The Divine Eclipseby The ToasterChaptersGriffin JudgmentQuestioning, learning, growingThe Silver ThroneThe Wrath of the SunBattle of the GodsThe Determined moonA prophecy being fulfilledGriffin JudgmentDarkness, it was the only thing Black could see, he hadn’t gone to hell, that was obvious, he just fell, and he fell even more into a hole of infinite darkness... We won't be defeated by someone that believes in only himself! Trunks.... That disgraceful mortal, he had ended all his hard work, all the sacrifice he had made to bring paradise to the cosmos. yes, the scars of the battles were painful, they hurted his heart deep. Seeing so much destruction. But it was necessary. A bright future would reign, and those worms had prevented it, there was very little left. After the collection of the super dragon balls, to change bodies with the goku, and to get that incredible power, it was all for nothing. He closed his eyes and tightened his grip on hate, tightened it so much that inside the fist started to bleed, he took a deep breath and exhaled, it was past now... He had been defeated, the only thing he could do now is to curse himself for be too confident, he shouldn't have played with those mortals so much, he should have destroyed them, quick and easy..... And now here he was, falling into an infinite abyss, in the infinite barrier that divides the dimensions, and he was destined to continue to fall. In that time when he was falling, he could stop to reflect. To question his own ideals. To think why humans were as they were. he had time to meditate. But something in the middle of his fall caught his attention. A small white cut, a small source of light, it looked like a portal, one of the most improbable things he had ever expected, an error in creation? a defect in space-time? He would not have the answers if he stood doing nothing, he slowly floated in the direction of that light, reaching out to dazzle it. The closer he got, the more it diminished, the more he looked like a tiny star, a star in the middle of empty space. He then caught it. He brought his fist close to his face, and opened his hand, the light then shone, she seemed to have an explosion of sudden brightness. Forcing Black to put her hand in front so as not to be blinded, she seemed to completely modify the environment, passing of total darkness, for total clarity. The place where he felt the light, started to change it, it started to enter his hand, it started to spread through it, and his hand started to change color, not only that, started to grow...fur...? It started spreading from hand to arms, from arms to shoulders and belly. It hurt, it hurt a lot, he was screaming in pain. It felt like his body was on fire, his eyes seemed to glow, his ears pricked, and he felt a gigantic pain in the back, in the forehead. It seemed that the skin was stretched as if he were being molded. He felt like a metal stake had grown inside of him and now it was coming out with force. This endless pain lasted countless hours, but after a while, it stopped, he was panting, what the hell was that...? Looking at his body, he realized that now his body was completely gray, he was running his hand over his body, he could feel a soft fur, and he now had a tail! It had the same colors of his hair, he could see that it now shined, like stars were in his own hair and moving on its own. It was magnificent. His head had streached and he felt something strange behind him, he noticed two huge wings coming out of his back. He was disbelieving in himself, he was a horse now...? he had a new body...? No... Crossing dimensions has never had the effects of changing bodies.... Was his body adapting to the new dimension...? it was the most likely theory, so he went put his hand on his head and sighed in disbelief, but his hand hit something, touching it and feeling it, he could feel a horn.... He now had a horn.... This was getting better and better.... He then looked at his free open hand again, the same hand where it all started, where all these events took place, and he realized that it started to blink again, and started to glow again, completely covering Black's body, this time , something new appeared, an armor... An armor with a symbol in the middle of it, it was the symbol of a black ball with white fire around it, an Eclipse... He felt something this time burning on his right side of his butt... or flank... He blushed with embarrassment when he felt this sensation, looking at the location of the pain, he could see that it shined, forming a symbol, the same symbol of the armor he was wearing. He could see, that his body had become something new, he was still a warrior, he didn’t need the armor, However, he felt that this armor showed his superiority to any mortal that would look at him. The armor seemed to be made of titanium, and it shinned like diamonds, and he smiled when thinking about it. This armor was designed and destined for a true god, him. But what decent name for your new body? he was still Goku black, but in that dimension certainly there was no goku... Then he looked at the symbol again and his smile grew even more, Eclipse, his name would be Eclipse. Every piece of the puzzle was fitting now, fate was giving him a new chance. A new dimension for him to save from mortals, a chance for redemption! And an Eclipse demonstrated that he was the personification of the balance between the sun and the moon, or rather, good and evil! He then looked again at that blinding light that he was holding, it then left his hand and flew forward, doubling from its size, and this time, throwing a ray of light in his direction. She again surrounded his body, but this time, he felt a different sensation, as if he was using instant transmission, and suddenly, he disappeared, in a flash of light. Icy mountains, was that what the newly named Eclipse was in, after being blinded again by that sphere, he slowly stood up looking at his surroundings, an open field? convenient... He then started to concentrate his ki to try to detect other forms of life, his horn started to shine as he detected some life signatures not far, which surprised him. "Interesting... It seems that my ki can now be manifested by only one point, my horn, and not all over my body...." Even though he thought it was weird, he just ignored it, he had more important things to do, looking at the direction of the Ki signatures, he could see a.... Tree...? Yes... A tree, lonely among the mountains, with mortal dwellings, impressive, mortals are like a plague, they are always in places you would never expect. However he was feeling in a good mood, he would watch these mortals before deciding whether divine punishment would be necessary. Focusing his ki again he flew, feeling his wings flap to give him an impulse and he flew towards that small town. However, he was immediately disappointed. When he was able to see the city, the people there had front half resembling an eagle with the talons and wings of such. where as the back half is clearly that of a lion. he saw that the inhabitants flew from one side to the other, they did not come into any form of interaction or eye contact, and when some of them accidentally hit each other, a fight would start. The city, it was in ruins, he didn't even need to come close to see scenes that didn't surprise him. Robberies, gamblings, stealling, some guards assaulting some innocent bystanders, and other worse things that he felt disgusted at just looking. They are just barbarians, do not think before acting and keep behaving like irrational violent animals, acting by pure instinct, wearing down all the divine knowledge given to them by the gods. He sighed. It was no surprise, no matter the dimension, mortals were still a huge disappointment for the gods, and if he found those responsible for these mortals, he would make a point of punishing them accordingly. He kept gliding watching the city, and disappointed himself more and more as he watched it, while he looked at the scenes that irritated him, some of the residents saw him, most ignored him. But a group flew at him with malicious smiles, he already he knew what was going to happen, and he was prepared. "Well well, what do we have here...? A lost little Pony?" He kept a neutral face when facing the group, with his hands behind his back he could observe well how the group was formed. On the sides obviously they were the henchmen, big and strong. And in the middle was the leader. Even if he did not reach the stature or height of the cronies, he was with that ambitious look. He was certainly the leader. Eclipse made an "Hunf" grunt, and returned to observe the city, completely ignoring the leader. Who immediatly lost his smile and gritted his teeth. He waved to the other two henchmen. Both nodded and both flew to both sides of the god. A smile threatened to appear in Eclipse, that was a reaction expected from mortals, they probably saw his armor and realized its possible value, and like any being with a mind as inferior as theirs , they will simply try to take with brute force to gain for their own benefits. how pathetic. The god just looked at both brutes and returned his attention to the "Chief" of the group. "Listen, 'Your Highness', you seem to have a lot of nice things with you, no matter where you are from, if you don't pass it to us, the beating is going to be inevitable." With the comment, he closed his eyes, and started to chuckle, and the chuckle changed to a huge laugh. Which surprised the assailants, but immediatly regained their composure. And they were not happy with the ignored threats. "We warned you 'princess'! boys, get him!" both smiled and flew quickly towards Eclipse, and each threw a punch at him, with a dark smile Eclipse suddenly just vanished, and both thugs hit each other in the face. The boss was very confused and started looking around desperately. "What?? how?? where did he g-" He couldn't finish the sentence, suddenly spitting blood. Looking to the side while he trembled in fear. He could see the god smiling in a maniacal way, while impaling him with a silver blade formed in his hand. The henchmen could do nothing but look horrified at their boss. a dark and powerfull voice then bloomed out of the armored Stallion. "Wrenched mortal, cleaning your race from these lands will be a privilege granted to me, you are mere trash that corrupt these lands." He let out a cry of pain as Eclipse penetrated his sword deeper into his back. Making him vomit more blood while the god's smile only increased. He looked in horror at the alicorn "W-who... n-no, w-what a-are you??" The god response was just a chuckle at the question. Then unceremoniulsy removed the sword from the back of his victim, who with his eyes rolled and his last breath, fell from the enormous height that they found themselves, disappearing in the huge fog that formed below. That death caught the attention of everyone who flew around, those who ignored the attempted theft, now looked horrified at the result and focused their vision on Alicorn. Who was proudly showing himself after his act. Black looked at the henchmen smiling, while they looked back with massive amounts of fear. Sweat poured from their faces and they had difficulties to maintain their postures after the cruel act. Eclipse then faced the sun, dropping his smile. "Who am i?" He then looked back at the thugs, that flinched when meeting his gaze. He just smiled more. Streaching his arms as he made a posture of magnificance as the sun shinned behind him. "I am the supreme god, the divine purifier " he looked back at the terrified griffons, the crowd looked with horror, anger and confusion at the self-appointed god who now opened the palm of his hand. His horn glowed with a dark light, while in his hand an orb of energy was formed, increasing in size. "I am a judge of the gods, and I will correct all the mistakes they made in creating you, I declare your species to be guilty, and the punishment.... IT'S TOTAL PURIFICATION!" Black then after shouting those words, launched the energy ball towards the crowd. Who laughed, not believing the words of that crazy pony. But their laughter was cut off by the noise of the energy orb tripling in size. And then turning into a gigantic sun falling towards the mountain. Everyone screamed in horror and despair as they tried to run or fly away and accidentally running over each other in their attempts to escape. But for nothing. As the fireball consumed the whole mountain. A gigantic explosion was made, disintegrating the mountain in moments. The proud capital city of the Griffons, Griffonstone. Had been completally annihilated. Eclipse just watched the huge crater with his arms crossed and with a smirk. As promised, he would rid the universe of undesirable mortals, and nothing would stop him. A new god had arrived in Equestria, and he it would be one of the greatest dangers that perhaps the whole world had ever seen. Author's Note Hello everyone! This is an idea that has been in my head for a long time, and I'm happy to finally be able to post it on the site! I hope you like it and criticize me! every opinion is accepted! peace! Questioning, learning, growingDarkness, it was all he could see in this forest, it was normal to a certain level, except for the mystical beasts that the gods thought they had discarded, he had gotten rid of those who tried to get close to him, almost feeling sorry for the pathetic attempts, he thought for a while of obliterating this forest, pointing his palm at the ground, a sphere of light appearing in his hand, however before he could throw it on the ground.... A cry, a cry of despair, as he heard hurried footsteps of what looked like a running group, he then clenched his fist, undoing the ki sphere, he then smiled, mortals, certainly heard about him, will regret trying to get where they shouldn't. He slowly walked to where the noises were, he slowly formed a Ki sword in his hand, his gray aura focused entirely on his hand, while his manic smile increased even more. Celestia sighed, she was very stressed, all the meetings she was part of revolved around that Stallion, the possible destruction of the Griffons, or the Eclipse that occurred, everyone was terrified, and she was tired of repeating the same things, the same lies, she was mentally exhausted, lying to her little ponies wasn’t easy, her sister also didn’t help, paranoid and thinking about a thousand and one things that could happen in the future, she already assured Luna that everything that could be done had been done, patrols had been tripled at the borders, search forces were sent to all corners of Equestria, she just hoped it would be enough, she walked down the corridor, towards one specific wall, and she slowly ran her hand over the paintings of wall, she put pressure on a part of the wall, and slowly the block went deeper into the wall, and the whole wall started to shake, and it went deeper, and then suddenly, that part went to the side. A passage had been opened, Celestia slowly entered the newly revealed room, it was dark and dusty, she then focused her magic on her horn, starting a light, illuminating the whole room, there were a series of paintings on the walls to the ceiling, representing everything that Celestia and Luna had passed, the wars, the challenges, their accession to power, Nightmare Moon, and the appearance of the new carriers of the elements of Harmony, everything that had happened until now was registered in these walls, but something stood out in all paintings, as they all pointed to a much larger painting, In it, everyone, Celestia, Luna, The main six, were blinded by the lights of an Eclipse symbol, while a figure showed itself in a pose with open arms, while lights came out from behind of the Eclipse he did, it made her more worried, those prophecies all said that this new figure could change everything, a new god... She didn't know how to react to it, but the prophecies didn't lie, she was proved that when Nightmare Moon came... Many of the paintings gave hints of the future, but none mentioned this new figure, it was as if he had appeared out of nowhere, who was this new being? Eclipse kept his maniacal smile while eating a fruit, sitting on a manticore's body, around, more and more bodies, all dead with holes in their torsos and some without heads, Eclipse felt disappointed, he clearly expected more, only some demonstrated capable of using Ki, others flew and some used only brute force, all had endings equal to any mortal, a quick death, he looked at the road they going for before he intercepted them, a village, he smiled, perfect, one more species that he would judge, he threw the fruit aside, while getting up from the body, he streached, and gave one sigh, and walked towards that little village, noticing a sign a few meters ahead, "Ponyville", he noticed that the village had a tall highly decorated and colorfull main building in the middle, a huge farm on the side, on the top he could see every tiny detail, she was way more.... Alive, it was like it lived in harmony with the nature, different for the last one, that was totally dead, and corrupt, one positive point for this society, he slowly entered the village, noticing the movement of its citizens, the closer he got, the more people started to notice him, walking in huge armor, and having wings and horn, it could be said that he was not the most subtle of people, they moved away from him as he entered the village, in fear? respect? Well, he didn't know, this was the first time contacting this mortals, however something stood on his way, a child stood in front of him, looking at him with fascination, she was orange and it had purple hair, and tiny wings, compared to his, it was like one ant compared with a mountain, it made him smile, children, they were what he most appreciated of the foolish mortals, they had monumental innocence, and no lust or evil in their minds, they didn't judge or steal, they only played, they only showed love, before the older mortals corrupt them and bring them to the horrible normal mortal ways of war and malice, he knelt and faced the smallest. "You are an Alicorn, sooo cool!! Almost as cool as Rainbow Dash!!" She would say clearly excited while looking at the God "Your wings are massive! C-can i t-touch t-them??" Anyone in Black's future, who saw this scene, would either be shocked by it, or would not believe it, unbelievable, the destroyer of entire species, genocidal, "Purifier" and hearthless monster of the multiverse, being kind to a child, kneeling in front of the child while everyone around them now looked curiously at the scene, and some smiled. "Yes, little one, I am a deity, I am delighted that the first person who became aware of my greatness is a child, and of course, go ahead..." The little girl's eyes seemed to shine, she slowly extended her hand towards the Eclipse's wings, which in a movement with his wing that shocked everyone around, letting her touch and caress the fur of his silver wing, he was confused, why such reactions? it was not common show empathy? he would look more into this culture of this mortals, she giggled with satisfaction, while he kept something extremely unusual for him, a sincere smile, the feelings of his body were in total conflict with his head, while he understood that he should go ahead with his plan, something inside him screamed for him not to hurt that kind soul, however the judgment falls to everyone, but this little girl showed something to him, this society clearly hadn’t manipulated this little girl’s mind to a killing machine, plus a positive point, she seems to lose her smile as he touched his wings, while starting to looking down, with a sad look, and making Eclipse raise an eyebrow. "Whats wrong little one? Being present to one of the creators of the worlds would leave any mortal feeling honored by my presence." She would lift her head and in a wry smile she would forcefully laugh "N-no! Its not that mister... is that... Your wings are so beautifull... and while mine are such tiny and useless..." Black would shake his head sideways in a negatively while smiling, that little mortal, didn't he understand that she would grow up, didn't mortals bother to teach her that? "You are still young, with time, your wings will grow to become big as mine." She would just be sadder, looking to the side as she clasped her hands tighter than herself. "You don't understand sir... My wings are not developed like the others... Everyone has big wings and mine are tiny, they all make fun of me.... I will never be like you..." Her eyes slowly became more watery, Eclipse felt sorry for the little mortal, that he hated them the most, for small differences, they used it as a reason to mock and exclude each other, so pathetic, so cowardly, he hesitating, slowly extended his hand and put it on her shoulder, doing something he immediately started to question, why? she was a simple and useless mortal, she would live a few years and then die, she would spend like everyone else, a life that could be taken away so easily, even so, he couldn’t, he couldn’t even think about taking her life, a mortal who managed to create his own path and still not be rewarded for his resilience, he was now doing something he would never think he would do, he was wondering, now that he is alone, without his counterpart, he can only stop to reflect, whenever he arrived at a new civilization, Zamasu always reminded them of their objective, and without even a broad vision of the civilization they were about to "judge", they decimated everyone who saw in their path, not even the gods sent to stop them were spared, ironically, while Black had taken the lives of so many without any remorse, even with the cries of despair and begs for mercy, a simple mortal could make him question so much, so much that he fought and sacrificed so much to achieve. Lost in his thoughts, he didn't notice that his touch on the little girl's shoulder, resulted in an unexpected reaction, she without warning, ran and hugged him, the sudden move was without warning, Eclipse was totally shocked, what could he do? he was not expecting that, it had never happened before, he then slowly remembered a family on a planet that did a similar action before they died, before he killed them, they hugged each other, remembering that, he slowly returned the hug, very hesitant, he managed to do it, she cried on his chest, tears streamed down by his armor, while she sobbed, something else he didn’t expect occurred, he started to feel something in his chest, something he had never felt before , it was horrible, he looked like something was burning in his soul. Guilt, he was feeling guilty for what he had done, everything he had done for mortals, did they all deserve his justice? Did everyone deserve death? In that short hug he made with that little girl, brought so many doubts, so many feelings, he was getting completely overwelmed, but he kept his calm, he had decided something at the time, that poor little girl, who had suffered for the idiocy of mortals would be rewarded, he focusing his ki, he passed divine energy to her wings, slowly growing them, forming a huge glow, and with a flash of subto light, everyone had been blinded, when the glow decreased, he let go of the embrace, smilling. She slowly started to open her eyes and looking at her wings, they were obviously not the size of his, but they were not small, they were the normal size for children of that age, she touched and moved them, she couldn't belive, after so much time, after so much time bullied, her wings were big! she was jumping with joy and almost crying, but this time not with sadness, but with happiness. "WINGS! They are big! Yes yes yes yes! I can finally fly high in the skies! Just like Rainbow Dash!! Thank you!....? Mister....?" She dropped her smile while she looked around the crowd, he was no longer there, looking ahead, she could see him slowly walking back to the forest where he came from, disappearing from sight. "W-wait! M-mister! I-i didn't get your name!" However, her screams were useless, she even ran and couldn't reach him, he was already out of sight, she could only put her hands in the middle of her chest and thank that stranger for his enormous generosity. Eclipse had returned to the forest, away from prying eyes from mortals, sitting on a rock in the middle of the forest, in a meditation position, with his eyes closed, he could think, reflect, and think about everything he went through, all the battles, all the tragedies, all his ideals, and in that, he remembered Gowasu, when he heard about Eclipse's ideals I see. However, this is what I believe... justice entails bringing balance between good and evil. Even if evil makes you lose your way, you stay your ground and keep searching for the path of good... is that search not what justice is? It is for that reason that the gods gave humans knowledge. What did he mean about that? Justice was always about good, not evil, that was all that he based his ideals on, that was all the reason he tried to clean up the universe of foolish mortals, they used up the knowledge of the gods with their silly quarrels, the gods were perfect , they were what the whole universe revolved around, we created and showed the way, and even then, they used senseless brutality to achieve what? too much food? more land? more power? Gods are not perfect. Even gods learn and grow. What did he mean by that? Gods were perfect! they were the apex of the worlds! they create and destroy! they bring balance to the universes! he couldn't find an answer, because when he tried to accept one, two more questions arose, he would remain in this state of meditation, he had to find a solution to everything he did, an answer, or at least a way out, he he was upset without knowing why, and he wanted, no, he needed an answer, while he meditated, his silver aura running around his body, stones floating around him, he was watched by eyes between the trees. Eyes that penetrated into the night, watched him intently Author's Note Hello! Thanks for reading! I tried to make the feelings of Black's new body to confuse him, started one conflict within him, leave him with doubts, and try to develop the character better for future chapters, please tell me what you think, thank you and be a good people! The Silver ThroneHe was sitting cross-legged on a rock, stones floated around him, a silvery aura danced around his body, like a transparent burning fire, he was already meditating like this, day and night, sun and rain, he he had already lost count of the days, but it didn't matter to him, the unanswered questions made him uneasy, throughout his life, he had concrete answers, he is a god, he is the truth, but now, doubts and questions are arising , not only in the matter of his philosophy but also of past actions, when he killed mortals, when he tortured goku, he liked it, he enjoyed it, he always blamed the mortal body, but when he destroyed that city with those avian beings, the cries of despair, the pain they felt, which echoed through the mountains, were like music to their ears, he felt a sensation of pleasure.... He was now confused, how does he, in a body of a god, still hold these profane feelings? Just a stupid human who would take pleasure and do these things because he could, it just irritated him even more, because more questions came up, and questions he couldn't answer, but what blasphemy! as an all-powerful god, could he feel the same things as a human?? absurd! he was the pinnacle of beauty! of the truth! he was supposed to be better! and not equal to such smaller beings! And why did he help that girl?? She was just a stupid mortal! the lack of bodily development was not a problem for a deity like him! And yet... He felt he should help that girl, he thought of how difficult it would be for that girl to adapt in a society where flying was the pinnacle of the event for beings with wings, he felt empathy... The ground was shaking around him as his anger increased, he didn't believe thoughts like that in his mind! how can he! he was going against all his philosophy! Mortals did not deserve pity! they had no redemption... But he remembered that little girl's smile, her happiness, and when she thanked him... Because words so simple touched him so deeply, as a few days in this strange land were changing him, she was different.... Yes, he had the same problems that he always saw, mortals still using the great intellect given by the gods for violence and ambition, but he saw different aspects, in that small village, he noticed something that was almost non-existent in other worlds that he visited, harmony... Yes... Something he had seen that was missing in many worlds, this species seems to be identical to the body he inhabited, these few facts seem to have caught his interest, however, he kept his meditation on emotions, in a psychological battle, then, he felt something, something calling him, something inside him, slowly he deepened in his thoughts, focusing more, and entering a state of deep meditation. In his mind, he found himself in a void, he stood in that void, looking around he could see absolutely nothing, but he felt something, a sign of Ki, no... Two... Inside him? How was that possible? Ki ran through all living beings, it was how the gods created everything, each living being has its own Ki that represents its being, which makes him unique, however, it should be impossible to have more than one Ki sign in one living being, this perked his curiosity, slowly he walked, it looked like he was going nowhere, but he knew he should see more than just with his eyes, he was getting close, and the further he walked, the more the Void changed , the darkness slowly cleared, showing a path of grass, and then trees, and then, a forest, petals of flowers fell from the trees in his path, forming a wonderful landscape, slowly he smiled, one of the perfections of creation, these landscapes gave him hope, as he walked through the dirt path, he could see the resemblance of that forest to the forest that he was residing in for time, however, it was much more.... Peaceful, calm, and beautiful..... Honestly, to transform a forest like that... It was tempting.... But what bothered him the most was that it wasn't his thoughts, it wasn't like his ordinary dreams, no, someone was changing that, and that someone was close. As he got closer, he noticed a castle in the distance, he was gigantic and majestic, he was not going to lie, mortals knew how to make good architectures. He would slowly walk through the gates and through the castle entrance, they were totally deserted, but the gardens were still wonderful and majestic, their petals flying in the light breeze that passed, and their pollen ready to be collected by the bees, which it was the masterpiece of the gods, a highly sustainable ecological system, where all living beings contribute and spread, and do not destroy themselves for moronic reasons. Going up the stairs, he could see the walls, full of pictures, and paintings, they were telling a story, as he went up, the more they described how what looked like the society he had encountered before grew, obviously, internal fights between tribes of mortals, nothing surprising, but what caught his attention was that the tribes as the pictures showed, were unified by what looked like two... Deities...? Impossible! Why would the gods interfere with mortals....? Was it allowed? And if they interfered, they should have corrected their mistakes! They should have cleansed the land! It kept showing one of the divine figures pointing his hand at the sun, she seemed to be creating the sun, while another one was doing the same as the previous figure, however, she created the moon, so they had two Kaioshins? Did they decide to observe their creation more closely? but why live with them? You can't say that.... He was already sick to think about it, but are these Kaioshins, having relations with mortals?! How absurd! How blasphemous! Do they lower themselves to the level of mortals just to feel better? Were they not trained to leave carnal temptation? He had arrived at the end of the steps, he was now in a huge hall, in him, the stories separated, the story of the creator of the moon and that of the sun were now in huge glass, the story continued, showing both governing mortals in their respective schedules, which confused Eclipse even more, why? They could easily collaborate with each other, yes, each one has their own creation, but both were made by the sacred hands of deities, it is our sacred duty to resolve everything as efficiently as possible, so as he walked down a red carpet that took him more deeply in the hall, he could see the panes converging in the front, showing a titanic battle between both figures with their respective armies of night and day, on top of two thrones, one representing the Moon and the other the Sun... However, he still wondered.... Did they fight? Why? What would they gain from this? So it hit him, mortals, they were influenced by mortals, not only did their concerns about them increase, but they started to think like them, act like them, they got lost... What a horror, though.... Why was he seeing all this...? "That, I can answer" A feminine but powerful voice echoed around the room, curious, he looked around, and came across a figure sitting on the moon's throne, he could see that she was of the same species as his, the horn and monumental wings were very present, she was completely black, both the wing and the horn were the same color, her predatory green eyes were very flashy, and she had a canine smile, she had an armor very similar to Eclipse, but she had her unique touches and symbols of the moon. "Who are you?" But another female voice, and potent as her counterpart of the night, answered it in an amused tone. "A better question would be, what are we?" Looking at the source of the voice, he could see another figure on the throne of the sun, he could have sworn that before, the thrones were vecant, the figure was the same size as his counterpart at night, his fur was completely white, his predatory orange eyes the they watched with something around curiosity and amusement, she wore golden armor, and her mane seemed to be fire coming out of her body, an infinite flame, he had to admit, his mortal body was forcing him to see the figures as majestic, beautiful, but fearful and venerable, could they be the goddesses described in the paintings and glass sculptures? No..... They were too much different.... Successors perhaps? He did not know "You did not answer my question, and invading a god’s mind is a monumental sin" He would say with venom in his voice when looking at the figures, who in response looked at each other, and giggled, as if they were school girls, the Mare of the Night was the first one to speak. "I already like you, my Name is Nightmare Moon, god of the Moon, and ruler of the Night." The fire goddess was soon to respond still with an amused tone. "And mine, is Daybreaker, the goddess of the Sun, the day is my domain" After their presentations, Eclipse would say something, only to be cut off by the goddess "And to answer your threat, even though you are very powerful, you can't erase us, we are part of you. " He would just wide his eyes at the revelation, and she would giggle at his reaction, the sun goddess continued "You do not realize? Every bit of us is combined in you, Eclipse, you are our creation, we shaped you in everything but soul" Now that he stopped and slowly analyzed, he could fit the pieces together, they should have felt his soul passing through the portal between dimensions, they made him their image, they had given him another chance... "Why?" The question caught the attention of both goddesses, who looked at him with curiosity "Why revive me? Why give me another chance?" Both looked at each other, and both smiled and looked at him again "We know you well Eclipse, we know what you did in the past, and we saw you as worthy of a second chance, you see, our counterparts outside the dream world are.... They are not worthy of the title that was granted to them, we tried to change them, improve them, but they just banished us again to the dreamlands, you gave us an opportunity to not only end our past mistakes, but also restore our glory." The moon godness nodded. "Indeed, and you passed our test when you exterminated the griffons, they were always a huge creation mistake, aggressive, territorial and completely greedy, you will be our judge, what will decide who dies and who lives, we failed to recover our bodies and do the right thing, but you, you can make the utopia that you so desired, and form the paradise that you fought so hard to conquer" Eclipse was shocked, a lot was thrown at him at the same time, created by the goddesses of this world to bring balance to the world and decide which mortal lived and which not, it was too good to be true.... He looked at the godness and narrowed his eyes "How can i trust your word?" Both then suddenly got up and started to descend from their thrones, Eclipse slowly started to walk backwards, watching the goddesses with suspicion. The horns of both began to light up, and the auras of each lit up their respective chairs, they started to shake, and to move, and... Merge.... They merged into one, the chair represented the same symbol he had. The goddesses looked at Eclipse, who slowly walked past them, passing his hand over the throne, feeling it "We are already past Eclipse, we are just shadows of our former selves, we created you to be able to correct what we failed to create, we see your philosophy, and we see your determination, we know you can do it, you are the fusion of our last vestiges of power that we could form." He slowly sat down, rubbing his fingers on the arms of the throne, while the goddesses smiled more and more "This is your destiny, rule this lands, you are the legitimate sucessor and true the pure god!" They both took their swords in their scabbards and stood up pointing up at Eclipse on the throne "You're Eclipse! The god of the Sun and the Moon! You are the Darkness and the Light! You are the Harmony and the Chaos! You are the true ORDER!" Eclipse could not contain the smile on his face, while the swords suddenly flashed in their respective colors and released a ray of energy that combined and flew towards him, which upon hitting him blinded him. Eclipse opened his eyes, they had changed color, they were more predatory, one green and one orange, he was still in his meditation pose on top of the same stone, he slowly stood up, smiling, he now knew his destiny, he he knew his true destiny, the throne would be his, and he would bring true order and balance. He walked slowly to the same village he had left, he had a lot to do, but now, he had a direction to follow. Author's Note I loved doing this chapter, I hope I managed to leave this epic and explanatory for you! Next, Eclipse will truly begin its journey! Thank you so much for your support! Remember, any criticism is accepted! Gramatical errors? Let me know! Peace! The Wrath of the SunAgain, he was walking through that strange village, this time, the residents were much less apprehensive about his presence, it was as if he didn't exist, no look of anger, fear or disgust, just glances, and each one returned to what they were doing, so a shout came from somewhere. "MISTER!!" He can't even feel the presence that practically flew in his face, she hit him in the belly and fell ass first on the floor, slowly he looked down with his angry look, only to see that child he had helped a few days ago... She had her hands over her mouth in shock, immediately making a nervous face and looking around, probably to find a place to hide. "I-i am s-s-so sorry! I-i didn't mean do hurt you!" His face returned to a normal expression as he raised an eyebrow, it was adorable for her to think she could come even close to hurting him, yet adorable. "You didn't" She gave a nervous laugh, and then she was surprised, looking into his eyes directly, making him curious again, she then jumped up and approached him "Your.... your..." She hesitated a lot, and he kept his expression neutral, smiling creepyly as he looked at her "My?" She looked at his teeth and seems to be immediately more nervous, looking to the side and poking her index fingers. "N-nothing...." He narrowed his eyes, and slowly bent down to match her eyes, she slowly looked at him, Scottalo can only now realize how big he really was, he could be one of the biggest Stallions she had ever seen, Heck, he was bigger that Big Mac! She just stammered seeing him and walked away a little, while he slowly moved foward, filling the gap. "I am a god little one, i know when someone is lying or not." But before they could continue, an angry scream could be heard from behind along with many running sounds. "LEAVE HER ALONE!" He could feel someone flying behind him, and immediately he turned back with a speed that Scottalo could not even see him moving, it almost looked like he disappeared, he then stopped a punch aimed at his face, the impact caused a small shockwave, as the attacker came at a very high speed, he could see that the attacker was blue, with rainbow hair and tail, she was female, and clearly, she was shocked by his quick reaction. "You think i didn't fell you, didn't you?" With those words, his hand started to shine, and Rainbow at the last minute jumped to the side, when a huge beam of energy was fired by his hand, she rolled on the floor and stopped by kneeling, staring at him with hate, he returned the look with a neutral expression, immediately changing to a small smile, she snarled, and then using her wings she gave a boost and flew towards him preparing to throw another punch. He just smirked, and a few centimeters before she hit him, he again at a speed impossible to see with the naked eye, he intercepted her in midair with a powerful punch in her stomach, making her spit blood and with an expression in total shock at the surprise attack, she fell to the ground as hard as stone, passing out. He looked at her and growled. "Mortals, if you think that with your pathetic strength you have at least a chance against me, you are very mistaken." He would tell everyone around him that they were now looking at him in horror, Scottalo ran past him and knelt beside the colored-haired Mare, she shaken her almost in desperation. "Rainbow?? Rainbow!!" He raised an eyebrow at that, so that was the infamous Rainbow Dash that the little one so boasted about when they met? He felt disappointment well inside, but what could he expect from mortals? everyone is as sensitive as a cup of tea. He then heard someone gasping, he looked at the fountain, and found a group of Mares of all colors, the white one was probably the source of that sound, the group ran and checked the fall while some left the group and went to face him. "You! You did this to Rainbow?" The Purple one said with a look of fury, then something hit him, he widened his eyes when he felt it, completely unexpected, she had divine Ki, and also, she was like him in some ways, not only bigger than her counterparts, but also it had horn and wings, unlike anybody that only had one or the other, or had nothing at all, he slowly composed himself. "You are a god." She seemed taken back by the statement, but returned her expression and angry stance "Yes i am! Princess of Friendship! God and Element of Magic! and i demand to know what you did to my friend!" Now it was the turn of Eclipse to be taken back, A goddess?? Friend of a mere mortal?? he just snarled at that, while his neutral expression changed to one of hate. "Friend?? FRIEND?" Now everyone around them withdrew a little in fear, while slowly Eclipse walked towards her, while her friends withdrew a little with the aura of anger appearing in him, except Twillight, who stood firm and stared at him angrily. "I don't know how a god could lower himself so much to the level of having to fraternize with mere mortals... How can you? You have betrayed your very essence! The meaning of being a god!" She just kept looking at him, both in that exchange of looks, so her response shocked him even more "Of course I would 'get down' on their level! they are my friends! Thats the main essence of friendship! what is your problem??" "My problem?? MY PROBLEM?? You are just commiting a monumental mistake! We are better than them in every way, you are degrading our image!" She would just growl at this. "We are just like them you idiot! Who do you think you are to say this things?? To decide whats right and wrong?!" he was silent, slowly watching the goddess who challenges him, so he realized something, she was different, when he saw Nightmare and Daybreaker, they had auras of power, their manes and tails showed that their power manifested in a way that demonstrated that they had divine power, she didn’t wear anything similar, nor armor, one of the only things that could say that she was of an important position was the little crown on her head, but it was probably just ceremonial, she shouldn’t be a goddess, she lacked divine Ki. So he understood, he couldn't even contain his expression of total shock, did she? a mortal become a god?? this changed everything, it just proved one of his greatest fears, mortals replacing gods!! This was a nightmare! ..... No.... It was a Sin And Sins must be punished accordingly. She continued challenging him, and before she could mutter another word, She went into an expression of shock, and shivered she looked down at her belly, and she could just see Eclipse's hand with a gray aura impaling her, a hole of blood forming, as she looked at him shaking, in pain or out of fear, or maybe both, he smiled slightly, her friends in total shock, seeing her best friend being stabbed in front of their eyes. "I Get it now, you are just a lowly mortal trying to immitate the beauty of a god, so patetic, so sad." He would then say using his free hand to punch Twillight in the face, throwing her away, and then teleporting over her to intercept her in the air. "YOU ARE NOTHING COMPARED TO A GOD!" And then he delivered a powerful kick, throwing it hard on the ground, and with impact forming a huge crater, her friends could only look horrified by the scene. "TWILLIGHT!" He slowly flew to the crater, where Twillight stayed, she was all dirty with impact and light scratches, a blood hole was in her belly as blood dripped from her belly, she spit blood when trying to get up and failing "It's so pathetic, really, why does you chose to resist? can't you just accept your inferiority and make my job easier? however, you punishment will be more severe, the only thing worse than a mortal, it is a cheap copy of a god." He said while extending the span of his hand and with his horn shining, an orb of energy would suggest in his hand, and he would point at Twillight's face, who even with great pain continued to look at him defiantly. "I am not afraid of you, monster." He could only grin at the comment "Then you will die, braver than most." Twilight just closed her eyes, waiting for Eclipse to shoot and kill her right there, all her friends in shock, not knowing what to do, when a ray of light fell in the center of the city, making everyone cover their eyes for the sudden event, before Eclipse could even decipher the reason for all that, a ray of energy flew from the source of the pillar of light, he was unable to react in time, being hit straight and making him cross one, two three, and many more houses, making huge holes where he crossed trough, Twillight, looking at the beam of light, can only see a white figure running towards her, before closing his eyes and passing out, Pinkie, the most energetic of the group, was already jumping of relief. "its the Princess! We are saved!" Celestia ignored the pink pony while placing her hand behind her student's head, she was unconscious and very injured, the source of the wound was luckily that it did not hurt any vital points, she slowly healed the wound while the other elements surrounded her. "She will be alright?" Celestia looked at the yellow pegasus, and made a warm smile "She will... However, you have to take her out of here." The Rainbow mane pegasus protested "No way! I have to kick this guy's flank for for hurting my friend!" Celestia made a hand signal for them to stand down. "No, He is too powerfull, i have to do this alone" She would say getting up and slowly walking towards the ruined houses. "No way we will let you alone with that brute darling!" She looked back at them with one sad smile. "I am grateful that you care so much about me and my dear student, but he is no ordinary villain, I need you to evacuate Ponyville, and take care of Twillight." "but princ-" Before a round of arguments could begin, a huge explosion of light appeared in the houses that Eclipse had been launched, he appeared flying over them, growling in anger, with a huge gray aura around him, Celestia looked at the Elements with an expression that they never saw from their princess, Anger "GO! NOW!" They all complied, taking Twillight and running away from the two gods, Celestia slowly flew to match Eclipse in height, and they both faced each other, Eclipse growled at Celestia. "So, you are the much-acclaimed sun goddess, I was hoping to finally meet, the god that corrupted this lands." Celestia kept her angry expression "Keep your philosophy to yourself usurper, I didn't come here for small talk" Eclipse just Smirked with the statement "Usurper? No, I am a judge! and I have never seen a god as horrible as you, how dare you!?? Do you think you can give titles reserved to deities to these simple-minded beings? Friendship? Passion? Don't make me laugh!" Celestia's aura was ignited, as Eclipse had a huge Gray aura dancing around him, Celestia had a huge aura of fire to compete with, she was shaking with anger and gritting her teeth. "We are not better than mortals just because we are gods! We must be examples of what they have to strive to achieve, we have no right over life and death! And now you think you can come to my land? Make threats? for reasons as selfish as these? AND HURT MY TWILLIGHT?" Her aura seemed to get more intense over time, Eclipse was surprised by the pressure she was putting out for her anger "YOU SHALL PAY!" She roared in royal canterlot voice flying at him in an enormous speed, he just smiled at that, and increased his ki further, seeking to compete with the goddess, and flying at her aswell. "BRING IT ON!" Both roared as they flew towards each other at speeds difficult to see with the naked eye, and both with their fists in front of them to meet in the center. Author's Note I will not lie, I had fun writing this chapter, I hope you enjoyed it, Eclipse will face an angry mother! What did you think? Mistakes? Suggestions? criticize me! Thank you and peace! Battle of the GodsIn a small village in Equestria, everything changed, their punches could be heard for miles, and grandfathers would tell their grandchildren the day their houses were obliterated by only the Shockwaves formed by the monumental battle, the sky flashed yellow and silver, while the gods clashed. In the sky, their auras burned like fire, and they flew like aimless meteorites, which collided repeatedly, Scootaloo could only watch and blame herself, blame herself for everything that was happening, since the confrontation started, it was her fault, when Rainbow attacked him without reason, thinking that she was in danger, and worse, she got hurt, she could have died, but why? Yes, he defended himself, but in such a brutal way? Why? what did she do to him? He had been so nice to her when she first met him, and now he came back so... Hostile.... And his eyes.... They scared her....... And now, the Princess was fighting him.... All of this because of her.... Because she was afraid of the only one that helped her when she needed.... She was gonna fix this... Thats why she was hidding in her house, watching the duel unfould, she wanted to do something ANYTHING, to stop this.... What could she do?? He wouldn't lie, he was having fun, it was the first time in a while that someone with decent power had fought him, her attacks were calculated and she could either deflect his punches or even get them head on, finally he didn't needed to hold back, he thought while exchanging punches with the goddess, he could say that she was also holding back, he first thought that she was underestimating him, that she thought that she could beat him easily, however as they fought he realized, she was suppressing her power because she didn’t want the battle to hit mortals, he slowly smirked, that mistake would cost her life, increasing his speed, he disappeared, from her field of vision, she hadn’t expected it, and punched the air as a result, looking around with anger slowly looking for him, finding Eclipse floating with his guard wide open, without thinking twice, she flew at him and landed a powerful punch, just for the punch completely traverse the body of the god. "What??" He just smiled at the reaction, disappearing completely, Celestia just felt the pain in her back, being thrown away, Eclipse disappeared and appeared in front of her intercepting her in the middle of the path, spinning in the air and kicking her to the ground, doing the same blow that he had performed in Twilight, it was simple, but very effective, Celestia fell like a meteorite in a house, completely destroying the roof on impact and the house immediately after entering it, a huge cloud of smoke could be seen, however before he could think of his next action, a beam of energy came out of the smoke and flew towards him, in his quick reflexes, he just turning his head to the side managed to dodge the shot, looking at the source of the shot, he could seeing Celestia taking off from the wreckage dispersing them with the power of her flight, she stopped in front of Black, still with her hatred expression, and Black, just smiling maliciously, suddenly, she disappeared. "What? She knows instant transmission?!?" She appeared in front of him, throwing a powerful punch in the stomach causing him to spit saliva , and then spinning and kicking him, throwing him to the ground, making him drag for a few meters, he then jumped back and fell to his feet. , then taking off and flying in her direction, screaming, she saw it, returned flying in his direction and doing the same, almost imitating the beginning of their fight, so they both punched each other in the face, and then unleashed a fury of blows to each other, both striking, deflecting and holding attacks from each other, a complete tie between them, none gained an advantage and none achieved a definitive blow, until Eclipse with a smile, kicked the Princess in the chin throwing her up, teleported behind her and gave her a spinning kick by throwing her down, and immediatly forming a gray sphere in his hand and attacking her as she fell. BOOM A huge explosion totally covered the sun goddess, Eclipse just watched the explosion with a smile when he felt her ki sinatura disappear, then his eyes widened, when he felt her Ki right behind him, she had several scratches, but nothing seriously, she had her back to him with her head down and with a sad expression, they had their backs almost pressed against each other. "Why....?" She asked in a sad tone, surprising the Kaioshin for a moment. "I can see in your movements... I can see that you had thousands of years of experience... Like me... But what motivates you to continue...? " Eclipse just sighted, he didn't know why she stopped the battle for such an idiotic reason "Isn't it obvious Celestia? I fight for the future, I fight for a future where the universes live in peace, without stupid wars, without hunger, and without disgrace, but that is only possible without the plague inhabited in these lands, just with that, peace will be brought, only with that, true justice will be brought truly, correcting the errors that arrogant gods, like you, refuse to accept." Her expression changed from sadness to hate, and she gritted her teeth "Mortals are our reflections, they have not only our skills but our mistakes!" She turned and gave Black a huge punch, launching him like a meteorite on the ground, then she appeared on top of him and grabbed his face, flying and dragging for many meters, making a huge trail of destruction where they passed "THIS 'PLAGUE' ARE THE ONES I LOVE! I AM NEVER GONNA LET THEM DOWN FOR THE ONES LIKE YOU!" And then she grabbed him in the front and punched him in the face, throwing him away, he tried to defend himself with his arms in X's position, only to receive a sequence of punches in his belly and chest before finishing with a right hook, then she throwing her arms out to the sides she started to focus her magic on her hands, Black had little time to compose himself to realize what she was doing, she then put her hands together with concentrated magic and then roared. "SOLAR BURST!" With that roar, the magic in her hands exploded in a chain-reaction, launching a gigantic golden ray that could easily rival solar energy, the radiated power of the attack could be seen and felt by Canterlot, the immense heat radiated from the energy pillar as it flew towards him, Black just looked in awe at the huge beam of power flying towards him, placing his hands in X, he took the shot head on, being completely consumed by energy. One massive explosion followed, with smoke coming out of the explosion, Celestia slowly lowered her hands and stood breathing heavy. "Justice is blind.... Not heartles Eclipse...." She said much to herself, when suddently and unexpectedly, when the smoke slowly dissipated, she could only be in shock, seeing Eclipse slowly going out of his X's position with only light cuts and bruises from his body, with a huge smile on his face, and he did something she didn't expect in such circustances, he chuckled, and from that he went on to a full blown laugh. "I expected more from another deity... But it doesn't matter, the more you hurt me, the stronger I will BECOME!" With that he put his hands together in front of him, as if holding a ball in a funny way, so he slowly spoke words that Celestia did not know. "KA....." She just looked with confusion, she didn't know how to react to that, was he gatering magic....? for what....? Whatever was, she was preparing herself "ME....." With that, he slowly brought his arms back while still holding them together, however, a light began to appear in the middle of his hands a silver ball that began to grow and increase its brightness. "HA...." As the sphere of energy in his hand increased, the climate began to change, the clouds began to become more aggressive, appearing suddenly, as if his magic only managed to attract them, as the energy ball increased more and more, worrying even more Celestia, who started to increase her own magic to fight the threat, she knew that no matter what he was doing, if she didn't defend herself, she could probably die. "ME....." Then with one last line, and holding his silver sphere in his hands, he released a final roar, and threw his arms forward and spread his hands wide "HA!!!" With that, Eclipse launched a huge wave of very powerful power towards Celestia, which formed a shield spell around her to protect herself from the attack unknown to her, the Kamehameha wave was gigantic, almost twice the size of Celestia's, and if she hadn’t been in front of it, it could have easily swept the city in its pressure alone, on impact, she was thrown back a little with the power of the attack, but she held her ground, maintaining her position, with the wave of power spreading around her, gritting her teeth and grunting in pain, she didn’t backed down, without her knowing, Eclipse kept a continuous chain of Ki no Kamehameha, even so, he was still holding on, her resilience was admirable, even if futile, cracks where showing in her shield here and there, she would fall, and he still didn't even come close to his full power, but he was getting used to his new body, managing to absorb Celestia's powers with every blow she gave him, he felt a warmth inside him, a warmth he felt aunt when he turned into a super saiyan.... Interesting..... Celestia desperately tried to keep her shield, which was the only thing that kept her standing with the subtle wave of Kamehameha, while being pushed back, more and more. Crack A sound of breaking glass, and then she was more in shock, seeing the shield slowly shatter like a glass cup No.... Twillight.... i can't..... Crack No! Crack NO! Author's Note Sorry for the delay and for the short chapter, I reviewed the anime for the fact that I was afraid of being wrongly describing how Black really was and how he would really react after some complaints in the comments, and studies have fucked me recently, but I promised that I wouldn't let you guys with no chapters and here it is now! I promise to improve, I really feel guilty for putting such a small chapter, I'm not so good at fighting scenes either, so if you want to give me suggestions on how to improve them, I'm all ears, thanks again, and peace! The Determined moonSomething has gone wrong. We don't seem to have an archived copy of that chapter.A prophecy being fulfilledThere was nothing left, her house, everything she loved one day, everyone she knew, disappeared in a flash of light, she thought while flying, she cried, she screamed, she could do nothing, seeing that fireball fall, she had to warn someone, anyone! Gabriella, or Gabby given by her friends, was horrified, destroyed inside, that lovely and happy Griffon, she couldn't smile anymore, she just flew towards Equestria, to warn her friends of the imminent danger, that was an Alicorn, a Male Alicorn, she saw, she managed to see his silunette in the distance, she tought they were only legends, only Pony fairy tail, she was a busy letter carrier, so she wasn’t in town at the time, but she was returning home when it happened, that giant meteor of fire coudn't come out of her head, one hour it was small as ball, and on the other, it was a size that could rival the sun, her house, the house she grew up in, it was nothing but ash now, she had to stop it, many others would be victims if she didn't do something, Ponyville, she knew the Cutie Marks crusaders, they know the elements of harmony, this is what she would do, only they would be able to end it. She thought as she flew across the horizon towards Equestria, high in the clouds and at sunset, who would be the next victim of that mad Stallion? He sat down on top of a rock at the edge of a mountain, watching the sun go down, he thought in the meantime, nature, something so wonderful, inhabited by beings so disgusting, why? Why would the gods do that? looking at this paradise he just felt more hate, mortals don't see the good life that was given to them by the gods, they have fertile soil on the ground, they have plenty of food, they have water that can be reused for thousands of years , they have thousands of kilometers of land to explore, and what do they do? they kill themselves for the stupidest reasons he can think of, for some insult, for some misunderstanding, or for some fictitious religion that they create. He looked at his palm, he had embraced all these sins when he took this body, when he became a mortal he had become the embodiment of evil, he closed his hand while looking at the sun again. But this is the sacrifice he made, it is his divine duty, to free the universe from this plague, he had to embrace sin, he slowly closed his eyes and entering a deep sleep, he could be a god, but he still had the problems of a normal mortal, damn body. The next day Black had noticed that he was on an island, when flying he noticed a huge sea in the distance, after eating some apples that he had found in some trees in the region, which impressively were not destroyed by the mortals of the area, he flew in towards the ocean. The seas were crystal clear and beautiful, he could see and feel fish swimming and living their lives, at least something good in this world, he kept reminding himself of the time he spent with his master and the time he just watched, they had visited an aquatic planet one day, and he remembered it as if it were yesterday, the planet was a wasteland, there was no sign of life, and overnight, an incredible ecosystem had emerged, Gowasu had explained that we didn't need to intervene for the planet to evolve, everything was like a river, which followed its natural course, the gods were like rain, we could do very well a storm and reverse the course of the river as we wished, but ignorantly he thought that we should let the river follow its natural course, wherever somewhere in its path, an intelligent life form would gain the blessing of the gods to be able to imitate them, but they always made the same mistakes, no matter the world, thinking about it just reminded him of his goal. He could see that he had arrived on land, as he landed, he looked around, a simple forest with a large river that led further north, he then decided that he would train, he knew he could still control his ki, but he still did not know the full potential of his body. Taking a deep breath, he fired up his aura with a roar, with that, his silver aura began to dance around his body, the ground gradually began to shake, he began to scream and scream more, while the aura increased more and more, becoming a gigantic pillar silver, but without him noticing, his horn started to shine, the brightness increased the more he released his ki, and without him noticing, the sun started to move, and suddenly, the moon appeared on the horizon, he continued to scream , his spiky hair starting to rise and a crater forming on the ground, while stones floated around him, the moon and the sun met in the middle of the sky, and formed an Eclipse, when he finished, he left his pose, and opened his eyes, looking at his fist, opening and closing, he was with all his power in the base form, the silver aura danced around his body, the crater was gigantic, and he had destroyed with much of the forest, and looking at the sky, he noticed what had happened, for the first time in a long time, the god was surprised, but slowly a smile appeared on his face. It seems that the marks given to him were not just decoration, he was fulfilling a prophecy, all mortals in this world will know, this is the breath of a new era! Canterlot was in chaos, confusion and fear dominated the streets, the fear of a new 'Nightmare Moon' was in the air, the royal guard was doing everything possible to maintain order, however the Eclipse in the sky was difficult to explain, Celestia had not yet spoken to her subjects about what happened generating even more paranoia, and the situation only got worse, she was sitting on her royal throne, decorated with gold and her sun symbol in the middle, she was thoughtful and tense, beside her was her sister, Luna, in her throne decorated with crystals and black with her moon theme, she was showing a worried expression towards her sister. "Tia, are you sure? It is not possible for a new Alicorn to exist? never in the history of Equestria has anything like this happened! What if that Griffin is lying? a city cannot just explode out of nowhere!" Celestia would sigh while supporting her head with her hand "That Griffin, she’s called Gabriella, and she’s a friend, if Twillight trust her, i will also, you don’t need to be so suspicious of her little sister, and if what she said is real, this situation is more worrisome than anything Equestria has been through…" Luna leaned thoughtfully on her throne, so she raised an eyebrow at her sister "More than Nightmare Moon...?" With a long sigh, she looked back at her sister with an expression of concern "Maybe worse than Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker combined...." Author's Note Hello! Thank you for reading this chapter! he is small, but shows Equestria's reaction to the discovery of Eclipse and him discovering some of his power, thanks and peace!
Griffin JudgmentDarkness, it was the only thing Black could see, he hadn’t gone to hell, that was obvious, he just fell, and he fell even more into a hole of infinite darkness... We won't be defeated by someone that believes in only himself! Trunks.... That disgraceful mortal, he had ended all his hard work, all the sacrifice he had made to bring paradise to the cosmos. yes, the scars of the battles were painful, they hurted his heart deep. Seeing so much destruction. But it was necessary. A bright future would reign, and those worms had prevented it, there was very little left. After the collection of the super dragon balls, to change bodies with the goku, and to get that incredible power, it was all for nothing. He closed his eyes and tightened his grip on hate, tightened it so much that inside the fist started to bleed, he took a deep breath and exhaled, it was past now... He had been defeated, the only thing he could do now is to curse himself for be too confident, he shouldn't have played with those mortals so much, he should have destroyed them, quick and easy..... And now here he was, falling into an infinite abyss, in the infinite barrier that divides the dimensions, and he was destined to continue to fall. In that time when he was falling, he could stop to reflect. To question his own ideals. To think why humans were as they were. he had time to meditate. But something in the middle of his fall caught his attention. A small white cut, a small source of light, it looked like a portal, one of the most improbable things he had ever expected, an error in creation? a defect in space-time? He would not have the answers if he stood doing nothing, he slowly floated in the direction of that light, reaching out to dazzle it. The closer he got, the more it diminished, the more he looked like a tiny star, a star in the middle of empty space. He then caught it. He brought his fist close to his face, and opened his hand, the light then shone, she seemed to have an explosion of sudden brightness. Forcing Black to put her hand in front so as not to be blinded, she seemed to completely modify the environment, passing of total darkness, for total clarity. The place where he felt the light, started to change it, it started to enter his hand, it started to spread through it, and his hand started to change color, not only that, started to grow...fur...? It started spreading from hand to arms, from arms to shoulders and belly. It hurt, it hurt a lot, he was screaming in pain. It felt like his body was on fire, his eyes seemed to glow, his ears pricked, and he felt a gigantic pain in the back, in the forehead. It seemed that the skin was stretched as if he were being molded. He felt like a metal stake had grown inside of him and now it was coming out with force. This endless pain lasted countless hours, but after a while, it stopped, he was panting, what the hell was that...? Looking at his body, he realized that now his body was completely gray, he was running his hand over his body, he could feel a soft fur, and he now had a tail! It had the same colors of his hair, he could see that it now shined, like stars were in his own hair and moving on its own. It was magnificent. His head had streached and he felt something strange behind him, he noticed two huge wings coming out of his back. He was disbelieving in himself, he was a horse now...? he had a new body...? No... Crossing dimensions has never had the effects of changing bodies.... Was his body adapting to the new dimension...? it was the most likely theory, so he went put his hand on his head and sighed in disbelief, but his hand hit something, touching it and feeling it, he could feel a horn.... He now had a horn.... This was getting better and better.... He then looked at his free open hand again, the same hand where it all started, where all these events took place, and he realized that it started to blink again, and started to glow again, completely covering Black's body, this time , something new appeared, an armor... An armor with a symbol in the middle of it, it was the symbol of a black ball with white fire around it, an Eclipse... He felt something this time burning on his right side of his butt... or flank... He blushed with embarrassment when he felt this sensation, looking at the location of the pain, he could see that it shined, forming a symbol, the same symbol of the armor he was wearing. He could see, that his body had become something new, he was still a warrior, he didn’t need the armor, However, he felt that this armor showed his superiority to any mortal that would look at him. The armor seemed to be made of titanium, and it shinned like diamonds, and he smiled when thinking about it. This armor was designed and destined for a true god, him. But what decent name for your new body? he was still Goku black, but in that dimension certainly there was no goku... Then he looked at the symbol again and his smile grew even more, Eclipse, his name would be Eclipse. Every piece of the puzzle was fitting now, fate was giving him a new chance. A new dimension for him to save from mortals, a chance for redemption! And an Eclipse demonstrated that he was the personification of the balance between the sun and the moon, or rather, good and evil! He then looked again at that blinding light that he was holding, it then left his hand and flew forward, doubling from its size, and this time, throwing a ray of light in his direction. She again surrounded his body, but this time, he felt a different sensation, as if he was using instant transmission, and suddenly, he disappeared, in a flash of light. Icy mountains, was that what the newly named Eclipse was in, after being blinded again by that sphere, he slowly stood up looking at his surroundings, an open field? convenient... He then started to concentrate his ki to try to detect other forms of life, his horn started to shine as he detected some life signatures not far, which surprised him. "Interesting... It seems that my ki can now be manifested by only one point, my horn, and not all over my body...." Even though he thought it was weird, he just ignored it, he had more important things to do, looking at the direction of the Ki signatures, he could see a.... Tree...? Yes... A tree, lonely among the mountains, with mortal dwellings, impressive, mortals are like a plague, they are always in places you would never expect. However he was feeling in a good mood, he would watch these mortals before deciding whether divine punishment would be necessary. Focusing his ki again he flew, feeling his wings flap to give him an impulse and he flew towards that small town. However, he was immediately disappointed. When he was able to see the city, the people there had front half resembling an eagle with the talons and wings of such. where as the back half is clearly that of a lion. he saw that the inhabitants flew from one side to the other, they did not come into any form of interaction or eye contact, and when some of them accidentally hit each other, a fight would start. The city, it was in ruins, he didn't even need to come close to see scenes that didn't surprise him. Robberies, gamblings, stealling, some guards assaulting some innocent bystanders, and other worse things that he felt disgusted at just looking. They are just barbarians, do not think before acting and keep behaving like irrational violent animals, acting by pure instinct, wearing down all the divine knowledge given to them by the gods. He sighed. It was no surprise, no matter the dimension, mortals were still a huge disappointment for the gods, and if he found those responsible for these mortals, he would make a point of punishing them accordingly. He kept gliding watching the city, and disappointed himself more and more as he watched it, while he looked at the scenes that irritated him, some of the residents saw him, most ignored him. But a group flew at him with malicious smiles, he already he knew what was going to happen, and he was prepared. "Well well, what do we have here...? A lost little Pony?" He kept a neutral face when facing the group, with his hands behind his back he could observe well how the group was formed. On the sides obviously they were the henchmen, big and strong. And in the middle was the leader. Even if he did not reach the stature or height of the cronies, he was with that ambitious look. He was certainly the leader. Eclipse made an "Hunf" grunt, and returned to observe the city, completely ignoring the leader. Who immediatly lost his smile and gritted his teeth. He waved to the other two henchmen. Both nodded and both flew to both sides of the god. A smile threatened to appear in Eclipse, that was a reaction expected from mortals, they probably saw his armor and realized its possible value, and like any being with a mind as inferior as theirs , they will simply try to take with brute force to gain for their own benefits. how pathetic. The god just looked at both brutes and returned his attention to the "Chief" of the group. "Listen, 'Your Highness', you seem to have a lot of nice things with you, no matter where you are from, if you don't pass it to us, the beating is going to be inevitable." With the comment, he closed his eyes, and started to chuckle, and the chuckle changed to a huge laugh. Which surprised the assailants, but immediatly regained their composure. And they were not happy with the ignored threats. "We warned you 'princess'! boys, get him!" both smiled and flew quickly towards Eclipse, and each threw a punch at him, with a dark smile Eclipse suddenly just vanished, and both thugs hit each other in the face. The boss was very confused and started looking around desperately. "What?? how?? where did he g-" He couldn't finish the sentence, suddenly spitting blood. Looking to the side while he trembled in fear. He could see the god smiling in a maniacal way, while impaling him with a silver blade formed in his hand. The henchmen could do nothing but look horrified at their boss. a dark and powerfull voice then bloomed out of the armored Stallion. "Wrenched mortal, cleaning your race from these lands will be a privilege granted to me, you are mere trash that corrupt these lands." He let out a cry of pain as Eclipse penetrated his sword deeper into his back. Making him vomit more blood while the god's smile only increased. He looked in horror at the alicorn "W-who... n-no, w-what a-are you??" The god response was just a chuckle at the question. Then unceremoniulsy removed the sword from the back of his victim, who with his eyes rolled and his last breath, fell from the enormous height that they found themselves, disappearing in the huge fog that formed below. That death caught the attention of everyone who flew around, those who ignored the attempted theft, now looked horrified at the result and focused their vision on Alicorn. Who was proudly showing himself after his act. Black looked at the henchmen smiling, while they looked back with massive amounts of fear. Sweat poured from their faces and they had difficulties to maintain their postures after the cruel act. Eclipse then faced the sun, dropping his smile. "Who am i?" He then looked back at the thugs, that flinched when meeting his gaze. He just smiled more. Streaching his arms as he made a posture of magnificance as the sun shinned behind him. "I am the supreme god, the divine purifier " he looked back at the terrified griffons, the crowd looked with horror, anger and confusion at the self-appointed god who now opened the palm of his hand. His horn glowed with a dark light, while in his hand an orb of energy was formed, increasing in size. "I am a judge of the gods, and I will correct all the mistakes they made in creating you, I declare your species to be guilty, and the punishment.... IT'S TOTAL PURIFICATION!" Black then after shouting those words, launched the energy ball towards the crowd. Who laughed, not believing the words of that crazy pony. But their laughter was cut off by the noise of the energy orb tripling in size. And then turning into a gigantic sun falling towards the mountain. Everyone screamed in horror and despair as they tried to run or fly away and accidentally running over each other in their attempts to escape. But for nothing. As the fireball consumed the whole mountain. A gigantic explosion was made, disintegrating the mountain in moments. The proud capital city of the Griffons, Griffonstone. Had been completally annihilated. Eclipse just watched the huge crater with his arms crossed and with a smirk. As promised, he would rid the universe of undesirable mortals, and nothing would stop him. A new god had arrived in Equestria, and he it would be one of the greatest dangers that perhaps the whole world had ever seen. Author's Note Hello everyone! This is an idea that has been in my head for a long time, and I'm happy to finally be able to post it on the site! I hope you like it and criticize me! every opinion is accepted! peace!
Questioning, learning, growingDarkness, it was all he could see in this forest, it was normal to a certain level, except for the mystical beasts that the gods thought they had discarded, he had gotten rid of those who tried to get close to him, almost feeling sorry for the pathetic attempts, he thought for a while of obliterating this forest, pointing his palm at the ground, a sphere of light appearing in his hand, however before he could throw it on the ground.... A cry, a cry of despair, as he heard hurried footsteps of what looked like a running group, he then clenched his fist, undoing the ki sphere, he then smiled, mortals, certainly heard about him, will regret trying to get where they shouldn't. He slowly walked to where the noises were, he slowly formed a Ki sword in his hand, his gray aura focused entirely on his hand, while his manic smile increased even more. Celestia sighed, she was very stressed, all the meetings she was part of revolved around that Stallion, the possible destruction of the Griffons, or the Eclipse that occurred, everyone was terrified, and she was tired of repeating the same things, the same lies, she was mentally exhausted, lying to her little ponies wasn’t easy, her sister also didn’t help, paranoid and thinking about a thousand and one things that could happen in the future, she already assured Luna that everything that could be done had been done, patrols had been tripled at the borders, search forces were sent to all corners of Equestria, she just hoped it would be enough, she walked down the corridor, towards one specific wall, and she slowly ran her hand over the paintings of wall, she put pressure on a part of the wall, and slowly the block went deeper into the wall, and the whole wall started to shake, and it went deeper, and then suddenly, that part went to the side. A passage had been opened, Celestia slowly entered the newly revealed room, it was dark and dusty, she then focused her magic on her horn, starting a light, illuminating the whole room, there were a series of paintings on the walls to the ceiling, representing everything that Celestia and Luna had passed, the wars, the challenges, their accession to power, Nightmare Moon, and the appearance of the new carriers of the elements of Harmony, everything that had happened until now was registered in these walls, but something stood out in all paintings, as they all pointed to a much larger painting, In it, everyone, Celestia, Luna, The main six, were blinded by the lights of an Eclipse symbol, while a figure showed itself in a pose with open arms, while lights came out from behind of the Eclipse he did, it made her more worried, those prophecies all said that this new figure could change everything, a new god... She didn't know how to react to it, but the prophecies didn't lie, she was proved that when Nightmare Moon came... Many of the paintings gave hints of the future, but none mentioned this new figure, it was as if he had appeared out of nowhere, who was this new being? Eclipse kept his maniacal smile while eating a fruit, sitting on a manticore's body, around, more and more bodies, all dead with holes in their torsos and some without heads, Eclipse felt disappointed, he clearly expected more, only some demonstrated capable of using Ki, others flew and some used only brute force, all had endings equal to any mortal, a quick death, he looked at the road they going for before he intercepted them, a village, he smiled, perfect, one more species that he would judge, he threw the fruit aside, while getting up from the body, he streached, and gave one sigh, and walked towards that little village, noticing a sign a few meters ahead, "Ponyville", he noticed that the village had a tall highly decorated and colorfull main building in the middle, a huge farm on the side, on the top he could see every tiny detail, she was way more.... Alive, it was like it lived in harmony with the nature, different for the last one, that was totally dead, and corrupt, one positive point for this society, he slowly entered the village, noticing the movement of its citizens, the closer he got, the more people started to notice him, walking in huge armor, and having wings and horn, it could be said that he was not the most subtle of people, they moved away from him as he entered the village, in fear? respect? Well, he didn't know, this was the first time contacting this mortals, however something stood on his way, a child stood in front of him, looking at him with fascination, she was orange and it had purple hair, and tiny wings, compared to his, it was like one ant compared with a mountain, it made him smile, children, they were what he most appreciated of the foolish mortals, they had monumental innocence, and no lust or evil in their minds, they didn't judge or steal, they only played, they only showed love, before the older mortals corrupt them and bring them to the horrible normal mortal ways of war and malice, he knelt and faced the smallest. "You are an Alicorn, sooo cool!! Almost as cool as Rainbow Dash!!" She would say clearly excited while looking at the God "Your wings are massive! C-can i t-touch t-them??" Anyone in Black's future, who saw this scene, would either be shocked by it, or would not believe it, unbelievable, the destroyer of entire species, genocidal, "Purifier" and hearthless monster of the multiverse, being kind to a child, kneeling in front of the child while everyone around them now looked curiously at the scene, and some smiled. "Yes, little one, I am a deity, I am delighted that the first person who became aware of my greatness is a child, and of course, go ahead..." The little girl's eyes seemed to shine, she slowly extended her hand towards the Eclipse's wings, which in a movement with his wing that shocked everyone around, letting her touch and caress the fur of his silver wing, he was confused, why such reactions? it was not common show empathy? he would look more into this culture of this mortals, she giggled with satisfaction, while he kept something extremely unusual for him, a sincere smile, the feelings of his body were in total conflict with his head, while he understood that he should go ahead with his plan, something inside him screamed for him not to hurt that kind soul, however the judgment falls to everyone, but this little girl showed something to him, this society clearly hadn’t manipulated this little girl’s mind to a killing machine, plus a positive point, she seems to lose her smile as he touched his wings, while starting to looking down, with a sad look, and making Eclipse raise an eyebrow. "Whats wrong little one? Being present to one of the creators of the worlds would leave any mortal feeling honored by my presence." She would lift her head and in a wry smile she would forcefully laugh "N-no! Its not that mister... is that... Your wings are so beautifull... and while mine are such tiny and useless..." Black would shake his head sideways in a negatively while smiling, that little mortal, didn't he understand that she would grow up, didn't mortals bother to teach her that? "You are still young, with time, your wings will grow to become big as mine." She would just be sadder, looking to the side as she clasped her hands tighter than herself. "You don't understand sir... My wings are not developed like the others... Everyone has big wings and mine are tiny, they all make fun of me.... I will never be like you..." Her eyes slowly became more watery, Eclipse felt sorry for the little mortal, that he hated them the most, for small differences, they used it as a reason to mock and exclude each other, so pathetic, so cowardly, he hesitating, slowly extended his hand and put it on her shoulder, doing something he immediately started to question, why? she was a simple and useless mortal, she would live a few years and then die, she would spend like everyone else, a life that could be taken away so easily, even so, he couldn’t, he couldn’t even think about taking her life, a mortal who managed to create his own path and still not be rewarded for his resilience, he was now doing something he would never think he would do, he was wondering, now that he is alone, without his counterpart, he can only stop to reflect, whenever he arrived at a new civilization, Zamasu always reminded them of their objective, and without even a broad vision of the civilization they were about to "judge", they decimated everyone who saw in their path, not even the gods sent to stop them were spared, ironically, while Black had taken the lives of so many without any remorse, even with the cries of despair and begs for mercy, a simple mortal could make him question so much, so much that he fought and sacrificed so much to achieve. Lost in his thoughts, he didn't notice that his touch on the little girl's shoulder, resulted in an unexpected reaction, she without warning, ran and hugged him, the sudden move was without warning, Eclipse was totally shocked, what could he do? he was not expecting that, it had never happened before, he then slowly remembered a family on a planet that did a similar action before they died, before he killed them, they hugged each other, remembering that, he slowly returned the hug, very hesitant, he managed to do it, she cried on his chest, tears streamed down by his armor, while she sobbed, something else he didn’t expect occurred, he started to feel something in his chest, something he had never felt before , it was horrible, he looked like something was burning in his soul. Guilt, he was feeling guilty for what he had done, everything he had done for mortals, did they all deserve his justice? Did everyone deserve death? In that short hug he made with that little girl, brought so many doubts, so many feelings, he was getting completely overwelmed, but he kept his calm, he had decided something at the time, that poor little girl, who had suffered for the idiocy of mortals would be rewarded, he focusing his ki, he passed divine energy to her wings, slowly growing them, forming a huge glow, and with a flash of subto light, everyone had been blinded, when the glow decreased, he let go of the embrace, smilling. She slowly started to open her eyes and looking at her wings, they were obviously not the size of his, but they were not small, they were the normal size for children of that age, she touched and moved them, she couldn't belive, after so much time, after so much time bullied, her wings were big! she was jumping with joy and almost crying, but this time not with sadness, but with happiness. "WINGS! They are big! Yes yes yes yes! I can finally fly high in the skies! Just like Rainbow Dash!! Thank you!....? Mister....?" She dropped her smile while she looked around the crowd, he was no longer there, looking ahead, she could see him slowly walking back to the forest where he came from, disappearing from sight. "W-wait! M-mister! I-i didn't get your name!" However, her screams were useless, she even ran and couldn't reach him, he was already out of sight, she could only put her hands in the middle of her chest and thank that stranger for his enormous generosity. Eclipse had returned to the forest, away from prying eyes from mortals, sitting on a rock in the middle of the forest, in a meditation position, with his eyes closed, he could think, reflect, and think about everything he went through, all the battles, all the tragedies, all his ideals, and in that, he remembered Gowasu, when he heard about Eclipse's ideals I see. However, this is what I believe... justice entails bringing balance between good and evil. Even if evil makes you lose your way, you stay your ground and keep searching for the path of good... is that search not what justice is? It is for that reason that the gods gave humans knowledge. What did he mean about that? Justice was always about good, not evil, that was all that he based his ideals on, that was all the reason he tried to clean up the universe of foolish mortals, they used up the knowledge of the gods with their silly quarrels, the gods were perfect , they were what the whole universe revolved around, we created and showed the way, and even then, they used senseless brutality to achieve what? too much food? more land? more power? Gods are not perfect. Even gods learn and grow. What did he mean by that? Gods were perfect! they were the apex of the worlds! they create and destroy! they bring balance to the universes! he couldn't find an answer, because when he tried to accept one, two more questions arose, he would remain in this state of meditation, he had to find a solution to everything he did, an answer, or at least a way out, he he was upset without knowing why, and he wanted, no, he needed an answer, while he meditated, his silver aura running around his body, stones floating around him, he was watched by eyes between the trees. Eyes that penetrated into the night, watched him intently Author's Note Hello! Thanks for reading! I tried to make the feelings of Black's new body to confuse him, started one conflict within him, leave him with doubts, and try to develop the character better for future chapters, please tell me what you think, thank you and be a good people!
The Silver ThroneHe was sitting cross-legged on a rock, stones floated around him, a silvery aura danced around his body, like a transparent burning fire, he was already meditating like this, day and night, sun and rain, he he had already lost count of the days, but it didn't matter to him, the unanswered questions made him uneasy, throughout his life, he had concrete answers, he is a god, he is the truth, but now, doubts and questions are arising , not only in the matter of his philosophy but also of past actions, when he killed mortals, when he tortured goku, he liked it, he enjoyed it, he always blamed the mortal body, but when he destroyed that city with those avian beings, the cries of despair, the pain they felt, which echoed through the mountains, were like music to their ears, he felt a sensation of pleasure.... He was now confused, how does he, in a body of a god, still hold these profane feelings? Just a stupid human who would take pleasure and do these things because he could, it just irritated him even more, because more questions came up, and questions he couldn't answer, but what blasphemy! as an all-powerful god, could he feel the same things as a human?? absurd! he was the pinnacle of beauty! of the truth! he was supposed to be better! and not equal to such smaller beings! And why did he help that girl?? She was just a stupid mortal! the lack of bodily development was not a problem for a deity like him! And yet... He felt he should help that girl, he thought of how difficult it would be for that girl to adapt in a society where flying was the pinnacle of the event for beings with wings, he felt empathy... The ground was shaking around him as his anger increased, he didn't believe thoughts like that in his mind! how can he! he was going against all his philosophy! Mortals did not deserve pity! they had no redemption... But he remembered that little girl's smile, her happiness, and when she thanked him... Because words so simple touched him so deeply, as a few days in this strange land were changing him, she was different.... Yes, he had the same problems that he always saw, mortals still using the great intellect given by the gods for violence and ambition, but he saw different aspects, in that small village, he noticed something that was almost non-existent in other worlds that he visited, harmony... Yes... Something he had seen that was missing in many worlds, this species seems to be identical to the body he inhabited, these few facts seem to have caught his interest, however, he kept his meditation on emotions, in a psychological battle, then, he felt something, something calling him, something inside him, slowly he deepened in his thoughts, focusing more, and entering a state of deep meditation. In his mind, he found himself in a void, he stood in that void, looking around he could see absolutely nothing, but he felt something, a sign of Ki, no... Two... Inside him? How was that possible? Ki ran through all living beings, it was how the gods created everything, each living being has its own Ki that represents its being, which makes him unique, however, it should be impossible to have more than one Ki sign in one living being, this perked his curiosity, slowly he walked, it looked like he was going nowhere, but he knew he should see more than just with his eyes, he was getting close, and the further he walked, the more the Void changed , the darkness slowly cleared, showing a path of grass, and then trees, and then, a forest, petals of flowers fell from the trees in his path, forming a wonderful landscape, slowly he smiled, one of the perfections of creation, these landscapes gave him hope, as he walked through the dirt path, he could see the resemblance of that forest to the forest that he was residing in for time, however, it was much more.... Peaceful, calm, and beautiful..... Honestly, to transform a forest like that... It was tempting.... But what bothered him the most was that it wasn't his thoughts, it wasn't like his ordinary dreams, no, someone was changing that, and that someone was close. As he got closer, he noticed a castle in the distance, he was gigantic and majestic, he was not going to lie, mortals knew how to make good architectures. He would slowly walk through the gates and through the castle entrance, they were totally deserted, but the gardens were still wonderful and majestic, their petals flying in the light breeze that passed, and their pollen ready to be collected by the bees, which it was the masterpiece of the gods, a highly sustainable ecological system, where all living beings contribute and spread, and do not destroy themselves for moronic reasons. Going up the stairs, he could see the walls, full of pictures, and paintings, they were telling a story, as he went up, the more they described how what looked like the society he had encountered before grew, obviously, internal fights between tribes of mortals, nothing surprising, but what caught his attention was that the tribes as the pictures showed, were unified by what looked like two... Deities...? Impossible! Why would the gods interfere with mortals....? Was it allowed? And if they interfered, they should have corrected their mistakes! They should have cleansed the land! It kept showing one of the divine figures pointing his hand at the sun, she seemed to be creating the sun, while another one was doing the same as the previous figure, however, she created the moon, so they had two Kaioshins? Did they decide to observe their creation more closely? but why live with them? You can't say that.... He was already sick to think about it, but are these Kaioshins, having relations with mortals?! How absurd! How blasphemous! Do they lower themselves to the level of mortals just to feel better? Were they not trained to leave carnal temptation? He had arrived at the end of the steps, he was now in a huge hall, in him, the stories separated, the story of the creator of the moon and that of the sun were now in huge glass, the story continued, showing both governing mortals in their respective schedules, which confused Eclipse even more, why? They could easily collaborate with each other, yes, each one has their own creation, but both were made by the sacred hands of deities, it is our sacred duty to resolve everything as efficiently as possible, so as he walked down a red carpet that took him more deeply in the hall, he could see the panes converging in the front, showing a titanic battle between both figures with their respective armies of night and day, on top of two thrones, one representing the Moon and the other the Sun... However, he still wondered.... Did they fight? Why? What would they gain from this? So it hit him, mortals, they were influenced by mortals, not only did their concerns about them increase, but they started to think like them, act like them, they got lost... What a horror, though.... Why was he seeing all this...? "That, I can answer" A feminine but powerful voice echoed around the room, curious, he looked around, and came across a figure sitting on the moon's throne, he could see that she was of the same species as his, the horn and monumental wings were very present, she was completely black, both the wing and the horn were the same color, her predatory green eyes were very flashy, and she had a canine smile, she had an armor very similar to Eclipse, but she had her unique touches and symbols of the moon. "Who are you?" But another female voice, and potent as her counterpart of the night, answered it in an amused tone. "A better question would be, what are we?" Looking at the source of the voice, he could see another figure on the throne of the sun, he could have sworn that before, the thrones were vecant, the figure was the same size as his counterpart at night, his fur was completely white, his predatory orange eyes the they watched with something around curiosity and amusement, she wore golden armor, and her mane seemed to be fire coming out of her body, an infinite flame, he had to admit, his mortal body was forcing him to see the figures as majestic, beautiful, but fearful and venerable, could they be the goddesses described in the paintings and glass sculptures? No..... They were too much different.... Successors perhaps? He did not know "You did not answer my question, and invading a god’s mind is a monumental sin" He would say with venom in his voice when looking at the figures, who in response looked at each other, and giggled, as if they were school girls, the Mare of the Night was the first one to speak. "I already like you, my Name is Nightmare Moon, god of the Moon, and ruler of the Night." The fire goddess was soon to respond still with an amused tone. "And mine, is Daybreaker, the goddess of the Sun, the day is my domain" After their presentations, Eclipse would say something, only to be cut off by the goddess "And to answer your threat, even though you are very powerful, you can't erase us, we are part of you. " He would just wide his eyes at the revelation, and she would giggle at his reaction, the sun goddess continued "You do not realize? Every bit of us is combined in you, Eclipse, you are our creation, we shaped you in everything but soul" Now that he stopped and slowly analyzed, he could fit the pieces together, they should have felt his soul passing through the portal between dimensions, they made him their image, they had given him another chance... "Why?" The question caught the attention of both goddesses, who looked at him with curiosity "Why revive me? Why give me another chance?" Both looked at each other, and both smiled and looked at him again "We know you well Eclipse, we know what you did in the past, and we saw you as worthy of a second chance, you see, our counterparts outside the dream world are.... They are not worthy of the title that was granted to them, we tried to change them, improve them, but they just banished us again to the dreamlands, you gave us an opportunity to not only end our past mistakes, but also restore our glory." The moon godness nodded. "Indeed, and you passed our test when you exterminated the griffons, they were always a huge creation mistake, aggressive, territorial and completely greedy, you will be our judge, what will decide who dies and who lives, we failed to recover our bodies and do the right thing, but you, you can make the utopia that you so desired, and form the paradise that you fought so hard to conquer" Eclipse was shocked, a lot was thrown at him at the same time, created by the goddesses of this world to bring balance to the world and decide which mortal lived and which not, it was too good to be true.... He looked at the godness and narrowed his eyes "How can i trust your word?" Both then suddenly got up and started to descend from their thrones, Eclipse slowly started to walk backwards, watching the goddesses with suspicion. The horns of both began to light up, and the auras of each lit up their respective chairs, they started to shake, and to move, and... Merge.... They merged into one, the chair represented the same symbol he had. The goddesses looked at Eclipse, who slowly walked past them, passing his hand over the throne, feeling it "We are already past Eclipse, we are just shadows of our former selves, we created you to be able to correct what we failed to create, we see your philosophy, and we see your determination, we know you can do it, you are the fusion of our last vestiges of power that we could form." He slowly sat down, rubbing his fingers on the arms of the throne, while the goddesses smiled more and more "This is your destiny, rule this lands, you are the legitimate sucessor and true the pure god!" They both took their swords in their scabbards and stood up pointing up at Eclipse on the throne "You're Eclipse! The god of the Sun and the Moon! You are the Darkness and the Light! You are the Harmony and the Chaos! You are the true ORDER!" Eclipse could not contain the smile on his face, while the swords suddenly flashed in their respective colors and released a ray of energy that combined and flew towards him, which upon hitting him blinded him. Eclipse opened his eyes, they had changed color, they were more predatory, one green and one orange, he was still in his meditation pose on top of the same stone, he slowly stood up, smiling, he now knew his destiny, he he knew his true destiny, the throne would be his, and he would bring true order and balance. He walked slowly to the same village he had left, he had a lot to do, but now, he had a direction to follow. Author's Note I loved doing this chapter, I hope I managed to leave this epic and explanatory for you! Next, Eclipse will truly begin its journey! Thank you so much for your support! Remember, any criticism is accepted! Gramatical errors? Let me know! Peace!
The Wrath of the SunAgain, he was walking through that strange village, this time, the residents were much less apprehensive about his presence, it was as if he didn't exist, no look of anger, fear or disgust, just glances, and each one returned to what they were doing, so a shout came from somewhere. "MISTER!!" He can't even feel the presence that practically flew in his face, she hit him in the belly and fell ass first on the floor, slowly he looked down with his angry look, only to see that child he had helped a few days ago... She had her hands over her mouth in shock, immediately making a nervous face and looking around, probably to find a place to hide. "I-i am s-s-so sorry! I-i didn't mean do hurt you!" His face returned to a normal expression as he raised an eyebrow, it was adorable for her to think she could come even close to hurting him, yet adorable. "You didn't" She gave a nervous laugh, and then she was surprised, looking into his eyes directly, making him curious again, she then jumped up and approached him "Your.... your..." She hesitated a lot, and he kept his expression neutral, smiling creepyly as he looked at her "My?" She looked at his teeth and seems to be immediately more nervous, looking to the side and poking her index fingers. "N-nothing...." He narrowed his eyes, and slowly bent down to match her eyes, she slowly looked at him, Scottalo can only now realize how big he really was, he could be one of the biggest Stallions she had ever seen, Heck, he was bigger that Big Mac! She just stammered seeing him and walked away a little, while he slowly moved foward, filling the gap. "I am a god little one, i know when someone is lying or not." But before they could continue, an angry scream could be heard from behind along with many running sounds. "LEAVE HER ALONE!" He could feel someone flying behind him, and immediately he turned back with a speed that Scottalo could not even see him moving, it almost looked like he disappeared, he then stopped a punch aimed at his face, the impact caused a small shockwave, as the attacker came at a very high speed, he could see that the attacker was blue, with rainbow hair and tail, she was female, and clearly, she was shocked by his quick reaction. "You think i didn't fell you, didn't you?" With those words, his hand started to shine, and Rainbow at the last minute jumped to the side, when a huge beam of energy was fired by his hand, she rolled on the floor and stopped by kneeling, staring at him with hate, he returned the look with a neutral expression, immediately changing to a small smile, she snarled, and then using her wings she gave a boost and flew towards him preparing to throw another punch. He just smirked, and a few centimeters before she hit him, he again at a speed impossible to see with the naked eye, he intercepted her in midair with a powerful punch in her stomach, making her spit blood and with an expression in total shock at the surprise attack, she fell to the ground as hard as stone, passing out. He looked at her and growled. "Mortals, if you think that with your pathetic strength you have at least a chance against me, you are very mistaken." He would tell everyone around him that they were now looking at him in horror, Scottalo ran past him and knelt beside the colored-haired Mare, she shaken her almost in desperation. "Rainbow?? Rainbow!!" He raised an eyebrow at that, so that was the infamous Rainbow Dash that the little one so boasted about when they met? He felt disappointment well inside, but what could he expect from mortals? everyone is as sensitive as a cup of tea. He then heard someone gasping, he looked at the fountain, and found a group of Mares of all colors, the white one was probably the source of that sound, the group ran and checked the fall while some left the group and went to face him. "You! You did this to Rainbow?" The Purple one said with a look of fury, then something hit him, he widened his eyes when he felt it, completely unexpected, she had divine Ki, and also, she was like him in some ways, not only bigger than her counterparts, but also it had horn and wings, unlike anybody that only had one or the other, or had nothing at all, he slowly composed himself. "You are a god." She seemed taken back by the statement, but returned her expression and angry stance "Yes i am! Princess of Friendship! God and Element of Magic! and i demand to know what you did to my friend!" Now it was the turn of Eclipse to be taken back, A goddess?? Friend of a mere mortal?? he just snarled at that, while his neutral expression changed to one of hate. "Friend?? FRIEND?" Now everyone around them withdrew a little in fear, while slowly Eclipse walked towards her, while her friends withdrew a little with the aura of anger appearing in him, except Twillight, who stood firm and stared at him angrily. "I don't know how a god could lower himself so much to the level of having to fraternize with mere mortals... How can you? You have betrayed your very essence! The meaning of being a god!" She just kept looking at him, both in that exchange of looks, so her response shocked him even more "Of course I would 'get down' on their level! they are my friends! Thats the main essence of friendship! what is your problem??" "My problem?? MY PROBLEM?? You are just commiting a monumental mistake! We are better than them in every way, you are degrading our image!" She would just growl at this. "We are just like them you idiot! Who do you think you are to say this things?? To decide whats right and wrong?!" he was silent, slowly watching the goddess who challenges him, so he realized something, she was different, when he saw Nightmare and Daybreaker, they had auras of power, their manes and tails showed that their power manifested in a way that demonstrated that they had divine power, she didn’t wear anything similar, nor armor, one of the only things that could say that she was of an important position was the little crown on her head, but it was probably just ceremonial, she shouldn’t be a goddess, she lacked divine Ki. So he understood, he couldn't even contain his expression of total shock, did she? a mortal become a god?? this changed everything, it just proved one of his greatest fears, mortals replacing gods!! This was a nightmare! ..... No.... It was a Sin And Sins must be punished accordingly. She continued challenging him, and before she could mutter another word, She went into an expression of shock, and shivered she looked down at her belly, and she could just see Eclipse's hand with a gray aura impaling her, a hole of blood forming, as she looked at him shaking, in pain or out of fear, or maybe both, he smiled slightly, her friends in total shock, seeing her best friend being stabbed in front of their eyes. "I Get it now, you are just a lowly mortal trying to immitate the beauty of a god, so patetic, so sad." He would then say using his free hand to punch Twillight in the face, throwing her away, and then teleporting over her to intercept her in the air. "YOU ARE NOTHING COMPARED TO A GOD!" And then he delivered a powerful kick, throwing it hard on the ground, and with impact forming a huge crater, her friends could only look horrified by the scene. "TWILLIGHT!" He slowly flew to the crater, where Twillight stayed, she was all dirty with impact and light scratches, a blood hole was in her belly as blood dripped from her belly, she spit blood when trying to get up and failing "It's so pathetic, really, why does you chose to resist? can't you just accept your inferiority and make my job easier? however, you punishment will be more severe, the only thing worse than a mortal, it is a cheap copy of a god." He said while extending the span of his hand and with his horn shining, an orb of energy would suggest in his hand, and he would point at Twillight's face, who even with great pain continued to look at him defiantly. "I am not afraid of you, monster." He could only grin at the comment "Then you will die, braver than most." Twilight just closed her eyes, waiting for Eclipse to shoot and kill her right there, all her friends in shock, not knowing what to do, when a ray of light fell in the center of the city, making everyone cover their eyes for the sudden event, before Eclipse could even decipher the reason for all that, a ray of energy flew from the source of the pillar of light, he was unable to react in time, being hit straight and making him cross one, two three, and many more houses, making huge holes where he crossed trough, Twillight, looking at the beam of light, can only see a white figure running towards her, before closing his eyes and passing out, Pinkie, the most energetic of the group, was already jumping of relief. "its the Princess! We are saved!" Celestia ignored the pink pony while placing her hand behind her student's head, she was unconscious and very injured, the source of the wound was luckily that it did not hurt any vital points, she slowly healed the wound while the other elements surrounded her. "She will be alright?" Celestia looked at the yellow pegasus, and made a warm smile "She will... However, you have to take her out of here." The Rainbow mane pegasus protested "No way! I have to kick this guy's flank for for hurting my friend!" Celestia made a hand signal for them to stand down. "No, He is too powerfull, i have to do this alone" She would say getting up and slowly walking towards the ruined houses. "No way we will let you alone with that brute darling!" She looked back at them with one sad smile. "I am grateful that you care so much about me and my dear student, but he is no ordinary villain, I need you to evacuate Ponyville, and take care of Twillight." "but princ-" Before a round of arguments could begin, a huge explosion of light appeared in the houses that Eclipse had been launched, he appeared flying over them, growling in anger, with a huge gray aura around him, Celestia looked at the Elements with an expression that they never saw from their princess, Anger "GO! NOW!" They all complied, taking Twillight and running away from the two gods, Celestia slowly flew to match Eclipse in height, and they both faced each other, Eclipse growled at Celestia. "So, you are the much-acclaimed sun goddess, I was hoping to finally meet, the god that corrupted this lands." Celestia kept her angry expression "Keep your philosophy to yourself usurper, I didn't come here for small talk" Eclipse just Smirked with the statement "Usurper? No, I am a judge! and I have never seen a god as horrible as you, how dare you!?? Do you think you can give titles reserved to deities to these simple-minded beings? Friendship? Passion? Don't make me laugh!" Celestia's aura was ignited, as Eclipse had a huge Gray aura dancing around him, Celestia had a huge aura of fire to compete with, she was shaking with anger and gritting her teeth. "We are not better than mortals just because we are gods! We must be examples of what they have to strive to achieve, we have no right over life and death! And now you think you can come to my land? Make threats? for reasons as selfish as these? AND HURT MY TWILLIGHT?" Her aura seemed to get more intense over time, Eclipse was surprised by the pressure she was putting out for her anger "YOU SHALL PAY!" She roared in royal canterlot voice flying at him in an enormous speed, he just smiled at that, and increased his ki further, seeking to compete with the goddess, and flying at her aswell. "BRING IT ON!" Both roared as they flew towards each other at speeds difficult to see with the naked eye, and both with their fists in front of them to meet in the center. Author's Note I will not lie, I had fun writing this chapter, I hope you enjoyed it, Eclipse will face an angry mother! What did you think? Mistakes? Suggestions? criticize me! Thank you and peace!
Battle of the GodsIn a small village in Equestria, everything changed, their punches could be heard for miles, and grandfathers would tell their grandchildren the day their houses were obliterated by only the Shockwaves formed by the monumental battle, the sky flashed yellow and silver, while the gods clashed. In the sky, their auras burned like fire, and they flew like aimless meteorites, which collided repeatedly, Scootaloo could only watch and blame herself, blame herself for everything that was happening, since the confrontation started, it was her fault, when Rainbow attacked him without reason, thinking that she was in danger, and worse, she got hurt, she could have died, but why? Yes, he defended himself, but in such a brutal way? Why? what did she do to him? He had been so nice to her when she first met him, and now he came back so... Hostile.... And his eyes.... They scared her....... And now, the Princess was fighting him.... All of this because of her.... Because she was afraid of the only one that helped her when she needed.... She was gonna fix this... Thats why she was hidding in her house, watching the duel unfould, she wanted to do something ANYTHING, to stop this.... What could she do?? He wouldn't lie, he was having fun, it was the first time in a while that someone with decent power had fought him, her attacks were calculated and she could either deflect his punches or even get them head on, finally he didn't needed to hold back, he thought while exchanging punches with the goddess, he could say that she was also holding back, he first thought that she was underestimating him, that she thought that she could beat him easily, however as they fought he realized, she was suppressing her power because she didn’t want the battle to hit mortals, he slowly smirked, that mistake would cost her life, increasing his speed, he disappeared, from her field of vision, she hadn’t expected it, and punched the air as a result, looking around with anger slowly looking for him, finding Eclipse floating with his guard wide open, without thinking twice, she flew at him and landed a powerful punch, just for the punch completely traverse the body of the god. "What??" He just smiled at the reaction, disappearing completely, Celestia just felt the pain in her back, being thrown away, Eclipse disappeared and appeared in front of her intercepting her in the middle of the path, spinning in the air and kicking her to the ground, doing the same blow that he had performed in Twilight, it was simple, but very effective, Celestia fell like a meteorite in a house, completely destroying the roof on impact and the house immediately after entering it, a huge cloud of smoke could be seen, however before he could think of his next action, a beam of energy came out of the smoke and flew towards him, in his quick reflexes, he just turning his head to the side managed to dodge the shot, looking at the source of the shot, he could seeing Celestia taking off from the wreckage dispersing them with the power of her flight, she stopped in front of Black, still with her hatred expression, and Black, just smiling maliciously, suddenly, she disappeared. "What? She knows instant transmission?!?" She appeared in front of him, throwing a powerful punch in the stomach causing him to spit saliva , and then spinning and kicking him, throwing him to the ground, making him drag for a few meters, he then jumped back and fell to his feet. , then taking off and flying in her direction, screaming, she saw it, returned flying in his direction and doing the same, almost imitating the beginning of their fight, so they both punched each other in the face, and then unleashed a fury of blows to each other, both striking, deflecting and holding attacks from each other, a complete tie between them, none gained an advantage and none achieved a definitive blow, until Eclipse with a smile, kicked the Princess in the chin throwing her up, teleported behind her and gave her a spinning kick by throwing her down, and immediatly forming a gray sphere in his hand and attacking her as she fell. BOOM A huge explosion totally covered the sun goddess, Eclipse just watched the explosion with a smile when he felt her ki sinatura disappear, then his eyes widened, when he felt her Ki right behind him, she had several scratches, but nothing seriously, she had her back to him with her head down and with a sad expression, they had their backs almost pressed against each other. "Why....?" She asked in a sad tone, surprising the Kaioshin for a moment. "I can see in your movements... I can see that you had thousands of years of experience... Like me... But what motivates you to continue...? " Eclipse just sighted, he didn't know why she stopped the battle for such an idiotic reason "Isn't it obvious Celestia? I fight for the future, I fight for a future where the universes live in peace, without stupid wars, without hunger, and without disgrace, but that is only possible without the plague inhabited in these lands, just with that, peace will be brought, only with that, true justice will be brought truly, correcting the errors that arrogant gods, like you, refuse to accept." Her expression changed from sadness to hate, and she gritted her teeth "Mortals are our reflections, they have not only our skills but our mistakes!" She turned and gave Black a huge punch, launching him like a meteorite on the ground, then she appeared on top of him and grabbed his face, flying and dragging for many meters, making a huge trail of destruction where they passed "THIS 'PLAGUE' ARE THE ONES I LOVE! I AM NEVER GONNA LET THEM DOWN FOR THE ONES LIKE YOU!" And then she grabbed him in the front and punched him in the face, throwing him away, he tried to defend himself with his arms in X's position, only to receive a sequence of punches in his belly and chest before finishing with a right hook, then she throwing her arms out to the sides she started to focus her magic on her hands, Black had little time to compose himself to realize what she was doing, she then put her hands together with concentrated magic and then roared. "SOLAR BURST!" With that roar, the magic in her hands exploded in a chain-reaction, launching a gigantic golden ray that could easily rival solar energy, the radiated power of the attack could be seen and felt by Canterlot, the immense heat radiated from the energy pillar as it flew towards him, Black just looked in awe at the huge beam of power flying towards him, placing his hands in X, he took the shot head on, being completely consumed by energy. One massive explosion followed, with smoke coming out of the explosion, Celestia slowly lowered her hands and stood breathing heavy. "Justice is blind.... Not heartles Eclipse...." She said much to herself, when suddently and unexpectedly, when the smoke slowly dissipated, she could only be in shock, seeing Eclipse slowly going out of his X's position with only light cuts and bruises from his body, with a huge smile on his face, and he did something she didn't expect in such circustances, he chuckled, and from that he went on to a full blown laugh. "I expected more from another deity... But it doesn't matter, the more you hurt me, the stronger I will BECOME!" With that he put his hands together in front of him, as if holding a ball in a funny way, so he slowly spoke words that Celestia did not know. "KA....." She just looked with confusion, she didn't know how to react to that, was he gatering magic....? for what....? Whatever was, she was preparing herself "ME....." With that, he slowly brought his arms back while still holding them together, however, a light began to appear in the middle of his hands a silver ball that began to grow and increase its brightness. "HA...." As the sphere of energy in his hand increased, the climate began to change, the clouds began to become more aggressive, appearing suddenly, as if his magic only managed to attract them, as the energy ball increased more and more, worrying even more Celestia, who started to increase her own magic to fight the threat, she knew that no matter what he was doing, if she didn't defend herself, she could probably die. "ME....." Then with one last line, and holding his silver sphere in his hands, he released a final roar, and threw his arms forward and spread his hands wide "HA!!!" With that, Eclipse launched a huge wave of very powerful power towards Celestia, which formed a shield spell around her to protect herself from the attack unknown to her, the Kamehameha wave was gigantic, almost twice the size of Celestia's, and if she hadn’t been in front of it, it could have easily swept the city in its pressure alone, on impact, she was thrown back a little with the power of the attack, but she held her ground, maintaining her position, with the wave of power spreading around her, gritting her teeth and grunting in pain, she didn’t backed down, without her knowing, Eclipse kept a continuous chain of Ki no Kamehameha, even so, he was still holding on, her resilience was admirable, even if futile, cracks where showing in her shield here and there, she would fall, and he still didn't even come close to his full power, but he was getting used to his new body, managing to absorb Celestia's powers with every blow she gave him, he felt a warmth inside him, a warmth he felt aunt when he turned into a super saiyan.... Interesting..... Celestia desperately tried to keep her shield, which was the only thing that kept her standing with the subtle wave of Kamehameha, while being pushed back, more and more. Crack A sound of breaking glass, and then she was more in shock, seeing the shield slowly shatter like a glass cup No.... Twillight.... i can't..... Crack No! Crack NO! Author's Note Sorry for the delay and for the short chapter, I reviewed the anime for the fact that I was afraid of being wrongly describing how Black really was and how he would really react after some complaints in the comments, and studies have fucked me recently, but I promised that I wouldn't let you guys with no chapters and here it is now! I promise to improve, I really feel guilty for putting such a small chapter, I'm not so good at fighting scenes either, so if you want to give me suggestions on how to improve them, I'm all ears, thanks again, and peace!
A prophecy being fulfilledThere was nothing left, her house, everything she loved one day, everyone she knew, disappeared in a flash of light, she thought while flying, she cried, she screamed, she could do nothing, seeing that fireball fall, she had to warn someone, anyone! Gabriella, or Gabby given by her friends, was horrified, destroyed inside, that lovely and happy Griffon, she couldn't smile anymore, she just flew towards Equestria, to warn her friends of the imminent danger, that was an Alicorn, a Male Alicorn, she saw, she managed to see his silunette in the distance, she tought they were only legends, only Pony fairy tail, she was a busy letter carrier, so she wasn’t in town at the time, but she was returning home when it happened, that giant meteor of fire coudn't come out of her head, one hour it was small as ball, and on the other, it was a size that could rival the sun, her house, the house she grew up in, it was nothing but ash now, she had to stop it, many others would be victims if she didn't do something, Ponyville, she knew the Cutie Marks crusaders, they know the elements of harmony, this is what she would do, only they would be able to end it. She thought as she flew across the horizon towards Equestria, high in the clouds and at sunset, who would be the next victim of that mad Stallion? He sat down on top of a rock at the edge of a mountain, watching the sun go down, he thought in the meantime, nature, something so wonderful, inhabited by beings so disgusting, why? Why would the gods do that? looking at this paradise he just felt more hate, mortals don't see the good life that was given to them by the gods, they have fertile soil on the ground, they have plenty of food, they have water that can be reused for thousands of years , they have thousands of kilometers of land to explore, and what do they do? they kill themselves for the stupidest reasons he can think of, for some insult, for some misunderstanding, or for some fictitious religion that they create. He looked at his palm, he had embraced all these sins when he took this body, when he became a mortal he had become the embodiment of evil, he closed his hand while looking at the sun again. But this is the sacrifice he made, it is his divine duty, to free the universe from this plague, he had to embrace sin, he slowly closed his eyes and entering a deep sleep, he could be a god, but he still had the problems of a normal mortal, damn body. The next day Black had noticed that he was on an island, when flying he noticed a huge sea in the distance, after eating some apples that he had found in some trees in the region, which impressively were not destroyed by the mortals of the area, he flew in towards the ocean. The seas were crystal clear and beautiful, he could see and feel fish swimming and living their lives, at least something good in this world, he kept reminding himself of the time he spent with his master and the time he just watched, they had visited an aquatic planet one day, and he remembered it as if it were yesterday, the planet was a wasteland, there was no sign of life, and overnight, an incredible ecosystem had emerged, Gowasu had explained that we didn't need to intervene for the planet to evolve, everything was like a river, which followed its natural course, the gods were like rain, we could do very well a storm and reverse the course of the river as we wished, but ignorantly he thought that we should let the river follow its natural course, wherever somewhere in its path, an intelligent life form would gain the blessing of the gods to be able to imitate them, but they always made the same mistakes, no matter the world, thinking about it just reminded him of his goal. He could see that he had arrived on land, as he landed, he looked around, a simple forest with a large river that led further north, he then decided that he would train, he knew he could still control his ki, but he still did not know the full potential of his body. Taking a deep breath, he fired up his aura with a roar, with that, his silver aura began to dance around his body, the ground gradually began to shake, he began to scream and scream more, while the aura increased more and more, becoming a gigantic pillar silver, but without him noticing, his horn started to shine, the brightness increased the more he released his ki, and without him noticing, the sun started to move, and suddenly, the moon appeared on the horizon, he continued to scream , his spiky hair starting to rise and a crater forming on the ground, while stones floated around him, the moon and the sun met in the middle of the sky, and formed an Eclipse, when he finished, he left his pose, and opened his eyes, looking at his fist, opening and closing, he was with all his power in the base form, the silver aura danced around his body, the crater was gigantic, and he had destroyed with much of the forest, and looking at the sky, he noticed what had happened, for the first time in a long time, the god was surprised, but slowly a smile appeared on his face. It seems that the marks given to him were not just decoration, he was fulfilling a prophecy, all mortals in this world will know, this is the breath of a new era! Canterlot was in chaos, confusion and fear dominated the streets, the fear of a new 'Nightmare Moon' was in the air, the royal guard was doing everything possible to maintain order, however the Eclipse in the sky was difficult to explain, Celestia had not yet spoken to her subjects about what happened generating even more paranoia, and the situation only got worse, she was sitting on her royal throne, decorated with gold and her sun symbol in the middle, she was thoughtful and tense, beside her was her sister, Luna, in her throne decorated with crystals and black with her moon theme, she was showing a worried expression towards her sister. "Tia, are you sure? It is not possible for a new Alicorn to exist? never in the history of Equestria has anything like this happened! What if that Griffin is lying? a city cannot just explode out of nowhere!" Celestia would sigh while supporting her head with her hand "That Griffin, she’s called Gabriella, and she’s a friend, if Twillight trust her, i will also, you don’t need to be so suspicious of her little sister, and if what she said is real, this situation is more worrisome than anything Equestria has been through…" Luna leaned thoughtfully on her throne, so she raised an eyebrow at her sister "More than Nightmare Moon...?" With a long sigh, she looked back at her sister with an expression of concern "Maybe worse than Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker combined...." Author's Note Hello! Thank you for reading this chapter! he is small, but shows Equestria's reaction to the discovery of Eclipse and him discovering some of his power, thanks and peace!
