A Royal bath

by Timothy1509

A lovely date

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Changeling Kingdom

In the Changeling Kingdom, the changeling King known as Thorax was seen searching his cupboard for something.

"Come on, where is it?" Thorax said searching. After ten seconds, he has found what he had been looking for "Ah there you are." Thorax said as he pulled out a pack of roses.

This pack of rose was very salient for Thorax because, he has an upcoming date with the love of his life. And his love of his life is known as Twilight Sparkle, the element of magic, the leader of the elements of harmony and the Princess of Friendship.

Thorax and Twilight have been dating each other for three years now and nothing has ever went wrong. They both read books in libraries, played some games at a carnival, had dinner and many more. And today is their fiftieth date, and Thorax has decided to do something really special with her today.

"So today is our fiftieth date, and I have the most perfect gift for her." Thorax said as he levitated a small purple coloured gift box in the air in front of him.

"Okay, everything has been completed and I am ready." Thorax said with a smile "Time to go to Ponyville." He finished.

Then, Thorax walked up to the door of his bedroom. Once he got to it, he charged his horn and gripped onto the handle of the door with his magic. Then, he pulled the door opened. After that, Thorax stepped out of his room and closed the door behind him.

Thorax then turned to his right and started to run to the downstairs of the hive in order to reach the front gates of the hive and exit his Kingdom. He has left some of his work to Pharynx.


Twilight's castle

In Twilight's castle in Ponyville, Princess Twilight Sparkle was seen in her dressing room combing her hair while looking at a mirror as well as humming a wonderful tune in a gaiety manner. Because, today is her fiftieth date with her handsome changeling King Thorax.

"I can't believe that today is my fiftieth date with Thorax." Twilight said with her cheeks flushing "Thorax is the stallion of my dreams." She added.


Then, Twilight started to daydream. And in her daydream was an image of her and Thorax sitting on chairs in a restaurant while drinking a milkshake. The couple then starred at each other with glittering eyes with blushes on their cheeks. After a brief second, Thorax leaned in for a kiss. When Twilight noticed this, she closed her eyes and awaited for the kiss to happen. But suddenly, she heard somepony calling her.


"Twilight?"

Twilight was immediately snapped out of her daydream when she heard the intimate voice. She looked to her left and saw Starlight.

"Oh! Starlight! Uh... didn't see you there hehe." Twilight said with a weak smile.

Starlight let out a smirk when she heard Twilight's statement. Because, she can tell by that expression that Twilight was just daydreaming. Daydreaming about her special somepony Thorax.

"Twilight, were you daydreaming about Thorax?" Starlight asked with a smirk.

"Wh-what? N-no I wasn't, I was uh... uh..." Twilight had no excuses to back her up.

"Come on Twilight, just admit it."

"Alright fine." Twilight sighed "Today is my fiftieth date with Thorax and I was daydreaming about us having the date, and I have fallen in love with him." She confessed the truth.

Starlight then squealed when she heard this, her friend admitting that she is in love with Thorax. But, before Starlight could comment on their relationship any further, the front doors of Twilight's castle was knocked. And the knocks were pretty loud and strong.

*Knock! knock!*

When Twilight and Starlight heard the knock, they must assume that Thorax has arrived.

"Oh my, that must be Thorax!" Twilight exclaimed with an exuberant expression.

"Then what are you waiting for Twilight?" Starlight asked "Go ahead and have a wonderful time with your stallion." She told her.

Twilight then stood up from her seat and embraced Starlight in a hug, and she hugged back. After five seconds, they both released each other and Twilight walked dup to the door of her room. Once she got to it, she exited her room and turned to her right. Then, she started to run to the front doors of her castle.


Thorax was waiting at the front doors of Twilight's castle for thirty seconds now and he was getting a little anxious because, he doesn't know if Twilight was home.

"I hope Twilight's home." Thorax said.

And on cue, the front doors of her castle was pulled open and Thorax's eyes widened when he saw Twilight. Her hair was combed smoothly, she had purple lipsticks and she was as beautiful as a rose.

"Wow, she is pulchritudinous." Thorax thought with a small blush.

"Hello Thorax."

"H-hello Twilight." Thorax greeted "You looked elegant." He said.

"Thank you." Twilight said with a blush. "And sorry for keep you waiting." She told him.

"No no no it's okay. I am equanimous so don't worry." Thorax assured her, and Twilight let out a relived sigh. Then, Throax brought out a pack of flowers and the gift box. "I have these for you." He told her.

"Why thank you Thorax." Twilight said with a large smile. She grabbed the flowers and gift box with her magic and teleported them into her room "What's in that box if you don't mind me asking?" Twilight asked.

"Can't tell you Twilight." Thorax told her with a shake of his head "Its a surprise, and I do not like spoiling." He added.

"Fair enough." Twilight said with a shrug.

"Anyways, shall we commence our fiftieth date?" Throax asked with an exhilarated expression.

"We shall Thory my smart and brave changeling." Twilight replied, and Thorax chuckled at the hysterical nickname.

"Alright, then let's go Twinkle's." Thorax said, and Twilight giggled from the adorable and hilarious nickname given to her by Thorax since their thirtieth date.

Then, Twilight stretched out her right hoof and Thorax grabbed it. After that, the two royals started to walk to Ponyville to have their wonderful date.


First, King Thorax and Twilight Sparkle have decided to read some books in Ponyville Library which was Twilight's Library. The two picked books based on astronomy and started to read it while sitting next to each other.

They were reading about the celestial bodies in space, comets, stars and shooting stars. Both information has intrigued them completely.

"Wow, the stars and celestial bodies sure are very interesting to know." Thorax said with an astonished expression.

"Indeed." Twilight said with an astonished expression just like his.


After spending some time reading books in the library for an hour and a half. Both Thorax and Twilight have gotten famished and they both have decided to drink some milkshake. They both found some seats and Thorax decided to call the waiter.

"Waiter!"

When the waiter heard the voice, he walked up to Thorax and Twilight's table with a note paper pad levitated in front of his face with his magic.

"May I take your order King Thorax?"

"We would like to have one strawberry milkshake please."

The waiter then wrote down their order on the note paper pad and said "On it."

"Thank you." Thorax said with a smile. Then, the waiter walked back into the restaurant.

While waiting, Twilight decided to have a chat with Thorax to get rid of the boredom.

"So Thorax, what were you doing yesterday?"

"Oh I have been reading books about genetics as well as running my Kingdom and helping my subjects." Thorax told her.

"Really?" Twilight asked with a flabbergasted expression, and Thorax replied with a nod "Wow, that mist be a lot of hard work." She said.

"Indeed."

"What about you Twilight? What have you been doing yesterday?"

"Oh not much." She replied with a shrug "Just helped my friends with stuffs as well as spending some time with Cadence." She told him.

"That's good." Thorax said with a smile "Good to hear that the two of us have been working very hard with our Kingdoms." He finished.

"Indeed Thorax, Indeed."

Two minutes later, the strawberry milkshake that Thorax has ordered for him and Twilight has arrived. The waiter placed it on the table and the two royals started to slurp the milkshake with straws with their eyes closed.

While drinking, Thorax and Twilight were leaning close to each other because the milkshake was being drank quickly. Then after a second, the two royals have booped each other by their muzzles. This resulted in them opening their eyes and backing away form each other with their cheeks flushing.


After the wonderful and lovely meal, Thorax and Twilight have both decided to play some games at a small carnival in Ponyville. And the two were playing basketball.

Thorax was scoring lots of goals in the hoops while Twilight was doing average. Even while losing, Twilight was truly astonished by Thorax's adroit skills in sports, Twilight was not that experienced in sports when she was a filly.

After a brief moment, the timer beeped and Thorax stopped throwing the basketballs. Then, the pony behind the counter began to tell how many scores he got.

"Thorax, you scored one hundred and twenty points."

"Whoa! That's cool!" Twilight exclaimed.

"Thank you you two."

"So Thorax, what prizes would you like to pick?" The pony asked, then Thorax looked at Twilight.

"Twilight, what prizes do you want?"

Twilight then looked at the dolls in the left shelf of the prize section. Her eyes then stopped at a large purple teddy bear.

"I want the purple teddy bear Thorax." Twilight said pointing at the teddy bear.

"Okay." Thorax said with a nod. Then, he looked back at the pony "I would like to have the purple teddy bear please." Thorax requested.

"Sure thing."

Then, the pony turned around walked to the purple teddy bear shelf. Once he got to it, he grabbed the teddy bear with his hoof and turned around again. And finally, he walked to the counter and placed the teddy bear on the counter.

When Twilight saw the teddy bear, a smile appeared on her muzzle and she grabbed the teddy bear. Then, she hugged it.

"Aww thank you Thorax this is so cute."

"You're very welcome Twilight." Thorax said with a smile.


It is now 7:00pm now in Equestria, and Thorax and Twilight have both decided to conclude their date by watching a stage acting show held in Ponyville. The couples sat on benches next to each other and the show started five seconds later. Then, Thorax and Twilight saw many foals performing on stage while wearing costumes.

"Wow, these foals sure know how to perform." Thorax said with a flabbergasted expression.

"Indeed." Twilight agreed with an impressed expression.

After watching the play for three minutes, Thorax then averted his eyes towards Twilight, and he was completely distracted by her beauty. She was as beautiful as flower. Then, Thorax looked down and saw Twilight's hoof on the bench near him.

Thorax then took a deep breath and exhaled it. After that, he placed his right hoof on the bench near Twilight's hoof. Then, he slowly started to move his hoof towards Twilight's while sweating anxiously.

When Twilight heard some weird noises next to her, she looked down on her left and saw Thorax's hoof slowly approaching her. She then looked at Thorax and saw that he was sweating a little, Twilight must assume that he wanted to hold her hoof.

Twilight then let out a smile and looked back in front of her. Then, she moved her hoof closer to Thorax's as well.

After a brief moment, the couples hooves have made contact with each other. Thorax and Twilight both looked down and saw that their hooves were touched by each other. Then, they both looked back up at each other with their cheeks flushing.

Thorax then broke the silence with a chuckle and Twilight giggled from the hysterical exertion that they have done. Then, the two couples leaned in close to each other and shared a warm nuzzle.


Author's Note

The first chapter of my new Twirax story has been accomplished! I hope you all enjoyed it!

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