The Liberator

by Xaf

Prologue (rewrite)

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Canterlot Castle, throne room

We did it I and my army finally destroy the tyranny of all the species of Equestria. Oh, hello my friend, please come in. I am called Mandalore the Liberator but my real name is Mike. You came here to listen to my story and how I liberate humanity? Well, take a seat because it will be a long story.

In the past

Before I end up in Equestria I was a normal human. I loved star wars. I have a job, friends, and a loving family. I remember the week before the accident.

7 days before the accident.

It was a normal day like always. I woke up with the song of my alarm, I stand up, walking toward the kitchen, and prepared a little breakfast. Afterward, I go to the bathroom and take a shower, brush my teeth, and get prepared to go to my job. I worked in a little restaurant where I was a waiter, it was a good job. The staff was united, sympathetic, and respectful. The clients were happy with the service and the food. I've made a few friends in this restaurant and a lot of them love star wars like me so sometimes we go out and watched a film but not only star wars, we watched the new Terminator or horror films for example. After work, I go to see my family and pass time with my mother and sibling. My father died 2 years ago because of cancer. Our hearts were broken when we learned the news. Our father was a good man when my morale was very low he was always here to lighten up my life. Finally, I came back home and do what I make the most: watch or read a lot of star wars. "Why?" you ask. It's because star wars was the thing who was the most present in my childhood. I decided to go to sleep and I have a good dream. I dreamed of me and my father when we play in the garden and of my grandparents telling me their stories and the stories of my ancestors. I was happy like never before.

3 days before the accident.

This day was a little different. I will not explain my morning, I think you know what I do in the morning. So after work, I go to the graveyard where my father was. It was a difficult moment for me, after all, to try to go to a graveyard where one of all the people you love is here, under your feet, it's not an easy task, nobody can say the opposite. I remember what my father said before he died and the promise I made.

2 years earlier, Mike POV

I and my family were all around the hospital bed of my father. We all know it's his last moment with us in this world if there is another after death. Even him he knew it, and it destroys his heart but one thing I will never understand with my father it's his smile. He always smiles even in a difficult moment or even before death itself. Thanks to this smile I always knew there was a solution to my problems but not for his problem. When the doctor enters the room we all know what he will say.

"I'm sorry but it's time you say goodbye I'm afraid." And that sentence will forever haunt me if you can say that. Think of this, you have a father or a mother who was always here to help in your life since you are a child, a person you have beautiful moments, and one day all of this disappear with the death of this person, how your heart react to that? It broke. My mother was broke in tears and more than all of us, why? Well if you are 49 years old and you married for 18 years old with the same man who is on the hospital bed dying your heart is more than broken. And my father was 20 years old when he married my mother, today he is 51 years old.

"Son. Please look at me." After my father say that I slowly turn my head toward him and see is usual smile, how can he do this? I don't know but thanks to that a little smile appeared on my face.

"You need to know I'm proud of you son. When you were in a not joyful moment you never stop to rise and prove to the other they were wrong." Yes, even if I have friends there were always people who tried to make me go down or hurt me with my feelings.

"Don't worry I will always be with you even if you don't see it." It was very hard for me to not cry but I needed this, it's life after all. Right?

"And I want you to make me a promise. Promise me- "cough" "cough" promise me you will not let my death destroy all the way you make okay?"

"I promise dad." I was in tears but this time I don't try to not let them go out.

"Thank you. Thankyou." And with this, he left us. All of us were broke in tears. The man who supported us made us happy, was gone.

Third POV

The Day

This day is the day where my life changed forever. I will pass the morning and work, I think you know what I do now. So after work, I hang out with my friends. If only I knew it will be the last time I see them, I would say goodbye to them and my family.

Now I will explain how I died and you will see it's the worst way to die. So after work, I decided to go back to my home and relax this day was hard but before I can arrive at my house, a car which was driving by a drunk hit me and send my car into a building. I died instantly because the shock was too strong. I thought it was the end. Boy, how I was wrong.

After the accident, Mike POV

I was in a dimension thing I think, why not I think it's not worse than hell.

"So that what death is?" I asked to myself.

"Hello my friend," said a voice, "I see that you're finally here."

"Who are you and what do you want?" I was shocked and a little scared what is this what did it want with me and more question was in my mind at this instant.

"I am Discord God of Chaos pleasure to meet you and for an answer for your second question I'm here for a reason I will tell you later."
I was even more shocked. It was Discord of My little pony a show I watched when I was little.

"And why me of all the people of the world?" I demand

"You see, I watch you for a long time and I'm here to send you to Equestria, I will tell you more when you be there." He says.

This was confusing but why not after all but before this, I wanted to know something.

"I have a question. Since you'll make me go to Equestria do I'll have powers or something?"

"Since you ask yes I've seen you're a fan of this star wars thing I think I will grant you to become a Mandalorian."

When he finished I was excited it was a dream for me so I accepted.

"Okay, I'm in," I said with excitement in my voice.

"Perfect!!", After this, he snaps his fingers and my vision was filled with darkness.


Author's Note

Hello everyone. I decided to rewrite this prologue because I think you agree with me it was too short. I also rewrite it to make this part more sentimental. Tell me if it works.

At the same time you read the prologue I began to write chapter 4. Hope you enjoyed.

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