New species in Equestria

by SUPERETHAN2

Becoming a citizen and meeting a princess

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Fluttershy gently yawned and woke up with the feeling of something soft embracing her. She smiled when she noticed Marcus, her little human, gently cuddling her. She found herself liking the feeling of his soft skin on her fur. Marcus suddenly yawned adorably, making the pegasus cooed.

“Aw! Aren’t you an adorable little one? You remind me of Angel when he gets into one of his clingy moods,” Fluttershy spoke softly, before giving him a gentle kiss on the forehead.

Marcus gently stirred and opened his eyes to find himself staring into big beautiful blue eyes staring at him like a mother would. He paused when a vague mostly forgotten memory formed in his mind of his birth mother looking at him the same way.

“Good morning, Marcus. I see you slept well,” Fluttershy told him softly with a smile.

Marcus could only nod in agreement.

“We have a big day ahead of us. Shall we eat breakfast, and we can go to Twilight’s to meet with the Princess?”


Fluttershy with Marcus riding on her approached the library. She gently knocked and waited patiently for someone to open the door. After a few seconds, Spike opened the door with a sheepish smile.

“Hello, Fluttershy and Marcus! Glad to see you decided to come early. Twilight is making last minute preparations,” Spike began before sighing, “Hard to believe she would plan ahead to prepare for her, only to still take up to the very last second to do so.”

“Thank you Spike,” Fluttershy simply responded, before being led in.

Inside the pony, dragon, and human saw the purple mare looking over a long scroll, before she finally nodded.

“Alright Spike. I think everything is perfect now,” Twilight announced with a smile, “Now to just wait for the others. Oh. Fluttershy and Marcus. Thank you for coming early. Feel free to make yourselves comfortable until she arrives.”

“Thank you, Twilight,” Fluttershy simply responded, before looking around the place.

The library appeared to have been reorganized several times and everything seemed to have been cleaned to the point of insanity. Fluttershy simply sat down on the floor.

“There’s something I wanted to talk to you about before she and the others get here,” Twilight spoke up.

“Yes, Twilight?”

“I was hoping you would let me run tests on him to find out more about him, since he’s young and likely only knows the basics about his kind.”

“Are you going to hurt him?” Fluttershy asked bitterly to Twilight’s surprise.

“Of course not! I can be gentle with children, and it would be best if we find out more about him in case of complications. Like any pony diseases being more harmful towards him to name an example.”

“I see your point. Ok, but I get to be there and make sure,” Fluttershy agreed with a sigh.

“Don’t worry I will be gentle,” Twilight agreed with a nod.

Before the two could talk more there was a knock on the door.

“Must be at least one of the others,” Twilight mumbled before going to the door.

Twilight opened the door, revealing Pinkie Pie with a small white box in her hooves.

“Hello, Pinkie. Fluttershy and Marcus are here, if he’s the one the box is for,” Twilight told the energetic party pony.

“Great! I wanted to show him a sneak peak of what to expect from his welcome to equestria new sapient species getting adopted by Fluttershy party.”

“Well, at least you are combining it all in one huge party with a long but comprehensible name,” Twilight mumbled.

“Of course. I thought well, I could throw three regular parties, but didn’t want to take up too much space from others and thought no he deserves a better party, so I figured just throw a super-duper party for all three things!”

“I am sure we all will enjoy that. Come on in,” Twilight responded with a smile.

Twilight led Pinkie to the group, before Pinkie bounced to the human sitting on the floor next to Fluttershy.

“Good morning, Marky! In honor of you being a new species here in ponyville and being adopted by Fluttershy, I am throwing you a super-duper party. To hold you off until then I made you some sneak peek cupcakes,” Pinkie greeted the human, before gently rubbing his hair with her hoof.

“Thank you,” was all the human simply said before opening the box and taking a cupcake.

“Yes, thank you Pinkie. I am sure he will like that,” Fluttershy gently said with a small smile.


It wasn’t long until the others arrived and after gently cleaning frosting off Marcus’s face and throwing the empty box away, Fluttershy smiled and nodded at Twilight.

“There. Cleaned up and ready for the princess.”

Right in time too, as there was suddenly a flash of light. Marcus found himself gasping as the biggest pony he had ever seen appeared in front of his eyes. She had white fur with a long blue, green, and pink mane and tail. The most stunning thing about her was she had both a long horn and big wings that were currently folded. To complete the look of royalty she had a crown and golden shoes on her hooves.

“Greetings my little ponies!” She greeted all of the ponies that were currently bowing, before she stared at Marcus, “And my little human.”

“Hello princess,” All the mares greeted.

“Since you were the one who found him Fluttershy could you explain what happened?” The princess asked softly.

The pegasus was asked so softly she found herself able to explain.

“Well, two nights ago while I was getting ready for bed, I saw a Rainbow light and managed to find the courage to investigate. That’s when I found him. Thinking he was a new animal to care for, I brought him inside,” Fluttershy began with a smile, before sighing, “Sadly the next day after learning he is more than a simple animal, I learned he’s an orphan who somehow got transported from his world due to mentioned rainbow light. That’s why I want to adopt him, so he will finally have a family.

“I see and my student did write to me about how your knowledge of zoology surpasses hers and since she could rival some of the well-known zoologists in Equestria, that is impressive,” Celestia began with a small grin, as most of the ponies chuckled, while Twilight lightly groaned and Flutetrshy sheepishly smile, “Impressive enough I am more than happy to grant your adoption and making him an Equestrian citizen in order to make it legal, as long as you analyze and learn more about him. As much as you possibly can. I know Twilight will help you with that.”

Fluttershy simply nodded in response, before Celestia approached the human, looking at her in awe. She gave him a gentle smile, before she gently levitated him up into her hooves. Marcus was so stunned by her appearance that he didn’t notice until all he could see was a pink, blue, and green mane all over his vision. He shook a little in fright.

“It’s ok little one. I won't hurt you. I just wanted to get a closer look at you,” Celestia assured him softly with a gentle smile.

Marcus found himself quickly calming down due to her soft voice and soft fur, due to her gently embracing him.

“Aren’t you an adorable little one. You may be a different species, but you remind me so much of my little colts,” She gently nuzzled his face, “Let me be the first to welcome you as an Equestrian citizen. I will be sure to give both Twilight and Fluttershy the paperwork to make it official.”

“Thank you,” Marcus responded.

“Anything for you my little human. Now, be sure to have a happy and fun childhood and remember despite not being a pony, you are still one of my citizens and will be treated the same way.”


After the meeting and making things more official, Pinkie rushed up to the group.

“Are you done yet, so I can throw the party now?” Pinkie asked, practically jumping in place.

“Yes, Ms. Pie,” Celestia chuckled with a grin.

Celestia loves all of her little ponies, but she has really enjoyed meeting and getting to know Pinkie Pie. The energetic mare really knows how to make things more fun and humorous.

“Yes, Pinkie. Now that we are done filling it out. It’s official, so go ahead and plan it,” Twilight added with a small smile.

“Yippie! I will go do it now!” Pinkie exclaimed before giving Marcus a quick hug, “Get ready little guy for the best party you ever had.”

Pinkie quickly went on her way while the other ponies simply smiled at the excited party pony. Rainbow rushed right up to Marcus with a grin on her face.

“Well, little guy you are one of us now. Now I can give you a ride and maybe show you how to be awesome like me.”

“Rainbow,” Fluttershy said with a sigh.

“Yeah, yeah. I will be careful.”

Applejack was next to walk to the human.

“I have a little sister around your age. Maybe the two of you can be friends.”

“A great idea Applejack. Getting him friends already will help him before starting school,” Twilight responded with a smile.

“How lovely. I have been planning on setting Sweetie Belle up with some friends. We can help the two of them together,” Rarity added with a smile of her own.

“Well sweetie looks like your life is already changing for the better,” Fluttershy told him with a smile, while gently nuzzling him.

Marcus could only nod in agreement. Hard to believe a rainbow light sending him to a world filled with different talking ponies, most of which are mythical creatures from his world, would be how he would end up getting a family, but he certainly won’t complain.

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