my love rainbowdash

by pooch56

Rating: teen
Tags: Derpy Hooves, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash, Romance, Original Character, Random, Adventure
Length: 1124

this is a story about my oc and my HUGE crush on rainbowdash

this is a story that i just decided to write and i think i made the first chapter tarable but i am going to keep writing and i hope you guys like
also i got a editor to start editing my storys and he will fix them plaese dont make to much hate on me

Published 2012-09-01 05:44:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-01 05:44:01 UTC

flight camp

writers note=i am a amateur story writer and i have only writen one story and people at my school said it was great to i am trying this out and i hope you like it.also i have some AMAZING ideas for this story i might make cupcakes and my little dashie connect to this story. and i think it will be awesome.

It was a normal day in flight camp. The group allready did warmups and now they wer going for a short fly to get ready for the day. Evening(the name of my oc) was I little slower then everyone else in the group flying. a mare that was in the front of the group noticed I was going a little slow and she for whatever reason.decided to slow down and join me. Evening was confused why would this beautiful mare want to come talk to me and I am also the slowest in the group?evening and this mare for a minite or 2 befor he decided to say hi.and the mare said hi back .evening asked why did you slow down to fly with me? The mare said .well it was at first I noticed you were going a little slow I would give you a pep talk or something .but when I got a good look at you.the mares cheeks redend and she got a smile on her face then she looked away to hide her face.evening asked what is it?
After moment when the mare wasent shy anymore she said .its nothing don’t worry about it.evening said to be a little funny.im worrying!the mare smiled and hit him in the shoulder softly and gigled.then after that she flew back up to the front of the group.evening started wondering why the mare got so shy.but he didn’t have a long time to think befor the warmup fly was over .
After about two hours and bunch of exersises.evening could tell that the beautifull mare was watching him a little here and there.and the next exersize takes a lot of agility and one at a time the other pegisi crashed into eachother and the obstacles.then when evening got up there he did It quickly and easily and made a few ponys gasp.they desided to cheer for him for a few moments befor they tried to do what he did and when he got to the back of the line he noticed the mare and thought.hey she wasn’t infront of me a minit ago.then while he was thinking she said hello.
He was a little shy.he didn’t know why and he tried to say hello but he got red cheeks and then he thought for a moment.wait waitwait do I have a crush on this girl and then befor he could answer himself she said.hey
I want to compliment you and your amazing agility.he blushed a little then he said.thanks.she could emediatly tell he had a crush in her.then he said.wait a sec can I have your name?she said rainbowdash then she blushed a little and asked for his .he said evening my name is evening.he asked her if she was blushing when they wer flying because she had a crush on him.she had dark red cheeks now and she tried to answere yes but befor she culd he huged her and said.shhh you don’t have to answere that lets just be friends for now.

after the sonic rainboom

it has been a week and rainbowdash and evening have become good friends and they hang out together all the time.
its morning and evening allways wakes up first and the coach/teacher wakes up at the same time as him and they normally eat breakfest together.(i dont know what ponys eat so i cant say what they are eating).and while they were eating rainbowdash flew in slowly and quietly and she seemed VERY tierd like she got no sleep.she wasnt realy thinking very much and instinctualy said hey guys.evening stop eating and turned his head to see her he was slytly startled when she siad hey because she was very quiet flying in and he was enjoying his great meal.evening said hay back and asked "how are you?rainbowdash got to the table and said in a sliytly humerus voice "tired " that did make evening get a grin because him and the coach could see that she was not just tierd but exahsted.she sat down next to evening.evening got up and got the tierd mare some food.and she aeat a little fast.after a few minits of eating and they were done the coach was a little slow eating so evening and rainbowdash waited for him to be nice and give him company.

while they were waiting for the coach rainbowdash fell asleep on evenings shoulder it made him smile.he asked the coach if she could sleep for the rest of the day because that race that she made an awesome rainbow yesterday must have worn her out a lot.the coach thought about it and said sure.then evening soon after asked if he could stay with her for the day make sure those bullys dont come to bug here.the coach said ok.

after about an hour all the other ponies in flight camp wher out with the coach doing exercises for the rest of the day.while rainbowdash was sleeping in her bed evening decided to go get some air outside.it was still the morning and the sky was beautifull.probably from ranbowdash making that SONIC RAINBOOM.and getting her cutie mark he was envyus he wish he had his cutie mark.

while he was sitting watching the sky rainbowdash flew out and was more awake and said hey.evening was suprised she woke so soon.he said hey back and asked how she was.she said she was opk and a little tierd and asked .why arent you out doing exercises with the rest of your friends.he replyed.well your kinda my only friend and my best friend and i was supposed to stay with you the rest of the day to make sure your ok.she smiled and sat down next to him and looked at the sky with him.looks beautifull.evening said "just like you".he meant for it to be funny and to flatter her.she blushed and then gave hug i loving hug .then she got up and said" come on lets go for a short fly.rainbowdash took off WOOSH and it was hard for evening to catch up but once he did he was very out of breath and said where are we going?rainbowdash looked to her side and noticed he was very tierd and she slowed down for her a little to be nice and then she answered "dont worry your going to love it"