Heartbreak in the Cottage
Chapter 1: Helpful, Hopeless, Heartbreak
Load Full StoryNext ChapterThe sun shined brightly against the cottage roof. It blazed. Discord was over for another tea time with Fluttershy. Fluttersly was in the kitchen when she looked back at discord and blushed. She felt like it might soon be time to tell him… Discord. It took her months to realize her feelings for discord. BEcause she never felt romance before. Looking back at discord she noticed his sandwiches were eaten so she decided to bring out more crusts for him.
“Discord…” She mumbled as she wandered to his chair,” i want to show you something in about two weeks..maybe”. She smiled a most glorious smile to discord.
As fluttershy spoke, she kept her eye on Discord’s furry chest. With each breath his chest expanded and fluttershy could feel her heart skip a beat each time. Discord’s physique was mesmerizing… GOD-LIKE to fluttershy. She wanted nothing more but to spend the rest of her life with this beast of a man. Hunk MASTER. Through all her confuzzled thoughts in her head, she forgot she was just standing there, dazed and silent for 3 minutes straight, staring at all discord’s beautiful features.
“I…” Fluttershy began to collect her thoughts.
“Yes fluttershy?” Discord spoke abruptly.
Discord had been sitting there for about ten minutes and wondering why flutterfly keeps watching him.
“Fluttershy, is something wrong? You keep watching my chest, perhaps you wish to see-” discord was interrupted by fluttershy's meek voice.
“i just noticed a fly near you” she proceeded to open the window for this nonexistent fly to leave.
”hehe” she laughed.
Discord got up and stretched his multi-animal limbs as he began to float. His worm-like body turned to the door and looked back to fluttershy.
“Its about-” he was so rudely interrupted again but by a different pony, one of light lavender and smelling of cellulose from wood pulp.
“My word…” Discord was enchanted. This nerdish, book pony had stolen his attention away from fluttershy. He was captivated by her silky, straight locks of mane and large, shining, indigo eyes. He’d never seen anything more beautiful as this mare standing before him.
“FLUTTERSHY ITS URGENT!” Twilight almost choked on her words as she brought her sweet pet owl into the shy cottage. “Just a few minutes ago he started choking on a mouse and i don't know if he's ok!” tears formed on her eyes as the books on owl conditions fell from her bag and the limp bird laid there in the grasp of her magic.
Distraught by both discord now ignoring her, and her dear friend’s injured pet, Strigiformes, Fluttershy rushed to twilight’s aid, She exclaimed with fret “Oh dear, let me have a look at the poor thing!”
She grabbed the owl from betwixt twilight’s magic and began performing the heimlich maneuver on the medium bird, but, it wasn't working! His feathers compressing beneath her hooves and a sweat coming from her brow, fluttershy huffed in a panic.
Discord was unimpressed with fluttershys form and decided that he shall be this brilliant ponies knight in shining armour, he reached for the owl and wiggled his bird like fingers and phased threw the owls jugular and removed the mouse, reanimating it in the process. It ran away.
“There, there, the owl is fine” he smugly remarked.
Twilight ceased her weeping. She thanked discord and thanked fluttershy for trying.
Discord was a bit depressed by her lackluster response to him saving her, possibly best pet, if she didn't consider that dragon one anyway.
After the purple horse exited the cozy home, fluttershy glanced over to discord who was showing a mix of disappointment and curiosity towards that pony.
“My dear, fluttershy” discord said, turning to her with a growing smile on his goat face. “I think… I think i'm in love.”
And with those words, Fluttershy's heart SHATTERED. She could feel each piece fall to the pits of her stomach and her eyes felt weak as though she would cry, sob uncontrollably. However, she held those feelings back as a new emotion arose. It was hot, it was heavy.
It was ANGER.
TO BE CONTINUED...?
Author's Note
Hello everyone, this is my first fan fiction.
I would dream about writing this before bed so I decided to commit.
I hope EVERYPONY loves it!
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