vengeance of titans
Ch 1 (rewrite)
Load Full StoryNext ChapterI have done it again. I beat a total of 8 other people at planetary annihilation. My commander a tank class commander that is currently unbeaten. I look at the screen as it says victory, just then my screen goes black. I try tapping it but my hand goes through the screen! I try yanking my hand out but its stuck! I quickly pull with all my might but my had wouldn't budge!
Suddenly I start to get sucked into the screen! I struggle trying to brake free of whatever is pulling me into my monitor. Soon enough I start to feel like my hand is on fire. Soon the pain is too much to bare and I pass out.
In my unconscious state I hear voices one male and one female.
"Are you sure about this mortal gaia? He seems rather young." spoke the male voice.
"Of course he's young death! All mortals are younger then us. And yes I'm sure about him now send him on his way. I want to save as many of my children from those whores as possible." said gala.
"vary well then. We shall see how he copes in this world with this new body." said death.
When I wake up I found my self in a forest with... Knee high trees? Wait... Those voices... Am I in another body? What am I? I look around and find a large lake nearby. I walk over to it and take a minute to realize that my foot steps sound like peed falls.
I arrive at the lake and look in. I stair back at my commander from planetary annihilation. I take a good 4 hours to comprehend this development. After I wrap my head around the fact that I'm a planetary annihilation commander I get to work on building my economy.
I build a metal extractor and 2 energy plants to start my economy. I then build 4 more metal extractors and 2 more energy plants. I then built 8 metal storage and 8 energy storage to help my economy grow.
I then decide to build a vehicle factory to start off. With that done I build 12 fabrication vehicles and started to upgrade my vehicle factory to an advanced vehicle factory. I build 60 skitters to scout the planet I'm on. When done the skitters scatter in every direction.
I then get to work on building my army. I build 800 ants, 200 spinners, 200 storms, 100 shellers, and 50 levelers. I then build an air factory and upgrade it into an advanced air factory. I build a variety of aircraft I build 12,000 phoenix fighters, and 2,000 hornet bombers. That's when I decided to see how my scouts are doing, what I found was that i was on a jungle planet with little to no wildlife.
The thing that bothers me is that how can there be no animals? A planet like this should have animals. I decide to find out why there was no animals here on this planet.
(Time skip: 2 months)
Ok I'm at a loss. This planet has everything a animal needs to survive but there are zero animals. I did discover a old portal however. It seemed to only need minor repairs and some power. However I need to focus. I can repair the portal later. But I now have nothing to do... I guess I can design new units. But what to make?
I think about this for a while. I know of multiple robot army's from all sorts of universes. There's the necrons from 40k, the geth from mass effect, hell even the transformers from well transformers.
That's when an idea hit me. I could remake the droid army from star wars the clone wars. But they will be smarter, faster, and stronger then those pathetic battle droids the CIS had.
I start small and start to design a B1 battle droid. I then worked my way up. I gave the B1's more possessing power and I gave them a variety of weapons.
I gave the droidekas better shields and I gave every droid I designed the best armor I could give them. I go to work on building a massive droid army to help me interact with anyone I find.
(Time skip: 3 weeks)
I have amassed a grand army of droids. I had to build an advanced bot factory but it was well worth it. I start to fix the old broken portal and even start to power it. When it switches on I send 5 skitters through the portal to scout out what's on the other side.
What they report back... Its heart wrenching. It was a ruined city that looked like it would have been a paradise.

I have 4 battalions of droids move through the portal and secure the city. I then send a armored division as support for my droids. This armored division would act as the main defense of the city. I start to send some advanced fabrication aircraft to the city to help rebuild it.
When I had a total of 80 advanced fabrication aircraft in the ruined city I got to work on repairing it. This might take a while.
(Time skip: 4 weeks)
I did it. I fully repaired the city. In fact its better then before. It was now a super advanced city that had flying cars/trucks transporting all sorts of materials to and from places.

That's when I decided to see what inhabits this planet. I build a orbital launcher and build 12 hermes probes, I sent the probes out to see what they find. But what they report is shocking, humans enslaved to ponies. I check the other kingdoms and found that they don't enslave humans. But the largest kingdome on the planet is equestria who uses humans as slave labor.
I don't remember what happened but something in me snapped. In fact lucky there is a city nearby that I can destroy to calm me down. Time to show these equines who their messing with.
Author's Note
Hay everypony this rewrite is hopefully better than what vengeance of titans was becoming. Now I implore you to give me ideas. Like what city he should attack, what droids should he send their? Stuff like that. Anyways good day to you genital men and ladies.
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