Author's Note

Remember, i did say you can skip the clop sections, as they're not really important to the overall story. same goes for this one, especially for those of you who do not like: Gang Rape, Mind Control and Force Impregnation. But if you do read this ch: You have be warned!

Chapter 24: The Torment, Begins - Clop (Skippable)

No one can predict what life can throw at someone, as life is unpredictable…and yet in some cases it can be predicted in how ones lot in life goes down a certain path.

And for Zack, the whole MONTH of being in Equestria has been nothing more than a slow downward spiral of bad days, into depression and slight madness, to now being a prisoner to a queen that has a vindictive personality. And her Hive of obedient drones. And today has only added to the rotten lot in Zack’s life. From having a changeling male trying to force himself onto her, finding out that she was now in heat, and after a daring rescue and escape attempt, the alicorn watched as her only friend within the Hive being beaten within an inch of his life, and now Zack was back in her cell with two new guards watching over her.

And now, after a few hours since being returned to her cell, Zack is once again being dragged to Chrysalis’s chambers. No doubt to ‘please’ the queen. Who seems to just take joy in causing pain onto the mare. In fact, during one of the queens bout of sexual intercourse, the queen admitted that at first that she was only doing this because of Zack impaling her. but after the first few days of using the alicorn, the queen has developed a sadistic sense of pleasure and power over a mare that is unable to fight back. Reaching the utmost height of the Hive, the guards stood in front of Chrysalis’s chambers with the bond alicorn

“My queen we brought the prisoner as requested.” One of the guards said to the doors of the queens room, and after a minute or so the voice of the queen replied to the guards announcement.

“Well, bring her in.”

The guards did as their queen demanded, and entered the chamber with Zack trotting behind them. when the trio entered the chamber, Zack found Chrysalis splayed out on her bed, laying rather comfortably on the pile of pillows and blankets. Aside from the queen, their were also eleven other guards circling the center of Chrysalis room, one of the changelings near the bed had a small smile on his muzzle, as he gazed upon Zack with a lustful stare. The two guards that escorted left Zack’s side, leaving the chains that bind her neck and forelegs on the mare.

“Oh Zack, what will I do with you.” Chrysalis chortles as her tails flicks about like a cat.

“Not only did you try to run away when I was coming to get you personally, but you were also being aided by one of my subjects, who has seen to have taken a shine to you and tried to break you out of the hive.” The queen shifted on top her pile of pillows as she keeps her eyes on the alicorn.

“If you wanted to see your friends again, then I will let you.” the alicorn looked up to the queen with a puzzled yet still frighten look on her face.

“You see, I finally came up with a plan to use you in luring the real Twilight Sparkle into my grasp, where I will use the both of you to force Celestia’s hoof in to giving into a few of my demands. I bet Celestia would do anything to get her prized student and fellow princess back.”

“So I’m just going to be a worm on a hook to get Twilight to fall into a trap, is that it?”

“Yes. Simple yet effective.” Chrysalis says with an air of triumph. “Ponies will do anything to save one of their own, even if they are not really a pony.”

“Now. As for your punishment for trying to escape, I think you owe my guards, who had to abandon their original posts, a little bit of, service. And since you’re in heat…” Chrysalis’s grin grew a little wider, same with the five other changelings in her chambers. “You will most undoubtedly not only feel extra pleasure, but give it just as good.” If Zack wasn’t trembling in fear as what was to come earlier, she was now as she was practically a shaking mess.

“And to make sure you don’t get any little ideas…”

Chrysalis’s eyes glowed an ethereal green as her horn was enveloped in magic. Zack could only stand there, curled into herself as she stares fearfully at the queen, before a beam of magic shot from Chrysalis’s horn straight to the alicorn. Almost in an instant the alicorns demeanor changed from the fearful mask, to a sudden visage of blankness, once again having her mind being submitted to the queen mind control. With the alicorn now put under her spell, the queen gestured for the changeling males to go forth, and have their way with the mare. The males wasted no time in making their way over to the alicorn, but they did have to wrestle with one another for who gets first round.

One of the guards managed to reach Zack first before the others, and immediately shoved his erect shaft into the mares folds, eliciting a moan from the mare as the stiff member penetrates her depths. The guard that was mount the alicorn felt immense heat envelope his cock, as the tight walls virtually strangle and swallowed him in. after relishing in the heat of the alicorns cannel, the guard began thrusting in and out of the mare, where the sounds hips smacking against each other started to accompany the moans from the alicorn and guard. But the moans emitting from the alicorn were silenced when another guard inserted his own cock into her mouth, and began assaulting the mare’s throat.

“Remember guards, you may use her until I say otherwise, but do not cum inside her marehood.” the queen warned as she just laid back on her bed, and just watched the show before her. The two guards that currently thrusting into the alicorn couldn’t really respond to their queen’s warning, but they do remember the conditions of their special prize.

The guards continued to thrust in and out of the lobotomized mare, enjoying the tight embrace of Zack’s body, especially the guard thrusting into the ponies vaginal cannel. As the sheer heat from the sweltering depths made his member even more sensitive, and accelerating his rise to climax. And after a few more moments of delivering strong thrusts, the guard quickly pulled his member out of Zack, and shoved the flare of his cock into the alicorns tail hole causing her to moan loudly through her mouthful of dick. Just as the guard in the alicorn’s ass cums hard, the vibration from the guttural moan of Zack’s throat caused the guard fucking her throat to plunge deep into her mouth, before firing a volley of hot sticky cum into her. the two guards took a moment to not only catch their breath, but relish the alicorns inside a bit longer.

Once the guards were done they were practically shoved out of the way, as the next two guards took their turn in plunging into the mind enslaved mare’s mouth and marehood. But as the two changeling began their thrusting, Chrysalis’s horn snapped with magic for a brief instance, ending the mind control on Zack, allowing her to fully experience the activity she was taking, part, in. and when she regained her consciousness, the alicorn whimpered in panic as she tried to struggle out of the compromising position she’s in, while also trying to resist the pleasure that was wracking her body. Unfortunately, her attempts were nothing but futile gestures.

And this cycle of being brought under mind control, and being given mental freedom in a continuous loop. While each pair of guards savored the alicorns body. To make the alicorns day even more unbearable, the guards that already came didn’t just sit on the sidelines, they just toyed with the alicorn’s body. From nibbling and suckling on parts of her body, some even biting down on her, feeling their fangs pierce the ponies soft skin. Some even knelt under Zack, and began to suckle her teats, tongues lapping at the nipples in-between bites. one guard even started messing around with the alicorns own dick, adding more pleasure to the already filled mixing bowl of lust and sex.

Thirty five minutes later all of the guards were spent, their flaccid cocks either hanging or sagging on the floor. While Zack laid on the floor, body splayed out, cum oozing from her mouth and tail hole, belly bulging as it was rather stuff with whatever changeling essence did not backwash, as well as having a pool of her own mare juices and cum coat her stomach and nether's. While her marehood winks with want and need of cum to sooth the burning heat ravaging it. as for the alicorns mental state…being taken in and out of enslavement and freedom, and experience all the raw sex that she was suddenly brought into, it felt like reality itself was starting to blur, leaving the mare in a torpid state.

“Did all of you have fun?” Chrysalis asked her guards with a coy grin.

“I’ve certainly enjoyed my round with her.” the un-armored changeling, who turned out to be Chiton, said as he strokes his limp dick. The other guards also said the also enjoyed their time with the alicorn.

“Good. Now that you all had your fun, return to your posts.”

The guards did as they were told and left the queens chambers and back to their posts. Leaving the queen and alicorn alone. once the guards left the room, Chrysalis remained lounging on her bed, and took in the smells of sex that filled her chambers, a light green blush adorning her muzzle for a bit.

“You know, I was initially going to have a little fun with you while I finalize my plans. But I changed my mind when I came up with this little punishment for you. However, now I’m getting all riled up myself.” the queen says as she looks over to the alicorn, who just continued to lay on the floor.

“Although, taking you while your virtually passed out on the stone floor is not very appealing, in which case.” The queens horn once again pulsed with magic, and the alicorn’s eyes glowed green again. “Come to me.”

At first Zack didn’t move from her position on the floor, but after a minute, the alicorn slowly got to her hooves on wobbly legs. Standing upright the alicorn made her way towards the bed, excess cum dripping from her abused backdoor, reaching the bed the enslaved mare hauled herself up onto the soft mattress. Chrysalis crawling over Zack as the alicorn collapses on the bed.

“You can barely move anymore can you?” the queen whispers into the alicorns ear as her body changes to grow her own member.

“At least you won’t struggle as much when I decide to let you savor the emotions, and pleasure I will bring you.”

Chrysalis lowered herself to she was practically laying on top of the mare, her erect member sliding into Zack’s inviting winking marehood. Inserting all that the alicorn’s inner walls could take in, Chrysalis begins to move her hips, relishing the feeling of the constricting walls, which were even more ravenous than usual. Probably due to both the alicorns heat, and being thoroughly plunged but never filled when the stallions had their fun.

“You know…it would be nice having a offspring of my own.” Chrysalis said to the mare as she started to deliver slower, yet more forceful thrusts. The flare knocking at Zack’s cervix as the queen continues speaking.

“Sooner or later, I will be long gone, so having an heir to my throne would be most beneficial to the Hive, and keeping my legacy alive.” Weak moans were the only reply that the queen received.

“Would you like to help me with this endeavor? Give me an heir to my throne, to carry out my legacy?” Chrysalis again removed the spell placed on Zack’s mind as she went to giving the alicorn more fervent thrusts, causing her worn out body to shift and jostle under her.

“Answer me truthfully.” The queen’s thrust became more exuberant as she leaned ever closer to the pony.

“Do you want, MY, foal?” again, Zack didn’t respond right away. And just as the queen’s hips started to slow down, Zack’s mouth opened before she uttered only one word.

“…y-yes…”

A sinister smile came over the queen’s muzzle, as her hips just started to pound into the alicorn’s marehood, causing her to moan loudly. Gripping the sheets as her wings twitched and weakly flapped, tail thrashing about, and hindlegs weakly bucking at nothing as the mare’s marehood constricted tighter and tighter. Trying to milk the queens cock of the seed that it has been craving for half an hour. And with a few final thrust’s, Chrysalis slammed herself fully into the Zack, causing the alicorn to arch back and screamed out in pure ecstasy, as the burning seed floods the mare’s marehood and seeps deep into her untainted womb.

As her stomach starts to bulge, Zack’s eyes rolled up to the back of her skull as the queen hisses and snarls, greatly enjoying the constricting embrace of her new foal bearer. After a minute of pouring her seed into the mare, Chrysalis slowly pulled herself out of Zack’s cannel, which was trying to keep the queen inside, before exiting with a resounding wet, pop! Once the queen had fully emerged from Zack, the alicorn collapsed upon the bed, panting heavily, as tears flow freely from her eyes.

“Now that you are to bear my heir, you can be sure to have a more, comfortable, stay within the Hive…Countess of the Badlands Hive.” Chrysalis chuckles before laying a kiss on the poor mare’s cheek, then laying down beside her, foreleg wrapped over Zack. Hoof gently caressing the swollen cum filled belly, the belly that will eventually give birth to her heir.