13 Flies

by sunshim_13

Rating: teen
Tags: Second Person, Other, Equestria Girls, Anthology, Main 7 (EqG), Random, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Main 6
Length: 2013

A collection of scrapped scenes from previous stories.

This is gonna include some deleted scenes from previous stories which means there will be some alternate scenes, extended scenes, and I'll even include original working titles in author's notes probably.

This is for deleted scenes and it’s not to be featured so no ratings for this one.

This will be Rated T just so there can be even measure.

Published 2021-08-25 14:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2021-08-25 14:30:01 UTC

Underground Bunker — Extended Scene (stranded.)

Rainbow Dash’s POV (cont.)

“What the hell is this,” I asked as I was surprised about this sort of place.

“Wait... I read about this, it’s some type of underground bunker probably,” Twilight explains. “This was built as an safe space after the construction of the factory, it’s supposed to be used at dire situations like a category five hurricane or to get through bad weather floods”.

“Out of all the wonders of the world, this one takes the cake,” Sunset joked as we start to look around the place. Anon started to look at the counter of the bar. This place looks more like some kind of restaurant for only fewer people than usual mostly with the bar section and some tables.

“I didn’t even think they would have a bar in an underground room... bunker thing,” Anon says as he jumps over the counter to look at some of the glasses or drinks.

“It doesn’t look that bad... just a little dusty,” Twilight says as she sneezes from some of the hundred year old dust. The rest of us were just scattered around the room to see if there’s anything in here. So far we’ve found nothing until Twilight found something on a wall.

“Hey guys I think I’ve found... a lever?” Twilight said as we all gathered around to one spot where she found it.

“You think it might be secret passageways?” Sunset asked.

“It’s more than likely,” Twilight says.

“Then it would be National Treasure 3 except we replace Nicholas Cage,” I joked. “Should we try it?”

“Well it should be safe so I guess you can go ahead,” Twilight said.

I pulled the lever down and the whole room seemed to have shook itself. After that happened it seemed that there was some type of hidden door behind the small bar and it shows another room.

"Well that's interesting," Twilight said.

"...and scary," Fluttershy adds as she hides behind me.

All five of us went behind the bad to see where the secret passage would lead to. It looks like some underground tunnel that leads somewhere.

"Hmm probably added this passageway in case a flood were to come in here," Twilight explained.

"Didn't think 19th century people were that good," I joked.

"Well apparently they're that advanced in their own way," Twilight replied.

"Maybe we should head back, I have bad feeling that something will happen if we go down there," Anon says as everyone nods.

"Well if you really wanna miss out that badly," I said as all five of us were leaving the bunker.

Author's Note

This is an extended scene compared to what happened in the official chapter in “The Abandoned Factory (Pt. 2)“ and originally that two parter chapter was supposed to be all in one.

I was gonna include this but I then decided to cut this down since it felt too long of a scene, plus the characters in “stranded. “ have already been exploring in the Abandoned Factory between Chapters 4 and 5 so I felt like this was repeated a bit but in a different setting. Also the secret passage I added there was kinda bland in my opinion.

The Remains of 2020 Breakdown (Next Chapter)

April 12th

It’s been almost a month since Rainbow Dash and I had been at CHS in person. All of the school boards for elementary to high school announced we’re doing all of our classes online, though they still have to work on organizing grades and assignments. It was a casual Saturday morning and despite that fact that COVID-19 and hit there were only some selected states on lockdown while some others were still completely open for some other reason. Of course we were allowed to put to get some groceries or other resources we need but we had to be home by 8:00 pm, after that we’re not allowed to go out until the next morning.

Meanwhile me and Rainbow Dash were still sleeping in bed in my room... correction our room since Rainbow agreed to stay with me during this pandemic. Since then we never got tired of each other’s company, we still watch some movies or TV series all the time and we just play video games most of the time. At times when we want to eat we would usually fetch something from the fridge or get snacks from cabinet since we have plenty of food in there but we do get takeout on occasional times.

It was about 9:30 in the morning and I was already downstairs in the living room watching Hulu on my TV, which is the second TV I have in this house. Rainbow Dash would soon come down the stairs to see where I was at and then she sees me in the living room.

“Morning sleepy head,” I jokingly say as Rainbow moves some of her hair out of the way of her face.

“Morning babe,” Rainbow Dash says as she sits down on the sofa with me.

“I don’t think I’ve ever seen you with your hair down often,” I pointed out that her hair was completely down instead of her usual signature ponytail.

“Doesn’t matter to me, you still think I’m sexy either way,” Dash says seductively as she teases me by sitting down on my lap and she wiggles her rump a bit.

“You just love teasing me do you?” I ask as she gave me a seductive grin.

“I’m your girlfriend it’s basically my job to tease you from time to time,” she says as she presses her lips on mine. We made out for about a good solid minute before we broke the kiss, a string of saliva connecting our lips.

“Who knew you had such a great tongue,” I say as Rainbow Dash licks her lips seductively then she giggles a bit

“Not great, awesome,” she says as she gives me another quick peck on the lips. “So what do you wanna today?”

“Well we could go run a couple errands,” I said.

“Mind if I tag along?” she asked.

“Of course you can... although you don’t like it...”

“... I know have to bring a face mask,” Rainbow Dash then chuckled.

“Ok, we should get ready, you can take your shower first if you want”.

“Thanks babe,” she kisses me on the cheek and then head upstairs.

35 Minutes Later

Rainbow Dash and I were all dressed up for the day and we walked out of the house as I close the door behind us. We head to my Lexus and both of us got in the car in the front seats. Once we put on the seatbelts I put my keys in the ignition and started up my car and then I started to roll out of the driveway. As I drive I would look around the neighborhood a bit mostly using my peripheral vision. For a pandemic on the loose it actually seems calm around these parts of the neighborhood. Anyways, Rainbow and I were going out to run some errands and then head straight back home after we’re done. It should take about an hour or two so it won’t take that long the whole time we’re out.

“Honestly it doesn’t seem to be that bad for a pandemic... well at least whenever there isn’t any riots or anything,” I said.

“True that,” she agreed. “Maybe somebody could pin that on a pandemic stereotype video.”

“Dude Perfect you mean?” I asked as I chuckled a bit.

“Yeah,” we both laughed cause of the thought of those stereotype videos by Dude Perfect on YouTube.

“So where are we going first,” Rainbow Dash asks as I just exit out of the neighborhood.

“Well I do have a package for one of my cousins,” I explained when I pointed to the back seat that has a package with the address and everything.

“Is he the one that lives in Florida?”

“Yep,” I answered as I put on a little smile since she was right on that guess. “It’s my cousin Cinnamon.”

“I remember how we used to hang out with him when we would visit,” Rainbow Dash recalled.

“Heh yeah, remember how we get burgers in a restaurant or something and there were onions in his burger?”

“Oh my freaking god he absolutely hated those onions and he kept trying to take them out before he even eats,” Rainbow laughed after remembering that one moment.

“I swear that was gonna drive him to the point of insanity,” I joked.

“Dude the look on his face when he saw them onions,” RD just laughed until tears of joy came through. We just shared our laughs until it started to die down and then the level of laughter just lowered completely to the point where it’s only chuckles and giggles.

“Those were some great times we had together,” I said as Rainbow Dash puts her hand on my lap.

“I have you to thank for babe,” she says as she grins.

Soon after a while I would roll up to the post office in a parking lot. As soon as I parked the car I shut off and took my keys out of the ignition

Author's Note

As of putting this in 2020 Breakdown is pretty much dead at this point.

I didn’t want to let this go to waste so these are the remaining writings I had before it just sat there collecting dust.

Oh look there’s still some on here… blows off dust and coughs a little.

Yeah that’s pretty much the gist of it.

Interactions with Flash (Whenever You’re Around)

Anyways enough about the shit I like, it was currently the end of 1st Period and everyone was getting out of class. I was heading to my locker to get some things I need for my next classes. As I walk to my intended destination I bump into a guy with blue hair wearing a jacket, Flash Sentry.

Flash and I have always hated each other since 5th grade and I can’t even count how many times a day that he’ll have beef with me. Long story short, I beat him in a talent show in the 7th grade with my former middle school band.

“Heh getting lost there champ?” Flash says as he mocks me by calling me ‘champ’.

“Still won’t drop it won’t you,” I said.

“Come on everyone knows that you were just lucky,” Flash argues as he points a finger on my chest.

“Just like how everyone knows that two of your guitar broke at the same time midway through the song.”

“They were loose.”

“That’s what they all say Flash and besides it’s not even a big deal,” I said.

“Oh really? Tell it to the officials you had a perfect score back then in that talent show,” Flash says as he gave a death stare which has no effect on me.

“Fuck off, see ya in 20 years to never,” I said as I sighed and walked away from Flash.

I get to my locker to grab two of my notebooks for Science and History class. I looked at my watch and I’m 2 and an half minutes until the next class. I was running late so I had to run over there to save some time. I ran as fast as I could to get to class, but then I was sidetracked, and by that I mean I accidentally crashed into another girl.....

Author's Note

This was a deleted scene from my first story Whenever You’re Around.

This was originally meant to depict a rivalry between the OC and Flash but ultimately I had to cut this.

I cut this for two reasons
1. It felt a little bit like a drag within the story overall.
2. It was a really sudden not to mention it felt pointless to point out that rivalry between them when the overall story is romance.