The Children of Discord

by Ragnarok17

Rating: teen
Tags: Spike, Comedy, Profanity, Adventure, Discord, Princess Celestia, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 6796

Discord become idolized by a group of ponies who call themselves, “The Children of Discord”

Feeling unappreciated by Elements of Harmony, Discord find himself to be idolized by a group of zealous ponies who call themselves, “The Children of Discord” and they told Discord that he is their messiah and they do enjoy his chaos magic.

But Elements of Harmony especially Fluttershy doesn’t trust “The Children of Discord” and trying to figure out their agenda while their relationship with Discord is falling apart as Discord finally got appreciated from “The Children of Discord” something that Elements of Harmony failed on and he starting to see them as his true family.

Published 2020-05-11 05:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2020-05-25 00:44:18 UTC

Discord the Savior!

A group of hooded figures with an emblem of Chaos on it arrives at the entrance of Ponyville and they see Discord coming to Castle of Friendship.

“Is that Discord?”

In front of the group is a male Earth pony who had a dark gray reddish brown coat, with a very dark gray mane wearing a yellow cyclops sunglasses gives a big smile

“Yup, that’s our savior!”

Discord arrives at Castle of Friendship to see if his favorite friend, Fluttershy is available.

He thought, ‘My dear Fluttershy! I hope she’s available for me to play with! Maybe Twilight and other can join in for fun’ Discord open the door to find Elements of Harmony and Spike are packing their stuffs and all of them except Fluttershy pretty much ignores his presence as Fluttershy was the only one who approached Discord.

“Oh hey Discord” Fluttershy smiles

“What is going on here?!” Discord asked

“Oh! We are packing our stuffs to stay at Crystal Empire for couple of days”

“Couple of days?! For what?!” Discord shouted.

“Shining Armor and Cadence are having a celebration party for Spike since he saved Crystal Empire twice.” Fluttershy smiles as Spike walk toward Discord

“Yup! I am their savior! Crystal Empire absolutely adore me so much that they are holding a celebration party for me!” Spike starting to bragging about him as Crystal Empire’s savior in front of Discord, Discord is not pleased.

“How come I wasn’t told about the celebration party?! and why I wasn’t invited?!” Discord complains about not inviting to Spike’s celebration party.

Twilight finally notices his presence and approached Discord, “Because when you went Grand Galloping Gala, you almost ruined the event with Smooze slimy on us! Even through Princess Celestia enjoyed of having you caused chaos in the Gala but still, I think it’s best to not invite you for Spike’s celebration party so you wouldn’t ruin his celebration party”

Discord is shocked at what Twilight said to him and get pretty upset but trying his best to not show it in front of others especially Fluttershy.

“Oh, I see how is it.” Discord glares at Twilight and thought, ‘How come Spike get all attention while I don’t get my own celebration party?!’

Elements of Harmony and Spike are finally done packing their stuffs as they exit through the door as each of them left and didn’t bother to look at Discord except for Twilight and Fluttershy who did look at Discord.

“While we gone, make sure you don’t cause any trouble... Got it?” Twilight asked in a stern tone as Discord reluctantly nodded his head, “Good” Twilight exit the room and Fluttershy walk to Discord to comfort him.

“Don’t worry, Discord. Maybe you could get a celebration party someday” Fluttershy smiles and Discord try to smile even through he’s pissed off about not being inviting, “Okay, Bye Discord!” Fluttershy left the room and Discord is all by himself in throne room...... lonely. His upsetting face turn into a sad face as he got a tear in his eyes.

“Who am I kidding? I may be a friend to Fluttershy and maybe Spike but Twilight and others only see me as nothing more but a nuisance who only bring trouble to them, They didn’t even told me or invite me to Spike’s celebration party.” Discord walk around the throne room and he sat down on the ground, “I really don’t deserve of having my own throne or my own celebration party, i just wish somepony appreciates me for once”

Discord starting to cry as he roll back and forward until he heard a door opening, Discord quickly get up and get into his fighting stance.

“Who there?!”

To his surprise, he see bunch of hooded ponies approached to him and the yellow cyclops sunglasses pony standing in front of him before he along with others bowed before Discord, much to his confusion.

“It’s an honor to meet you, my savior”

“Savior?” Discord asked before asking another question, “Who are you?!”

He chuckles, “My name is Mayhem and we are The Children of Discord!” All members of The Children of Discord took off their hood to reveal themselves in front of Discord.

“The Children of Discord? Impossible! I don’t have my own kids!”

Mayhem chuckles nervously, “We know.... it just the name for the group who views you as our messiah” all members nodded in agreement, “So, our savior.... transport us to Chaosville so we can have conversation with you since this place is NOT chaotic enough for us to talk.”

Discord seems hesitant at first but he smiles, “Sure, why not” he snaps his finger causing him, Mayhem and all members of The Children of Discord disappears.

At Discord’s house, Discord have to use his magic to expand his home to fit all members of The Children of Discord to fit into his home.

Mayhem is sitting down on a piano-shaped couch and give a big grin, “Now that’s chaotic!” as other members drank the green teas which turn their coat and mane into green and smiles at each other.

“Our coat and mane turn green! Awesome!”

“It’s all thank to our beloved messiah, Everypony!”

They raise their cup to toast their savior but Mayhem notices Discord’s sad face.

“What’s wrong, my messiah?” Mayhem asked in a concern tone

“I just not in a mood to do chaotic stuffs” Discord is feeling sad

“Why? Did somepony tell you off?” Mayhem asked his beloved messiah.

“Well, I was at Castle of Friendship when I saw them packing their stuff to go to Crystal Empire to celebrate Spike and..... I WASN’T INVITED AT ALL! it’s like even through I redeem myself, they still viewed me as a nuisance and they want nothing to do with me! Twilight told me that they don’t want me at their party as they think I will ruin it. Hell! Some of them barely spoke to me when they left me behind!” Discord shred a tear, “I guess they don’t want me around them since I bring nothing but destruction to them and I felt that I am being unappreciated by them! I’m not sure if they do care about me” Discord signed and said silently, “They never should have freed me from my imprisonment..... they’re better off without me”

All members of The Children of Discord gasped, “No my savior! We can’t let you go back to your imprisonment!” A male Earth Pony member yelled

“How cruel of them!” A female Earth Pony member cursed at Elements of Harmony for hurting their beloved messiah.

Mayhem approached his beloved messiah.

“Nonsense! We do care about you, our savior! You are the reason that all of us come together! You are our savior! Your chaos magic saved us when all of us almost give in our despair after losing our home! When we see you doing chaos magic, you make us realize that in order to save ourselves, we must become you!”

Discord look at Mayhem and is intrigued by what he said about him, “Really?”

“Yeah! When you use your magic to have Cotton candy falling on the folks, we were laughing at those folks and eating cotton candy! Your chaos bring joy to us!” A Male Earth Pony member encourages Discord

“And we even use a spell to turn our coat and mane into same colors as you, our savior!” A Female Earth Pony member smiles at Discord.

All members of The Children of Discord once again bowed before him, “You are part of our family, my messiah” they said in unison.

Mayhem get closer to Discord, “Now, tell me why these so-called Element of Harmony free you from your imprisonment if they don’t care about you?”

Discord sighed, “Princess Celestia told them to free me so they can reformed me but none of them except Fluttershy want to reformed me and they willing to turn back into stone if I don’t behave myself! They don’t even want me to be around them!”

“I see, no wonder why they don’t care about you. If Princess Celestia didn’t ordered them to free you, do you think they will still free you?”

“No” Discord weep.

“My messiah, you are in the wrong crowd and you shouldn’t hang out with the one who don’t appreciate your chaos. We don’t bowed down to Celestia cause she’s incompetent to us and she always relay on bunch of arrogant ponies who are big on friendship and yet, they refuses to be friend with you?! Hypocrites!”

All members of The Children of Discord nodded in agreement.

“Yeah, their communication skills are AWFUL! they’re supposed to be protectors of Equestria and yet, they almost thrown Equestria into madness when they stupidly chose to focus on wedding crap!” A male Earth Pony member criticized Elements of Harmony

“Yeah! Celestia is so dumbass for focusing her niece’s precious wedding over Equestria! She’s a fucking Princess so long that she can’t tell her niece’s behavior and she was defeated by Queen Chrysalis of all pony! A big dumbass! That’s why we don’t respect her and Elements of Harmony!” A female Earth Pony member criticized Princess Celestia.

“YOU ARE THE TRUE SAVIOR!” they bowed down to him.

“But I did almost thrown Equestria into madness when I sided with Lord Tirek and I betrayed Elements of Harmony! They’re friends to me and yet I sold them out to someone who wasn’t my friend” Discord protest.

“Friends to you? Bullshit! They weren’t your friends to begin with! It’s their fault for causing you to be sided with Lord Tirek. They don’t really care about you at all!” Mayhem yell

“But what about Fluttershy? She care about me! She was the only one who willing to reform me!”

“Fluttershy was just pretending to be nice to you so you wouldn’t use chaos magic a lot, she was holding you back like other Elements and eventually once you fully reformed, she will forget about you and she will abandoning you like the rest of them would do”

Discord doubting Mayhem’s words about Fluttershy, “You’re wrong! Fluttershy do care about me and she wouldn’t abandon me! I’m her friend!”

“If you are her friend, then.... why didn’t she told you about celebration party or in matter of fact, why didn’t she throw you a celebration party?”

Discord was about to protest but he ponders and...... he realizes Fluttershy never really throw celebration party for him at all but he remembers Fluttershy did promise about throwing his celebration party, “But she did promise me she would throw a celebration party for me”

“Fluttershy was just saying that to not make you feel sad and she always forget her promise, you know Fluttershy and Elements of Harmony will never show their appreciation to you, my messiah. We are the one who are truly appreciated by you and we can change that if you let us to be part of you” Mayhem pleading Discord

Discord is hesitant as he grab a picture of himself hugging Elements of Harmony and Spike as he weeping.

“They’re my friends and yet, they don’t show any appreciation to me” Discord hang his head in sadness before burning the picture to the ground and burst into a hysterical laughter which Mayhem and all members of The Children of Discord joins in to laugh with him.

“Who am I kidding?! Elements of Harmony weren’t my friends to begin with! You guys are my true friends!” Discord give high five to each members of The Children of Discord as they are laughing with joy, “You know what, you guys are the family I always wanted!” Discord hugged all of them and they hug him back.

“Our savior...” They began, only for Discord to cut them off

“Oh please! You don’t have to call me “Savior” or “Messiah”, Call me Dad instead!” Discord smiled

“Okay, Dad!” They happily yell in unison.

Discord let go of them as Mayhem approached him, “Father, Ponyville ain’t a place for you to cause chaos and we have a place for you to use your chaos magic and you don’t have to worry about it anymore!”

“Awesome! So where is your place?” Discord asks.

Mayhem chuckles, “Discordant Town”

“Perfect” Discord snaps his finger causing everyone to disappears.

Author's Note

Look like Discord finally found someponies who appreciates him and his chaos magic and he’s now want nothing to do with his so-called friends, Elements of Harmony.

If you are wondering, The Children of Discord are all Earth Pony and there’s no Unicorns or Pegasi in the group as those guys doesn’t have any powers like them.

I wrote this story because I wonder “What if there’s ponies out there who truly appreciate a Discord and want to be part of him” and that’s how this story got made.

Leave the comment down the below and do you have any suggestion for the story? I willing to listen any feedback. :)

Discordant Town

Discord and his followers appeared in a town with mismatching buildings and all civilians wearing mismatched outfits.

“So this is Discordant Town?” He asked before he see all civilians coming after him like crazy bulls and jump on him and shouting

“MY SAVIOR!” They yell in unison as they are hugging Discord while Discord is laughing hysterically.

“Please! Like I said, all of you can call me your daddy” Discord smiled.

“Daddy!” They smiled before they let go of Discord and he gets up to find a big golden statue of himself snapping his finger in front of him.

“Oh my! All of you built a statue of me?! Now this is truly appreciation I always wanted!” Discord hugs a statue of himself and kiss on it while all members of The Children of Discord go crazy and chanting his name.

“DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD!”

“I can’t believe our beloved messiah kiss the statue that we made for him! This is the greatest day of my life!” A male Earth Pony fainted before a female Earth Pony catch him.

“We love you, Discord!” A female Earth Pony act like a crazed fan girl, “You are our national treasure!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!”

Mayhem with a book on his hoof as he manages to calm down his cult as he cleared his throat as he starting to speak.

“Rejoice! Discord, Lord of Chaos. He is our beloved savior and messiah who united all of us to become “The Children of Discord”! and his chaos magic will bring joy to others! Now, let us witness our messiah standing in front of us”

The crowd cheering for Discord and he’s very happy that those ponies show their appreciation to him and he thought ‘My! Unlike those so-called Elements of Harmony, these ponies do care about me!”

Mayhem close his book and give a big grin to all members of “The Children of Discord”

“ALL HAIL LORD DISCORD!” Mayhem and all members bowing down to their beloved savior as they’re praising Discord

“ALL HAIL LORD DISCORD! ALL HAIL LORD DISCORD! ALL HAIL LORD DISCORD! ALL HAIL LORD DISCORD! ALL HAIL LORD DISCORD! ALL HAIL LORD DISCORD!”

Mayhem raises his hoof to silent all members, “Now, let our father speak to us” He left so Discord can speak to his own children.

Discord look at them and give a big and mischievous smile as he speak, “Oh, my sweet child! Before I meet all of you, I used to be friends with Elements of Harmony who weren’t my friends to begin with and despite my attempt to befriend them, those phonies refuses to be my friends and no matter how many time I try to be nice to them, they still wouldn’t want to hang out with me at all! They didn’t bother to tell me about a celebration party that I wasn’t invited to and Twilight tell me off if I was nothing to her!”

All members booed after hearing what Elements of Harmony did to their beloved messiah.

“Those damn hypocrite! They’re so big on friendship and yet, they wouldn’t befriend you?!” A female Earth Pony member yelled

“Outrageous! The “Princess of Friendship”, Twilight Sparkle is nothing more but a damn hag who dare to disrespect you!” A Male Earth Pony member yelled

“I am so ashamed to be part of species who are colossal jerkass! I felt that I should be Draconequus instead!” Another Male Earth Pony member yelled

“Yeah!” All members nodded in agreement.

“Not to mention that “Princess of Friendship” and her goons willing to shunned those adorable fillies because they’re post about themselves in gossip column and Rainbow Trash defiles them by pouring rain on them! How do you call that a friendship?! They’re little fillies for goodness sake! Elements of Harmony can suck on it!” Another female Earth Pony member yelled.

“YEAH!” They nodded in agreement.

Discord is calming his cult down, “Now now, my children. There’s no need to get pissed off about Elements of Harmony because they don’t get us, they don’t understand us as most of them are the ones who are order-type and don’t allowed me to use my chaos magic since they don’t appreciate me at all”

“YEAH!”

“I don’t get it! They’re okay with Pinkie Garbage doing crazy stuffs but not okay with our daddy doing same things?! What’s up with that?! Hypocrite!” A male Earth Pony member angrily yelled

Discord is getting tired of all this yelling, so he snap his finger to have a giant ice cream landed on them with Discord holding an umbrella to protect himself.

Discord look around at Discordant Town being covered with ice creams and all Members emerges from the ice cream as they look at their messiah and...... give a very big grin

“THANK YOU!” they yelled in unison as they’re start eating the ice cream while Discord watch them as he sit on a comfort chair that he snap his finger for.

After hours and hours of The Children of Discord eating all ice cream, all of them got full up and Discord is amazed of this.

“You kids made me so proud! You do enjoy my chaos magic!” Discord smiles

Mayhem who is now wearing a priest outfit with random different colors approached Discord

“My father, since you are no longer associating with those hags, I got a present for you”

“A present? What kind of present? I thought the golden statue of me was my present” Discord’s eye widened

“Behold! Your own throne!” Mayhem present Discord his own throne, something that he was denied by Elements of Harmony.

“YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!” Discord is very happy as he jump around like a crazy creature and Mayhem is pleased to see his messiah being happy about getting his own throne. Discord land on his throne and put his right leg on his left leg and act like the king of the world!

“My father, here’s your own crown as well” Mayhem open a box to reveal a regal-like crown with random and mismatched colors and gently put the crown on Discord’s head.

“Thank you, Mayhem. Now, I feel like a proper king!” Discord raise his claw as everypony including Mayhem bowing down to their beloved ruler, “From this day on, Elements of Harmony are no longer my friends anymore! All of you are my true friends..... wait a minute, I take it back! All of you are my family! This is the first time that I truly feel appreciation for real and you guys give me something that Elements of Harmony failed on....... a throne!” Discord kissing his own throne.

“Oh my goodness! Our beloved king kissing the throne that I personally made it for him! I am truly blessed to have him kissing my own creation” A male Earth Pony fainted before a female Earth Pony catch him again.

“Don’t tell me this is going to be a running gag?” A female Earth Pony asked in annoyance.

Discord stop kissing his throne as he look at his childrens as he put on a grumpy face, “Now, I’m still pretty sore that they didn’t invited me to Spike’s celebration party. In fact, I didn’t even want to go to that pesky dragon boy’s celebration party anyway! I bet Shining Armor and Cadence are still angry with me for siding with Lord Tirek.” And then Discord burst into a hysterical laughter as he back and forward in his own throne, “Why would I want to waste my time with them when I got you? They barely know about me at all! No, I’m not going to waste my time with those royal brats who doesn’t appreciate chaos magic..... the same goes for Elements of Harmony! If they prefer to spend time with that dragon more than me.... so be it.

Discord snap his finger and a bonfire appear out of nowhere, all members of “The Children of Discord” cheered loudly as they ripped their clothes out and put on a tribal costume and wearing a Discord-like tribal mask

They chanting “DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD! DISCORD!” as they dance around the bonfire.

Discord snap his finger and he got all plushies of Elements of Harmony as he approached the bonfire with a flame on his eyes while all members go wild and chanting

“THROW IT! THROW IT! THROW IT! THROW IT! THROW IT! THROW IT! THROW IT! THROW IT!”

“Burn those cursed ponies! They don’t deserve you!”

“Do it, father!”

Discord look at the plushies of his former friends and start to throw each of them into the bonfire like it was nothing to him anymore.

He throw the plushies of Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Rarity in the bonfire since they didn’t bother to notice his presence when he came to the castle.

He was about to throw Fluttershy’s plushie but stopped and look at the plushies of his once-beloved Fluttershy who was the only one who willing to reform him and remember her painful words when he betrayed them to Lord Tirek.

“Why are you doing this? I thought we were friends!”

Discord lowering Fluttershy’s plushie and realizes he took the resentment toward them too far causing everypony to be confused.

“What is he doing?!”

“Burn that plushie already!”

“Don’t let your guard down! Elements of Harmony weren’t your friends to begin with, my messiah! If you go back to them, they’re still treat you like a garbage and you won’t be appreciates by them!” Mayhem yelled

Discord then look at Twilight’s plushie and he remember her own words toward him in a twisted way and exaggerated it as starting to see a demonic hallucination of Twilight.

“I think it’s best to not invite you for Spike’s celebration party so you wouldn’t ruin his celebration party and I’m glad I didn’t invite you! Discord, I will be honest with you.... I never like you to begin with and you’re not really my friend at all! Why would I want to be friend with the like of you who couldn’t control theirself?”

“Stop it, Twilight..... you’re hurting my feeling” Discord weeping

“Oh please! You did same thing with Fluttershy! You are nothing more but a pathetic freak who almost thrown Equestria into madness and I don’t even know why I give you a hug to begin with?! You don’t deserve that hug!”

And then he look at Fluttershy’s plushie and starting to see a demonic hallucination of Fluttershy.

“Yeah! I was pretending to be nice so you wouldn’t use your chaos magic! Once you’re fully reformed, I will abandon you and you will spend the rest of your life as a weak-ass loser!”

“Fluttershy? How could you? I thought we were friends!” Discord cries

“Oh, we were. But I was just using you and the whole celebration party that I promised? I LIED!”

Discord is shocked and tears coming from his eyes.

“I can’t believe you were using me the entire time” Discord become sad as he once again look at the hallucination of Twilight

“Discord, by the time you truly reformed, you will be forgotten by all creatures of Equestria and they will ignore you! Let’s face the fact, no ponies will ever appreciate a miserable and wretched old fool like you and that’s the truth!” both demonic version of Twilight and Fluttershy laugh at him

“A celebration party for you? No way! Why would I want to throw a celebration party for a disgusting freak like you?” a demonic version of Fluttershy laugh harder more.

Discord’s sad face changed into enraged face as his eyes is now with more flames and his claw held both plushies of Twilight & Fluttershy tightly as he angrily look at those plushies one last time “I HATE ALL OF YOU! before he throw them into the bonfire.

“He did it! He burned those cursed fraud in the bonfire!”

All members of “The Children of Discord” cheers louder as Mayhem & some members put on a royal cape on Discord whose his heart was broken by demonic hallucinations of Twilight & especially Fluttershy as he look at them.

“You’re right, Mayhem. I’m done with Elements of Harmony!” Discord watch all plushies of his former friends burned as Mayhem smiles as he’s proud of his messiah officially disowns Elements of Harmony for good, he comfort his beloved savior.

“Don’t worry, father. You don’t need them anyway, you got the real family who truly care and appreciate you”

Discord smiles “Thank you... my son” Discord patting Mayhem’s head as both of them walk away from the bonfire as every ponies watched the plushies of Elements of Harmony being perished.

Night Time

At Canterlot Castle, Princess Celestia is asleeping on her own bed and then.... she wake up as she was drenched in sweat and the only word she can only say is.....

“Discord”

Author's Note

Man! Discord really hate Elements of Harmony even more! I guess he doesn’t want to do anything with Elements of Harmony.

Discord finally found his true family in “The Children of Discord”

Beside Chaosville, Discordant Town is his true and only home and have no plan of ever coming back to Ponyville!

EDIT: I will clarify that Mayhem who is wearing a yellow cyclops sunglasses is the leader of “The Children of Discord” as he’s very devoted to Discord and he see Discord as his god.

Crashing Spike’s Celebration Party

At the ceremony, Princess Cadence and Shining Armor along with Spike and the rest of Elements of Harmony standing on the stage to celebrate Spike for saving the Crystal Empire twice.

Cadence speaks up “It’s my honor to give Crystal Empire medal to the savior of Crystal Empire for saving us..... twice!” The crowd applaud the young purple dragon as he blushes.

“We love you Spike!”

“Please, you are making me embarrassing” Spike pleaded playfully while Elements of Harmony are giggled at this.

Twilight smiles at Spike “Spike, I’m so proud of you! You‘re the reason you brought back Crystal Heart to the empire and put the end of King Sombra” Twilight patting Spike’s head

“Nah, I shouldn’t take all the credit! I should be thanking Cadence for helping me out too! If wasn’t for her, I would have dropped Crystal Heart.” Spike genuinely smiled at Princess Cadence who smiled back to him while Shining Armor is not pleased that Spike left him out

“Hey! I help too, you know?” Shining Armor called out

“All you did was throwing her out to me” Spike teasing Shining Armor

“Come on, Spike! She have wings and I wouldn’t throw her out if she doesn’t have wings” Shining Armor defend himself

“I’m so sorry for criticizing you, Shining Armor” Spike say in sarcastically tone which annoy Shining Armor.

While Spike and Shining Armor argue back and forth like little childs, Twilight notices Fluttershy doesn’t seem happy for some reason and she have a guilt-ridden look.

“Fluttershy? Is there’s something wrong?” Twilight asked in concerned tone

Twilight’s voice snapped her out of her guilt-ridden state and she look at her.

“Yes, Twilight. I felt guilty for not letting Discord know ahead of time regarding Spike’s Celebration Party.” She look at Twilight, “Twilight, I wished you weren’t being too harsh on him when he came to the castle. I understand you don’t want him to ruin Spike’s Celebration Party but at least try to be reasoning with him than outright telling him that he’s going to ruin the party, you didn’t have to use harsh words to him”

Twilight sighed “You right, Fluttershy. I kind of went overboard with him but I was afraid that he would ruin the party that is important to Spike after what happens at Grand Galloping Gala.” Twilight starting to feel little bit of guilty for what she said to Discord, “Once this party is over, I will apologize to Discord for what I said to him”

“Thank you, Twilight” Fluttershy smiled at her as she put her hooves on Twilighy

In shadowy background of Crystal Empire, a hooded Mayhem watching the event and he carrying a mystical notebook and he give a big grin, “Now, as a payback for what you did to our messiah, all of you will pay the ultimate price!”

Mayhem writes on his mystical notebook

“Young Spike was unexpectedly involved in a terrible accident”

Mayhem gives another big grin “Let the crashing begin!”

Princess Cadence is about to give the medal to Spike when they heard a falling sound

“Where is that noise coming from?” Spike asked before seeing a giant crystal statue of himself falling and it coming after him, “Oh..... crap” Spike bluntly states before he get smashed by the giant statue of himself much to the horror of Elements of Harmony who weren’t fast enough to stop the giant statue as they didn’t see it coming

“NO!” Elements of Harmony cried, as they ran to Spike’s body with Rarity cradling the young dragon sobbing.

“Please! Spikey-Wikey! Don’t die on me! I can’t live without you! Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!” Rarity shaking Spike’s body uncontrollably until Spike slowly opens his eyes to see his beloved Rarity sobbing hysterically

“Rarity...... Can you please stop shaking me, I think i going to vomit if you keep on shaking me” Spike groaned, “Ow! I think I got some cut on my body from having a statue of me land on me” Spike chuckles

Rarity’s sad look turned into happiness as she is relieved that her beloved Spikey-Wikey is still alive and she hugs Spike tightly as if she doesn’t want to let go of him

“Oh Spike! I’m so glad you’re still alive, darling!” she cried happily while tightly Spike to the point of choking him until Twilight touch Rarity

“Ah, Rarity, you can let go of him”

Rarity look at Spike and realizes she’s almost choking him “Right, Sorry Spike” She let go of him while chuckles sheepishly.

Princess Cadance approached the injured dragon “I don’t understand, the statue shouldn’t be able to fall on you, Spike.” Cadence is confused as how the statue somehow fall on Spike.

“Pinkie? Is this one of your prank you pull on Spike?” Rainbow asked Pinkie as all of Elements of Harmony looked at Pinkie Pie who is bewildering at this accusation.

“Don’t look at me! I like pranks but I wouldn’t go too far on something like this! I have my own standard!” Pinkie Pie debunks this accusation

Mayhem chuckles as he wrote another one on his notebook.

“Shining Armor suddenly start to punch anyponies who stand in his way and cannot control himself”

Princess Cadence look around the surroundings, trying to figure out about the falling statue when Shining Armor delivers a mighty punch to Cadence’s face which cause her to be knocked unconscious and the entire Crystal Empire & Elements of Harmony especially Twilight are horrified of seeing this

“Shining Armor?! What the hell is wrong with you?! Why did you hit Cadence?!” Twilight said in an angry tone as she approached Shining Armor

“I didn’t do it! It’s like someone is controlling my body!” Shining Armor punch Twilight’s face which leave her with a big bruise on her cheek and starting to cry, seeing her cry causing Shining Armor to immediately feel guilty and gasped, “Oh my Celestia! I’m so sorry, Twily! It was accident! I swear! I wouldn’t dare to hurt you like this!”

The rest of Elements of Harmony comfort Twilight and they are pissed at Shining Armor for what he did to Twilight & Cadence.

Despite his injuries, Spike get up and angrily confront Shining Armor as he was glaring at him for what he did to Twilight “Now you listen here, pretty Stallion! Just because you’re Twilight’s BBBFF doesn’t mean you can go around and punching her like that!”

“I told you I didn’t do it on purpose! My hoofs is controlling me!” Shining Armor trying to explain this situation when he punch Spike which cause Rarity to cries.

“SPIKE!” Rarity comfort Spike before glaring at Shining Armor, “Get away from him, you savage!”

The whole Crystal Empire are even more shocked of seeing Shining Armor punched their savior in front of them as each of them grabs their pitching fork and all weapons to target at Shining Armor for not only punched Cadence but Spike as well.

“What were you thinking of attacking Spike?!”

Shining Armor start sweating and chuckles sheepishly before shouting “I’M SOOOORRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY!”

Mayhem write another one

”All civilians of The Crystal Empire including all royal guards transformed into all plushies”

Mayhem clicks his tongue “Man! No wonder Ponies are known for their awful communication skill since most of them are pretty jerkasses”

As the whole crowd about to attack Shining Armor when they transformed into plushies, Elements of Harmony, Spike & Shining Armor are speechless of seeing this.

“What..... just...... happened?” Shining Armor asked before he knocked himself unconscious.

Fluttershy looks at unconscious Shining Armor and then look at all plushies of all civilians and royal guards of The Crystal Empire and then look at injured Spike and she starting to realizes that somepony is sabotaging the party “Guys! I have a feeling somepony is sabotaging the party”

“WHAT?!” They yelled in unison

“That insane! There’s no way all of this messes are cause by somepony” Rainbow Dash doubt Fluttershy’s claim.

”Suddenly, Rainbow Dash was bombarded by strong winds.”

Rainbow Dash notices winds coming after her “Oh no! I better get out of here!” despite her best effort to get away from the winds, she end up get sucked into the winds and get hits by various objects like books, trash, cakes etc before landing on stinking puddle

“EW!” Elements of Harmony look away from Rainbow Dash’s stinking mess much to her dismay

“Alright! You win, Fluttershy!” Rainbow Dash try to get up and keep slipping on the puddle, “OW!”

Mayhem chuckles

“Now for the big climax”

As Mayhem about to write on his notebook, he notices the arrival of Princess Celestia

He growls “Damn it! That’s cursed Princess always ruined the fun!” He hide himself in the shadowy background to not get caught by her.

Princess Celestia arrives in front of Elements of Harmony and she look around the messes “Oh my dear, what just happens?”

Spike is limping toward Princess Celestia with a calming face “Well, Princess Celestia. I’m so happy that you come to my party because.......” and then his calm face disappears into a more upsetting expression and start to shouting “I WAS ALMOST KILLED BY MY OWN STATUE! SHINING ARMOR PUNCHED CADENCE, TWILIGHT AND ME! ALL OF CRYSTAL PONIES TURN INTO PLUSHIES FOR NO GOOD REASON AND RAINBOW IS COVERED WITH TRASH!”

“Hey!” Rainbow called as she constantly try to get up but keep on slipping on the puddle

Spike laid down on the ground “My party is ruined! Why does the whole world want to kill me? What did I do to them to deserve this?!”

Pinkie Pie looked at you “That sound like all official writers of the show since they have a grudge toward our young Spike for some reason.... why is that?” She then look at Spike who is still upset about his ruined celebration party while Rarity & Twilight comfort the young dragon, “I think fanfic writers did better job of handling Spike than official writers”

Twilight approached Princess Celestia “Princess, what are you doing here?”

Princess Celestia sighed “Discord’s gone”

The group gasped, “WHAT?!” Fluttershy asked in disbelief

“What do you means he’s gone?!” Twilight is bewildering about this revelation.

“Discord is no where to be seen in his home dimension or Ponyville..... he’s gone, I can’t find his current whereabouts and I had a dream last night that someponies kidnapped Discord”

Fluttershy doesn’t take this news really well “Kidnapped?!” She cried into her own hands, “It’s all my fault! If we had invited him to the party, he wouldn’t be kidnapped!” Celestia comfort Fluttershy while rest of Elements of Harmony especially Twilight feeling guilty for what they did to Discord before his apparent kidnapping.

Princess Celestia spoke up “Tell me, where did you leave him last?”

Twilight sighed as she believes she’s responsible for Discord’s “kidnapping”, “Princess, The last time I speak with him, I told him off by telling him that it’s best to not invite him for Spike’s celebration party so he wouldn’t ruin his celebration party” Twilight look around the place, “I guess I deserve all of this mess because what I said to Discord”

The rest of Elements of Harmony, Spike and Princess Celestia comfort Twilight with Applejack speak up “Don’t blame yourself, Sugarcube, we are to blame too. We should’ve invite Discord to the party but instead we let him get kidnapped by those varmint”

“Yeah, we’re supposed to be his friends but we let our anger get the best of us and now, we don’t know where are they keeping Discord at” Rainbow added.

Twilight looked up to her friends and seeing how Fluttershy is heartbroken about Discord as she hang her head in shame and thought ‘I’m sorry Fluttershy, I didn’t means to let his happens’

Mayhem come out of the shadowy background and he have no sympathy to Elements of Harmony since they weren’t being friends to his beloved messiah.

“Such a disappointment” he laments, “You guys are supposed to representing friendship and yet, all of you treated my messiah coldly! This is unforgivable! No pony will ever hurt my father.... EVER AGAIN!”

Mayhem writes on his notebook

“Elements of Harmony, Spike and Celestia falls asleep as all of them put on the cage”

Elements of Harmony, Spike and Princess Celestia are feeling doozy

“Guys? Why do I feel like sleeping all of a sudden?” Pinkie Pie asked before she’s asleeping.

“Even I have so much energy, I still tired for no rea....” Rainbow fall asleep

“I can’t go asleeping just yet!” Spike falls asleep

Each of them falls asleep and leaves Twilight and Fluttershy as Twilight look at Fluttershy

“Fluttershy, please forgive me......” Twilight falls asleep

“Twiiiiiilight!” Fluttershy tries to stay awake but unfortunately, she falls asleep.

Elements of Harmony, Spike & Princess Celestia are magically put on a large cage to fit all of them at once! Mayhem approached the laugh and he have a pissed off look

“You hurt my savior too many time! I won’t let all of you hurt him again!”

Mayhem burst into hysterical laugh like a mad man before stopping himself

“Man! why do I sound like a supervillain all of a sudden? I’m a good guy and Elements of Harmony are real bad guys!”

Mayhem writes on his notebook

“The cage that contain Elements of Harmony, Spike & Celestia are transport to a cavern”

The cage disappears in front of Mayhem who grinning.

“Much better”

Mayhem continues his hysterical laughter as he land on the ground back and forward as he’s very happy that he succeeded on getting rid of them.

“Man! My messiah will be pleases that Elements of Harmony will no longer bother him anymore!”

He get up and walk away from the ruins of Spike’s celebration party.

Author's Note

Oh no! Elements of Harmony, Spike and Princess Celestia are trapped in an unknown cavern!

Will Discord ever find in his heart to forgive them or will forever hate them and be with his new family?!

I like to apologize to our resident young Dragon for almost killing him.... my bad! :fluttershysad:

EDIT: TBH, I really don’t have a name for Mayhem’s mystical notebook and it would be helpful if you give a name for the notebook.....surprise me!