The Sundering

by pathfinder335

Chapter 3

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Our trek through the Everfree Forest, after having stopped multiple times to rest and eat some snacks we got from Zecoras. Hidding from some more creatures we encountered in process. Had reached its end. It had taken roughly half an hour to find the main road, and two hours to reach Ponyville. I had expected it to be some kind of village, or at least a small town. Instead, it looked like a mix of a medieval and modern city. The buildings are at a maximum three levels tall, some having thatch roofing while others have colorful clay shingles, with a bigger central building which must be a town hall. But what really took my breath was a castle in the distance near a mountain, looking like it was built on top of a giant crystalline tree.

I had to remind myself that, according to Zecora, Twilight is a princess and probably lives in that castle, even if she had very few duties in comparison to her superiors. She seemed much more lax with formality than them too, I guess.

We passed through a fenced entrance into Ponyville proper, the dirt road being replaced by a proper stone-tiled street. The first thing that I noticed was the massive amount of mares in comparison to stallions. I remembered spotting two or three as we walked towards the Town Hall, and also that they all are kids, being shorter than me. The second thing was how colorful the ponies were. Every single one had a different shade of the rainbow and variations of it.

Stares and giggles came from the passersby, some even stopping to talk in hushed tones, a few with darkened cheeks. I shortened the distance between me and Twilight, “What’s with all the stares we’re getting? They’ve never seen someone like me before?” I asked her while whispering.

“I-it’s not that..” She whispered back, her ears moving a bit, “They are talking about how cute you look, and i-if we are...you know, together-together. If you are unherded and single. And some are thinking if you are from Canterlot due to you using clothes, it is considered a high-class only article.”

That sent a couple of red flags to flare in my head, in both heads. The giggling and hushes only increased as an erection slowly formed in my loins, one that I quickly pressed down with a blush burning on my face. “Let’s get there faster…” I whispered to Twilight, she nodded and we quickened our pace. Just outside my vision, a pink and fluffy blur sped past, it was very fast, but I had seen a very wide smile of a mare.

I and Twilight sped off towards the Town Hall, having reached the door before attracting more stares from the public. A set of doors after the entrance leads to a very spacious theatre with multiple balconies at different levels, but we ignored it and went to the left towards a set of stairs. Eventually we reached a secretary desk, a white colored unicorn mare with brown eyes, black glasses, a very formal bun with bangs in the front, and just like everyone in the city she is wearing absolutely nothing.

“Oh! Princess Twilight, the mayor is ready to receive you.” She looked away from a clipboard after having heard our approach, her eyes roamed my body just as mine did hers, a small smile forming on her mouth. Before I could say anything, Twilight dragged me inside, I only heard a giggle come from the secretary before the door closed.

The office was very classy, in my opinion. Wooden floorboards, a shelf full of scrolls, another one with books. A table with a potted plant, a lit lamp and a gorgeous aged mare seated behind it. She has grayish amber skin and fur, gray hair in a formal and combed style with a lighter streak, phthalo blue eyes, and a pair of spectacles. The Mayor had a perfect GILF look, her eyelids fluttered after she set down some papers and looked at me. “Hello Princess Twilight. This is the creature that you talked about? He looks...young.” She noted, her cheeks tinted red before she adjusted her spectacles and cleared her throat, “Here are the forms, let’s start right away. Feel free to sit.” She motioned to the two seats in front of the table.

She gave me the two sheets and a pen, so I sat and started to fill it out. It had basic info like my sex, race, age, height, weight, eye color, living parents, etcetera. Before I could move to the next paper, she swiftly removed it, “Ops! This one isn’t for you, sorry. Princess,” She handed it to Twilight instead, then sent a subtle nod which was hastily answered by the alicorn.

I raised my eyebrow at this with a small frown before I removed it from my face, my suspicion, irritation and curiosity hidden behind a poker face. I decided to ask Twilight about this later, hopefully she will be honest to me. The princess quickly read the paper, her cheeks visibly darkening before she wrapped it into a small tube and… shoved it in her cleavage.

“Huh...neat.” I commented, a bit flabbergasted of the absurdity.

“What? Never saw a mare do this?” Both females said before looking at each other with a victorious smile.

I shrugged and the Mayor lidded her eyes at me with a small smirk before the mare mouthed something that me. Frankly, I never learned to read people's lips, even if it's very slowly, so I only gave her a confused look. She only rolled her eyes.

“W-we better go home now,” Twilight said nervously, her blushing increased significantly before going to the door, “Goodbye Mayor Mare!”

“Farewell, Princess.” The Mayor replied before winking at me, a heat going to my face as realisation dawned on me that whatever she mouthed was something suggestive, curse you denseness, “My door is always open to you, Ian. Feel free to visit anytime..”

Twilight sighed deeply while my blush deepened even more, “A-alright then, miss Mayor.” I quickly got up and bolted to the door alongside Twilight while the Mayor giggled in amusement, what’s the deal with hot women teasing me?

After having left the Town Hall we continued walking in the streets, even if at a faster pace than before. A few minutes of silent travelling passed, I got bored and tried to do some inquiries, “Sooo, how is living here in Ponyville? It must be a really calm small town.”

Twilight chuckled loudly before she replied. “Here is anything but calm… Once per week something happens, sometimes per day and rarely per month. Monster attacks, crazy ponies who found an evil magical artifact that possessed them, megalomaniacal villains, or just a friendship issue.” I paled at the thought of monster attacks, but on other hand, if all of them look like that Timbergal…

I shivered with the memory. As hot as she was, it was very nightmarish to be attacked in that way.

Twilight and I continued to chat on our way to her castle, our topics going from very random things like how the pegasi controlled the weather and some stories of what happened in Ponyville as she lived there. And then, we finally arrived.

It looked even more majestic upclose, turquoise and magenta crystalline material glittering with sunlight, a glorious glowing tower at the top of it, a couple of spires and balconies, and finally a strange courtyard. We walked over a golden staircase and, with a quick glow of her horn, Twilight opened the massive golden doors. Beyond it was a very grand foyer, flags and tapestries hanging on the walls, some having Twilight cutie mark or a bigger star, chandeliers and lamps using some kind of crystal that glows serving as illumination, crystal pillars and an occasional couch that served as decoration alongside a floor rug.

“Wow…” I looked around in wonder, everything was so...fantastic.

“Yeah, wow.” Twilight giggled at my reaction, “What do you want to do now? A tour? Head straight to the library to sate your curiosity?”

“Actually… I just want to see my bedroom and rest.” I shrugged tiredly, “We can study together later.”

Twilight appeared disappointed but then quickly brightened up, “Alright then, I’ll guide you to your room. I have some spare maps in case of visits that require me to stay here and I don’t have time to give them a tour.” She explained.

“Smart thinking.” I commented, the alicorn raised her head while she smiled with pride.

We continued walking through the corridors, even if it was incredibly beautiful, it would be very easy to be lost in these halls. After a couple of minutes and sets of stairs, we arrived at a level series of doors, “This is one of the guest room wings. The castle itself has another two wings, but this one is for more important guests.” She pointed to a door with a number four dash one, removing a key with the same number marked on it before giving it to me, “Here's your room.”

“Thank you.” I opened the door, my eyes widening at the sight. The bedroom would fit in a five star hotel. A king sized post bed made of smooth crystals with red see-through curtains, a gigantic wardrobe, two bookshelves, a nightstand, a desk with chair, a dressing table and a door leading to a bathroom. “I-I…. I don’t k-know how I can repay you, Twilight…” I said to her breathlessly.

“W-well… You could let me do someexperimentswithyou!?” She excitedly asked me, her tail swishing and ears cutely twitching, a faint blush on her cheeks.

“What kind of experiments?”

“Uhhh…” She stopped like a deer in highlights, “I k-kinda can’t tell you, it’s a… surprise, yeah it's a surprise.”

I raised my eyebrow at her hastiness, but I decided to ignore it as a quirk of hers, “Alright then. If you excuse me, I’m going to nap.”

“Alright! Come to the kitchen later and Spike will do some food for you, see ya later.” She waved a goodbye before I closed the door. After hearing her hoofsteps going away, I locked it.

I slowly went to the bed before sitting on it, a heavy sigh left my lips as I started to tremble, “Not again…” I whispered, panic once again swelling inside me alongside nervousness and anxiety. I rushed to the bathroom door, being greeted by a bathtub big enough for four Twilights, a shower that could fit two, a sink with a mirror cabinet and a toilet, nearly everything being a pristine light cyan. I quickly went to the sink, splashing my face a few times.

“Focus… You will be fine… You just were thrust into too many changes, not a big deal…” I whispered as I looked at myself through the mirror. My normal calm and cool facade breaks in my freakout, “You just have to live with a drop dead gorgeous alicorn until she finds you a way home, nothing too out of ordinary… Give me some video games, books, internet access, and a constant source of snacks and water, and I’ll live a happy life, but nooo, I have to be thrust into this… this…” I sighed once again.

“At least…Twilight doesn't look so bad…” A small smirk formed on my face as I remember the image burned in my mind, her luscious hourglass figure, caring and smart personality. Then I felt how pent up I was, surrounded by beautiful amazon half-magical horses.

With a new goal in mind, I undressed myself and leaned on the massive tub, “I hope this castle plumbing is good. Sorry Twilight.” I turned on the faucet, letting hot water flow instead of fill, my nerves already calming down, but that is not what needs to be worked at the moment. I looked at the rock hard Ian Jr before I grasped it firmly, “You’re a bit bigger aren’t you? Strange, the balls are bigger too...” I commented as I started to work it out.

“Aaah~ I never had a bathtub before, and it's very nice to fap inside one…” I whispered as I worked my member. I thought about Zecora and Twilight, fantasies with them filled my mind before I finally came, much more than I was used to. Afterwards, I had a normal shower, used the shampoo and soap that I found inside, and dressed myself after finishing. A swift search revealed some basic self care supplies, so I brushed my teeth and looked at my reflection, eyes not red and expression much more casual.

“Much better now.” I smiled in a newfound good mood, but it was quickly soured when at the moment that I stepped outside the bathroom, my stomach growled loudly. “That’s why I hate soup, it doesn't fill and the texture is disgusting.” I grumbled before I unlocked the door and exited.

A map is on the floor in front of the door, I quickly picked up and...unfolded it four times, front and rear side, “This place is damn huge!” I noted that some sections are demarcated off limits, hopefully for a good reason. I will not try my luck, curiosity killed the cat after all.

I carefully navigated myself using the map, only having walked back to my room once, I found the doors that lead to the dining room. The room has a new addition compared to the rest of the castle decoration pattern, flowers. Pillars with bowls full of bouquets and hanging gardens. A golden bowl-shaped candelabra above a long table with a nude unicorn mare statue in its center, opulent stool-like gold crafted pink seats on all sides, although a couple are bigger, probably for Twilight.

One of the seats is occupied. She is shorter than Zecora, even more if I don’t count her horn, her breasts being a bit smaller than the zebra, but her rear and hips are much bigger, just a bit less than Twilight. She has lilac skin, long purple hair with teal streaks and her cutie mark is a purple and white star with two blue glimmering streams.

After the doors closed behind me, the unicorn turned to me with her persian blue eyes full of surprise before she smirked at me, “So you’re the new resident. Daniel, right? I’m Starlight Glimmer.” She stood up to handshake me fervently, breasts and ass jiggling in the process, a half eaten salad abandoned. Her smile and stare unnerved me a little, in the sexual sense, like she undressed me with her eyes.

“Y-yeah.” I nervously said, sitting beside her seat while she did the same. “Uhh, you’re what of Twilight? Not intruding or anything.”

“I am- I was Twilight’s pupil.” She said in a warm chuckle, “Now I’m more of an personal assistant, taking care of the castle supplies, ordering our sole worker Spike, do paperwork that Twilight gives to me-”

“Wait wait wait. This Spike is the only employee in the entire castle?! How does he clean everything?!” I asked exasperated, motioning the grand room around us.

“He gets some help, relaaax.” She waved my concerns while finishing her salad. With a glow of her horn, the plate and silverware floated up and disappeared with a flash. “A little teleportation here, cleaning spells there, and we get everything pristine.”

“Wait, like a maid or something? A personal maid?” I smirked at her indignant squawking.

Before I could hear Starlight rebuke, a door in the side of the room opened to reveal a boy, a teen actually. He has short green hair with spikes of a lighter green, reptilian ears, wings, spaded tail, legs and very humanl-ooking claws, purple and very light green scales, and a light purple skin. He is also very short, only reaching my neck. And his junk is dangling between his nude legs, something that I really didn’t want to see.

He quickly rushed to my side, “You’re the hooman that Twi talked about? It’s so cool to finally have another guy in the town! I’m Spike, Twilight's younger brother!” At my confused look, he continued, “Adopted when I was an egg.”

“Oh, makes sense. You’re a dragon? The wings and tail are a giveaway. And it's ‘human’.” Spike nodded, “Man, it’s a bit refreshing to see another man. Was getting suffocated from so many mares around, no offence Starlight.”

“None taken…” The unicorn replied with a roll of her eyes.

“Yeah, don’t say it.” Spike shuddered before shaking his head and smiling, “Bro fist?”

I smiled too, “Bro fist.” We did the manliest greeting ever created, I already can see a very good friendship forming between us. Before our bonding moment could continue, my stomach growled, making me smile sheepishly and Starlight giggle.

“Oh yeah, Twilight said you didn’t get food since you two exited from Zecora’s hut. Have any requests? We know that you’re omnivorous, the castle always has a stock of meat for possible griffon guests.” He asked and my respect instantly increased about him.

“Fried chicken breast with cabbage.” I quickly said my favorite dish.

“Alright! It will be ready soon!” He flew away back to the door that he came from, closing it behind him.

“So, ‘too many mares around is suffocating you’ huh?” She said with one of her eyebrows twitching in anger.

“I-I didn’t want to s-sound sexist or somethi-” My hasty apologies were silenced when she covered my mouth with her hand, I paled with her growing grin and narrowing eyes.

“I’m going to be direct with you, Ian.” She slowly got up, assets jiggling and still holding my mouth, before sitting right on my lap. To say, I became completely flustered, her more than beautiful ass smothering my growing tent. “I am wanting a good bucking. Strap ons and dildos are plain boring, even the magical ones. I want the real thing.”

“So, tell me. Have you ever had somepony to buck? You have the looks and behavior of a virgin.” I shook my head, I actually had sex once with a girlfriend, it wasn’t good but wasn’t bad. “Oh wow, that’s surprising. I bet it wouldn’t be good as with me, right?” She spoke the last word with a bit more intonation, I hastily nodded, my erection twitching to prove my point.

“What are you gonna do now? A hot mare on top of you, willing to buck. I’ll not force you to do anything that you don’t want, but I am hungry and I’ll not exit from here until I get satisfied. A mare has her needs.” She pressed in, I felt my lust rise at each second, even more when Starlight started to move her rump on my penis and press her breasts on my chest and neck, her hot breath on my face.

“You don’t want to breed? It won’t take much time until Spike returns. But after your breakfast, we have the entire day, the entire week to be together.” She continued, more and more my desire raised before I finally...snapped. My hand flew from its resting spot beside my body to grab one of Starlight boobs and give a soft squeeze. It was like grasping a piece of heaven itself, like grabbing a soft and sweaty pillow, my hand sinking in the soft flesh.

The unicorn gasped at my sudden action, before giggling madly with a glint in her eye, “Oh~ So you’re willing then.” She licked her lips before removing her hand from my mouth.

“Y-yeah, w-why not give a try? I-I have nothing to lose but my spunk.” I tried to give a brave facade, only to stammer it, but I could successfully display my lust with my eyes, staring right into Starlight ones. With a glow of her horn, my clothes teleported into a neat pile on the floor, her ass finally touching my penis bareskin.

We slammed our lips together, our tongues danced between our lips while saliva exchanged. It was sloppy from my side, but Starlight could guide it into a more enjoyable experience. I only felt pure lust and pleasure, our moans mixing as I groped her breasts and rear. I was practically engulfed by her warmth, not falling from our seat due a turquoise telekinetic wall behind me.

Starlight decided to spice up the things,her already wet pussy rode against my cock, lubrifying it and making my mind go haywire with the new experience. I felt her smooth folds and g-spot with my penis, waves of pleasure passing through me, I couldn’t help but moan loudly in her mouth.

“S-Starlight~! Don’t stop!” I broke our kiss and tried to say between moans, my eyes slightly rolling out from sheer pleasure.

“I-Ian~! W-what about-”

The unicorn was interrupted when the kitchen door slammed open, we instantly stopped our sexual exchange with the loud noise to look at it. Spike was standing there with a tray in hands, his eyes wide and his member twitching slightly. “Uhhh… S-sorry for interrupting?” He said, the awkwardness in the air increasing tenfold.

“I-I’ll just...leave this there, o-okay?” Spike set the tray a bit far away from us, before scampering away as fast as he could to the dining room entrance, the sound of his footsteps echoing on the silence.

My stomach growled at the appeticing visage of the food that Spike made, and my penis is already half-way flaccid, “T-that really killed the mood…” I broke the silence, Starlight leaning away from me as our desire subsided.

“Yeah… We continue later, if you want~” The unicorn mare planted a kiss on my lips before standing up, “I already got your room number, no need to tell me.”

I quickly pulled her back into a deeper kiss, my hand giving a final squeeze on her ass, “Mmm~! Nasty colt…~” She whispered seductively while her hand trailed my cock, “Here, a final final treat before I exit.” Her horn glowed, all the fluids on our bodies washing away, and my clothes suddenly appeared on me.

“Good bye~” She waved at me while walking to the door, an extra sway in her steps making her rear and breasts bounce enticingly, “Don’t leave me waiting!” She shouted before closing the door.

I sighed dreamingly, “This place is heaven… Starlight definitely is an angel, Twilight too.” I whispered to myself, reminiscing how good my life has suddenly become, before digging in happily on my meal.

“Good food, hot girls that want to fuck me, a comfy bedroom. Yeah, definitely heaven.” I said after a gulp, and continued my meal before finishing it. I don’t know where I should put it, maybe Spike will come later to pick it up, so I left it there before going to the door, heading to the castle library.


Author's Note

Next chapter, more explanations and world building, alongside possible sex scenes~ Stay tuned, and send reviews, opinions, point out errors, it greatly helps me.
Edit: Same thing of Chapter 2.

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