Simulacrum in Equestria

by Oaoadil

Rating: teen
Tags: Cutie Mark Crusaders, Violence, Princess Celestia, Crossover, Anthro, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Princess Luna
Length: 3704

What will happen if the killer with the bloodlust will find himself in the peaceful world?

Nightmare. That's how the killer call himself. Damned to an eternal life of torment, he satisfies his endless bloodlust on the sport of survival. But what will happen if he will enter in unknown rift and find himself in another world? And will become, as he says, skin bag?
(That's not connected with Apex ponies, it's an another story)

Cancelled. The link to rewritten story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469487/synthetic-nightmare

Published 2020-05-23 15:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2020-05-30 05:09:28 UTC

Chapter 1

'Fear. They only think they know what fear is. I know what means fear. When you see the face, which haunts you in nightmares and you see this in the mirror. But you know, it's not a dream. It's a mirror. It's not your nightmare. It's you. Your face. Now I know what fear is.' - R.

King's Canyon

Revenant was walking in the bunker and searching for ammo. He had a violet body shield, helmet, backpack, and knockdown shield. He was armed with Sentinel and Re-45 with all modifications (purple). He also had two frag grenades. His teammates: Caustic and Crypto were fighting with other squad and Revenant was heading to them. Not because he wanted to save them. Because he wanted to kill someone. Well, also he needed meatbags like shields. Suddenly he saw a rift. 'Hmm, the rift. If it will transport me to the enemy squad, I will kill two rabbits with one shot.' With those words, Revenant entered the rift, which disappeared after that. Meanwhile Caustic and Crypto had already killed the enemy squad. Then Crypto noticed that Revenant's icon on his screen...disappeared. Crypto was tapping something, while Caustic approached him and asked:

"What are you doing?"

"Our simulacrum is gone. My radars don't detect him." Caustic was confused, then he asked:

"How is that possible? I know we can exit the match at any time, but Revenant doesn't leave them. He is waiting for respawning to kill more."

"I don't know, but I think we should move to the safe zone."

"Agree." With those words, both headed to the airbase.

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It was a peaceful night in the castle. Until the unknown rift didn't show up. Soon from there, the figure appeared. It was an earth pony with red fur and yellow mane & tail. His eyes were yellow too, but something was wrong with them. They were emotionless. The figure looked around and said:

"Hm, this doesn't look like King's Canyon." Suddenly he felt that something was wrong. Then he looked at his arms, legs, and body. The pony was speechless. Then he said:

"What the hell?" He then noticed the fountain. He approached it and saw his face. It was a pony face. His fur was red, but the one around in the area of his face was white. Then he looked at his equipment. He relaxed a little when he saw that everything was there. He was wearing a simple hoody with black pants and sneakers.

"Okay, I am in another world. And worst of all,...I am fucking meatbag!" shouted Revenant. Now he was very pissed. He needed to kill someone. Suddenly he heard:

"Hey, who is there?" Revenant turned around and saw...thing. It was like a flyer but had arms, legs, and chicken head. It was wearing the armor, which meant that he was a soldier. Revenant smiled and turned his hand into the knife. He approached the griffon and tried to pounce him, but...he couldn't. He only felt the pain. Then Revenant remembered that he wasn't a robot anymore and mentally facepalmed. Meanwhile, griffon yelped and turned around. He took his spear and hit Revenant into the belly with the not sharp end. Revenant moaned in pain and fell to the ground, while griffon approached him and said:

"Who are you and what are you doing here?"

"Shut up and die!" Revenant threw into the guard his sphere and it exploded. The guard was disorientated and Revenant grabbed his spear and stabbed him into the chest. Griffon began coughing the blood and died. Revenant looked around and saw a door in the castle. When he entered it, he was met by the pictures with griffons and ponies. On most of them, ponies were slaughtered by griffons.

"Good pictures. So realistic represent of violence." Soon he saw big doors with a royal engraving. When Revenant opened them, he saw a throne and the picture upon it. It showed the king of griffons. Suddenly he heard the other door cracking and he quickly disappeared. The doors opened and revealed the king. He approached his throne and sat on it. Soon the guard entered the room and bowed:

"My king. We have an intruder. He killed one of us and hiding somewhere." King raised an eyebrow and asked:

"You know how does he look?"

"No, my king."

"Warn all guards to be ready for a fight." Guard got up and exited the room. King was thinking and wondering who and how intruder sneaked into the castle without being noticed. His thoughts were interrupted by the smoke, which appeared out of nowhere and revealed Revenant. King got up from his throne and grabbed his sword.

"Whoever you are, you just killed one of my guards and now you will be punished."

"<Chuckle>, you are welcome to try." King charged at Revenant, while he was standing on the spot. When the king was close enough, Revenant gave to him an uppercut and sent him flying across the room. King got up and rubbed his chin. He underestimated his opponent. Now he changed his tactic. He began waiting for Revenant attack first. Revenant knew what the king was doing (he had such opponents before) and turned into his shadow mode. King was surprised but remained calm. Then Revenant charged at the king and pounced his spear. King dodged it and hit Revenant into the mouth. Simulacrum backed away holding his jaw and threw his sphere. King hit it with sword and the sphere flew to the throne, where it exploded.

"Hmm, nice try. But predictable." Revenant took his spear and threw it into the king, who blocked it but Revenant approached him and shoved the dagger into his chest. King looked at Revenant with widened eyes and coughed the blood. Revenant pulled out the dagger and the king fell on the ground. Simulacrum picked up the sword and began looking at it.

"Good sword, I will take it." With those words, Revenant shot the king in the head. Suddenly the doors opened and revealed the captain of the guards.

"My king, what ha-" He saw the dead king and his murderer. He shouted:

"What did you do!? You killed our king! You will pay for it!" Captain charged at Revenant. He tried to hit him, but simulacrum dodged it. Suddenly captain pulled out the knife and threw it into Revenant. But Revenant dodged it and shot him in the chest. Captain grabbed his belly and fell to the ground. Soon he died because of blood loss. Revenant approached him and began looting his body. In his pockets, he found some coins.

"Hmm, I think it will be useful." Revenant got up and headed to the door, but he heard:

"What is going on here?" He turned around and saw a griffon girl. When she saw the dead captain, she covered her mouth and shouted:

"Dad! No!" With those words, she approached the corpse and began sobbing. Then she glared at Revenant who was staring at her.

"You killed my father!"

"< Chuckle>, I killed a lot of people and many of them had people who loved them. Some of them visited me to revenge, but as you see, they didn't succeed. So, if you have enough brains, you won't attack me." Then Revenant headed to the exit, while griffin was glaring at him. She knew that Revenant was strong for her, so she tried to not her emotions control her. Revenant turned off his shadow mode and soon he was in the town. He decided to hide in a dark alley to avoid any attention to him. He hid in the dark alley to avoid any attention.

Chapter 2

After a few minutes, Revenant discovered from the talks that he was in Equestria and this place was Griffonstone. As he predicted from the pictures in the castle, griffons didn't like ponies and as Revenant was a pony, he decided to get out of there. He saw that the town was situated on the tree, which was planted on the top of the mountain. After a few minutes of stealth, he suddenly saw a truck that was heading to the edge of the city. Revenant hid in the truck and was waiting for a good moment. After 30 minutes, he peeked from his cover and saw that the truck was near the ship. Soon griffon pushed the truck inside the ship and it began moving. Revenant came out of the truck and looked at his surroundings. He was in the cargo hold. There were many bags, luggage, etc. He sat on the bag and began waiting. Soon he was very irritated. Suddenly he heard the rumbling in his stomach.

"Ugh. I am a skin bag now and I need food." Revenant began searching for something edible and soon found some apples. He took a bit and was...surprised to taste so delicious apple. He was a robot for long and forgot about the taste. Soon the ship stopped at the port. Revenant came out of the cargo hold and jumped in the water. Then he climbed on the pier and headed to the town. 'Hmm, if griffons don't like ponies, why they are trading with them. However, why do I care at all?' Revenant looked around and saw the town. It was completely different from Griffonstone. There weren't houses on the trees and ponies didn't live on the mountain.

"Please, leave me alone." Revenant turned to the right and saw mare who was mugging by the stallion in the mask in the alley.

"Where is the money?" said the stallion.

"I have nothing. That's all I have."

"Lie!" Stallion slapped mare and she fell on the ground. Suddenly he felt that someone put the hand on his shoulder. He turned around and was met by the dagger in the belly.

"Agh!" Stallion grabbed his belly, while Revenant pulled out the dagger and sliced stallion's neck. The blood spread on the Revenant clothes (thankfully, hoody was the red color). Meanwhile, mare recovered from the slap and saw the dead body. She yelped, but Revenant held her mouth.

"Say a word and I will kill you." Mare nodded and Revenant released her mouth.

"Now tell me, where am I?"

"You are in Baltimare," said mare.

"Hmm, does this town have any hotels?"

"Yes. We have one called 'Sleeping pony'. It's right behind you." Revenant turned around and saw a building with a sign on which was written the name of the hotel. Revenant looked at the mare and said:

"Run."

"W-what?"

"Run. Before I kill you." Mare quickly got up and ran away, while Revenant headed to the hotel. He entered the building and approached the receptionist.

"I want to rent a room." But the receptionist didn't react. He was sleeping. Revenant punched him into the nose and stallion fell on the floor.

"Ouch, man. What the hell?" He got up and was grabbed by the Revenant.

"I want to rent a room."

"F-for h-how many days?"

"One night."

"I-t w-will be 10 bits." Revenant released the receptionist and gave him the coins. Stallion took them and gave to Revenant the key. Soon Revenant approached his room. He entered it and was met by blue wallpapers. There was one bed, two chests of drawers, a lamp and a table with a chair. Revenant sat at the table and began thinking about what he will do next.

"Now, I need to find a way to my world. I need to find someone smart enough. Ugh. I had to ask this woman more questions. I hope this world is modern as mine." Soon he began feeling dizzy. He remembered that now he also needed the sleep. He sighed and lied on the bed.

Meanwhile

In front of the hotel, 6 ponies were standing and holding melee weapons.

"Okay, are you sure, it's here?"

"Yeah. This motherbucker is here. He is very stupid if he thinks that he can kill one of our brothers and get away with it. Let's go, boys." With those words, bandits entered the hotel. The receptionist was sleeping and the leader punched him into the nose.

"Ouch, dude, what do-"

"Where is he?" asked the leader. The receptionist recognized him and asked with a trembling voice.

"W-who?"

"Today, one pony rented a room there. Where is he?"

"His number is 12." The leader released the receptionist and headed to room 12 with his criminals. Meanwhile, the receptionist was rubbing his nose and said:

"Ugh. I need to find another job." Criminals surrounded the door and one of them kicked it. The door opened and bandits entered the room. They looked around, but...didn't find him. Meanwhile Revenant was taking a crap in the toilet. When he washed his arms, he heard that someone entered his room. Thankfully, he had RE-45. He quickly opened the door.

"What the-" He didn't end his sentence because of the bullet, which went through his skull. Revenant began firing at bandits, who didn't expect him to have so powerful weapon. 4 bandits were dead, while the leader with one criminal ran out of the room and headed to the exit.

"What the hell was that?"

"I don't know, but we-" BAM Bandit's head exploded and some pieces got on the leader's clothes. He threw up because of so horrible scene. Suddenly he felt a sharp pain in his leg. He yelped and fell to the ground. He looked at his leg and saw a small round wound from which the blood was coming. Suddenly he saw someone's legs. The leader looked up and saw Revenant who was holding Sentinel.

"Who the hell are you?"

"Death." Revenant grabbed the dagger and shoved it in the leader's chest.

"Geez, dude." Revenant looked up and noticed the receptionist who was watching him. Revenant pulled out the dagger and headed to him. Stallion's eyes widened and he backed away.

"Wait, dude. Please, don't kill me. I won't tell anypony about this. I will say that I was sleeping. Everypony in the town knows that I have a chronic lack of sleep." Revenant stopped and began thinking. 'I can easily kill this guy. But I don't need any problems with the authorities there. Okay, live skin bag.'

"If you lie, I will kill everyone you love and care. And I will do it in front of you. Understand?" Stallion nodded. Revenant headed to his room, locked the door, and finally fell asleep.

Legends' restroom

Legends were taking a rest after another match. When they knew discovered that Revenant is gone missing, the first thought that he was in the restroom. But they didn't find him there.

"Interesting, where is Revenant?" asked Mirage.

"I think, he is preparing something," said Loba.

"Nah, I think he-"

"Everybody, take a look at this," said Crypto pointing to the screen. All legends looked at the computer and saw Revenant entering the rift.

"Strange, I wasn't on this location in that match," said Wraith.

"Now, we know that Revenant may be stuck in another dimension. We need to return him."

"Why? Are you missing his grumpiness and desire to kill people?"

"I am more worried about the citizens of this dimension, who can be harmed by a simulacrum," said Wraith.

"Agree. We must pull him back as soon as possible," said Lifeline.

"Okay, I will open-"

"All legends should be in the dropship in 5 minutes," said the announcer.

"We will deal with it later. Now, ladies, let's move," commanded Bangalore. Everyone headed to the dropship.

Chapter 3

Baltimare. Morning

Revenant opened his eyes and murmured something about noises. Suddenly he smelled something. Then he pinched his nose and said:

"Oh, what the hell is that smell?" He remembered the yesterday events and saw corpses of his victims. He sighed in annoyance and quickly grabbed all his stuff and exited the room. When he approached the hall, he saw police ponies who were investigating the murderer. Revenant backed away and decided to find another exit. He remembered that he had a window in his room and decided to exit the hotel through it. He ran to his room and opened the window. He came out of the building and landed in the alley.

"I need to get out of this goddamn town," said Revenant. He peeked out from the corner and saw no cops. He sneaked to another alley and saw indicating signs. He saw 'Train station'. He ran to the direction of it. Soon he saw a building with ticket windows and benches. Revenant shoved his hand in his pocket and pulled out his money. There were 15 bits. Revenant approached one window ticket and saw a nameplate.

Manehattan.......30 bits
Vanhoover.......40 bits
Crystal Empire.......50 bits
Ponyville.......15 bits

Revenant looked at the coins and smirked.

"Seem like I am heading to Ponyville. Oh God, I really should kill the guy who created such stupid names." He approached the window ticket and said:

"One ticket to Ponyville." He gave to the cashier the money. Mare counted the coins and nodded. She gave a ticket to Revenant and said:

"Have a nice day, sir."

"The same to you, meatbag."

"What?" But Revenant didn't answer. He entered the train and sat on the chair. After a few minutes, Revenant began feeling the boredom. He looked at the window and saw beautiful mountains and green forest. Suddenly he felt that someone leaned on him. He turned around and saw a mare. She had a puffy light pink hair and yellow fur. Revenant was irritated and murmured something about skinbags. Suddenly mare fell on his knees. Now Revenant had enough. He lifted mare's head by pulling her hair. She woke up and said:

"Ou ou, that hurts."

"Never do that again. Understand?" Revenant glared at the mare, who a little backed away and whispered:

"Sorry." Revenant turned back to the window, while ponies in the wagon began whispering about how he is so rude and angry. Simulacrum didn't pay attention to it. Suddenly one pony got up and approached Revenant. It was an orange stallion with a blue mane. Simulacrum noticed that and asked:

"What do you want meatbag?"

"Apologize." Revenant raised an eyebrow and asked:

"What?"

"Apologize to Fluttershy." Stallion pointed to the mare. Fluttershy said:

"Flash, that's not necessary."

"Yeah, listen to your girlfriend, skinbag." Flash's eyes widened and he said:

"She isn't my girlfriend. Just a friend. And I want you to apologize to her." Revenant began...laughing. He laughed out loud. The entire wagon was confused and shocked.

"..haha! You really should listen to yourself. You, miserable meatbag, want me to apologize to skinbag who dared to lean on me. I would prefer to fight with heavily armored soldiers with a knife." Now Flash was very pissed. He lifted his hand and punched Revnant...but Simulacrum grabbed his fist before it connected with his face. Revenant twisted it and Flash screamed in pain. Meanwhile, the train stopped at the station. Revenant grabbed Flash and threw him outside breaking the window. He landed on the platform in front of ponies. Everyone gasped and covered their mouths. Revenant headed to the door and came out of the wagon. Meanwhile, some ponies surrounded Flash and began providing medical care. Revenant chuckled and headed to the town. The town was more colorful than Baltimare. And ponies here were more friendly. Suddenly he was tackled to the ground by a pink mare with curly pink hair. She claimed:

"Hi! I am Pinkie Pie! Are you new here? I will-"

"Get off me!" With those words, Revenant punched mare into the nose. She yelped and fell to the ground, rubbing her nose, while Revenant got up and said:

"If you will do that again, I will rip off your heart!" Meanwhile, everypony was watching them and gasped. Suddenly Revenant felt the pain in his back and flew on 8 meters. He moaned and looked at his attacker. It was a cyan mare with rainbow-colored hair.

"Hey, bastard! Don't you dare hurt friend!" Revenant shouted and charged at Rainbow Dash. She quickly dodged the attack and punched simulacrum into his belly. Revenant fell on the ground, holding his stomach. Rainbow Dash glared at him and approached Pinkie, who got up on her legs.

"Are you alright?"

"Yeah, I am fine. I shouldn't jump on a new pony like that."

"Don't tell this, Pinkie. He punched you and-" Revenant approached her behind and hit her with a plank. She fell on the ground unconscious. Pinkie gasped and looked at simulacrum who threw the plank on the ground and headed to the random direction. Pinkie Pie approached him and shouted:

"Oh no, meany pants! You won't go anywhere until you-"

"Apologize to her. Yeah yeah, had already heard that. Piss off before I will cut off your arm!" Pinkie wanted to say something but suddenly she smelled something. She sniffed Revenant and sensed the smell of...blood. He can kill her. Without hesitation. It's true. She yelped and ran away, while Revenant slightly shook his head and walked away.

Legends' restroom

After another match, Legends began discussing how they will bring back Revenant.

"Alright, Wraith will investigate where the simulacrum went and send someone in there," said Crypto.

"But who will go?" asked Gibraltar. Everyone looked at each other.

"I won't go. I am too handsome to die," claimed MIrage.

"Okay, we need someone stupid enough to go to an unknown place with a smile," said Bangalore. Suddenly the doors opened and revealed Pathfinder.

"Hi, guys. I just polished my grapple." Legends looked at Pathfinder and then at each other. They smiled, while Pathfinder made a question mark on his screen.

"Hey, Path. We need you for the mission," said Bangalore.

"Cool, I am happy that my friends need me." Crypto began explaining to the robot what to do, while other legends were watching them.

"Are you sure we need to send him in the rift?" asked Lifeline.

"Yes. If he will meet citizens, he will just ask them to be his friends or ask them where Revenant is," said Mirage.

Announcement

I will rewrite this story because I think it's a little bad.