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Broken Promise

by Nailah
Down on her luck, Lightning Dust has no alternatives but to ask Rainbow Dash for help, will Rainbow Dash forgive her or will this lead down a dark path for our heroine?

After leaving the Wonderbolts Accedemy, Lightning Dust was never the same. Bitter, scorn, and down trot, she ventured her way through Equestria only for doors to be slammed in her face repeatedly, when no one else will help, she turns to the last pony she'd ever expect to forgive her for her trangressions, will Rainbow Dash forgive her, or will it lead down a dark part for our heroine?

Originally written for Quills and Sofa's speedwrite prompt of "Never should have come here."
This is the extended version. I didn't think to copy the original speed write, so you get to see this.

Preread by: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/302575/The+Red+Parade, https://www.fimfiction.net/user/218083/Cosmic+Eclipse, ninja
Edited by: No pony. My editor has been really busy! (All mistakes are my own.)

Art credit to: https://www.deviantart.com/poniesplus/gallery/

Teen
Incomplete
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Violence
 
RSGL

16795 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

6 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Return 2020-06-01 18:09:07 UTC
    2314
  2. Chapter 2: Delusions 2020-06-10 21:07:18 UTC
    2614
  3. Chapter 3: The Talk 2020-07-15 18:07:28 UTC
    3196
  4. Chapter 4:Fight or Flight 2020-09-23 22:04:03 UTC
    4091
  5. Chapter 5: Never should've come here 2021-02-18 04:37:40 UTC
    2826
  6. Chapter six: Dust 2022-04-23 20:21:28 UTC
    1754