Love can be deadly.....

by Leafy

Rating: mature
Tags: Death, Gore, Dark, Alternate Universe, Fluttershy (EqG), Original Character, Equestria Girls, Horror, Profanity, Violence
Length: 1313

When love is in the air, it better not be during Halloween.....

After a long day of work, Surn goes back to his house to spend sometime with his girlfriend! Little did he know, this ain’t gonna end well.

Flutterbat is back, and is out for revenge on Surn! Will he make it?

Read to find out!

Honestly? This is just me getting back up from my last failed story. I hope I did better!

And for my 200 follower story! Woo!

Published 2020-10-04 23:30:00 UTC
Last updated 2020-10-04 23:30:00 UTC

In so many ways...

It was another late day at work for Surn as he was doing his best not to overwork like usual. Apperently, super speed isn't the answer to everything....

"If I can finish this, then I'll be at home in record time! I don't wanna disappoint Fluttershy." Surn said. "I promised her that I'll be home and not overwork, so I got to finish this quick!"

Meanwhile....

Fluttershy was baking her signature homemade Halloween treats that Surn always liked. She knew without a doubt, Surn would love these. Ever since coming to this world, Surn learned about Fluttershy's outstanding cooking and decided to try some of it. She still remembered how Surn looked when he took a bite.

"I'm sure my Surn will come home so we can have some fun together! But first, I need to take a break." Fluttershy said.

She then proceeded to walk towards the couch and sat down. She grabbed the remote and began to watch some tv.

"Ugh. It's getting late, and Surn hasn't came back from his work yet!" Fluttershy exclaimed. If he doesn't return home in the next hour, I'm so gonna kill him!" Little did she know, that could be possible.

Give or take a few hours later, and Surn had finished his work for the day. He was relived. The only thing he wanted now was to go home and spend some time with his loved one.

"Man... Today was such a grudge! My boss just demanded me to do more and more, even though I finished my only task assigned!" Surn said as he began to turn the ignition on.

"But, it was worth it! I made loads of money today, but it ate a lot of my time today, so I better hurry up!"

Sooner or later, Surn arrived at his house in record time, and was ready to see the one he loved the most, Fluttershy. As he walked towards the door, he heard no sound coming from his house at all. It was eerily quiet.....

"Huh. Strange, usually, Fluttershy makes a ton of noises when cooking, and it doesn't seem like that's the case....." Surn said.

With cation, he slowly opened the door of his house and took a peak inside. The light's had been turned off for some reason. Surn's concern only increased as he walked inside.

"Hello? Anybody home?" He asked.

Out of nowhere, he got a reply. "Surn? Is that you?"

"Of course it's me! What did you expect?"

Suddenly, he had been pushed to the wall in the blink of an eye. When he opened them, he saw a girl with red eyes, bat wings, slippers, a yellow dress, a pink skirt, bat ears, big wings the size of a bat, and a bat necklace. This could only mean one thing.

"Flutterbat?! But- but how?! What did you do to Fluttershy?!" Surn asked.

"I still am Fluttershy you bitch! What the hell were you thinking working overtime, when I clearly told you not to!" Flutterbat said as she yelled in his face.

"I'm sorry! My boss gave me more tasks to do!" He was slapped in the face as he finished his sentence.

"I don't give a fuck!" You promised me! And this is what you do?! Am I not too fucking good for you?! Huh?! answer me bitch!"

"I'm not lying! I'm being dead serious! My boss-" He was cut off before he could say anything else.

"Dead is what your gonna be after this. Cause trust me, your not gonna fucking make it out alive." He was then suddenly thrown across the room in an instant, causing him to hit another wall.

"So, you want it to be like this huh? Then let it be then!" Surn then ran out of the house in an instant, but Flutterbat wasn't hesitant that she wasn't gonna find him.

"Your days of living are good as gone."

Surn had hid in the same alleyway that he first found himself coming to this world. His best bet was to stay hidden down here, where that mad bat girl wouldn't find him..... Or so he thought.

"A coincidence coming back here my self." Surn said. "I never thought the place I first came from would actually save me!"

Surn then began to rest his back on the wall, when he felt that something was.... off.

“That’s strange, walls are never soft!” He then snapped back to his senses. “Oh no.”

An angry Flutterbat was right behind him, ready to pounce at him. But just before she could do that, Surn again speed of at the speed of sound, leaving Flutterbat by herself.

“Oh don’t worry Surn. Soon, you will have no choice but to accept fate you little asshole.”

Surn had been running around town for a good 1-2 hours, give or take. As he was speeding down, he saw the many kids trick-or-treating happily, and Surn wished that him and Fluttershy could have done the same thing.

“Too bad I’m caught in a mad chase with someone who’s craving for my veins....” He said. “Sometimes, I just wish some thing’s would go right for once.”

“Aw... Surn’s complaining like a bitch again!” Flutterbat said from a roof right above Surn. “Well, guess what? Nobody cares! You know why? Cause your a fucking little cunt that just won’t leave others alone! I’m pretty sure nobody’s gonna miss you when your dead!”

“That’s not true! Why are you doing this to me?! And how are you finding me?!”

Flutterbat did a menacing laugh. “You still don’t get it huh? Remember when I slapped the shit out of you?”

Surn touched the area where she had slapped him. To Surn’s surprise, their had been blood on it. And it was dripping as well.

“No.... This can’t be!”

Flutterbat did another laugh. “You idot! I have been following your dumbass scent, and that’s how I found you!”

Surn had a huge sense of dread arise from him. To believe that she was following him by scent!

“Oh well, guess your time is up! I hope you enjoyed your pathetic life, cause it’s about to end!”

Suddenly she leaped towards Surn and dug her sharp nails into his chest, causing him to howl. This angered Flutterbat, so she covered his mouth with her hand.

“Shut the fuck up! God! You sound like a wolf calling for his mommy! Ugh!”

Then, she tore a hole in Surn’s chest, allowing her hand to go inside his body. Fresh tears came onto his cheeks as he wwas witnessing this touture that his girlfriend was doing to him.

“Why?! Why are you doing this to me?! I was running late! Why don’t you believe me?!” Surn asked.

“Why?! Because that’s all you ever say! Nothing but bullshit comes out of your mouth!” She moved her hand towards his heart.

“Last words?”

Surn looked up at his girlfriend one last time.

“You won’t get away with this.”

Flutterbat then ripped his heart out of his chest, and then later began to devour it all.

“Mmm.... I wonder what else of yours tastes good?”

Flutterbat moved her hand around Surn’s now dead body, then removed her hand from his chest. She then threw him towards the wall, causing a mouthful of blood to spill out.

“Goodbye Surn. I’ll make sure everyone knows about this! Oh wait, nobody cares about you or your pathetic life bitch!”

At long last, Fluttershy/bat finally got the revenge she wanted. And now, Surn was no longer.

End.

Author's Note

Heyo! No name 13 here to give you some info!

I hope this was much better than the last story I made! I’ll do my best to make more story’s like this more often, but for now, lemme know what you think!

~No name 13