MLP Rewritten

by Eevee932

Rating: everyone
Tags: Other, Princess Luna, Equestria Girls, Adventure, Anthology, Main 6, My Little Pony: The Movie, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe
Length: 5438

A rewritten version of the MLP story

This story is a rewritten version on the MLP G4 story. Where events will change, both minor and major.

Updates whenever chapters are finished

Published 2020-04-27 04:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2020-04-27 04:50:01 UTC

Friendship Is Magic (Part 1)

Long ago there were two royal sisters who ruled over the magical land of Equestria.

The two had jobs that helped Equestria grow and flourish but no pony had a more important job than Queen Celestia, who had to look over jobs and ponies doing them and raise the sun everyday while her sister Princess Luna had a nicer job of raising the moon and looking over dreams while comforting scared ponies when they had nightmares.

Celestia became jealous over time because Luna had all kinds of emotional support from the ponies of Equestria while

Celestia only had physical support from ponies.

One day Celestia's jealousy got to her and made her become the evil Daybreaker and tried to eliminate Luna so only ponies could come to her but Luna managed to get the most powerful artifacts in Equestria known to ponies as the Elements Of Harmony.

Using the elements Luna managed to defeat her sister and trapping her in the sun for many years and making Luna the sole ruler of Equestria.

"Hm.... I think I have heard of the Elements Of Harmony somewhere in the library. I guess i have to go there and look there." Twilight said putting the book she was reading in her bag while heading towards the Canterlot Library.

"Hey! Twilight!." A voice said to her. Twilight stopped to who the voice came from and discovering it to be Twinkleshine.

"Hey Twilight! Moondancer is having a party in the west castle courtyard do you want to come?" Twinkleshine said to Twilight.

"Sorry but i have to do something at the library." She said before heading back towards the library.

"Twilight has been studying a lot lately. I wonder what she's doing." Twinkleshine said before walking away.

Meanwhile Spike is carrying books around the library and almost gets hit by Twilight when she enters.

"Hey Twilight can you look when you open the door you almost hit me!" Spike said

"Sorry Spike. Hey have you seen my copy of Predictions and Prophecies? I need it to look for something." She asked Spike

"I have that book Twilight. Here you go." He said while giving the book to Twilight.

"Thank you Spike. Lets see here.. Elements, Elements, here we are! Elements Of Harmony, see Mare in the Sun?"

"Isn't that just just an old ponies' tale?" Spike said to Twilight

"Let's see here........ Here we go! The Mare in the Sun, myth from olden pony times. A powerful pony who wanted to rule Equestria, defeated by the Elements of Harmony and imprisoned in the sun. Legend has it that on the longest day of the thousandth year, she will escape the sun and she will eternally bring daytime to everypony! Spike do you know what this means?"

"No what?" He asked Twilight

"Write a letter to the princess for me please."

"Ok Twilight." He said while getting some paper and a pen

"Dear teacher, my continuing studies of pony magic have led me to discover that we are on the precipice of disaster! For you see, the mythical Mare in the Sun is in fact Daybreaker, and she's about to return to Equestria, and bring with her eternal day! Something must be done to make sure this terrible prophecy does not come true. I await your quick response. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle."

"Uhh how do you spell precipice?"

"Just use a different word Spike. When your done with that send that to the princess."

"I don't know if we should send it to her now. She is a little busy getting ready for the Summer Moon Celebration. Its the day after tomorrow."

"The day after tomorrow is the thousandth year of the Summer Moon Celebration! It's important that the Princess is told right away!"

"Ok. I'm gonna send it but I don't think she will do something about it." Spike sends before he sends the letter to the Princess

"The Princess trusts me completely. In all the years she's been my mentor she's never once doubted me." She says right as they receive a letter from the princess "See? I knew she would want to take immediate action."

"My dear Twilight. You know that I value your diligence and that I trust you completely but you simply must stop reading those dusty old books!" Spike says reading the letter they got

"What!"

"My dear Twilight, there is more to a young pony's life than studying, so I'm sending you to supervise the preparations for the Summer Moon Celebration in this year's location: Ponyville. And, I have an even more essential task for you to complete: make some friends!" Spike says continuing to read the letter

"Great just great." Twilight says disappointed

"Look on the bright side, Twilight. The Princess arranged for you to stay in a library. Doesn't that make you happy?" Spike asked her

"Yes, yes it does. You know why? Because I'm right! I'll check on everything quickly, then get to the library to find some proof of Daybreaker's return." Twilight replied as she got ready to go to Ponyville

After awhile Twilight and Spike arrive in Ponyville

"Will you make friends, like the Princess asked you to do?" Spike asked Twilight

"She said to check on preparations. I am her student, and I'll do my royal duty, but the fate of Equestria does not rest on me making friends." Twilight replied

"Well maybe the ponies in Ponyville have interesting things to talk about. Come on, Twilight, just try!"

"Well ok Spike." She said walking up to a bright pink pony

“Uh...Hi my name is Twilight Sparkle.” She said to the pony

The pony gasped at Twilight before speaking

“Wow! A brand new pony here in Ponyville and I’m not even ready for a welcome party!” The pink pony said

“Uhhh....What?”

“Oh! Sorry I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Pinkie Pie and I’m one of the best party planners in Ponyville! I also know everypony in Ponyville too so that's how I know your new!” She said joyfully

“Hey are you working on the Summer Moon Festival?” Twilight asked Pinkie

"Of course I am! I'm working on the Summer Moon Party and all the amazing fireworks that are gonna be going on too! I guess I'm gonna have to work on a welcome party too!"

"Ok.......Well is was nice to meet you PInkie but I have to check on everypony working on the Summer Moon Festival."

"Ok! Well i'm gonna start on your welcome party so bye!" Pinkie said before hopping away

"Well, that was interesting all right." Twilight said before she and Spike headed off to check on the food

"Summer Moon Celebration official overseer's checklist. Number two, banquet preparations: Sweet Apple Acres." Spike said checking on their list

Twilight and Spike spotted a orange pony bucking a apple tree watching as all the apples fall into the buckets below.

"Well let's get this over with quickly. Good afternoon. My name is Twilight Sparkle." She said as she started to approach her but before she could say anything else the orange pony quickly started to shake her hoof.

"Well, howdy-doo, Miss Twilight, a pleasure makin' your acquaintance. I'm Applejack. We here at Sweet Apple Acres sure do like makin' new friends! So, what can I do you for?" Applejack said just as she stopped shaking Twilight's hoof

Twilight's hoof shook even after Applejack let go of her but Spike than stopped her snickering while doing so

"Well, I am in fact here to supervise preparations for the Summer Moon Celebration. And you're in charge of the food?" Twilight asked

"We sure are sugar! Would you care to sample some?"

"Sure, just if it doesn't take long."

Applejack after hearing that quickly starts to ring a triangle before saying "Soup's on, everypony!" Before Twilight could ask what's going on dozens of ponies approached Twilight, Spike, and Applejack

"Now, why don't I introduce y'all to the Apple family?" Applejack told Twilight

"Sorry but I need to hurry and check everything." Twilight said

"Don't worry about that stuff sugar. Now this here's Apple Fritter, Apple Bumpkin, Red Gala, Red Delicious, Golden Delicious, Caramel Apple, Apple Strudel, Apple Tart, Baked Apples, Apple Brioche, Apple Cinnamon Crisp, Big Macintosh, Apple Bloom and Granny Smith. Why, I'd say you're already part of the family!" She said before feeding Twilight a apple

She spits it out before saying "Okay, well, I can see the food situation is handled, so we'll be on our way." but before she could leave the small filly Apple Bloom asks her sadly "Aren't you gonna stay for brunch?"

Twilight looks at her before saying "Fine. I guess I can stay for a little bit longer."

The Apple family all cheer

After a while at Sweet Apple Acres, Twilight and Spike finally get back to Ponyville

"Says here on the list that weather is next and that there's supposed to be a Pegasus pony named Rainbow Dash clearing the clouds." Spike says looking at the list

Twilight looks up at the cloudy sky and says "Well, he's not doing a very good job, is he?" and before she can go look for
her a light blue blur hits her sending them both into a pile of mud

"Oops, sorry about that." The light blue pegasus said while helping Twilight up

"Let me try something real quick my very own patented Rain-Blow Dry!" The pegasus said before flying quickly round Twilight drying her off while messing up her mane and tail

"Let me guess. You're Rainbow Dash." Twilight asked him

"The one and only. Why, you heard of me?" Rainbow said

"I heard you were supposed to be keeping the sky clear. Well i'm Twilight Sparkle, and Princess Luna sent me to check on the everything including the weather."

"Yea i'm gonna do that as soon as i'm done practicing for the Wonderbolts. They're gonna perform at the Celebration tomorrow, and I'm gonna show 'em my stuff!" Rainbow said to Twilight while relaxing on a big white cloud

"Really those Wonderbolts?"

"Yep!"

"Please. They'd never accept a Pegasus who can't even keep the sky clear for one measly day." Twilight told Rainbow

"Hey, I could clear this sky in ten seconds flat. If you doubt me than i'm gonna do it right now!"

Before Twilight could say anything Rainbow quickly clears the sky leaving nothing but the sun and the blue sky. Twilight and Spike were both surprised at what he did. Twilight quickly closed her jaw.

"You should see the look on your face. Ha! You're a laugh, Twilight Sparkle. I can't wait to hang out some more." Rainbow said before he flew off

Next was the decorations so they headed off to the town hall

"That's Beautiful....." Spike said once they got there

"Yes, this is coming along nicely. This ought'a be quick. I'll be at the library in no time."

"Not the decorations Twilight but her!" Spike said pointing at a white unicorn holding multiple bows with her horn

"How are my spines Twilight? Are they straight and neat?"

"Good afternoon. My name is-" Before Twilight could introduce herself she was interrupted by the unicorn

"Just a moment, please! I'm 'in the zone', as it were." The unicorn told Twilight before choosing a bow afterwards the unicorn turned towards Twilight

"Good afternoon darling. My name is Rarity." But before she could say anything else she spotted Twilight messy mane and tail

"Oh my stars, darling! Whatever happened to your coiffure?!" She said looking around Twilight

"Oh, you mean my mane? Well, it's a long story. I'm just here to check on the decorations, and then I'll be out of your hair!"

"What about your hair?!" Rarity said but before Twilight could do anything both she and Spike were dragged to her Boutique. While they are there Rarity chats to Twilight about where she is from

"Tell me. Where are you from?" She says while trying a dress on Twilight

"Well i'm from Canterlot and-"

"Canterlot?! Oh, I am so envious! The glamour, the sophistication! I have always dreamed of living there! I can't wait to hear all about it! Oh! let me get something real quick." Before Rarity could come back Twilight and Spike quickly get out of there

"Wasn't she wonderful?" Spike said

"Whats next on the list Spike?"

"Oh! It says here the last thing on the list is music."

Once they got to the spot where the music was being made they found a tall yellow pegasus conducting some singing birds

"Oh my. Um, stop please, everyone, umm. Excuse me, sir? I mean no offense, but your rhythm is just a teeny-tiny bit off.
Now, follow me, please." The pegasus said to a small blue jay

Before they can start back up their song Twilight comes up to them, scaring both the birds and the pegasus

"Oh i'm sorry. I didn't mean to scare everyone I just wanted to check up on your wonderful music. My name is Twilight Sparkle. What's your name?"

"Oh......Thank you. My name is Fluttershy." The pegasus said quietly but not too quiet

"Thats a nice name. Well your birds are back, so I guess everything's in order. Keep up the good work!" Twilight says before starting to walk back towards the library. But before they get back Fluttershy spots Spike and comes towards him

"Oh, I've never seen a baby dragon before. He's sooo cute!"

"Really you think i'm cute?

"Oh my, he talks. I didn't know dragons could talk. That's just so incredibly wonderful I, I just don't even know what to say!"
s
She says excitedly

"Well we better get back-"

"Wait! What's his name?" Fluttershy asks Twilight

"Oh my name is Spike" He tells her

"Hi Spike, I'm Fluttershy. Wow, a talking dragon! And what do dragons talk about?"

"Well, what do you wanna know?"

"Everything"

While Twilight and Spike head to the library, Spike tells Fluttershy his life story. Then they finally get there

"I am so sorry, how did we get here so fast? This is where I'm staying while in Ponyville and my poor baby dragon needs his sleep." Twilight tells Fluttershy

"No I don't!" But before he can do anything Fluttershy picks him up

"Poor thing, you simply must get into bed."

Twilight grabs him saying "Yes, yes, we'll get right on that. Well, g'night!" before closing the door

"Sorry, Spike, but I have to convince the Princess that Daybreaker is coming, and we're running out of time! I just need to be alone so I can study without a bunch of crazy ponies trying to make friends all the time. Now, where's the light?"

Suddenly the lights turn on revealing a lot of ponies including Pinkie Pie

"Surprise!" Everypony said

"Were you surprised? Were ya? Were ya?" Pinkie said

"Very surprised. Libraries are supposed to be quiet."

"What kind of welcome party would this be if it were quiet? Besides I invited everypony in Ponyville"

While all of this is going on Twilight desides to get a drink but accidentally gets hot sauce and drinks it

"Are you all right, sugarcube?" Applejack asks Twilight after she starts to turn red before heading upstairs

"Why would you have hot sauce at a party?" Spike asks before Pinkie grabs the bottle, pours it on a cupcake and eats it.

"What? I like it's taste." She says

A little while later Twilight try's to relax on her bed but can't

Spike opens the door saying "Hey Twilight! Pinkie is starting some games want to play?"

"No! Everypony here is crazy!."

"You really should lighten up, Twilight. It's a party! besides the Summer Moon Festival is starting soon." Spike says before going back down stairs

"Ugh, here I thought I'd have time to learn about the Elements of Harmony but, silly me, all this ridiculous friend-making has kept me from it! Legend has it that on the longest day of the thousandth year, she will escape the sun and bring about everlasting daytime with her. I hope the Princess was right... I hope it really is just an old pony tale." She says just as Spike comes back upstairs

"C'mon, Twilight, it's time to watch the sunset!" Spike says

Once they get to the town hall everypony gets very excited

"Isn't this exciting? Are you excited, 'cause I'm excited, I've never been so excited— well, except for the time that I saw you walking into town and I got super excited!" Pinkie tells Twilight

"Fillies and gentlecolts, as mayor of Ponyville, it is my great pleasure to announce the beginning of the Summer Moon Celebration!" The Mayor says while everypony cheers

"In just a few moments, our town will witness the magic of the sunset, and celebrate this, the longest night of the year! And now, it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and the moon each and every day, the good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria...Princess Luna!" The Mayor says as the curtains open revealing and Princess Luna is missing

"This is not gonna end well" Twilight says

"Remain calm, everypony, there must be a reasonable explanation!" The Mayor says trying to calm everypony down

Suddenly a ball of fire appears revealing a long white pony with fire for a mane and tail

"Oh no...Daybreaker!"

"Oh, my beloved subjects. It's been so long since I've seen your precious little princess loving faces." Daybreaker says to everypony

Rainbow Dash tries to attack Daybreaker but Applejack manages to keep him back

"Why, am I not good enough for you? Don't you know who I am?"

"Does my crown no longer count now that I have been imprisoned for a thousand years? Did you not recall the legend?
Did you not see the signs?"

"I did. And I know who you are. You're the Mare in the Sun... Daybreaker!" Twilight says to eveypony's shock

"Well well well, somepony who remembers me. Then you also know why I'm here." Daybreaker says to Twilight

"Your here to........" Twilight tries to say

"Well remember this day, little ponies. From this moment forth, light shall last forever!

To be continued

Author's Note

This is the first part of my long project to rewrite most if not all of MLP (including EG and the movie)
Rewrites will come out whenever I finish them and watch the original episode.
Any critique or tips will be great.
Also if you want to do anything with my rewrite just ask me.

Friendship Is Magic (Part 2)

The last time we left Twilight and Spike, they were sent to Ponyville by Princess Luna to check on the preparations for the Summer Moon Celebration and they met some peculiar ponies before all of them witness the return of the evil Daybreaker.

"What did you do with the Princess?" The Mayor asked Daybreaker

"Oh don't worry about her, I dealt with her quickly.....By sending her to the moon!"

The guards tried to attack Daybreaker but to no avail, afterwards she turned into a ball of fire and escaped to outside while everypony including Twilight ran.

Rainbow Dash and the other spotted Twilight and Spike heading back to the library so they chased her.

Once Twilight got there she put Spike to bed and started to look for info about the Elements Of Harmony, when suddenly Rainbow Dash tackled her saying "How did you know about Daybreaker? Do you work for her? And what are the Elements Of Harmony?"

Before she could say anything else Applejack stops him "Simmer down, she doesn't work for Daybreaker. But she knows what's going on. Don't you, Twilight?"

" I read all about the prediction of Daybreaker. Some mysterious objects called the Elements of Harmony are the only things that can stop her, but I don't know what they are, where to find them; I don't even know what they do!"
Twilight tells Applejack

"I found a book called The Elements of Harmony: A Reference Guide!" Pinkie says

"How did you find that?"

"It was under E!" She says while Twilight grabs the book and starts going through the pages

"Let's see here.......Oh. There are six Elements of Harmony, but only five are known: Kindness, Laughter, Generosity, Honesty and Loyalty. The sixth is a complete mystery. It is said, the last known location of the five elements was in the ancient castle of the royal sisters. It is located in what is now the Everfree Forest."

"The Everfree Forest?!" Everypony besides Twilight says while she and the others heads out towards the Everfree Forest

Twilight and the other get there but before they go in there, Twilight says to them "Not so fast. Look, I appreciate the offer, but I'd really rather do this on my own." She tries to go into the forest but Applejack stops her saying
"No can do, sugarcube. We sure ain't lettin' any friend of ours go into that creepy place alone. We're stickin' to you like caramel on a candy apple." While she says that, the others go inside the forest

Once the 6 of them get inside Twilight asks them "So, none of you have been in here before?"

"Ugh, heavens no! Just look at it. It's dreadful." Rarity says while looking at the ugly scenery

"Plus it ain't natural. Folks say it don't work the same as Equestria." Applejack says

"What do you mean by that?" Twilight asks Applejack but before she could say anything Rainbow Dash says "Nopony knows. You know why? Cause everypony who's ever come in has never come out! And I heard that there's a tribe of evil creatures lurking in the forest, waiting for somepony to come in so they can take them and do bad things!"

"Rainbow, quit it." Applejack says right as the floor everypony is standing on to crumble and fall, causing everypony besides Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy to fall.

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy quickly pick up Pinkie Pie and Rarity but Applejack and Twilight continue to fall and reach a cliff

Twilight almost falls but manages to hold on long enough for Applejack to come and help her

"Applejack! What do I do?" Twilight asks while panicking

Applejack looks around seeing Rainbow and Fluttershy and the others at the bottom of the cliff, after seeing that she tells Twilight "Let go."

Twilight looks at her scared and says "What! Are you crazy?"

"No I ain't. I promise you'll be safe."

"That's not true!"

"Now listen here. What I'm sayin' to you is the honest truth. Let go, and you'll be safe."

After hearing that Twilight lets go and gets helped by Rainbow and Fluttershy

Applejack hops down the cliff saying "I told you would be safe."

"I guess you were right Applejack." Twilight says before hearing the distant sounds of a roar

"Uh...What is tarnation was that noise?" Applejack said

"That sounded like a manticore to me." Fluttershy said before the 6 of the encountered the agitated manticore

Everypony tried to attack it to no avail besides Fluttershy because she noticed something that the others didn't notice so she started to approach the beast slowly while everypony looked in horror.

When she got close to the beast it tried to attack her but she managed to earn it's trust, allowing her to finally see the problem.....A thorn stuck in it's paw

"Now this might hurt for just a second." She said just as she pulled out the thorn causing the manticore to start licking on her as her friends pass by her and the manticore

"How did you know about the thorn?" Twilight asked Fluttershy

"I saw it as soon as it first appeared, besides we all just need to be shown a little kindness even to the ones that are bad."

"My eyes need a rest from all this icky muck." Rarity said right before the trees start to cover the sky causing to become dark "Well, I didn't mean that literally."

"That ancient ruin could be right in front of our faces and we wouldn't even know it." Twilight said

"Oh wait, I think I stepped in somethin'." Applejack said right as Fluttershy screamed

"It's just mud." She said right as she walked into a tree with a horrible face

Everypony screamed besides Pinkie who was laughing instead of screaming

"Pinkie, what are you doing?! Run!" Twilight told Pinkie

"Oh girls, don't you see?" She said right as she started to sing

"Tell me she's not..."

"She is."

I don't really want to type the lyrics to the song so here's a video instead. Besides nothing changes in the song.

Once they got past the trees they came across a lake with really strong waves preventing them from crossing. While this is going on Rarity heard some crying nearby and found a sad purple sea serpent

"Excuse me, sir. Why are you crying?" Twilight asked him

"Well, I don't know. I was just sitting here, minding my own business, when this tacky little cloud of orange smoke just
whisked past me and tore half of my beloved mustache clean off, and now I look simply horrid." The sea serpent said

"That's what all the fuss is about?" Applejack said

"Why, of course it is. How can you be so insensitive? Oh, just look at him. Such lovely luminescent scales.

"I know."

"And your expertly coiffed mane."

"Oh, I know, I know."

"Your fabulous manicure."

"It's so true!"

"All ruined without your beautiful mustache."

"It's true, I'm hideous!"

"I simply cannot let such a crime against fabulosity go uncorrected." Rarity said before she removed a scale from the serpent

"Ow! What was that for?" The serpent said before Rarity swung the scale cutting her tail off and using it to replace the damaged part of his mustache

"Oh-hohohoho! My mustache. How wonderful."

"You look fantastic." Rarity said

"Oh, Rarity, your tail...It's cut off." Twilight said to her

"Oh. It's fine, my dear. Short tails are in this season. Besides, it'll grow back."

"So would the mustache..." Rainbow Dash said

"Let me help you cross." The serpent said as his body formed a bridge

Once they get close to the ancient castle of the royal sisters, It turn out that there a broken bridge in the way so the other send Rainbow to fix it on the other side

"This should be quick and easy." Rainbow said starting to fix the bridge

"Rainbow..." A voice called out to him

"Who's there?" He said turning around seeing fog starting to cover the place

"Rainbow..." The voice said

"Show yourself! I ain't scared of you!"

"We've been eagerly awaiting the arrival of the best flyer in Equestria."

"Who?"

"Why, you, of course."

"Really? Well can you tell the Wonderbolts that? I have been wanting to get into that group for like ever!"

"No, Rainbow Dash. We want you to join us, The Blazingbolts." The voice said revealing three ponys that look like Wonderbolts but different

"We're the greatest aerial team in the Everfree Forest, and soon we will be the greatest in all Equestria, but first, we need a captain.

"Yep it's all true. Sign me up. Just let me tie this bridge real quick and then we have a deal."

"No! It's either them or us, take your pick."

"Rainbow, what's taking so long? What are you doing? Are you talking to somepony? If so don't listen to them!" Twilight
said to Rainbow not knowing whats going on

"Thank you! For the offer, I mean, but I'm afraid I have to say no." Rainbow said to them before tying the bridge back together and flying back to her friends, not seeing the Blazingbolts turn into orange smoke

"See? I'd never leave my friends hangin'."

Once the six of them walked into the abandoned castle finding the Elements Of Harmony

"One, two, three, four... There's only five" Pinkie Pie said seeing that there's only 5 Elements

"Yea, There's only five Elements. Where's the sixth?" Rainbow said

"The book said: When the five are present, a spark will cause the sixth Element to be revealed. I don't know what that means but stand back, I have a idea" Twilight said before everypony left the castle

While Twilight was using her magic on the elements, something orange started to surround Twilight and the Elements before teleporting both things to a higher point in the ruined castle

Once Twilight got teleported she noticed that the Elements were hovering around Daybreaker, afterwards she managed to get Daybreaker away from the elements so she could continue to try to get the sixth Element to appear but Daybreaker stops that by shattering them into multi colored shards

"No, no!" Twilight shouted

"You little foal! Thinking you could defeat me? Now you will never see your princess, or your moon! The day shall last forever!" Daybreaker said right before the others came to Twilight's rescue

"You think you can destroy The Elements of Harmony just like that? Well, you're wrong, because the spirits of The Elements of Harmony are right here!" Twilight said as the Element shards started to surround her friends

"Applejack, who reassured me when I was in doubt, represents the spirit of... honesty! Fluttershy, who tamed the manticore with her compassion, represents the spirit of... kindness! Pinkie Pie, who banished fear by giggling in the face of danger, represents the spirit of... laughter! Rarity, who calmed a sorrowful serpent with a meaningful gift represents the spirit of... generosity! And Rainbow Dash, who could not abandon her friends for her own heart's desire represents the spirit of... loyalty! The spirits of these five ponies got us through every challenge you threw at us." She said as the Element shards formed necklaces on her friends

"You still don't have the sixth Element! The other Elements don't work without it!" Daybreaker shouted

"But it did! A different kind of spark. I felt it the very moment I realized how happy I was to hear you, to see you, how much I cared about you. The spark ignited inside me when I realized that you all... are my friends! You see, Daybreaker, when those Elements are ignited by the... the spark, that resides in the heart of us all, it creates the sixth element: the element of... magic!" Twilight said as the sixth element formed a crown on her head

The power of the Element were so strong they were able to defeat Daybreaker once and for all

Once her friends awoken they discover that the Element necklaces looked like their Cutie Marks

"Twilight! I thought you were just spoutin' a lot of hooey, but I reckon we really do represent the elements of friendship." Applejack said

The moon finally raises and Princess Luna appears saying "Indeed you do. Twilight Sparkle, I knew you could do it."

"But... you told me it was all an old pony tale that nopony remembers." Twilight said

"I told you that you needed to make some friends, nothing more. I saw the signs of Daybreaker's return, and I knew it was you who had the magic inside to defeat her, but you could not unleash it until you let true friendship into your heart. Now if only another will as well. Queen Celestia!" Luna said as she approached her big sister

"Queen?!" Everypony besides Twilight shouted

"It has been a thousand years since I have seen you like this. Time to put our differences behind us. We were meant to rule together, big sister."

"Sister?!"

"Will you accept my friendship?"

"I'm so sorry for what I did! I missed you, little sister!" Celestia said

"I've missed you, too."

"Hey, you know what this calls for? A party!" Pinkie says

While Celestia's return party is going on in Ponyville, Luna talks to Twilight

"Why so glum, Twilight? Are you not happy that your quest is complete and you can return to your studies in Canterlot?"

"That's just it. Just when I learned how wonderful it is to have friends, I have to leave them."

" Well I have a idea. Spike, take a note, please. I, Princess Luna, hereby declare that Twilight Sparkle shall take on a new mission for Equestria. She must continue to study the magic of friendship. She must report to me her findings from her new home in Ponyville."

"Oh thank you, Princess Luna! I'll study harder than ever before." Twilight says while her friends cheer for her

The end