The Edge of Love

by RemainAtto
Would you like tracking some memories down with me, Octy?

This summer night in Ponyville train station was quite ordinary compared with every other single night that the trains there had witnessed with their dazzling lights. Its platform's edge seemed to be waiting for the next arrival to take away those impatient passengers. As two ponies were casually mumbling something on the bench, in a moment one of them a off-white unicorn lighted her horn to float a piece of crumpled paper and nervously read to the tender grey pony sitting beside her. It was not charming enough, seeming just a common poem that she manged to finish. Though she kept saying how cold this night was, a big surprise of love still embraced her - After all these years...


This is a story I wrote for the RIGHT BACK AT IT AGAIN -
2020 SHIPPING COMPETITION
. Any constructive criticism is welcomed! Feel free to point out the mistakes!:twilightblush:

Everyone
Complete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
OD

3702 words: Estimated 19 minutes to read

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