A Chiseler's Tale

by OneLonelyPickle

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance
Length: 3695

A hippogriff artisan wishes to court the lady of his dreams

Roughclaw was the last hippogriff anyone thought about when it came to romance. But in truth, he was consumed by the idea of courting the one he loves.

The problem was that a simple, grizzled stone mason and chiseler like him had nothing to offer that well-off, handsome hippogriffs couldn't provide. That was until Roughclaw read about the ancient jewelberry.

This is my story that earned a top 10 spot in the Iron Author speed-writing challenge of Ponyfest 3.0, hosted by Xepher. This version is heavily edited but maintains the same basic premise.

Published 2020-05-31 20:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2020-05-31 20:50:01 UTC

Courtship the Mount Aris Way

Click, clang, clack!

Roughclaw wiped the sweat from his brow with a forearm. In one claw was a chisel, and in the other was a hammer. His muse was before him — well, actually, two muses.

One muse, the least important one, was a hunk of prized Crystal Empire granite. The hippogriff stallion saved up every bit he made as a stone mason and every month would buy a piece of the elusive material to chisel into a work of art. That was his true love — the stone masonry just paid the bills.

His main muse, however, was a hippogriff mare named Beauty Credence. Roughclaw snuck peeks at her from behind his imposing block of art-to-be. He stood on his perch above the center of the city, whereas she was mingling below with friends. Beauty shined in the mid-day sun. How could Roughclaw even begin to describe such a picture of beauty?

A proper description would have to start with her eyes. Those gems, a piercing magenta, sparkled and dazzled more than any diamond or ruby Roughclaw had ever before seen, and his profession brought him into contact with more than a few. Beauty’s eyes captured his soul and melted his heart. No hippogriff would ever guess, but the very sight of those eyes made him want to write a poem, though he could never place the words together.

Next were the contours of her head, her neck, her body, and her lithe limbs. At the top of her befeathered head flowed streaks of ruby-red hair, a mane like a river. Following that river led down towards a pristine white coat, an ocean of ivory, every feather in its perfect place. Her wings: fragile, yet so powerful in their elegance. Each leg and each hoof was, in Roughclaw's opinion, like a finely crafted piece of marble. Her tail hung down like a great swath of red silk, shimmering in the sunlight like the back fin of a mesmerizing deep-sea fish.

Roughclaw loved, most of all, her little, demure beak, which was nothing like his.

He had a big, gnarly, orange beak, with a crook in the middle of it, like a broken carrot. His eyes were a smoky grey, surrounded by an ebony face that could only belong to a stone mason and chiseler. The rest of his body matched his profession, and that was perhaps why ponies gave him a wide berth on the streets of Hippogriffia. It wasn't so much that the denizens of the awe-inspiring mountain city disliked Roughclaw — they were simply keeping their distance out of respect for his ability to turn a huge slab of quartz into pebbles with one smash of his hulking arm. He stood at least a head above any other hippogriff male and was two heads above Beauty.

The artisan shook his head. He resumed his work with a sigh. There wasn't much use in thinking about anything now. He and Beauty were good friends, having spent a lot of time talking about masonry and artistry in general, as he had done some work on her family's business before. They would say hello most days. But it wouldn't be long before one of her many suitors presented Beauty with a gift that would be accepted, and which would earn her eternal affections.

Roughclaw had never paid much mind to the hippogriff tradition of courting, not until he had reached the age where mares like Beauty started to catch his eye. But now it consumed his thoughts whenever he strayed from whatever chisel-related task he was working on, and it always concerned Beauty.

If I want to win her as my life partner, I need to give her a gift that no other can, Roughclaw thought as he took careful aim on a curve of his granite before lightly tapping it with his hammer. He looked at the other side of the statue-in-progress, nodded to himself, and resumed his work on the front side. But... that's not going to happen. His granite was shaping up to be... something. Roughclaw never really thought about what he was making when he chiseled and just let his creative side take over. It was the only time he could do such a thing.

As the day progressed and Roughclaw worked away on his granite, he noticed that Beauty had left the center of the city. It bothered him when he couldn't see her, because he never knew if some hippogriff was going to sweep her off her feet. Roughclaw put his mind back into his chiseling to keep his mind away from the scary thoughts.

His granite was shaping into a hippogriff. Roughclaw had never made a statue of a hippogriff before.

Interesting... he thought, taking a sip of some water. He cleared his throat, shook his arms from side to side to keep them limber, and lined up another hit of his chisel. He was going to make an eye. A very stunning eye. And it'd have a partner, of course. Roughclaw worked furiously for a few minutes, impassioned with an artist's fervor. He beheld his finished work with stunted breath.

"It's—" Roughclaw took a step back. He could picture magenta in those granite eyes, even if no other hippogriff could. They were perfect. He smiled.

The day came to a close and Roughclaw threw a sheet over his statue and tools. He flew down to the city proper and went to his favorite tavern to end the day with some hot soup. He admired the stonework of the structure as he entered its doors.

Some of my best work.

The hippogriffs that stood between him and the bar cleared the path as Roughclaw lumbered to a stool and took a seat, the furniture underneath groaning in despair and stress.

"The usual?" The bartender said to him without looking, and Roughclaw grumbled in the affirmative. Soon enough a big bowl of grub and beetle soup slid along the bar top before coming to a stop in front of the biggest hippogriff in the tavern. Roughclaw ate slowly. He didn't have anywhere in particular to be afterward.

A newspaper caught Roughclaw's eye as he finished the last drops of his evening meal. It looked like someone had left it behind.

"Barkeep?" Roughclaw asked, motioning to the stack of papers. "That anyone's?" The bartender shrugged.

"The guy who was there left a few minutes ago. What, you wanna read it? It's just a newspaper, I'm sure he won't mind you borrowing it, IF he comes back at all."

Roughclaw smiled very lightly. His routine usually involved him leaving the tavern and just heading home, but this time Roughclaw thought he might spice things up a bit and see if anything interesting was in the paper. He grabbed it and stared at the front page:

“Courting Season Well Under Way! See our List of the Lucky Lovers!”

Roughclaw dropped the paper and sighed as he rested his head on a claw.

"Can't get away from it, no matter what I do,” he said sadly.

He glared at the wall, then briefly flicked his eyes across the paper once more. Finally, he exhaled, fed up with himself. He grabbed the paper once more and scanned the front page, carefully ignoring its biggest headline. Something else did catch his eye, however:

“1,000 Years Since Legendary Jewelberry Last Seen”

Roughclaw raised a brow. He looked behind each of his shoulders as if someone might be watching, then turned his attention back to the newspaper. He flipped to the appropriate page and skipped through the article.

... the Jewelberry has not been seen for a thousand years as of today. Careful records found in the archives of Hippogriffia tell of the last appearance of this elusive fruit, which is said to shine a perfect magenta—

Roughclaw read the words in his head several times before his eyes grew wide in realization.

Impossible! he thought. The same color as...

A stray thought, a rogue thought that he ought not to have had, made Roughclaw read on. He skimmed most of the article but did learn that the jewelberry was last seen on the east side of Mount Aris, in a small cavern.

"A thousand years..." Roughclaw mouthed. He looked back up to the wall and focused on a random point.

Something like that... would be perfect!

Roughclaw allowed a genuine smile to grace his face.

Could I really... find that? And give it to—

His mind became images of Beauty. He saw a scene play out in his mind of him presenting a real jewelberry to the love of his life, and her leaping into his claws after accepting his courtship.

He jumped off the appreciative stool, scaring the others around him. Realizing how rambunctious he had been, Roughclaw cleared his throat and sheepishly smiled around him. He ran towards the entrance, but realizing he hadn't paid, did a quick double-take and threw some bits towards the bar. "Hey!" the barkeep shouted as Roughclaw took to the air outside.

Once he reached his perch, Roughclaw began to gather his things. He threw several different sized chisels and hammers into a burlap sack and tied it tight. He looked up into the sky. The moon was a mere crescent, and the mountain at night was dark. He thought about trying to find a cavern in the side of the mountain at night, and realized he’d have better luck trying to conjure up a jewelberry with his mind.

"Tomorrow, first light," he said to himself. He curled up in the middle of his perch and closed his eyes.

An eternity passed.

Roughclaw opened his eyes excitedly. It was still night.

"This is going to be a long night..." he lamented.

One sleepless night later and Roughclaw was soaring downward along the side of Mount Aris. His heavy eyelids were almost too much even for his strength. He shook his head wildly, the burlap sack tied around his chest swinging and threatening to fall away. His powerful wings and form had no trouble in the heavy winds of the mountainside. He couldn't picture other hippogriffs being able to do what he could do.

Eventually Roughclaw decided it was time to investigate the many different crevices and openings in the mountain. He decided he would start at the base of the mountain on the east side and work his way up. For hours he poked his head into the different holes, if he could fit it inside, and looked for the bright glow of the berry that he knew would give its hiding place away.

By the end of the day, twilight in full swing, an orange blanket of light covering the huge mountain, Roughclaw was grimy, sweaty, smelly, and tired. But he was not one jewelberry richer. With a heavy heart, he flew back to Hippogriffia. He reached the tavern as the sun escaped under the horizon. He resumed his normal routine: Ordering a bowl of soup, thinking about Beauty, then going to his perch and sleeping.

"Tomorrow for sure," he said as he settled into bed, not quite believing himself. On that night, sleep came easy, given how exhausted the hippogriff was.

The next day, Roughclaw bought a newspaper to read for when he set off to the next stop in his jewelberry search. Before leaving the city, however, a female voice stopped him.

"Hey you! Where are you off so early?" Beauty got so close to Roughclaw that her lavender and spice perfume consumed his senses. He contorted his beak and face into a smile.

"M-Mornin', Beauty. I'm, uhhh, off to look for something."

"Oh, what?" she replied, eyes aglow with interest. Her smile flipped Roughclaw's stomach upside down. He brought a claw to his chin.

"Well it's — you see I... uhhh..." Roughclaw closed his eyes. "It's a secret!" he blurted out, louder than he had meant to. Beauty flinched.

"A sec—" was all Beauty could say before Roughclaw took to the skies.

"I've gotta go!"

Roughclaw mentally kicked himself as he took to his usual path outside the city.

Stupid, stupid, stupid!

But it was necessary. Roughclaw couldn't bare the thought of Beauty telling him face to face that she had accepted a suitor's courtship, and he also didn't want to waste any time not looking for the jewelberry, even if it was time with her. That was, at least, how he reasoned away his cowardice.

Roughclaw opened his newspaper to the courtship list as he flew to the east side of the mountain. He made sure to scan every name on the list of courted hippogriffs and exhaled with relief as he did not see his love's name on it.

Day two was much the same as day one, with Roughclaw exploring as many crevasses and fissures as he could. If the openings were wide enough, he would chisel and hammer them away until he could squeeze in. Sometimes there was no point, and he never wanted to risk an avalanche or cave wall collapsing. But despite the speed of his progress in exploring, Roughclaw was still not much farther above the base of the mountain. It could take months to find the jewelberry — if it existed at all.

By the time the sunset appeared, Roughclaw had investigated 143 different possible locations of the jewelberry, never so much as seeing a single glimmer or twinkle. He flew back home. He went about his normal routine: order soup, think of Beauty, go to bed.

At some point I need to do some more work to earn more bits... and Beauty won't wait forever...

Roughclaw was exhausted, but wanted to stare at the moon, which had waxed a bit more than the night before.

"Oh Beauty..."

Sleep eventually won him over and Roughclaw awoke anew on day three. His new routine was established: he purchased a paper, performed all manner of physical and mental gymnastics to avoid Beauty, flew to a new site for searching and read the paper at the same time, didn't see “Beauty Credence” anywhere, then exhaled peacefully. Upon reaching the area he was to explore for the day, he set to his task with a craftsman's focus. Sometimes he chiseled, sometimes he hammered, and sometimes he did nothing.

After searching 156 possible locations, he flew back home. Soup, Beauty, bed.

The day after was the twin of the day before. He had caught a yearning look from Beauty as he shunned her once more. It nearly broke his spirit. He searched 124 locations that day.

Roughclaw continued his tireless searching as the week progressed, and then one week became two.

Finally, on the night of the full moon, Roughclaw found himself impassioned, and tears welled in his eyes.

He never wanted much out of life. He was content to work with his claws to build works of stone for Hippogriffia and works of art for himself. That was enough for a simple hippogriff like him. But the one thing he lacked was something beautiful, and real, like him, to share his life with. No other hippogriff would do — it had to be his Beauty. Roughclaw was an artist and a perfectionist. He had to have her.

Yet there he was, with her in his grasp, and the only thing he lacked was a darn jewelberry to court her with! That was the only thing missing. Doubt crowded around Roughclaw and prodded him.

The light of the moon caught on something and caused a long shadow to touch Roughclaw's face, knocking him out of his slump. It was the statue he had been working on.

"Huh, haven't touched that in a while."

Something made Roughclaw stand up. He walked over to his unfinished work of art, threw off the sheet covering it, and picked up the small chisel and hammer near its base. Without thinking, he started to chisel away. He had to finish the face, at least.

He worked as if possessed, making sure every detail was immaculate.

Click, clang, clack!

The sounds of his chisel echoed from cliff to cliff, a lone sound cracking through the silence of the night. In the purple sky above clouds danced with stars. His craft overtook him, and before he knew it, the sun crept over the mountainside.

Roughclaw was done. His greatest piece of art was revealed in the morning light.

"Wow..." he breathed, surprised with himself with what he had created.

It was Beauty Credence. Down to the last rocky feather and clump of hard fur. Roughclaw beamed as he felt his legs give out. He collapsed and fell into a deep sleep.

Swirling, wavy images danced in his dreams. White, ruby-red, ebony and smoky grey — the colors formed into elementary pictures of him and Beauty. They danced together atop a peak and then soared together under the light of a full moon. The images eventually coalesced into a blue sky, dotted with clouds. Roughclaw realized he was awake again.

He threw himself to his feet and looked around frantically for his sack of tools.

“The jewelberry! I have to find it!” he cried. He found his sack and relaxed. He swung it around his chest, started to tie it, but his eye caught a glimpse of the statue.

He focused and looked at the statue.

And he looked some more.

Then Roughclaw had a crazy idea, even crazier than the one he had had in the tavern all those weeks ago.

I've always just let my worries and my mind go when I do my chiseling. I didn't fear making mistakes or ruining the granite... it turned out just the way I wanted, every time! It just felt right!

He contorted his face into an expression of determination. He realized his thoughts into words, spoken with pep to himself.

"And this... this feels right!"

Roughclaw shot forward. He threw off the sack around his chest and picked up the statue instead, which even with his strength was painfully heavy, and looked to the ground below. Sure enough, there she was.

Roughclaw descended. Each flap of wings was a struggle. He stood in the center of the city, onlookers unsure of what he was doing. Some kept at bay out of fear, and others got closer to look at the beautiful statue he held.

The townsfolk crowded around. Off to one side of the city center was the real muse of Roughclaw in the flesh. His face was still determined. His heart pounded. He knew what he had to do. He lifted himself off the ground with his wings and flew right up to his Beauty.

She was with a group of friends, and a few paces away Roughclaw spotted yet another suitor, nicely dressed and carrying a wrapped present. Roughclaw gave him a look and the suitor flew off. Beauty was staring with glowing eyes as she saw what Roughclaw was carrying.

"Wow..." she said with bated breath. "Is that... me?"

Roughclaw gingerly placed the statue in front of Beauty. He nodded.

"I'm sorry, Beauty. I've been avoiding you for such a long time." The world around him closed off, and he honed in on the two magenta gems sparkling in his direction. "I was searching for this thing called the jewelberry to give you, for the courtship." Roughclaw couldn't believe how calm his voice was. "It’s supposed to be the most beautiful thing to ever grace Mount Aris."

The crowd was murmuring now. Beauty's cheeks turned a shade close to her eyes.

"O-Oh?" she asked.

"But," Roughclaw chuckled at himself, "I couldn't find it. I searched 4,000 different holes, caves, burrows... and just couldn't find it." He took a step forward, then another. He towered over her, and they would be beak to beak were they the same height. "But I did find something."

"Which was?" Beauty risked a smile.

"I found the courage to tell you how I feel." He gulped. His face must have been as flushed as hers, for it certainly felt as hot as hers looked. "I love you, Beauty."

Her breathing became shallow. She giggled involuntarily, and so did Roughclaw, the two like young school birds again.

"Y-you do?"

Roughclaw nodded slowly. They were both spelunking in the depths of eachothers eyes.

"I don't know if my statue is better than what another hippogriff can give you... honestly, I don't even care. The real gift I want to give you is my heart." He swallowed hard and started to recite words as if they were rehearsed:

"The sight of your eyes, the most precious of stones,
And your hair, the most luxurious of silks.

The feel of your presence, which lifts me to the sky,
And of my beating heart, which tells me this is real love.

The sound of your voice, an angelic choir,
And your laugh, which lights a spark inside me.

The smell of your scent and your perfume,
Intoxicating, riveting, and wholly yours.

The taste of your kiss, which haunts my dreams...

That was all that came out. Roughclaw shook his head. How did he do that? He heard the stomping of claws.

The crowd was applauding. Beauty's complexion was wet with tears. Her smile couldn't be any larger. Without warning she leapt at him, and he instinctively grabbed her mid-fall. The inside of his chest was thumping and he could swear he heard it.

"You idiot!" Beauty cried as she nestled her beak into the side of Roughclaw's thick, downy neck. "I was waiting for you this whole time! You could have given me anything!” The crowd cheered. Roughclaw shifted Beauty in his arms so he could look into those two gemstones of Beauty's that others called eyes — it seemed they were his now. He smiled knowingly.

"Actually," he said with tears in his eyes, this time from happiness, "I think I did find the jewelberry, after all." Beauty looked at him expectantly. "I guess it was long ago, but I didn't realize it until now. And there are two of them."

They kissed, the first of many such passionate embraces.