Not Here, Big Brother...
A Chariot Ride to Forget
Load Full StoryNext ChapterThe two pegasi stallions pulling the chariot were going fast; their wings were roaring in the wind. It was cold that night, even colder than it should be when accounting for the altitude. Twilight's mane was blowing in the wind and what little clouds and landmarks there were flew past her in a blur. Yet the chariot was still stable.
Perhaps it was the night, or maybe it was her exhaustion for the day, but it was oddly calm that night. Like the moment snow started pouring in December, it was steady.
Twilight's mind was racing with the day that she had just experienced. She had such a fun time today with her cousins in Cloudsdale; she had never been there before, as it was usually very inconvenient for a non-pegasi to go to Cloudsdale. However, recent restrictions on chariots being lifted by Princess Celestia had made the trip much less expensive. They could finally make up all the times their cousins had to make the trip to Canterlot for them.
She cherished the memory of Cloudsdale and her cousins. She knew that the trip was novel and she wouldn’t be able to go back for quite some time. After all, they were only there because of the Annual Cloudsdale Fair. She had seen fairs in Canterlot; they were bigger in the more populated capital of Equestria, but somehow Cloudsdale felt much bigger. Perhaps it was how the fireworks went off at a high altitude, perhaps it was the altitude itself, or perhaps it was her cousins and the bigger family. She loved her cousins almost as much as her parents. They were always so nice.
Twilight’s thoughts were brought to an abrupt stop as she began shivering in the cold and wind. Shining, being the good brother he is, grabbed the complimentary blanket from the chariot company with his magic and laid it over her.
Twilight and Shining looked cute together, they always looked cute together. 'Two peas in a pod' their mother always said. That was just what Shining loved about her.
“Too bad that mom and dad can’t be with us tonight, Twilie,” he said to break the silence.
Twilight just nodded, too exhausted to make conversation.
“I guess that's the law though, huh? That's how big chariot makes its money.”
As the chariots flew closer to Canterlot. Twilight’s fatigue got the better of her, It was past her bedtime and she was exhausted. She had begun to fall asleep next to Shining. She slumped onto his shoulder as she drifted off.
Shining noticed this minor invasion of personal space and thought about making a counter to it.
He pitched a tent under the blanket as he looked behind him to the chariot where his parents were riding in. They were cuddling much like him and his sister. He looked forward to the stallion that his parents had chartered to take them back to Cloudsdale. If not for their wings furiously flapping, there would be no way to know if they were even alive. He weighed the situation in his head and started to stroke his sister's thigh with his hoof.
Twilight woke to this all too familiar sensation. She took her head off his shoulder, hoping that her being awake would deter her brother's advances.
Her memories flashed in her mind. She remembered why it was better in Cloudsdale, not just because of her cousins but the indirect effects of her cousins being there... Shining. She didn’t hate the stallion she had to live with; she loved him, that's what siblings meant to do, love each other. But she despised spending ANY time alone with him, one of his favourite times to strike. He had always insisted they went on rides together, just him and her... She shivered, thinking of what he had all too often done on those rides. She had always attempted to repress her 'memories' of him, but whenever he had done 'it' to her, the memories would hit her like a ton of bricks she'd rather forget and forgive, then have to remember what he did to her routinely when their parents had fallen asleep.
She'd often have nightmares of what 'feat' he would take it to next. Her brain preferred to just not remember his... member.
"Shining..." she whispered through her teeth passive-aggressively, as to not alert the other ponies in the sky with them.
Shining simply hushed her with a silent "Shh," as he stroked her hair.
"Shining... Mom and dad are only a few metres behind us." She whispered with resistance. This was almost true as they were farther than that for safety reasons, but still, this was far closer than they have been to their parents whenever Shining abused her before. Although they had been technically closer to them whenever they did it in Twilight's bedroom, which was the room next to their parents. They at least had a wall between them. Here it was just as close, but without the obvious wall between them. It was risky. Not to mention the two stallions in front of them pulling the chariot.
"Shining, if you don't stop, I swear I will scream, I mean it..." she said through her teeth. He was being far too reckless.
Twilight couldn't believe how thoughtless he was being, She was so very concerned that her parents would find out what had been going on that it consumed all of her thoughts. Although she had often threatened to tell their parents what he had been doing to her, this was a complete fib. She knew just as much as him the consequences that would be put towards them both if they were found out.
Shining stopped his ‘work’ with his front-right hoof on her thigh. Twilight breathed a huge sigh of relief. Perhaps she had deterred him with his empty threat.
Shining turned towards Twilight "Twilight," he whispered directly into her ear "I love you." his breaths were inconsistent and awkward, he kept his gaze on her.
Twilight stayed perfectly still in the heat and moisture of her brother's breath against her left ear
"Twilie..." he continued, "I-I love you."
Twilight knew exactly what he wanted from her, but she didn't want to give it to him.
"Twi-" he was cut off by her heavy sigh "I love you too Shining," she said while cracking a small half-fake half-smile
She always said it back. And it was true, she did love Shining, but she didn’t want to say it, not here when he was doing this.
Shining kissed his sister on the cheek before attempting to kiss her on her lips, but she turned away.
Shining, despite seeing there was no point to continue without the possibility of alerting their parents, touched Twilight. She shivered as she realized that her night would not end with a simple kiss to the cheek.
He began to slowly and carefully move to her up thighs, then her inner thighs and then the actual lips of her entrance, almost like how a lover would, except this was much more awkward and jerky. He quickly realized just how dry she was. This was a very common occurrence, so much so it was a rare treat for any of her self-produced moisture to be present.
He pulled his hoof up to his face, before giving one last look behind to his parents. They were no longer cuddling and practically sleeping; they were having a conversation. Although to any reasonable pony this would have been a sign to stop it only made Shining more excited. He turned back to his sister who had at this point closed her eyes attempting to not feel what her brother had in store for.
He put his hoof to his face and gave the quietest spit he was capable of to his hoof. He put his hoof back under the covers and quickly went back to the lips of his sister's vagina, gently rubbing it.
She quivered in response to the stimulus presented to her. She tried to remain calm; she didn't want this, and she especially didn’t want to enjoy this. But she did, if vaguely. That enjoyment was the worst part. She couldn’t help but feel partly responsible for what her brother did to her because she enjoyed it. It still hurt and felt wrong and made her feel dirty, but there was still some enjoyment. If she enjoyed it even though it felt more bad than good then there was some part of it she brought on herself.
He began to move inside of her, with no haste. He was trying to be as gentle as possible to her young and growing body. He never wanted to hurt her more than he had to, it was almost like he cared about her.
almost
As he continued, he flicked her clit until she let out a half moan, before quickly putting her hoof over her mouth to muffle the rest.
"Shining, please..." she whispered before letting out a muffled moan once more. She tried more to hold her unwanted pleasure, however, he could see she was 'enjoying' this, it only made him want her more. He became more aggressive with how much of his hoof he'd put inside her.
Twilight took a deep breath in and out and gave her best impression of a brick wall.
She looked straight ahead deadpanned and said in a calm and even tone. "Shining. Mom and dad are going to catch us, please stop." Shining gave no mind to her concerns. For some strange reason, something about the risk of getting caught made him want to accelerate things to the next level.
Shining took his other hoof off of Twilight's shoulder and grabbed her front-right hoof.
"Shining, I don't want to..." she whispered, attempting to pull her hoof back, but was stopped by him.
He was stronger than her. He was stronger than the average stallion despite his age. He took her hoof towards his crotch, guiding it up to the base of his shaft.
"Shining, please..."
He barely heard her as her hoof was already touching him. He guided her to grip his shaft. She wanted it to stop; she wanted to just have a normal brother, not this. But it was made clear to her that what she wanted was not of concern to her brother.
She just wanted this to be over, so she complied. She cringed and looked away as she began to stroke him. At the very least, this distracted him from his own 'goal' with her vagina.
As she continued to caress, his stroking came to a quick end. He pulled his hoof towards his face, sniffing it. Although it was barely present and overwhelming just his spit, he could still smell her aroma on his hoof. This aroused him as he, at last, became full mast.
He could barely hold himself, the excitement of being so close to getting caught only made him harder.
He quickly turned around to check on his parents before turning back to his sister. He put his arm around her before quickly pushing her under the covers towards himself.
She had her face smashed against his member. He had never tried this before, and she didn't want him to. She just stayed still, staring at what was presented before her. She had the foggiest clue what he could want with her this time. Then it hit her.
He wanted her to suck it...
She turned her head away from it. She hated, HATED the idea of putting that in her mouth. Nearly as much as the rest of the abuse or 'activities', as he liked to call it, that she was all too often exposed to by her brother.
After a moment of awkward silence shining put his hoof onto her head trying to roust her into sucking it.
"Come on, Twilie.." he whispered, pushing her head further into his now throbbing cock.
She continued to resist him. This wouldn't be satisfactory to him. His horn lit up, just to the dismay of Twilight.
"Shining, mom and dad are going to se-" she was cut off and could no longer speak as Shining's cock was quickly and carelessly slammed into her mouth.
She tried to pull up, but it was futile, Shining had her trapped for the long haul.
He began to push her head up and down against her best resistance, grabbing her by the mane while lightly caressing her horn.
She couldn't do anything to stop this so she just closed her eyes, hoping, nay praying that she did just fall asleep on his shoulder and they were asleep as they travelled to Canterlot, alas this was not the case.
He continued to force her up and down, giving out some grunts and groans; he wasn't thinking about getting caught, he was just thinking about the 'sky head' some other stallions in his school were bragging about, and he was living it. He truly was in heaven.
"Mhm!" Twilight attempted to tell her brother to be quieter, fearing the wrath of their parents and the rest of society.
He simply continued, just quieter, caring little for his little sister's opinions and 'fits' as he liked to call them.
Despite her eyes being closed, Twilight could still feel every single second of the encounter, her hair, the musk and the veins on his cock. God, he never realized just how veiny it truly was. The veins were far from a turnon for her but at least it indicated when he was about to...
She felt it coming; she felt ‘it’ cumming.. She tried to pull off his cock, hoping he'd just finish himself off, but he held her there and she put her head further down.
She hated when her brother abused her, but more than anything else she loathed when he came inside of her, she despised the excrement, the scent and especially the feeling of it inside of her. Ever since ‘that night’, he routinely had cum inside of her and it was definitely NOT an experience she wished to relive, but she realized this time, she'd have to taste it...
The smell was toxic enough, but the taste? She could only imagine the number of showers and mouthwashes she'd have to endure to get that out...
She tried to yell but was met with muffled and weak results. She slammed her brother's lap with her hoofs, anything to not have to endure this...
"Shh..."
Shining gave out one final grunt before pushing his sister's mouth farther down as he came. Although most of it made it into her mouth, some went straight down her esophagus. She tried to pull up, but Shining didn't let up on his force. He held still in pure euphoria. Then a memory went through his head 'She sucks AND swallows' he had heard one of the more inappropriate stallions at his school said between classes.
"Twilie.. can you..." he trailed off "Can you... swallow?" he finally finished.
Was he serious? Was her only release from the imprisonment of her brother's hoof and cock to swallow the oh so horrid substance?
she tried to make some noise once more to get off of him.
"Oh, come on, twilie, just this once.."
Twilight stayed still and silent before bursting into a rage at the very thought of it once more.
"T-Twilie, if you do this I'll make sure not to um, ‘disturb’ you later tonight..." he said, begrudgingly.
Shining Armor was many things, but she couldn't remember any lies he had told directly to her. She obliged, if not just for air, but also to have just one night to herself, free from her brother’s ‘disturbances’.
She swallowed it in, being let back up and finally above the blanket once more. She swiftly pulled out of the blanket away from her brother’s side of the chariot to the other.
She curled in a ball and just wept to herself silently, 'why?' she thought 'why me? why Celestia?’' She never knew why her brother constantly did this to her, although on Shining's word most other little sisters and brothers did the same thing. She just felt so alone. So desperate for a way out, 'At least this would be the only time tonight' she thought. It was all but certain that her brother would knock at her door every single night, no matter what. The only time she'd ever not had this fear materialize was when their dad took Shining and their uncle on a 'boy's only camping trip.', That was her happiest memory since the 'night attacks' had begun. Despite her not even being on the trip, she remembers it fondly, she cherished it. Perhaps tonight would be a good night after all.
She continued to weep silently on the other end of the chariot. She couldn't go to sleep now, no amount of mental gymnastics could cure her ailment. She disliked the actual attacks, but they weren’t even the worst part of the whole ‘experience’. It would be at least a couple thousand dollars’ worth of therapy before she would stop seeing the effects of her brother’s torment.
Luckily she could see Canterlot coming up quickly in the distance, the first time she truly appreciated the beauty of the city, as she could always see her own home and what would lay ahead of her in the late hours of the night. It finally brought her comfort, a comfort which was nowhere to be seen in her normal home life, especially when her parents were out of the room.
Author's Note
Thank you for reading, I know this is my first story, I am not a writer (especially not an erotic one) but I have some experience in roleplaying, and after realizing I was too poor to commission Darf to make this I decided to do it myself. Despite its shortness and my lack of experience writing, I hoped you enjoyed it, Although I wouldn't personally nut to this just because of the bad memories it brings along I am not going to tell you what to do.
I'm new to writing I desperately want to improve for my next story, so please leave some criticism and tips/ways I can improve my writing.
If this is received well I'll make a second chapter, I have some ideas.
I'd also strongly recommend that you read this if you haven't already. This piece is a fan work to attempt to expand on the work that Darf did. Although it's not absolutely necessary to read Darf's work first I'd love it if you did, its only 6,000 words and its well worth it. This work also relies heavily on what Darf set up.
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