A Wallflower Misshap
Part 1
Load Full StoryThe Wallflower Misshap
After the day that Wallflower found herself erasing sunset shimmers memory’s, karma would be right around the corner.
A few weeks pass and twilight along with sunset befriends her and teaches her the ways of the world. Twilight suggested Wallflower visit their pony world but little did they know scientists, artifacts and dimension travel could cause dark magic.
Wallflower packed her essentials and a few toys before heading to the portal, looking between the portal and her new friends she said “wish me luck”
Entering through the portal she felt a hand grab her ass and hair, in shock she looked back to Twilight and sunset grasping at her screaming “No! The teleporter turned black!”
That was all she was able to hear before being thrown to the ground in a dark city followed by another version of herself tumbling onto her.
As they picked each other up and looked around to see they had enter a world of sex challenges with multiple levels of erotica and filthy sex to get to the exit, next to that was a top three leaderboard with three other mares on:
“Lyra Heartstring - Fisting Queen”
“Fluer de Le - Deepthroat Queen”
“Cadence - Gangbang Queen”
Wallflower looked around shocked knowing these mares, she wondered if they got that from dominating the competition. Hearing a beeping sound she looked down to see a floor say “Are You Ready” in black and pink neon lights.
Walking forward she pushed down on the neon lights to bring a hologram up with a level counter and tutorial option.
Entering the tutorial level a figure began to appear in front of her which had a silky smooth white coat and vibrant red mane and tail. As a flash of light in her peripheral vision caused her eyes to squint from the the rapid brightness, allowing her facial features to be scanned in the game.
“Hey, Wallflower. Let's get you started with the rules and perks of this game. The first rule of all is: Do not leave the area of the challenge otherwise it will restart. The second is that there are three perks and each will have to be activated differently,” the woman said, gesturing to a list of perks which appeared next to her, along with an icon beside each of them.
“The first perk is a small toy you will have to suck with your lips touching the base to give you stamina, the longer the toy, the bigger the stamina boost. The second is strength which for a brief second may shake your legs. The more powerful the vibrator is, the more strength you’ll have to push through your enemies. The third and final perk makes you a distraction to foes. It makes your tits perkier, your ass firmer and your looks alone will make them draw over you The one catch with this is you have to stretch your tight ass around a big long dildo to activate it and may reduce your stamina when you squirt from over usage.”
The figure waved the perk list away and moved her hands to her hips. “But that’s enough from me. Now it’s time to test your body’s starting limits.”
The figure briefly stopped, produced the three testing perks on a stool in front of Wallflower and said with an innocent smile “let’s start but if you need a helping hand click your fingers twice and I’ll push your perk down your throat, pussy or ass till you gag or squirt. Oh yeah and my name's Velvet Swirl so you know who’s name to moan when you cum.”
Wallflower got to her knees and and gentle picked up the dildo to attempt to suck slowly on the small toy working her way deeper in and out until bobbing out at at base, while running her fingers down her slim figure, making her pussy moisten until picking up the vibrator to push inside.
Velvet sneaked up behind wallflower and, having lubed up the anal dildo, pressed it against Wallflower’s tight asshole while gently kissing her neck. She covered Wall’s mouth as she removed the fingers from her ass and squeezed the dildo inside the girl, causing wallflower to moan in pain and pleasure.
Velvet leaned in and whispered in her ear, “I've got to train your holes for the challenge.”
As the dildo reached as deep as it would fit in her ass, Wallflower screamed, only to have a larger dildo forced into her mouth! The sensation of having her throat tickled caused her to gag and her eyes began to water.
With a chuckle, Velvet clicked her finger and a choker appeared around Wallflower’s neck, before she pushed Wallflower onto her side. With one quick pull, she forced the toys from her body, Wall coughing and shivering on her hands and feet from the sudden attention.
Grabbing Wallflower up by her throat, she leaned in and forced her tongue into the girl’s throat. After a hearty kiss, she pulled back and summoned up a mirror.
“You’ve unlocked your perk upgrades, when your throat stretches your black lace choker will snap and give you another. You can choose to customise it how you like with this menu option,” she said, gesturing to Wall’s new bracelet.
Velvet picked Wallflower up and showed her an item to keep by her at all times. ‘’You can find these different flavoured lubricant bottles around each of the levels to help stretch your body. Or, if you need rapid perk upgrades, you can find me in safe locations where you will be bondaged and stretched, over and over, until you can handle your requirements. Oh yeah, one last thing, don’t let the shadow tentacles catch you,” she finished, grinning. “They’ll get progressively harder each level.”
Wallflower looked nervously at Velvet as she created the doorway to Stage One, walking to the door wallflower corrected her jumper and jeans to give the opening a push that suddenly caused a flash of light. As she reopened her eyes she realised she was standing in the middle of a gym wearing a skirt and top which was a cheerleaders outfit, looking down she also realised her comfy boxers had been replaced with a black lace bra and thong, along with having her hair in a cute ponytail.
Looking around Wallflower heard two female voices in the locker rooms gossiping about their days, and was giving comments to one another about who could deepthroat the most out of their squad.
As the two girls walked out in the gym to practise their cheer routine, they heard a scramble at the door from the opposite end of the gym trying to get a door open.
Wallflower blushing as she looked around in shock, not wanting to be spotted, while realising how revealing the outfit was. The top was low cut and provided a look into her decent cleavage, along with her skirt that was just low enough to cover her curves and ass cheeks.
She realised as Shimmy Shake was about to ask, “What are you doing here? You’re not part of our team.”
Three perk icons had appeared and glowed a soft pink, making the exit sign on the other side of the room start to flicker and spark. Looking down Wallflower notices a shadow began to appear from nowhere in the corner her back was against.
A voice echoed in Wallflower’s mind “Shadows are coming.”
Light hoof mention to Shimmy Shake with a mischievous smile “Let’s have some fun with the newbie if she wants to join in before she leaves.”
Liking their lips, Wallflower edged towards the first perk available.
“’Tut tut, it’s not nice to avoid us.”
As they reached out to Wallflowers tender nipples, they squeezed them firmly and ran their fingers along her thighs almost getting to her marehood as she grabbed her first perk.
Wallflower took a deep breath and tried to slam the toy to the base as her teeth scraped along the sides but instead gagged when the toy hit her tonsils and pulled back up still with drool oozing from her lips to the toy.
Light Hoof snickered, correcting her mane, “That’s not how you do it.”
Shimmy shake smirked while grabbing both Light Hoof’s and Wallflower’s manes, yanking their heads up then forcing a dark ribbed dildo down both throats. Their throats expanded, but not enough to break Wallflower’s choker.
Light Hoof fell on her knees glaring at Shimmy Shake whispering "Oh, go fuck yourself."
As she finished gagging with her mascara smudged, Wallflower quickly got up and pushed the girls out the way before deepthroating perk one and throwing it back at the girls. Running to the exit, Wallflower turned her head to see that the two girls had melted into shadow and were grasping at her legs. With her mouth drooling and eyes watering, she barged through the door to find that she had entered the next level.
She flinched as an air raid siren began to whirl, then glanced back through the doorway, imagining what fate she would have if the shadow caught her. She grabbed the door and slammed it shut, sliding down to sit against it.
Wallflower took a moment to gather herself, then wandered over to the car park in front to sit on a nearby car for a few minutes, when a thought passed her mind. She remembered when she had told about Luna’s beast: ‘The Tantabus’ which was dark magic created by Luna to torment herself. Glancing over to the door, she sighed and shook her head.
“That must be what the shadows are,” she muttered, shaking her head and causing Wallflower to shiver from the thought that it could be watching her every move.
Feeling the urge to continue on forward, she climbed down before spotting a mare like figure to the left of the car park. The mare looked as if she was scared of something and that became more apparent as Wallflower crept from car to car to get close enough.
“What’s your name and have you been hurt,” Wallflower asked, looking her over to see that it was a mare which seemed similar in age to herself.
The mare had a pink and purple mane which curled at the ends, along with a silky blue coat. “Not too bad, but I think I've sprained my hoof. Can you help me?” she asked, limping slightly towards Wallflower. “My name’s Candy Sweet,” she added, blushing with a small smile.
Wallflower reached in to comfort the mare, only to find let out a gasp when the girl lunged for her. Gazing down at her, she shivered when she felt the girl’s lips kiss the top of her thigh, then slither around and press a long, thin tongue against her hooded clit.
Wallflower let out a soft whimper and her knees threatened to buckle. The girl seemed insatiable as her tongue slid about her outer folds, teasing her incessantly before forcing its way into her warm, wet cunt.
That was when her knees buckled and she fell onto her back, which caused Candy to laugh. “This is how sweet endings always happen.”
“Get off me!” Wallflower grunted alongside a half-moan, trying her hardest to push the girl away from her already damp thighs.
Candy pulled herself out and grinned, before crawling up the girl’s body and gazing into Wallflower’s eyes. Her eyes slowly began to swirl, changing from a soft green into a deeper, more alluring combination of green and blue which drew Wallflower’s attention.
The struggling girl grew weaker the longer she stared, her thoughts changing from panic into a warm, peaceful acceptance of her fate as a delightful calm washed over her.
Candy grinned as she realised the girl now wanted what she was giving and turned around to dive into her treat, quickly pushing her tongue into Wallflower again. Pressing her hips down against her prey’s mouth, Candy purred with excitement as her own juices dripped out, giving Wallflower a rich, sweet taste.
Removing her tongue and pulling back to sit on Wallflower’s face, Cherry began to sing her trance. She shivered and felt Wallflower moan while that tongue worked feverishly inside her.
“Lick me, suck me, bite me gently. It doesn’t matter if it gets a little messy. I’ll tell you when you can stop, when you can have more. I’m just like candy; I can be sweet.
If you're a good girl I’ll be your treat. It might be nice but whatever you do, don’t have too much, I'm not good for you.
Now unwrap me and you will see, one little taste brings you to your knees, it might be fun but whatever you do, don’t have too much, I’m no good for you.”
Candy finished her first song and as she began to start the second deeper trance, Wallflower found that her mind was weak enough to break out!
With a groan, she pushed Cherry off and shakily picked herself up. Looking down, she shivered and realised that she had been stripped naked with only her torn shirt left hanging on. With a lack of modesty, she didn’t bother to try to cover herself up as her thighs were already soaked, her arousal oozing down to form a puddle under her.
Wallflower could feel that she had been forced to orgasm once already, her walls quivering with untold need to do it again, but what scared her more was that she felt the urge to just submit and let Candy take her, as if it would all be alright if she was prey.
Wiping that sweet taste off her lips, she found her clothes on the bonnet of a car alongside a glowing vibrator. Realising that Candy had moved and was now stalking her, she quickly grabbed the vibrator and slid it inside of her achingly empty pussy.
She could feel her legs practically turn to jelly when her second orgasm hit her. Her mind went blank and she almost stumbled over, but caught herself on the side of a car and kept moving, her pussy tingling with the burning afterglow.
Seeing the exit, she forced her legs to listen and rushed towards it, Candy hot on her heels with her thong dangling out of her mouth. Glancing back, Wallflower saw the bottom of Candy’s legs melt into shadow which allowed her to glide along the ground!
Reaching the door, she took one last back at the woman, before slamming the exit shut.
“Fuck, that was close” Wallflower panted, then looked down to see her top has torn. She could see that it was covered in both her and Candy’s cum.
Taking a look around, she saw that the room she ran into had transformed into a nightclub entrance hallway. The bass from a chillstep song began and Wallflower could already feel the vibrations. From the scratch of a vinyl deck, it switched to a track of pure dirty dubstep that from the first bass wobble shook the walls around her.
”I need to get moving before this bass shackles the whole place down,” Wallflower muttered, barely hearing herself over the sound.
She advanced into the main club right on cue and Vinyl Scratch spotted her. With a grin, she turned up the bass level to max, causing the bass to reverberate through Wallflower’s chest. The first drop of the song began to build up in intensity, allowing her to use her dark magic. She directed the chromatic strobe lights around the room to flick towards wallflowers eyes forcing her to squint.
As the lights flew around the room they quickly aimed at Moondancer who was grinding her hips to the beat. She was wearing a tight, lacey, black dress which allowed others a sneak peek at her plump thighs.
Wallflower swayed side to side caught in the sound of pure ecstasy and erotica dubstep as her eyes gazed over every inch of the girl which she had spent endless nights thinking and dreaming of.
Moondancer inched her way closer to Wallflower and flicked her wavy, long hair, with new purple highlights, out of the way of her eyes. She winked and seductively bit on her soft red lips, causing Wallflower to feel butterflies well up in her stomach.
The heat between her thighs grew tenfold as they leaned in and pressed their lips together, Moondancer forcefully pressing her dance-partner against the wall while her fingers ran down that supple body.
Wallflower felt like she was in heaven, having forgotten all about the previous encounters, until the moment she heard: “Shadows got you now.”
Her eyes shot open to see Moondancer blowing a kiss, then wander off as she was dragged into the shadows.
In the blink of an eye, Wallflower found herself in a small, almost cramped room, naked and tied up with her hands above her head and legs tied behind her head.Her face was blindfolded, causing her to feel horribly exposed. Despite this, she couldn’t help but wiggle in place as the tingle of her arousal spread.
“Where the fuck am I and who the hell do you think you are.” Wallflower screamed, despite her voice wavering for a second. Her voice quieted as she heard steps coming towards her.
A sudden whip-crack caused Wallflower to wince. ‘’I’m your passion, your crush, your dancer on the moon,” a mare replied, the sound of her steps getting closer. “But I’m also the dark side of that girl and I’m going to punish you for being a bad girl.”
Wallflowers breathing quickened when she felt a tongue slowly run from the base of her neck to underneath her ear lobe as a soft set of pierced lips pressed against her burning skin. Reaching up, the mare practically purred, “My name’s Night Raver. I’m who Moondacer would have been if she embraced her need to seduce, party, and not want to be stuck in with dusty old books.”
Night Raver pulled off Wallflowers blindfold to reveal pure aquamarine eyes. The mare’s skin had a more tanned complexion along with that she wore black high heels, stockings with coloured lace at the top along with dark purple mini skirt with neon green stitching. Her shirt was tied up under her hefty chest, of which her pierced nipple could be seen.
Night Raver summoned up a bottle of cherry flavoured lube and squirted it over her fingers, before crouching down and brushed them against Wallflower’s sensitive folds, causing her to squeak and struggle against her bonds.
“Oh my, so delightful,” Night hummed, rubbing her finger against Wall’s throbbing clit to watch her pant and moan.
“Gah! Stop,” Wallflower moaned, clenching her eyes shut.
Night smirked and leaned in to lick on Wallflowers sensitive clit while she pushed her fingers into the girl’s tight ass, right down to her knuckles.
As Wallflower’s muscles tensed around the two fingers inside of her, a third was forced in and caused her to buck her hips. Those fingers slowly began to fuck her faster and faster, until Night summoned up a silver dildo and slid it into Wall’s tight pussy which clenched around the metal.
Night smirked and leaned in to suckle and lap at Wallflower’s clit, the mare’s arousal dripping down her chin while she grew more heated.
Lifting her head up with her lips covered in Wall’s juices, Night stood up and reached out to wrap a hand around Wallflower’s neck to choke her, before pushing her wet fingers inside her mouth to suck them clean.
“How do you like the taste?” Night spat, leaning in and licking up the girl’s cheek. Quickly taking out her fingers, her frustration grew. “I've practiced a lot on myself but it's so much hotter doing it to you after all the nights I dreamed of this. Waking up in the night after moaning your name in my sleep. You’ll see how much this means to me.”
Wallflower had realised how essential it was going to be for her to focus through future levels, but it was growing harder for her to think as Night Raver kept her at a high peak in her orgasm.
Night Raver pulled her in for one final passionate kiss before pulling her fingers from her ass making it gape while finally running her other fingers through her hair. She gazed into her eyes and held her close as their hearts beat together.
Wallflower’s eyes fluttered closed as she quickly lost consciousness, her world fading to black.
Wallflower picked herself up off the ground and wearily looked about upon noticing that she was back at the start of the current level.
Realising that she needed to find a different way than last time, she began to walk to the dance floor again. Pushing through the doors as the same song pumped through her chest, she saw Moondancer in the same spot and felt once again tempted by the swaying mare’s body, but held fast and moved past her.
Suddenly Wallflower turned when her hand was grabbed, only to gaze into an abyss of deep blue eyes of a girl who had experienced fear for quite some time.
Moondancer brought her hand up and caressed her fingers through Wallflower’s mane, then kissed her with care and compassion. “You should run!” she shouted, just before shadows emerged from the walls and began to chase her towards the door for level 4.
Tripping over an old skydiving suit, Wallflower got back to her feet to pull the door when she heard Moondancer scream in fear.
Walking away knowing that she had unfinished business with the shadow, she knew Moondancer was stuck here and needed rescuing.
Getting to the next door Wallflower saw it was a twistable door lock which the more it was turned to open the wind outside became louder as the neon lighted platform began to crumble and fall to an abyss below. Looking to the opposite end a countdown timer started with a keyhole icon next to the door.
Wallflower stepped forward to the first ledge noticing that there were two rotten, twitching guards at the platform. They held small assault rifles pointed towards the exit. The noise allowed her to quietly sneak from ledge to ledge getting ever more closer until the third perk was in her grasp.
She lowered herself onto her knees to keep from making too much noise, then gently clicked her fingers twice making Velvet’s face appear in front of her.
A small amount of lubricant generated in Wallflowers right hand, grabbing hold of the dildo she covered it from tip to base with lube. Using one hand, she lined up the dildo with her ass and another over her mouth to stifle any moans that she wouldn’t be able to control.
Pushing her body down halfway she tested how far it would fit before taking the whole length bobbing up and down enjoying the feeling of being stretched hard.
It wasn’t long before she orgasmed enough to squirt, her juices trickling down onto the platform and pooling under her abused pussy. Finally, she pulled it out, keeping just the tip in, then removing it completely. Holding for a second, she smirked and threw it into the abyss.
As Wallflower stood up, the perk kicked on making her hair legs smoother, her butt larger and her boobs ramp up several sizes causing her worn out cheerleader to nearly tear.
Putting a hand on her hip, walking with a seductive stride steeped behind where the guards stood and reached down with her soaking pussy in clear view, sneekly grabbing a rusty pipe on the floor and with all her power swing the weapon at its head,knocking it off into the abyss then turning and drop kicked the second out the way.
As Wallflower looked around panting, the room became deathly silent, suddenly a gut wrenching shout was heard before hearing from every angle a deep demonic voice “I am The Reaper, I am The Dark, I am The Death; welcome to The Black Hole.”
Wallflower scrambled as she darted forward, reaching out for the ledges before her. She jumped again and again until she noticed a glow from underneath a pile of rubble caused by the decaying roof.
Reaching the glowing pile, Wallflower thrust her hand in and grabbed ahold of the perk. Pulling it out, she looked it over and recalled that it was what she saw back in the tutorial.
Falling to her knees, she grabbed the monstrous sized dildo, took a deep breath and forced as much as she could fit in her tight throat. Gagging hard, she clenched her eyes shut and forced it further down. She could feel every vein and dimple as they brushed over her tender flesh, her eyes rolling back and chest glowing from how deep she had forced it down.
Wall yanked it out and frantically coughed, her throat tightening as she threw it away. It bounced off the ledge and into the abyss, allowing her to get the stamina boost she needed to take a step back and threw herself to the exit door as the shadow threw sharp debris towards her, barely missing.
Rolling over, Wallflower flicked her attention back at the door which had nearly been torn from its hinges merely seconds ago. She saw a black figure appear in the window, its bright white eyes stared into her soul until it vanished into the darkness.
Wallflower shuddered then looked around to see she was now in a place that looked almost like where she had been before entering this world. As she blinked she appeared in front of her house where she felt safe and secure.
Walking inside, Wallflower began to relax until she heard crumbling as the buildings outside started to rot and fall apart. To her surprise she was greeted by Velvet Swirl who appeared behind her.
“Hello Wallflower. Congratulations on making it to the midway point of the challenge. You now have two options that you can make. You can either wait here for your alternate self to reach this location while you recover or you walk back through the levels you barely escaped to rescue the girl you fell for. She’ll give you one extra player. Though, beware the Shadow will remember every move you made to escape and complete the level.”
Wallflower gave a harsh glare “What do you mean alternate self? Who else is trapped here?”
Velvet continued ‘’When you came into this world as you made impact with the floor, you may have felt a body land on you, to then have nothing there while you were disorientated? That was your counterpart which I dragged from Equestria. I teleported her to where Stage two is located to survive through the levels alongside you,” she explained, shrugging. “And for the one you need to save- that would be Moondancer.”
With a smirk, Velvet continued. ”She just had to experiment with dark magic, didn’t she? She went and got herself trapped here trying to create a realm for studying instead making this rotting hell. You would have seen her tied up in one of the nightclubs many rooms if you would have checked.”
“Time and oxygen is running out. Time to make your choice” Velvet said as her eyes darkened.
Part 2 Coming Soon.
Edited by Valtyra -Fimfiction : https://www.fimfiction.net/user/1394/Valtyra
Credit to S3RL for lyrics used on Candy Sweet (Permission given by artist for use of lyrics from song S3Rl : Candy)
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Author's Note
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