudly.
“Yes i remember and i’m grateful that you were there to help me but that doesn’t mean i want you to pick fights with random ponies off the street” Octavia ignored her pose and kept walking. Vinyl sighed and then rush in front of her and walked backward t not slow her down “What about i pay a random hobo to attack you so i can beat the crap out of him like i did when we met” she smiled widely.
“What?” Octavia stopped and suddenly rounded on Vinyl “You paid ponies to attack me!?” Vinyl bursted in laugh “Ahahahahahah you fell in my trap, that was a joke but the fun part in it is that i could totally have done it anyway!!” and she roll on the ground laughing.
“That’s not funny Vinyl, that’s a horrible thing to say” Octavia stepped over the top of her and kept walking. Vinyl gasped as she lost her breath when she walked on her stomach and then she get up “Well thats just a joke, why can't you take a joke?” she rolled her eyes and continued to follow her.
“I can’t take jokes about things like that, if you had paid ponies to attack me just so we could meet i wouldn’t be happy with you” Octavia said “It would be a stupid thing to do Vinyl and if i find out it’s true you will regret it” Vinyl said then really sorry “Aaaaaw but its just a joke, you know i’m not a bad pony, i would never hire ponies to do that, i only fight for justice, i would never do that or attack anypony without a good reason” Vinyl explained.
“I’m glad to hear it Vinyl” Octavia said “And i know i’m just letting you know what will happen should you decide to try something so stupid” Vinyl pulled her dress up and said “Like this?” and then pulled off the duct tape from her back with her teeth really quickly.
Octavia yelled in pain and turned furiously to Vinyl “Vinyl! I’m going to kill you for that!” Vinyl said then horrified “If you do that you will kill the foals... wait it's later in the story... in two or three chapter later... whatever...” she shrugged
Writer 2: Oh no omg!! Vinyl just broke the fourth wall!! What do we do!? WHAT DO WE DO!!!! *She yell in her partner ear*
Writer 1: What the hell are you asking me for!?
Writer 2: Dude... Vinyl just broke the reality of the whole fic and and probably... i was going to make a big mistake right here... anyway help me fix that!!
Writer 1: I think we need to get the fic under control first.
Writer 2: Ok ok so what about making her rewind this scene?
Writer 1: She can’t have control over time
Writer 2: PFFFFF watch me!
“What?” Octavia said , thrown off by her statement “What foals? We’re not having any foals it’s only been six months” Vinyl gasped in horror “Oh no! i just created a paradox wait!! REWIND!! ==||== !!DNIWER !!tiaw xodarap a detaerc tsuj i !on hO“ rorroh ni depsag lyniV ”shtnom xis neeb ylno s’ti slaof yna gnivah ton er’eW ?slaof tahW“ tnemetats reh yb ffo nworht , dias aivatcO ”?tahW“
deggurhs ehs ”...revetahw ...retal retpahc eerht ro owt ni ...yrots eht ni retal s'ti tiaw ...slaof eht llik lliw uoy taht od uoy fI“ deifirroh neht dias lyniV ==||== Vinyl smiled and said “You would kill your own marefriend! How horrible!! I thought you had more class than that!”
Writer 2: Here fixed!! Well what do you think about THAT!!
Writer 1: You didn’t change anything
Writer 2: Nope i made Vinyl rewind the scene :p
“I do have more class than that but i think i can forget about that long enough to teach you not to do that again” Octavia said. a grin spreading across her face “So come here Vinyl” Vinyl backed a bit and said “You know i can undo that too?” Vinyl smiled awkwardly.
Writer 2: Omg OH MY GAWD!! She did it again! It call for extreme measure!!
Writer 1: no NO you’re not going to do that!
*Nods slowly and snap his finger*
*Pinkie Pie pop next to her*
Pinkie: Oooooh!! What do you need me for! *Bounce happily*
Writer 2: I want you to go in the fic and take away Vinyl’s fourth wall break ability and fix her mess.
*She salute like a soldier and pierce in the the fic*
“Undo it? It happened and you can’t change that” Octavia said, taking a step closer to Vinyl who continued to walk backward a bit “Exactly i can't because i totally did not just rewinded the time because everypony know its impossible” Pinkie Pie showed up out of nowhere and said angrily “Ok who is breaking the fourth wall without my permission! Now i have to undo all of that because if you!” she snapped her “finger” and everything goes back to here:
“I do have more class than that but i think i can forget about that long enough to teach you not to do that again” Octavia said. a grin spreading across her face “So come here Vinyl” Vinyl backed a bit and said “Would you do that i’m your marefriend!” Pinkie watched the scene from a black hole and said to herself “Good everything is back to normal” and she disappeared in her time space fold.
Pinkie: Fixed! :p
Writer 2: Thanks god Pinkie, we can always count on you *Manly tears*
Writer 1: I can't BELIEVE you just did that...
Octavia’s grin widened “Yes i would” She leapt on top of Vinyl before she could run and ripped the dress off, the duct tape pulling her hair out along with it. Vinyl yelled in pain and pushed Octavia off her, rubbing her body in pain she said “That was mean Tavi!”
“I warned you i would punish you if you did anything like that” Octavia turned and walked away from her “Now come Vinyl, i’m sure we’re close, you’ll be eating soon”. Vinyl stood up grumbling and followed her, her mind drifting forward to the prospect of food. Octavia trotted along and suddenly stopped causing Vinyl to collide with her rear. “Ow! You could’ve warned me you’d stopped Tavi, that hurt” she rubbed her nose with a hoof.
Octavia ignored her and looked around for a moment then made her way down a side street “It’s this way”. Vinyl started after her “Are you sure this time? I can’t go much longer without food” As if in response, her stomach rumbled loudly “See, I’m wasting away!” Octavia slapped her hoof against her forehead “Vinyl, you ate in the theater , how can you be hungry already”. Vinyl grinned “It takes a lot of energy to stay this awesome, you know but now i have a ring of fur missing! because of you!” she pointed at her.“I already told you what would happen if you did it Vinyl” Octavia said “It’s your own fault” Vinyl answered angrily “Who put duct tape around my body first? They should prevent little fillies from using this”
“That’s why i keep it away from you” Octavia said. Vinyl looked away and continued her way “Yeah because i’m the foal who glue dresses on ponies with duct tape”. “Mature ponies aren’t scared of dresses” Octavia trotted ahead again “And you don’t know where you’re going” Vinyl turned around having enough of this “I’m not scared, i said millions of time that i don’t like dress, its not being immature it’s simply a question of taste, what is immature is to glue that dress on me whit freaking duct tape, every time i’m having fun or that i do something i like, you come and ruin it, like for earlier when i wanted to wear my awesome new tuxedo and i even already told you before that i was going to wear it, now just take the lead if you know where we're going” she waited for Octavia to walk in front of her.
“I only wanted you to wear the dress for one night, that’s not a lot Vinyl and i don’t ruin anything” Octavia walked ahead of her “I make sure you don’t do anything that will hurt you but that’s all” Vinyl followed her and answered “First of all i don’t need you to protect me, and yes you ruin my fun, you forced me to take those instrument lesson when i started to listen to trash music and you forced me to manners lesson when i built a city in carrots, i don't see why, everypony loved to see my city of carrots! And no Tavi, its not because YOU want me to wear a dress that i will” Vinyl looked down a bit and then she said “Its like... its like you don't even love me for how i am...”
Octavia came to a halt and held up a hoof to stop Vinyl “Of course i love you for who you are Vinyl, don’t be stupid, why didn’t you tell me you felt like that. I never would have done it if i knew” Vinyl rolled her eyes “Yeah because you totally listened to me earlier about the dress...”. “I just wanted you to do one thing for me!” Octavia said angrily “One thing for one night! Why is that such a problem?” Vinyl started to yell at her stroking her on the chest “BECAUSE I DON'T FORCE YOU THINGS!!! THAT WHY!! its alway what you want and never what i want, its only you, yourself and Tavi”
Octavia stared at Vinyl quietly and dropped onto her haunches “.....You’re right... i’m sorry Vinyl i never meant to make you feel like that, i just wanted you to be a little more.....adjusted, i didn’t wasn’t trying to ruin you or force you into anything” Vinyl raised an eyebrow “Adjust? No what you wanted is me in a dress so you can show off and impress everypony at the theater and its also why you make me took those manner lesson but unfortunately for you i didn't used one thing from these lesson yet, now lets go i’m hungry...” she lifted Octavia up on her four leg.
“Ok it’s this way” Octavia said quietly, she silently led Vinyl down the street and emerged onto a broad avenue, she turned toward a small restaurant on the corner and trotted up to the door and knocked lightly, she listened as hoofsteps approached the door and it swung open, a cerulean stallion stood framed in the doorway, His eyes darted between the two mares, mistrust written across his features, His gaze fell upon Octavia and his expression softened “Octavia? Is that you?” the stallion said.
“I apologize for showing up so abruptly, Nestea” Octavia said apologetically “But I was hoping we could have a late dinner?”. Nestea smiled and opened the way “Of course!” Nestea stepped to the side and ushered them inside “It’s been too long Octavia” she smiled to his old friend “Yes, it has” Octavia nodded “Once again i’m sorry for showing up after so long” he lead them to a table “Don’t worry about it,” He waved a hoof dismissively “It’s always good to see old friends” He glanced at Vinyl “speaking of which, Are you going to introduce us?” he bowed a bit to Vinyl.
“Vinyl, this is Nestea, he’s a friend of mine from when i was a filly” Octavia said “Nestea, this is Vinyl Scratch, my marefriend” Vinyl smiled and said “Yeah thats me” like alway she took over her previous mood easily. “Well it’s nice to meet you Vinyl” He held out a hoof for Vinyl to shake.
“‘Sup dude” Vinyl bumped his hoof, taking a closer look at him. He stood slightly taller than her, his maroon mane was cut short and his dull green eyes sparkled with amusement. Her gaze tracked down to his flank, His cutie mark depicted a stack of pancakes
Nestea watched her with a mirthful smile “I know i’ve got a nice flank Vinyl but try not to stare.” Vinyl’s face reddened slightly and she turned to scan across the various photos adorning the walls, Nestea noticed the missing fur on Vinyl “ What happened to your coat there Vinyl?” she shrugged and said “Duct tape accident” she trotted over to view some of them, stopping when she came across a group of photos containing Octavia as a filly “You didn’t tell me you looked so adorable in socks, Tavi” Vinyl laughed
Nestea laughed “You should have seen her bouncing around in them when she got her cutie mark” Octavia coughed loudly “If you two are quite finished, i’d like to sit down” Vinyl chuckled “Heh sorry, Tavi” Nestea smiled “Just take a seat, you two. I’ll get some food” Octavia sat down at a nearby table, Vinyl turned from the pictures and moved to join her “Hey, how do you know this guy?” She smiled slightly “He’s an old friend” Octavia said “I used to come here everyday when i first came to Canterlot” Vinyl laughed “I hope not too old” the joke didn't worked, Octavia didnt laugh, she was silent for a moment “Hey Tavi, Why haven’t i met your family”
“Because i haven’t introduced you yet” Octavia smirked “Very funny, Tavi” Vinyl rolled her eye. Octavia sighed “I suppose it’s about time you met them”. Vinyl looked around trying to figure out why she didn't looked happy about she raised an eyebrow and asked “Well... what’s the problem?”. Octavia wanted to make Vinyl happy for once so she decided quickly to make her meet her family since she was constantly asking her for it even if herself, she didnt really wanted to see them “It’s nothing” Octavia smiled “We’ll go see them tomorrow”
Vinyl grinned “Oh yeah! Awesome!” Vinyl cheered happily, she was waiting for this moment for long now. If there is something that is important for Vinyl its family. The night passed quickly for the two mares and they soon found themselves saying goodbye to Nestea, Octavia promised to visit again and catch up then trotted after Vinyl. They slowly began to walk home, Octavia leaned in and nuzzled Vinyl “Thank you for coming with me today” Vinyl smiled and said happily “Hey it’s no problem Tav, even if there was some complication and argument, i really love you and i like to go to your showi” Vinyl said. They lapsed into silence, content to just enjoy the moment as they walked together in the moonlight.
Writer 2: You see i told you “---” that i used right OVER HERE
Writer 1: There’s still nothing wrong with stars for the location change.
Writer 2: But i still told you even if here its a night skip.
Writer 1: Oh god you didn't do that!!!
Writer 2: What?
*Loud crash*
Nightmare Moon: Who dared to skip my beautiful night!
Writer 2: ARGH!!! NIGHTMARE MOON!!! ITS HIM I SWEAR!!
*Point at Writer 1*
*Jump on him and start to beat him up*
Writer 1: ARGH THE PAIN IS UNBEARABLE!!! WHY ME!?
Nightmare Moon: Be quite puny mortal!
Narrator 1: And our beloved Writer 1 suffered for the few next paragraph...
Octavia’s eyes fluttered open, she yawned sleepily and smiled as memories of the night before flooded back, she felt Vinyl’s fur softly brushing against her and wrapped her forelegs around Vinyls midriff, snuggling into her chest and eliciting a snort from her. Octavia sighed contentedly and leaned forward, gently kissing Vinyl on the nose. A groan issued from Vinyl’s throat and her eyes slowly opened but she couldn't saw them, she was sleeping with eyes cover, Her face split in a wide smile as she felt that Octavia was there since was leaning on her “Mornin’ Tavi”.
“Good morning, Vinyl” Octavia said, She leaned forward again and pressed her muzzle against Vinyl’s, Vinyl pushed back, sharing in the passionate kiss, Octavia pulled away and rose from the bed. ” Come on, Vinyl, I would prefer to get my family out of the way as early as possible” Octavia trotted through to the kitchen with Vinyl tiredly following “Do we have to do this so early, Tavi?” She yawned and slumped onto the couch “I want to sleep.”
*Nightmare Moon flew away leaving Writer 1 in agony*
“It’s 10 a.m. Vinyl, How can you still be tired” Octavia called, She sighed as a loud snore sounded in response ”Why do i put up with her” Octavia said walking back through and forcefully prodded Vinyl “Get up, Vinyl” Octavia said. Vinyl snorted and turned away from her, A smile spread across Octavia’s face as an idea formed in her mind, She bent down and whispered something into Vinyl’s ear which caused her to shoot up, blushing deeply ”Woah Tavi, I didn’t know you were into that”
Octavia smiled “I’m not. Now come on, i made breakfast” Vinyl picked up her shade on the desk next to their bed on her side and made her way to the kitchen grumbling “Can’t even have a decent nap” She stumbled through the door and dropped onto a chair, she raised a hoof and wiped her eyes under her shade “What are you making anyway?”. A plate of toast slid to a stop in front of her and Vinyl’s face fell “Toast...Thats it? I can’t survive on toast,Tavi” Vinyl threw her hooves up “I need more than that” she exclaimed. “if you want something else, you’re free to make it yourself” Octavia said. Vinyl muttered under her breath and begrudgingly ate the toast glaring at her.
Writer 2: You see here too
Writer 1: fagh farflagh fah fargablah
Writer 2: fargablah you to my friend.
The two mares cantered out the door of their apartment building and set off in search of a carriage “Wait? we need a carriage?, How far away are your family?” Vinyl said. “It’s a 5 hour trip” Octavia continued to scan the area for a carriage. Vinyl gasped in surprise “5 HOURS!, i can’t stay in a carriage for 5 hours it will even be 5 pm when we will be there!”. Octavia rolled her eyes “Stop complaining, Vinyl” she waved a carriage down. “But 5 hours is so long!” Vinyl whine unhappy about this anymore. “You’re acting like a foal” The carriage pulled up and Octavia shoved Vinyl forward, Vinyl climbed aboard with a muttered curse about Octavia’s family while she trotted over to the drivers.
“Can you take us to the Pie rock farm just outside of Ponyville?” The two stallions nodded ”Of course Ma’am, hop on”. Octavia smiled and climbed aboard,Vinyl sat in the corner staring unhappily through the window and Octavia settled down next to her.
“Stop sulking, Vinyl,” Octavia smiled, “It’s not that long and this was your idea anyway”. Vinyl was pouting in her corner “I didn’t think i’d have to get up so early” Vinyl huffed. Octavia frowned “Vinyl, stop acting like a foal, This is going to be hard enough without that”. Vinyl got a little bit annoyed “Stop calling me a foal! And what’s so hard about it?, You’re just introducing me to your family” she said not seeing what's the big deal. Octavia sighed and explained to her marefriend “It won’t be that simple, Vinyl. My family hasn’t been very supportive of me moving to Canterlot and becoming a musician”. Vinyl shrugged “Well... why not?”.
“They wanted me to stay and help them with the farm or get another practical job. They don’t think music is worth any time because it’s “Not productive enough...” Octavia paused “...And i don’t know how they’ll react to us”. Vinyl smiled to her beautiful partner in life, she wrapped a foreleg around Octavia and pulled her into an embrace “Don’t worry about it, Tavi, I’m sure your family’s cool”. Octavia smiled weakly “Maybe”.
They slipped into silence as the carriage moved along, Vinyl soon fell asleep slumped against the wall,leaving Octavia to lose herself in her thoughts.
----------FLASHBACK TIIIIIME YEAH!!!!!----------
Narator 2: Wub wub...
*eyes shift left to right... walk away*
Octavia stood gazing in a store window.She placed her against the glass and stared longingly at the instruments carefully placed around the store. “Octavia, come now, we’re leaving” a rough voice called out, Octavia sighed and turned,trudging slowly back to her waiting family.
“Can’t i get one of those before we go, Dad” She gestured at the instruments in the window. He briefly spared the store a glance then turned back to their wagon “No”. Octavia’s head sank low to the ground “Why not?, maybe i’ll get my cutie mark”. “We’re rock farmers, even if you get a cutie mark in music, The high class ponies will never accept you” He lifted Octavia onto the wagon and hitched it to his shoulders.
“Why not?” She asked. “They’ll always see you as the backwater rock farmer, they won’t look past your background and see you for who you are” He replied “Ponies like us don’t belong among ponies like them”. Octavia rubbed her chin in thought and a wide smile spread across her face “I know i’ll become a famous musician and show them all that i’m just as good as them”.
Her father sighed “It won’t work, Inkie. Those Canterlot snobs will always reject anypony who isn’t one of them”. “I think you’re wrong, why should it matter where i come from if my music is good?” Octavia protested “You’re not getting an instrument. You can stay and work the farm like our family has done for generations”
Octavia opened her mouth to protest, when she felt a hoof on her shoulder and turned to see a pair of dull amber eyes, regarding her sympathetically “Leave it sister” Octavia sighed and sank to the floor of the wagon
-----FLASHFORWARD FUCK YEAH!!!-----
Narrator 1: ( ಠ_ಠ)
Narrator 2: What? Stop looking at me like that it was fun!
Narrator 1: No...
Narrator 2: Ok i’m done with this *Throw the laptop in the air*
Narrator 1: Omg what a douche... Lets go back to the writing... oh GAWD EVERYONE IS LOOKING AT ME MEEP!
*Jump behind the desk*
Write 1: Who are those narrators?
Writer 2: Peoples...
Writer 1: So you’re not going to tell me who’s the mystery narrators are?
Writer 2: THEY ARE FREAKING PEOPLE WITH FINGER SO THEY CAN FUCKING TYPE! now back to the story.
Writer 1: So we have mystery people and then us XD
Writer 2: YES AND WHO CARES? NOW SHUT THE HELL UP!!!
Writer 1: I think thats enough XD
Writer 2: Good now back to the story.
“We’re almost there Ma'am” One of the drivers called back, pulling Octavia from her reverie. She turned and shook Vinyl awake ”We’re almost there, Vinyl”.
Vinyl sat up and stretched “About time”.
Writer 1: This thing is crazy...
Writer 2: Shut UP!! its fun...
“About time?” Octavia looked at her skeptically “You were asleep for the entire trip”
Writer 1: Stop that!
“It was a long sleep”
Writer 1: Dammit Writer 2 stop putting all of this in!
Writer 2: Look what you make me do, i cant even fix the paragraph together anymore!
The carriage pulled to a stop and Octavia climbed out, She looked around and smiled wistfully ”Nothing’s changed”. Vinyl stepped down and stood next to her “This is where you grew up?” Vinyl looked around, frowning “There’s nothing here, I thought this was a farm”
Writer 2: Lol le pun here v
“It’s a rock farm” Vinyl frowned “How do you farm rocks?” Vinyl scratched her head in confusion. “Let’s just get this over with” Octavia walked slowly up the path towards the house, the terrain was a bit harsh and awful to look at, everything seemed a bit dead. There were only a few rocks here and there with holes to find more rocks. She approached the door and knocked swiftly “Try to behave yourself, Vinyl”
Vinyl feigned a look of shock “I am offended Tavi, I’ll have you know i’m a role model for fillies” Octavia rolled her eyes at Vinyl having doubt about that. “Yes, for the drunken delinquents” Vinyl shrugged “Well... That’s just a coincidence” The door swung open to reveal a mare similar to Octavia regarding them both distrustfully, her dull, amber eyes locked on Octavia who proceeded to smile awkwardly “Hello Blinkie”
Blinkie scanned her with her eye “I thought you were too good to come back here” Blinkie said coldly “Did the Canterlot snobs finally find out where you came from?” Octavia sigh a bit “Please Blinkie, I’m just here to talk to mother and father” she said “i don’t want to argue” Blinkie looked away “Then you shouldn’t have abandoned us for your fancy friends”
“I didn’t aband-” Octavia was cut off by the pink blur that rocketed through the door and bowled into her, She fell to the ground and her vision was filled by a bright blue orb pressed against her face.
“Ohmygosh, Inkie!! I knew it was you! You see, i got a tingling in my spine and that means i’m going to see somepony i haven’t seen in a while and i thought “huh? who haven’t i seen in a while” and the only pony i haven’t seen is the Princess but why would she be on a farm so it must be you and it was you and i-” Octavia forced a hoof against her muzzle and rose to her hooves.
“Hello Pinkamena,” Octavia said, “I’ll remove my hoof if you promise to stop talking, Do you?” Pinkie nodded and Octavia slowly pulled her hoof away, staring in disgust at the saliva dripping from it and shook it off, Her attention was drawn away when Pinkie gasped in surprise
Vinyl was going to ask her marefiend something but Pinkie cut her “Scratchie you’re here too!!” Pinkie leapt forward and tackled Vinyl “It’s been so long since i’ve seen you, too! Oh, oh, we should have a party to celebrate the two of you getting together, We can invite everyone and-” Vinyl cut Pinkie and asked “Wait Pinkie, how did you know me and Tavi were together?” Vinyl pushed her away and sat up “Tavi, why you didn't told me Pinkie was your sister or this name “Inkie” its a cute name...” she asked curiously.
“Inkie is not my name!” Octavia said unhappily. Pinkie giggled “Silly Scratchie, It says so in the story description” and thens he turned to her sister “But sure its your name, Octavia Inkie Pie like mine is Pinkamena Diane Pie. ”
Writer 2: Pinkie what did we said about breaking the fourth wall without our permission?
Pinkie: I know but its so much fun!
Writer 2: Well its ok for this time its not a bad one anyway.
Pinkie: Yepie!!
“In the what?” Vinyl and Octavia said in unison “In the story description” Pinkie repeated, bouncing happily back inside. Octavia noticed Vinyl grinning madly out of the corner of her eye “What?”
Writer 2: Put that back... it part of the fic for the fun of the reader!
*...*
Writer 2: Ok then i stop the fic right now. You’re ruining the unique aspect of the fic so give this back.
Writer 1: I won’t give that back but i’ll keep throwing in random things you can add.
Writer 2: Good and this thing right here is one XD
“You never told me you had a sister as awesome as Pinkie” Vinyl said “She throws the best parties!” Octavia sighed “I knew you two would get along” Vinyl laughed and said smiling “Sure i will, before i moved to Canterlot we were friend at school in Ponyville!” Octavia kinda ignored her and trotted after Pinkie, leaving Vinyl to hastily run after her. “Hey Tavi wait up! What was that thing with your sister?”
“I told you earlier, Vinyl,” said Octavia, “My family was never happy that i left to become a musician” They followed the sound of Pinkie’s voice and walked inside only to be greeted by apprehensive stares and an impossibly wide grin from Pinkie.
“Hello father, mother” She received a curt nod in response “I’m sorry to drop in unexpectedly, but i wanted to introduce you, This is my marefriend Vinyl, Vinyl these are my parents Clyde and Sue”. They glanced at Vinyl who smiled nervously, uncomfortable in the tension between Octavia and her parents, she moved away and sat next to Pinkie.
“Have you decided to abandon your pointless “Musical career” and come back to work the farm like you should?” Clyde said on a serious tone. “Clyde!” Sue scolded him “We should be proud she’s following her dream” she said kindly to her husband. “She should be working the farm and keeping the Pie family tradition going, not playing music for pretentious fools”
“My music is not pointless!” Said Octavia “It makes ponies happy and that makes it just as important as anything else!”. The father hit the table with a hoof “You should be doing something productive like your sisters” He gestured at Pinkie and Blinkie. Vinyl silently watched the exchange between Octavia and her father, and then Pinkie Pie jumped on Tavi putting her hooves on her shoulder and yelled right in her ears.
“Lets make this party right now!!” Octavia shoved her away angrily “Stop acting like a foal you irresponsible idiot!!”. Pinkie fell back onto the floor and tears welled up in her eyes “You don’t have to be so mean” Pinkie stood up and fled from the room, crying. Octavia yelled in frustration and stormed out of the room. Vinyl noticed Clyde staring at her and chuckled sheepishly, she darted out of the room and ran after Octavia.
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Writer 2: ok what the fuck are those stars?
Writer 1: It’s a scene break
Writer 2: But i used multiple time these "---" No i have to scroll all the way up and get it.
Writer 1: Just use the stars. Theres nothing wrong with using them
Writer 2: Ok fine, break the pattern it make the story more unique!
Writer 1: You’re completely insane
Writer 2: You know what they say “Insane people rule the world”
Octavia slammed the door of their house open and stormed inside, muttering angrily “Stupid, inconsiderate foals!” She bucked her hind legs back ,sending a speaker crashing to the floor. “Hey!” Vinyl trotted through the door and made her way over to the speaker and almost cried for it “That’s my speaker, I need it for my set! Poor little guy...” she said all sad holding her speaker in her foreleg.
“I don’t care about your useless equipment” Vinyl ignored her and lifted the speaker up “You didn’t need to be so hard on Pinkie back there” and the she looked back at her speaker “And break my stuff” Octavia trot to the kitchen angrily “She needs to stop throwing idiotic little parties and start acting responsibly” Vinyl put her speaker down out of the way to take care of it later “She throws parties to be friendly” she said taking her defence.
“No she’s been a nuisance ” Octavia continued angrily “Well, we wouldn’t want to bother her highness” Vinyl replied sarcastically. Octavia rounded on her “What’s that supposed to mean?” Vinyl raised her volume “It means i’m tired of you speaking to me like i’m stupid, and you do it to everypony!” Octavia was still on the edge of her patience “If you didn’t act so stupid, i wouldn’t have to” Vinyl had enough “And if you didn’t act like you’re better than everypony it wouldn’t be a problem!” she yelled at her. The two of them glared angrily at each other
“I’m not wasting my time having a childish argument with you” Octavia turned to walk away. “Be careful getting off your soapbox there Tavi, you might hurt yourself” Vinyl said sarcastically. Octavia whipped around to face her “I’ve had enough of your stupid insults Vinyl”
“And i’ve had enough of you constantly putting me down!” Vinyl yelled “You never let me do anything i want to do! you’re alway calling me stupid and foal and force me to do thing and when we finally do something i like, like meeting your family, you screw everything up!” Vinyl continued to yell at her.
“I SCREW EVERYTHING UP!!!?” Octavia raised her voice “They insulted me and i defended myself and you call that screwing up!!!” Vinyl walked to her and stroke her on the chest “You constantly insult me and look we are together for 6 month now, if i can take over it you too, its not that hard to just ignore them and try to have fun for once! The only thing you showed me these past week is that you're just a stuck up bitch!!” Vinyl finally said it, trying to put her back in her place.
Octavia’s hoof flew up and collided with Vinyl’s face, sending her glasses soaring across the room. Vinyl shut her eyes tight and stumbled over to her glasses, she found them snapped in two and lifted them clumsily up to her eyes “You punched me.....” she couldn't believe it, she never hit her before. “Get out” Octavia said having enough now “Tavi, i’m s-” Vinyl said trying to apologize but she got cut by Octavia now mad at her“I SAID GET OUT!!!!” she screamed at her.
Vinyl stared at Octavia then slowly turned and walked toward the door, stopping to turn her head back she said “I’m sorry Tav-”. Octavia slammed the door on her and sank to the floor, crying. Vinyl hesitated at the sound of sobbing but turned and walked away,tears streaming down her face.
Writer 2: Hey look at that 17 freaking page for the first chap! and we have like 112 wrote down! i think it we can finally post one chapter weekly!
Writer 1: After some heavy editing.
Writer 2: Yeah but still!!! This story is going to be awesome dude! We have everything, we fixed some part added my awesome idea of Narrator and us in the fic.
Writer 1: Hopefully.
Writer 2: I’m telling you, this fic is GOLD. Now lets put this on DA and Tumblr!
Writer 1: not yet
Writer 2: Why? Its perfect.
Writer 1: It still needs some work
Writer 2: Fuck you it doesn't
Writer 1: Trust me not yet
Writer 2: WHY! I have enough of waiting, we corrected everything, we fixed the long dialog part where there was no description and added funny part and stuff everything is ready to be read by people.
Writer 1: Just trust me it’s not ready yet
Writer 2: If i trust you it will never be ready so fuck your shit
Writer 1: Not everyone will take this fic well in it’s current state
Writer 2: Why?
Writer 1: I don’t want to get into details
Writer 2: Then FIM FIC it is.
Writer 1: Not yet.
Writer 2: Watch me.
