Hooked

by Omegathyst

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Applejack, Drama, Porn, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Fetish, Rarity, Fluttershy, Sex, Profanity, Violence
Length: 8119

Despite having the sweet Fluttershy as a much better partner than the last mare, Applejack finds herself relapsing to the mare that had ripped her heart out. After all, nopony can quite do and undo her like Rarity can.

Applejack has been trying to move on from her last relationship by dating the kind and sweet Fluttershy, a far cry from the mare she had last dated. As they decide to go to a club to celebrate their six month anniversary early, somepony is lurking in the shadows. Rarity, having permanently damaged her relationship with her best friends due to her actions, ultimately decides she has nothing left to lose, seeks her target, and strikes.

Applejack may be an honest mare, but that doesn't mean she's a loyal one.

Cover art by WhiteDiamonds.
Contains Heavy Themes of Toxic Relationships, Manipulation, and Cheating. If that isn't your cup of tea, please don't read. Story also contains Shitty Applejack, Manipulative Rarity, Oblivious Fluttershy, lots of lesbian sex, intentionally and accidentally faked orgasms, strip clubs, very brief scene of lesbian zebradom/lap dance, oral sex, bedroom sex, public bathroom sex, angry sex, scissoring, squirting, sexy magical spells, magical dildos, mistresses, mind break, BDSM dynamics including transforming a Dom into a Sub, pet play with shock collars, and blindfolds.

Published 2022-10-23 21:10:00 UTC
Last updated 2022-11-03 22:17:09 UTC

Before the Club

Author's Note

I want to start off with the fact that I love all three of these characters to bits and this isn't meant to be character assassination for the sake of character assassination. I thought it'd be interesting to write an Applejack who cheats and a Rarity who is manipulative, the former being something much harder to grasp due to her Honesty. Rarity being a drama whore is a lot more believable of course. But I always love to challenge myself with writing different concepts. Anyways, hope y'all enjoy even if this isn't what I normally write!

Before the Club

Applejack slowly opened her eyes, feeling the light of the moon resting on her face as she woke up. She tried to will herself to get up, her still sore muscles glued to the bed as she struggled to hoist herself off her mattress. With a grunt, she gave up, resting back on the bed with her face smashed into the pillows. She had worked all morning and some of the afternoon, bucking apples as usual, before she had bathed and then crashed on her bed for the past few hours. While her new marefriend wasn’t nearly as capable when it came to work as she was, the yellow pegasus she’d been dating was more than happy to give her a different kind of support. She felt her heart racing as she heard the sounds of chirping and growling near her room, followed by the door cracking open. Angel wriggled his way into the room, hopping onto the bed where Applejack gave him a side eye.

“Don’t ya even dare,” Applejack huffed. “Flutters? Don’t use him to get me up this time, ah’m okay to get up. Could…could ya please come in yourself?”

“Sure,” Fluttershy opened the door wider, birds flying into Applejack’s room and raccoons scurrying in and rushing over to the dresser. Applejack felt her blood boiling as she sat up in her bed, knocking Angel off the bed as she glared down at the raccoons.

“Ah swear if you vermin so much as touch one of mah hats,” Applejack threatened, her eye twitching until the raccoons squeaked and ran out the door. “Fluttershy, could ya get them to leave? This is one of those days where ah’d like just you right about now.”

“Oh?” Fluttershy perked up, staring into Applejack’s eyes before looking at the animals around her. “Okay sweet creatures, Jackie needs some special alone time for the rest of the evening. I’ll be back at the cottage in a few hours, alright?”

Angel rolled his eyes before bolting out of the room, the rest of the animals following suit. Applejack looked to the moon high up in the sky out of her window, before turning to look at Fluttershy.

“It’s not too late to go to the club, right?” Applejack asked. “Hate to ruin our plans for the night just because ah slept in a little.”

“It isn’t too late,” Fluttershy climbed onto Applejack’s bed and wrapped her forehooves around the farm mare in a warm embrace. “It’s only 8.”

“Oh, that’s not bad at all,” Applejack nodded, before turning and looking at Fluttershy with a small grin. “Hate to miss out on celebrating our six month anniversary a few days early~”

Applejack shut her eyes, leaning forward and allowing her and Fluttershy to press their heads together. She never grew tired of smelling the soft floral scent intertwined with vanilla on Fluttershy’s body, or the way Fluttershy’s touch felt even softer than the pillows she rested on. It made her wish that Fluttershy was the one she had first tried to date out of the Mane 6. Then their friend group’s dynamics wouldn’t be nearly as complicated as they were now. They couldn’t even hang out as a group anymore, Applejack only getting to hang out with two of her other friends at one time. Anytime Rarity’s name came up, an awkward silence loomed over everypony before Applejack or Fluttershy would make their best effort to bring up something else. The fallout of Applejack’s last relationship was still fresh and not even a year old yet, still stinging her heart and mind on a near daily basis. But alas, honesty was the most important part of her life and relationships. So there was no fixing what Rarity had done.

“Are you alright, Jackie? Your body got all tense,” Fluttershy whispered, releasing Applejack from her embrace. “Were you hoping for a massage before we get ready?”

“A brief one would be nice,” Applejack nodded, flopping back onto her stomach and stretching her limbs out. “Ah always end up having a few knots in there anyway.”

Fluttershy squeaked as she stood up and flew onto Applejack’s back, gently straddling her backside as she placed her hooves onto Applejack’s shoulder blades. Kneading them slowly, Fluttershy savored the long moans that came from her marefriend’s mouth as she moved her hooves down to the middle of her back, and then finally to her flanks. Staring at Applejack’s cutie marks, Fluttershy bit her lip as she caressed both of them with her hooves, losing track of how long she was doing it when Applejack looked over her shoulder and right at Fluttershy.

“Are ya…getting wet while you’re on top of me?” Applejack gawked, wiggling her muscled butt while Fluttershy squeaked and covered the sound with her hooves now over her mouth.

“S-Sorry, y’know I can’t help it,” Fluttershy didn’t even try to change anything about her wings completely unfurled for her marefriend to see. “Any mare would feel so lucky to touch a body like this…so muscular…yet feminine at the same time-”

“Oh great Celestia, you’re in one of your moods again,” Applejack snorted. “Get on your back, Fluttershy. We oughta take care of this now, keep you from humping me at the club.”

“I have s-some self-control,” Fluttershy protested despite following Applejack’s orders, flying off Applejack and resting on the other side of the bed. “I’m not a bitch in heat.”

Applejack stood up on all four hooves, approaching Fluttershy as she reached out and cupped Fluttershy’s hot pussy with one hoof. Fluttershy held back a gasp by biting her lip, not even trying to hold back her movements as her body moved further into Applejack’s touch.

“Hmmph,” Applejack smirked down at her. “Ya sure act like it at times.”

“Ooooh, dear Celestia, I’m not going to last long,” Fluttershy gasped. “Applejack, p-please could you-”

“Say no more, sugarcube,” Applejack released her wet hoof from Fluttershy’s pussy, straddling Fluttershy as she spread her legs further apart, the two mares settling into a familiar position. Applejack had long lost count of how many times they settled into the same position with her taking charge, with her being on top. But, Applejack felt her heart drop a little at the thought, the outcome would always be the same. She lined up her pussy with Fluttershy’s, the yellow pegasus all too wet to even notice that Applejack wasn’t as half as wet as her, and thrusted. Fluttershy felt her eyes roll to the back of her head as her wings twitched.

“More, Applejack!” Flutteshy begged as loudly as she could without alerting everypony else in the barn. Applejack sighed, bracing herself with a deep breath before jackhammering Fluttershy with a rhythm that she had mastered over the past few months. The farm mare reminded herself to space out and lose herself to the motions, and not let a single image come up in her mind. It was far too risky, she reminded herself, and crying out the wrong word could easily undo everything they had created together. She moved like a well-oiled machine, not allowing Fluttershy a moment to recover before the next thrust. Fluttershy bit her lip, stifling her squeaks and moans as she grabbed Applejack with her forehooves and pulled her closer, her legs thrashing as Applejack watched the movements of her orgasm. Since the shy mare had said she wasn’t a squirter, Applejack relied on her frantic movements to know when she could drop the act and go back to normal. Sighing with relief, she lifted herself off Fluttershy’s body when the pegasus looked at Applejack once more.

“Jackie? Don’t you want me to return the favor?” Fluttershy gave her the biggest puppy dog eyes she could make, and Applejack managed to smile at her as she jumped off the bed and trotted towards her dresser.

“Silly Flutters, there’s nothing to worry about. I got all the satisfaction I expected from you,” Applejack stated, carefully placing her words so there would be no lie. Fluttershy’s ears perked up as she smiled.

“Oh, you came! Sorry, it’s much harder to tell on your end,” Fluttershy giggled. “It’s just…you don’t tense up, or moan, or even-”

“Now now, Fluttershy,” Applejack bored her eyes into her dresser as she opened it, staring at her hats as she felt her body getting cold to the touch. “Not everypony is the same when it comes to havin’ sex.”

“I know,” Fluttershy relented, taking a few deep breaths to recover before she jumped off the bed and flew to the door. “I’m going to get in my dress now, okay? There’s a tux right outside your door too. Could you believe it? After all this time, Rarity is finally willing to make outfits for us!”

Applejack’s ears flattened to her head before she froze, her ear twitching the only sign of movement on the farm mare. Slowly, she turned around and stared at Fluttershy as if she saw a ghost.

“W-What did ya say?” Applejack stammered.

“I asked Rarity to make our outfits for us!” Fluttershy beamed without skipping a beat. “Granted, I brought Pinkie Pie with me to make it easier. And she was so nice, it’s almost like nothing happened between the three of us! She just needed time, Applejack. She made such a lovely tuxedo for you, maybe you could thank her tomorrow and extend the olive branch!”

“S-Sure thing, Fluttershy,” Applejack gulped. “You g-go get your sexy flanks in that dress, alright? Ah ought to make sure that tux fits since she didn’t take mah measurements recently.”

Fluttershy nodded, opening the door all the way and shutting it behind her, Applejack trembling despite listening to her marefriend’s humming down the hallway. Applejack didn’t snap out of her state until long after Fluttershy was no longer within earshot. Walking towards the door and opening it, Applejack turned around and felt her heart clenching as she saw the tuxedo attached to the coathanger on her doorknob.

Dark purple and white with a black tie, those details didn’t even jab Applejack where it hurt in comparison to the biggest detail of the outfit. It was adorned with many tiny blue diamonds, which could’ve only costed a fortune. Applejack knew the truth, always could come to it given her very convictions. But did Fluttershy even think twice when Rarity gave her this? Was this a test of sorts?

Applejack groaned, removing the tuxedo from the coathanger and slipping her forelegs through the leg holes. While the bottom half of her body was still naked, Applejack wore the tux as she walked down the stairs and into the bathroom. Staring into her reflection in the mirror, Applejack felt a whirlwind of emotions fighting to the surface. There was an overwhelming fire in her heart, a gut feeling of just how right it felt to be wearing this very tuxedo, and she hated the feeling with every fiber of her being. She gritted her teeth, not sure if she was going to cry first or scream, as she closed her eyes.

“Hey Applejack!”

“GREAT CELESTIA!” Applejack snapped, stomping her hoof before whirling around. “Could ah just have one-oh. Um…”

Applejack shut her mouth, feeling warmth spreading to her cheeks as she took in Fluttershy in her emerald dress and green flower in her mane. Fluttershy’s bright smile faded away and was replaced with a scowl as she took two steps back from Applejack.

“Is everything alright?” Fluttershy whispered. “How did…I don’t even know what I did.”

“Oh no no no,” Applejack rushed over and embraced Fluttershy. “Please, sweetheart. Ya did nothing wrong, trust me. Ah’m more nervous than a colt asking a filly to prom, please don’t take it personal.”

“Okay? If you say so,” Fluttershy sighed, kissing Applejack’s cheek. “But please don’t worry, nothing will go wrong.”

Applejack wanted to swear, why would she say something like that? Applejack just patted Fluttershy’s shoulder before stepping back and forcing a smile.

“Thank you, love,” Applejack walked past Fluttershy and towards the front door, opening it and revealing the night sky. Fluttershy pressed against her side as the two galloped side by side out of Sweet Apple Acres and into Ponyville. Fluttershy chatted about her animals, her eyes bright as she talked about each and every one. Applejack stared up at the sky, feeling like her heart was a rock sinking into the bottom of her chest. There were so many stars surrounding the full moon…

…and they sparkled bright as diamonds.

During the Club: The Evils of Honesty

The club, one that Applejack had gone to many times as a single mare, flashed yellow bright letters that said Forbidden Temptations for all to see during the late hours of the night. One mare knew of Applejack’s trips here, and it was not the yellow pegasus beside her. That fact alone made Applejack’s body even more cold and tense, the gut feeling that she was falling into the fangs of a predator that once it got its hold on her, would never let her go. She leaned even closer to Fluttershy, trying to gain hold of her familiar vanilla scent as much as possible, before Fluttershy presented her ID to the security guard and entered the building. The guard looked at Applejack expectedly, and she did the same before gulping and entering the club.

Fluttershy already hopped onto the barstool, wiggling with a big smile as she waited for the bartender to arrive. She then patted the stool next to her, and after surveying the whole area, determined that it was safe to sit on the stool. A hot pink pegasus with a long purple mane flew over and smiled at the two.

“Wait, haven’t we seen ya working at a bunch of places before?” Applejack’s face scrunched up as she took in the mare’s features from her emerald green eyes to her blank flank-

“I mean, I’ve worked at a couple of places around here,” the bartender rolled her eyes as she placed menus in front of the two mares. “In alternate universes even…”

“Wait, what?” Applejack’s eyes widened.

“Nothing!” the mare smiled wide. “My name is Fuchsia Sky, do you two need time to look at the menus?”

“No need, ah’ll take the Forbidden Apple!” Applejack smiled at her quick decision, but then realized her error as she saw Fluttershy narrowing her eyes at the earth pony. “Ah…ah mean, whatever apple drink ya got, missy.”

“Hmm,” Fluttershy returned her gaze to the menu and placed her hoof on a description on the menu. “I think I’ll try the Jasmine Flower, that sounds quite lovely.”

“Right on it, ladies!” Fuchsia winked before flying off and throwing together the two cocktails. Applejack mentally prayed to every alicorn in existence as Fluttershy slowly returned her eyes to her.

“So, you knew what you wanted really quickly,” Fluttershy commented. “Did you even look at the menu?”

“C’mon now, Flutters. What are you even implying?” Applejack firmly stared into Fluttershy’s eyes, challenging her. And Applejack could wave the truth in front of Fluttershy like a owner waving their toy at a cat, and the pegasus would crumble like a house of cards. Fluttershy’s eyes widened, and Applejack felt a pang in her heart as she wondered if her marefriend would break down into tears. Instead, Fluttershy closed her eyes and took a deep breath before smiling at Applejack.

“Nothing, sweetheart,” Fluttershy placed her hoof on Applejack’s. “It doesn’t matter anyway, watching these strippers isn’t going to change us anyway. Right?”

“Right, I’m not interested in the strippers here,” Applejack puffed out her chest as she surveyed the semi-familiar mares performing in the lesbian strip club. She’d see a body or two that she recalled being underneath her in bed, but nothing that quite made her cold and tense. Fuchsia came back with their drinks, and Applejack didn’t hesitate in taking the drink that she’d had many times before and tasting it. Far better than it had any right to be, Applejack wondered how any cocktail could compare. Why, any cocktail beside it wouldn’t taste right. It was addicting from the moment it touched her lips to the moment it sent warm tingles throughout her body. Applejack drank half the cocktail in one go, smacking her lips with her tongue and thanking the bartender as she brought her and Fluttershy glasses of water to accompany their alcoholic drinks.

“So what we established is both of us can watch the strippers and get lap dances from them, but no more than that,” Applejack explained. “Did I get that right?”

“Yup, no actual scissoring,” Fluttershy nodded. “Just give them a safeword, and it should all be good! That’s what I’ll be doing.”

“Okay,” Applejack took a sip of her water before turning and looking at the strippers. “See any that catch your eye?”

“Hm,” Fluttershy glanced at all the mares, before pointing her hoof at a toned zebra mare with long dreadlocks and deep pink eyes. She was easily twice Applejack’s height, and had many tattoos between her stripes. “I’d like to watch her for a bit~”

Applejack felt her body itch as she watched Fluttershy ogling the stripper so quickly, despite the growing hot feeling she felt at doing the same, when she saw a white mare zip across the stripper and rushing up the stairs to the second floor of the club before using a teleportation spell to disappear from sight. Applejack’s jaw dropped as she could’ve swore that she saw a trio of diamonds on the secret mare’s flank before she disappeared.

“Did ya see that?!” Applejack gasped.

“See what, dear?” Fluttershy frowned as she tried her Jasmine Flower. “Oooh! Such a subtle taste, I love it.”

“Er, nevermind, just thought ah saw somepony we know,” Applejack shrugged. “Say, why don’t ya finish your cocktail and check that stripper out? Ah’m gonna use the restroom, sugarcube.”

“Do you need help finding it?” Fluttershy asked.

“Nah, ah’m sure ah know where ah’m goin,” Applejack felt her hooves as dirty as if they were in mud as she got off the stool and walked up the stairs. She saw the restroom door closing, a dark purple tail disappearing behind it before the door closed. Applejack looked downstairs, seeing Fluttershy finishing her cocktail and skipping over to the zebra stripper with her wings fully out. Applejack felt her face get flushed, and wondered if she had ever made Fluttershy’s wings spring out that quickly. Glaring down at Fluttershy and finding her decision easier, Applejack pushed the door open and walked in…to see the restroom empty.

“Is this…really that bad that ah’m imagining her now?” Applejack felt her body shaking as she shook her head. “Oh for Celestia’s sake, Flutters is the sweetest mare ah’ve known…but….”

Applejack’s ears flattened as her eyes started watering, her heart breaking as she found herself facing her Element in the most twisted and grotesque way possible. She never thought her Element would turn on her, stabbing her insides as she stared at the empty stalls in front of her.

“She isn’t Rarity,” Applejack felt her insides churning and her head spinning as if she was going to throw up, and felt her body seizing up as she heard a deep laugh behind her. Turning around, she was face-to-face with the white unicorn herself. Those sapphire blue eyes that once felt innocent felt like eyes she would drown in and never escape. She should feel nothing but contempt for the unicorn after what she had done, but the excited filly-like rush of adrenaline that moved throughout her body tuned out any such feeling. It was like she had stared into the eyes of her first love all over again, and Rarity’s smirk widened even more as she glanced up and down Applejack’s outfit.

“So I see you’ve chosen the outfit that I’ve lovingly crafted~” Rarity’s sonorous and feminine voice had graced Applejack’s ears, each word dancing on her heart with equal parts euphoria and pain. “Ah could say we agree on one thing, darling. Fluttershy is such a sweet mare, but the allure of how I can work your body and play your heart is something that could never be replicated. Would you agree, darling?”

Applejack felt shivers coursing down throughout her body, her tail flagging up at nothing as she reminded herself with graphic detail the day of their breakup. Gritting her teeth, Applejack willed her tail down as she mustered her best glare at the unicorn.

“The way ya fuckin’ played my heart was disgusting,” Applejack sneered. “Lyin’ to me at every twist and turn, finding out ya played me and told ponies that I was the one who cheated on you. Ah nearly lost all my friends.”

“They all sided with you at the end, didn’t they?” Rarity scoffed, flipping her mane and shrugging. “I’m the one who actually lost them, save for the occasional visit from Pinkie. Celestia bless her heart. Anyways, you think I’m so terrible? There’s the door, darling.”

“G-Gladly,” Applejack stammered, walking out of the restroom with her head held high. Sure, she’d be walking right back into the relationship of half-truths and hidden lies, but she was a good marefriend making the right decision. She’d rush right down to Fluttershy, kiss her and tell her what a terrible idea this all was, and laugh it off over apple pie back at home. She looked over the balcony, and felt her insides dying at the sight beneath her.

Fluttershy was leaning against the pole, her eyes rolled to the back of her head and her tongue lolling out as the zebra stripper twerked her generously sized booty onto Fluttershy’s crotch, only the zebra’s thong separating their pussies from actually scissoring.

“Now sweetness,” the zebra mare purred. “Masozi won’t stop until you use that safeword, or if you admit that zebra mares have the best touch~”

Applejack froze up, watching Fluttershy’s expressions contort in ways she’d never seen before, as if her thoughts were far gone into the sea of pleasure and cheers from the audience. She thought her marefriend would stay that way forever until she saw Fluttershy retrain her focus on the zebra mare dancing up against her.

“Z-Zebra m-mares have the b-best touch,” Fluttershy whimpered.

“I’m sorry, what did you say?” Masozi snickered, pressing a hoof to her ear as she leaned closer.

“I SAID ZEBRA MARES HAVE THE BEST TOUCH!” Fluttershy howled, her eyes rolling to the back of her head as her entire body shuddered. Applejack felt her body become colder than ice, her ears flattening as she watched Fluttershy squirting all over the zebra’s backside. Realization came crashing down as she watched the scene before her, and she felt a wildfire throughout her whole body as she threw her head over the balcony.

“YOU LIAR!” Applejack screamed, everything falling together in her brain. They had both apparently been faking their orgasms for each other, and Applejack saw the evidence on the stripper’s backside herself! She didn’t give a chance to even check if Fluttershy heard her, turning back into the restroom and kicking the door open. Rarity barely even had the time to smirk when Applejack slammed the unicorn against the wall and pressed her lips against Rarity’s lips in a tight lip-lock, their tongues wrestling almost immediately as Applejack felt her needs being fulfilled, her heart being mended by the last mare she expected. She pushed into the kiss with the fire and passion of a colt kissing a filly on prom night, only stopping when Rarity used one of her magic spells to push Applejack away to the side and trot to the door. Using her magic to pull the “Out of Order” sign from next to the sinks, Rarity brought it to the door handle from the outside before closing the door and ensuring it was locked with another magical spell.

“Now, you tell me you don’t love the games I play~” Rarity giggled, standing on the sink counter with her forehooves as she moved her tail to the side, wiggling her tush from side to side as she smirked at Applejack. “Why, as soon as you heard I fucked that stallion, I bet you just wanted to-OH!”

Rarity gasped and threw her head back as Applejack lunged and bit her butt, then licked up her flank as if Rarity’s flank tasted like the finest chocolate. As Applejack inhaled the cinnamon-berry perfume Rarity wore, her eyes rolled to the back of her head as she gave in to Rarity’s taunts. If her and Fluttershy didn’t really love each other after all, then what was the harm in getting a head-start on mending everything with the unicorn she was currently with? Applejack pulled away from Rarity’s flank, focusing her gaze on the lavender purple winking clit that had been away from her for far too long. As she licked her lips, she heard a familiar voice from outside the restroom.

“Applejack? Where did you go? Oh my hoofness, please let me explain myself!” the shaky voice dropped in volume as Fluttershy presumably looked elsewhere for her marefriend. Applejack glared at the door, and Rarity sighed as she glanced down at her ex.

“Are you going to go back to her?” Rarity scoffed. “At least I didn’t pretend to be a good pony, you always knew I was a whore for the drama. But her? She betrayed your Element and her own. What does that say about her?”

“Forget about her,” Applejack growled. “She’s the last pony on my mind right now.”

“Oh my!” Rarity giggled. “That’s what Miss Rarity loves to hear!”

Applejack lunged, pressing her muzzle first against Rarity’s pussy and then reaching her tongue out and licking the unicorn’s clit. Rarity’s moan shook the room, and if she was performing for anyone outside, Applejack couldn’t give a fuck. She’d drop every other mare on the planet just to spend the rest of her life eating out Rarity’s pussy. And she’d spend every day of the rest of her life proving just that. Rarity’s pussy smelled like the most intoxicating flower Applejack could imagine, the mare’s genitals singing to her as she groped Rarity’s cheeks with her hooves and inserted her tongue inside.

“OoooOooh, by Celestia’s tits you are so good at this,” Rarity moaned, another rush coursing throughout Applejack as she felt her ex-lover’s body shuddering beneath her touch. Applejack pulled one hoof back, holding it in mid-air, before sharply smacking Rarity’s cheek with a resounding smack. Rarity howled and Applejack closed her eyes and gulped down the fountain of marecum that tasted like fine wine. The farm pony pressed her face further against Rarity’s pussy and loudly gulped each amount of Rarity’s love-juices provided to her like it was her last meal. As Rarity finished her orgasm, Applejack pulled away and licked her lips before getting onto her hind legs and pressing herself up against Rarity, nibbling the unicorn’s ear and pressing her toned figure up against the smaller unicorn, her soaking wet pussy grinding against Rarity’s cutie mark.

“Hwa…oh great stars~” Rarity huffed between breaths. “A-Applejack, if you had spent much more time servicing me like this instead of bucking a-apples…well, I never would’ve turned to him for pleasure. You know that, don’t you?”

Applejack felt her head and heart ache in unison as she nearly slumped against Rarity, tears forming in her eyes as she pressed her face into Rarity’s mane. She thought of day and night of bucking apples, tending to her family, and making sure Sweet Apple Acres made as much money as possible while Rarity spent many afternoons and evenings waiting on her. “Not tonight, Rarity” were three words uttered too often, and Applejack lifted a hoof to Rarity’s cheek and slowly nodded her head as she stared into Rarity’s eyes.

“Ah…ah know,” Applejack gulped. “But Apple Bloom is nearly an adult now, and Sugar Belle has been helping us a lot more! Ah promise they’ll understand and ah can have more time with you, and maybe we could have foals to help out too someday?”

“Well, that does sound quite lovely,” Rarity smiled for a second before she frowned. “But you’d kind of have to cut off your current relationship first, don’t you think?”

“Oh shucks, ah almost forgot!” Applejack’s eyes widened as she jumped off Rarity and rushed towards the door. “Let me talk to that mare for five minutes, and ah promise ah’ll come back.”

Rarity nodded, her horn lighting up with a blue energy that surrounded Applejack’s entire body. Applejack didn’t have to wonder about the magic’s purpose for long as Rarity spoke.

“This is a timed teleportation spell, it’ll teleport you outside of this bathroom for five minutes before teleporting you back to this spot,” Rarity explained. “Understood?”

“Y-Yes, Mistress,” the word slipped out of Applejack’s mouth without her thinking twice, and she shuddered as she realized what kind of relationship she’d be returning to. “Ah’ll do anything ya ask, my precious diamond~”

“Oh you silly mare,” Rarity giggled before her eyes narrowed and her smirk widened. “I know you will~”

And with that, Applejack was teleported right outside of the bathroom walls and back into the club.

During the Club: The Cost of Generosity

Applejack knew she wouldn’t have long, and made a beeline down the stairs as soon as she didn’t see the yellow pegasus on the second floor. She made it down to the first floor, noticing that Masozi wasn’t dancing on the poles anymore. Any boiling blood within Applejack dissipated as she remembered what she had done, and Applejack sighed as she turned to look in the direction of the bar, where she saw Masozi and Fluttershy sitting, with Masozi’s hoof on Fluttershy’s shoulder as she was sobbing into her forehooves. Applejack winced, before taking a deep breath and walking towards the two mares.

“Fluttershy, we need to talk,” Applejack kept her expression firm even as Masozi glared at her and Fluttershy lifted her face out from her hooves, snot-nosed and red-eyed. She whispered in Masozi’s ear, and the zebra stripper shook her head as she got up and walked away from the two. As Applejack took her seat, Fluttershy tried to place her hoof on Applejack’s hoof. Applejack pulled her hoof away, and Fluttershy’s expression caved as she bursted into tears again.

“A-Applejack! I didn’t cheat on you, we weren’t actually scissoring!” Fluttershy explained. “You said it w-was okay if she gave me a l-lap dance, remember? I didn’t…I didn’t expect to enjoy it that much.”

“That is what ya think ah’m mad about?!” Applejack snapped. “Ah ain’t stupid, ah know you weren’t cheatin’ on me. Ya lied about not being a squirter, and just used me when ah thought ya loved me!”

“Applejack, I didn’t actually know I was a squirter until now,” Fluttershy whimpered. “All those times…I thought you were making me cum-”

“So what is it then, all of a sudden ah’m as sexy as a dead fish?!” Applejack felt a thought badgering her in the back of her mind, that she cheated on Fluttershy for no real reason. She never lied to her, but Applejack? She’d hidden far too many truths from this mare, and there was no point in continuing the charade. Smacking her own face with her hoof, Applejack groaned.

“Listen, ah don’t have much time,” Applejack pulled her hoof off her face, looking Fluttershy dead in the eyes as she continued. “Rarity is here, she’s in the bathroom right now. She wants us to get back together, and ah still got feelings for her. Clearly we aren’t into each other enough to even have a proper sexual relationship, and ah don’t want to waste your time nor mine. Ah’m breaking up with you, Fluttershy. We can be friends whenever you’re ready, but ah don’t want to hide how I feel anymore.”

“Wait, you weren’t interested in me sexually either? And you’ve felt like this for a while?” Fluttershy scowled as her ears flattened. “And you two were in the bathroom? What happened in there? Did you…”

Fluttershy’s eyes widened as she covered her mouth with one hoof, shaking as she stared at the floor and averted Applejack’s gaze.

“Did you cheat on me?” Fluttershy asked.

Applejack shut up, time moving slowly as she waited for the spell to run out of time so she could return to her Mistress’ safe embrace. But no such event came, and Applejack sighed as Fluttershy willed herself to look into her eyes.

“Please say something,” Fluttershy begged.

“Ah’m sorry,” Applejack confessed. “Ah guess we both hurt each other.”

“But I never cheated on you!” Fluttershy wailed loud enough to cause several mares to look their way and scowl at Applejack. Applejack attempted to reach over and keep Fluttershy from drawing more attention, but the yellow pegasus bawled loudly as she covered her eyes with her forehooves. “I thought you two were my friends!”

“What is going on?” one mare stepped forward, looking over at Fluttershy. “Do you need somepony to help you get home?”

“What the fuck did you do to her?!” another mare stomped over, and Applejack braced herself to get hit when she felt her surroundings change. The bar disappeared and she landed in front of Rarity, who wasted no time in embracing Applejack and removing her hat, placing it next to the sink with her magic as she rested her head on top of Applejack’s messy blonde mane.

“Oh darling, I know that couldn’t have been easy,” Rarity kissed Applejack’s forehead. “Surely you have a little sympathy for me now? How many ponies give me dirty looks or throw their drinks at me in bars…I’ve practically become the Black Sheep in Ponyville! Well, at least I won’t be alone in that anymore.”

“Do you enjoy my tarnished reputation?” Applejack spat, pushing Rarity off of her as she stood up and glared at the unicorn.

“Listen here,” Rarity glared. “You had every choice to leave that bathroom and not come back, so don’t blame me for everything that has happened. Besides, is that anyway to talk to your Mistress?”

Applejack continued to glare back at Rarity, and Rarity scoffed as she pulled a small suitcase out from underneath one of the stalls with her magic. Before Applejack could ask about it, Rarity spoke up.

“Safeword, darling,” Rarity ordered.

“Strawberries,” Applejack growled.

“Thank you,” Rarity opened the suitcase, and Applejack’s heart skipped a beat at the familiar mahogany red collar that had a golden apple on it with her name on the apple. Applejack remained still as Rarity’s magic brought the collar around her neck and clicked. “Shall I remind you that this collar is hooked to my magic? Talk back to me again.”

Applejack bit her tongue as she refused to say anything.

“I’m not asking you, darling,” Rarity batted her eyelashes as she continued. “Let’s hear it, or I’ll use twice the electricity.”

“Ergh, fine!” Applejack stomped her hoof. “We could’ve all been fine and continued to be friends if you weren’t for your lies! If we had just talked this out, none of this would’ve-Agh!”

Applejack howled as she felt shocks throughout her entire body, her eyes tearing up in pain as it lasted for two whole seconds before it stopped. Applejack gasped for air, taking sharp inhales and exhales as her whole body shuddered. She blinked away tears from her eyes as she looked up at Rarity.

“Do you really believe they would’ve continued to be my friends after I cheated on you?” Rarity tilted her head. “Everything I did was to save my friendships.”

“But d-did you really have to throw me under the carriage by saying ah did it?” Applejack asked. “Please don’t shock me again, Rares, ah’m bein’ serious. Why say ah did anything at all?”

“Because I thought it would just turn into a game of I-Said-She-Said, and our friends would’ve gotten so tired of it that they would’ve just let it go,” Rarity scowled, her muzzle scrunching up as she added. “If it weren’t for fucking Rainbow Dash and her damn Element of Loyalty, of course.”

“Ya would’ve been happy with me never knowing what ya did?” Applejack gulped.

“Duh, of course I would’ve,” Rarity shrugged, retrieving the blindfold from her suitcase and trotting over to Applejack with the blindfold held by her magic. “It was a one-time mistake that didn’t need to be blown up for everypony in Ponyville to know about. We would’ve still been together, and you never would’ve cheated on Fluttershy.”

Applejack winced at the realization, and Rarity took the moment of distraction to slip the blindfold over Applejack’s eyes and tightened the cloth securely around her head.

“Oh great Celestia, how long it's been since I’ve done this~” Rarity purred as her hooves roamed Applejack’s sides down to her flanks, feeling the firmness of muscle underneath the apple cutie marks of her lover. “So, before we get started, I need some of your beloved honesty for this question. Are we back together for real, or is this some hookup for your closure?”

“Rarity…ah ruined everything ah had with Fluttershy,” Applejack reminded her. “Ah wouldn’t do that for closure. Despite everythin’ ya told me, ah still love you and want to spend the rest of mah life with you. If you’ll have me, of course.”

“Oh Applejack,” Rarity responded with a breathy whisper. “Of course I’ll have you, there was never a doubt in my mind.”

Before Applejack could respond, she gasped as she felt Rarity biting her flanks. With her vision completely dark, Applejack shuddered from every touch Rarity brought on to keep her on edge. Rarity knew Applejack’s love for pain, and knew more than anypony else how to balance it with pleasure just enough to leave Applejack waiting for more. She cried out as she felt Rarity’s hoof smack her ass as hard as possible, and the cry cut off into a long moan as she felt Rarity’s tongue on her clit. The unicorn’s hooves still groped Applejack’s flanks as she continued to eat her marefriend out. Just as her tongue was starting to slip into the depths of Applejack’s apple pie, her tongue pulled out as she walked away. Applejack bit her lip and shook her flanks shamelessly, her pussy winking away at nothing.

“Hnnnnng, Rarity!” Applejack cried out. “Why’d ya stop?”

“Because my dear, that was simply the warm up!” Rarity giggled, her horn lighting up with a deep red aura as she created a magical dildo that was six inches long. “You should already know what’s cumming next~”

Rarity pressed the tip of the magical dildo to Applejack’s pussy, penetrating her with it and allowing just the tip of it to enter the farm mare. Applejack gasped, moving backwards so she further impaled herself on it until half of the dildo was inside of her. Another yellow spark came from Rarity’s horn at the same time, causing much tinier shocks to stimulate Applejack from the collar. Rarity beamed, for it was far from easy for a unicorn to master using two spells at the same time. Starlight Glimmer would be proud, she concluded, until she thought about it for more than a few seconds and winced. Perhaps not as proud about the context, however.

The sounds coming out of Applejack’s mouth were nothing but a slur of speech and moans as her eyes rolled to the back of her head and her tongue rolled out of her mouth. Without her vision, Applejack was further immersed in the tiny shocks that kept her on edge and the thrusting of Rarity’s magical dildo. It wasn’t too long that she creamed all over the magical spell overtaking her loins, her tail flying everywhere as she groaned throughout her orgasm. Rarity stopped using both her spells, no longer fucking Applejack as she used her magic to turn Applejack to face her. As Applejack felt Rarity’s magic moving her entire body, a shudder ran through her pelt as she could only imagine what else the unicorn had in store for her. Just as Applejack opened her mouth to say something, she felt Rarity’s lips on her lips, with the unicorn’s tongue slipping inside. Applejack moaned into the kiss, softly at first, but then much more loudly as she felt Rarity’s magic circling around her clit. Applejack pushed further into the kiss until she had slammed Rarity against the counter once more. Rarity didn’t fight back, only wrapping her forelegs around Applejack as she continued to play with the farm pony’s clit.

Rarity would never admit it outright, but there was some unfathomable pleasure in turning this well-built truck of a mare into her fuckpet to toss around and tease. Any mare could find a fragile little submissive and work their body like a fiddle, but to take an otherwise dominant and strong mare and make them into a quivering and pathetic mess, hanging onto her every command? That took true and consistent effort, and Rarity had no issue with transforming Applejack all over again until the mare was truly broken this time. Pulling away from the kiss and stopping her magical clit play, Rarity yanked Applejack closer until their pussies were scissoring. The sensation of wet unicorn pussy connecting with her own caused Applejack to gasp and moan as she pressed her muzzle against Rarity’s muzzle, hot breath raining down on the grinning unicorn’s face as she thrusted up against Applejack.

“So Applejack, would you like me to use a spell to make sure we cum together?” Rarity said the last two words with such honey that Applejack couldn’t help but shudder.

“Yes! Nothing would be more perfect for our night back together!” Applejack nodded like a bobblehead, and Rarity giggled as she knew exactly what to say next.

“Then I have a proposition for you, my dearest apple~” Rarity told her. “I’ll be using a recording spell to record what you have to say starting…now! So then, my beloved, do I pleasure you far more than Fluttershy did?”

“Is that even a question?” Applejack breathed as she continued to buck her hips forward. “That mare never even made me c-cum! You’re leagues better than any of the mares ah’ve ever been with! P-Promise!”

“Hmm, speaking of promises…do you promise to always take my side? To defend my honor when times get tough?” Rarity insisted, and didn’t fail to notice Applejack’s muzzle twitch at her words. “I haven’t forgotten the slander you’ve allowed to come down on me after I cheated. Will you run away if I cheat again? Or will you try harder to satisfy me?”

“Dammit, Rarity, ah’ll pleasure you everyday if it means you never cheat again!” Applejack howled. “AH PROMISE ONLY TO BE YOUR OBEDIENT FUCKPET, ALWAYS!”

“Good~” Rarity giggled, turning off the recording spell and using the spell to connect their orgasms together. As soon as Applejack felt their lust become one with the spell, it undid her and Rarity at the same time. The two mares both howled in ecstasy as they came together, Rarity falling off the counter and Applejack going down with her as they landed on the floor convulsing and crying out. After several minutes of post-orgasm, they both flinched as they heard loud pounding against the door and a sharp familiar voice breaking the silence.

“YOU FUCKHEADS BETTER COME OUT HERE!” Rainbow Dash bellowed from the other side of the door. “It hasn’t even been two hours since you dumped Fluttershy, and here you two are getting it on in a stripclub bathroom! Have you no shame?!”

“Darling, how long have you been listening in on us?” Rarity snickered underneath a wide-eyed Applejack who was still blindfolded and collared. “Would you like to join us?”

“SHUT UP!” Dash snapped. “Open the damn door!”

“Well, looks like now’s our cue to go!” Rarity giggled, using her horn to disable the magical spell locking the door. “Hold on tight, darling.”

Applejack embraced Rarity as tightly as possible, watching as Rainbow Dash kicked the door open with her gritted teeth and seething expression. Before she could reach them, Rarity used another teleportation spell, and the two lovers found themselves in Rarity’s boutique. As Rarity removed the blindfold and collar from Applejack, she cursed underneath her breath as she placed the BDSM objects on her desk.

“What’s wrong, sweetheart?” Applejack tilted her head.

“We left my suitcase and your hat in that bathroom,” Rarity shook her head.

“It’s okay! Ah’ve got plenty of hats back in mah room!” Applejack insisted as she walked up and nuzzled Rarity’s cheek. “C’mon Mistress, let’s lock up your boutique and go to bed.”

“I suppose,” Rarity rolled her eyes with a smile, using her horn to lock the front door thoroughly, as well as placing security spells on the door and her windows just in case a certain blue pegasus tried paying them a visit. “Let's go to bed, darling. Together.”

“That’s…” Applejack felt her eyes welling up with tears as she kissed Rarity’s forehead. “That’s all ah’ve ever wanted.”

And with that said, the two mares went to bed. Rarity crawled underneath the sheets, holding them up with one foreleg as Applejack slipped into bed and joined her.

“They may hate us both,” Rarity whispered as she draped her foreleg over Applejack’s waist. “But tonight, we can bathe in the love we share~”

Applejack nodded, leaning in and kissing Rarity on the lips. The prolonged yet sensual kiss lasted for a few warm seconds before their lips parted and the two fell asleep together.

After the Club: The Resilience of Loyalty

Rainbow Dash snored loudly as she slept right outside of Rarity’s boutique during the sunrise, her body resting against the door. She only woke up as she heard commotion from inside the boutique, not wasting time in getting up on her four hooves and glaring at the door.

“Ah feel bad,” she heard Applejack mutter from the other side. “What do I even say? Ah’m perfectly fine with just bein’ with ya and movin’ on. Isn’t that how it should be? We’re each other’s First Love, and ah’d think they’d at least pretend to be a little supportive.”

“It’ll take them some time, love,” Rarity responded, and Rainbow Dash couldn’t decide who she wanted to punch more. “Just follow my lead, darling. After all, I’ve been through this whole situation once before! I’m practically a pro at this!”

“Ah don’t think that’s somethin’ you wanna boast about…” Applejack muttered.

“Are you questioning me, fuckpet?” Rarity growled, and the words raised the hair on Rainbow Dash’s back. Fuckpet?

“O-Of course not, Mistress!” Applejack gasped. “Ah’ll do anythin’ to keep ya happy, even if other ponies don’t like it.”

Rainbow Dash frowned as she felt her stomach churning. Did Rarity brainwash her somehow? She found it much harder to be angry at Applejack now, torn between believing that Applejack cheated on her own volition and believing that Rarity had manipulated the situation from start to finish. She shook her head, knowing now that any confrontation would lead to Rarity twisting the situation or turning the verbal confrontation into a physical one. And whose side would Applejack take?

“Celestia, give me strength,” Dash pleaded as she turned around and flew away from the boutique to the train station. If she was going to get Applejack to snap out of her senses, she was going to need a much stronger mare. She was going to head to Canterlot, and meet with the new ruler of Equestria.

It was long overdue to meet up again with Princess Twilight Sparkle.

Author's Note

I hope to write a sequel for this at some point! I'm currently working on many different stories due to my goal of writing 50K in pony fics for NaNoWriMo, so feel free to follow me to keep track of what I plan on releasing. Thank you all so much for reading and hope you guys enjoyed the story!