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The Cookie Crumbles

by frenettek314
What if Pinkie didn't forgive Fluttershy for her pushy cookie-selling antics? An alternate ending to "Death of a Salespony" that *may* permanently affect the rest of "Pony Life" Season 1.

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*My first "Pony Life" story - Spoilers for "The Trail Less Trotten and "Death of a Salespony"*


In a desperate push to earn her "Trail Trotters Troop" badge and sell enough cookies to meet her idol, Finn-Tastic, Fluttershy ends up overworking her friends to unreasonable demands.

After a confrontation with her friends that causes her to lash out at them, she sees the error of her ways and apologies for her behavior preventing the group from having fun. Everypony immediately forgives her... but what if Pinkie Pie didn't.

What if instead Pinkie scolded Fluttershy for being selfish and ended up revealing that the Trail Trotter's Troop was a lie? How will this affect their friendship? Can Fluttershy make it up to her now upset companion?

Update (7/26/20): This story now has an AU tag because this story can no longer happen. (*See the episode "Dol-FIN-ale"*)

Everyone
Complete
Slice of Life
Pony Life
Alternate Universe
 
PMF

2873 words: Estimated 14 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

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