My Little Kirin Chronicles: FIM (Rewrite)

by PikachuSkitty

Chapter 3

Previous Chapter

It was another day at the School of Friendship and Summer Blaze and the Young Six were in Fluttershy's class. Mareep and Riolu had joined her party yesterday and the two have fit in quite well with Summer, Rockruff and Wooloo... well... except for one thing....

Wooloo and Mareep, kept competing for Summer's attention.

Every time Wooloo got all of Summer's attention, Mareep would get annoyed and would pick fights with Wooloo, concerning Summer and usually ending in her getting a Thunderbolt and falling onto the floor. Rockruff and Riolu tried to calm the two down but they would give the 'Stay out of this' look.

Now, Fluttershy was discussing the differences between Wooloo and Mareep. The two sheep pokemon stood on either side of her, "Now class, can anyone tell me a difference between Wooloo and Mareep?" Fluttershy asked the class. Ocellus and Smolder raised their arms. "Ocellus and then Smolder."

"Well Professor Fluttershy, Wooloo has white wool while Mareep has cream colored wool." Ocellus said.

"And Mareep is a different typing than Woolo; an electric type." Smolder added.

"Very good." Fluttershy said. As she was talking Wooloo and Mareep looked at each other and growled at each other, making tick marks appear on their heads.

"Baaa...." ("The kirin belongs to me, creamy! She's my mother!")

"Mareepp!" ("Oh yeah, I don't see your name on her coat so she belongs to more than just you..")

"Baaa..." ("You wanna push my buttons, creamy!")

"Mareeppp!" ("Bring it!")

Then to the horror of the class, Mareep and Wooloo leaped at each other and started attacking each other! Mareep unleashed Thunderbolt on Wooloo but Wooloo dodged and unleashed Wild Charge, sending Mareep into the wall. Mareep shook off the attack and the two used Tackle, engaging in a struggle. "Oh no, not again!" Summer whimpered. Summer got up from her seat and tried to break up the two, "Wooloo, Mareep, stop it please." she pleaded. Mareep growled and unleashed Thunderbolt, shocking Wooloo and Summer! "Gaaaahhhh!"

"Summer!" The Young Six cried. Mareep gasped, realizing his mistake and stopped. Summer was smoking with some burn marks on her. She twitched a few times before she fell on the ground.

"Oh dear..." Fluttershy groaned.


My Little Kirin Chronicles: Friendship is Magic


Later that morning, Summer, Wooloo and Mareep found themselves in front of Headmare Twilight. "Summer, this is the third time this week that Wooloo and Mareep have fought in front of the students." she scolded. "That is not what the School of Friendship is about."

Summer felt really guilty while Wooloo and Mareep attempted to get at each other but Rockruff held back Mareep but grabbing his tail and Riolu held back Wooloo by pulling on the braids. "I'm sorry Headmare Twilight."

"Summer, the students could have gotten hurt by their fighting, you know that right?" Twilight questioned. Summer nodded. Mareep and Wooloo known electric type attacks which can be devastating to a student if they accidentally shock them.

Twilight sighed, "I just don't know why they're fighting all of a sudden." Summer admitted. "Wooloo was so gentle and nice.."

"I'm sorry Summer, but we can't have your pokemon causing havoc. So unless you can find the reason for this behavior, I'm afraid I'm gonna have to suspend you, Wooloo and Mareep." Twilight said sadly.

"What?!" Summer gasped. Wooloo and Mareep gasped as well.

"I'm sorry but they aren't safe around the students." Twilight claimed. Suddenly, Sandbar and the Young Six came in, "Wait Headmare Twilight!" Sandbar cried.

"You can't suspend them." Ocellus stated.

"I understand you're concern but I can't have them here with the risk of them harming the students." Twilight repeated.

"But what if we find out what's the cause for their behavior?" Sandbar suggested. "If we find the cause maybe that will bring together a solution to the problem, please Headmare Twilight? Give us a chance."

"Hmmmm..." Twilight thought. "Alright, I'll give you until the end of the school day to figure out the cause. I'll excuse you from your other classes."

"Thank you Headmare Twilight." The Young Six stated in unison.


Soon, the group were outside of the school; where they could investigate without the concern of injuries. Riolu and Rockruff continued to keep Wooloo and Mareep apart from each other. "Alright Summer, since you know more about the pokemon than we do, maybe you could give us some insight." Ocellus started. "When did this fighting start to happen?"

"Well... it started after Mareep and Riolu joined my party. Wooloo seemed tensed around Mareep, and I don't know why?" Summer explained.

"Hmm.... can you name some specific events where Wooloo was tense or vice versa?" Silverstream questioned.

"Events...? Let's see....

Flashback

"Mareep did get a small stomach ache once from eating too much pokemon food and I was giving it a tummy rub. " Mareep was aw Summers' house on its back as Summer rubbed its stomach as it gurgled, making Mareep groaned. "Shh... it's alright Mareep. I'm right here." Summer cooed to the Wool Pokemon. Mareep turned to her and smiled.

What Summer didn't see was Wooloo was peeking around the corner with a tick mark floating beside it. Wooloo grumbled to himself and walked up to Summer. "Baa..."

"Huh? Oh hi Wooloo, sorry I can't play right now. I have to take care of Mareep." Summer cooed as she continued to rub Mareep's stomach. Mareep cooed happily but suddenly Wooloo pounced onto Wooloo, scaring Mareep and it unleashed a Thunderbolt, shocking everyone in the room! "Gaaaahhhh!" Summer screamed in pain."

Flashback End

"Hmm.... good, anything else?" Smolder asked, crossing her arms. Summer thought back again, "There was another incident...

Flashback

Summer was treating Wooloo after he had accidentally fell off of her bed and fell onto her right front leg, resulting in a sprain. "I was treating Wooloo for a sprain leg when Mareep came into the room." Mareep gave a small cry alerting Summer to the its presences. "Hi Mareep, what is it?" Mareep gave another cry and nodded outside, "Oh... sorry Mareep, I can't play outside with you today. I have to treat Wooloo first. Maybe we can do it when she's healed." Mareep gave a dejected cry and Summer felt kinda bad for the Wool Pokemon. Wooloo gave a small 'baa' to Mareep making Mareep upset and it tackled Wooloo, making them roll all around the room. "Wah! Wooloo, Mareep! Stop it!" Summer cried in a panic before the two collided with her face. "Ugh!"

Flashback end

"That why kirin friend came with hurt eye, that day?" Yona asked. Summer nodded. That incident resulted in Summer have a black eyes for a few days.

"Hmm... also interesting..." Ocellus said.

"Too bad, they didn't give us clues." Smolder said dejected.

"I'm not so sure about that, Smolder." Sandbar said. "In both events when Summer was caring for either Wooloo or Mareep, the other pokemon seemed... jealous."

"Jealous?" Summer questioned, having never heard about that before.

"Yeah, when you were taking care of Wooloo, I think Mareep felt jealous of Wooloo and that's why it attacked it and vice versa which would explain one reason why they were fighting."

"But what's the other reason?" Gallus asked.

"Summer... exactly how did you meet Wooloo?" Sandbar asked.

"Well... I found Wooloo and Rockruff as two eggs that were in a box that was delivered to my old home. I cared for the eggs for some time before they hatched. Wooloo and Rockruff looked at me and they immediately bonded with me." Summer explained.

"That makes sense, when a pokemon hatches, the first thing it sees after hatching is assumed to be its' mother.." Ocellus said. "So Wooloo and Rockruff think you're they're mother."

"But what does that have to do with Mareep?" Silverstream asked, scratched her head confused.

"Wooloo must have thought Mareep was trying to replace her. Since Wooloo think Summer is her mother, before Mareep came, Summer gave all of her attention to Wooloo, as a mother should, and with Mareep in the picture, it doesn't like the fact that now Summer has to share her attention with Mareep." Ocellus deducted.

Summers' eyes widened as she realized that Ocellus was right! She turned to Mareep and Wooloo, "Wooloo, Mareep? Is that true?" she asked her two sheep pokemon who have stopped trying to start a fight each other and were now listening to their conversation. Wooloo and Mareep lowered their heads and nodded.

"Aww... guys.." Summer took both pokemon in her arms. "I love you both equally and I'm sorry if I acted like I was giving one more attention that the other. I didn't know. Wooloo, now that I know you think of me as your mother since I hatched you, you have to understand, no matter how many pokemon; sheep or not, that I get, I'll always have enough attention for all of you and that will never change."

Wooloo and Mareep nodded, "That's what I like to see." a voice said and the group turned and saw the Mane 6 walking towards them. "Headmare Twilight, Professors?" Sandbar exclaimed in shock, surprised to see the six. "What are you doing here?"

"We came to see how your investigation was going and it seems you found out the cause." Twilight smiled.

"I can understand how Wooloo must have felt. Angel Bunny gets jealous sometimes when I give attention to my other animals friends." Fluttershy sympathized.

"And we're glad you worked out your problems, sugarcube." Applejack smiled. Summer smiled and nuzzled her two sheep pokemon. "No matter how many pokemon I'll befriend, I'll always have time for you guys." she stated. Rockruff, Riolu, Wooloo and Mareep cried happily before dog-piling onto Summer, making her laugh while the Young Six and Mane 6 smiled at the group.

Dear Tree of Harmony,

Today I learned that some friends can experience jealousy in many situations. Wooloo and Mareep started fighting soon after Mareep joined the group. Though the help of my friends, I learned that Wooloo was worried she would lose my attention when Mareep entered the picture since she was the only sheep I paid attention too and that I hatched her, making her think of me as her mother. I learned that show recognize signs of jealousy before they excels into something dangerous and I showed Wooloo and Mareep that no matter how many pokemon friends I have, I'll always have attention for the two of them.


Summer and her pokemon were outside of the School of Magic, playing together. "Okay, Rockruff.. Go fetch!" Summer threw the ball in her magic and Rockruff barked happily before chasing after the ball, "Rockruff…! Rock..!" Summer chuckled as she watched her puppy pokemon dashing through the field after the ball.

Wooloo and Mareep have gotten along much better now and were now the best of friends, much to the relief of Riolu and Rockruff, who now didn't have to worry about breaking up their small fights. Rockruff came back with the ball in his mouth and dropped it in front of Summer, "Good boy, Rockruff…" Summer cooed, rubbing his head. Rockruff barked happily and wagged his tail. "Hey Summer..!"

Summer turned and saw Sandbar and the Young Six coming towards her. "Hey Sandbar, Hey everyone, what is it?" she asked.

"Headmare Twilight and the Professors have invited us to the Grand Galloping Gala in Canterlot." Silverstream said with joy.

"The Grand Galloping Gala?" Summer asked, confused.

"It's like a big fancy party that held every year in Canterlot." Gallus explained, not amused. "Sounds boring to me."

"Oh come on Gallus, it'll be fine as long as we're all there together." Ocellus reassured.

"Umm… actually you guys.." Summer started, scuffing her hoof along the ground, "Maybe I could skip the Gala this year.."

The Young Six gasped.

"Why Summer wanna skip Gala?" Yona asked Summer, confused.

"It's just… I never really went to any of the Gala, even when I moved to Canterlot." Summer explained.

"Why not?" Smolder questioned.

"It's full of high-class snooby ponies and I'm a kirin from outside of Equestria." Summer stated. "Going to the gala would undoubtly result in me being humiliated by the ponies."

"Oh come on, Summer. You're overreacting." Sandbar dismissed. "Besides, we'll be there with you. So you won't be the only non-pony in the crowd." Summer sighed.

"Please Summer come with friends?" Yona pleaded. Summer looked at her friends, knowing they weren't going to have her miss out that easily. "Alright… I'll go to the Gala…" Summer conceded.

"Hooray..!" The Young Six cheered. Summer, meanwhile, grumbled to herself.

The Young Six took her to Rarity's boutique, where they were hoping Rarity could make a dress for her. "Professor Rarity?" Sandbar asked, drawing Raritys' attention as was currently making a dress for somepony else. "Oh Sandbar, you don't have to address me as Professor, outside of school, darling. Now what can I help you all with?" Rarity asked.

"We were hoping you could make a dress for Summer, so she can go to the Grand Galloping Gala with us." Smolder replied.

"Oh of course, Smolder dear." Rarity complied. "Come along Summer." Summer sighed but she followed Rarity into one of the rooms in her shop. While Rarity was taking the measurements for Summers' dress, she couldn't help but ask, "Summer, dear. You seem a bit unhappy about going to the Gala. Care to explain why?"

"It's just… I've never been to a Gala before in my life. Even when I lived in Canterlot, all I did was stay inside and read." Summer explained.

"Ah… so you're worried about not fitting in?" Rarity guessed. Summer nodded, "Don't worry darling, if you just be yourself at the Gala, I'm sure everypony will love you."

Summer sighed, "Maybe…"

After a few hours, Summer's dress was finally finished. "Presenting the new and improved kirin, Summer Blaze!" Rarity announced and she pulled back the curtain revealing Summer in her new dress. She was wearing white shoes on her hooves and her dress was tanished with leaf designs in it along with white fur on the outside. "Awesome, Rarity!" Sandbar praised.

"Kirin Friend look great." Yona added.

"You'll be the hit of the ball, Summer!" Ocellus replied with a smile. Summer blushed a little from all the praise. "Hehe…" Rockruff, Riolu, Mareep and Wooloo adored the dress.

"Hehe, I think your pokemon love the dress too." Gallus smiled. Summer gave a small smile to her pokemon friends.

Meanwhile, outside of the boutique, Nightshade and Fang were watching from afar. "So… the kirin and the pokemon are going to a fancy gala, huh? Sounds like the perfect time to strike." Nightshade growled.

"Yeah… um… how would be do that?" Fang questioned. Nightshade sighed and facehooved. "I'll explain when we get there.." Nightshade growled. Fang nodded and the two went back into the shadows.

That night, the Young Six arrived at the Gala along with Summer and her pokemon. They entered the palace and saw Twilight and the Mane 6 all dressed up for the Gala. "Sandbar, everyone. I'm so glad you could make it." Twilight said with a smile.

"Thanks." Sandbar said, adjusting his tuxedo.

Summer's pokemon gave their own greetings to the six of them, which drew some attention from the high-class ponies.

"What are those creatures suppose to be?"

"They look weird."

"Why are they here?"

Summer heard some of the commented and folded her ears down, which didn't go unnoticed by the group. "Hey, don't let those snobs get to you, Summer." Gallus stated. "This is the night to have fun."

Summer gave a small smiled but it quickly turned back into a frown. Before the group could saw anything else, Princess Celestia came in, "Hello everypony." she greeted. Everypony bowed to her as she came up to them. "Good evening, Princess." Twilight greeted.

"Good evening Twilight, and you too Summer Blaze." Celestia greeted back. "How are you enjoying living in Ponyville?"

"Oh..! I-It's great… hehehe." Summer stated, nervously.

"She's just frettin about the high-class ponies here." Applejack added.

"Well don't worry about them, Summer. Just stay with your friends and enjoy the night." Celestia reassured.

Summer nodded, "Princess? Where's Princess Luna?" Fluttershy asked.

"Alas, my sister has decided to miss out on the gala." Celestia sighed with a small frown.

"Why? Its at night so she could be wide awake?" Rainbow questioned.

"Since my sister had returned from the moon, she has felt a bit… insecure about attending social events. She would rather perform her duties than try to reconnect with her subjects." Celestia explained.

Summer thought about what Celestia said for a moment and asked, "Princess… can I.. Go and talk with Luna?"

Everypony and creature looked at her, surprised. "Of course, Summer. She's out on the balcony, raising the moon." Celestia informed Summer. Summer nodded and she and her pokemon went out onto the balcony where they saw Princess Luna raising the moon, high into the sky.

"Umm.. Princess Luna?" Summer called. Luna stopped using her magic on the moon and turned to Summer, "Oh Summer Blaze.. what are you doing here?"

"Your sister said you would be out here instead of trying to reconnect with your subjects." Summer explained. Luna folded her ears, sadly before turning back around, "Well... yes... ever since I returned from my banishment, I've been worried that my former subjects would still fear me at any social gatherings. So I stay out here and perform my duties as Princess of the Night rather than try to reconnect with them."

"But if you don't try to reconnect with them, you'll never know if they still fear you or not." Luna sighed, "But how can I? After what I did as Nightmare Moon?"

"They've forgiven you, along with your sister... you just have to try instead of hiding." Summer reassured. Luna looked back at Summer. "You really think so?"

Summer held out a hoof to Luna, "You won't know unless you try.." Luna looked at Summer's hoof and gave a small smile before taking it in her own. The duo walked back into the castle and were about to head to the gala when..

BOOM!

"What the-?" Summer exclaimed. Luna and Summer rushed to the ballroom and saw ponies running and screaming in panic. "What is going on?" Luna exclaimed.

"Roo!" Riolu pointed and Summer gasped when she saw two ponies and Houndour, who had cornered everypony including Celestia, the Young Six and the Mane Six! "Nightshade!" "Fang!" The two ponies looked at her and grinned, "Ah.... you've finally came out of hiding huh? Great. Houndour, Flamethrower!" Nightshade ordered and his Houndour blasted a stream of fire at Summer but Rockruff countered with Rock Throw. "Rooooo!"

Luna flew over the crowd to her sister, "Celestia..! Are you alright?"

"I'm alright sister." Celestia smiled.

"Houndour, use Sludge Bomb!" Fang ordered and his Houndour launched a ball of poison that struck Rockruff hard and it fell on the ground with purple bubbles coming out of his. "Rockruff..!" Summer gasped in horror, seeing her Puppy Pokemon posioned by the Sludge Bomb. Rockruff staggered to his feet, not ready to give us.. "Rock...ruff..."

"Use Flamethrower!" Nightshade and Fang ordered and the Houndour blasted Rockruff with a double Flamethrower, damaging him even more! "Rockruff, no!" Summer cried in horror. Rockruff crashed onto the floor, covered in scratches and burn marks. "Hrrr.... Hrrr...." Rockruff, even being poisoned and injured, still managed to stand up.

"You might as well give up, pup. You're not winning this round.." Fang declared. Rockruff growled and the bad ponies and gave a loud howl to the sky before its body was coated in a light blue glow, much to the shock of everyone!

"What's going on with Rockruff!" Sandbar exclaimed in awe.

"Its... Its evolving!" Luna gasped in shock. Rockruffs' body grew taller in the blue glow and its small puppy voice grew deeper. When the light vanished, everyone saw that Rockruff had completely changed. It was now red and now stood on two legs and grew a large white mane with a rock in the middle of it. Its eyes were red and it looked intimidating. "Lycan..."

"A Lycanroc...!" Summer gasped in awe. Rotom Dex then took over from there, "Lycanroc, the Wolf Pokemon (Midnight form), a rock type. It goads its enemies into attacking, withstands the hits, and in return, delivers a headbutt, crushing their bones with its rocky mane."

"That's awesome, Lycanroc...!" Summer exclaimed in joy.

"Lycanroc..." Her Lycanroc smiled. Nightshade and Fang were a bit deterred by the sudden evolution but their Houndour charged Lycanroc with two Bite attacks. Lycanroc took the attacks head on... and suddenly delivered two punches to the pokemon, sending them flying back. "That was Counter!" Rotom Dex gasped.

The Houndour crashed onto the ground and Nightshade and Fang in horror. "Now use Stone Edge!" Summer ordered.

"Roooo!" Lycanroc howled and punched the ground, causing a row of large, blue, glowing rocks to run across the ballroom floor and struck the four bad guys, sending all of them flying out of Canterlot. "You'll pay for this!" Nightshade called as they were sent flying.

DING!

"We did it..!" Summer cheered. Riolu, Mareep and Wooloo cheered as well in joy. Summer's newly evolved Lycanroc walked over to her with a smile, "Lycanroc.."

"You were amazing, Lycanroc.." Summer praised, rubbing his fluffy mane.

Sandbar and the others came over to them, "Summer, that was an awesome battle!" Smolder exclaimed.

"Your Lycanroc was so strong!" Ocellus stated.

"Yona like wolf pokemon." Yona added. Lycanroc smiled at the others. "Lycan..."

Celestia and Luna came over at that moment with Twilight and the others, "Excellent job, Summer Blaze." Celestia stated. "You and your Lycanroc saved the Grand Galloping Gala."

Summer smiled at the royal sisters, "Hehe..."

"And now we shall let the night commence!" Luna announced, earning a cheer from her subjects. Celestia then leaned over to Summer, "And thank you for getting my sister to enjoy the Gala, Summer."

"It was my pleasure.." Summer replied.

And the Grand Galloping Gala continued that night and everypony, creature and pokemon enjoyed the night.