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Luna's crossroad

by Stargazing Point
After Celestia tells Luna that they should retire she has to come to a decision (re-written) (re-write 3.1k long).

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Rewriting done. Since some people gave like to the current chapter it will not be deleted, it has been added as a separate chapter (the rewrite).

First story so this is probably horrible but I have to start somewhere, I hope you people can tell me what I did wrong and how to get better.

What looks to be another day for Luna turns into a week of doubt as her sister informs her that she wants them to retire.

I don't think Luna would just give up the throne as soon as the option comes so what I'm trying with this story is to write Luna's doubts as she tries to see the pros and cons of such a decision.

Everyone
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Drama
 
PP

5290 words: Estimated 26 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. The only chapter (pre-rewrite) 2020-11-17 00:34:04 UTC
    2068
  2. The rewrite 2020-11-29 00:12:03 UTC
    3222